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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    The Prayers of Hades | Hadesu No Inori
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 95
    Damage: N/A -60 [Strain To The User]
    Descripton: Having mastered earth element the user performs a string of 10 handseals while concentrating a large portion of their chakra into the earth below the target(s) vicinity. Upon finishing, there is a 5 second delay in which it seems nothing has been done but the ground deep underneath the opponent is eroding from within at an alarming rate causing the vicinity in which the chakra was inserted to collapse creating a massive sinkhole to form which is said to be so deep that you can hear the God of the underworld, Hades screaming in prayer to Zeus to be freed from his eternal prison. Although its not a genjutsu the sudden shock of the ground from beneath the opponent(s) feet collapsing at such an alarming rate causes them to be put in a genjutsu like state similar to "Killing intent", where the constant force of the wind from free falling whistles in their ears giving the illusion that someone is screaming from below.

    Note: Takes one turn to prepare.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Must have mastered Earth
    Note: Must be of at least Kage Ranked
    Note: No other Earth techniques for 4 Turns including this one.
    Note: Can also be used to form a blue hole, if the user is touching the ground near a body of water.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato..


    The size of the sinkhole formed



    ~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
    Thank you.

    Note: I've checked it nonetheless so here's my verdict. Take out the genjutsu and add physical damages so it can legitimately be ranked "Forbidden".
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-29-2011 at 12:36 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal:Black tiger
    Scroll Owner:TheGreyFox
    Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A



    ~Declined~ The Tiger contract already exist.

    exploding clone(kibaku kuro)
    Type:Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 45
    Description: the user makes one clone that has a small but powerfull exploding bom with in the clone and when given a good hit to the clone will set the bom off and also the clone can explode if the user wants it to

    ~Declined~ Do not submit cannon technique's rip off. This is your first and only warning, next time you'll be banned from this thread for one week.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-29-2011 at 12:38 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuinjutsu: Shi Yari Takai) - Sealing Techniques: Four Spears of Lightning
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user uses 4 scrolls to summon four long metal spears, then by trowing all four of the spears on each side of your opponent(North,South,West,East),
    the spears start discharging lighting chakra and creates threads of lighting which then link to each spear, the area in the middle of the four spears turns bright blue and raises into mid air, in a shape of a huge cube then starts discarging lighting chakra, and whoever is inside the area get critically damaged and is unable to move for 1 move unless spears are knocked down and
    the link between the spears is broken. If not escaped the area shrinks, and after 3 moves the opponent is sealed and the opponent is sealed away and can no longer fight.


    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be used by -Sasuke- unless stated otherwise

    ~Declined~ This is grossly OP for an A-rank technique. Were you even trained in Fuuinjutsus?
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-29-2011 at 12:39 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Meiton: Yoru Hoshin Jotai) - Dark Release: Night Daze
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This user will gather their dark chakra and perform two handseals, as they finish the two handseals, they will release a wave of dark chakra through out the battlefield. The wave is able to break the opponent's ribs with just the force that it travels at. The wave has a special property of being able to affect the target's chakra network and cause their network to be distorted and cause an imbalance in their brain. The imbalance will cause them to be set off balance for a few moments. The effects are short however.
    Restrictions:
    ~Usable twice.
    ~After using, the user cannot use this jutsu for one turn after use.

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

    (Genjutsu: Dakubaido) - Illusion Technique: Dark Void
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary / Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will put their hands together and then make eye contact with the opponent. Once their eyes meet, the opponent will have been put under the genjutsu. The genjutsu causes the ground below the opponent to be enveloped in darkness and the user will begin sinking into the darkness. Once their arms have sunk into the ground, they will lose their ability to move their arms while under the effects of the jutsu. Once fully enveloped in the darkness, they will then fall asleep.
    Restrictions:
    ~Usable once.
    ~No Genjutsu next turn.

    ~Declined~ Why would they lose the ability to move their arms? In a genjutsu, the opponent must be under the impression there's something constraining his body. The rest seemed fine.

    (Meiton: Dakubaido) - Dark Release: Dark Void
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will slap their hands together and as they do, they will release dark chakra to the ground beneath the opponent. The chakra will then emerge as a dark substance and wrap itself around the opponent. Once wrapped around the opponent, the opponent will not be able to get the chakra off unless they use a jutsu that can neutralize chakra on their body. The dark chakra will then forcibly extract the opponent's chakra causing their attacks to be weakened by 10 damage points while the dark chakra remains on them.
    Restrictions:
    ~Usable once.
    ~The chakra remains stuck to the opponent for one turn.

    ~Declined~ I want you to take off the part where the opponent need to use a technique that "neutralize chakra on their body". Dark release isn't invincible to common element and such an ability is completely unrelated to the element. Re-word the description.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-29-2011 at 12:44 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Swizzik View Post
    ~Custom Weapon~

    Buki: Gilgamesh
    Rank: S
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: N/A

    Description:A set of black guantlet and greave-like weapons that use the elements of fire and lightning. When equipped they are attatched to the forearms or shins and at their ends channel the elemental claws of Gilgamesh. They are very versatile.When not in use Gilgamesh can be holstered on the users back.
    Gilgamesh's most notable unique trait is it's ability to switch between two elemental states: slow but powerful fire claws, and nimbly weak electric claws. These two states also come with slightly different combo chains, effectively making Gilgamesh two weapons in one. Since Gilgamesh can be worn on both the arm and legs it can be worn however the user wants in battle and changed during battle also. Both pairs of Gauntlets can only use one elemental type of energy at a time so when in its fire mode the abilities of its lightning mode cannot be used unless it will cost more chakra to maintain, in this case one Gilgamesh gauntlet is in Fire mode and the other is lightning mode.

