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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Jiton:Hyu-man jishaku) Magnetism release: Human magnet
    Type: Defence
    Rank: D
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user magnetizes a piece of earth either below in front or behind them which they could use to pull them selves down to avoid a small attack.

    Note: You do not move as fast as the FTG tech nor do you travel through space time you just get pulled towards the earth due to the magnetism.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle to avoid spaming.
    Note: You may not magnetize some one then be flown towards them and kill them that is just wayyyy to op and cheap.

    ~Declined~ When submitting customs related to a special bio, make sure I have a link to your approved bio confirming you can use such techniques. Secondly, you can't magnetize earth. Metals can be magnetize and manipulated, not simple earth.

    Tsuin Jishaku Touken: Twin Magnet Swords, Hikiai, And Sendo
    Type: weapon
    Rank: A
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: These Two swords were crafted by me in the mountains in kumo where I infused them with small magnets and my chakra giving them magnetic proporties.

    Hikiai:

    Sendo:

    Hikai's abilities: This sword is able to draw on magnetism chakra from the user and extend to a foot or two longer and the ability to magnetize small objects if the wielder is up close to the opponent the objects get drawn to the sword.

    -can only be used for 4 turns then the blade returns to normal and you can't use the ability for the rest of the match.

    Sendo's ability: This short sword can be connected with Hikai to form a deadly double bladed sword. But that is not all it can do. This blade can also repair its self by using the users chakra from just a little chip which takes little chakra to half the blade which takes half of the users chakra.

    ~Declined~ Same as above.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Gingka Uzumaki View Post
    Pegasus Blade & Sharp Sound Sword

    Type: Attack Weapon (Sword)

    Rank:S

    Chakra Cost: N/A (40 when flowing Katon with it)

    Damage Points: N/A (60 with Katon)

    Description: Pegasus Blade:
    A Blade made of Steel. This blade has been passed down from users of the legendary Pegasus beyblade. This blade is mainly made of Steel, but this Steel is imbued with Fire Chakra, so you can combine Katon with this blade with Quickness and Strength unseen before. The hilt is made of Pegasus feathers and more Steel covered with the feathers.

    Sharp Sound Sword: Other Names: Mic. Sword. This sword is remembered for being shaped like a Microphone and having the ability to produce sound from its hilt after clashing with another blade. these sounds can cause genjutsu if you add chakra into the blade. This sword is made up of Sharp Sides and Gold Additions. The hilt looks like a Microphone, hence the name. In it's sheath, it resembles a bat with the same hilt.

    Pictures: Pegasus Blade:


    Sharp Sound Sword (Microphone Sword):


    ~Declined~ Only submit 1 CW at a time (considering you're allowed 1 CW, I'll rephrase it that way: choose 1 sword between your 2). If you take the genjutsu one, you need to elaborate on the genjutsu, how you use it, how you cast it on your opponent...etc.
    Pegasus Blade

    Type: Attack Weapon (Sword)

    Rank:S

    Chakra Cost: N/A (40 when flowing Katon through it)

    Damage Points: 60 (80 with Katon)

    Description: Pegasus Blade:
    A Blade made of Steel. This blade has been passed down from users of the legendary Pegasus beyblade. This blade is mainly made of Steel, but this Steel is imbued with Fire Chakra, so you can combine Katon with this blade with Quickness and Strength unseen before. The hilt is made of Pegasus feathers and more Steel covered with the feathers.


    Pictures: Pegasus Blade:


    ~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
    Thank you.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ~NEW SUBMISSION!~

    (gogyou youshiki:sekiyu) Fire Style: Oil Squirt
    Rank:B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type:Sup.
    Chakra Cost:35
    Chakra Damage:None
    Descirption: The user gathers oil in their mouth. once they do they then release it in a mist form towards their enemy to cover them in oil. or it can be used concentrated going at high speeds towards the eyes blinding the oppenent. This oil when contacted with fire increase the fire attack by a rank. so if i hit the person with oil squirt and a level A fire jutsu. the damage is S rank

    -Note: only can use 3times
    -Note:All Members of the hidden Ash can use it
    -Note:When oil contacts the user their fire increase by +2

    ~Declined~ Oil in mist form? No. Check out oil's properties on wikipedia or something. I won't accept something this far from the original properties of the "element" so to say.

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    (mizu youshiki:herumetto tama) Water Style :Sphere Helmet
    Rank: C
    Type: Sup
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Chakra Damage :None
    Description: The user does 3 hand signs underwater. once he does that. sphere type helmet will occur around the user making the water drain out letting the user breathe due to no water in the helmet.
    -Note: Due to lack of air can only stay in it for 2 turns
    -Note: Can only use twice. and not in the same turn
    -Note: The helmet can only be busted by sharp objects
    -Note: Only Hidden Ash Village can use this
    -Note: Only can be done under water

    ~Approved~

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    (Tama youshiki maruishi tooriame) Earth Style: Boulder Shower
    Rank:S
    Range:Mid-Long
    Type:Attack
    Chakra Cost:40
    Chakra Damage:80
    Description: The user picks up a rock then focuses his earth chakra to his hands. once he does that. he then crushes the rock to smiterings then blows it into hundreds of pieces. He then throws the pieces high in the air and does 4 hand seals, ending with the tiger. Once thats done the tiny pieces that are in the air turn into boulder size rocks and come crashing down on the enemy like mini size meteors.

    -Notenly can use once
    -Note: if not secure you can get hit with the boulder showers
    -Note: Can only use A rank earth and below after use
    -Note: Anybody in the Hidden Ash Can use this

    (Edit if want or needed)

    ~Approved~ Changed the damages and took out the note that said it would fall down on the opponent for 2 turns. I altered your description, look at the bold part and contact me via VM if you don't like it, I'll decline the jutsu for you to resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by rikerslade View Post
    (Katon:Ryū-hi) Fire Release: Dragon Fire
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80(+10 when in contact with Wind)(-30 when in contact with B-rank and higher water)
    Description: The user channels fire to his fist and it explodes and creates a cyclone around the user. The user then launches himself at the opponent and high speeds, giving them the appearance of a spinning tornado-like torpedo of fire with a dragon's head where the fist is located. Afterwards, the user is left with a few burns left on the hand that does the move
    ~Must have Rikerslade's permission~
    ~Must be of Sannin rank~
    ~This can only be used twice~
    ~Can be blocked by B-rank water~
    ~Due to high movement speeds, the user needs a Dojutsu or chakra-sensing method to use accurately~

    ~Declined~ You're contradicting yourself; you say it can be blocked by B-rank water and yet you mention -30 in the damage section when in contact with B-rank water. Fix it.
    Re-submitting

    Fire Release: Dragon Fire
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:60(+10 when in contact with Wind)
    Description: The user channels fire to his fist and it explodes and creates a cyclone around the user. The user then launches himself at the opponent and high speeds, giving them the appearance of a spinning tornado-like torpedo of fire with a dragon's head where the fist is located. Afterwards, the user is left with a few burns left on the hand that does the move
    ~Must have Rikerslade's permission~
    ~Must be of Sannin rank~
    ~This can only be used twice~
    ~Can be blocked by B-rank water~ or above
    ~Due to high movement speeds, the user needs a Dojutsu or chakra-sensing method to use accurately~

    ~Approved~

    (Katon: Burēzumōdo)Fire Style: Blaze Mode
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 20(Refers to Fire blasts)
    Description: The user flows his chakra off of his body and immediately turns it into fire, creating a shroud, or aura, around the user made of fire. In this mode, the user's regular attacks such as punches and kicks, can cause severe burns to the body of the victim. While in this mode, the user can launch small fireballs the size of the Phoenix Flower Jutsu from their palm. The most notable power of this form is being able to use the Super Dragon Fire in this form, which decreases a lot of its power
    ~Must have Rikerslade's permission~
    ~Can only be used once per battle~
    ~This mode only lasts for four turns~
    ~Super Dragon Fire reduces the time for this mode by three turns, so if a user does Super Dragon fire in the first turn activated, the mode wears off on his next turn~
    ~Once this mode wears off, the user cannot use any B-rank or above fire for the rest of the match~

