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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    {Shōton: Megami Kesshō No Jutsu} - Crystal Release: Crystal Goddess Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 40 {+20 per turn to maintain active}
    Damage Points: N/A {+10 to Crystal Release Techniques}
    Description: This is an advanced Crystal release technique only used by Guren, the most powerful Crystal Release armor ever made, Guren gathers a gathers a huge amount of Crystal release chakra in the center of her body activating certain effects to her body, upon releasing the crystal release chakra that she have been gathering all at once, Guren's skin turns into Crystal with of Plum color covering her entire body, hardening her skin to the utmost limits and allowing her to gain more powerful Crystal release techniques through the usage of this technique, similar to the {Earth Release: Iron Skin Technique} Guren's skin becomes extremely hard as hard as Crystal protecting her from blunt damage from physical attacks, Guren has to continuously release her Crystal release chakra in order to maintain this technique active for a certain period of time, due to the continuous release of the Crystal chakra Guren is unaffected by B-rank genjutsu techniques and below as long as this technique is active because the Chakra that Guren releases through this technique will render the chakra from the opponent's B-ranked and below genjutsu techniques useless, another advantage to this technique is that whenever a genjutsu technique is used on Guren she immediately knows that she's under a genjutsu, when the genjutsu is released infusing Guren's body with the opponent's chakra the Crystal skin starts losing it's Plum color while immediately turning into a slightly transparent white color however the chakra released from the opponent's genjutsu techniques is not enough to completely stop this technique, the last ability that this technique whenever Guren uses an earth technique she infuses the earth technique after it's released with Crystal release chakra turning the normal earth into pure form of Crystal with a Plum-Whitish color, this however doesn't increase the power of earth techniques it simply gives it the Crystal release properties, whenever this technique is active, Guren can manipulate the Crystal structure of her own body and making certain open spots onto her skin, making the Crystal metallic structure vanish from certain areas of her skin at will.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: This technique lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: The Crystal structure can withstand one S-ranked technique or two A-ranked techniques and will result in the deactivation of this technique.
    Note: Only Crystal & Earth release Techniques are to be used within this form however this doesn't include non elemental Ninjutsu and Taijutsu.
    Note: All Earth Release techniques used within this form have Crystal proprieties.
    Note: No Crystal release techniques for 3 turns after this technique deactivates.
    Note: No Earth release techniques higher than A-rank for 2 turns after this technique deactivates.
    Note: After the deactivation of this technique Guren is restricted to a normal walk and cannot run anymore for 3 turns, her body becomes weaker than it normally is.
    Note: Can only be used by a Guren biography.

    Declined, do not resubmit

    {Shōton: Kōdo Dzuki Kesshō No Jutsu} - Crystal Release: Crystal Conversion Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced Crystal Release Technique used to boost the power of Earth release techniques, after using an earth release technique, through the usage of the {Horse} handseal, Guren release a large amount of Crystal release chakra into the pre-existing earth release techniques used by her, Adding Crystal atmos to the Earth and altering the already existing earth atoms causing it to change into Crystal, making the earth release techniques that are used before the usage of this technique gain more power and take the characteristics of the Crystal metallic structure.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    Note: This technique must be used right after using an earth release technique and only affects one earth release technique at a time.
    Note: This technique boosts the earth release technique infused by it with +20 damage points.
    Note: No Crystal Release techniques for the next turn.
    Note: Can only be used by a Guren biography.
    Declined, no conversion techniques

    {Shōton: Kesshō Kansei Hana} - Crystal Release: Crystal Sensing Flowers
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 15 {+10 to maintain active}
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Guren releases a large amount of Crystal release chakra all over the battlefield onto the ground and the air, forming Crystal flowers that are on the size of small snowflakes that continuously fall over the battlefield and remain onto the ground, those flowers are seen with the naked eye as small falling drops of Plum color, those Crystal flowers are infused with Guren's chakra, whenever the Crystal flowers comes in contact with someone or something possessing chakra within him, Guren is able to trace that object or person and know his/it's whereabouts whether he is in the air or onto the ground.
    Note: Can only be used by a Guren biography.
    Approved
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 12-12-2011 at 08:25 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (I Densetsu no kenshi no tekunikku: Namida no endo )- legendary swordsman technique : endo of tears
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: contact
    chakra cost: 40
    damage cost: 80
    Description: the user stabs the opponent in the stomach causing internal injury. The user the clinches the sword tighter placing there chakra into the blade then spreads into the opponents body. this clogs up the users chakra thus making it half the damage cost for the user but half the chakra cost for the opponent.
    *last 2 turns*
    *used twice per battle
    Declined, This makes absolutely no sense

    ( Kurohitsugi )- Black Coffin
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage cost: 80
    Description: Kurohitsugi is primarily used for offense. The practitioner generates a there chakra into a black/purple chakra that envelops the target with a powerful torrent of gravity that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. Then, once the opponent is trapped inside the black coffin, then user preforms the summoning hand-seals and summons 5 black/purple spears. when summons they are stabbed in the ground. The user says the command "embrace" and and the spears hover over the box pointing towards the coffin. The user then closes his/her fist and then the spears pierce the box. the spears pierce the opponents 5 pressure points.
    * used once per battle *
    * user can't use a jutsu for 1 turn*
    Declined, do not resubmit

    ( Shōheki )- barrier
    Type: defense
    Rank: A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: none
    Description: The User creates preforms the hand seals and summons a translucent barrier using his in the form of a large rectangular wall. it can be used to stop Ninjutsu up to B-rank.
    * used up to three times a battle *
    * if countered by A-rank or S-rank then barrier can't be used the rest of the battle.
    *forbidden jutsu will shatter the barrier and continue attack on user*
    Declined, clean the restrictions up the pars about forbidden jutsu arent needed and A rank + would shatter the barrier seing as it can only stop Ninjutsu up to B rank
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 12-12-2011 at 08:30 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Edit any cj for approval

    (Doton: Rensei Kasui) - Earth Style: Drilling Spikes
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user creates drilling spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.
    Note: -Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Bolt.
    Declined, similar jutsu exists

    (Doton: Rensei Hando) - Earth Style: Drilling Hand
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: User surrounds their arm in a coat of earth chakra which takes the form of drill, it starts spinning, and can drill through any earth tech upto A-Rank.
    Note:-Coating lasts a maximum of 3 turns, and user can break the coating by making a single handseal.
    -Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Bolt.

    Declined, how can a B rank earth drill through a A rank earth technique? edit this appropriately

    (Doton: Katadzuke Dekata) - Earth Style: Finishing move
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: User Claps his hands and 2 walls of almost 3 ft. which have numerous spikes on one side, rises from the side of the target and then the walls collide to one another crushing the target in between.
    Note: -Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Bolt.
    This is what i wanna Say

    Declined, similar jutsu exists
    Sry for my bad drawing
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 12-12-2011 at 08:32 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    My previous submissions were on Nov. 8th, so here I am.

