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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by jaydennscott View Post
    Summoning request

    Summoning Animal: black cockatoo
    Scroll Owner: Jaydennscott
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A


    ~Declined. I googled and it seems like that they belong in the same family as parrots and there's another member who has this contract~
    with all due respect google sucks. i did a project on the cockatoo a term ago and yes, they have a relation to the parrot but not enough to make it in the same family as the cockatoo. im not trying to be rude but the relation to a cockatoo and parrot is like saying a human is the same as an ape or chimpanzee. yes they have a relation to each other yet they are definatly not the same.

    please take this into consideration

    i would just like to point this out thx
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal:PURPLE TIGER
    Scroll Owner:GITANSHU
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    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A


    Summoning-tech The PURPLE tiger
    RANK:A
    Type: Defence-Offence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:He is one of those animals who likes to fight with his user with all his migt , It has very well built body so he can use some basic taijutsu (upto c) and has natural affinty towars lightning and can use it (upto B) .
    ~can be summoned 2wice~
    ~lasts for 3 turns~
    ~need to wait for 2 turns to summon again~


    ~Declined~ purple tigers aren't real animals
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by gitanshu View Post
    Summoning Animal:WHITE TIGER
    Scroll Owner:GITANSHU
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    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A


    Summoning-tech The white tiger
    RANK:A
    Type: Defence-Offence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:He is one of those animals who likes to fight with his user with all his migt , It has very well built body so he can use some basic taijutsu (upto c) and has natural affinty towars lightning and can use it (upto B) .
    ~can be summoned 2wice~
    ~lasts for 3 turns~
    ~need to wait for 2 turns to summon again~
    Akiza has the White Tiger summoning.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Meiton: Meitenjoukai - Dark Release: Dark Celestial World
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (+20% x3)
    Description: The user creates the dragon seal and puts his/her hand with the special mark in front of them, latterly allowing them to absorb an incoming attack (A-rank or below). To fufill the requirements needed to complete this technique, the user must absorb three attacks and with each attack that is absorbed, the overall attack is increased by 20% of the said technique. Once complete, the user generates a large pitch-black sphere of dark chakra and is fired off toward the enemy; much like the tailed-beast bomb, it destroys anything and everything in its path.
    - The completed attack may only be used once per fight


    ~Declined: Block any A-rank and make your already S-ranked attack stronger? I could've accepted it if the damage points were only the +20% x3.~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal:Vultures,Bearded Vultures to be exact
    Scroll Owner:SilverMoon1996
    Other Users who have signed contract:None at the moment
    Summoning Boss if existing:Mayu
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Kichiro,Emo,Akane,Mastiph,Hiroko

    Vultures

    Bearded Vultures

    ~Declined: Contract already exist~
     
         
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    (Ranton: Arashi Senkou) Storm Release: Storm Flash
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 35
    Damage: 70
    Description: The user does one handseal and then puts their hands together, like they're praying. Then a bright light flashes around them, blinding anyone in Mid-Range, while sending electricity out 360 degrees around them.
    Note: Usable 3X
    Note: Paralyzes on contact

    (Ranton: Dageki Nami) Storm Release: Shockwave
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 35
    Damage: 70
    Description: The user puts their hands together like they're mashing something, while gather their storm chakra. They then condense it to a point that its not visible to naked eye. The user then expells it, creating an invisible shockwave, that doesn't cause external damage, but internal. The shockwave is powerful enough to rupture an internal organ.
    Note: Usable 2X

    ~Both declined: Follow proper jutsu template~

    (Doton: Kibaku Tsuchi Kinchou) Earth Style: Exploding Earth Birds
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will do 2 handseals, while standing still, spreading their chakra throughout the earth. Immediately, small, 6 inch, tiny birds will arise from the earth under the opponent, encircling them. On another handseal, the birds will explode, sending shrpnel, made of earth, at the opponent.
    Usable 2x
    No A-Rank Earth for 1 turn

    ~Declined: Wouldn't the shratnel hit you too since you're so close to the explosion? Plus, this justu as already been done countless times, the only difference now it that the bomb are birds~

    (Katon: Doki Za San Tenshi) Fire Style: Wrath of the Sun Gods
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 60
    Damage: 120
    Description: The user will do a row of 4 handseals, then raise his hands to the air. Immediately giant fire balls will rain down all over he battlefield, not on the user, from the air. The fireballs will destroy and burn everything in front of the user, killing all life, and burning the earth, causing it to turn into magam/lava.
    Note: Usable 1X
    Note: +30 Damage to user, because of strain
    Note: No Fire Techniques for 3 turns