    Normal mode
    -In this mode Gilgamesh has no special abilities and only used to add more effect to taijutsu attacks e.g. clawing an opponent with kicks and slashes


    Lightning Mode
    -When in its lightning Mode Gilgamesh has the ability to destroy on contact any earth element jutsu A rank or lower due to its elements nature
    -It has the ability in lightning mode to numb the opponent on contact
    -It can boost the users speed when worn on the legs in this mode causing the user to move so fast that it causes the user to suffer from slight motion sickness after its used.

    Fire Mode
    -Able to disperse wind element jutsu A rank or lower on contact due to its elemental nature
    -It has the ability to cause second degree burns to an opponent on contact

    ~Restrictions~
    -Switching elemental modes during battle is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Switching between wearing Gilgamesh on arms and legs is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Holstering/drawing Durga in battle is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Speed boost allows the user to evade an attack or get close to the enemy and it can only be used twice in battle
    -Destroying either an earth element attack or wind element attack is equivalent to one jutsu used and can only be used thrice in battle
    -Jutsu that require hand signs and ninja weapons can't be used while wearing Gilgamesh on the arms
    -Cannot stand on water while wearing Gilgamesh on the legs
    -Must be a S-Class Ninja or above to wear
    -Once worn it drains 2 chakra every turn
    -If Durga comes in contact with B rank or above water jutsu while in lightning mode it will shock the user and if it comes in contact while in fire mode with B rank or above water jutsu it will be deactivated for one turn
    -When they are using both elements the user loses 40 chakra points each turn
    Durga can be worn on one arm and one leg but reduces the effects it has on jutsu only able to counter C rank and below jutsu of either earth or lightning
    -Can only be used by Swizzik or any person he gives permission to












    ~Declined~ Make it 1 element, and take out the part where you can dispel any element up to A-rank with it. Also, why in the world would you receive a speed boost? Please elaborate on the abilities and the power ups that it gives you (+5, +10...etc).

    ~Custom Weapon~

    Buki: Gilgamesh
    Rank: S
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 60

    Description:A set of black guantlet and greave-like weapons that use the element of fire.When equipped they are attatched to the forearms or shins and at their ends channel the elemental claws of Gilgamesh. They are very versatile.When not in use Gilgamesh can be holstered on the users back.
    Gilgamesh's most notable unique trait is it's ability to enter its fire mode.

    Normal mode
    -In this mode Gilgamesh has no special abilities and only used to add more effect to taijutsu attacks e.g. clawing an opponent with kicks and slashes

    Fire Mode
    -When in fire mode the user can smash into the ground with gilgamesh in order to erect a wall of flames in front of them within short-range equivalent to A rank.
    -It has the ability to cause second degree burns to an opponent on contact

    Note:Adds +5 to taijutsu

    ~Declined~ When re-submitting/editing jutsus, you need to put the added/altered part in bold. If you only took out part of your jutsu, you need to mention what was taken away.

    Raiton:Ame no Raikou(Lightning release: Rain of lightning)
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80

    Description: The user will send his lightning chakra into the air which mixes with the clouds and causes the clouds to rain hundreds of lightning senbon at the target which then cause tiny explosions on impact.

    Restrictions
    -Can't use lightning jutsu three turns after this jutsu is used
    -Jutsu can only be used twice

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (a less OP version).
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-29-2011 at 12:46 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Doragan Justu:Fenikkusu Tsubasa (Dragon Art: Phoenix Wings)

    Rank:S
    Chakra:30 +5/15 per turn
    Type:Supplementuary
    Description:The user Builds up a large amount of fire chakra in their shoulder blades and release's it outwards from the back of their shoulderblade they then use chakra manipulation to shape the chakra that they released from their back into the shape of two very large wings comprised of hot white flames and using chakra manipulation to make these wings keep their shape and remain in a solid sort of state
    The wings have a wingspan of around 10 feet and can be used like the wings of a normal bird. The wings can be used to envelop the user shielding the user from projictiles such as kunai and A rank and below justu and S rank wind justu.
    The user can "flap" these wings allowing him to stay airborn however due to convection currents and the fact that the wings are comprised purely of fire the user cannot fly more than 8 ft in the air otherwise the wings will simply disperse. The user can also use the wings to increase his speed and strength on the ground flapping the wings to gain more momentum and velocity while running or flapping them to overpower a enemy in say a sword clash struggle.

    ~+5 to all fire justu while in this state
    ~Can block up to three A rank justu and S rank wind justu
    ~Can Block up to two A rank water justu
    ~Can block up to One Lightning Earth and Fire justu
    ~Can only be used while in the Flame Dragon Slayer state
    ~Only Last's for Two Turns
    ~Only One Justu can be avoided per Turn
    ~Can Be used Twice Per Match
    ~+20 damage to Secret Art Raging Dragon Uppercut
    ~User can take flight to avoid attacks in a similar way to
    ~can only be used and taught by whiteflash
    (Fūton: Kaze Ogawa) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth.


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    Doragon Justu:Hoono Doragon Otakebi (Dragon Justu:Flame Dragons Roar)
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Mid/long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user inhales a large amount of air,The user then Builds a large amount of fire chakra in the pit of their belly they then force this fire chakra up through their neck into theyre mouth Focusing all the built up fire chakra in their mouth they then preform four hand seals
    Rat Dog Boar and Dragon and exhales out all the pent up fire chakra releasing a extremely hot spiraling fiery torrent from theyre mouth.
    The fire released is white due to its dragon slayer properties and is also extremely hot hot enough to melt through solid rock like a hot knife through butter the intense heat formed by the flames is hot enough to cause lightning to appear due to the flames heating up the lower atmosphere so much and the upper atmosphere being cool causing convection currents to occur which then produces Dry Lightning, however the lightning does not occur on a high strength scale and is more similar to the static that you can get from rubbing your head against a balloon however the crackling sound that can sometimes be heard when static is produced occurs so many times in such a small amount of time that it can sometimes be mistaken for a dragons "roar" henceforth giving it its name Flame Dragons Roar. The flames travel at rather high speeds and can quickly reach their target even when at long range

