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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Tsuki Manako) - Moon Eye

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage: 80 (-10 to user)
    Description: The Moon-Eye is a spiritual and a mythical sword lost in the History and very special due to its unique ability.It has a layer of wind around it, when charged with chakra and can destroy trees by in a sword slash. The fuuton layer around the sword can create tornadoes and swipe out the opponents flying in the air without even requiring the sword to touch it. Since it conducts all elemental nature, when an opponents even attacks with fire nature to destroy the native wind, the sword takes the form of a fire sword.
    Note: Can only create tornadoes twice
    Summoning the sword counts as a move
    Once summoned, the sword cannot be returned and does -10 to user per turn
    Can only be used by pradattauchiha or those worthy enough

    ~Declined~ Swords shooting elemental blast (or tornadoes for that matters) are banned from this thread. Too many were made already. Also, destroying trees in a sword slash while not touching them falls in the category I've mentioned above.

    (Mashin Tougyo) - Unholy control

    Type: Supplementary/Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Damage: N/A (-30 to user)
    Description: Among the most unholy techniques, the Devil control or Unholy control was a result of the sealing of the most unholy people and techniques. The remains of the people/techniques resulted of gathering of strong yet dark chakra and started gathering force till it was deducted in the form of this mask. The mask can be wore by the user to increase the power of (+20)Ninjutsu and (+20)Taijutsu to the next level. Most A-Rank techs become S-Rank due to this mask. This mask acts much like a curse mark but causes greater damage and pain to user.(-30 from activation)
    Note: ~Summoning the mask counts as a turn~
    ~The mask lasts for 5 turns~
    ~ After the mask is dissummoned, the user can peform only 2 moves per turn~
    ~Can only be wore by pradattauchiha~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ 3 things. It was done before. Bleach techniques were submitted so many times I can't even remember them all. This technique is a variation of a curse mark and is hence forbidden (also the ability given are OP).

    (Katon: Toko Itami)- Endless Pain
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will focus katon chakra in the hand and then turns them into ash while making physical contact with the opponent so that the ash sticks in certain part of the body that can be burned as per the user's wish. This technique is similar to Hidan's ritual but this technique is elemental and only causes burns
    Note: ~Can be used twice~
    ~only used by pradattauchiha~

    Feel Free To Edit

    ~Pending~ I really don't see how this technique is similar to Hidan's ritual, and in general, the description is sketchy. Re-submit with proper description (please don't come to my profile to clarify your technique, do so in your resubmission).
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 01-15-2012 at 10:48 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton/Katon: makai nigiri)-Earth/Fire :Hells Grip
    Typeffensive/Defensive
    Requirements: Must Know Earth and Fire A-ranks
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30 (+ 15 per turn active)
    Damage Points:60 (+10 per turn)
    Description:User performs 6 handseals and slams his hands on the ground. Chains made out of solid earth and blazing hot will wrap themselves around the oppoenents body. The chains will hold the enemy in place and since the chains are extremely hot. The chains will severly burn the opponent. The user must continue to send his chakra into the chains in order for it to continue to hold the oppoenent. The opponent will be in extreme pain.

    ~Note: can only be used once
    ~Note: Can only be taught by Roger23
    ~Note: The user most keep his hands in the ground for the chains to be active
    ~Note: Cant be used by clones

    (feel free to edit)

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kinjutsu Katon: Hinote Doki) Forbidden Fire Art: Infernal Wrath
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
    Description: The user makes one hand seal holding it as he charges his Katon Chakra, A symbolic ring of flame will form around a mid range area with the user in the center. The user will then rise his hands in the air releasing the Chakra in an all out blaze. anyone within the ring will be burned as columns of Flame rise from underneath them. Because of the intense heat the user will be chard causing damage upon himself.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Must have Mastered Fire Element.
    -No S-ranked or above Fire Next 2 turns.
    -Must Charge for 10 seconds.
    -User takes 30 damage.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent.

    ~Declined~ I'm ready to accept this one, even though a somewhat similar technique already exist, but you'll need to work the restrictions. -30 damages means nothing to me, and you should know that it doesn't affect you in a battle whatsoever. I want real physical damages from using this technique (unable to move, dizziness, burnt limb making them useless...etc).

    (Ken-Doujutsu: Abunai Kizu) Saber Eye Art: Critical Slash
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Using their Sharingan, the user will pinpoint the most critical attack point on the opponent slashing them with their blade which is charged with chakra, once the opponent is sliced the Chakra will be released acting as an "Intruder". This causes the opponents Chakra to concentrate on the point of attack, making it so the opponent is unable to gather enough chakra for powerful attacks of S-rank or higher.
    Note:
    -Requires an Uchiha bio with 3t Sharingan.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -Last 2 turns.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent.

    ~Declined~ Your chakra isn't white blood cells , I see no reason why your opponent's chakra would be dragged toward the wound. Unless there's some form of fuinjutsu placed when you slash your opponent, this technique won't work.

    (Kin-Kenjutsu: Klen Doki) Forbidden Saber Art: Slicing Wrath
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
    Description: The user dashes at the opponent as he charges chakra into his blade. he will then unleash a fury of overwhelming strikes and slashes at the opponent that appear as a blur that only Doujutsu can track, dicing the opponent. Because of focused amount of chakra in the blade, this attack is able to cut through Steal and even the Bone of an Kaguya. however, because of the speed and strain on the user, he will be left feeling drained.
    Note:
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Must have Mastered Kenjutsu.
    -No S-ranked or above Next turn.
    -No Kenjutsu next 3 turns
    -User takes 30 damage.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent.

