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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    :S Time to drop it's ranks

    Quote Originally Posted by Zanji View Post
    (KaDoton Hijutsu: Tera Seiryoku) Secret Fire-Earth Release: Terra Force
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 60
    Damage: 100 (-40 to the user due to the strain on the user)
    Description: The user slams both of their fists into the ground releasing a mass amount of chakra into the ground forcing 10 large pillars of Fire/Magma/Earth Energy to erupt out of the ground around the user and collide high above him forming a massive sphere above the user. He then jumps high into the air and without grabbing the sphere he will either slam the technique into the opponent or throw the sphere at his opponent. The Sphere will then explode upon impact of the opponent or will carry the opponent away from the user then proceed to explode. The explosion is easily strong enough to completely destroy a large cliff side leaving a crater or destroying a mountain.
    Note: Can only be used once, and the user loses 25% of their health, thus placing them in a fatigued state.
    Note: Can only be used by Zanji or taught by Zanji.
    Note: Cannot use Fire or Earth techniques A-Rank or higher for the next 3 turns.
    Note: Is unaffected by an opponents Explosion or Implosion Techniques that affect Earth or Fire Techniques. Due to the user mixing a mass quantity of his own chakra into the technique, and the mixture of elements.
    Note: Can only use 2 techniques per turn for the next 3 turns.
    Note: The opponent would be unable to stop this with a regular water technique due to the elemental combination used to make this.
    (There is no literal translation for Terra, I looked in japanese its Terra, Tera or テラ)


    (KaDoton Hijutsu: Tera Seiryoku) Secret Fire-Earth Release: Terra Force
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user slams both of their fists into the ground releasing a mass amount of chakra into the ground forcing 10 large pillars of Fire/Magma/Earth Energy to erupt out of the ground around the user and collide high above him forming a massive sphere above the user. He then jumps high into the air and without grabbing the sphere he will either slam the technique into the opponent or throw the sphere at his opponent. The Sphere will then explode upon impact of the opponent or will carry the opponent away from the user then proceed to explode.
    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: Can only be used by Zanji or taught by Zanji.
    Note: Cannot use Fire or Earth techniques S-Rank or higher for the next 2 turns.
    Note: Is unaffected by an opponents Explosion or Implosion Techniques that affect Earth or Fire Techniques. Due to the user mixing a mass quantity of his own chakra into the technique, and the mixture of elements.
    Note: Can only use 2 techniques per turn for the next 2 turns.
    Note: The opponent would be unable to stop this with a regular water technique due to the elemental combination used to make this.
    Note: The size of this technique is roughly the size of the Wind and Fire Blast Technique, and it's explosive power is just as slightly larger than a Wind Release: Rasenshuriken
    (There is no literal translation for Terra, I looked in japanese its Terra, Tera or テラ)


    Quote Originally Posted by Zanji View Post
    ~Both Declined~ You didn't work on the "strong enough to destroy a large cliff side leaving a crater or completely destroy a mountain." I put in bold last time. Also, it's just too big IMO, makes it OP. It would destroy half the field with it's sheer size.
    o_o I bolded all the edited areas and took out the destructive power in the description itself. Lowered them in Rank and edited the restrictions a tad

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 09-04-2011 at 04:23 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon:Bureijingu no ken no mai)Fire Style: Blazing Sword Dance
    Range: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (- 10 to user)
    Description: The user release his fire chakra into his sword to set it ablaze, then he spins around whilst releasing several waves of fire from the sword to hit the opponent. This takes the user full attention so he cannot do anything whilst spinning and whilst he's spinning he leaves himself open for a counter attack.
    - Spinning lasts half a turn.
    - The user cannot use any fire jutsu 2 turns after.
    - Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    - Can only be taught by Dean Kaguya.
    *Best used after using a Clone technique*

    ~Declined~ Precise how many wave you're releasing, their size and remove the "spinning for half a turn part.

    (Katon: Bureijingu ken no kabe) Fire Style: Blazing Sword Wall.
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user streams their fire chakra along their sword to set it ablaze then the user strikes the ground and releases the chakra from the sword and shape manipulates it to form a wall of fire around him. This wall can block upto A-rank techniques of any element and the wall maintains after the sword is removed from the ground.
    - Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    - Can only block upto 1 only A-rank technique of any element. However, it is cancelled by an A-rank water technique.
    - No fire techniques 2 turns after.
    - Lasts for only 2 turns.
    - The user cannot use any techniques of any form because he will have to concentrate to maintain the wall for the 2 turns.
    - Can only be taught by Dean Kaguya.
    *Best used after using a clone jutsu*

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 09-05-2011 at 01:59 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Name: Earth Release: Rock Pillars Rising (Doton: Ganchuso)
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Mid-long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60

    Description: This technique lets the user creates a number of rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will pass through an obstacle, like a house, to reach their target.This Jutsu is the advanced version of the earth release:Rock trail.

    Note:Can be used 5 times in a Battle
    Note:Can only be used By ~Voldemort~ and taught by Him

    ~Declined~ Already exist (was done more then once at that)
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    Name: Earth Style: Rock Prison Technique (Doton: Iwarou no Jutsu)
    Rank:A
    Typer:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60

    Description: This jutsu makes use of all rocks and stones around the area, to surround the person or creature or thing the user wants to inprison. This jutsu is a high-classed jutsu because it may squeeze the opponent you have imprisoned,and also the user can control the rocks inside like making spikes inside the prison.

    Note:Can be used 2 per battled
    Note:The user has to keep his hand on the rock if forced to take away by the opponent the Jutsu will break.

    ~Declined~ Please elaborate on the description. From the restriction (bold) I understand that you need to keep your hands on the rock, but do you need to touch the ground/rock to initiate the jutsu? Also, work on the part where you say it squeeze the opponent; can it kill him?
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    Fire Release: Boost Fire(Katon: Atoushika)

    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30(+10 for every 2 turn used)
    Damage:N/A(+10 to limited fire techniques)

    Description:This is a Jutsu that Increases the damage to all fire techniques by + 10,but the user has to perform at least 2 fire techniques before he/she can stop using this Jutsu but the turns he/she can used is limited which is 5 turns.This Jutsu can ONLY boost the power to fire Jutsus below S-rank.This Jutsu works by when the user gets angry and thus making his/her chakra go very dense and heated so this makes the user to have more damage power on fire Jutsus as the chakra is already dense and hot.

    Note:This Jutsu lasts 5 turns
    Note:The user must perform 2 fire Jutsus in a row to be able to stop Using this Jutsu or to start using this Jutsu.
    Note:Can only be used once per battle

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Already done. There are plenty of Sword/Mode/Jutsu that enhance fire abilities (as well as most elements), work on something different if you want to boost your fire jutsus.
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    Lightning Release: Senbon Storm(Raiton: Senbon no Danmaku)
    Rank:A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage:60

    Description:The user will then expel lightning chakra all around his body. The lightning chakra around the user’s body will then manifest itself into a swarm of up to 50 Senbon made up of pure lightning from around his body. With a simple flick of the user’s wrist the user can fling the Senbon in a storm like barrage and if the senbon are able to strike the accurate spot on the opponents body then a specific part of the opponents body can go numb and become nothing more than a useless limb, incapable of motion or movement.