    (Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4 Greater Heavenly Empty Palm
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Close-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: A much more powerful technique then the "8 Trigrams 4 Heavenly Empty Palm" Hyuuga member will put his hands side by side, letting a huge burst of chakra out, leveling things from his path.
    Note:
    -Can be used 3x
    -Must master Jyuuken
    -Only Dr. House may teach it.
    -User won't be able to use A-ranked or higher Jyuuken in the same turn.
    Declined, multiple variants already exists

    (Hakke No Kuusyhou) - 8 Trigrams Closer
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100
    Description: The user will unlock every 361 chakra points on his body to its maximum, emiting a huge burst of chakra around him, leaving a 8 meters in radius crater around him.
    Note:
    -Must have mastered Jyuuken
    -User won't be able to use Jyuuken in the same and next 2 turns.
    -User is left with -50 damage.
    -Won't be able to perform tai, due to the mass feeling of drainage.
    -Can only be used 1x
    -If the user is below Sannin, he'll die.
    -User is restricted to a slow walk for two turns.
    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Hakke Kinkyū) - 8 Trigrams Emergency
    Rank: C
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: As the opponent is about to make a physical contact with a hyuuga member, he'll channel his chakra to those particular chakra points, where the contact/s is about to happen. As the opponent has touched the user, or the opposite, the user's chakra will run through in the opponent's limb, what he had made the physical contact with, damaging most of the nerves and the tendons around that area. If the opponent had touched with his hand, the chakra will damage his nerves, tendons, making him unable to sign with that hand.
    Note:
    -Can be taught by Dr. House
    -Only weak nerves, tendons will be immobolized by this technique. Other tendons like on the hamstring will only be damaged, leaving the opponent with an inability to walk right
    Declined, this level of technique should be higher with the appropriate restrictions
    Edit if wanted my dear friend
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 12-12-2011 at 08:34 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Drizzy~ View Post
    Resubmitting this only:

    Doton/Raiton: sono Kokuou's erekutorikku kouza| Earth/Lightning Release: The King's Electric Chair
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Rank: S Rank
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user performs two handseals, he then releases his chakra into the earth, manipulating it to center under the opponent, with a click of the user's teeth, a majestic royalty-like chair rises from the ground right behind the opponent, marked onto the handles of the chair is a picture of a crown, three flexible wood-like segments of rock then extend to grab the opponent, and immediately pulls him downwards to sit.One restricts both arms, the other restricts the opponent's stomach, and the other restricts his feet. As soon as this is completed [which takes a short time] A violent pulse of Lightning is released from the chair, this pulse of Lightning is similar to that of Chidori Nagashi.
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -Usable by Sannin rank and higher
    -Can only be taught by Drizzy



    Genjusu:Za Ikameshii Karasus' benkou|Illusion Technique:The Majestic Crows' Speech
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: While a Crow summoning is in Play, the user may clap his hands together once, releasing his chakra. As basic genjutsu procedures, the chakra is used to disrupt the flow of chakra present in the victim's brain,which can disrupt the senses. As the genjutsu, the opponent experiences the summoned Giant Crow disperses into countless normal sized Crows. All the Crows then release a high-pitch cawing sound [this genjutsu is very short]. At the end of the jutsu, the opponent's ear drums will remain with a similar but very weak high pitch sound for that turn only, which means he will lose main use of his hearing for that turn only.
    ~Usable twice per battle.
    ~No genjutsu in the same turn or turn after.
    ~Can only be taught by Drizzy or Crow.
    ~Must be a signer of the Crow contract.

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    Doton/Katon: Za Fuubi Inpakuto za Hebun's Nagareboshi|Earth/Fire Release: The Overwhelming Impact of the Heaven's Meteor
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs three handseals, he then releases his chakra. The user summons A Giant Meteor above mid and long range, while the user is in short. The meteor isn't engulfed in flames, it is in a black, solid rock state with small streams of fire racing throughout it. As soon as the meteor is summoned, countless large [comparison:A regular sized tree] compressed segments of the meteor will collapse in the shape of spikes. The spikes are released rapidly until the entire meteor is finished which would take a generous time span time of 20 seconds.
    Meteor is similar to|But smaller in size:


    Note:
    • The spikes are released at great speed
    • Usable only once
    • Usable by Sannin Rank or higher
    • Can only be taught by ~Drizzy~


    ~All Declined~

    Submitting cannon technique is against the rules, it was stated times and times again (by current and previous mods). Zen is taking care of all the cannon jutsus.

    You are hereby banned from this thread for a period of 1 week (1 cycle). Your ban will be lifted on the 14th of November.
    Sorry for the trouble Izuna.
    Resubmitting:

    Doton/Raiton: sono Kokuou's erekutorikku kouza| Earth/Lightning Release: The King's Electric Chair
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Rank: S Rank
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user performs two handseals, he then releases his chakra into the earth, manipulating it to center under the opponent, with a click of the user's teeth, a majestic royalty-like chair rises from the ground right behind the opponent, marked onto the handles of the chair is a picture of a crown, three flexible wood-like segments of rock then extend to grab the opponent, and immediately pulls him downwards to sit.One restricts both arms, the other restricts the opponent's stomach, and the other restricts his feet. As soon as this is completed [which takes a short time] A violent pulse of Lightning is released from the chair, this pulse of Lightning is similar to that of Chidori Nagashi.
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -Usable by Sannin rank and higher
    -Can only be taught by Drizzy

    Declined, similar jutsu already exists , nexus has a electric chair

    Genjusu:Za Ikameshii Karasus' benkou|Illusion Technique:The Majestic Crows' Speech
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: While a Crow summoning is in Play, the user may clap his hands together once, releasing his chakra. As basic genjutsu procedures, the chakra is used to disrupt the flow of chakra present in the victim's brain,which can disrupt the senses. As the genjutsu, the opponent experiences the summoned Giant Crow disperses into countless normal sized Crows. All the Crows then release a high-pitch cawing sound [this genjutsu is very short]. At the end of the jutsu, the opponent's ear drums will remain with a similar but very weak high pitch sound for that turn only, which means he will lose main use of his hearing for that turn only.
    ~Usable twice per battle.
    ~No genjutsu in the same turn or turn after.
    ~Can only be taught by Drizzy or Crow.
    ~Must be a signer of the Crow contract.

    Approved
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 12-12-2011 at 08:36 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: Kaijin Doragon)-Fire style: Ash Dragon
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user spews a stream of chakra infused gun-powder from their mouth in the shape of a dragon that the user can direct. Once the user directs the jutsu to its target he then ignites the gun-powder causing a massive explosion.This jutsu can also be used to mask the users presence by using the ash as a means of cover.

    - Can only be used by Swizzik and hawaiianmike.
    - No Katon the next turn.
    -Can only be used three times per battle
    -Can be dispersed by wind if it isn't ignited on time

    ~Declined~ And where did you get the gun powder? If it's a new release (CE) this isn't the right place to submit it.[/QUOTE]
    [QUOTE=Swizzik;4580058]
    (Katon: Kaijin Doragon)-Fire style: Ash Dragon
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user spews a stream of chakra infused gun-powder from their mouth in the shape of a dragon that the user can direct. Once the user directs the jutsu to its target he then ignites the gun-powder causing a massive explosion.This jutsu can also be used to mask the users presence by using the ash as a means of cover.
    - Can only be used by Swizzik and hawaiianmike.
    - No Katon the next turn.
    -Can only be used three times per battle
    -Can be dispersed by wind jutsu C rank or higher if it isn't ignited on time.

    The jutsu is meant to be like Katon: Haisekishō except in the shape of a dragon. According to the description I got, I thought gun-powder was like another "form" of fire jutsu. I wouldn't know how to explain where the gun-powder came from.
    http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Re...h_Pile_Burning
    Approved
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 12-05-2011 at 10:29 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by The Mightyy Kamina View Post
    (Doton: sodekuchi)- Earth Style: HandCuff
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user grabs the oppents hand, and inserts Earth Chakra into them where he shape manupliates it to where Hand Cuffs made of earth form around the enemy's wrist.And as the match progresses the hand cuffs will form a ball of earth around the oppents hand, stopping him from forming any hand seals. And as the match progresses the ball continues to grow into a big ball that reduces the oppents movement.
    -The user has to make contact with the enemy's hands
    - No Earth justu for the rest of the battle
    - Handcuffs absorb enemy's chakra and grows off of it.
    - last the whole battle
    - -Can only be taught by The Mightyy Kamina

    ~Declined~ Why is this forbidden? Really? There's no physical drawbacks whatsoever. Also, at what rate does the handcuff grow?