    ~Declined~ Why is this even forbidden-rank? Also, I'll be leaving this technique to mugi once you resubmit, he's the Kaguya expert here
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 01-16-2012 at 01:22 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Silver Dust History: History: is the name of the weapon created by sasori and used by the Fourth Kazekage. Due to the magnetic properties of silver, small particles of it could be manipulated in a similar manner to that of the sand utilized by Shukaku's jinchūriki, through the Kazekage's Magnet Release kekkei genkai. sasori created this technique after capturing and killing the third kazekage. though, he he tried mixing silver powder and sand together, but the outcome was not as expected. the sand was to heavy and could not be manipulated properly. he later saw the fourth kazekage manipulate gold dust, in smaller particles and copied this method. it was success and proven very useful and easier to manipulate. before his death, the fourth kazekage found a large quantity of silver dust in a village that was destroyed ( from sasori 100 puppet army). he used this


    ( jiton: daiyamondo suna kusari )- Silver Dust Chain
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: Daiyamondo Suna usari is the first technique created for silver dust. This technique molds the user's silver dust into chains which, after materializing, can be used to bind the target.


    (Jiton: daiyamondo suna sotetsu) - Silver Dust Weapons

    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The User will causes a small quantity of Silver Dust to erupt from beneath the surface, by placing both of his palms onto the ground directly in front of him which the user can manipulate to make weopans and katanas


    (Jiton: daiyumondo suna sendon ) - Silver Dust Bullet

    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: the user forms an arch with the Silver Dust above their heads, then fires off dozens of harden silver dust balls at the enemy, in order to gain speed, they rotate very fast.

    ~All Declined~ This is considered a CE. In fact, silver already exist as a CE.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 01-16-2012 at 01:26 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Jūden no Dangan)- Sniper Art: Bullet Circuit
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 with clones)
    Damage: 60 (+20 with clones)
    Description: Several arrows surging with lightning energy are shot from the user's bow at high speed to accurately strike multiple targets. They each follow their own designated path and are seen as bright streaks of light, making them very difficult for non-doujutsu users to trace. Metal wires may be attached to and made more durable by the arrows' lightning so they could paralyze targets ensnared by them. When performed in collaboration with shadow clones, many additional arrows can be shot for a stronger attack.
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -No S-rank or higher lightning techniques next turn
    -Must have a bow

    ~Declined~ They should be easy to track if they're bright, take out the part about Doujutsu users having it easy and hard for non-Doujutsus. How many arrows can you shoot with this technique. Be precise in your resubmission.
    Resubmitting:

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Jūden no Dangan)- Sniper Art: Bullet Circuit
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 with clones)
    Damage: 60 (+20 with clones)
    Description: Six arrows surging with lightning energy are shot from the user's bow at high speed to accurately strike multiple targets. They each follow their own designated path and are seen as bright streaks of light. Metal wires may be attached to and made more durable by the arrows' lightning so they could paralyze targets ensnared by them. When performed in collaboration with a minimum of 2 shadow clones, an additional 6 arrows can be shot by each clone for a stronger attack.
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -No S-rank or higher lightning techniques next turn
    -Must have a bow

    ~Approved~

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    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Sonikku Dangan) Sniper Art: Sonic Bullet
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: An arrow infused with large amounts of wind chakra is shot from a bow at a target. The base of the arrow releases a pressurized stream of wind that propells it at incredible speeds. This, plus the wind chakra, allows it to pierce through nearly anything in its path with enough force to rip off limbs. By holding a handseal, the arrow's flight may be controlled by releasing additional streams from the sides of the arrow and manipulating the initial stream.
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -No S-rank wind jutsu can be used this turn or the next

    ~Declined~ Why would such a basic technique be S-rank? No free manipulation of the arrow, this would make it too similar to an existing technique. The arrow can't possibly pierce something of greater density (diamond, re-enforced kaguya bones, martensitic steel alloy...etc).

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Jūdan no Arashi) Sniper Art: Bullet Storm
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After forming 2 handseals the user creates 300 physical copies of a single flying arrow that all scatter in every direction with the same momentum as the original. The downside to this technique is if the user cannot find cover he may be struck by his own arrows.
    -Usable 4 times per battle

    ~Declined~ You can't leave the success of a technique up to chance, otherwise it's too easy to say: No arrow hit me, how lucky was I . Specify the direction and lower the arrow count.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 01-16-2012 at 01:37 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Aardvark
    Scroll Owner: Dawan
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    ~Approved~ A description would've been nice.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose: Petto elemento ryuujin)- Summoning: pet element dragon god
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user summons a baby elemental dragon. these dragon are baby dragons so they aren't able to use any jutsus other than for blowing fire and flying.
    there are baby dragons for every element. They are just personal summons and they are not be used in battle.

    this is just meant for the rp and not for battles

    ~Approved~ Nice to see you in this thread Papi
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    TSUBAKI(中務 椿, Nakatsukasa Tsubaki)
    Type:weapon
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:
    Tsubaki can only assit black star in battle as a weapon. She can not use jutsu or any attacks unless in weapon form. She has the ability to transform into 5 different types of weapons, 1. Shuriken 2.Chain scythe 3. Ninja sword 4.Smoke bomb 5.Uncanny sword CENTER]


    Chain scythe mode gives him the ability to attack from a distance. And multiple angles and postions


    Smoke bomb mode is a distraction to escape from sticky situations


    Shuriken mode is a long range weapon that can be thrown from a distance


    Ninja sword mode is a blade half the size of a regular a sword.