    ~Can only be used while in dragon slayer state
    ~Can only be used once per turn
    ~excessive use of this technique will result in the user burning their throat severly
    ~can only be Taught and used by white flash
    ~+10 damage if Phoenix Wing technique is active

    ~All Declined~ Not only were you banned from this thread for a week for this post (marker), but you edit it and added your submission -___-, you're now in my little black book lol.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-29-2011 at 12:48 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Feel free to add or edit for approval:

    (Kasai/Mizu Kentai: Futtou Kangoku) | Fire/Water Combination: Boiling Prison
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage:80
    Description: This jutsu is similar to Water Style: Water Prison. The difference is once the victim is trap within the prison, with his 2nd hand, the user focuses his Katon chakra and places it in the prison. This boils the water, burning and sufficating the victim.
    Note: Since this tech uses both hands, the user won't have his hands available while this jutsu is active
    Note: Can only be used by ILGOI and the people he teaches

    ~Declined~ Since you need to keep infusing the water with chakra to keep your opponent trapped, you can't perform another technique unless you've mastered Yin Yang (to mold two different chakra at once). I somewhat doubt you've received that training.

    (Katon: Makai O Ato Kanbou) | Fire Release: Hell in a Cell
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user takes in a deep breath while simultaneously making 3 handseals. Once the user finishes the last hand seal, the Tiger Seal, the user will shoot a fireball in the air. After one more handseal, the fireball will spread, surrounding the user and victim into a dome of fire. The dome is large enough that the max. distance between the user and the victim will be mid-range. It is about 15 ft tall at its peak, giving the user and victim little room to jump.
    Note: Only lasts for 4 turns
    Note: Can only be used twice during the battle
    Note: Once inside, the user can't cancel it
    Note: Can only be used by ILGOI and the people he teaches

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Katon: Tonsou Kara Makai) | Fire Release: Escape from hell
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Once in the dome of Fire Release: Hell in a Cell, the user jumps back and performs one handseal, making a hole just big enough for him to escape from the dome. As he leaves the dome, the user will perform 3 handseals and fill the dome with a huge fireball, buring everything inside the dome.
    Note: Can only be used while Fire Release: Hell in a Cell is active
    Note: Can only be used by ILGOI and the people he teaches

    ~Declined~ Hell in a Cell wasn't approved.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-29-2011 at 12:51 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Futon: Mahokaze no Sofu) - Wind Release: Magic Wind Blast.
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user creates 2 rings of slashing wind betwin his hands (one ring in the other), with a ball of compressed wind in the middle, at the size of a voley ball and launches it streight forward. It slices on touch, and pushes the enemy backwards (from the wind that decompresses). Can be used many times in consecution.
    Restrictions:
    ~Cannot be used if the enemy is not in sight of the user.
    ~When used more than twice in consecution, cannot use any other jutsu except "Futon: Kaze Ryuu no Sofu" this turn.
    Special characteristics:
    ~If the user holds a weapon, he gets unarmed for 2 turns.
    ~If the target uses a short rank attack as his first move the next turn, the attack will miss, 'cause he got pushed backwards.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Futon: Atsuryoku-shitsu) - Wind Release: Pressure Room.
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Dragon, Bird
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 0/40
    Description: The user Creates a 2meter diameter Bubble of compressed air around him, with a 20cm "compression free zone" around him. The bubble moves around the user like an "aura".
    Restrictions:
    ~The air supply of the "compression free zone" lasts for 3 turns, so the user will either terminate the jutsu, or suffer the same consequences as the people trapped in it.
    ~This Jutsu can only be used 3 times per battle.
    ~This Jutsu can only be taught by Necron.
    Special characteristics:
    ~ Anyone inside the bubble, including the jutsu caster, will be able to use only 1 move per turn. This applyes after the caster uses the jutsu.
    ~If anyone inside the bubble tryes to move (either attack or escape), and is not in the "compression free zone", he takes 40 damage. If they just stand still, they take no dammage from this jutsu.
    ~To escape from the bubble, one can "run away", but will still take 40 damage doing so.
    ~This justsu cannot be canceled if the target(s) used a close range move last turn.

    Feel free to change anything you consider needs changing, in order to get approval! ^^

    ~Declined~ The whole concept of pressure alteration was taken as a CE.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Anyone using "markers" or anything similar to those will receive and infraction and be banned from the CJ thread for 1 week.

    This is an insult to the mods checking this thread. It's not because you have the right to submit 3 CJ a week that you must do it and submit unacceptable junk "just in case it gets approved". Submit customs when you have an idea. Do not post in this thread in prevision of future ideas you might have.

    I will have absolutely no tolerance for such posts.

    I'm closing the thread now to infract all the members who posted markers.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    This was added to the first post of this thread:

    ~"Markers", or empty posts (with no actual custom jutsu being submitted) created for the sole purpose of being edited later on, are strictly forbidden and shall be considered as nothing more than spam.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Suraisu Kaze Taijutsu) - Wind Style: Slicing Winds Taijtusu -

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 and -20 for the user (-5 each turn)
    Description: The user releases fuuton-based chakra from his arms and legs and uses it to control the air around it, making the air move around the users arms and legs at high speeds in multiple directions. As a result the kicks, punches etc. have increased accuracy and are a lot deadlier. A limb that makes direct contact with these 'slicing winds' is severed instantly. However the users fist/leg doesn't need to make direct contact to hurt the opponent. As the air rushes around the limbs of the user, the air can still slice the opponent if the user just misses the opponent, though then the damage is a lot smaller (cuts an slashes around the opponents limb that was attacked).
    The entire proces of forcing chakra out of the body and making slicing winds around the limbs happens almost instantly.