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Katon: Sūpādoragon kasai) Fire Release: Super Dragon Fire
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user first covers himself in an aura made of fire using Blaze Mode. The user can then focus most of the power of Blaze Mode and launch himself into the opponent with a punch, just like its weaker counterpart, however, unlike its weaker counterpart, this move is a more focused punch, driving the opponent backwards and finally, the fire itself manifests into a dragon that launches the opponent, giving it the illusion of small dragon driving them into the ground. On contact with a large object, the dragon explodes, potentially killing the opponent
    ~Can only be used once per battle~
    ~If used, it drains Blaze Mode's power to a minimum~
    ~After use, the user is left with several burn marks on his arm~
    ~Must have Rikerslade's permission~

    ~Declined~ Blaze mode wasn't approved.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-28-2011 at 03:51 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom weapon: Companion
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Descriptions:A huge halberd with the ability to utilize many elements it is also able to cut through diamond the user can also stand the sword up and hide behind it and have it block up to B Rank Lightning and Fire attacks(Water, Earth, and Wind will come when i figure some customs for it)
    -only Blade Hyuga and anyone with permission can use this
    -adding elemental charkra increases it's defence up to A Rank of the element put in


    ~Declined~ Cut diamond and block up to A-rank with an element infused in it? No. Nothing can cut a diamond other than another diamond. This whole CW is a mess. Re-submit with drastic changes to the abilities and the description.

    Dragon Thunder (Ryuraisen)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: short-long
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage:60
    Descriptions: The user is able to summon a thunderstorm and manipulate the lightning creating a number of lethal electric bolts that nearly kills anyone it touches. The attack cannot be fully controlled, and hits randomly around the user.
    -Must have Companion sword
    -User is limited to B rank lightning after this


    ~Declined~ Summoning a thunderstorm out of nowhere? This technique is a Kirin ripoff that was rushed.

    Hatred Ball(Gojou Tama)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: short-long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Descriptions: Companions most powerful attack. The user must chanel all of his fire chakra and wait 2 turns before firing. The hatred built inside the halberd combined with the power of fire embedded in Banryu creates a huge and powerful ball of swirling anger and fire.
    -Only Space-Time ninjutsu can avoid this
    -User is unable to use any of the 5 basic elements for 3 turns


    ~Declined~ Companion was declined and this technique is ridiculously OP. Only time/space techniques can avoid this one? I will never approve such a technique.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-28-2011 at 03:55 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    1. (Bone Release: Dance of A Thousand Flapping Bird's of Ascent) Honeton: Habataku Chidori Nobori no Mai
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (+10 to user)
    Description: Derived from 1000 Birds Spike Ball, the user quickly and skillfully grows two long bone spikes through his palms, made from the densest and strongest Kaguya bone and with the ends tapered off, being hallow on the inside. The user than adds large amounts of lightning chakra through the bones, causing slight damage to the user's arms. While adding lightning chakra through the middle of the spikes, the user also channels Wind chakra along the outside of the spikes, causing them to be even sharper, allowing it to pierce through earth jutsus of up to Forbidden rank and steel (not all metal-based CE armors however). The user then stabs the enemy with said spikes, using the wind to increase the cutting power and the lightning to paralyze the target on contact. Upon making entry with the target, the user forces the spikes to explode, sending bone shrapnel from the inside of the target with enough force to blow a limb off if stabbed inside a limb. When the shrapnel explodes, the sound of a thousand birds taking off is heard, giving the technique it's name. A master of this technique is able to use this mold both the wind and lightning chakras throughout and around the bones as they are forming, allowing him to be able to used it as the bones are growing.
    *Can only be used twice*
    *Can be used as the bones are growing outwards*
    *After using, the user cannot use any Bone jutsus for two turns and lightning for one turn afterwards*
    *The user also cannot use any summoning jutsus the next 3 turns as well*
    *Must have had basic Yin/Yang training to use this jutsu*
    *The user's arms chakra path will be injured from the use of two simulatenous chakra types and the user will take substantially more time making handseals and will only be able to use taijutsu of B-rank and lower the next two turns*
    *Can only be used by Lord of Kaos and Goro Kaguya*

    Derived from this jutsu in the spoiler (placed in spoiler so it will not be confused with a submission of mine).
    (Honeton: Chidori Gosunkugi Mari) - Bone Release : 1000 Birds Spike Ball
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User focuses a large amount of lightning chakra into the palm of their hand( about the size of a chidori, but 2 twice the chakra). After forming the chidori in the center of the palm, wraps their hand in a super dense bone covering. At the top of bone covering there are 3 open tipped bone spikes. User then rushes the opponent at an incredible speed and inserts the chidori through spikes into the opponents flesh causing paralysis (for one turn) in them after 2 turns.
    Note
    *Can only be used 2 twice per battle*


    ~Leaving for Mugi~

    2. (Water Style: Atomic Abyss: Poseidon's Aquatic Destruction) ♆ Suiton: Atomikku Shin'en: Poseidon's Suijou Metsubou
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Close-Long (most effective up close)
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (+40 to user if hit)
    Description: The user starts by making several condensed large balls of water with great pressure compressing them to the size of basketballs but the solidarity of ice (still water, just tightly compacted). The user then causes the orbs to sink into the water source he and his opponent are standing on, creating an mine-field in the ocean of sorts. If the opponent moves through underwater, he will cause a chain reaction, causing all of the water orbs to forcibly explode, causing great damage to anything caught underwater, with enough force to break bones on contact and cause severe internal damage to and rupture organs and even remove limbs. If both the user and enemy are standing on the water surface, and they move, it will cause the orbs near the surface to explode firstly, still causing a chain-reaction. The explosions, if above water, have the force and power to blow holes in metal.
    *Can only be used once*
    *after using, the user nor the opponent can move for 3 turns. After the three turns, the orbs loose their compressed-ness and the user and opponent will have no threats presented when moving*
    *If the user is on the water when detonate, he will take the same damage the enemy would take*
    *After using, the user cannot use water jutsus for three turns*
    *The user is able to control the orbs released nearby him when he moves but doing so takes a great deal of chakra from him and thus, he can only use 1 jutsu per turn if he does this (must be stated). Once the explosions start, however, he will no longer be able to control them*
    *If hit by orbs, the user's bones will be broken and damaged and he will be unable to move*
    *Can only be used by Lord of Kaos*

    ~Declined~ Very interesting technique. I just have a few things to be added: How many (hence you'd need to state their exact location when placing them in the water)? If you can control them, how can I be sure you won't simply direct them at your opponent off the bat? I really need you to efficiently spread them, otherwise you could simply stack them all under your opponent and have yourself a blast (if you don't mind the pun ).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Igneel View Post
    completely changed the ability of the sword~

    Kyōka Suigetsu

    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40(+10 per turn as long as the user hold Kyōka Suigetsu in his hands )
    Damage:80
    Description:Kyōka Suigetsu is an ancient sword said to be made by tanuki a master of illusions.Kyōka Suigetsu is said to be wielded by true genjutsu specialists and can use all genjutsu without any handseal.The most significant ability of the sword is that,once some one has seen the sword,he/she is cast under a genjutsu that he/she doesn't even realize.The genjutsu makes the opponent's brain slow down such that when the user uses a jutsu the opponent will see the user use the same jutsu 5 sec after the user used the jutsu in reality and so the opponent will only react accordingly(both hearing and sensing are also slowed down).The Genjutsu cast on the opponent is of S-rank if the opponent is of lower rank and is of A-rank if they are of same or higher rank.

    Working of the genjutsu:The genjutsu effects the the temporal lobe(controls hearing) and also the occipital lobe(controls vision) and the parietal lobe( mainly somatosensory cortex which control the body's senses).The genjutsu makes these parts of the brain slow down such that there ability to process information gets a time-lag of 5 sec.


    -can only be possessed by igneel
    -If anybody else touches Kyōka Suigetsu,that person will fall asleep aslong as he hold the sword in his hand
    -As long as the user holds the sword he is not able to use F-ranked ninjutsu and if does use them,the genjutsu will affect the user and he wouldn't even know
    -as long as the user holds the sword,he is not effected by genjutsu's

    ~Declined~ There's a CE doing something very similar and the whole time dilation concept was overused and banned in my book.