    (Doton: tomaho-ku)- Earth Style- Tomahawk Barrage
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:THe user gather alot of earth chakra into there foot, and once they have enough they bring there right foot up and stomp it on the ground. Makeing 10 big chunks over earth fly into the air, and as there in the air the user jumps into the air and shape manupliate them into 10 large tomahawk. Which the user then throws towards the enemy.
    - The user can make any size of Tomahawk size form
    - Can only be used 1 time in a battle
    - no more earth justu's for one turn
    - User can form the 10 big chunks of earth together to form one big tomahawk to be thrown at the enemy.
    - -Can only be taught by The Mightyy Kamina

    ~Declined~ In your restriction you saw you can make the Tomahawk any size you want, and then you later say you can merge them all to form one big Tomahawk. Please clarify the size of the smalls one (make it fixed) and the size of the big one. Also, please be aware that I will not accept anything ridiculously big since you need to have the strength to throw it while being in the air.

    (Kenjustu:hitoshirezu ): Hiten Mitsurugi-ryū Style- Dragon Hammer
    Type: Attack
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: The user jumps into the air, and uses the momentum of the fall to strengthen a two-handed sword swing that brings the blade down on the opponent's head or shoulder.

    ~Approved~

    [QUOTE=The Mightyy Kamina;4554987](Doton: sodekuchi)- Earth Style: HandCuff
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user grabs the oppents hand, and inserts Earth Chakra into them where he shape manupliates it to where Hand Cuffs made of earth form around the enemy's wrist.And as the match progresses the hand cuffs will form a ball of earth around the oppents hand, stopping him from forming any hand seals. And as the match progresses the ball continues to grow into a big ball that reduces the oppents movement.
    -The user has to make contact with the enemy's hands
    - No Earth justu for the rest of the battle
    - Handcuffs absorb enemy's chakra and grows off of it.
    - last the whole battle
    - -Can only be taught by The Mightyy Kamina
    - the handcuffs grow 1 ball size per turn

    Like it goes from the handcuffs to a rock, to a bigger rock, and it's like adding a ball to a ball makeing it bigger lol. till th oppent cant move anymore lol
    Declined do not resubmit

    (Kenjustu:maru ): Hiten Mitsurugi-ryū Style- Ryūkansen
    Type: Attack
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: The user sidesteps a forward-moving opponent and moves past them. In doing so, one spins in a full circle, adding momentum and centrifugal force to the strength of the sword swing, which is then aimed at either the opponent's back or the back of the neck.

    (Kenjustu:joushou ): Hiten Mitsurugi-ryū Style- Ryūshōsen
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: Ryūshōsen is a rising attack meant to strike the jaw from below. For additional power, one uses one's free arm to apply force to the back of the blade and utilizes a powerful upward jump during the attack.

    Both declined already been made by caliburn along with the dragon hammer one izuna approved which i will be revoking so the technique you can no longer have
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 12-05-2011 at 10:35 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Kitai no jōki asaruto) Gaseous Vapor Assault
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Points: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (if poisoned and +10 if set a blaze)
    Description: The user has his puppet shoot out smoke balls that are imbued with a special poison vapor as well. This can be used to obscure the enemy’s vision and to spread poisonous vapor in the area at the same time. In addition to being released in cloud form this vapor can be sprayed in a concentrated jet, from the hands or the mouth of the puppet(s). The vapor itself is a flammable, poisonous; vapor with a skin irritant (fiberglass fibers) that burrow into the skin exposing the opponent to the poison; upon contact with the skin (unless covered, if it gets in the eyes it blinds the opponent for 2 turns). Once poisoned it lowers rank of jutsu by 1 (s-rank down to a-rank..etc) for the duration of the fight.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Only stays flammable for 1 turn (but stays poisonous)
    -Stays on opponent/field for 2 turns
    -Can affect the user (if applicable)
    -Poison lowers technique's rank by 1 (for the duration of the fight)
    -No S-rank puppet techs in the same turn
    -No s-rank puppet techs the next turn
    -Must wait 2 turns to use again
    -Can only be used by puppet users
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha
    Declined, similar techniques exist

    (Satetsu: Hiraishin) Iron Sand: Lightning Rods
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user makes up to 3 large pillars of iron sand that also extends 6 ft below ground. These pillars are positively & negatively charged; because of this the pillars attracts any lightning (within mid-range of them) into them and become charged with the lightning (A-rank and below only). The charged pillars can then be used in other iron sand attacks to paralyze the opponent (1 turn). The pillars can attract S-rank lightning but it won’t become charged, also can be used as a shield.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    -Pillars last until hit with lightning or destroyed
    -Paralyzing effect last 1 turn
    -Keeps its charge for 2 turns
    -Rods gets destroyed by S-rank attacks
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha
    Declined, similar jutsu exists

    Resubmits

    Quote Originally Posted by black uchiha View Post
    (Chakurashīrudo ga daburuappu) Chakra Shield Double Up
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A (S)
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (40)
    Damage Points: 60 (80)
    Description: The puppet places both of its arms in front of him and spreads out six sections of both arms, creating a shield of pure chakra that can block A-rank and below. This shield can be strengthen to S-rank by adding another puppet (4 arms) the puppets link together and places all four arms in front of them making a shield that can block S-rank and below attacks
    - Can only be used 4 times per puppet (A-rank only)
    - The defending puppet(s) can’t attack the next turn (but can defend)
    - No handseals needed
    – S-rank shield can only be used 2 times per battle (equal to 4 A-ranks)
    –Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Declined~ While not being against the general idea of this jutsu, I'd like you to add some drawbacks to the puppets. Maybe making them unusable afterward? Same as if they were expendable defensive puppets. Also, what kind of puppet can use this technique?
    (Chakurashīrudo ga daburuappu) Chakra Shield Double Up
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A (S)
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (40)
    Damage Points: 60 (80)
    Description: The puppet places both of its arms in front of him and spreads out six sections of both arms, creating a shield of pure chakra that can block A-rank and below. This shield can be strengthen to S-rank by adding another puppet (4 arms) the puppets link together and places all four arms in front of them making a shield that can block S-rank and below attacks
    -Can only be used 4 times per puppet (A-rank only)
    -The defending puppet(s) can’t attack the next turn (but can defend)
    - No handseals needed
    -S-rank shield can only be used 2 times per battle (equal to 4 A-ranks)
    -After the limit the arms that was used are unusable
    -If used by B-rank and below puppets (random 100 puppet army puppets included in this) the entire puppet becomes unusable (after limit)
    -Can be used by any puppet with arms (humanoid)

    –Can only be taught by Black Uchiha
    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by bansal View Post
    (Ninjutsu: Joubu Henka) - Solid Change
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User touches any solid and takes its properties and becomes like that solid.
    Note: -For eg. if user touches steel, then he will take steel properties and his body will become like steel.
    -User can come to normal be making a single handseal.
    -Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Unacceptable.

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    (Doton: Supi-di Mo-ta-baiku) - Earth Style: Speedy Bike
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short (when created)
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User creates a special bike made up of hard earth, which have 2 silencers each beside the tyre and 2 fans each at the end of silencer. This special bike start soaking user's chakra and passes it to the silencer and then to the fans, so that bike starts moving at high speed such that it can even be rided on the verticle walls, and user can control it anyhow.
    Note: -It is a normal bike in driving and controlling.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle and lasts untill destroyed.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.


    ~Declined~ Try to keep it within the boundaries of the Narutoverse. As far as I know, there's no motorcycle, and especially not the ones from Tron.

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    (Doton: Supi-di Kuruma) - Earth Style: Speedy Car
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short (when created)
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User creates a special convertible car made up of hard earth which have 2 silencers, and 2 fans each at the end of silencer. This special car start soaking user's chakra and passes it to the silencer and then to the fans, so that car starts moving at high speed, and user can control it anyhow.
    Note: -It is a normal car in driving and controlling.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle and lasts untill destroyed.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.