    *Lasts for 4 turns*
    *The slicing winds make minor cuts in the users arms and legs*
    *Can only be used once per battle*
    *Can only be taught by Caliburn*


    Updating that one (well more like an extreme make over custom jutsu edition) to this:

    (Fuuton: Kaze Yuushitessen) - Wind Style: Barbed Wind Wire -

    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short/Medium/Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (+5)
    Damage points: 60 (+15)
    Description: The user uses shape manipulation to shape their fuuton chakra into several extremely thin wind ropes that then coil around the user, though a certain distance remains between the users body and the ropes. The ropes are continuously in motion, moving at an excessive pace and speed, just like a teeth less buzz saw. As a result when they come into touch with something, they cut right through it cleanly. The accuracy and reach of the users taijutsu has also increased. If an opponent's limb makes direct contact with these ropes, it can be severed instantly. However the user's attack doesn't need to make direct contact to hurt the opponent as the ropes can still cut the opponent even if the user just misses due to the increased range.
    This jutsu can also be used in a different way, namely as an ambush. Instead of coiling the ropes around the user, the user places the ropes around the battlefield (he can just manouver the ropes without moving much) as a trap for when the opponent runs into one of these ropes, it means highely likely death. It works best in terrains with obstacles like trees or large rocks where the ropes easily can be coil around and travel from one side to another, however due the wind nature of the ropes they can also just hang in the air. When used this way this jutsu can't attack the opponent directly unless he walks into them himself, however they can placed close to him to restrict his movements. By using exploding tags or katon chakra, the user can blow up the entire rope system, blowing everything within the domain of the ropes.

    *Can only be taught by Caliburn*
    *Can only be active for max 5 turns and for each turn +5 chakra has to be paid*
    *When used as an ambush the ropes are practically invisible to the naked eye because they're so thin, with the exception for sensors, Byakugan and Sharingan users. When used for taijutsu the ropes are visible as the user needs to watch out he doesn't cut himself.*



    (Fuuton: Tetsufunjin Zansatsu) - Wind Style: Iron Dust Massacre -

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Medium/Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user grabs some iron dust from his pocket, roughly the amount of two hands. He then closes both hands so that it looks like he's praying, however he leaves a round opening between his thumbs. The user then inhales, focusing a large amount of fuuton chakra in his throat. Then when he's going to exhale all the fuuton chakra, he places his mouth against the opening in his hands. Then on the moment the chakra will be shot through his hands, he widens his fingers on the opposite side so that an opening is created. As a result when the user releases all the fuuton chakra, it's forced through the hands and is then blasted out of it alongside the iron dust, which travels towards the target with incredible speed. Everything that stands in the way of the attack is completely massacred, in the case of a human ending up like a cut up bloody and gore pile of meat that looks like a sleve.

    *Can only be taught by Caliburn*
    *This is not an Iron Sand jutsu considering the user doesn't manipulate the iron, he just uses it to increase the damage*
    *Due to the iron dust the jutsu is way more resilient towards fire based jutsu's than normal wind jutsu's*
    *Does not require any handseals*
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Sensei no noroi) Illusionary Arts: The Curse of a Sensei
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user sends is chakra into the opponents mind after performing the 3 necessary handseals and manipulates it so that the opponent will be surrounded by people. Not some ordinary people, but people who complain about training, senseis and sempais. The mass will always get closer to the victim and the opponent will get the feeling like he is being choked. This jutsu is extremely effective against new senseis.
    Note: Can only be used with Yoshi's permission
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle

    ~Declined~ Be serious in your next submissions.

    (Genjutsu: Nai jutsu o hanasanai) Illusionary Arts: Talk No Jutsu
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user sends his chakra into his opponents mind and uses it to disturb the chakra flow of the opponents brains. As this happens, the user performs a handseal and suddenly the opponent starts to hear a voice speaking. The voice uses a long and logical speech, making the opponent become filled with doubt and completely confused. The illusion is so well made that any person will hear a different speech, the voice will point out every weakness and faults that the opponent has made during his life. This will confuse and anger him. The speech is so long and so dense that the enemy will not be able to find a fault and will eventually believe in what was said, leading to mental breakdown and even, in some cases, madness.
    Note: Can only be used with Yoshi's permission
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle

    ~Declined~ You can't predict how your opponent will react. So, all the bold part is void.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Bōei o Bunpō) - Swarming Defence
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: A swarm of around three dozen locusts are summoned from the users sleeves that generate a barrier of chakra maintained from the other side as they fly. The barrier can have various shapes depending on the arrangement of the locusts which makes it convenient for multiple situations. Holes may form in the barrier if the locusts maintaining it are damaged. It can defend against A-rank and lower ninjutsu. Alternatively, this technique can be used by at least 30 locusts that have already been summoned.
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -Must have signed the locust contract

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Yasumichuu Funkei)Earth style: enclosed Decapitation
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This Jutsu can only be done on ground or where there is earth,the user make earth hand seals and focuses his chakra on hands and slamming palm to the ground bringing about 4 large enclosed rock pillars with Multiple sharp edges which quickly pierces the opponent heart and if not avoided other organs thus leading to decapitation and making the victim dead in few minutes. Can only be counter altered by a lIgh ning jutsu of a higher rank.
    Note:Can Be used twice in battle
    Note:The user must wait 3 turns to use again

    ~Declined~ Our system work with damage point, you can't say you'll kill your opponent with a technique (even if we understand that it can). Take out anything related to killing your opponent. Also, take out the part where it can ONLY be countered by high lightning, you don't know that for sure.

    (Raiton: Dendou Omoi Chisou )Lightning Style: Eletric Heart feast
    Rank:A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: This user draws a massive amount of lightning chakra in his palm similar to that of chidori which takes the shape of a large like chakra mass but allows different rotator movements and is aimed for the opponents chest which when hit paralyzes the opponent from breathing and pumping blood and living the opponent dead in minutes. This jutsu can only be counter-altered by a wind jutsu of such rank or higher.

    ~Declined~ Same as above, and where are the restrictions?