    Raiton:zappu Kyanon|Lightning Release:Zap cannon|
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Attack
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:The user concentrates raiton chakra in his body and does a single handseal and then charges the air(from mid-range infront of him) with positive charge and this charging is instant and only doujutsu users can see the charging.Right after charging the air the user goes onto do 5 handseals and just after he does the handseals,he raises his hand and sends a blast of lightning into the sky and just the instant lightning reaches the sky,the lightning appears right above the are which was charged initially and strikes down instantly and strike everything mid-long range infront of him which was initially charged by the user.The lightning fires everything in its path.Since lightning is -vely charged the air is +vely charged the speed of the lightning striking is almost instantaneous and in most cases unavoidable except for space time ninjutsu

    -can only be used by igneel
    -must have mastery over lightning
    -user looses the ability to manipulate raiton chakra and cannot use any raiton jutsu's for the rest of the battle
    -must have an affinity towards lightning element

    ~Declined~ Re-read yourself. I wish I could point out something to alter/take off, but I didn't understand half of your description.
    Raiton:zappu Kyanon|Lightning Release:Zap cannon|
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Attack
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:The user concentrates raiton chakra in his body and does a single handseal and then charges the air(from mid-range infront of him) with positive charge and this charging is instant and only doujutsu users can see the charging.Right after charging the air the user goes onto do 5 handseals and just after he does the handseals,he raises his hand and sends a blast of lightning into the sky and just the instant the lightning reaches the sky,thunder clouds appear above the target and lightning strikes down instantly and collides with everything mid-long range infront of the user which was initially charged by the user.The lightning fries everything in its path.Since lightning is -vely charged the air is +vely charged the speed of the lightning strike is almost instantaneous and in most cases unavoidable except for space time ninjutsu

    -can only be used by igneel
    -must have mastery over lightning
    -user looses the ability to manipulate raiton chakra and cannot use any raiton jutsu's for the rest of the battle
    -must have an affinity towards lightning element

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ "Instantly...instantly", such words leads to an instant declined. Also, this is just a Kirin ripoff.

    new submission

    Ninpou:Isei onban|Ninjutsu: Power disc
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:short-long
    chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user raises his index finger and makes a disc made of pure of chakra around the finger the disc is small(about 4 inch radius).The user can send the disc at the target and control the direction of the disc with a steady flow of chakra.The disc due to being small is very quick and has enough power to slice through a huge summons and huge rocks.The user can also detonate the disc with a single handseal and the blast has a radius of 3 yards.

    -can only be used 2 times per battle
    -cannot use any other jutsu while controlling the disc
    -cannot use any ninjutsu in the next turn
    -can only be taught by igneel

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exists.

    (Ten Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Süên) Marten Summoning Technique:Svéñ
    Rank:S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40+15 per blast
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Svéñ is a small marten who is of the size of a regular marten and his ability is that once he is summoned he attaches to the users hand by using his claws and wrapping his tail around the users arm.By doing so Svéñ has the ability to draw chakra from the user and amplifies it and them open its mouth and the user can fire concentrated blasts of chakra.Users arm resembles the pic below


    NOTE
    -Shooting blasts count towards the number of moves
    -Cannot use handseals which requires both hands while the marten is attached to the users arm
    -Lasts 3 turns
    -Can shoot only 5 blasts in total per battle and each blast is A-ranked
    -can only be summoned by igneel and lili-chwan or whom they teach

    ~Declined~ Obviously you had a problem with the pic because it doesn't look like an arm. Also, no chakra blast. We have enough of those already.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose: Sankaku Shikakejirai) Summoning: Triangle Trap
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Descriptions: The User will slam a single palm on the ground, creating a triangle with three circles at each end point with the kanji word “Trap” written in the middle. After the User has trapped the opponent into the Seal, the three circles will activate and summon a barrage of kunai knives and shuriken towards the opponent.
    ~When trap, the opponent can not escape~
    ~Ninja are only able to perform handseals~
    ~Only Ninja with Space/Time Ninjutsu or other methods of defense can counter~
    ~Can be used two times in battle~
    ~Only used by Kichiro Fujimoto and whom I teach~



    (Kuchiyose: Kimon Ankokugai) Summoning: Gate of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Descriptions: The User will draw blood and then slamming their palms to the ground summoning a large gate to protect them or their comrade(s).
    ~Dodge offensive Jutsu A-Rank and below~
    ~Can only be used 1 time in battle~
    ~Only used by Kichiro Fujimoto and whom I teach~

    Illusion Technique: False Movement Technique
    Rank: E
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:10(+5 if you use it double)
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The User will perform the needed handseals and causing the opponent to attack the misleading apperance of the user


    ~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
    Thank you.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Kage☆Boshi)-Shadow☆Star
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 20 (+10 chakra every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Descriptions: The user draws their sword and holds it horizontally to their own body, and follows by taking a moment to completely clear their mind of all thoughts, and leave only their killer instinct. The technique serves to temporarily eliminate the feelings of emotion that people feel, and that tend to get in the way of a person performing properly while in a fight such as Fear, Anger, Guilt, etc. The user then proceeds to release an even, calm stream of chakra throughout their entire body. The chakra serves to naturally augment the strength of the muscles, increasing speed and strength by up to 15%. The chakra flow to the brain serves to stimulate the senses, particularly sight, hearing and touch. The technique allows the user to think much more rationally than usual, and to think clearly. This in turn provides for a slightly increased reaction time, placing the user in what could be known as "Their Prime." A slightly increased reaction time does under no circumstances mean "you can dodge attacks using this jutsu" it simply allows the user to think more rationally, and process things much faster, now that they are completely focused on the fight in front of them. The released chakra also coats the users blade, increasing the cutting capability of the sword.
    ~Can only be used once per battle
    ~Remains active for the next six turns
    ~Upon ending, the user faces exhaustion because of the strain that was placed on their body, and can only use two jutsu the turn this jutsu wares off.

    ~Declined~ While being "unique", your technique is too similar to existing ones.

    (Kage☆Boshi:Ichi no Kata Rengoku)-Shadow☆Star: First Form - Chain of Blackness
    Rank: A
    Type: Weapon/Attack
    Range: Self (Short-Mid)
    Chakra Cost:-(20 when using ability)
    Damage Points:-(40 when using ability)
    Descriptions: The user begins by holding a unique long black sharp sickle-blade horizontal to their own body. The blade is decorated with white ornante patterns on it with a handle attached for the wielder, accentuated with three short spikes. A long black chain is attached to the end of the handle. The blade is long enough for it to be used as a sword, and because of the long chain, the wielder is also capable of throwing towards the opponent in the form of a ranged attack. Chakra can be infused with the blade, so that it resonates with itself inside the sickle, allowing for more precise cutting abilities, as well as being able to release shockwaves of chakra that follow through the path in which the sickle was swung.
    ~Can only be used by Jakey, or by anyone who has been taught by Jakey
    ~Can only be used while Shadow☆Star is active.
    ~Can only release shockwaves of chakra three times per battle.
    NOTE:this weapons can be pre-prepared using "Summoning: Lightning Blade Creation"

    ~Declined~ I think I've declined enough weapons for people to get this: no absorption of attacks, no blasts/crescent shaped projectiles and no unreasonable boost of an element. Those 3 concepts were used in dozens of weapons and other weapons can therefore be categorized as ripoff.