    ~Declined~ Same as above.
    Plz edit any part for approval of cjs

    Resubmitting, removed part about soaking and etc and also tron Bike..
    (Doton: Mo-ta-baiku) - Earth Style: Bike(Motorcycle)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short (when created)
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User creates a special bike made up of hard earth, which have 2 fan like silencers each beside the tyre, which help the bike to move. Bike moves at high speed such that it can even be rided on the verticle walls. Thickness of each tire is 20cm.
    Note: -It is a normal bike in driving and controlling.
    -Can sit a maximum of 2 persons on it.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle and lasts untill destroyed.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.
    Its Simply an Illutrative Example, to show how will it look.


    resubmitting, removed the part about soaking and etc.
    (Doton: Kuruma) - Earth Style: Car
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short (when created)
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User creates a special convertible car made up of hard earth which can be rided at high speed. As it is a convertible car, so its top can be opened and closed anytime by making a single handseal.
    Note: -It is a normal car in driving and controlling.
    -Can sit a maximum of 5 perons in it.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle and lasts untill destroyed.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.
    Its Simply an Illutrative Example, to show how will it look.


    Both declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    1. Hades' Dominion ♆ Domos Aidaou
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplmentary
    Range: Close-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A (- 10 to user with an additional -5 per turn active)
    Description: The user makes several handseals and slams his hands to the earth, releasing large amounts of earth chakra and water chakra into the earth. Upon doing so, any living organism within contact with the earth will be drawn into an elaborate genjutsu which is more physical than mental. The genjutsu activates by the user making contact with the earth (he can use a weapon as a medium for this as long as he has made the handseals prior) and releasing his chakra into the earth. Those in contact with the earth, excluding the user, will picture the earth up to long range as sinking in rapidly and within seconds will picture the earth up to long-range from them in all directions "sinking" into the earth at rapid speeds, much like a sinkhole does. This causes the enemy to think that they have literally sunken into the Underworld (As the enemy sees this, the earth chakra that the user has released into the earth has manifested itself as a large kingdom of sorts, completely fashioned with one river cutting across through the middle of the area and another encircling it. It also creates buildings and stone-people (more-so statues, they can not perform any damage nor move actually. All of this creates a literal Underworld outside of the genjutsu's visual effect) made completely of extremely thick and durable earth, capable of withstanding A-rank blasts of lightning and certain S-rank blasts of wind (those with wide-spread range and not focused/pressurized wind). After 3 turns, the Underworld will sink back to the earth, causing a slight B-ranked earthquake on the field. Whilst captured in the Underworld, both the enemy and the user will be forced to use only Earth attacks and Water attacks and the Underworld will start to rebuild itself if damaged as long as the user maintains direct contact with the earth. However, this causes the user to be able to use only two jutsus per turn due to the strain of the Underworld constantly drawing earth chakra from the user. Once the enemy finds a way to break the mental part of the genjutsu, he/she will still physically be in the Underworld, stuck to it's rules and limitations.
    *Can only be used once*
    *No S-rank and above Earth jutsus the next turn*
    *Due to having to maintain the Underworld, the user will only be able to use two jutsus per turn every turn this is active*
    *Must have had at least training in Yin-Yang basics in order to use both Water and earth chakra for the Underworld. If not, then only earth is used in it's creation and no rivers are formed at all*
    *The user will be left with extreme levels of fatigue after using and will be able to use only two jutsus after the Underworld ends*
    *If the opponent somehow gets out of range of the Underworld, the genjutsu's effect will be dispelled and the enemy will be able to use all elements once more*
    *Can only be used by Lord of Kaos*
    Declined, do not resubmit

    Basically the jutsu places me and the enemy in a world made completely of earth that stretches stories high, much like the city of Gondor but of course, all black around. I'll possibly be making jutsus for it later on in time. There's a good chance that this'll be declined for being too vague but this is the best I could come up with this late at night and it being fresh on my mind lmao


    2. Hades' Tombstone Teleport ♆ Aidaou Tafópetra Taxidevo
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplmentary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Similar in use to Hiding Like A Mole Technique, the user focuses earth chakra throughout his body whildst inserting it into the earth at the same time. As he does this, the user crosses his arms across him, as if he were in a coffin and falls either backwards or forward, sinking through the earth, entering it and traveling at high speeds (like ther original Hiding Like A Mole jutsu) and appearing several feet behind the enemy. If the user falls face-first towards the earth, then he will raise up face-first, facing the same direction he was in when he originally fell and vice-versa.
    *Can be used in conjunction with another attack*
    *Can only be used by Lord of Kaos*
    *Can only be used every two turns*
    Approved

    3. Gaia's Catapult ♆ Gaia's Katapeltes
    Rank: A-S
    Type: Supplmentary/Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 - 40
    Damage Points: 60 - 80 (5 - 10 to user)
    Description: The user channels earth chakra through his legs into the earth, causing the earth under him to become extreme light and have a rubbery-surface, allowing him to cause it to stretch downwards into the earth, forming a cannon-hole of sorts. The user, while in the "hole" (for lack of a better word), can control the trajectory and angle of the hole. The user then causes the earth to spring forward, back in place and expelling the user out with great force. Depending on the amount of chakra the user uses, the speed and force of the jutsu may increase. If the A-rank variation is used, the user will be expelled at high speeds with enough force to break bones. If the S-rank variation is used, the user will be expelled at speeds untraceable by the naked eye (Sharingan 2-tome and up can still see it however) with enough force to break through a wall of metal. The technique however can be considered a double-sword of sorts. If the user uses the lesser version of it, when released from the catapult, will suffer slight damage to his legs and after using this jutsu, will be slowed down slightly and will not be able of using leg-related taijutsu that turn. If the S-rank version of it is used, the user will sustain great damage to his legs (cannot move at quick speeds for two turns and cannot use leg related taijutsu for 4turns) when released from the catapult and will take slight damage upon contact.
    *Can only be used twice*
    *Can only be shot in a straight line upon being expelled from the earth*
    *After using once, the user's speed will be slowed and cannot use leg-related taijutsu for 1 turn*
    *After using twice, the user's speed will be greatly slowed to where he cannot run at quick speeds for two turns and cannot use leg-related taijutsu for 4 turns*
    *Can only be used by Lord of Kaos*
    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Raiton: gojou buza ) Lightning Style: Joy buzzer
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60(+15 if used with jyuuken or taijutsu)
    Description: The user focuses their raiton chakra to create a static field surrounding their hands. The static field is really shocking and if the user puts his hands near each other (palms facing each other) raw lightning crackles between them. When the user hits a body part, it leaves a nasty burn and can cause that body part to be numb for a little bit since its raw electricity that enters they body upon contact.
    Note:This jutsu lasts for 4 turns
    note: due to static field, the user cant use any raiton jutsus involving handseals while its activated
    note: can only be taught by Roger23
    note: the static field is visible and can give the user away
    note: can only be used 2 times
    note: user cant use any raiton tech past A-rank for 2 turns after the jutsu has worn off

    ~Declined~ Take out the part where it last for 4 turn. Make it a 1 move technique.
    ~Resubmitting~

    (Raiton: gojou buza ) Lightning Style: Joy buzzer
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60(+15 if used with jyuuken or taijutsu)
    Description: The user focuses their raiton chakra to create a static field surrounding their hands. The static field is really shocking and if the user puts his hands near each other (palms facing each other) raw lightning crackles between them. When the user hits a body part, it leaves a nasty burn and can cause that body part to be numb for a little bit since its raw electricity that enters they body upon contact.
    Note:This jutsu lasts for 1 turn
    note: due to static field, the user cant use any raiton jutsus involving handseals while its activated
    note: can only be taught by Roger23
    note: the static field is visible and can give the user away
    note: can only be used 2 times
    note: user cant use any raiton tech past A-rank for 2 turns after the jutsu has worn off