    ~Declined: OP~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Johninto Takashi View Post
    (Suiton: Kurōsumasshu) - Water Release: Claw Smash
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: A water jutsu that is concentrated in the user's hand. Water starts to form around the users hand and forms the a lobster's claw shape. The user can crush the opponent with the claw or can hit the opponent like it was Chidori.
    Note: Can only be taught by Johninto Takashi
    Approved
    (Suiton: Tsume no gurabu) - Water Release: Claw Grab
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user increases the range of their Claw Smash by using form manipulation to extend it into a claw up to 10 meters in length. This claw is capable of splitting the enemy in half. This is a Claw Smash like technique.
    Note: Can only be taught by Johninto Takashi
    Declined, do not resubmit

    Custom Weapon
    Name: (Tsuki to taiyō no burēdo) The Moon and Sun Blades
    Rank: A
    Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost N/A (20 for adding Suiton and 20 for adding Katon)
    Damage Cost: N/A (15 When adding chakra)
    Description: The Moon and Sun Blades are twin blades one is white and one is black. These swords were created by Johninto Takashi. When the user is holding the moon sword he can add his suiton chakra into the blade making covered in water and able to reach longer. When the user is holding the Sun sword he can add his katon chakra into the blade cover the blade in fire and causing the sword's range to be increased. The user can use both swords at once but can only put one chakra nature in one sword at once.
    Note: Can only be used by Johninto Takashi
    Note: Only one nature chakra can be used if user is holding both swords.
    Note: If added Suiton or Katon chakra it only last 3 turns and must wait 1 turn to infuse more chakra.
    Picture:
    Declined, provide the extra range they are given
    Resubmitting Custom weapon

    Custom Weapon
    Name: (Tsuki to taiyō no burēdo) The Moon and Sun Blades
    Rank: A
    Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost N/A (20 for adding Suiton and 20 for adding Katon)
    Damage Cost: N/A (15 When adding chakra)
    Description: The Moon and Sun Blades are twin blades one is white and one is black. These swords were created by Johninto Takashi. When the user is holding the moon sword he can add his suiton chakra into the blade making covered in water and able to reach longer by 3 more feet. When the user is holding the Sun sword he can add his katon chakra into the blade cover the blade in fire and causing the sword's range to be increased by 3 more feet. The user can use both swords at once but can only put one chakra nature in one sword at once.
    Note: Can only be used by Johninto Takashi
    Note: Only one nature chakra can be used if user is holding both swords.
    Note: If added Suiton or Katon chakra it only last 3 turns and must wait 1 turn to infuse more chakra.
    Picture:
    Bold part is what I added

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 08-30-2011 at 01:35 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    The following jutsus have nothing to do with HBA-s dragon summoning contract


    Fire Dragon's Sword Horn (Karyū no Kenkaku)
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user ignites his whole body in fire, and he runs at the opponent at hige speed raming into the opponent and dealing huge damage to the target, after the user rams into the target he can also use his leg or arm to shoot the opponent upwards.
    Notes:
    Usable 3 times per battle
    No fire jutsus for this and the next turn
    in the same move this jutsu was used he cant use forbiden rank tecs for the next 4 turns


    ~Declined: You set yourself on fire and suffer no damage? A forbidden rank technique isn't necessarely powerful, it just mean that you hurt yourself. From the description of your jutsu, it could be classified as Forbidden. Hence, you need to specify how you protect yourself from the fire. Layer of chakra maybe...~


    Fire Dragon's Flame Elbow (Karyū no Enchū)
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user starts shooting fire from his elbow tip, boosting the power and speed of his punches, when the fire starts shooting from the elbow tip the user charges with huge speed at the opponent, and punches him into any body part.
    Notes:
    Usable 3 times per battle
    No fire jutsus for this and the next turn
    in the same move this jutsu was used he cant use forbiden rank tecs for the next 4 turns

    ~Approved~

    ~Update: declined~I already made that one a long time ago

    Crimson Lotus: Fire Dragon Fist (Guren Karyū Ken)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The users palms get covered in crimson red flames, then the user rapidly charges at his opponent and he starts punching into the opponent with huge power and speed, with every punch that hits the target a small explosion on the body of the target appears leaving heavy burns on the skin
    Notes:
    Usable just one time per battle
    In the same move this was used the user will be able to make just 2 jutsus all together
    No fire for the next 2 turns
    No s ranked jutsus the next turn