    (Kage☆Boshi: Ni no Kata Tsukiyoha)-Shadow☆Star: Second Form - Leaf of the Moonlit Night
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Descriptions: a large four-pointed shuriken, constructed from four black (and vaguely leaf-like) blades with ornate white patterns on them extending outwards from a wide circular ring acting as the weapons centre. It can be be thrown with considerable force at a target, using the high speed of the rotations and sharp blades to easily slice through the majority of objects. However, the true potential of this ability lies in the significance of he large hole present within the ring. By inserting a hand into this specific section, the users fist is immediately coated with a smooth black substance that is accented by ornate white patterns, which proceeds upwards with the shuriken to just past his wrist. After this process is complete, the user becomes capable of releasing a substantially powerful blast of energy, which not only causes a distinct extension in the surrounding blades but also emits a significant conclusive force directed forwards. The extent of this blast is such that it can even burst through powerful Earth barriers. Knowing such information, it would be easy to understand the devastating capabilities it could have on a persons body.
    ~Can only be used by, or by those taught by Jakey
    ~The effect an only be used twice per battle
    ~Can only be used while Shadow☆Star is active.
    NOTE:this weapons can be pre-prepared using "Summoning: Lightning Blade Creation"

    ~Declined~ Shadow Star wasn't approved.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Loki. View Post
    Laevetin -God of Mischief’s Vibroblade Trident -
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the blade made with the properties of a kunai such that it may have chakra channeled into it without destroying it. This trident is a one of a kind vibroblade in the shape of a 7 foot tall Golden trident. It originally belonged to the God of Mischief, and fell into the possession of Loki the Mandalorian mysteriously. He believes that he was given this because they shared the same name, and because of this, it has never left his side and will only respond to him. The blade uses ultrasonic vibrations to increase its cutting effectiveness. If stabbed into the ground, the user’s chakra take form and can spread through the ground by way of the vibrations. When up against a normal weapon (dagger, sword...etc) if the blade of the trident connect with the blade then weapon will break. If up against another Vibroblade, both blades will break.
    Note: Can be infused with any basic 5 chakra. (One Infusion per turn and Each element only Once per battle)
    Note: Channeling chakra into the ground counts as a move in the user’s turn. When it does, each Element has the resonating frequency from it causes these effects.
    *Fire - Causes 3 B ranked Fireballs to protrude from the ground under the opponent (Short-Mid).
    *Wind - Causes dust to flow from around the user in a circular area. The dust will stay at a shoe level and travel with great speed out towards mid range with the cutting power of an A Ranked wind blade. (Picture Whitebeard slamming his Halberg on the ground and the effect it causes)
    *Water - Causes the A Ranked Water to rise out of the ground and surround the user for protection.
    *Earth - Causes a violent, concentrated B Ranked Earthquake that goes out to Mid Range.
    *Lightning - Acts as a Lightning Rod and Channels up to S Ranked Lightning into the rod and then the ground.

    Note: Can only be handled by Loki Laufeyson.

    {everything In bold Italics has been changed}

    ~Declined~ Abilities are fine ^^ But where are the restrictions I asked for D:!?! Such a weapon can't be left without great drawbacks and restrictions. You know what to do.


    Summoning Animal: Magpie
    Scroll Owner: Loki.
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Ikol
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None



    Summoning: Ikol
    Rank: S
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (A ranked gust of Wind or Fire )
    Description: Loki bites his thumb and wipes the blood on his horned helmet and to Summon Ikol. Ikol is a magpie, which is an extremely smart, fast and agile bird that has a transformation jutsu that requires 1 handseal from Loki while touching Ikol, which allows itself to become smaller or larger. A screech is always given before each transformation occurs. Ikol was infused with Loki's DNA as a quicker way for them to bond together. Due to Loki and Ikols close relationship, Ikol is capable of being infused with any element Loki knows. Ikol can then take that element and convert it into a short range Tornado/Gust when it chooses.
    As a small 8lb magpie, which is how it is always summoned at first, Ikol is used mostly for scouting. Ikol and Loki can speak to each other telepathically. Ikol in its small form, is mostly seen pirched on Loki's shoulder spouting annoying but useful advice to him.
    As a large 800lb magpie, Ikol is capable of carrying Loki and up to one more person on its back without suffering from a decreased speed. When summoned in its large form, is capable of shooting an A Ranked Fire Tornado from its wings that does not count as a jutsu in that turn.
    Note: - Must have signed contract for Magpie summoning
    Note: Ikol is capable of expelling (Short Range Only) A ranked Gusts of the infused element from its wings once every 3 turns. (large form only)
    Note: Can be summoned once per battle
    Note: In Small Form, lasts 5 turns.
    Note: In Large Form, Lasts 3 turns.
    Note: Can only transform Twice per battle. One from Large to small and back again. Each Transformation counts as a move in that turn.
    Note: ONLY Loki. can Summon this Magpie.


    {Changed Rank from Forbidden to S Rank}

    ~Declined~

    -Establish the minimum and maximum size (max should be half the size of Gamabunta).
    -Take out the part where you can infuse any chakra you possess. I won't allow summon to know any other elements than the basic 5, and within those 5 it can only master 1.
    -Take out the telepathy unless you're from the Yamanaka clan.
    -Each and every of the jutsu used by this summon count toward your 3 moves per turn.
    Resubmitting

    Itazuna Toraidento -God of Mischief’s Trident -
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the blade made with the properties of a kunai such that it may have chakra channeled into it without destroying it. This trident is a one of a kind vibroblade in the shape of a 7 foot tall Golden trident. It originally belonged to the God of Mischief, and fell into the possession of Loki Laufeyson mysteriously. He believes that he was given this because they shared the same name, and because of this, it has never left his side and will only respond to him. The blade uses ultrasonic vibrations to increase its cutting effectiveness. If stabbed into the ground, the user’s chakra take form and can spread through the ground by way of the vibrations. When up against a normal weapon (dagger, sword...etc) if the blade of the trident connect with the blade then weapon will break.
    Note: Can be infused with any basic 5 chakra. One Infusion per turn and Each element only once per battle. User also cannot use the rank of that element of that ability for one turn. (ex: if Fire is used, next turn user cannot use B ranked Fire. etc
    Note: Using the Trident counts as a move in the user’s turn. When it does, each Element has the resonating frequency from it causes these effects.
    *Fire - Causes 3 B ranked Fireballs to protrude from the ground under the opponent (Short-Mid).
    *Wind - Causes dust to flow from around the user in a circular area. The dust will stay at a shoe level and travel with great speed out towards mid range with the cutting power of an A Ranked wind blade. (Picture Whitebeard slamming his Halberg on the ground and the effect it causes)
    *Water - Causes the A Ranked Water to rise out of the ground and surround the user for protection.
    *Earth - Causes a violent, concentrated B Ranked Earthquake that goes out to Mid Range.
    *Lightning - Acts as a Lightning Rod and Channels up to S Ranked Lightning into the rod and then the ground.
    Note: Can only be handled by Loki Laufeyson.


    ~Approved~

    {everything In bold has been changed}

    Summoning Animal: Magpie
    Scroll Owner: Loki.
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Ikol
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None



    Summoning: Ikol
    Rank: S
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (A ranked gust of Wind or Fire )
    Description: Loki bites his thumb and wipes the blood on his horned helmet and to Summon Ikol. Ikol is a magpie, which is an extremely smart, fast and agile bird that has a transformation jutsu that requires 1 handseal from Loki while touching Ikol, which allows itself to become smaller or larger. A screech is always given before each transformation occurs. Ikol was infused with Loki's DNA as a quicker way for them to bond together. Due to Loki and Ikols close relationship, Ikol is capable of being infused with any element (Basic 5) Loki knows. Ikol can then take that element and convert it into a short range Tornado/Gust when it chooses. The bond between Ikol and Loki is so great, that they only have to look into each other's eyes to know what they are thinkng, despite Ikol being capable of talking.
    As a small 8lb Magpie (Size of Gamakichi when Naruto summoned him the first time), which is how it is always summoned at first, Ikol is used mostly for scouting. Ikol in its small form, is mostly seen pirched on Loki's shoulder spouting annoying but useful advice to him.
    As a large 800lb Magpie (Half the size of Gamabunta), Ikol is capable of carrying Loki and up to one more person on its back without suffering from a decreased speed. When summoned in its large form, is capable of shooting an A Ranked Fire Tornado from its wings that counts as a jutsu in that turn.
    Note: - Must have signed contract for Magpie summoning
    Note: Ikol is capable of expelling (Short Range Only) A ranked Gusts of the infused element from its wings once every 3 turns. (large form only)
    Note: Can be summoned once per battle
    Note: In Small Form, lasts 5 turns.
    Note: In Large Form, Lasts 3 turns.
    Note: Can only transform Twice per battle. One from Large to small and back again. Each Transformation counts as a move in that turn.

    ~Declined~ You didn't make the appropriate changes, you tried to find something very similar but worded differently. Looking in each other's eyes and knowing what the other think? Again, unless you're a telepath I will not allow it. Secondly, she can only use 1 element, regardless of you infusing it into her.