    (bold part is editied)
    Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (sabure Rasengan ) Sand Style: Sand Rasengan
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates a sphere in their hand with a high velocity of spinning sand.
    The pressure within the sand sphere builds up to an exponential level. Once the Sand is release on an opponent it bursts, surrounding them in a vortex of sand which throws them backwards. The sand, along with throwing the opponent backwards chops acts as sandpaper against their skin, leaving large lacerations on their entire body.
    Declined, do not resubmit and banned for a week due to rasengan variations have been continously told to people they wont get approved you may post again on the 13-12-12
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyouton: Shimo Hitonomi Gekido V2) Ice Release: Frost Bite Rage V2
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack|Defend|Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage: (+5 to water, wind, and Ice Release)
    Description: Similar to the origianal Frost Bite Rage, the user will gather all the air and water in a 10 meter radious and then channel chakra into it while covering himself in it. With the new version, the user will develope a shroud making him look like an icy ghost straight out of a myth or legend. His eyes will give off a blue hue and his body will be a pure bluish white. In this form, the user's water and wind techniques will all gain a boost in strength as all the user's techniques will take on icy properties making them more devestating (Water become almost freezing temperatures and wind becomes fridged wind like with freezing temperatures) and Ice will become even stronger in the aspects of coldness, dexterity, and speed. While in this mode all ice techniques can be created faster being able to create ice in little to no time. Also, due to his/her ghostly like shroud, they can extend limbs to reach farther targets and are able to bend them even where joints aren't since the shroad is made of ice.( Up to 5 meters away) Unlike frost bite rage, this technique doesn't have as many drawbacks due to only making ice faster, harder, and colder while incorporating ice into the two elements that make it and not making a powerful defense.
    Notes:
    -Usable twice in battle
    -Lasts 3 turns each
    -While active, the user can only use water, wind, and ice elemental ninjustu.
    -After deactivation the user must wait 5 turns before activating again and must wait two turns before using ice, water, or wind ninjutsu
    -After second deactivation, the user can't use water, wind, and ice ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
    -Must be from Yuki Clan
    -Can only be taught by Taiketsu Yagami[/I]

    ~Declined~ You stacked too many abilities on top of one another, take out the arms extension part since it's already been made with another element (many in fact). Make it once per match and 4 turns. Adjust the restrictions in consequences and make sure you define the speed enhancement your ice gets.
    Rsubmiting with changes bolded:

    (Hyouton: Shimo Hitonomi Gekido V2) Ice Release: Frost Bite Rage V2
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack|Defend|Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage: (+5 to water, wind, and Ice Release)
    Description: Similar to the origianal Frost Bite Rage, the user will gather all the air and water in a 20 meter radious and then channel chakra into it while covering himself in it. With the new version, the user will develope a shroud making him look like an icy ghost straight out of a myth or legend and have gas clouds of ice crystals surrounding his arms and legs wherever he goes making taijutsu more effective as it can cause frost bite on the enemy. His eyes will give off a blue hue and his body will be a pure bluish white. In this form, the user's water and wind techniques will all gain a boost in strength as all the user's techniques will take on icy properties making them more devestating (Water become almost freezing temperatures causing even more pain to those caught in it and wind becomes fridged like with freezing temperatures so cold that some liquids caught in this wind would begin to freeze [0 degrees celsious and does not freeze big bodies of water) and Ice will become even stronger in the aspects of coldness and dexterity. The ice will be colder due the shroud and cloud's already cold features and as ice gets colder, the harder it becomes so Ice techniques will become stronger and harder.
    Notes:
    -Usable once in battle
    -Lasts 4 turns each
    -While active, the user can only use water, wind, and ice elemental ninjustu.
    -After deactivation the user must wait 3 turns before being able to use water, ice, and wind ninjutsu again
    -After deactivation, these elements lose 5 damage for the rest of battle
    -User's body stiffens from the cold temperatures making him become substantually slower and unable to perform taijutsu of A-rank and above

    -Must be from Yuki Clan
    -Can only be taught by Taiketsu Yagami


    Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuinjutsu: Horyuu sono Shodaime) | Sealing Techinque: Reserve of the Shodaime
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A (+5 to Wood)
    Description: This seal was created by Danzo after analyzing the seal used by Tsunade. He took the principle of storing chakra for later use and applied it to his unique circumstances. The seal is kept hidden on his right chest and appears as a tattoo of the kanji for wood when activated. The seal slowly seals away small amounts of chakra from Hashirama's cells over time and saves it for later use, totaling a maximum of 150 chakra. During battle Danzo activates the seal by channeling 30 chakra to the kanji causing it to glow briefly and appear on his chest. Upon activation the seal releases its built up chakra through Danzo's body amplifying his mokuton abilities. He gains the use of another 150 chakra letting him extend the usage of his wood element past its normal limits as well as increases their effectiveness by 5. Once the 150 chakra is depleted Danzo must detach his arm or risk being swallowed by Hashirama's cells. This seal can also be used by other wood users including Yamato and Hashirama, but it simply gives a +10 boost to their techniques for 150 chakra worth of moves.
    -Can only be used once.
    -After using 150 chakra worth of wood techniques the technique ends.
    -If used with a Danzo bio wood techniques gain +5 effectiveness and at the end of the technique he must detach his arm.
    -If used with a Yamato or Hashirama bio wood techniques gain +10 effectiveness.


    (Fuuinjutsu: Kazeyokoana) | Sealing Technique: Wind Tunnel
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This seal appears in the form of the kanji for "wind tunnel" on the palm of the user's left hand. It is normally kept at bay by having the left hand/forearm loosely wrapped in prayer beads. To activate the technique the user removes the prayer beads and inserts chakra into the seal while holding their palm towards the target. This creates a powerful vortex originating from the palm that pulls in the target and seals it within the seal. To cancel the vacuum the user simply reapplies the prayer beads. The seal has a secondary ability in which after sealing away objects like kunai or an elemental technique the user can forcibly eject the contents in the form of a condensed attack (i.e. a ball of wind) equal in power to the sealed technique. The seal can only be used to seal techniques up to A-rank, except fire techniques which can only be B-rank or below. While the vortex is fairly powerful, a person standing on the ground in its range can hold their ground, though they won't be able to move. Both the sealing and the expulsion count as moves in the user's turn.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -Both the sealing and expulsion count as separate moves in the user's turn.
    Both Declined, do not resubmit

    Updating:

    Baku Summoning Technique: Nightmare Eruption
    (Baku Kuchiyose no jutsu: Akumu-Funka)
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After the Baku has used his vacuum ability it compresses the inhaled objects into a ball using chakra and releases it as a large bullet of whatever was inhaled. The Baku will be unable to use the vacuum ability for two turns after using this ability.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle.
    ~No A rank wind or above following turn
    ~After its second use the Baku disperses.
    Baku Summoning Technique: Nightmare Eruption
    (Baku Kuchiyose no jutsu: Akumu-Funka)
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After the Baku has used his vacuum ability it compresses the inhaled objects into a ball using chakra and releases it as a large bullet of whatever was inhaled. The Baku will be unable to use the vacuum ability for two turns after using this ability. The user can use this to form a collaboration jutsu by inserting his water or fire chakra into the Baku as he's releasing the blast. This turns the attack into either a fire/wind combo or a water/wind combo.
    -Can only be used twice per battle, or once if used as a collaboration technique.
    -Baku cannot create its vacuum for two turns after usage.
    - If adding chakra for collaboration technique the user can only perform two techniques in the same turn
    Approved with added restriction
    Took out the wind restriction since it didn't really make sense for the user to be restricted when it was the summon using the technique. Added the ability to turn it into an elemental combo.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade Hyuga View Post
    Resubmitting once again
    Canges- restrictions are on each bull
    -Changed the thing you said was OP

    (Kuchoiyse: Toro)-Summoning Technique: Toro the great bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Toro is the boss of the bulls he is normaly agitated when summoned and would at times slap the user with his tail for summoning him. He is the bull associated with earth and is around 7ft tall his horns are able to shoot off and grow back in very short time like all bulls. His main ability is he can merge with the ground and boost earth attacks by 5 dp
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -Every now and then the user will take 10 direct damage from him being summoned
    -Toro stays on the field for 4 turns
    -He may not be summoned until the battle has carried on 3 moves
    -After he has left the field the user is limited to B-Rank earth for 3 turns


    ~Declined~ If he's your boss summon, make it S-rank and restrict him to 1 summon per match. Precise the added damage in the damage section of your jutsu. You can put the restriction on earth jutsu to S-rank for 2 turns, no need to be excessive about it . Lastly, merging with the ground need to count as a technique.