    Note:Can use 3 times per battle
    Note:The user must have performed another lighting Jutsu in the previous turn to perform this Jutsu.


    ALL OF THESE JUTSU MUST BE TAUGHT BY ~VOLDEMORT~

    ~Declined~ I really don't like the bold part because it could lead to several arguments. How do you intend to prove to your opponent that you've just hit "this specific part" of his body? Take it all off and work on the restriction, you usually restrict yourself from using lightning before a jutsu, not the opposite (in order to save up your chakra).
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    PS:SORRY,IF I AM ASKING TOO MUCH BUT IF YOU ARE GOING TO DECLINE IT PLEASE CAN YOU BOLD OR CHANGE THE PART WHICH YOU THINK IS NOT GOOD.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Taiketsu Yagami View Post
    All this is allowed by Mig J.J. Quicksilver as he is too lazy to do this himself

    (Ingram Mo-Do) Ingram Mode
    Type:Mode
    Rank:S
    Range:All
    Chakra:-20 each turn its maintained
    Damage Points:N/A (+10 to nin/taijutsu)
    Description: Shinobi who have signed the buzzard contract and are capable of summoning Storm Skyress get a special seal on their right shoulder. When this seal is released, a special armor is summoned onto the user that was forged in the buzzard realm with a special alloy built for speed and defense that is also inbued with the chakra of the Buzzard Ingram, Storm Skyress' daughter and fuses with the user's own chakra. It grants the user immense speed aswell as a sturdy defense of being able to block incoming things besides jutsu and explosives. Due to their fused chakra, jutsu in need of chakra are enhanced and due to the armor and speed, physical attacks are more powerful.
    Note:Last 3 turns
    Note:+5 levels to the user's speed
    Note:After deactivation the user is limited to B-rank and lower jutsu for 2 turns
    Note:Can be activated twice but it must be a 5 turn interval after deactivation



    ~Declined: You need to elaborate a LOT more on your abilities if you want to get this one approved. "Great speed", "great strength", "being able to block jutsu and kunai...etc", this is all so vague. What are the limits of your technique? Make it restricted cause modes are really hard to get approve~
    Alright Izuna, I tried elaborating. How is this?

    (Ingram Yoroi) Ingram Armor
    Type:Mode
    Rank: S
    Range:All
    Chakra:50 (-15 each turn its maintained)
    Damage Points:N/A (+15 to ninjutsu and +10 to tai.) (-25 after deactivation)
    Description: Shinobi who have signed the buzzard contract and are capable of summoning Storm Skyress get a special seal on their right shoulder. When this seal is released, a special armor is summoned onto the user. Its called "The Ingram Armor" and it was forged in the buzzard realm with a very special alloy that is capable of channeling and absorbing a special form of chakra only found in the Buzzard realm (Similar to nature chakra but its not found in the normal world). The armor is a bit different as it is more of an exo-skeleton, partially fusing with the users own body. The armor regulates the body causing chakra to channel more fluently aswell as muscles to work to their full capacity and at the same time pumping that special chakra to fuse with the user's own. This causes the user's ninjutsu to be enhanced in power and also causes him/her to become faster and stronger. The user moves so fast that things around him becomes slightly blurred when moving at full speed and he/she gets the strength to crush boulders if using full stregth and stop large objects in their tracks. The armor also gives the user a good defense. He/she can take the full force of blunt attacks, swords, etc unless given special properties. The user can withstand the power of C-rank attacks and below due to the armor and special chakra to reinforce it. After using the armour, the user will be worn out and take damage from muscle exhaustion.
    Notes:
    -Can only last 3 turns at the most
    -After deactivation, the user can only use B-rank ninjutsu for 2 turns
    -Can withstand C rank attacks besides Lightning and fire. (D-rank for that)
    -This armour is also fused with the users chakra and so the user can block weapons that are thrown without any added jutsu. So it wouldn't block a weapon that had it's speed boosted by wind jutsu.
    -Can be activated twice but it must be sent back to buzzard realm and take 5 turns to absorb the special chakra.
    -Can't use genjutsu in this armour
    -The user takes 25 damage from muscle exhaustion after useage and needs two turns to recuporate.(The person loses strength and speed on a large scale. Couldn't even beat up a todler )
    -No taijustu after deactivation until done recuporating


    ~All declined~ look at the end of page 278. No re-submissions will be checked if you don't put the added part in bold.

    New submissions for my dark release Bio in sig:

    This one is a CW that will replace Tetsusaiga . I will be giving the CW I have currently to Rokusho/"Cross Arc". (He had a name change and im not sure if im spelling it right)
    ("Tetsusaiga" Raikou Buzzard Shikon) "Tetsusaiga" Lightning Buzzard Fang
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short (Mid-Long for special ability)
    Chakra Points: N/A (+30 for Wind Scar)
    Damage Points: N/A (+60 for Wind Scar)
    Description: Tetsusaiga is a special great sword carved with a special alloy making it as hard as cold steel and special feathers from the lightning buzzard, allowing it to channel lightning chakra for more cutting power. The fur at the end is a conductor, so the user is unaffected by Wind Scar. Due to its sheer size, it can over come smaller weapons such as Katanas, staffs, nunchucks etc. unless it has special properties. The weapon also has a special ability called "Wind Scar" where the user releases a blast/wave of yellow lightning that levels almost anything in its path. The weapon itself can absorb lightning of B-rank and lower to add to the power of Wind Scar.
    Notes:
    -Wind Scar is equal to A-rank Lightning
    -Wind scar can be used 4 times
    -Counts as one of the three used justu per turn
    -Can only absorb lightning of B-rank and lower
    -Can only absorb one lightning tech every 3 turns
    -Negative 2 levels to the user's speed while using it


    The sword itself and the move it uses
    "Bakusaiga"
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack|Defend|Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra:40
    Damage Points:N/A (+20 to Dark Release techniques)
    Description: The user will release a seal that summons Bacusaiga, a special great sword that amplifies dark release techniques. Bacusaiga looks like a giant fang with a handle and the sword itself looks like it resembles space itself. The sword causes all dark release techniques to increase in size and power. This can only happen when the great sword is being wielded. If the person is simply wearing it, nothing will happen. That is because the handle has a special seal that will channel reserves of dark chakra into the user through the sword itself. The draw back of the weapon is that the user can only use Dark release techniques and the two elements that make it while wielding it because it takes away the ability to change chakra natures unrelated to dark release. The Sword only has enough reserves to amplify 4 techniques. The Great sword's sheer size can over come small weapons such as nunchucks, katanas, etc. unless given special properties.
    Notes:
    -Can only amplify 4 dark techniques in a battle
    -Cant amplify techniqes of S-rank and higher
    -Can only use Dark, Fire, and Lightning Release techniques while wielding it
    -Can only be wielded by me and who I let use it.
    -If wielded, it has to be wielded for the rest of that turn and can only be put away the following one.