    ((Kurisutaru no sutairu: Mirā funsai))Crystal style: Mirror Shatter

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points:80
    Description; Guren holds and focuses on her chakra and then in one stroke place her focused chakra palm on the ground bring up a huge hue enclosed wall made of crystalline with several mirrors to confuse his opponent and keep him from escaping she then send thousands of needle sharp crystalline into the wall tearing the opponent limb from limb the then she send a huge amount of heat blast through her palms to crush the wall and bring it falling down crushing the opponent to death. Its wall can not be penetrated by any A rank jutsu or lower, it can also be you used as a great defensive shield to protect against s rank jutsu or lower the guren does this simply by trapping herself in the wall which can defend against extreme temperature rain or humidity.
    Note: Can only be taught by thunderbolt
    Note: Can Be used once a battle

    ~Declined~ Same as above, also, re-read yourself because the description is a mess. Make it so it can defend from A-rank max, after which it will shatter (since this technique isn't only meant to be a defensive one). Lastly, if you're going to send a heat blast, I'm guessing you need to gather your fire chakra and hence this technique need to counts as 2 technique if you haven't mastered Yin Yang.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Sanso Fukumen) - Wind Release: Oxygen Mask
    Type: Defense
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15 (+5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User focuses on his wind chakra and creates a mask of wind around his nose and mouth part, so that he can even inhale inside the water easily. And any gaseous technique will not enter this mask either and thus preventing the user form inhaling harmful gaseous things like- poison, dust, smoke, scent, perfume, etc, etc..
    Note: -While the mask is active, user can't smell anything, in another words he can't use his "smelling sense".
    -Mask lasts for a maximum of 5 turns.
    -As this is a C-Rank technique, it can be used any no. of times.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hakke 361 Ten no sora no pāmu) 8 Trigrams 361 Heavenly Empty Palm
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Similar to (Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4 Heavenly Empty Palm, where you excert one giant empty palm, in this jutsu it will be multiple empty palms. The user will bring up both of his hands onto the level of his lower chest, then brings forth his dominant hand while excerting chakra, then pulls it back out while brings forth his other hand excerting chakra, then brings it back while brings his other hand forth again. This process goes in a very fast space, as the hyuuga user is able to cover a wide area if he wants to, kind a acting like a machine gun.
    Note:
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~Needs to be at least Sannin cause of the high chakra usage
    ~Won't be able to use S-ranked Jyuuken or higher in the same turn.
    ~Can be used 3x

    ~Approved~ made it 3 times per match.

    Resubmitting:

    Quote Originally Posted by Dr. House View Post
    (Hakke Kinkyū) - 8 Trigrams Emergency
    Rank: C
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: As the opponent is about to make a physical contact with a hyuuga member, he'll channel his chakra to those particular chakra points, where the contact/s is about to happen. As the opponent has touched the user, or the opposite, the user's chakra will run through in the opponent's limb, what he had made the physical contact with, damaging most of the nerves and the tendons around that area. If the opponent had touched with his hand, the chakra will damage his nerves, tendons, making him unable to sign with that hand.
    Note:
    -Can be taught by Dr. House
    -Only weak nerves, tendons will be immobolized by this technique. Other tendons like on the hamstring will only be damaged, leaving the opponent with an inability to walk right
    Declined, this level of technique should be higher with the appropriate restrictions
    (Hakke Kinkyū) - 8 Trigrams Emergency
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: As the opponent is about to make a physical contact with a hyuuga member, he'll channel his chakra to those particular chakra points, where the contact/s is about to happen. As the opponent has touched the user, or the opposite, the user's chakra will run through in the opponent's limb, what he had made the physical contact with, damaging most of the nerves and the tendons around that area. If the opponent had touched with his hand, the chakra will damage his nerves, tendons, making him unable to sign with that hand.
    Note:
    -The opponent will be immobolized for 1 turns.
    -Can be taught by Dr. House
    -Only weak nerves, tendons will be immobolized by this technique. Other tendons like on the hamstring will only be damaged, leaving the opponent with an inability to walk right.
    -Can be used 3x
    -Must be Sannin
    -Byakugan must be activated, as only hyuuga blood line will be able to do this.
    -The user won't be able to create KG hyuuga barriers in the same turn.


    ~Approved~ Made it 1 turn and 3 times per match.

    (Hakke Tengoku no sora no yubi) Arts of Empty Techniques
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40 [-10 each turn]
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The hyuuga bloodline user will concentrate his chakra onto both of his hands while bringing both of his hands up to his chest level, making his finger pose in his hands, both using the technique of continuous streaming chakra and the arts of empty palm, the user will push out both of his hands infront of him while multiple chakra hands will emerge from both of his palms. The pose of these chakra hands will depend on how the user's hands are posed, so if the user's hands in a vertical palm position, or either it's a finger strike position, it will look just like that. The user will be able to control these chakra hands, due to the continuos streaming of chakra from user's hands. If used tactically, it can be also used to stack each chakra palm ontop of each other, creating defense for the user. When defended against an S-ranked attack, the user can choose to stream the hands again from hands, but only if the 4 turns are not up.
    Notes:
    ~Must master Jyuuken
    ~Be a Sannin or higher
    ~If user wishes, it can be continuously streamed for 4 turns, but -10 chakra each turn.
    ~While this technique is active, the user won't be able to perform any other techniques.
    ~This technique can be stopped immediately by the user.
    ~Requires active byagukan for the sake of controling the hands.
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~If the user has used the technique ti'll the 4th turn, he'll be not able to use Jyuuken for the same and the next turn.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Jabberjay
    Scroll Owner: Ten tails jinchuriki
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: [Will put if accepted]
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: [will put if accepted]


    Here is a picture of a jabberjay

    ~Declined~ No fictional or mystical animals will be approved.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kurosu obu Sukyafforudo) - Cross of Scaffold