    [/CENTER]
    Uncanny sword mode is a regular length of a sword but its infused with shadow chakra making its apperance black. This mode increases Black Stars ablitiy to manipulate shadows granting him 5 plus damage using a shadow tech but the sword can not manipulate shadows on its own it only grants the user the +5 damage while the mode is active. But this mode drains his chakra and thus can only be used for 5 turns if it is used all 5 turns he will only be able to use B rank jutsu and lower for the remainder of the battle.
    CHANGING MODES COUNTS AS ONE MOVE
    (FEEL FREE TO EDIT)

    ~Declined~ Check the bold part. We discussed this via PM.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Kumori shikaku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Cloudy vision Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: A mere and simply earth technique. The user will either stomp, punch the ground or either form a single hand sign. Doing so a slight amount of earth particles, which is invisible for the naked eye, arises from the ground and at flies directly into the target's eyes, obiviously blinding the target temporary.

    ~Pending~ I'll need to talk this one over with you on msn.
    ~Declined~ Similar technique exists.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyouton: Reitō haiki-Mono no Dansu)-Ice Release: Dance of the Frozen Wastes
    Type: Offensive, Defensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-20 to user due to chakra loss)
    Description: The user will make three hand seals, and upon completing them, they release a great surge of ice chakra from their body. As the chakra leaves their body, they shall manipulate it so that the chakra takes on the shape of thousands of razor sharp, but small shards of ice. The shards of ice will move a short distance away from the user and form a bubble around themselves. If the user desires, the bubble does not have to be a full 360 degrees around themselves, thus, should they be standing on the ground, they are able to just have the bubble seemingly be right on top of the ground, rather then have it pass through it. This bubble will be several inches thick, and the shards of ice will be constantly moving around the edge of the bubble, thus giving the bubble a swirling appearance. Any normal object or person that comes into contact with the bubble will be cut to such a thorough level that it will appear as if the bubble ground the object/limb into nothingness (unless the object/limb is of a high enough rank that it is able to overpower the bubble), although the ice turns red due to the blood. By slightly altering the movement of the ice shards, the user is able to create small openings to allow themselves to see outside the bubble, as it is normally impossible to do so, unless one should have a byakugan. While this bubble is active, the user will be unable to perform any other jutsu. By making a single hand seal, the user is able to manipulate all of the shards in the bubble to move at a target with a high rate of speed and accuracy. When the shards are sent forth, they will part around the users body, thus leaving the user unharmed, and continuing on at the target. Should the target be hit by the shards, just as earlier stated, they shall be seemingly cut on such a thorough level that they appear to be ground into nothingness, although the ice turns red due to the blood. After travelling a mid range, the ice shards simply fade away into nothingness.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: After this technique is used, the user will be unable to perform any ice jutsu for full two turns.
    Note: After this technique is used, the user will be unable to perform S-Rank or above water or wind jutsu for the following turn.
    Note: After this technique, the user will be exhausted and will have slower reflexes the turn after it is used.
    Note: The bubble can be active for a maximum of two turns, including the one it was created. If it is still active at the end of the second turn, it will simply fade away.
    Note: Can only be taught by Inch.

    ~Declined~ Two things I need you to clarify in your resubmission: can you control the shards when you direct them at your opponent or will they fly toward him in a straight, unalterable line? Secondly, how could the shards destroy any object (or even your opponent) if their density is higher than the ice? Ice couldn't possibly cut through diamond or steel. Oh wait, one last thing, why is it forbidden? I see you've added a lot of restrictions, but the description of the technique doesn't explain why it should be forbidden...it doesn't seem to be dangerous for the user to use.

    (Hyouton: Yuki no Suishin Gijutsu)-Ice Release: Snow Propulsion Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will stream chakra through their feet and into the snow they are standing on. They will then use their chakra to manipulate the snow so that it suddenly moves and pushes the user into the air at a great raid of speed. The user is able to control at which angle they are propelled, though they do have to be propelled in the air. To use this technique, the user must have a reasonable amount of snow to be standing on. For example, if the snow the user was created by snow falling from the sky, the ground must be effectively covered in snow: a slight dusting obviously won't work.

    ~Declined~ A similar technique already exist but with another element.

    Quote Originally Posted by Inch View Post
    (Hyoton: Reitō no Kami no Hari Chiryō)-Ice Release: Acupuncture of the Frozen Gods
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user touches his index finger to his thumb and focuses their ice chakra between them, and creates a needle made of ice. The user then focuses a great surge of ice chakra into the needle, and manipulates the shape of the needle to rapidly elongate in a straight direction at a high speed. The tip of the needle is razor sharp, and the ice it is made out of is dense. Because it is a needle and is very thin, if the needle were to be pointed at someone since it was created, they would have no way of knowing it was there, unless they had a doujutsu or some other chakra sensing ability. Although the needle would normally be very brittle due to it's thinness, however, by infusing their ice chakra in the needle, the user is able to reinforce the needle so that it is extremely hard for the duration of the turn it was created, however, it is extremely brittle on all turns after this, and can be broken by C-Rank and up taijutsu attacks.
    Note: On the turn after this jutsu is used, the user is unable to perform S-Rank or higher Ice jutsu, due to the amount of ice chakra used to surge the needle forward.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Only usable by Inch.