    Pic of Great Sword


    ~Declined~ It's almost acceptable. Lower the added damage, +20 is too much and add a restriction that makes it impossible to use anything else then dark, fire and lightning for 2-3 turns once you've used the sword to enhance a technique.

    "Bakusaiga Meido Zangetsuha" (No english translation)
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user releases his own and a reserve of dark chakra to send one powerful dark wave/blade or a series of them at the opponent capable of slicing through even dense materials such as metal and will cut the opponent to shreds!
    Notes:
    -Usable 3 times at most
    -Takes away a reserve of dark chakra with each use


    ~Declined~ Re-work the description in order to be more precise. How many smaller wave? Are they weaker? How much weaker if they are. Add restrictions and work on the bold part since it's a typo I believe.

    (Meiton: Yoroi of Narukami) Dark Release: Armor of Narukami
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack|Defend|Supplementary
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:40 (-15 each turn remained activated)
    Damage Points:60(-10 to user each turn)
    Description: After Kazuma witnessed Kagutsuchi use Susano, he was inspired and developed his own version of it. The user releases a large amount of Darkness and makes it very dense using chakra manipulation. The Darkness takes on a shape of a demon with half its body gone. It developes a shield on it's wrist with a broad sword and spear that are held by Narukami. The user can manipulate Narukami to move any part of its body without the user moving, although if the user does move, the armor will move with him/her. The sword and spear are equal to A-rank and can level almost anything they hit. The spear can be thrown but its unusable afterwards. Even after the shield is gone, Narukami can still be used to fight.
    Notes:
    -Shield is destroyed when struck with 80 points worth of damage.
    -Can last 3 turns or is destroyed when struck with 60 points worth of damage after the shield is gone and cant be used again
    -Can only be taught by Taiketsu Yagami
    -After deactivation, no dark techniques for the following turn
    -The armor is so dense that it takes a toll on the person inside, causing his body to ache and slowing his movements


    (Meiton: Kuro Myaku) Dark Release: Dark Pulse
    Rank:B
    Type:Attack|Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:25
    Damage Points:40(+8 if they hit a solid surface)
    Description: The user channels dark chakra into his fist or feet and punches/kicks something, causing a pulse of dark energy to attack his/her targets. If released from his feet it can launch him/her if released off a solid surface.(ex. Opponent or floor)


    ~Declined~ Follow proper template for a B-rank technique. Restrictions?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Raiton:Isoide Wazuka Na) Lightning Release: Slight Surges
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user slams his hands onto the ground, sending slight lightning surges within the grounds, enabling him to sense of the whereabouts of his opponent.
    Note:
    -Hence this is a really slight lightning surge, it won't have any physical damage to anything it runs through.
    -The user will be able to sense the opponent underground, and while he's on the ground.
    -The user won't be able to sense the opponent while the opponent is 1.5 meters above ground.
    -Hence this is a really slight stream, it takes not even a second to be able to sense the whole long range.
    -Must have mastered Raiton, and be a Sannin or above, due to the chakra control.
    -Can be only taught by Dr. House

    ~Declined: Explain in details why sending lightning into the earth would allow you to detect your opponent~


    (Doton:Hyōmen no rokku) Earth Release: Surface Lock
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After a single handseal, the user will channel doton chakra into the ground, bringing the finest qualities up from the soil to the surface, creating a shield under the user, on the ground, which can cover short to mid-range under the user, protecting the user from any incoming ground attacks. The user can also break this slamp of earth in half, making it rise up to a vertical stance defending the user from any incoming attacks.
    Notes:
    -Can be only taught by Dr. House

    ~Declined: This just is acceptable and cool but work on the bold part. Also, where are the restrictions?~

    (Kchuysei: Mrs. Afcanc) Summoning: Mrs. Afcanc
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Mrs. Beaver, has joined to the group of one of the oldest beavers out there. Mrs. Beaver meet his man along time ago when she was eating some wood, and then she saw this great man fighting with Mr. Bear, his long rival, she decided to join forces with Mr. Beaver, in order to beat the big bad Mr. Bear. Mrs. Beaver can cast both A-ranked water blasts up to 5 times, and S-ranked Fire blasts up to 3 times, as its capable of infusing its blasts with his owner's jutsu. Due to her shy personality, she's was living underground for her whole life, hiding from the surroundings, and she's very sneaky.
    Notes:
    -Due to her always digging and being familiar of being underground, she became an excellent digger, as she's capable to dig underground to long range, and able to match speeds with a human, maybe faster, via underground.
    -She's able to dig out a huge space underground, having the surface collapse in. If long ranged, it takes 1 turn.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Because of her rather wide/thick/flat tail, she can defend with his tail against any lightning and wind jutsu up to S-rank as in 1 times (-15 damage to the user), as in A-rank, 2 times (-10 damage).
    -must have signed the beaver contract.
    -must be taught by only Dr. House

    ~Declined: What the hell is up with that description O__O? Fix that and work on the abilities, there's too many of them~

    (Kchuysei: Bībāpurinsu) Summoning: Beaver Prince
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The offspring of the two elders, the Beaver Prince. As the battle get's heavier and more furious, his attitude will turn more furious, rather evil, wanting to destroy everything. Hence for all his life, he played in a pond, and beaver dams, he became skilled with the water, on a really high levels. Because of his ill attitude, he will become extremelly unstable as psychologically, and able to push out, matching ranks of a forbidden in water blasts, while he's out for at least one turn, meaning he's able to do it, in the 2nd turn and for the rest of the battle. After he has released all his anger in that matching forbidden water blasts, he'll lose consciousness for 1 turn. The most time he stays on the battlefield, the more evil/crazier he get's meaning for the 1st turn, he'll be only able to perform A-ranked, he's able to perform water in the 2nd turn, matching a forbidden rank, but if he releases his anger (the forbidden water) in the 2nd turn, he needs to rest for 1 turn, but if he releases his anger, after the 2nd turn, he'll be able to perform A-ranked water or lower, in the next turns (meaning if he releases his "anger" in the 3rd turn, there is only 2 more times, he can perform A-ranked or lower ranked water.)
    Note:
    -Either of the Mr or Mrs. Afcanc can summon him also.
    -Due to his condition, he can only stay on the battlefield as long as 5 turns.
    -Due to his crazy appearance, the user takes -20 damage, when he's summoned.
    -This beaver is big enough, that he can carry it's user, tho only when traveling in water.
    -must have signed the beaver contract.
    -must be taught by only Dr. House
    -If there's water covering the whole field, or where is it covered with water, it's accessible to speeds that match the first gate.