    {Changed sizes and basic 5 element}

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    Yondaime Kazekage
    Kage (S) Ranked Puppet
    Username: Mathias
    Description: Yondaime Kazekage, upon being beaten by Sasori was turned into a human puppet in the same exact fashion that Sasori previously made Sandaime Kazekage, which is Sasori’s favorite human puppet, as well as the most powerful, besides Sasori himself. The Yondaime Kazekage, having been added to Sasori's arsenal and giving him possession of a puppet that controls Gold dust, has created a fierce trio of Sand (Sasori), Iron Sand (Sandaime Kazekage), and Gold Dust (Yondaime Kazekage), such that when they are used together, leaves for near limitless potential when both puppets are used at the same time. As a puppet, Yondaime Kazekage maintains the ability to manipulate Gold Dust, just as the Yondaime Kazekage did, due to it being a human puppet. This puppet, also has the Thousand Hands Manipulation like Sandaime Kazekage. The puppet is able to release Gold Dust from its mouth, allowing it to Gold Dust jutsu with that as a source. Unlike Sandaime Kazekage, the Yondaime has the magnetic apparatus in its right chest compartment.
    Link to Battle

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Eustachian Chacha) ~ Water Style: Eustachian Disruption (No English found for Eusatchian)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 70
    Description: The user uses their chakra to control water from the environment (Created or Existing) and causes the water to fold over the target from behind. Once the target is trapped, the user uses their chakra to manipulate the bubble to cause the pressure inside to change rapidly from weak to strong. This causes severe disorientation to the target.
    ~Can be used up to 3 times.
    ~Requires water source.
    ~Can only be taught by ~CoOkie Monster~

    ~Declined~ This technique is too vague. Can you kill him with the pressure? Trapped in what? Water? Where does the damages come from?

    (Doton: Tadai Ame) ~ Earth Style: Heavy Rain
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 55
    Description: The user channels their chakra into the ground around them. Then through chakra manipulation, the user causes many arrows to shoot up from the ground rapidly and form an arc in the air and then rain down on the opponent.
    ~Can be used 3 times
    ~Can only be taught by ~CoOkie Monster~

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom style.
    Gyakujyūken - Reverse Gentle Fist

    Description:
    Instead of using the open palms, the user uses the back of his palms to attack. Jyūken normally seals an opponent's chakra points, while the Gyakujyūken loosens the chakra points, allowing chakra to leave the opponent's body with every strike. This means that the user can drain an opponent of their chakra supply with only a few direct Gyakujyūken strikes, making it an extremely dangerous technique.
    - Hyuuga Bloodline only.

    Founder: Eddy-kun..

    ~Pending~ A few hit to drain all of an opponent's chakra? That's a bit drastic. Make it less potent.


    Eight Trigrams Roaring Dragon Palm

    Type:Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Similar to the Eight Trigrams Empty Palm, the user will thrust his palm forward sending forward a spiraling narrow line of chakra at his opponent. The difference in this technique is that the spiraling chakra current takes the form of a dragon. When contact is made, the chakra will explode outward. The result of this technique is usually massive scalding around the stomach and chest.
    - Can only be use 3 times per battle.
    - Hyuuga Bloodline only.

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Suiton: Sono Tenrai Kara no Mizu | Water Release: The Bliss of Water
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    With 2 simple hand seals (Snake + Ram), the user will materialize water within range of the technique, using the moisture all around the field and his chakra as a fuel. The water can be shaped into any giver solid construct the user desires (like cubes, spheres, walls, etc) or kept as a raw body of water (wave, etc). The amount of water the user can produce is, at its best, about 10 000 liters of water (give or take a cube of about 100m3). However, the speed as which the water forms is always the same, taking a couple of seconds to materialize its maximum volume.

    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note2: Doesn't require a water source and can be used as one
    Note3: Usable only thrice
    Note4: In the same turn the user can't use techniques above S-Rank

    ~Pending~ Since you made it an offensive jutsu, I need you to specify that you can't summon this body of water near your opponent. Otherwise you could simply crush them as it's summoned 1 inch over them, or simply around them.

    Suiton: Sono Tenrai Kara no Mizu | Water Release: The Bliss of Water
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    With 2 simple hand seals (Snake + Ram), the user will materialize water within range of the technique, using the moisture all around the field and his chakra as a fuel. The water can be shaped into any giver solid construct the user desires (like cubes, spheres, walls, etc) or kept as a raw body of water. The amount of water the user can produce is, at its best, about 10 000 liters of water (give or take a cube of about 100m3). However, the speed as which the water forms is always the same, taking a couple of seconds to materialize its maximum volume. The user has some control over the water while its materializing and once it materializes, but he can never generate enough momentum or compress it enough to actually do any harm to any enemy, even when he gives it a specific shape.

    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note2: Doesn't require a water source and can be used as one
    Note3: Usable only thrice
    Note4: In the same turn the user can't use techniques above S-Rank

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Deadly technique) - Deddo Waza
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (-30 to user)
    Description: The user shows his opponent(s) a genjutsu in which nothing is changed, everything will be the same as before using the genjutsu, so that the opponent will be unaware of the genjutsu used. And, as the moment user puts his opponent in the genjutsu, he will make a single handseal showing the opponent a another genjutsu in which he shows his opponent that they are drowing in water, completeley paralyzied, blinded, binded (each and every body part), unable to do anything. And if they try to do anything or performs any jutsu in the second genjutsu, then it will be useless, as in the real world they are just standing, and the jutsu they are using is in the second genjutsu.
    Note: ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.


    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This is not Inception, we're in the Narutoverse. This technique completely ignores the fundamental principles of a Genjutsu.
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    (Raiton: Raikou Maru) - Lightning Release: Lightning Disc
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user raises one of his hand and creates a disc of lightning (2m radius) in his hand, which he can throw, and it moves at tremendous speed because of his sharp edges and can cut and then pass through any solid without any problem.
    Note: ~After throwing the disc, user can also control it anyhow and can change its direction.
    ~Cannot use any lightning jutsu above A-rank in same turn.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught be Enzup.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
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    (Ninjutsu: Reikon Eater) - Soul Eater
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User after performing 5 handseals releases his pure chakra from each and every spore of his body and creates a dense sphere around him which is so strong that can protect the user from any Ranks jutsu till the sphere is around his body.
    Note: ~Sphere lasts for maximum 2 turns and can be cancelled by making 1 handseal.
    ~Sphere can block a maximum of 3 attacks, after which chakra start despersing.
    ~While sphere is active, user can only use those jutsus which does not originate from user's body. (eg. he can't use "rasengan" or some wind or fire jutsu which he shoots from mouth)
    ~Due to excess release of pure chakra, user can't use any S-Rank or above technique for next 2 turns after sphere becomes inactive.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.


    ~Declined~ OP.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton: Houken) - Lightning style: Consecration
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 per turn
    Damage Points: 24 per turn on the aura
    Description: The user will gather their lightning chakra as they perform one handseal releasing a shock of lightning through the ground all around them that forms a circle of physical lightning chakra on the surface of the ground as seen in the image below. This lighting forms all around to mid range in the ground under the user. If any enermies step on the lightning they will recieve 25 damage per turn on the lighting. Also the lightning will shock the target slowing there speed and reactions by half.

    Note: lasts for up to 3 turns
    Note: useable twice



    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing technique.

    (katon: Houken) - Fire style: Consecration
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will gather their fire chakra as they perform one handseal releasing a shock of fire through the ground all around them that forms a net of flames on the surface of the ground as seen in the image below. This fire forms all around to mid range in the ground under the user. If any enermies step on the fire they will recieve 25 damage per turn on the flames. Also the fire will burn the target slowing there running speed due to the burns.