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: None [+40 for Fire attack Chakra]
    Damage Points: 80 [+20 for Fire attacks Chakra]
    Description: The blade is long and wide, the sword's handle runs through its guard, continuing on through a hollow space at the base of its blade.This part of the handle allows the user to attack opponents at closer ranges.The colour of the sword is White with gold parts.The blade itself is indestructible, making it quite effective in blocking and deflecting incoming attacks from basic weapons.Upon touching this sword the user undergoes a little costume change which will create some bones on the outside of the users body. Cross of scaffold is a special and rare blade forged in a mysterious village with sacred and divine methods that allow the sword to be inscrutable.Also due to the precious metal used in the blade,the user can easily send his chakra into the sword much faster than other ninjas.This only works when the sword is in one of the users hands.Due to it's scared and rare properties,tony once using his awesome skills broke into the village and stole the sword and then disappeared but due to his heavy dislike against the village he wiped it out entirely so that such a blade won't be forged ever again...While doing that he realised the natural ability for the sword towards fire chakra so upon sending his chakra into the blade the blade turns red and thus adding +20 to fire attacks.

    Note: Can only be used by Tony Stark and anyone he wishes to give.
    Note:Adds +10 to kenjutsu attacks
    Note:While using fire with the sword the user can't perform High level kenjutsu arts [Above B rank]
    Note:The user can shrink the swords towards the size the user wishes for more mobility with it.
    Note:The bones on the users body can be destroyed by D rank attacks

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    ~Pending~ Don't you have another CW? VM me.

    (Doton: Doton kanon)Earth release:Earth Canon
    Type: Offence/defence
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user starts this move by first, sending his doton chakra into the ground and once done he will use shape manipulation to create a canon from the ground which is filled with earth so then the user hardens the earth to create some earth balls which he then fires it to any direction that he wishes.

    Note:The Bullet can't be directed once fired
    Note:Can be used only Once per battle
    Note:No earth above A-rank for the next turn

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Hade's Revenge
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user will stomp his foot upon the ground and melt the ground underneath of his opponent and form a large pool of Lava around them. A skeletal hand of Molten Rock believed to be Hades himself will then reach out from the Lava pool and grab the opponent and pull them down into it.

    Note: Only to be used or taught by Zaxelzero

    ~Declined~ I can't possibly approve a technique that creates lava under the opponent without any form of warning, that's just OP.

    Molten Meteor Destruction
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will focus their chakra into the sky above the opponent and summon a large rock with a molten core. As it drops to the earth the core will implode and cause the entire Meteor to shatter, causing a rain of Molten rock to surround the opponent.

    Note: Only to be used or taught by Zaxelzero

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist, and this is strangely similar to a cannon technique O_~ be careful with that.

    Molten Island
    Type: Supplemental
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: While standing near or on top of a water surface, the user will transmit their chakra into the ground beneath the water source and form a large volcanic eruption inside of the water. The Lava coming from the eruption will quickly cool as it rises to the surface, drying the Water source and forming an Island at the location.

    Note: Only to be used or Taught by Zaxelzero
    Note: Can be used Simultaneously to form an Island covering a distance Short-Long range "Takes 3 subsequent uses"

    ~Declined~ Do some research, you'll see that even when multiple underwater volcanoes are created, they'll never generate enough energy to evaporate a large amount of water (equivalent to a lake or so (since you need to create a volcano underwater, I assume the water source you're standing on is large)).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Chaos Flame - (Kaosu-en)
    Type: Genjutsu
    Rank: B
    Range: -
    Chakra: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:
    ~The user creates the illusion of a blue flame that combursts instantly on the target's body. The target sees it burning their body very quickly, and percive the pain as if they were burned by a real flame.
    Notes:
    → Once used, to break it, the target must "see through the genjutsu" and then "break it" in 2 moves. If he does not declare that, he continues to take 20 damage at every move, for the rest of his turn. (40 basic +3x20). The target can only use one offensive jutsu the turn he/she is under the influence of "Kaosu-en"
    → The user cannot do any other move the turn it is used, since it uses the user's 100% focus
    → This jutsu cannot be blocked
    → The user cannot block any jutsus the next turn he uses this genjutsu.
    → Can only be taught by Necron or an other "Chaos Adept". "Chaos Adepts" can only be titled by Necron.

    Feel free to change anything you judge too much, in order to get aproval! ^^

    ~Declined~ The description of this technique is a real mess. Drop the arrows and keep yourself to a simple description. Do not limit your opponent (look at the bold part). Saying:"this jutsu cannot be blocked" is an instant decline in my book. Never use that again if you want your customs approved.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Summoning Animal: Ocelot
    Scroll Owner: Frozenstein
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A



    ~Approved~
    Boss for my summoning contract.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Constantine, Kingu Kurohyou Neko) – Summoning Technique: Constantine, the King of Ocelots
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Constantine is an ocelot who became the King of Ocelots because of his excellent abilities and pure strength. His size reach the size of a panther and his strength match with a lion’s strength. His sharp claws and teeth make him dangerous. He’s also fast and furious. Despite of his size he can easily stalk to his target and make a surprise attack on them. Being part of the nature, he can use wind and earth jutsus.
    - can only be summoned with an existing Ocelot contract
    - can only be summoned 1 time and for 5 turns
    - can use wind and earth up to A-rank
    - can only be summoned if there’s an existing contract
    - can only be used or taught by Frozenstein

    ~Approved~ I edited the restrictions and made it 1 times per match for 5 turns.