    ~Approved~

    Fire Fang(Ho Saiga)
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The users covers his nails in fire, extending them a bit, after that he rushes at the opponent and he starts slicing with his claws on the entire body of the opponent, every little scratch will make burns on the wounds making them even more painfull.
    Notes:
    Usable 3 times per battle
    No fire jutsus for this and the next turn
    in the same move this jutsu was used he cant use forbiden rank tecs for the next 4 turns

    ~Approved: I'll approve this one even after what I said in your first jutsu, but only because the fire is small~
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 08-31-2011 at 06:04 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom Weapon
    Name: (Naitomeaburēdo)Nightmare Blade
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack/ Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A ( 40 when used with Raiton and 40 when used with Doton)
    Damage Points:N/A(60 WHEN USED WITH CHAKRA)
    Description: The Nightmare Blade is a blade that was made by -Itachi- himself the sword is about 4 feet long and about 4 Inches wide.. Nightmare can be infused with Raiton or doton chakra when used with Doton chakra it gives Nightmare a extra layer of thickness which make its almost impossible to break.. the user can also infuse nightmare with raiton to increase its speed and cutting ability when used with Doton the length and reach stays the same but when used with raiton nightmare can reach 4 more feet

    note:Nightmare can only be used by -Itachi-
    note:When infused with chakra it stay infused for 3 turns and the user then must wait 2 turns to infuse his blade with chakra again




    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 08-30-2011 at 01:47 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kakashi Hatake.. View Post
    ( Koumaken, The Blue Demon Slayer | 紅魔館 青デビ)
    Rank: S
    Type: Att ' Def
    Range: Short.
    Chakra cost: -Up to 40 if used with the special ability.
    Damage points: -Up to 80 if used with the special ability.
    Description: The Koumaken, or Blue Demon slayer, is one of the most powerful sword's of all time. Said to be forged by some of the best Black Smith's known to man. It was also said to have slayed Demon's in ancient times, and that was it's intention. It's spilled so much blood, including that of a human's. It earn's it's name with the help of both of it's chakra affinity's, Lightning and Fire. This is an elemental combination purely used for techniques that are sharp, but also hot. And due to these two element's being combined, there is a flame to the sword from the fire element, but it turn's blue due to the combined lightning element. It is said that when this sword is unsheathed, it also gives the user a new found strength in their heart's.
    Ability's:
    Blue fire addition: This sharp, and also hot technique allow's the user to cut through A rank wind, and even up to A rank Doton techniques. Now you know by now what it would do to a humans body.
    Heart: Once unsheathed, the user will feel more powerful. Although the user gains no extra physical ability's, his fighting will grows in his heart. And this can make anyone more powerful through the mind.
    Koumaken:

    Koumaken:


    Koumaken getting ready to be used with the fire lightning combination.







    ~Declined~
    The amount of times it can cut through wind and earth needs to be restricted.
    ( Koumaken, The Blue Demon Slayer, Satan's Flame | 紅魔館 青デビ)
    Rank: S
    Type: Att ' Def
    Range: Short.
    Chakra cost: -Up to 40 if used with the special ability.
    Damage points: -Up to 80 if used with the special ability.
    Description: The Koumaken, or Blue Demon slayer, is one of the most powerful sword's of all time. Said to be forged by some of the best Black Smith's known to man. It was also said to have slayed Demon's in ancient times, and that was it's intention. It's blade is made from a special material, that man created from the ground long ago. It's spilled so much blood, including that of a human's. It earn's it's name with the help of both of it's chakra affinity's, Lightning and Fire. This is an elemental combination purely used for techniques that are sharp, but also hot. And due to these two element's being combined, there is a flame to the sword from the fire element, but it turn's blue due to the combined lightning element. It is said that when this sword is unsheathed, it also gives the user a new found strength in their heart's. And upon Unsheathing Satan's Flame, the user will be covered in the lightning/fire chakra around the body.
    Ability's:
    § Blue fire addition: This sharp, and also hot technique allow's the user to cut through A rank wind, and even up to A rank Doton techniques. Now you know by now what it would do to a humans body.
    § Satan's Flame: Once Unsheathed, the blue flame will cover your body, and it has to accept you. It will cover the outside area of the body (Around the clothing also) and there will be two flames above your head that look like horns. This technique protect's you from D-Rank Wind techniques and D-Rank Doton. But between using this Technique and any other ability's for Satan's flame, it will have to be used alone, and after being used you will have to wait two turn's before using another technique for it. The sword's blade will still be covered in the blue flame, it just can't cut through Doton/Fuuton at the time.
    § Heart: Once unsheathed, the user will feel more powerful. Although the user gains no extra physical ability's, his fighting will grows in his heart. And this can make anyone more powerful through the mind.
    Koumaken:

    Koumaken:


    Koumaken getting ready to be used with the fire lightning combination.