    (Kuchoiyse: Riko)-Summoning Technique: Riko the fire bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Riko is the bull associated with fire and has the same attitude as Toro, he also hates being summoned even more than Toro. He is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back. His ability it he can manipulate any fire jutsu and make it bigger adding 5 dp to any fire jutsu
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -Riko stays on the field for 4 turns
    -He may not be summoned until the battle has carried on 2 moves
    -After he has left the field the user is limited to B-Rank Fire for 3 turns


    ~Declined~ No free manipulation will be approved. For the rest, same as above.

    (Kuchoiyse: Zeek)-Summoning Technique: Zeek the lightning bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary R
    ange:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Zeek is the bull associated with lightning and is more level headed than the other bulls he is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back, His unique ability is that he can disperse into lightning and go into the clouds to enhance the users lightning so moves that need to send lightning into the air can be automatic since he is lightning in the air.
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -Zeek stays on the field for 4 turns
    -After he has left the field the user is limited to B-Rank lightning for 3 turns


    ~Declined~ I'm sorry but that's a no-go. Turning into lightning and going into the sky? I will not accept that.
    Resubmitting changes are bold

    (Kuchoiyse: Toro)-Summoning Technique: Toro the great bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:20 to the user
    Description: Toro acts as the boss of the bulls he is normaly agitated when summoned and would at times slap the user with his tail for summoning him. He is the bull associated with earth and is around 7ft tall his horns are able to shoot off and grow back in very short time like all bulls. He can use certain jutsu that dont require hand seals
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -Every now and then the user will take direct damage from him being summoned
    -Toro stays on the field for 4 turns
    -He may not be summoned until the battle has carried on 3 moves
    -After he has left the field the user is limited to B-Rank earth for 3 turns


    ~Declined~ If it does damage to you, it's a forbidden technique. Your boss summon need to be S-rank. "Certain jutsu that don't require hand seals", you need to be more descriptive on that part.

    (Kuchoiyse: Riko)-Summoning Technique: Riko the fire bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Riko is the bull associated with fire and has the same attitude as Toro, he also hates being summoned even more than Toro. He is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back. His ability it he can shoot flames from his nostrils equal to A-Rank fire
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -Riko stays on the field for 4 turns
    -He may not be summoned until the battle has carried on 2 moves
    -After he has left the field the user is limited to B-Rank Fire for 3 turns


    ~Declined~ What's the range of the fire attack? How many times can you summon him per math?

    (Kuchoiyse: Zeek)-Summoning Technique: Zeek the lightning bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Zeek is the bull associated with lightning and is more level headed than the other bulls he is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back, His unique ability is that he can disperse into lightning and go into the clouds to enhance the users lightning so moves that need to send lightning into the air can be automatic since he is lightning in the air(This is apart of a jutsu i will submit).
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -Zeek stays on the field for 4 turns
    -After he has left the field the user is limited to B-Rank lightning for 3 turns


    ~PLEASE EDIT IF NECCESSARY~

    ~Declined~ No. I will not accept anything close to this. Take out the part where he turns into lightning and goes into the sky. In fact, don't make him turn to lightning, it's OP and it's a form of substitution that was already made.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Tenryuu za Batto) - Summoning Technique: Tenryuu The Bat
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on the back of his hand and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary Tenryuu, the wind bat is a extremly small bat and is able to carry only a single person on his back, he is the exact same size as gamakichi what makes him special than other bats is the mutation of his wings, he has 4 wings in place of 2 wings and they are extremly thin and razor sharp it has a unique structure that its solid and very light at the same time. Tenryuu has the manipulation of the wind affinity, from his birth he was training to master the wind element and becomes more accustomed to it, therefore he can use the wind element up to A-rank techniques without the use of handseals in order to perform the wind techniques, he has very thin fure and as mentioned earlyer hes speed is above avarge bats because he has 4 wings he is extremly fast and can not be folowed by normal eyes only martial arts experts & dojutsu users can track Tenryuu for he has the same speed as the user.

    .Note: Can only be summoned twice per battle.
    .Note: Tenryuu can stay on the field for 4 turns per battle.
    .Note: The user must have signed the bat contract.
    .Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the bat contract.
    .Note: The user must have mastered the wind element inorder to summon Tenryuu.
    .Note: The user must be Sannin rank or above.
    .Note: The user can not use any S-ranked wind techniques as long as Tenryuu stays on the Battle field.


    ~Declined~ Take out/re-word the bold part. Make it once per match.

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    (Fūton: Tei Heki) – Wind Release: Air Burst
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user gathers chakra into their fist and thrusts it, releasing it in the direction of their target. An invisible shockwave will travel to hit the opponent in the desired area, with the force of a normal tag bomb. Not surprisingly, this is mostly used for long-ranged combat. Only eyes such as the Sharingan and Byakugan are able to see it. But this jutsu isn't strong enough to kill the opponent.

    .Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    .Note: The user can not perform wind tchniques for the next two turns.
    .Note: The user must have astered the wind element.
    .Note: Can only be taught by Ichigo.
    .Note: The user must be sannin rank or above to use this jutsu.


    ================================================== ====================

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist, also, B-rank and 80 damages? lol no.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Konponteki Katana (Basic Sword)
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:30-60
    Description:A normal sword.Is made of a metal that can easily channel chakra.

    Declined, this is not required to be submitted as a custom weapon, all you require is stating in your bio you have a standard katana made from a chakra metal to allow channeling of chakra
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Feel free to add or edit for approval:

    (Katon: Makai Tooriame)- Fire Release: Hell Shower
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user sends a huge fire ball into to the sky. He then directs it at the opponent as the fire ball disperses like a shower. If the user uses it while he's close to his opponent, he will be hit as well.
    Note: Can only be used by ILGOI and people he teaches it to.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Katon: Nenshou Nigiri)- Fire Release: Burning Grip
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user shoots fire from his mouth, then manipulates the fire into a big hand. He then grip his opponent with the fire hand. Once the user closes the grip on his actually hand, the fire explodes, engulfing the opponent in flames. The hand can also be used to block an on coming attack. The further away the user is from the fire, the weaker the fire becomes.
    Note: Can only be used by ILGOI and people he teaches.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. Many "giant hands" technique already exist with many elements.

    (Katon: Nenshou Katana)- Fire Release: Burning Blade
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user takes out a kunai and uses katon chakra to surround the kunai blade in fire and extend the fire from the kunai, giving it the appearance of a "Burning Blade". As soon as the user lets go of the kunai, the fire is extinguished.

    ~Pending~ Just so you know, there's many somewhat similar technique, both cannon and customs, however it's original enough to pass. Just add the restrictions and effect for the damage (does it slice like a sword (then no damage to put) or does it leave a burn while not slicing?).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Depp~ View Post

    (Yonseijinyajuu)- Four Saint Beasts
    Type: Puppets
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (If summoned)
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The Four Saint Beasts are puppets made by, The Mad Hatter. The Mad Hatter once said after making them "If used by the right puppet master, they coud take down a forest in a single night." Each of the four puppets have their own abilities, weapons, and appearence to match them, they all are able to detach most of their body parts from one another, with no visable joints to the opponent.

    ~~ First and Slowest but most durable of the puppets is, Genbu the Stone Beast, he is made from hardened wood wrapped in iron, covering every part of his body, standing 7ft, with a large shell covering his whole back like a tortois, that is able to pop open from his tail and stand like its connected to his neck; his arms positioned in a knuckle walk position like an ape; clawed toes like a dinosaur; the segmented tail of a snake and the spiked; tusked primitive face of an ogre with large white eyes with small black pupils, with a bold black kanji on his forehead standing for power 力.
    ~ Shell sheild on his back, that will pop open from his tail then stand as if its attached to his neck.
    ~ Two berrals in his throut, the first releases blasts of Fire, while the other release shells of senbon that once fired from his throut will release the senbon just like a buck shot.
    ~ Body is able to release thick triangle sword blades from around his shells edge, the blades can be used my the puppeteer, can be weilded just like swords.