    (Fuuton: Kantsuu Kaze Hari) – Wind Style: Piercing Wind Needles
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: An attack made with 2-5 fingers. The user creates spinning wind around his fingers and shoot it toward the enemy with a high accurate. Then as the wind leaves the users fingers, the user compress it and shape it in the form of a needle. The wind itself is so thin and compressed, it’s capable of going through solid objects. The damage can be changed by changing the number of fingers used for it. Less fingers grants more piercing power, but more fingers grants a greater area effect. Meaning with 2-3 fingers the user can attack inner organs, but with 4-5 fingers the user can attack muscles and arteries and cut them.
    - can only be used or taught by Frozenstein

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Fuuton: Mukeru Kaze Tama) - Wind Style: Guided Wind Balls
    Type: Attack/Suppementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user creates compressed wind balls around his target, 4 balls for 3 turns and up to total 12 balls. These balls can be used to attack the target in several ways or prevent him moving or using hand seals. The balls automatically react to the enemy’s chakra and attack him while performing jutsus, but only 1 at the same time. Meaning, if the target use 3 jutsus, he will be attacked with 3 balls total. Every unused balls disappear at the end of the turn and new ones come into being. While the balls are existing, the target’s jutsus will be interrupted depending on the number of the balls. The user can also direct the balls and attack the target, but the damage and effect depend on the number of the balls.
    - 1 ball: prevent the target to use jutsus with more than 4 hand seals and make him lose balance.
    - 2 balls: prevent the target to use jutsus with more than 3 hand seals, make him lose balance and cause minor injuries.
    - 3 balls: prevent the target to use jutsus with more than 1 hand seal, knock him down and cause advanced injuries.
    - 4 balls: prevent the target to use jutsus with hand seals, knock him out for 1 turn and cause severe injuries.
    Restrictions:
    - can only be used 3 times in a battle
    - can only be used if the target is on the surface
    - the balls only attack automatically, if the target uses jutsus, if not, they will disappear at the end of the turn (unless the user command them)
    - commanding the balls require a 1-handed seal, and count as 1 move
    - no A-rank or higher wind jutsus in the same and next turns
    - can only be used or taught by Frozenstein

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This is simply OP and I can't allow it. Regenerating wind spheres that are independent of your control and attack when the opponent is trying to defend...No.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Tortoise
    (Hopefully this will get approved as tortoise is obviously a completly different species to turtle)

    Scroll Owner: Rasnall

    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: Awaiting summon approval
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Awaiting summon approval





    ~Declined, turtle summoning is already taken by Axle~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Izuna, since I gave the Rhino summon away I have one more spot for summons, so I've got one open spot for this:

    Summoning Animal: Scorpion
    Scroll Owner: ~The Norwegian~
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Sting
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Enkil

    ~Declined, summoning is already taken by Bianca~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom submission (Finally thought on some stuff)

    First CJ:

    I'm updating this:

    (Kea Mo-do) Kea Mode
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The opponent will cut drag some blood and slam his hands together, concentrating wind and Kea chakra into the user, entering Kea Mode. The user will have some feather-like tatoos in his elbows, representing wings, and his hair will grow larger and turn white. In Kea Mode, the user gains a speed boost comparable to rock lee without weights, though not close to gates. The user will also gain stronger reflexes, comparable to Minato's. The user is unable to get caught in genjutsu B-rank and below because of the Kea chakra flowing in his body.
    -The user has to have recolected chakra in the previous turn, meaning he can only do two moves in the turn prior of activation.
    -Can only be used by those who have sign the Kea contract
    - In this mode, the user gains a boost of +10 in ninjutsu.
    -The mode only last 3 turns
    -While this mode is active, the user is unable to perform genjutsu
    -The user loses -5 in taijutsu based damage
    -The user is unable to perform higher than A-rank fire while the mode is active
    -After the end of the mode, the user will be exhausted, leaving an opening for an attack
    -After this mode ends, the user is unable to perform higher than B-rank wind and basic ninjutsu for 3 turns.
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San
    to this:

    (Kea Mo-do) Kea Mode
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The opponent will cut drag some blood and slam his hands together, concentrating wind and Kea chakra into the user, entering Kea Mode. The user will have some feather-like tatoos in his elbows, representing wings, and his hair will grow larger and turn white. In Kea Mode, the user movements become much more fluid. The user will also gain sharper reflexes, comparable to Minato's. The user is unable to get caught in genjutsu B-rank and below because of the Kea chakra flowing in his body.
    -The user has to have recolected chakra in the previous turn, meaning he can only do two moves in the turn prior of activation.
    -Can only be used by those who have sign the Kea contract
    - In this mode, the user gains a boost of +10 in ninjutsu.
    -The mode only last 3 turns
    -While this mode is active, the user is unable to perform genjutsu
    -After this mode ends, the user will suffer a -5 damage to all Ninjutsu for 2 turns
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San

    I decided to edit because I think the restrictions I had were just too much. I took out restrictions about the fire and wind on the end, and added -5 on general ninjutsu for two turns. I took out the speed boost comparable to rock lee without gates and just added that the user's movement becomes more fluid. I also took the part out of being exhausted. If you think this was not enough, you can take out being able to resist genjutsu up to B-rank.

    ~Approved~

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    Second submission:

    I'm editing this:

    (Sakin: go-ruden tora) Gold dust: Golden Tigers
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user will release his chakra in the ground, summoning a considerable amount of gold dust, which takes the shape of 4 tigers (if there is gold dust already in the ground, the first step is unnecessary). The tigers then will run at high speeds towards the opponent (at approximately the same speed of a living healthy tiger). The user predetermines where and how the tigers will run towards the opponent, then after releasing the tigers, the user is unable to alter their curse, as they go auto. When the tigers (or the closest tiger) come(s) into short range of the opponent, he/they launch himself/themselves like a torpedo, rotating at high speeds slashing and hitting the target.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -No other gold dust technique in the same turns
    -The user is unable to use magnetic related techniques in the next turn
    -Only 4th Kazekage bios
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San
    to a wind technique (as I do not have gold dust)

    (Fuuton: tora no Kamikaze) Wind Release: Tigers of the Divine Winds
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: After a series of four handseals, the user will release his chakra on the atmosphere, shaping the wind from his surroundings into 4 tigers. The tigers then will run at high speeds towards the opponent (at approximately the same speed of a living healthy tiger). The user predetermines where and how the tigers will run towards the opponent, then after releasing the tigers, the user is unable to alter their curse, as they go auto. When the tigers (or the closest tiger) come(s) into short range of the opponent, he/they launch himself/themselves like a torpedo, rotating at high speeds slashing and hitting the target.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -No other wind related techniques on the same turn and the following
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San

    I took out anything related with gold dust and added wind.