    ~Declined~ I still think you haven't fixed the problem presented by last mod who checked your CJ. Adding chakra isn't always the solution, sometime we need a logic reasoning behind the technique.
    Resubmitting:

    (Hyoton: Reitō no Kami no Hari Chiryō)-Ice Release: Acupuncture of the Frozen Gods
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user touches his index finger to his thumb and focuses their ice chakra between them, and creates a needle made of ice. The user then focuses a great surge of ice chakra into the needle, and manipulates the shape of the needle to rapidly elongate in a straight direction at a high speed. The tip of the needle is extremely pointy and sharp, thus allowing it to pierce skin/objects quite easily. Because it is a needle and is very thin, if the needle were to be pointed at someone since it was created, they would have no way of knowing it was there, unless they had a doujutsu or some other chakra sensing ability. Because the needle is very thing and made out of ice, it is very brittle. As a result of this, it is weaker when attacked from the side, and thus, when an object of B-Rank or above that has shattering capabilities (IE taijutsu, earth jutsu, anything that can shatter ice, really) hits it from the side, although this does not hold true if the object hits the needle head on.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: Can only be taught by Inch

    I removed the first restriction, as I feel like the bolded part at the bottom makes it far less powerful. Feel free to edit any numbers/specifications on this if you think they're off. :\

    ~Declined~ I have one last problem with this technique...it's basically a one hit K.O if you don't have a doujutsu. It's fast, impossible to see, and let's face it, it won't make a whole lot of sound. You need to either take away that part or alter it (very hard to see, impossible to see when slightly dark outside...etc).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton:Mizu Neko)-Water Release: Water Cat
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:10
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: User creates a cat from water. The cat will start meowing, annoying the opponent and also distracting him from the fight.
    Note: Can be used only by This is my Username
    Note: Can be used only 3 times in a battle.

    ~Approved~ O_o
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Hito-gui jinshu) Wind release: Cannibalization
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing 12 handseals, the user manipulates a large area of wind from around the field into a large ball. He compresses the ball into a microscopic level, opens his mouth wide, bites down, and releases it, causing a massive explosion of wind to ensue, and leave a large crater in the ground in the area hit. Anything within short range of the explosion seems to have been "eaten" by the user.
    Note: Can only be used by a master of wind
    Note: IF the user is short range of the explosion, than he can harm himself as well.
    Note: Can only be used by Doctor Kaguya

    Note to the mods: What I mean by "eating" should look something like this:


    ~Declined~ I can't approve that O__O, it's a mix between existing technique, it's OP (since there's basically no way of avoiding it unless you know what the technique does) and there's basically no restrictions.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (chakra tsume) - chakra claw
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description- The user will quickly focus his chakra in his hand and will create claws in each of his hand this claw are very sharp and powerful and can pierce through anything thus granting him many power and thus grant the user to cut through B rank techniques the technique will still continue to move but by getting split by the claw and thus saving the user

    ~can only be used by Wolverine bio~
    ~can only be used by gitanshu and whom he allow ~
    ~no S rank techs till they are in play ~


    ~Declined~ Cutting through anything? Cutting through B-ranks any times you want? With no restrictions on the time or usages? No.

    (Raiton- maru) lightning sphere
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description- The user will quickly focus on his lightning chakra and quickly release it in front of him and quickly create a circle out of it in front of him which will be able to block earth base attack up to A rank because of elemental advantage and many spear like structure can emerge from it for attacking purpose which can reach upto mid range .
    ~can only be used by gitanshu and whom he allow ~
    ~no S rank techs in the same turn it is used and as well as no lightning base technique in the same turn~
    ~Must have mastered lightning~
    ~Can only be used 3 times~


    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exists.

    (Katon- maru) Fire sphere
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description- The user will quickly focus on his fire chakra and quickly release it in front of him and quickly create a circle out of it in front of him which will be able to block Wind base attack up to A rank because of elemental advantage and many spear like structure can emerge from it for attacking purpose which can reach upto mid range .
    ~Can only be used 3 times~
    ~can only be used by gitanshu and whom he allow ~
    ~no S rank techs in the same turn it is used and as well as no fire base technique in the same turn~



    Please add any restriction if needed

    ~Declined~ Same as above.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Yoshimitsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Puppet
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: - (30 to summon)
    Damage Points: -
    Description:
    → Yoshimitsu is a puppet created long ago by Alternative which has had many tweaks to it to make it a viable puppet. He takes on the form of a Samurai, though can't use Samurai techniques. It is primarily made of a sturdy wood, with pieces of refined metal across it's face, ribs and legs to imitate a skeletal look. It is slightly taller than the average human, standing tall at approx. 2m and seems to have an athletic build. It's left wrist is mechanical, being able to twirl it around in haste. In it's left hand it wields a katana which is his primary weapon used for attacking. The user is able to use Kenjutsu techniques through the puppet, so long as the user has gone through the required training for it. The katana is also said to be cursed. Yoshimitsu's sword isn't seeped in poison, because it's based on a samurai from ancient folklore, which doesn't believe in using such toxins in such a way. Yoshimitsu is also able to use all basic puppet techniques, including Senbon Rain from it's right hand (fingertips), creating a Chakra shield using it's right arm, and able to emit either poison smoke or poison capsules which emit gas on hitting the floor through a compartment in it's mouth.
    Notes:
    → Yoshimitsu cannot be summoned into battle without proper Fuuinjutsu training
    → While wielding the katana, the puppet cannot use any standard puppet jutsu
    → Kenjutsu moves used through the puppet count as a move
    → Can only use Kenjutsu techniques up to A-Rank
    → Can only be used by those allowed by Alternative

    Looks like this:




    ~Approved~

    ======================


    (Manji tonbo) - Manji Dragonfly
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    → The user controls Yoshimitsu to holding it's sword so that the hilt is on a 90 degree angle with it's arm. By holding the sword up, the user makes Yoshimitsu jump into the air and spin it's sword using it's mechanical wrist, causing it to hover with ease for approx. 3 seconds. From there, the user controls Yoshimitsu to performing a downward slash onto the opponent, causing a major vertical severing.
    Notes:
    → Must know Puppet Jutsu
    → Can only be used with a Yoshimitsu puppet
    → Because of chakra strain, this can only be used thrice in battle
    → Can only be used once every two turns
    → Can only be used by those Alternative allows

    ~Approved~
    ======================


    (Harakiri) - Disembowelment
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    → Once Yoshimitsu draws close to the opponent, with great speed, it turns backwards and stabs the opponent through itself. Through stabbing itself in this way, Yoshimitsu hits a poison gland built into the puppet, intoxicating the opponent upon puncturing them.
    Notes:
    → Must know Puppet Jutsu
    → Can only be used by a Yoshimitsu puppet
    → Because of the effect, this can only be used once a battle
    → After usage, poison cannot be used throughout it's weapons for the remainder of the match
    → The puppet is left extremely weakened after this, only to be allowed to use B-Rank and lower puppet jutsu
    → Can only be used by those Alternative allows



    Feel free to edit however you wish. ^^

    ~Approved~ I can't remember the last time I approved 3 out of 3 submissions. Congrats ^^

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kusabana Touken)-Flower swords
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    The two flower swords are two special swords who are made to the great warrior "Rose Blade" shanks. When Shanks died the swords where passed on to his son, "Rose Blade" Vista. The two swords may look normal, but they are all other then that. The Rose swords are made in that way that when elemental chakra has been channeled trough it doesn't just react as normal swords, instead it produces flowers. The strength and type of flowers depends on what type of chakra gets channeled trough it. Three different elements can be channeled trough the swords, and that's Fire, Lightning and Water.

    -When water is channeled trough the swords, they will create large flowers that can be used to guard against incoming kunais or taijutsu attacks. The large flowers are dripping wet due to the water so they are able to guard against C-Ranked fire attacks.
    -When lightning is channeled trough the swords, they will create sharp and fast rose leafs that can be sent piercing against an opponent.
    -When fire is channeled trough the sword, they will create burning leaves that can be sent against an opponent. The leafs will burn away after one round, but if they hit they leave great damage.

    ~Note: Must have a Vista bio
    ~Note 2: To use the special abilities Vista must use jutsus that counts as 1/3 moves pr. Turn (read jutsu under this one to understan better)

    ~Declined~ This is no different than any other elemental blast shot out of a sword, you simply shaped it as flowers. There's only the water one who could be accepted, but you'd need to elaborate on the defense in general, I'm not sure I understand where the flower appears and how it defends you.

    (Ro-zo Tatsumaki)-Rose Tornado
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Vista will channel lightning chakra into his two flower swords and as he slash against an opponent with them he releases the chakra along with 100 small rose leafs. The leafs are small but very sharp due to the ligthning, and they move in a big and round tornado. The tornado is made in that way that it's powers are weakened as it reaches longer distant, so when it reaches long-range they do almost no damage to the opponent on impact. They are therefore strongest at short-range. The rose blades will also paralyze everyone that gets hit by them.
    ~Note: Must have a Vista bio

    (Giganto Kusabana)-Giant flowers
    Rank: B
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    While holding the flower swords, Vista will channel lots of water chakra into them. When the swords are filled with chakra, Vista performs a slash with the swords, and creates giant flowers that's soaked in water. The flowers can't move nor be used as an attack against the opponent, all they can do is guard against incoming attacks. The flowers can guard against fire attacks due to all the water, and they can guard against bombs and kunais. The flowers will not dissapear from the field unless they are destroyed. This flower reacts to water that way that it absorbs water that's from B-Rank and below, and it uses that water to grow. If the water is stronger the flowers will die due too to much water at one time.
    ~Must have a Vista bio
    ~Can only be used 3 times each battle

    ~Both Declined~ The swords weren't approved.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Cassowary
    Scroll Owner: Kyuubisan
    Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: JinsoAkuma (Will add if approved)
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: I will add them if approved
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    Those who sign this contract must get this tattoo on their upper right bicep:



    ~Approved~

    (Suiton:Mizu no hakai) - Water Style: Water Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gathers their Suiton chakra and forms countless numbers of small water pellets in a disconnected 6 foot wall in front of them. They then release them at their opponent, like the water bullet technique, only many more water bullets.
    -Must be a Hozuki member to use this
    ~can only be taught by Kyuubisan
    ~can only be used 2 per battle

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Jigoku no ringu)- Ring of Hell
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A-S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40-50
    Damage:
    Description: The user will wear a ring on his or her right hand. The ring is locked with a tremendous amount of chakra that only certain users may be capable of harnessing. The chakra is a different color then the normal blue it is a metallic color looking almost silvery. It is a black color though it is made from tungsten one of the strongest metals around.
    -A ranked
    Chakra cost: (40)
    Range: Depends on the weapon used
    (Short term) Weapon creation
    The user may manipulate the chakra to make it into almost any weapon ie. Sword, flail, bullet (not gun just the bullet), and any other imaginable (that is allowed by NB’s rules)
    Short term Restrictions
    ~When in use (Weapons actually being used) other jutsus can not be used
    -S ranked
    (Semi-long term) Chakra infusion (After use the user loses 20 health and 20 chakra plus an additional 50)
    The ring is said to be made from the pits of hell and when worn by the user it was made for (Kyuubisan) and when worn long enough the chakra of the user and the rings chakra will combine making the user capable of using one super charged attack before the user reverts back to a weakened state of their original state. (Attack doubles in strength and size using 20 of the users main chakra and depleting the rings chakra)
    Semi-long term restrictions
    ~Once the user reverts back to a weakened state it takes 3 turns for the users ring to come back to full strength
    ~The user may only use Semi-long term form once
    ~It takes 2 turns for the ring to go from short term to long term