    ~~ Second is the most muscluer looking puppet and hairiest, Byakko the White Toger, Byakko is made of solid metal with hidden conpartments hidden under his fur like cover, standing just under Genbu, he takes the appearance of a large humanoid tiger with a mane-like sea green hair that flows down his back with light bluish fur with grey stripes on his arms, in both of his shoulders are hidden poles with 5 blades attached to the pole that spin able to cut boulders in half, also another set in his knees, with his two bottom canine teeth large enough to reach up his cheeks, in Byakko's throut is a hose that release blasts of water from it, he has a preloaded shuriken in his mouth, he is able to shoot them from his mouth, around the hose in his throut. He has yellow eyes with red pupils and a kanji symbol for beast on his forehead 獣. He wears a toga and what appear to be leg warmers in animal skins of the leopard, and has a red sash as a belt.
    ~ 5 bladed poles installed in his shoulders and knees.
    ~ Water hose in his throut.
    ~ Shuriken shooter in his throut.
    ~ Large War hammer on his back.

    ~~ The Third and most human looking besides the greenish blue skin is Seiryu the Blue Dragon, Tall and slim, Seiryu is the only normal sized one of them all, while possessing pale green skin and black facial hair hiding holes in his head which will release wires from them able to perice through rocks and trees with ease. His blue martial arts robe is tied at the waist by a large white strap and features the image of a blue dragon wrapping around his shoulder. To match his robe, Seiryu wears a dark, blue cap covering just the top part of a symbol on his forehead for ice 氷, and on his feet he wears a simple pair of black shoes, from Seiryu's left arm has a chakra sheild installed in it, while in his right arm he has a powerful vaccum hose installed in his palm that is able to blow and suck.
    ~ Wires in his head, that can be freely controlled by the puppeteer.
    ~ Left arm chakra sheild of A-rank.
    ~ Right hand has a powerful vaccum hose that can blow and suck.
    ~ Dragon sword on the left side of his waist.

    ~~ Last and smallist of the Four Saint Beasts, Suzaku Ho-oh, Suzaku is made of a milable steel, has lightning chakra that the user injects into Suzaku at the begining of the puppets useage, giving suzaku an electical charge during battle. Has long orange hair parted down the middle, with two red strands that are actually his antennae, which are able to launch at the opponent with a cord attached to them, having full control over the antena the puppeteer will use them to attack the opponent at free will, between the antennae is a kanji symbol for speed 速. Suzaku also has polls that will extened from his palms to the ground, will senbon loaded in each of his fingers that are able to be thrown by Suzaku waving his arm in the direction.
    ~ Launchable antennae, attached by cords.
    ~ Polls in his palms. (just a poll that comes out of his palm able to be used as a sword.)
    ~ Senbon loaded in his fingers.
    ~ Dual blades on his back.

    ~ Only Two of the Four Saint Beasts can be used in one turn.
    ~ Each of the puppets Elemental installments can be used, but count as a jutsu for the puppeteer, with a B-rank useage.


    Animal Contract..... (didnt see anything about foxes in the Approved customs summons)



    Summoning Animal: Foxes
    Scroll Owner: ~Depp~
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: n/a

    ~All Declined~ I've already warned people about this -___-. The limit is 3 jutsu per week, I will let anyone submit jutsu that have multiple summons or multiple jutsus included in them. If you want to submit all those beats, you'll get them approved individually and then submit the jutsu to summon them all at once. This is your only warning, next time I'm banning you from this thread for a week.


    Summoning Animal: Foxes
    Scroll Owner: ~Depp~
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: n/a

    ~Approved~

    (Yonseijinyajuu)- Four Saint Beasts
    [SPOILER]Type: Puppets
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (If summoned)
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The Four Saint Beasts are puppets made by, The Mad Hatter. The Mad Hatter once said after making them "If used by the right puppet master, they coud take down a forest in a single night." Each of the four puppets have their own abilities, weapons, and appearence to match them, they all are able to detach most of their body parts from one another, with no visable joints to the opponent.

    ~~ First and Slowest but most durable of the puppets is, Genbu the Stone Beast, he is made from hardened wood wrapped in iron, covering every part of his body, standing 7ft, with a large shell covering his whole back like a tortois, that is able to pop open from his tail and stand like its connected to his neck; his arms positioned in a knuckle walk position like an ape; clawed toes like a dinosaur; the segmented tail of a snake and the spiked; tusked primitive face of an ogre with large white eyes with small black pupils, with a bold black kanji on his forehead standing for power 力.
    ~ Shell sheild on his back, that will pop open from his tail then stand as if its attached to his neck.
    ~ Two berrals in his throut, the first releases blasts of Fire, while the other release shells of senbon that once fired from his throut will release the senbon just like a buck shot.
    ~ Body is able to release thick triangle sword blades from around his shells edge, the blades can be used my the puppeteer, can be weilded just like swords.

    (Jakku)- Jack
    Type: Puppet
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid (Mid for the projectiles)
    Chakra Cost: 30 (If summoned)
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: Jack is a rather small, pale puppet with four arms that wears a long black cloak that goes down to his knees, with orange hair. Jack has a dagger hidden under his cloak behind his back. Jack's boby is made of hardened wood, his torso which is hollowed out houses an abundence of different types of weapons, which by the puppetteers control will be released from the puppets body, the weapons are set on wires that will release and be sent flying at the opponent (smoke bombs, shuriken, kunai, senbon, premade kunai and shuriken with tags on them.). On each of Jacks arms and legs are thin razor sharp blades that are built into the middle of his arms and legs.
    : Can only use one of the weapons in his chest per turn.
    : Can only be used by ~Depp~, or given permission to use.


    Note: not sure if i can allow someone to use my puppet, if not then ill delete that part of the restricions.

    ~Pending~ Those are great, and I like the attention to the details, but where are the restrictions for each of those puppets? The first one can release a fire blast if I read correctly, what's the range of the attack?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by gitanshu View Post
    DESCRIPTION

    New Taijutsu Style

    NERVOUS SYSTEM ATTACK
    Well its completely new type of taijutsu which neither requires handsigns just as normal taijutsu in this the user attacks at the nervous points of opponent as these nervous are responsible for reflexes respond to a stimuli and speed , by applying proper pressure at proper points the use can affect the opponents speed and other type of senses
    DIFFERENCE BETWEEN CHAKRA POINTS & NERVOUS POINTS
    As we know that chakra points are responsible for regulating the flow of ones chakra but whereas this art it responsible for either increasing or decreasing the speed and sense of any given person by attacking their nervous points.

    (Taijutsu: Osoi Undoushinkei) - Slow Reflexes
    RANK-B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost-30
    Damage Points-60
    Description-In this the user gets at the back side of the opponent and quickly strike one point on the spinal cord and one at right hand side of the neck these points are responsible for respond and reflexes of an human as we know so this attack affects the opponent’s reflexes which get considerably slower than the normal
    ~Must be taught by gitanshu~
    ~lasts for 4 turns~

    ~Pending~ I'll need you to be a lot more precise with this kind of technique. You're basically disabling your opponent with this one since in our RP, speed is everything. If I'm ever going to accept this, you need to restrict it somehow and be clear on whether or not hitting only one point as any effect.
    Description
    The user of this technique can do many thing while using it as every different point serves a different purpose
    EXAMPLE- on the right side of the neck near the shoulder is related to smell and stimulus send to the brain

    Side note - will include the use of different point while posting related uses regarding them.