    ~Approved~ I edited the restrictions and added what's in bold.

    New submission:

    (Kendo/Genjutsu: Genso Bachi Kusari) Kendo/Illusion Art: Illusionary Chains of Divine Punishement
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: From years of experience, a sagacious swordsman was able to combine the art of the sword with illusionary arts, giving birth to one of the most versatile but romantic way to combat. The user will hold his sword with his predominant hand and hold it in an X-axis direction in front of him. With the opposite hand, he will make a one handed handseal, then continue by placing his index finger on the flat surface area of the blade, pointing toward the opponent. The moment the user places his index finger on the blade, the enemy will be sumerged in a genjutsu in which chains will emerge from under the opponent, binding his arms and legs as he is pulled downward; the opponent will also believe that some chains emerge from the user's sides, making him believe as if the chains were an offensive mechanism. The user will notice that the opponent has been caught in genjutsu when he notices the opponent struggling with the illusionary chains. In the next step, the user will charge his sword with chakra (not at the same level as samurai's Samurai Sabre Technique) and quickly step forward, slashing the opponent two times across the chest, marking the opponent's chest with a "X", then to finish off, with the momentum that the user's body is moving from the last strike, will stab the opponent on the sternum (or if the user wishes, use the hilt of the sword to push the opponent back).
    -In order for the genjutsu to be cast, the user requires visual contact (not eye contact with the enemy) and to pinpoint his location with his index finger.
    -The genjutsu can be cast from mid-range, but it requires the user to run to short range in order to perform the kenjutsu technique.
    -It can only be used twice per battle.
    -After using this technique, the user is unable to perform genjutsu for the rest of the battle.
    -The user is unable to use kenjutsu related techniques for two turn.
    -Because of chakra charge, the user is only able to do 2 moves the next turn in order to recover.
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San

    ~Declined~ This is very similar to Scorps taijutsu/genjutsu style. The only way I could approve this is if the genjutsu was submitted independently to the kenjutsu and that your kenjutsu (submitted separately) would include the genjutsu in the technique, making it count as 2 moves.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-29-2011 at 03:49 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sage) - Summoning Technique: Sage
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User claps his hand and summons a terrapin named "Sage", whose size while on 4 legs is same as gamabunta. He has a sword in his right hand and a shield in left hand. He is fire and wind mastered and can use them upto S-Rank and gives a +30 boost to them. He is also indestructible to B-Rank and below techniques but only his shell can block A-Rank techniques. While standing he is that tall that in just one step he can go from short to mid range and from mid to long range and vice versa.
    Note: ~He is advanced form of Terrapins, who can stand on 2 legs.
    ~Can stay on battlefield for 5 turns, if summoned.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.

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    Got this idea from the movie Transformers.. And from now on i'll be submitting transformers characters..

    (Doton: Henryuuki- Bumblebee) - Earth Release: Transformers- Bumblebee
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60 (for earth techs)
    Description: User creates a robot like structure made of earth chakra which is almost thrice in size as of a human, he can shoot earth projectile from his hand equivalent to A-Rank, and can transform into a car when required. The user can sit in the car and ride it with great speed that only 3 tomoe and above can track it. While in car form, it can shoot 2 spears from front or back of the car equivalent to A-Rank.
    Note: ~Every earth projectile or earth spears count as one of 3 moves.
    ~It can transform to robot or to car anytime within a blink of an eye.
    ~Cannot use any earth justu for next turn.
    ~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.

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    Got this idea from movie Tekken- Blood Vengeance (2011).. Watch the video in spoiler for getting the rough or maybe exact idea!

    (Doton/Chakra: Mokujin) - Earth Style/Pure Chakra: Mokujin
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short (around the user)
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+20 for each turn)
    Damage Points: 100 (-30 to user)
    Description: User releases enormous amount of pure chakra from his body in the sky and right after that releases doton chakra which start creating a big mokujin like structure around himself which is made up of very large no. of small mokujins, which is even greater than the size of gamabunta and its whole body is wrapped in giant flames of fire, which keeps everyone far from him. The mokujins are made up of very hardened earth, so they would not be damaged too easily. The user passes his chakra to mokujin and connects himself with the mokujin so that his senses gets connected to him and any move which user performs will be performed by mokujin instead of the user. Because of such large size of mokujin, its jutsus becomes more powerful and large in size and thus gives a +20 boost to all elemental ninjutsu and +50 to all physical attacks. As this big mokujin is made up of large no. of small mokujins, so after being partially destroyed it can regenerate that part again on its own by creating appropriate no. of small mokujins.

    Note: ~While user releases enormous amount of chakra, it is impossible for anyone to come near him or they will be pushed back by taking huge and severe injury.
    ~If anyone even comes near the mokujin, he will start feeling the tremendous amount of heat and in no time or in couple of moments, he will catch the fire.
    ~Its one punch is strong enough to break madara's susanoo final form's ribs and bones completely.
    ~Regenrating counts as a move.
    ~To extinguish fire from mokujin's body, the opponent has to extinguish every bit of fire from his body, or else it will again catch fire on his body.
    ~It is vulnerable to strong lightning.
    ~After the technique ends, user can't even move from his place for the whole remaining battle due to excess amount of chakra used in the technique.
    ~And also he can't use any technique above B-Rank for the whole remaining battle.
    ~His each and every cell in the body will pain him too much, that for concentrating on his jutsus, he has to perform additional 4 handseals for every jutsu which require handseals.
    ~ -30 to user because of excessive chakra used.
    ~Must be of atleast Kage for using it.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.


    All declined do not resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 12-29-2011 at 03:56 PM.

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