    ~Declined: I will never allow a jutsu that makes a summon use Forbidden-rank technique~

    (Kchuysei: Bībā ōjo) Summoning: Beaver Princess
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This little beaver is like her mother, all shy and cautious. This little beaver is able to smell onto long range, but if the field is wet, or covered in water, it's able to sense the whole field, due to her affinity to water. She's a really fast creature, due to her cautiousness, as able to match her speed to a human, maybe faster. Because of her affinity to water, she's able to cast S-ranked water blasts up to 3 times, and A-ranked water blasts, up to 5 times.
    Notes:
    -Stay on the field for 4 turns.
    -Every jutsu this beavers uses counts as a move in the user's turn.

    -Either of the Mr or Mrs. Afcanc can summon him also.
    -This beaver is big enough, that he can carry it's user, tho only when traveling through water.
    -must have signed the contract
    -must be taught by Dr. House

    ~Approved: Took away the 1st Gate part and added two restrictions~
    Resubmitting:
    (Doton:Hyōmen no rokku) Earth Release: Surface Lock
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After a single handseal, the user will channel doton chakra into the ground, bringing the finest qualities up from the soil to the surface, creating a shield under the user, on the ground, which can cover short to mid-range under the user, protecting the user from any incoming ground attacks. The user can also break this slamp of earth in half, making it rise up to a vertical stance defending himself with the slamp of rock, the user is able to defend from any incoming attacks, where the slamp has been broken off..
    Notes:
    -Can be only taught by Dr. House
    -Can be summoned twice
    -only who mastered doton can use this.
    -The user won't be able to go underground, hence it will be blocked.

    (Kchuysei: Mrs. Afcanc) Summoning: Mrs. Afcanc
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Mrs. Beaver can cast both A-ranked water blasts up to 5 times, and S-ranked Fire blasts up to 3 times. She's able to go underground, via digging a rather large space under the opponent, making him fall in it.
    Notes:
    -She's able to dig out a huge space underground, having the surface collapse in. If long ranged, it takes 1 turn.
    -Can only stay for 4 turns.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle.
    -must have signed the beaver contract.
    -must be taught by only Dr. House

    (Kchuysei: Bībā Kan) Summoning: Sense Beaver
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This little beaver can go underground, and sense everything what's happening on the surface, or underground and tell it's user of the opponents whereabouts.
    Notes:
    -Can only be summoned three times per battle
    -Can stay for six turns
    -scanning the area counts as a move, but scanning can be used during the six turns

    (Suiton: Kontorōru o toru) - Water Release: W.O Punch
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Descripton: A vortex of water shot out of the users fist water he/she punches.
    Notes:
    -Can only be taught by Doctor House and Gin-San

    (Doton: Kaytio Burokku) - Earth Release: Devenge Block
    Rank: A
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Descripton: The user will send his earth chakra in the ground from his feet, by doing so, he will cover anything within short range of himself. No earth attacks B-rank and below can be done within short range of the user (being the enemy or the user), because the chakra of the user will overpower lower ranks.
    Notes:
    -The enemy cannot use B-rank and below jutsus that are within short range of the user
    -The user can use his own doton techniques as is his own chakra
    -Can only be used two times per battle
    maybe three
    -not S-rank and above Earth techniques next turn
    -Can only be taught by Doctor House and Gin-San

    ~All declined~ Scary Yamato was clear when he checked those; re-submit on the 3rd of September. Considering I warned everyone on my post (bottom of page 278), you're ban from the CJ thread for a week. If you have anything to say, please do so through VM.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Raiton: Akaaka Ranpu no Rai = Lightning Release: Bright Light of Lightning
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short/Middle/Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will start off by concentrating Raiton chakra through his body and through the air and then perform a short row of 4 hand seals. Doing this, will allow him to make all his lightning attacks glow in a blinding light, making the opponent hard to see through them. The lightning would be so bright that the opponent will barely be able to see through them. Yet, a Sharingan user with 3 tomoe Sharingan can see through the light up to some point.
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: Once per battle.
    Note: Every wind jutsu that the user uses will be weakened with 1 rank (meaning if the user uses S rank wind – it will become A ranked)
    Note: Sharingan of 3tomoe can see through the light up to some point (note that byakugan won’t)
    Note: The user will take 15 damage due to the large chakra necessary for the technique.
    Note: No S or above Lightning for 2 turns after this jutsu is over.


    Illusionary technique: Fear of Walking = Genjutsu: Osore no Hokou
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Middle
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damge Points: N/A
    Description: With a single hand seal, the user will cast a very quick genjutsu that will activate the Basiphobia- Inability to stand or also known as the Fear of walking or falling.
    In a matter of a second the enemy will start being afraid of even standing on the ground and if he is on the ground, He will be so terrified that he will soon lose the ability to think. The opponent will only be concentrating on the ground and will forget to defend against upcoming attacks. Also if he is falling he will still be to afraid just like if he is on the ground as the Basiphobia also includes fear of falling.
    Note: Only twice per battle.
    Note: After using this, no genjutsu for the following turn.
    Note: Lasts as long as the opponent does not break away from it.
    Note: No S rank or above next turn.


    Lightning Release: The Judgment of the Lightning = Raiton: Bachi no Rai
    Type: Offense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short/Middle/Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will perform a row of 3 hand seals and concentrate Raiton chakra into his mouth and will exhale it very fast. As a result, a meteor-sized sphere of Lightning will be formed that will travel at the opponent rapidly and will destroy everything on its way. It creates a massive explosion on the impact and not only that it destroys it all but also numbs anything that comes in contact with the sphere.
    Note: Once per battle
    Note: The user will take 20 damage due to the large chakra used
    Note: The user will take 10 extra damage if he uses the jutsu in Short range and he will be numbed for 1 turn as well as everyone else in short range.
    Note: No Raiton for the next turn.
    Note: No S ranks or above techniques of any kind at the next turn.
    Note: No genjutsu at the same turn this jutsu is used.

    Wolverine Arts: Wolverine’s Claw = Kuzuri Biijutsu: Kuzuri no Tsume
    Type: Offensive/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Middle/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user already in Wolverine Mode or Wolverine Mode Stage 2, will concentrate chakra into his claws that are formed due to 1 of the modes, and by performing a vertical slash motion with his hand, he will release horizontal slash is released from the user’s claws that will travel at the opponent with huge speed. The slash can’t go to right or left, just in straight line. The slash, is so long and powerful that will even go through the ground. Once it hits the opponent, it will cut right through him killing him instantly. The Slash can once per battle be used to go through a technique of the same rank, canceling it out (meaning that if the opponent releases a jutsu, the user can send the slash at the technique, canceling both the techniques out), but if the opponent’s jutsu is of a lower rank (A or lower) the slash will continue at the opponent.
    Note: Only twice per battle
    Note: Must be in Wolverine Mode or Wolverine Mode Stage 2.
    Note: Can only be used by Akisha or if taught.
    Note: No genjutsu at the same turn.
    Note: Must have signed the Wolverine contract.