    (May only be used by Kyuubisan)

    ~Declined~ I didn't even read it. If you submit techniques that can be used on different rank, they count as two different technique and I want them submitted individually. Let this be your warning, next time you do this you'll be banned from this thread if you exceed your 3 CJ submission a week.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Tatsumaki)-Wind release: Tornado shield(No Japanese name for shield)
    Type: Defensive but can damage the opponent if He/She gets caught in it
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60(If the opponent gets caught in it)
    Description: The user performs two handseals and wind starts to spin around the opponent at a very fast speed like a not moving tornado however this protects the user from above as well due to the very fast speed of the wind and can even protect the user from a small to medium explosion.
    ~This jutsu can only protect the user against weapons,taijutsu and up to D rank jutsus and not any other jutsus.
    ~The user cannot perform another wind style jutsu for two turns.
    ~Can only be used by the people aradmehr allows to use.
    ~Can also defend against jutsus that throw things like sand needles,sand shuriken,wind demon wind shuriken etc. that are from D-rank to A-rank.

    ~Declined~ This technique doesn't make any sense. You create the wind around your opponent, yet you're protected from above? Re-read yourself, the description is a mess.

    (Kibaku kage bunshin no jutsu)Exploding shadow clone jutsu.
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: (When it explodes it will cause 40 damage to the person that is caught in it)
    Description: The user creates a shadow clone and it can do anything a shadow clone can do and when hit will poof away however these clones have a self destruction ability that when they self destruct they will explode,causing a small to medium explosion(Depends on the number of clones made)And will cause damage to anyone that is caught in it.But the self destruct ability is only activated when the user performs one handseal and activates the self destruct ability.
    ~Can only be used thrice per battle.
    ~If the user has performed 3 bunshin or kage bunshin jutsus already he/she may not use this jutsu until the end of the battle.
    ~Each time the user performs this jutsu,he/she can make from 1 to 3 at a time.
    ~When self destruct ability is activated the clone will explode if hit.
    ~Must have the permission of aradmehr to be used.

    ~Declined~ This is an already existing cannon. If you knew that and still did this similar a technique I could ban you from this thread for a week. Let this be a warning, never re-submit already existing cannon techniques.

    (Raiton: Denkou Henkai no jutsu)Lighting release: Lightning transformation jutsu
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 30
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to transform into lightning and avoid 1 or 2 enemy attacks(Only if the attacks were at the same time this jutsu can avoid both)And this jutsu is activated by performing one handseal and allows the user to transform into lightning for 10 seconds maximum.
    ~This jutsu can only be done twice per battle.
    ~If the user has already performed the substitusion jutsu this jutsu can only be used once until the end of the battle.
    ~Must have permission from aradmehr to be used.
    ~After transforming into lightning,the user can move at the maximum of 8 meters to a side(if He/she wants to).
    ~This jutsu cannot harm the opponent if reaches him/her.

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Elemental transformations are banned from this thread.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Moth Of Salvation(ga-gedatsu)
    Rank-S
    Type-Weapon/Summon
    Range-Short/Mid
    Chakra-40(-5 per turn)
    Damage-80
    Description-
    The user applies a small amount of chakra to his/her Mark of the Monarch tattoo (owned by anyone who has signed the Moth summoning contract) and the user summons the Moth of Salvation, a four foot long moth, that can freely transform into a large four foot long trident. While summoned the Moth can pinpoint the opponent and type of chakra being used. If the User's Chakra flow is altered, the moth can inject small amounts of chakra into the user.
    -Can only use abilities 5 times per battle.
    -Must be taught by Icemyster

    ~Declined~ No sensory abilities/summons are allowed anymore. Check Zen's last post here.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    it's been a week.

    (Juho Tsuin Raino no Ashi) Gentle Step Twin Rhino Feet
    Rank: S
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Similar to (Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists, the user forms two large rhino head-shaped shrouds of chakra around their leg, enabling the user to kick through even against Doton techniques.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 4x
    ~Must be taught by Dr. House
    ~Must master and have a great control over Jyuuken
    ~Only may sannin use this.

    ~Declined~ "through even against Doton techniques", to what extent can this be applied? Can you break through S-rank Doton? I'd like to remember you (and anyone reading this), that raw chakra is weaker than elemental chakra. If you'd like some clarification on that, come to my profile.

    (Doton/Suiton:Hebi no hōkō) Earth and Water Release: Roar of a Lion
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: As the user forms 2 hand seals and slams his hand on the ground, a giant 8 by 10 meter wide lion head will erupt from the ground under the enemy. As the lion has erupted from the ground as its beginning to close its giant mouth on the enemy, water will erupt from the lion's mouth in order to entrap the enemy in water, then the lion will entrap the opponent in its mouth. As the enemy got entrapped within its mouth, the lion will smash itself into the ground, destroying itself and anything trapped within it. The water will entrap the enemy, and right after that, the lion will close its mouth. Despite the size of the lion, the lion will be able to reach into the skies, and the user may only use it within Mid-Long range.
    Notes:
    ~Can be used twice
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~higher then S-ranked earth can't be done in the same/next turn.
    ~Must master Earth
    ~Doujutsu may see it

    ~Declined~ Okay, two things: reaching into the skies? How far are you referring to? Then, you can't use two elements in one move unless you've undergone Yin Yang training. Did you?