    Note: lasts for up to 3 turns
    Note: useable twice



    ~Declined~ Same as above.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Teno757 View Post

    Abyssal Bow (shin'en ojigi)
    Rank-S
    Range-Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost-5 (-50 with added chakra element)
    Chakra Damage-30 (+75 with added chakra element)
    Description-This bow and arrow was said to be one of the lost ninja weapons. A chakra suckage if infuse with elements. It can infuse any element inside the arrows. it has 20 arrows and travel at the speed of 50mph. It is made of metal on the tip of the arrows so if something is magnetise it will follow it like most metal towards magnetism.
    -Note:Each 2 arrows is considered a move. so that mean 6 is the max
    -Note:Cant use any S rank attacks while arrow is active
    -Note:Can only infuse 2 elements in one arrow ONCE and that consist of 4 arrows meaning 2 turns
    -Notenly can be used by teno757
    Declined, only one elemental charge allowed, two elements would require yin-yang training
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    (yusaburu enjin) Earth Style: Rock Rings
    Rank: A
    Range : Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:60
    Chakra Damage:N/a
    Description: The user does 2 hand signs. afterwards he/she sends their chakra into the ground right under the oppenent causing the earth under the person to break off into 3 large rings. and surrounding the person body from their legs / hands-wrist / mid body. once it surrounds the enemy the user then does 1 hand sign and then it closes in on the person body restricting their movements
    -Note: Cant use no earth Jutsus while this jutsu is active
    -Note: Can only use Twice (1times)
    -Note: Only Taught by Teno757
    Approved
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    (mizu fuukaku tadai oshi) Water Style : Heavy Pressure
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost : 70
    Chakra Damage : 90
    Description: The user does 5 hand seals. then slams their hands on the ground once that happens the user soaks up all the water in the ground in a (half football field distance) and 7feet deep. once that is done the user does one more hand sign sending all the water that was gathered up underground to under the oppenent then bust right under the person in a forceful way making the water heavy and sharp. since the water is heavy the oppenent is unable to move while the attack is being took place.
    -Note: Only can use once
    -Note: Can add fire to the water to boil off the skin. or lightning to.... yea
    -Note: Cant use water jutsus for 3 turns afterwards
    -Note: The explosion is 12ft wide.
    -Note: only taught by teno757
    -Note: User must keep his hands on the ground while gathering the water
    -Note: The water gather faster when taking the slot of 2 jutsus. and gathers almost immedadtley if took the slots of 3 jutsus
    -Note: 1jutsu slot-7seconds to gather/ 2jutsu slots- 4 seconds to gather/ 3 jutsu slots-2seconds to gather
    Edit or take out anything if want
    Declined, do not resubmit

    Abyssal Bow (shin'en ojigi)
    Rank-S
    Range-Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost-0 (-40 with added chakra element)
    Chakra Damage-30 (80 with added chakra element)
    Description-This Bow and Arrow set was a lost ninja weapon. it was talked about in the books but a mere fairy tail. but it was found by a discovery. but he just could not harness the power. it has the power to use the user KG. for it does not react to regular elements. it can be fired regularly but less damage. since im a lava user i can turn the arrows into Lava arrows
    -Note:Each 2 arrows is considered a move. so that mean 6 is the max
    -Note:Cant use any S rank attacks while arrow is active
    -Notenly can be used by teno757

    (did the whole history over)

    ~Declined~ Never will I allow such a weapon. Take out the part where you can use your KG through the weapon and re-submit.
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    (kaze youshiki: Reiki han'i) Wind Style: Aura Sphere
    Rank:S
    Type: Defense
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:70
    Chakra Damage:
    Description: The user does 5 hand seals, then breathes a huge amount of air around him to cause the user to be engulfed in a sphere of wind. while in the sphere the user can not get hit. cause the wind is filled with his chakra making his senses in the bubble enhance. if something enters the bubble the wind senses it faster then most sensible things. then the attack goes slightly slower letting the user dodge most hits.

    -Can only use twice
    -Fire is this only weakness,Plus wide range attacks that leaves me no space to doge
    -Cant use any wind jutsus if i use this Twice throughout the whole battle
    -The bubble can fit 2ppl
    -It last for the whole turn if it gets put into play

    ~Declined~ OP and a less OP version of this technique already exist.
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    (maguma sutairu: yo watatsumi) Lava Style: OverSea
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range:Long
    Type:Attack
    Chakra Cost:90
    Chakra Damage: 100 (if not dead all ready)
    Description: The user gathers up large amounts of lava chakra in their mouth. the user then jumps HIGH in the ground and does 6hand seals.. once thats done. the user spits out a sea of lava that covers a WIDE variety of the battle field. as it travels to the ground leaving the opponent nowhere to run. burning the 5feet into the ground. making the battle ground nothing but lava now.

    -Can only use once
    -Once used no more lava techs can be used
    -It uses up so much chakra that you cant do no jutsus for the next 2 turns
    -The lava is so hot that my hands suffer from 2nd degree burn and cant do jutsus that require hand seals

    ~Declined~ Bisha once had a technique similar to this one. So: similar technique already exist.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-28-2011 at 05:40 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Submissions ended on the fourth, and it is the fifth today. Hope this is okay. If you post one for this week, i'll delete this and repost.

    Quote Originally Posted by Selendrile View Post
    (Katon: Kaen no Tenjō)- Flame Ceiling
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 50
    Description: Performing one handseal, the user creates a flat square wall of flame above the opponent. Then performing another hand seal, the flame ceiling will then drop down pillars of flame quickly, similar to the bars on a cage. This technique is used as a cage, but because of the heat of the flames, the opponent may suffer second degree burns if they remain in the cage.
    *Note: Can only be taught by HereticPassage
    Declined, incorrect stats for the technique, and i know izuna may like this technique but im asking you to specify the size of this technique overal , cause your damage reason is abit unsure as to give second degree burns they must be incontact with the flames, mere heat isnt really enough to cause the burns and that depends on the proximity of the flames to the enemy target anyways
    (Katon: Kaen no Tenjō)- Flame Ceiling
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 50
    Description: Performing one handseal, the user creates a 4x4 foot, flat square wall of flame above the opponent. Then performing another hand seal, the flame ceiling will then drop down sixteen pillars of flame (16sq. ft) quickly, similar to the bars on a cage. This technique is used as a cage, but because of the heat of the flames, the opponent may suffer highly serious burns due to the proximity of the flames.
    *Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile

    ~Approved~

    Quote Originally Posted by Selendrile View Post
    (Raiton: Pachipachi Ninja no Kutsu)- Crackling Ninja Shoes
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user channels ration chakra to his feet, which then travels into the ground, 5 feet in any direction around the user. This jutsu lays dormant, until it is activated when any doton jutsu is used within its vicinity. The chakra reacts to doton, and as such will release a pulse of electricity, destroying any doton jutsu before it can be started.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by HereticPassage
    *Note: Only works when the doton jutsu emerges from the 5ft. area around the user
    *Note: Once used, the jutsu remains active until it is used twice

    Feel free to edit any and all to get them approved
    Declined, make it a one time limit use for the active and being A rank it requires a useage restriction
    (Raiton: Pachipachi Ninja no Kutsu)- Crackling Ninja Shoes
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user channels ration chakra to his feet, which then travels into the ground, 5 feet in any direction around the user. This jutsu lays dormant, until it is activated when any doton jutsu is used within its vicinity. The chakra reacts to doton, and as such will release a pulse of electricity, destroying any doton jutsu before it can be started.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    *Note: Only works when the doton jutsu emerges from the 5ft. area around the user
    *Note: Usable twice per battle
    *Note: Once used, the jutsu remains active until it is used once

    ~Approved~

    (Doton: Rokku no Tepu o Kakudai)- Expanding Rock Tape
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs the following hand seals, Snake → Ram → Bird → Hare → Dragon → Ox → Horse → Ram → Dragon → Snake, and then directs their doton chakra into the earth. A hundred thin, earth strips, with similar physical characteristics as tape erupt from the ground below the opponent. If the rock tape touches the opponent, it will attach itself to the opponent’s skin, making it impossible to remove. After two turns of being attached to the rock tape, the user will perform the Snake hand seal, and the tape expands and amplifies its density rapidly, increasing its weight. This anchors the opponent to the ground due to the immense weight.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    *Note: Usable once per battle
    *Note: The opponent can battle as normal until the user expands the tape
    *Note: No doton for the next 2 turns

    Feel free to edit anything.

    ~Declined~ Hundreds of tapes? This is a bit excessive. Re-work that part.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-28-2011 at 05:45 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Kanabo Geijutsu (Kanabo Arts) Kanabo Geijutsu is simmilar to Kenjutsu in that the user perfoms various jutsu with the use of their Kanabo. The user utilizes the massive studded club to the highest degree in many different fashions to either attack or defend.