    ~All Declined~ You are hereby banned from the CJ thread for a period of 2 weeks. The reason being the following: resubmitting the exact same customs knowing they were declined by an admin, in the only hope that the mods checking them will have a different opinion of said customs.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kaen rai butoukai) - Blazing lightning balls
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will gather there fire and lightning chakra into their hands. As they do so, they will create balls lightning that rotate rappidly generating heat, which the user controls to make create fire rapped around it, and with lightning focussed through it, making a ball of fire and lightning. The user is able to throw these balls of blazing lightning anywhere up to mid range. The user can only make 1 balls to throw from his dominant hand.
    Note: Can only be used by zane and the pervy sage
    Note: Can only be used 3 times

    ~Approved~ Made it so you can only throw one ball with each usage of the jutsu.

    (Kaen rai kizu) - Blazing lightning Slash
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The use will chakra focus his lightning and fire chakra into his sword, wrapping his sword in hot flames, not hot enough to melt his sword though. He will also focus lightning around the fire, generating it form his hand, coiling all the way around his sword. This attack add's+ +20 to all short range kenjutsu attacks, due to the fire and lightning damage. Once the user has focussed their fire and lightning through their sword, they can swing their blade releasing a fast creasent blast of fire and lightning from their sword. This would reach up to mid range and it would cause the users sword to revert back to normal without fire and lighting wrapped around it

    Note: Can only be used by zane and the pervy sage
    Note: Can only be used 3 times

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ I've had it with those "sword blasting" jutsus. I've just approved one for dark release and I know that other elemental variation of this jutsu exist, hence I will not longer approve such jutsus.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Inchato View Post
    (Mōmaku Seigyo)-Retinal Control
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Description: The user makes two hand seals and projects their chakra into they eyes of the target. They then use their chakra to control the retina of the target. By doing this, the user is able to control the contractions of the muscles of the retina at will. By doing this, the user is able to control the target's sensitivity to light.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
    Note: The jutsu can only control the muscle contractions once per usage.


    ||Declined|| Describe the method by which you are able to control your opponent's eyes. Does it just happen when you form handseals or do you require direct contact or what?

    (Chakra Arashi)-Chakra Storm
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user makes three hand seals and gathers a large amount of chakra in one specific location within a mid-range of themselves. They then begin vibrating and rotating the mass of chakra an extreme amount. Anything caught in this area will be twisted and pressured an extremely great deal by the swirling vortex of chakra.
    Note: When the chakra has been gathered in the set area, the air will shimmer for a few seconds before the vortex begins.
    Note: The area that is being effected can have a maximum of a 3.5 meter diameter.
    Note: After using this technique, the user is unable to use any S Rank jutsu for two full turns.

    ||Pending|| Need another mod's opinion.

    [/COLOR][/B]
    Resubmitting:
    (Mōmaku Seigyo)-Retinal Control
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Description: The user makes two hand seals and projects their chakra into they eyes of the target. They then use their chakra to control the retina of the target. By doing this, the user is able to control the contractions of the muscles of the retina at will. By doing this, the user is able to control the target's sensitivity to light.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
    Note: The jutsu can only control the muscle contractions once per usage.
    Note: Requires direct eye contact.
    Note: The pupil will stay the size it was manipulated to for a full turn.


    ~Declined~ I'm not approving this unless you make it a puppetry jutsu (and even that would be far-fetched) or a genjutsu where the user believe their retina is close to some extent...etc

    And since I never got the second opinion, I suppose I'll just resubmit it. (I restricted the effected diameter a bit. And changed it for no S Ranks to no basic nin for two turns.)
    (Chakra Arashi)-Chakra Storm
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user makes three hand seals and gathers a large amount of chakra in one specific location within a mid-range of themselves. They then begin vibrating and rotating the mass of chakra an extreme amount. Anything caught in this area will be twisted and pressured an extremely great deal by the swirling vortex of chakra.
    Note: When the chakra has been gathered in the set area, the air will shimmer for a few seconds before the vortex begins.
    Note: The area that is being effected can have a maximum of a 2 meter diameter.
    Note: After using this technique, the user is unable to use any standard ninjutsu for the next two turns.

    Note: Can only be used twice per match.
    Note: This jutsu doesn't suck the opponent toward the vortex and only affect what comes in direct contact with it.


    ~Approved~ Added the part in bold.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Katon: Gyou ofu Hai ken Enkou ) Fire Style: Line of Ash and Flame

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will start by focusing fire chakra on the tip of any finger, the finger will be pointing at the enemy when the user finish focusing fire chakra on the tip of any finger a line of deadly fire will form. If this jutsu touch the opponent, the opponent skin will turn into ash making a deadly burn that could burn his whole skin and even kill the opponent.

    - This jutsu could only be use or teach by -Ace-
    - This jutsu could only be use twice per battle
    - Once the jutsu is use, the user can't do any fire jutsu the next, round

    This jutsu look like Chidori Senbon but instead is only one straight line that attack the enemy.


    ~Declined~If it wasn't for the little side note you added at the end (referring to the Chidori Sendon) I would've never understood what this jutsu looks like or do. Word on the description and take out the part about being deadly and burning to death...etc. The restrictions look fine.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ View Post
    Re-Submitting

    (界王拳; Kaio-ken) - Fist of the World King
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50 (-10 chakra for each turn it´s activated)
    Damage: (Taijutsu and Kaito´s Taijutsu +10) (-10 to the user for each turn activated)
    Describtion:
    Kaio-ken is technique which was created by famous martial art master King Kai who wasn´t able to completely master it so he taught it to his student Migualon J.J. who completely mastered it and currently he is the only person able to use it. The user can at any time deactivate Kaio-ken. The user focuses his chakra around his body which creates crimson "cloak" around the user thanks to which the user´s strength and speed increases dramatically. The user´s chakra is active all the time Kaio-ken is activated, the user is hurt every turn it is active.



    Note:
    *Can only be used once per battle
    *Lasts for 4 turns
    *The user´s speed increases on the level of SM
    *The user can´t use genjutsus and Water and Earth element while the Kaio-ken is activated
    *After it ends, the user can´t move for 2 turns (he still can use jutsus, he just can´t walk, only stand)


    (added bolded parts)

    (Sutaffu No Hinote) - Staff Of Fire
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A
    Describtion: Sutaffu No Hinote is a spear-like staff, which is weapon, which is said to be made by gods for 1 person who masteres the Fire Release completely. This weapon is famous because it was weapon of Sage Of The Six Paths and than of his Older Son. This weapon has become even more famous for being 1 of the weapons of Madara Uchiha and when he was defeated by Shodai Hokage Hashirama, he took it and it became 1 of the biggest treasures of Konoha. This treasure wasn´t used for a long time, but during 2nd Shinobi Great War, Sandaime Hokage Hiruzen Sarutobi was using it to increase his power in Fire Release. After the war, Sandaime Hokage Hiruzen Sarutobi created "law" thanks to which it must never be used, only in the War in which Konoha would need big help. It wasn´t used in 3rd Shinobi Great War, but on the start of 4th Shinobi Great War, Godaime Hokage Tsunade gave this weapon to Migualon J.J., shinobi from Amegakure who decided to help them in this very hard war.