    魔: Limit's one the fuuton and Doton cutting.

    A rank: Twice per battle.
    B rank: Three times per battle, if used once already can only cut up to one more A rank or B rank.
    C rank: Can also be cut three times, and if cut twice can still cut one A-Rank.
    -And the same from C rank goes for D and E rank's.


    ~Approved: Well done, and well restricted~
     
         
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    (Suiton: Mainā Suirou No Jutsu) Water Style: Lesser Water Prison
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user is able to make smaller (maximum diameter of 0.5m) sphere-shaped water prisons by utilizing their suiton chakra. Since they are smaller than regular "Water Prison" jutsu they can be created faster and without having to keep their hand on the sphere.

    ~Declined: too similar to Cannon technique. Make it drastically different or don't resubmit.~

    (Suiton: Mainā Suirou No Jutsu) Water Style: Water Prison Crush
    Rank: A/S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30/40
    Damage Points: 60/80
    Description: By taking control of "Water Prison" user can cause it to "shrink" to any extent he wants (he can shrink just a bit if he wants to, for example, torture someone or shrink it to it's fullest thus compressing the opponent in small orb of water) with formidable speed and force.
    *Using S-ranked version once will result in no S-rank jutsus next turn
    *Using S-ranked version twice will result in no S rank or A rank jutsu next turn

    ~Declined: Already exist~

    (Suton: Umi no Me) - Water Style: Eyes of the Sea
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing suiton chakra user is able to create eyes of water to aid him in combat by covering blind spots or in spying by allowing him to scan the area without exposing himself to danger.

    ~Declined: Elaborate on the eye itself. Is it on your body? Does it fly like Gaara, how long does it stays on the field, does it reganarate if hit?~

    (Shio no Hakobi-shu) - Tide Bringer
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This sword was said to be wielded even by the infamous "Blackbeard". Sword was held as the strongest of all swords on the sea and gave the user unparalleled mastery over water element. However, sword fell into oblivion once "Goddess of Water", strongest of all, was retrieved from the depths of seas. As everyone's attention followed "Goddess of Water", blood trail left by "Tide Bringer" was almost lost... There is rumor that some ninja found it and claimed it as his own, but it will take a while for the glory of "Tide Bringer" to reach it's old proportions.
    *The user will be able to use water jutsus with one hand seal less then normally as long he has Tide Bringer with him.
    *Sword gives the user's water jutsus +15 and the opponent -5 to his.
    *Sword can be infused with water chakra to attain chainsaw-like blade.
    Notes:
    *Sword is indestructible, though that doesn't mean it can destroy everything.
    *Looks: http://saberandsword.com/images/25-898A.jpg

    ~Pending: I'm leaving that one for Caliburn to check since it's very similar to the Ame-no-mi-kumari.~

    (Suiton: Misuto Henkan) - Water Style: Mist Transformation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra:30(-10 each turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will focus water chakra all over his body and turn it into mist. In this state he is able to merge with water (since mist is practically water just of lower quantity). While he is in that state he looks completely normal until an attack passes through him. Since he’s intangible, the user has to constantly focus a lot of chakra to keep his body in one piece (since he is made of mist).
    *This jutsu doesn’t require any water source
    *User can't use any taijutsu since mist isn't strong like water in Suigetsu's case

    ~Declined: Already exist~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyouton: koori kumo ) ice relase ice cloud
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: the user will form a gaint ice spear and then throw it at his enemy on the user's comend the ice will explode into a gaint cloud of ice that will freeze what ever it touchs.
    note: must be a yuki clan member
    note: no a rank attacks next turn.