    (Kanabo Geijutsu: Supiningu Kanabo) Kanabo Arts: Spinning Kanabo
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A (+5 to Kanabo Geijutsu)
    Description: The user focuses chakra into the palm of their hand and rotates it at a high speed. While holding their Kanabo in a loose grip, the Kanabo will spin with the chakra, and the user will then be able to hit the target with the spinning club, the studs tearing into the target's flesh at high speeds.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used by a bio with a Kanabo
    ~Lasts until the end of the turn
    ~Can only be used four (4) times per battle.

    (Kanabo Geijutsu: Supaiku no Sutaddo) Kanabo Arts: Studs to Spikes
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A (+10 to Kanabo Geijutsu)
    Description: The user focuses chakra into their Kanabo, and causes the material making up the studs in the club to come to a sharp taper, creating spikes all over the Kanabo.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used by a bio with a Kanabo
    ~Lasts until the end of the turn
    ~Can only be used three (3) times per battle

    ~Both Approved~

    (Kanabo Geijutsu: Oni-Ni-Kanabo) Kanabo Arts: Oni With An Iron Club
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (+20 to Kanabo Geijutsu)
    Description: The user focuses chakra throughout their body to alter their being slightly. The users skin will turn red, and their muscles will begin to grow. While in this state, the user's proficency with the Kanabo increases greatly because their strength increases so the club seems to weigh nothing, and their speed gets a slight boost to allow the user to react quicker. While in this state, the user can only use taijutsu and Kanabo Geijutsu.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~The user can only use taijutsu and Kanabo Geijutsu while in this state
    ~This jutsu lasts for three (3) turns
    ~This jutsu can only be used two (2) times per battle
    ~The user moves slower the turn after he exits this state, and can't hold any heavy weapon (such as the Kanabo) during the turn he exits the state

    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing technique.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Sorry for the late update:

    Submissions starting on the 11/05/2011 ending on the 12/11/2011
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Mausu no sen sukyan) Summoning: Thousand Scan of Mice
    Type: Summoning/ Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After forming the handseals, the user summon many small mice into the battlefield which quickly go to everywhere on the field even some burrow the hole they can find, the user keeps his hand on the scroll all this time. When one of the mice come in contact with a strange chakra. They react and give a pulse of chakra from the scroll. If the user withdraw his hand from the scroll, the mice disapper
    - Must have signed the mouse contract
    - The user have to stay focus for a turn
    - All the attack the user used after this will be reduced by 10 damage for this turn and next turn.

    ~Approved~

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Wing Man) Summoning: Wing Man
    Type: Summoning/ Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After forming the handseals, the user summon a powerful mouse with a size of a human, when the user get onto it, make hand seals and put his palm on him, sending him any type of chakra, he will produce the jutsu the user used, but increasing the rank by 1 level. Cannot increase B rank abd B rank + jutsus.
    - Must have signed the mouse contract
    - The user have to give away a move when increasing the rank, which means that the jutsu will counts as 2 moves
    - Cannot increase or use on jutsu which require hands or legs to perform like Kenjutsu and Taijutsus.

    ~Declined~ All summons are limited to 1 element. Also, drop the idea of increasing your attack through your summon, I won't accept that.

    Quote Originally Posted by Nara Renges View Post
    Summoning jutsu: Fur (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kegawa)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After forming the handseals, the user summon Fur. Fur is the greatest friend of Renges, and Renges always summon it first. It teeth are sharply edged, and claw too. Renges named him "Fur" because his fur is so cozy and good to sleep on him. After charging its chakra, Fur will open his mouse and make a huge hurricane like C-rank wind attack.
    - Take a turn to charge
    - Every technique Fur performs count toward the user's 3 moves per turn

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    ~Updating~
    Summoning jutsu: Fur (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kegawa)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After forming the handseals, the user summon Fur. Fur is the greatest friend of Renges, and Renges always summon it first. It teeth are sharply edged, and claw too. Renges named him "Fur" because his fur is so cozy and good to sleep on him. After charging its chakra, Fur will open his mouse and make a huge hurricane like B-rank wind attack.
    - Take a turn to charge
    - Every technique Fur performs count toward the user's 3 moves per turn

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Vertex - (Chōten)
    Type: Weapon/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: n/a (-20 if regular chakra added to it, -30 if elemental chakra added to it)
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description:
    → The Vertex is quite a large sword, so large in fact that people are often intimidated by it. The length of the sword is approx. 2.3 metres. It is made of Titanium and is indestructible through means of Ninjutsu and Elemental Jutsu. It has also earnt itself the name of "Projectile Splitter" (Purojekutairusupuritta) because of it's ability. The sword's blade is also unique because it is in the shape of a triangular prism, with the main edge pointing at a 90 degree angle, and the other edges 45 degrees each. By enhancing the sword's blade with one's own chakra, it is able to split in half, any projectile jutsu up to B-Rank (such as a fireball). By enhancing the sword with an elemental chakra instead, it is able to increase the Rank of jutsu being split, depending on which element you decide to enhance the blade with (For example if you were to enhance the blade with suiton chakra, you could split up to A-Rank fire jutsu, but only up to C-Rank earth jutsu). The sword will only split projectile jutsu, so the jutsu will still carry on, but behind them across the angle of the blade's edge.
    Notes:
    → Can only be enhanced by one element per battle
    → Must have at least one training session in chosen element to enhance with it
    → A jutsu split counts as a move for the turn
    → Can only use once per turn
    → Once used, it cannot be used for the next two turns
    → Can only be used by Alternative and those whom he allows

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Toriniti-Kaosu) – Chaos Trinity
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Varies with Hellraiser Techniques being used
    Chakra cost: Varies with Hellraiser Techniques being used
    Damage points: Varies with Hellraiser Techniques being used
    Description: Cain, a spirit of darkness, and Azael, a spirit of light, belonged to a realm of demons and angels where their ambitions led them to unite in order to overthrow their respective masters and reshape the world under their own rule. However, their opponents prevailed over them and they were condemned to execution. To survive, Cain and Azael fled their realm and reincarnated into a black sword and a white sword respectively. The swords look like twin ones in order to reflect their similar lust for war and power, and their powers can only be used when they are being wielded. The three of them (Cain, Azael and their wielder) are referred to as the Chaos Trinity when they fight together, and are able to perform techniques classified as Hellraiser Techniques.
    Note: The wielder of Cain and Azael must be Sannin rank or above.
    Note: Hellraiser Techniques can only be used once per turn. They count as a move and must be submitted separately for approval.
    Note: Cain and Azael will draw and stock up chakra from their wielder in order to enable him/her to perform techniques without hand seals. As such, the wielder’s other abilities will not be inhibited when performing with the swords.
    Note: Cain and Azael can only be wielded by BluePhenix and people he lends them to, provided they meet the requirement.



    ~Approved~
    Dropping the above weapons since it seems Hellraiser Techniques have no chance of getting approved due to them being over-powered I'll be replacing them with the below.

    (Arkana Chain) – Arkana Chain
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40 for activating Arkana
    Damage points: Vary with the techniques used (Separate submissions)
    Description:

    Arkana is a chain which became legendary when it was used ages ago to capture a bijuu. When it was being forged, it was enhanced with highly advanced fuuinjutsu in order to make it able to restrain anything, whether its constitution is tangible like living beings, or intangible like chakra. Its creator also tried to replicate the Yata Mirror’s ability by endowing the chain with all nature transformations, such that it changes its own characteristics and becomes impervious to the characteristics of the attacks it receives. This was successfully achieved and as such, the chain has an aura similar to that of the Yata Mirror which gives it a somewhat spectral form, and prevents it from suffering from elemental weaknesses as well as conducting electricity and/or heat from enemy attacks.

    Many fought over the power of Arkana and it was therefore kept hidden for decades, until recently when it has been finally passed down for combat. When in dormant status, Arkana is wrapped around its wielder’s left arm without affecting his/her mobility. The wielder can use it to block attacks from edged weapons, whether or not these are enhanced by wind or lightning chakra.