    Abilities and Notes:
    *The user, even if he has this staff "only" on his back, can use Fire Jutsus without any hand seals
    *Staff Of Fire is indestructible
    *If someone else than Migualon J.J. (or those who get permission to use it) touches this staff, they get burned


    (i can´t bold edited parts as well, they were deleted + if even THAT is OP, than check gobi´s whip)

    ~Both Declined: The first one is still OP, regardless of the restrictions. You need to change the abilities. The second, don't resubmit it. I told you it was a rip off from the 7SM. Gobi's whip? You mean the one that got declined by Caliburn because it was a rip off? Yeah I know about it
    Re-submitting (again )

    (界王拳; Kaio-ken) - Fist of the World King
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50 (-10 chakra for each turn it´s activated)
    Damage: (+5 to Taijutsu and +10 to Kaito´s Taijutsu) (-20 to the user for each turn activated)
    Describtion:
    Kaio-ken is technique which was created by famous martial art master King Kai who wasn´t able to completely master it so he taught it to his student Migualon J.J. who completely mastered it and currently he is the only person able to use it. The user can at any time deactivate Kaio-ken. The user focuses his chakra around his body which creates crimson "cloak" around the user thanks to which the user´s strength and speed increases dramatically. The user´s chakra is active all the time Kaio-ken is activated, the user is hurt every turn it is active.



    Note:
    *Can only be taught by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~
    *Can only be used once per battle
    *Lasts for 3 turns
    *The user´s speed increases on the level of SM
    *The user can´t use genjutsus and Water and Earth element while the Kaio-ken is activated
    *After it ends, the user can´t move for 2 turns (he still can use jutsus, he just can´t walk, only stand)


    if that is still too OP than PLEASE tell me what to change in it or please change it yourself

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ It's not that it's OP, but now it's just too similar to the gates. Honestly, what's the difference between this and opening the gates? (The gates are less restricted IMO). Sorry for making you waste you time, I tried to work it out with you but I need to be unbiased it seem to me that this jutsu is unacceptable even if you change the restrictions.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by gitanshu View Post
    (Ninpo: Kujo Hebi) - Ninja Art: Destructive Snake
    Type: Offence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user opens his scroll and draws out a very giant snake of almost 0.5m in diameter and 4 lions. Lions start running by covering the snake and taking down any obstackle in the way towards opponent.at that time snake reaches to the opponent he bind his whole body with its own by rolling himself onto him, so tight that the opponent bones get crushed, and then the whole body and finally taking his head off by mouth resulting in the death..
    Note: Can only be used by Sai
    Note: Can only be taught by Gitanshu.
    Ninpo: Kujo Hebi) - Ninja Art: Destructive Snake
    Type: Offence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user opens his scroll and draws out a very giant snake of almost 0.5m in diameter and 4 lions. Lions start running by covering the snake and taking down any obstackle in the way towards opponent.at that time snake reaches to the opponent he bind his whole body with its own by rolling himself onto him, so tight that the opponent can mo longer move and weave hand signs and if more pressure is exerted the opponents bone starts to get crushed,
    Note: Can only be used by Sai
    Note: Can only be taught by Gitanshu.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=94586

    edited the bold part

    Quote Originally Posted by gitanshu View Post
    CUSTOM WEAPON

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: That of the jutsu used
    Damage Points: That of the jutsu used +15% (-15 to user if b rank jutsu is absorbed due to impact)
    Description: This katana, named the Dragon blade is one of the greatest sword ever known to the man kind it is made from an un-named metal some people say it was made from a dragon scale(only sayings) it has affinity towards fire type chakra and can even absorb all the fire and cut through them upto b rank jutsu only. It even reduces two hand seal for every fire jutsu and increases impact by 15% for every fire type move . it supports user against wind type move also and is weak agaist water type moves..
    ~user takes 15 damage for every b rank jutsu absorbed ~
    ~is strong against fire and wind ~
    ~weak against water~
    it look likes



    NOTE- sorry for bothering but i dont think the sword will itself use any chakra

    ~Declined: OP, too many abilities and some of them are unacceptable~
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: That of the jutsu used
    Damage Points: That of the jutsu used +1 rank
    Description: This katana, named the Dragon blade is one of the greatest sword ever known to the man kind it is made from an un-named metal some people say it was made from a dragon scale(only sayings). it has affinity towards fire . It even reduces two hand seal for every fire jutsu and increases impact by 1 rank for every fire type move . it supports user against wind type move also and is weak agaist water type moves..and user can infuse his fire type chakra in it to give it that extra edge and use it as a narmal katana~if placed in bio need not be summoned~
    ~can only be thought by gitanshu~
    ~is strong against fire and wind ~
    ~weak against water~
    it look likes

    NOTE- sorry for bothering but i dont think the sword will itself use any chakra

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=94586








    edited the bold part


    ~Both Declined~ They both need restrictions. For the second one, take out the part about making fire jutsu one rank higher.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Chakra Tsubasu|Chakra Wings|
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user channels his chakra into his back and uses it to create 2 wings made purely of chakra which enables the user to fly in the air.The user can fly for 2 turns and the wings can be used to deflect incoming attacks like kunai's and jutsu's of C-rank and below.

    • can only be used 3 times per battle
    • cannot use any elemental jutsu's of S-rank and above while in this mode
    • can only be taught by igneel


    Declined. Chouji has the patent on this one


    Waza Taisan |Technique Dispersal|
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user simply performs a single hand seal which disperses any technique that the user wishes(S-rank and Below and doesn't include supplementary ones) with in range

    • can only be used 2 times per battle
    • cannot use any ninjutsu(non elemental) in the next 2 turns
    • can only be taught by igneel


    Declined. Do not resubmit


    Seishou Bakuha|Ninja art:Chakra blast|
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Type:Attack
    Description:The user opens his mouth and concentrates chakra in his mouth and shoots a huge blast of chakra

    • can only be used 3 times
    • cannot use any ninjutsu(not elemental in the next turn)
    • can only be taught by igneel


    Declined. Describe the shape of the blast more. its very ambiguous at the moment
    note:i submitted 2 jutsu's on 25th and 3 on 30 th... thought i would make it easy for you guys

    Seishou Bakuha|Ninja art:Chakra blast|
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Type:Attack
    Description:The user opens his mouth and concentrates chakra in his mouth and the concentrated chakra and shoots a blast of chakra which is as wide as the ball of 1m radius

    • can only be used 3 times
    • cannot use any ninjutsu(not elemental in the next turn)
    • can only be taught by igneel