    Jutsu


    (Taijutsu: Osoi Undoushinkei) - Slow Reflexes
    RANK-B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost-30
    Damage Points-60
    Description-In this the user gets at the back side of the opponent and quickly strike one point on the spinal cord and one at right hand side of the neck these points are responsible for respond and reflexes of an human as we know so this attack affects the opponent’s reflexes which get considerably slower than the normal
    ~As we know spinal chord is related to stimuli and quick reflexes used in battle and same goes for neck in terms of brain by striking the point user slows the time taken for a respond to certain technique and there time to react to it
    ~Must be taught by gitanshu~
    ~lasts for 4 turns~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ After reconsidering, I can't accept such a technique in our RP. In the wrong hands, this could be an instant KO.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    sabure : kyousei enchou ( Sand style: Great Dome)
    Typeefense/ Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range: mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage Points:n/a (40 when sand collapses)
    Description: Gaara will manipulate the sand on the whole battlefield and create a huge dome over him and his opponent (the diameter of the dome 100m long) The dome is made up of thickly packed sand, (2ft thick) and can even trap (some) large summonings. Once the jutsu is over, the sand dome falls and can crush the opponent and even the user underneath it

    note: can only be used/taught by pops123
    note: Roger23 is co-creator
    note: this jutsu leaves the user exhausted and unable to use sand techs. past b-rank for 4 turns
    note: user cant use any sand techs after this jutsu is used for 1 turn
    note: requires a large amount of sand
    note: user must be standing still to use this jutsu
    note: can only be used one
    note: the dome stays up for one turn

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ill be dropping everithing i had before

    custom weapon:

    (Mouretsu Katana): Rage Blade
    Type:Sword
    Rank:B
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description:This unholy blade is forged from the emotion of rage itself.To use this sword the user must be EXTREMELY enraged.After 3 turns in battle the user,due to being so mad,can just use their sheer strength and anger to slice through E- and non-ranked weapons.The wielder can also channel their chakra through this sword to shoot D-ranked,head-sized fireballs from the tip up to long range.
    Note:
    *Can only be in play for 6 turns.
    *Every fireball takes 10 chakra.
    *The user MUST be wearing the Red Lantern Power Ring to wield this sword.
    *If the user uses up the usage limit in row then it will leave him/her dizzy and unable for much movement.

    theres propably mistakes in there so pls comment something so i could resubmit it right


    the sword itself:


    ~Declined~ No slicing through attacks. No shooting of elements, and for Christ's sake, choose another swords. 3 members have the exact same weapon lol.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Tekken No Boro) - Weapon Of Iron Fist

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 (+20 to transform it)
    Damage Points: 0
    Describtion: This weapon was forged by Archangel Michael originally as staff for Migualon J.J. when he created and mastered Style Of Tekken so that he wouldn´t have to enter that state while being still able to use special Tekken techniques. But than Michael made a "mistake" when forging it and it became unstabble in it´s form. Michael and Migualon were making a lot of tests on it and than they noticed that it can change form into different weapons when infused with chakra. This weapon has 4 different forms, which are Staff (possible to use shape manipulation to make spike on 1 end of it), 2 Swords, Shield and Spear (as 1 form) and Hammer.


    All 4 Forms:

    Staff (just that staff )

    Two Swords

    Spear And Shield (shield can only protect from weapons)

    Hammer (just that hammer )



    Notes:

    Can only be wielded by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ and those who mastered Style Of Tekken and obtained ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~´s permission

    Transformation into different form counts as 1 of the 3 moves per turn

    It cannot be broken [if in form of Spear And Shield, the shield breaks, than it goes into Staff form with spear (shield can be broken by any jutsu of C-rank and higher)]

    The user is able to use Tekken techniques when wielding this weapon without activating Style Of Tekken

    ~Approved~

    :izuna:
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Coyote View Post
    Re-Submission

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Quixote ) Summoning: Quixote of the Mirage
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Quixote is the Boss of "The Ingenious Gentleman" a rogue group of Coyote's from the deep barrens in the Land of Wind. This group of Coyote are known as bandits and have cells in various parts of the world and can be called by a select few of shinobi. Quixote is the head of this organization and he runs his clan with extreme caution. Quixote is whole-hearten to few and black-hearten to many, though he has this personality Quixote has close ties to his summoners. Due to his statute, he is known as one of the most powerful Coyote's in "The Ingenious Gentleman". Quixote has complete mastery of the water element and can use without hand seals (except Forbidden) due to him massive amount of water chakra he is able to preform water techniques that requires a water source without any water being nearby just by using the chakra he already has massed. One of Quixote most noted abilities to create a massive "Tidal Wave", this wave is bigger than Kisame's massive waves, the Tidal Wave destroys all in it's path and is capable of not holding back but sweeping away a tailed beast. Quixote isn't a large Boss, only big enough to carry 2 users but keeps his rule to his strength and unmatchable speed.

    Notes:
    - Summons last 4 turns
    - Quixote's water techniques count as a move
    - Tidal Wave only usable once, this techniques however requires a water source
    - Only usable by signers of the "Coyote" contract
    - Only trainable by Coyote

    ~Declined~ OP. In the Narutoverse, this summon would basically be the strongest water user EVER.

    Resubmission -

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Quixote ) Summoning: Quixote of the Mirage
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Quixote is the Boss of "The Ingenious Gentleman" a rogue group of Coyote's from the deep barrens in the Land of Wind. This group of Coyote are known as bandits and have cells in various parts of the world and can be called by a select few of shinobi. Quixote is the head of this organization and he runs his clan with extreme caution. Quixote is whole-hearten to few and black-hearten to many, though he has this personality Quixote has close ties to his summoners. Due to his statute, he is known as one of the most powerful Coyote's in "The Ingenious Gentleman". Quixote has complete mastery of the water element and can use without hand seals (except Forbidden). One of Quixote most noted abilities to spit a highly concentrated stream of water from his mouth, the stream is so concentrated that it is able to cut through earth and/or go thought it (similar to Sasori's water from his puppet) about to cut or go through earth techs B-rank or lower. Quixote isn't a large Boss, only big enough to carry 2 users but keeps his rule to his strength and great speed.

    Notes:
    - Summons last 4 turns
    - Quixote's water techniques count as a move
    - Water Stream only usable once
    - Only usable by signers of the "Coyote" contract
    - Only trainable by Coyote

    ~Approved~ Changed the word "unmatched" with "great".


    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Aldonza ) Summoning: Aldonza

    Type: Summon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 35
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    Aldonza is a female coyote that is a underling of Quixote. She is capable of carrying one person on her back, she is noted for her speed; much faster than a general ninja. Aldonza is a sensor coyote, she is able to communicate with master on any chakra that is the the area. (not telepathy) She is also able to use Lightning abilities up to A-Rank without seals.

    Notes:
    - Summon lasts 5 turns
    - She can only use up to A-Rank Lightning
    - Only usable by signers of Coyote Contract
    - Only trainable by Coyote

    ~Declined~ What the hell is the speed of a general ninja? If you're making a reference to the manga, it's still extremely vague. Also, how is she able to communicate with "masters" within the area without telepathy?
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-21-2011 at 06:20 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Dimension Sword (Jigen no ken)
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: Chakra Slice: 60
    Elemental Slice: 70
    Description: The blade is a special one. It was rumored to be founded in a strange land and even Hell itself. The blade has a special power where the user can pour chakra into it and launch the chakra in the form as a slice of energy. This move can also be used with elements, launching a blade of lightning, a strong wave of water, or a stream of fire. The user can also infuse it with chakra to repair any damage done by B rank or below jutsu. The blade can also emit chakra in the form of a red shield capable of blocking C-rank or below techniques.
    ~Can only be wielded by Rikerslade or those with his permission~
    ~Only one bio at a time can have this blade period unless summoned by another bio~
    ~After five turns, the blade loses its ability to repair damage for the remainder of the match~
    Looks:



    ~Declined~ When re-submitting/editing jutsus, you need to put the added/altered part in bold. If you only took out part of your jutsu, you need to mention what was taken away.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-21-2011 at 06:21 PM.

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