    In active mode, Arkana will adopt its “spectral” form and the wielder will be able to use his chakra to manipulate it around, making it crawl in mid-air in order to reach and pierce through opponents and concrete techniques with its edged end. The wielder can also imbue it with chakra to make it increase in length, similarly to Shun’s Andromeda Chain in Saint Seiya.

    Arkana’s hyper mode, which enables it to restrain everything and achieve even more, is not accessible to the wielder unless the latter has mastered fuuinjutsu.

    Note: The wielder of Arkana must be Kage rank or above.
    Note: Activating Arkana counts as a move and must be done during battle.
    Note: Arkana can only be wielded by BluePhenix and those he lends it to.

    ~Declined~ This is a big no. No Yata mirror's copy cat. Reaching up to long range as you extend your weapon is absolutely out of the question, and I don't even want to know what the hyper mode does lol.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton:Unmei no inazuma no tori)-Lightning Style:Lightning Birds of Doom
    Type: Defence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will create the hand seals Tiger Dragon Bird. Once this is done they release and manipulate the shape of their raiton chakra to create a wall of birds that block up to A rank raiton, and A rank Doton attacks

    ~They can only black Doton attacks if they are not under, or on the ground, they must be hurtling towards the user
    ~Can only be used by Kyuubisan unless he gives permission

    ~Declined~ Restrictions?

    (Suiton:Mizu no hogo)-Water Style:Water Protection
    Type: Defence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will create the hand seals Tiger Dragon Horse. Once this is done the user releases a thick orb of water that can protect up to A rank fire jutsu. Once the user is finished on the defense, they do the rat hand seal and call out release. Once this is done the water shoots outwards in every direction in small spikes.

    ~This jutsu can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~Can only be used by Kyuubisan unless he gives permission

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Raiton: Raitoningu no shuryūdan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Hand Grenade
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user summons a large amount of raiton chakra into their hand and compresses it until it is a small ball. Then the user throws it at the area they choose and it explodes in a 9 meter radius. If this is thrown into water when the enemy is in water [+10 damage]

    ~ 2 times per battle
    ~ No Lightning techniques higher than A-rank for 1 turn
    ~ Can only be taught by Kyuubisan

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kenjustu: ya )- Kenjustu Style- Ondeko
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: By swinging the user's sword in an arc overhead, a large wheel composed of lightning appears. From it, 30 thunder arrows fire outward regardless of which direction he is facing.
    - Can only be used 2 time
    - No more lighting justu for the next turn
    - Can only be used by a Ameyuri Ringo Bio

    ~Approved~ I edited your restrictions.

    (Kenjustu: ya )- Kenjustu Style- Lighting Dragon Tornado
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Ameyuri will raise his Kiba into the air and draw lightning down upon the user body. The current will be contained within and around the user's form. the user will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon's head and will cover the area in front of him. It will then strike out against his opponent and painfully trap them in the vortex. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.
    - Can only be used 2 times per battle
    - Only a Ameyuri Ringo Bio can use this justu

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Lighting: shikon )- Lighting Style- Fangs Of Lighting
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: By drawing together his twin swords, Ameyuri can send an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing him to create lightning strikes in any desired location.
    -Can only be used 2 times per battle
    -Only a Ameyuri Ringo Bio can use this Justu
    - No Lighting Justu for the next turn

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This is a cannon technique, it is absolutely forbidden to submit cannon techniques. Let this be your first warning, next time you'll be banned from this thread for 1 week.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by black uchiha View Post
    SY gave me permission to resubmit this cj
    Resubmits

    (Konchu sutairu: Chakura no ezuke) Insect Style: Chakra Feeding
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (if feed on directly)
    Description: The user has a selection (his choice) of his insects, to feed on/devour any available chakra effective up to A-rank (I.e. his chakra, chakra strings, chakra shields...etc) and also non aggressive S-rank chakra. In doing this, the insects cancel the wanted effect of the devoured chakra (I.e. shielding, puppet connection...etc).
    -Non-elemental chakra only
    -If used on chakra A-rank and below the bugs can continue to fight
    -If used on non aggressive S-rank chakra the bugs survive, but become static & can't move for 1 turn due to over feeding

    -Can only use 3 times per battle
    -No other S-rank bug techniques in the same move
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Leaving for SY~


    Declined. I told you the only way I'd let you resubmit is if you did a complete overhaul of the jutsu, which you didnt do. You still left the ability to devour any chakra and used non aggressive jutsu as the examples then stated that it could also devour non-agressive jutsu. your examples are misleading because I know you true purpose is to be able to devour fireballs and lightning blasts, like you originally intended, since that would fall under the blanket statement of "any chakra".
    Resubmit

    (Konchu sutairu: Chakura no ezuke) Insect Style: Chakra Feeding
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (if feed on directly)
    Description: The user has a selection (his choice) of his insects, to feed on/devour any the available (non elemental) chakra, effective up to A-rank (I.e. his chakra, chakra strings, chakra shields...etc) and also non aggressive S-rank chakra(non elemental). In doing this, the insects cancel the wanted effect of the devoured chakra (I.e. shielding, puppet connection...etc).
    -Non elemental chakra only
    -If used on chakra A-rank and below the bugs can continue to fight
    -If used on non aggressive S-rank chakra the bugs survive, but become static & can't move for 1 turn due to over feeding
    -Can only use 3 times per battle
    -No other S-rank bug techniques in the same move
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    Leaving for SY
    ~Approved~


    New Entries


    (Sesshomaru) Sesshomaru
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (from hissing)
    Description: User summons Sesshomaru, King Shinobu’s head adviser. Sesshomaru is one of the few beetles of Mt. Gen that stands in a humanoid from. He stands 30ft tall with a horn extending another 10ft from his head. Sesshomaru also has an 8ft spike that rises from each shoulder, and a heavily armored exoskeleton that protects him from normal weapons and A-rank and below techniques of any nature (only 2). Sesshomaru has the nature affinities of lightning and wind them, up to S-rank. He also is among the strongest beetles of Mt. Gen able to lift 850 times his body weight. Sesshomaru has a special ability to release a loud hissing sound (Hissing link) in a specific direction, that is deafening and debilitating to anyone/anything in its path (up to mid-range). Upon hearing this, the opponent(s) muscles become weak and fall to the ground unable to move for a short time (1 turn).
    - Can only be summoned once per battle
    - Only last 4 turns
    - Hissing can only be used 2 times per battle
    - Paralysis only last 1 turn
    -The user can be caught in the hissing (if applicable)
    - Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract
    - Must have signed the Rhinoceros Beetle contract of 1 months


    ~Declined~ OP. 1 element only. 850 times his weight would make him several times stronger then someone opening all eight gates, take that out completely. No sound jutsu from a summon. Your restrictions are a mess, you say you can summon him once but he can be used 2 times per battle?

    (Sachiko) Sachiko
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user summons Sachiko to the field. Sachiko is one of the few beetles of Mt. Gen that stands in a humanoid from. She stands 30ft tall, and unlike most female rhinoceros beetles that don’t have horns, she has two 10ft horns extending outward 7ft, and upward 3ft, from her head. Sachiko also has 3ft spikes that line her body, and a heavily armored exoskeleton that protects her from normal weapons. Even though her name means child of happiness, she is anything but, she, being the only female with horns, feels she has to be just as tough as the males and she is among the strongest beetles of Mt. Gen able to lift 840 times her body weight, she also wields the horn (15ft) of her fallen father as a sword (pictured below/bottom pic top horn). She has the nature affinity of lightning using it up to S-rank. Sachiko has a special ability to shead her skin/exoskeleton at will and use it as a shield or a decoy.

    - Can only be summoned once per battle
    - Only last 4 turns
    - Sheaded skin can only withstand 2 A-rank attacks
    - Shedding only last 2 turn
    - Shedding only works in a tall dense area (woods, forest…etc)
    - Can only shed once per battle
    - Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract
    - Must have signed the Rhinoceros Beetle contract of 1 months




    ~Declined~ A 10ft horn that stands out 7th and 3 ft? How is that even possible ~__~. Get your math right. Same as above for the raw strength. Mention that every move she does counts toward yours. Make it B-rank for the Skin.
     
         
    Last edited by Scary Yamato; 01-05-2012 at 06:37 PM.

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