    ~Declined: OP~

    (Hyouton: yuki bo-ru) ice relase snow ball
    Type:attack
    Rank: A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: the user will place his hands on the already snow covered ground and focas his chakra ino the snow the snow will start to roll forward froming a gaint ball of snow in moments the ball is big enough to crush the enemy under it ( but not enough to kill the enemy)
    note: must be of the yuki clan
    note: must be in a snow covered terrin

    ~Declined: I like it but there's absolutely no restriction other then needing snow~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by the 6th hokage View Post
    updateing ( btw if the update is declined i keep the old version )

    hyouton shimo hitonomi gekido ) Ice Release: Frost Bite Rage
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Self
    Chakra Points:50
    Damage Points:N/A (+10 damage points to Ice techs and +10 damage points to taijutsu)
    Description: The user will release a large amount of water and wind chakra around him gathering all the moisture in the air of a 10 meter radios and cover himself in it. This will look like the user skin tone is becoming lighter til it becomes pure Bluish-white, which in turn raises his/her defense due to be covered in ice(Basically able to block shurikens and kunais without special properties). In this form all Ice techs released from the user are 10 damage points stronger and when he touch something, it causes a minor case of frost bite, making taijutsu more effective. the user is also able to make ice jutsu with one hand seal.the user also can't be hurt by fire c rank and lower any ice jutsu used on against the user will have no effect the ice would hit and break as it hit's the user.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used once
    -Last 3 turns
    -No more ice abilities for the rest of the battle
    -can only use ice jutsu and taijutsu while in this mode.
    -must be of the yuki clan
    ||Declined||


    new submission.
    (Hyouton: Koori tate) Ice Release: Ice Shield
    Type: Defend
    Rank:A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user will for a shield of compressed Ice making it as hard as steal. The user can cause the shield to expand to the needed size to block incoming attacks on scales from the size of the user's wrist to the user's whole body.
    ||Approved|| I removed the "Attack" under type. It's a shield.
    re submitting my update.

    hyouton shimo hitonomi gekido ) Ice Release: Frost Bite Rage
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Self
    Chakra Points:50
    Damage Points:N/A (+10 damage points to Ice techs and +10 damage points to taijutsu)
    Description: The user will release a large amount of water and wind chakra around him gathering all the moisture in the air of a 10 meter radios and cover himself in it. This will look like the user skin tone is becoming lighter til it becomes pure Bluish-white, which in turn raises his/her defense due to be covered in ice(Basically able to block shurikens and kunais without special properties). In this form all Ice techs released from the user are 10 damage points stronger and when he touch something, it causes a minor case of frost bite, making taijutsu more effective. the user is also able to make ice jutsu with one hand seal.[B]the user also can't be hurt by fire c rank and lower.[B]
    Notes:
    -Can only be used once
    -Last 3 turns
    -No more ice abilities for the rest of the battle
    -can only use ice jutsu and taijutsu while in this mode.
    -must be of the yuki clan

    ~Decline: covering yourself in ice this way would surely affect you also. Whether it's freezing you alive or causing severe frostbite, there should be a drawback. I recommend going for something simpler like covering your hands and forearms, hurting you on some level, but without making it life threatening. If you decide to go on with this jutsu, find a way to keep yourself alive as you encase yourself in ice.~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Kuchiyose no jutsu | Hesagemonki | Summoning Technique | Earth Sage monkey, Boss of the 5 Sage monkeys.

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short|Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40 [-20 everytime turning into a Staff]
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user bites his thumb, performs the Monkey handseal and slams his hand on the ground. Hence being able to summon Hesagemonki, Hesagemonki is one of the 5 Bosses along the Monkey summoning's. Hesagemonki is extremly strong and immune for Earth technique's from A-Rank and below, since his speciality is Earth, he is able to perform S-Ranked Earth technique's and below, he is able to turn into an Staff, an very hard Earth staff, the Staff is huge enough to protect the user from every Wind/Water/Earth/Fire technique's which are A-Ranked and below, Hesagemonki is a very Large monkey, the same size as Manda, but Hesagemonki is covered in an Earth Coat which is able to protect him from C-Ranked technique's and Below, but Hasagemonki is not only extremly good with the Earth Element but also is very Limber and a great taijutsu fighter.

    - The user performing this technique will be exhausted after this.
    - The monkey will stay on the battle field for 3 Turns.
    - Must hold an Monkey Contract
    - Only summonable once per battle
    - No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this.

    ~Declined: OP~

    Kuchiyose no jutsu | Speedy | Summoning Technique | Speedy

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short|Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20 [-10 everytime turning into a Staff]
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user bites his thumb, performs the Monkey handseal and slams his hand on the ground. Hence being able to summon Speedy, Speedy is one of the fasts Monkey of the Monkey summoning he has the Speed which is equal to Rock lee without weights, this monkey is able to perform C-Ranked Taijutsu technique's and below, this monkey is very limber and can turn into a staff at a very rapid speed, the higher the user's rank the faster. The Monkey's Taijutsu counts as a move in the user's turn.