    ~Declined~ Too similar to Kiyoshi techniques

    Doton:Sawa Nami|Earth Release:Swamp Wave|
    Rank:S
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Type:Attack
    Description:The user after making a swamp(using swamp of the underworld or if there is already one present in the battle field) quickly does a single handseal and make the swamp rise and travel like a wave at the opponent.Similar to a water wave.The wave is about 10m tall and depends on the size of the swamp(if it is 10 m deep swamp)

    note
    • can only be used 2 times per battle
    • must have completely mastered doton
    • user must be above sannin rank
    • no earth jutsu of S-rank and above in the next turn
    • can only be taught by igneel

    ~Declined~ Unrealistic for the jutsu
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Resubmitting
    (Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
    Quote Originally Posted by Yoshi.. View Post
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    (Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
    (Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing the two necessary handseals, the user will gather his Doton chakra into his palm and slam it on the ground. After he slams the ground a Doton Crocodile will appear. The crocodile will attack the opponents legs. If the opponent destroys the crododile, it can be reformed by sending chakra into it.
    Note: Reforming the crocodile needs two turns.
    Note: The user can't perform any other Doton jutsus above C-Rank after he reformed the crocodile.
    Note: Requires two handseals.
    Note Can only be teached by MikeyDread.



    ~Declined: Again, need restrictions. How many time can you use it per battle?~
    (Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
    (Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing the two necessary handseals, the user will gather his Doton chakra into his palm and slam it on the ground. After he slams the ground a Doton Crocodile will appear. The crocodile will attack the opponents legs. If the opponent destroys the crododile, it can be reformed by sending chakra into it.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: Can only be reformed once per battle.

    Note: Reforming the crocodile needs two turns.
    Note: The user can't perform any other Doton jutsus above C-Rank after he reformed the crocodile.
    Note: Requires two handseals.
    Note Can only be teached by MikeyDread.

    Resubmitting
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
    Resubmitting
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
    Rank: S
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After drawing some blood and performing the seven handseals, the user summons Kyodaina. Kyodaina has brown feathers and is as big as Gamakichi in the Pain Arc. Kyodaina can use lightning techniques up to A-rank and thanks to his wings he can perform wind techniques upto S-rank. But, the jutsus he can perform are those wich doesn't need handseals. However, when the summoner stands on Kyodaina's back, he can perform the handseals so that Kyodaina can use the jutsus.
    Note: Only stays on the field for 5 turns
    Note: Kyodaina can't use wind and lightning techniques in the same turn.
    Note: Can only be used by someone who has signed the Kerstel contract.
    Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.


    ~Declined: Make it use one of the two elements and restrict it's usage so it counts as one of your move too.~
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
    Rank: S
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After drawing some blood and performing the seven handseals, the user summons Kyodaina. Kyodaina has brown feathers and is as big as Gamakichi in the Pain Arc. Kyodaina can perform wind techniques upto S-rank thanks to his wings. But, the jutsus he can perform are those wich doesn't need handseals. However, when the summoner stands on Kyodaina's back, he can perform the handseals so that Kyodaina can use the jutsus.
    Note: Only stays on the field for 5 turns
    Note: Kyodaina' s Wind jutsus count as a move of his summoner.
    Note: Can only be used by someone who has signed the Kerstel contract.
    Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.


    Edited the bolded parts

    ~All Declined~ please use the proper way to submit a previously declined jutsu. quote the original post and put the new jutsu's underneath.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: Doragon jūki) - Fire Release: Dragon Firearm
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user covers his arm in their Katon chakra. The user then will start forming fire around their arm while using their chakra layer to protect their arm from getting burnt. When user's fist will have a dragon head shape figure and punch the opponent causing them to get burn wherever the get hit.
    Note: Can only be taught by ~Johninto Uchiha~
    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's
    (Suiton: Mizu fenikkusu) - Water Style: Water Phoenix
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a phoenix shaped made up of water. The user can then send the phoenix at the enemy or use it to defend against attacks.
    Note: Can only block ninja tools and up to A rank fire.
    Note: Can only be taught by ~Johninto Uchiha~
    ~Declined~ Restrictions?
    Genjutsu: Doragon no me (Illusion Technique: Dragon eye)

    Rank: C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points:30
    Description: A illusion used on the enemy to make them think a dragon is in front of them. Then the dragon will eat them in the illusion causing the enemy to feel numb.
    Note: Need 1T Sharingan and eye contact
    Note: Has nothing to do with the Dragon contract.
    Note: Can only be taught by ~Johninto Uchiha~
    ~Declined~ Change the name
    (Suiton: Sen mizu fenikkusu no arashi) - Water Style: One Thousand Water Phoenix Storm
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (+10 if shurikens are added)
    Description: A technique that utilizes water to create 1000 water phoenixes that is send to the enemy in different angles and directions. The phoenixes can have hidden shurikens added into all of them causing extra damage.
    Note: Can only be taught by ~Johninto Uchiha~
    ~Declined~ Where are the restrictions?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    (Ninpo: Taka Boushi) - Ninja Art: Hawk Spinning
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Point: 60
    Description: (When in air) The user opens his scroll and draws out 5 medium size hawks. The Hawks start spinning very fast around the user making a sphere(globe formation) of 4m radius creating no space for even seeing the oponent from outside or letting anything inside. And if the opponent even try to touch the spinning sphere, the opponent will receive a major injury due to razor sharp feathers..
    Note: Can only be used by Sai.

    ~Declined: Major injuries? Can't see your opponent? Work on your jutsu some more cause it's kinda unrealistic right now. Also, add restrictions~

    (Ninpo: Hane Raishuu) - Ninja Art: Feather Attack
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Point: 40
    Description: The user open his scroll and draws 4 hawks. The hawks start shooting razor sharp feathers with ink poison on tip of feathers, which starts weakening the opponent, and making the senses(eyesight and body movement) week of the opponent..
    Note: Can only be used by Sai.

    Note: Can only be taught by Enzup.