    (Hakke Chakurasutorīmu Gijutsu ) 8 Trigrams Chakra Stream Techniques
    Rank: S
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 See Notes)
    Damage Points: 80 (-10 to user)
    Description: This jutsu is basically the same concept as "Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms" as it is made up of the same ability, but it for example could take shape of a Lion, or even a wall made of constant excertion of chakra stream. From years of training, the user had came to master the flexibility of the arms and as the user is emiting a constant stream of chakra from his palm, as because of the hyuuga's hand movement is extremely fast (his movements becomes a blur), with extreme precise, the user will be able to create a figure like lion, or even a simple wall.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 3x
    ~This is an extremely difficult technique, and only sannin, and master of Jyuuken may perform this, who had their bio for over 3 months as of the mastery of Gentle fist with it.
    ~ The +5 is because of the extreme/precise chakra maneuvering.
    ~ No Gentle fist may be performed for the same and next turn.
    ~ The user takes -10 Health because of the extreme shaping of figures.

    Note for checker: Basically the texture of the jutsu will look like this. As you see a barrier here, imagine this barrier to be shaped of a wall or a head of a lion, made of that texture.



    Note to checker: I was thinking to made this a style of gentle fist, and then branch off different techniques out of it, like a dome or a wall. What do you think?

    ~Pending~ I like the general concept, though I wouldn't extend it to a taijutsu style. First of all, why does this technique do 80 damages? It's originally meant to be a defensive technique and can push back an enemy when he hit it directly, but it shouldn't be considered as strong as an offensive jutsu. I'm ready to accept the 80 damage if you explain why in the resubmission.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    We're back in business people :izuna:

    Submissions starting on the 01/09/2012 ending on the 01/15/2012
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Kuroi Kurohyou) - Earth release: Black Panthers
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user quickly concentrates his doton chakra in his hands and quickly touches the ground to release 2 panthers made out of Earth to run at the opponent at full force and take down the opponent savagely without trouble upon impact. The user can take his hands of the ground and the jutsu will still be active however to control the panthers the user must bring his hands back to the ground. If the users hands are not touching the ground, the panthers will simply attack the opponent whenever they see him/her.
    Note: can only be used by RockLeeGreenBeast and those he shares this jutsu with.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times.
    Note: Panthers must be destroyed with an approperate jutsu.
    Note: Panthers disperse after 3 turns if they are not destroyed.
    Note: No S-rank Earth jutsus next turn.
    Note: User can order the Panthers and tell them what to do as long as his hands are still touching the ground.

    ~Approved~

    (Kirihidoku Shiyou Tenokou Bushido) - Releasing method of the samurai
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: -
    Description: At the beginning of the battle the user gathers a little amount of his chakra and channels it inside the metal frame of his katanas tsuba. The chakra inside the tsuba is then released into the opponents chakra flow if it senses foreign chakra, by doing this it releases the user from any genjutsu that the user might be affected by.(However genjutsus such as Tsukuyomi and Tayuyas Sound genjutsu are not affected by this.)
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Can only be used by a samurai.
    Note: It doesn't have to be used at the beginning of the battle.
    Note: Once the chakra is inside the tsuba it stays there until a genjutsu is cast and the chakra is used to release the user from the genjutsu.


    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Iaidō- Hayai Chakra Kaihou) - Art of Quick Draw and re-sheathing the sword- Quick Chakra Release
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user gather his chakra and as he presses the Tsuba with left thumb the Katana is slightly unsheaved. At that instant moment he then channels his chakra into the blade and releases the wave of chakra as the blade is fully unsheaved. This happens really fast and is a method of stopping ninja enemies from using hand seals and thus from using ninjutsu.
    Note: Can only be used by a samurai bio.

    To find out more about about my last samurai technique you can click here and go to the second post made by Zerabitu to see how the technique works.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Yusuke- View Post
    RESUBMITTING ALL IN QUOTE :

    Removed some of the 'and's and commas and stuff so that it isn't too misleading >_< I don't wanna trick people with words...

    (Doton : Yochizaisan) - Earth Release : Property of the Earth
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user will slam both hands, widespreading his earth chakra throughout the entire battlefield, both behind and in front. The moment the user slams his hands onto the ground, he can safely assume that his target(s)' are already within the clutches of his technique. Nothing will happen to them for now though. The purpose of this technique is to prevent the enemy from taking air advantage or escaping by flying into the sky by having several earth hooks burst out of the ground and grapple them the moment they try to jump/fly/other actions that involves going into the air and pull them back down onto the earth, hurting them in the process. As long as the enemy stays on the ground, no harm will be done to them up until the point till the technique wears off.

    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : This technique lasts for five of the user's turns
    Note : Can be released by performing the Snake handseal
    Note : No S-rank or above earth techniques can be used while active
    Note : The earth hooks will grapple all enemies affected by the technique if they try to even jump
    Note : No damage shall be done to the enemy as long as he doesn't take it into the air and stay on land

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ At first I liked the idea, but then I started thinking about all the possibilities in which this technique could go wrong...What would happen if I simply ran forward at high speed, hence touching the ground every 3-4 seconds (like they do in the anime when they jump from tree to tree). Or what would happen if I fall down a cliff? Too many possibilities and I won't have you enumerate them all in this technique.
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    (Bijuu : Sabureoni toutatsu) - Tailed Beast Technique : Sand Demon's Arrival
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : When this technique is in play, sand that can be found around the field starts manifesting the shapes of ghouls made out of sand. This happens due to the presence of the Shukaku's bijuu chakra being exposed to the surrounding. These ghouls will attack anything that is a threat to the user. Despite being made out of sand, these ghouls travel very fast through the air by turning into sand particles and drifting through the air. The number of ghouls determines the size of each and every one of the ghoul. The more ghouls there are, the smaller they are. If a single sand ghoul is summoned, it can be the size of the Shukaku but if there are two, each will be half the size of the Shukaku.