    - The monkey can stay on the battle field for 5 turns.
    - Must hold an Monkey Contract
    - Only summonable once per battle
    - No other creatures can be summoned for one turn after this.

    ~Approved: I edited the bold part~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by HightimesHoward View Post
    Summoning: Nin Dog Digem (Kuchiyose: Nin Inu Digem)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb and summons a nin dog. It is about the size of Pakkun but has the inate ability to dig extremely quickly. Underground he can move as fast as Rock Lee without his weights, but to run and to move he can only run as fast as a ninja can. He can use Earth up to A rank but can only use the jutsu while above ground and his feet must be in direct contact with the ground. When underground he is almost undetectiable he can only be seen by a person who is able to see chakra he has a fantastic sense of smell and can sense where the opponent is even from underground. He can also speak english but perfers to yell out the catch phraze "Can you dig it?" anytime he gets the chance.
    ~Can only be active for 3 turns~
    ~Can only be underground for a period of 2 whole turns~
    ~Can only move at high speeds underground~

    ~Declined~ If he can smell others while underground, that means others can track him the same way through smell or sound or vibrations or heat.
    Resubmit

    Summoning: Nin Dog Digem (Kuchiyose: Nin Inu Digem)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb and summons a nin dog. It is about the size of Pakkun but has the inate ability to dig extremely quickly. Underground he can move as fast as Rock Lee without his weights, but to run and to move he can only run as fast as a ninja can. He can use Earth up to A rank but can only use the jutsu while above ground and his feet must be in direct contact with the ground. Every jutsu he uses count as a move in the user's turn. He has a fantastic sense of smell and can sense where the opponent is even from underground. He can also speak english but perfers to yell out the catch phraze "Can you dig it?" anytime he gets the chance.
    ~Can only be active for 3 turns~
    ~Can only be underground for a period of 2 whole turns~
    ~Can only move at high speeds underground~

    I took out the part about not being able to be tracked

    ~Approved: I edited the bold part~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal : Red Wolfs
    Scroll Owner:GITANSHU
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

    Red Wolf summoning

    RANK:A
    Type: Defence-Offence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:He is one of those animals who likes to fight with his user with all his migt , It has very well built body so he can use some basic taijutsu (upto c) and has natural affinty towars lightning and can use it (upto B) .
    ~can be summoned 2wice~
    ~lasts for 3 turns~
    ~need to wait for 2 turns to summon again~


    ~Declined: RokuNR is the current Wolf contract owner. Talk to him~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kage: Rippoutai)- Shadow Cube
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    This is used to defend against enemy attacks all around the user. The user connects with their shadow, then they expand the shadow all around them then manipulate the shadow to build walls on all sides of the user creating a shadow cube.

    This move can also be applied to trap an enemy. Only works when the user has connected with the enemies shadow. Once the connection is made the same rules apply, the shadow walls are made all around the enemy to trap them for 1 turn.

    Notes:
    -Cube can protect user for 1 turn
    -Cube can trap enemy for 1 turn
    -Usable 3 times per battle (Trap and Protection are each counted as one)
    -User cannot use Shadow abilities C-Rank and below for 1 turn after cube has been made
    -Only usable by Nara Clan members
    -Must be trained by MeiX
    -Only usable for those who completed shadow training

    ~Declined: How strong is this cube? What can it protect your from?~


    Weapon Custom

    (Bou Haihai Kokuei)- Staff of the Creeping Shadow
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 for the summon; 10 to use abilities
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    Passed down by a secret society within the Nara clan. The Three-Sectional Staff is made of black chakra metal which is capable of harnessing the Nara's Shadows. They combine shadow with the same art as doing it with a kunai. When the staff has been infused with the shadow, it increases the strength of the Nara's Shadows. The shadow can be manipulated to make the three-sectional staff connect the three pieces to become one staff, when this happens the wielded can place the staff in front of them able to create the shadows on the staff to span out for a shield or they can create Tendrils/Spikes that come off the staff to do more damage with each hit. Staff can cause Shadow Imitation if when the user strikes the enemy then releases all the shadow within the staff, this in turn makes the staff unable for use for the remainder of the battle.