    Link to my Sai Bio- http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=95009

    ~Declined: No poison~

    (Ninpo: Taka Boushi) - Ninja Art: Hawk Spinning
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Point: 60
    Description: (When in air) The user opens his scroll and draws out 5 medium size hawks. The Hawks start revolving very fast around the user making a complete sphere(globe formation) of 4m radius and thus blocking jutus up to A-Rank. And the opponent can't enter the sphere, coz hawks are revolving very fast..
    Note: Can only be used by Sai.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Declined~ if they can't enter, can you do anything while in there?
    (Ninpo: Hane Raishuu) - Ninja Art: Feather Attack
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Point: 40
    Description: The user open his scroll and draws 4 hawks. The hawks start shooting razor sharp feathers with special ink on tip of feathers, which starts weakening the opponent, and making the senses(eyesight and body movement) week of the opponent..
    Note: Can only be used by Sai.
    ~Declined~ How does the ink cause them to become weakened?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton:Kyūkyoku no bakku no kaze) Wind release: Ultimate back wind
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:The user, while moving backwards, focuses fuuton chakra into his arms, which create a crescent shaped wind. As he moves backwards, the wind gets stronger. When he stops, the user will release an enormous slicing wind, towards the opponent, capable of destroying 5 trees lined up next to each other.
    Note: Is only able to be used by Mockingbird and Demosthenes
    Note:Can only be used up to four times per battle.
    ~Declined~ so moving backwards allows you to shoot a forward attacking blast? seems unrealistic
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Konchū sutairu: Konchū burasuto) Insect Style: Insect Blast
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user instead of releasing his/her insects through pores, Shoots up to 3 meteor sized blasts of insects from his mouth. These blast travels at great speed causing damage on impact, the insects also sucks out the chakra of the hit opponent. The blast follow the opponent until destroyed.
    - Can only use 3 times per battle
    - No S-rank bug techniques while in effect
    - Can only be taught by wastedmonkey and Black Uchiha

    *Co-creator Black Uchiha

    ~Declined~

    (Konchū sutairu: Konchū tebukuro) Insect Style: Insect Gloves
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range Short/Close
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user punches at an opponent and as the punch get close; insects come out of the user’s hand and suck the opponent’s chakra. Leaving that area limp/numb due to chakra loss. The bugs are unseen by the opponent.
    - Can only be used 4 times per battle
    - Can only be taught by wastedmonkey and Black Uchiha

    *Co-creator Black Uchiha
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal:Sea Gulls
    Scroll Owner:-Cobalt-
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:Kichiro
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Mayu,Emo,Hiroko,Akane,Mastiph

    Anyone who signs the contract will need to get this tattoo:


    Sea Gulls

    I checked the list gulls are not on it.If it exists I will find a new animal.Cheers :D
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Mugen- View Post
    Edits are in bold ^_^

    (Kyousei-Katana no Netsu Seijin ) Great Sword of the Temperature Sage
    Rank: S
    Type: weapon
    Range:N/a
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: It is said this sword was once wielded by one of the family members of the Rokuddu Sage that possessed a ability to control temperature.Being constantly infused with that sages chakra,the sword actually inherited the ability.It is also said that the sword still has a small part of the Sages will left in it, so whenever someone who is not the weilder touches it, he get instantly ignited.The current and only weilder of this sword currently is Mugen who has the same ability as the Sage in the tales.(My CE)
    The sword like previously said has a ability to manipulate temperature to a certain point.The user has the choice of canceling any water or earth jutsu much faster than by doing a regular jutsu,it also gives a advantage that it looks like the user was hit by the jutsu. It works by infusing either cold or hot temperature into the jutsu itself.(this is done by slashing or stabbing) the jutsu.This can also be used on a regular sword of the opponent if it is close combat.
    *The special ability costs 45 chakra
    *The special ability does count towards the 3 moves per turn rule.
    *The special ability can only be used once every 3 turns.Meaning you use it,than wait 2 full turns for it to cool down,than on the third you can use it again.
    The sword looks like so


    ~Declined~ You don't seem to get the part where I will not accept a sword that can cancel any water or earth jutsu.
    sorry I really didnt.
    I'll edit it than ^_^

    (Kyousei-Katana no Netsu Seijin ) Great Sword of the Temperature Sage
    Rank: S
    Type: weapon
    Range:N/a
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: It is said this sword was once wielded by one of the family members of the Rokuddu Sage that possessed a ability to control temperature.Being constantly infused with that sages chakra,the sword actually inherited the ability.It is also said that the sword still has a small part of the Sages will left in it, so whenever someone who is not the weilder touches it, he get instantly ignited.The current and only weilder of this sword currently is Mugen who has the same ability as the Sage in the tales.(My CE)
    The sword like previously said has a ability to manipulate temperature to a certain point.The user has the choice of canceling any A-rank or Below water or earth jutsu much faster than by doing a regular jutsu,it also gives a advantage that it looks like the user was hit by the jutsu. It works by infusing either cold or hot temperature into the jutsu itself.(this is done by slashing or stabbing) the jutsu.This can also be used on a regular sword of the opponent if it is close combat.
    *The special ability costs 32 chakra
    *The special ability does count towards the 3 moves per turn rule.
    *The special ability can only be used once every 3 turns.Meaning you use it,than wait 2 full turns for it to cool down,than on the third you can use it again.
    The sword looks like so

    ~On Hold~ I want Cali to check this to see if it conflicts with his 7SM swords
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Been a week already :D

    (Chakra Hari) - Chakra Needles
    Type: Attack
    Rank:A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user gathers chakra into their palms , compresses it and then molds it into a long chakra needle , it all requires excellent chakra control which members of the Hyuuga clan possesses . When thrown, the large chakra needle will explode into many smaller chakra needles and will gain spontaneous acceleration which then can be directed at the opponent . The chakra needles are capable of closing chakra points if it hits a tenketsu , if it does hit a tenketsu , the chakra needle will enter the tenketsu as chakra and closes it and it's also capable of impairing movements of the opponent's joints if it jams into the joint .

    -Opponent limited to jutsus B-rank and below for 1 turn if hit in the chakra points
    -Usable only 3 times
    -Usable only by members of the Hyuuga clan
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's
    (Hakke Kouseitan'i Kaiten) - Eight Trigrams Elemental Heavenly Spin
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user pushes chakra out of all their tenketsus and spin while releasing elemental chakra through their mouth . The dome shield created by the user spinning while releasing chakra out of all their tenketsus assimilates the elemental chakra and takes on the element and will also gain characteristics of the element that th user decides to release through his mouth , such as the slicing power from wind and pressurized water , with only one element able to be used each time .

    -Usable only 3 times
    -Usable only by members of the Hyuuga clan
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    ~Declined~ too similar to existing jutsu's
    ( Nakkuru's Kyoukudai Kyuukei ) - Knuckle's Maximum Break
    Rank: S
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: ( +15 to taijutsu and +15 to ninjutsu )
    Description: The user gathers chakra and channels it into every muscle of the body to energize the cells in the muscles by using chakra . By doing so , the user's mitochondria in the cells of his muscles produces ATP at a much faster rate , giving the user the speed of the 4th Raikage in his armor and the strength of Tsunade . But after it deactivates , it leaves the user in a state of exhaustion and he would be unable to use jutsus B-rank and above for 2 turns . If the effects wear off the second time this is used , the user would be left in a near-death state from overworking his body .

    -Takes a few seconds to fully activate
    -Lasts for 4 turns
    -Usable only 2 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    ~Declined~
    ( Rankyaku Gaichou ) - Storm Leg: Victorious Bird
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short to Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user focuses chakra into his leg and compresses it , then the user kicks the air and releases the compressed chakra in the shape of a bird that is capable of cleaving through steel

    -No ninjutsu the turn after this is used
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    ~Declined~
     
         
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