    Notes:
    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -Staff drains 10 chakra to user every turn the Staff is being used
    -Shadow Shield, Shadow Imitation, Shadow Tendrils/Spikes count as a move
    -When the staff is summoned; shadow techniques increase +10 (not including Tendrils/Spikes)
    -Shadow Shield only protects from one jutsu
    -Tendrils/Spikes increase staff power by +5; usable twice per battle
    -Imitation only usable once; once used the staff is useless for battle
    -Only usable by a Nara Clan Member
    -Can only be used with permission from MeiX

    Staff looks


    ~Declined: I'm all for new shadow customs as it's an underated part of our RP, but this weapon grants you too many ability~


    *Summon Addition*
    Approval

    (Kuchiyose: Cris)-Summoning: Cris
    Type: Summon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Cris is a lesser of the Yeti Crab family. Son to Sebastian. Cris is much smaller than his father. He is approximately the size of small shrine. Cris is known for his speed, which the user may ride on top of him. Cris also can spew a mist which blurs an enemies vision, in addition Cris has the needle-like hairs like his father which may loosen off and be used with Fuuton/Suiton jutsu's and increase there impact.

    Notes:
    -The blur only lasts 1 turn / only usable once per battle
    -Needles increase damage by +10
    -Summon last 4 turns
    -Only usable by a contract signer of the Yeti Crabs
    -Only trainable by MeiX

    ~Approved~

    (Kuchiyose: Hyaku Kurabu Zanpai)-Summoning: Hundred Crab Defeat
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Generally the Yeti crab is a small crab with the exception of the King and his descendents. This summon harnesses the power of the crabs small size. Once the user makes a small blood sacrifice and slams the ground, 100 small yeti crabs are summoned all around the user. They are commanded to either attach themselves onto the enemy which will cause his to be slowed by the amount on him, he's slowed to the point of being able to movie slightly but not enough to move from a jutsu attack. Also they can be summoned for the purpose of firing thousands of small needle-hairs at the enemy. Lastly the crabs can summon "Concealing Mist" (same as Zabuza's concealing mist) which can hide the user for a short period of time.

    Notes:
    -Summon lasts 4 turns
    -The crabs can only do one of three listed abilities when summoned
    -Once they use one of the abilities they are useless for the battle
    -The damage amount only refers too the "Needle shooting"
    -The slow last 1 turn
    -The "Concealing Mist" lasts 1 turn
    -Usable once per battle
    -Only Yeti Crab contract signers allowed to use
    -Must be taught by Dexter..

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon:Ken jajjimento)-Swords Judgement
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:
    In this jutsu the user concentrates Katon in his sword and then using his sword makes a wide slash and with it releases a really condensed but powerful wave of fire that cuts anything in its path.
    -No S rank and above katon for the next turn.

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    (Katon:Netsu hanpatsu)-Heat repulse
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:
    In this jutsu the user by using his mastery over Katon can release a steady extremely hot stream/pulse of fire from any part of his body by using the chakra points spread throughout his body. By doing this he is able to release a very short but powerful flare of fire from any part of the body. This is a instinctive behavior and happens instantly. Any mud coming into contact with this jutsu hardens as if it were baked.
    -the pulse is an instantaneous outburst of extremely hot fire in short distance.
    -can be used thrice in a battle.
    -cannot use another fire jutsu in the same round.

    Tried to make it less op

    ~Both declined: Those two customs already exist~

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    (Futon:Uzumaku kaze)-swirling winds
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:
    For this justu the user uses two sword in two hands or one sword in one hand and then with his other hand twirls around both in a disk type rotary motion and with that motion releases a powerful twirling wind which keeps rotating around at quick speeds and moves towards the opponent and then envelopes the opponent and then begins slashing him at all the sides at a very high speed. This wind has a powerful circular motion and therefore pulls the air from the surrounding atmosphere rapidly inward and along with the air if there is lightning spread in the surrounding air it is also pulled in and therefore any lightning in its path is nullified.
    -The user needs to have mastered kenjutsu.
    -This jutsu can be used 3 times in a match.
    -No S rank or higher Futon for the next round.
    -It can be used to cary any single body in the air.

    __________________________________________________ _________________



    ~Declined: I was about to approve it until I got the bold part. Even though it's S-ranked, I'm pretty sure it can't defeat Kirin. You need to take into account the size of a jutsu and not just the rank. Change it with "can defeat most lightning" and then it's approvable~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Caliburn View Post

    ~When you update a jutsu, add the old jutsu too to show us what's changed~
    Original jutsu:
    (Amenonuhoko)- Heveanly Jewelled Spear
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40 to summon, 10 to use special abilities
    Damage: 80
    Description: The Amenonuhoko is a large naginata (a Japanese spear) created by the primordial Shinto Gods. The Gods gave the naginata to Izanagi and Izanami to create the first land out of nothingness. The naginata itself has a long, razor-sharp blade that never dulls. Its shaft is made of unbreakable holy bamboo. Chakra of two types per battle can be channelled through the blade and shaft of the weapon, and the shaft can be extended and retracted at will in battle, much like the Third Hokage's Enma Staff.

    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle
    Note: User must maintain direct contact with the naginata at all times. If the naginata falls out of the user's possession, then the user will not be able to use its special abilities for the rest of the match.
    Note: User cannot use water or wind jutsus above S-rank while holding the naginata.


    Submitted updated jutsu:

    (Amenonuhoko)- Heveanly Jewelled Spear
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40 to summon, 10 to use special abilities
    Damage: 80 (+10 to Taijutsu)
    Description: The Amenonuhoko is a large naginata (a Japanese spear) created by the primordial Shinto Gods. The Gods gave the naginata to Izanagi and Izanami to create the first land out of nothingness. The naginata itself has a long, razor-sharp blade that never dulls. Its shaft is made of unbreakable holy bamboo. Chakra of any type can be channelled through the blade and shaft of the weapon, and the shaft can be extended and retracted at will in battle, much like the Third Hokage's Enma Staff. The holy power exuded by the naginata gives an increase to the user's speed and Taijutsu damage equivalent to opening the second gate. Additionally, the naginata is imbued with the Flying Thunder God seal, allowing the user, if he is capable of using Flying Thunder God, to teleport to any location on the naginata.

    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle
    Note: User must remain within 5 yards of the naginata at all times. If the naginata falls out of the user's possession, then the user will not be able to use its special abilities for the rest of the match.
    Note: User cannot use water, wind, or lightning jutsus above S-rank while holding the naginata.

    ~Declined: No more gates copycat. You can give yourself a boost in speed in your next submission (not saying it'll be approved), but nothing referring to the gates. I really like the part with the Flying Thunder God though.~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Naruto41698 View Post
    (Fuuton: Hari no kōhai) Wind Release: Needle Devastation
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user starts out by preforming 4 handsigns and inhaling some air, followed by the user spitting out hundreds of needles infused with wind chakra. Due to the wind element, the needles are capable of going clean through the opponent and are very fast. The user can also move their head back and forth so the needles go everywhere giving a widespread result, making it hard for the opponent to dodge.
    ~Can only be used twice in one battle
    ~This Jutsu can only be used every other turn
    ~No wind jutsu above A rank can be used until you can use this jutsu again
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698

    (Doton/Katon: Iki jigoku) Earth/Fire Release: Living Hell
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After preforming 10 handsigns the user will send there doton chakra through the ground and then create many microscopic holes in the ground. Then the user will commence sending their katon chakra through the microscopic holes and setting the whole field in front of them on Fire. This jutsu is nearly unblockable because the opponent has no way of knowing what is about to happen.
    ~Can only be used once per battle
    ~No Fire jutsu for the next two two turns and no S rank earth jutsu the next turn
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698

    (Kage Kurōku) Shadow Cloak
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 if used with Shadow Sewing)
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will raise their shadow to surround them and make a cloak over them so that anything that makes contact with the Shadow cloak will immediately be under the shadow possession Jutsu. From this Shadow cloak the user can use the Shadow Sewing to impale the opponent. This cloak resembles the Jinchurriki cloak.
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698
    ~This cloak last 3 Turns
    ~Can only be used Twice per Battle
    ~No other Shadow techniques besides Sewing can be used while this cloak is active
    ~Must have finished Shadow training.
    ~All Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's and unrealistic
    Resubmitting

    (Fuuton: Hari no kōhai) Wind Release: Needle Devastation
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user starts out by preforming handsigns and inhaling some air, followed by the user spitting out hidden needles infused with wind chakra. Due to the wind element, the needles are capable of going clean through the opponent and are very fast. However the user is only capable of shooting 20 needles at a time.
    ~This Jutsu can only be used every other turn
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698
    ~Must know Hidden Needles


    ~Declined: either change the rank or change the description but do something about the bold part~
     
         
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