    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used by the Jinchuuriki of the Ichibi
    Note : Must be in Incomplete/Complete Form at the least
    Note : The sand ghouls cannot perform any techniques
    Note : Sand ghouls are unable of performing sand techniques
    Note : There can only be a maximum of 2 sand ghouls present on the field
    Note : Sand ghouls can only be in play for at least three turns if not destroyed
    Note : Sand ghouls can extend out parts of their body just like the chakra arms of bijuus
    Note : Able to reform with nearby sand if hit by a physical form of attack or a part of it is destroyed

    ~Declined~ OP. Summoning sand beings that can dematerialize and rematerialize at will to move faster around the field, and those beings can be as big as a Bijuu? No.[/COLOR]
    Resubmitting :

    Removed ability to rematerialize/dematerialize and reworked reformation ability and its size

    (Bijuu : Sabureoni toutatsu) - Tailed Beast Technique : Sand Demon's Arrival
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : When this technique is in play, sand that can be found around the field starts manifesting the shapes of ghouls made out of sand. This happens due to the presence of the Shukaku's bijuu chakra being exposed to the surrounding. There can only be a maximum of three sand ghouls. If a single sand ghoul is created, it will be the size of a tree/lamp post. If two are created, each will be the size of a car that is placed upwards and finally, if there are three, each will be the size of the user.

    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used by the Jinchuuriki of the Ichibi
    Note : Must be in Incomplete/Complete Form at the least
    Note : The sand ghouls cannot perform any techniques
    Note : There can only be a maximum of three sand ghouls present on the field
    Note : Sand ghouls can only be in play for at least four turns if not destroyed
    Note : Sand ghouls can extend out parts of their body just like the chakra arms of bijuus
    Note : Cannot reform once it is destroyed whole and can only reform if parts are destroyed

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ I won't accept miniature bijuus as a custom, especially not when they can reform if not completely destroyed.
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    (Suna : Kamisorikujo) - Sand Style - Razor Destruction
    Rank : S / Forbidden
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : Once inside the defensive technique, 'Sphere of Sand', the user will be able to utilize this technique. The user will first clap his hand together and chant the word, 'Razor' for a few tiny moments. The next instant, the sphere will start rotating at extreme speed and levitate into the air. The user can go on and unleash the monstrosity that he has created with the last handseal, Snake, hence allowing it to expand out at a great pace across the battlefield covering a long-range radius with the user being at the epicenter of the whole thing. The next thing the user could do is to continue on after that one handseal with another three handseals along with burning more chakra, this would allow the sphere to rotate at an even greater speed thus, more cutting power and strength.

    Note : Can only be used by a sand user
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Each rank can only be done once per battle
    Note : Can only be done within the turn Sphere of Sand was activated or the turn after
    Note : Forbidden rank takes up an extra technique slot (2/3 of total jutsus that can be used)
    Note : During the period the extra handseals for the forbidden technique are made, the sphere could explode if disturbed (Water & Earth won't do it)
    Note : Must be at least A-rank to cause a paper-tag explosion that will cause slowed speed for handseals and legs (<--Sphere of Sand is A-rank )

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Seriously, you've been submitting nothing but unacceptably OP techniques lately. No restriction, up to Long range, two techniques in one (I've been declining a lot of those lately), and incredibly powerful as you stated it couldn't be disturbed by either earth or water technique. You couldn't possibly think this would get approved.

    (Fuuton/Doton/Suiton : Tsuchitaifuu) - Wind/Water Release : Earthen Typhoon
    Rank : Forbidden
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 50
    Damage points : 100
    Description : The user will perform two handseals (Ram, Boar) and end up with a clap. As the user was performing the handseals, he would have already have been channeling his wind chakra into the ground of the desired location and as the clap is made, the wind chakra would start spinning at high speeds to form a wide whirlwind. Initially, the wind chakra was molded within the ground and not above so the whirlwind is formed slightly underground. The whirlwind would drag along parts of the earth, showing a whirlwind would rocks flying in a circular manner in it. About this time, the user will then imbue his water chakra within the whirlwind to materialize a large volume of water that will soften the earth and turn it into mud. The end result would be a brown-like, high-speed, moving whirlwind. Unlike regular whirlwinds, this is hard due to the earthen features and just as sharp as Typhoon Water Vortex.

    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Must be Kage rank in order to utilize this technique
    Note : No A-rank or above wind and water techniques can be used in the same turn
    Note : Adding of water can be prevented if user is disturbed while or before clapping
    Note : If used short-range from the user, the user would get injured due to flying rocks that escapes the whirlwind
    Note : Even if not used in short-range, user suffers from over-usage of wind chakra hence cannot perform wind technique for the whole of next turn

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Yes, another DNR. I'm doing this so you stop submitting ridiculously OP technique. Using a forbidden technique twice, while using two chakra and you didn't even went through Yin Yang training? The restrictions don't cut it IMO. Yes it restricts your next turn but not enough for such a forbidden technique and certainly not enough on the physical aspect of a forbidden jutsu. You're clearly not physically affected by this jutsu.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (影ミラー - Kage mirā) Shadow Mirror
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User create a human-shaped same as enemy in front of him, he then take out a exact same shaped-weapon just like the target. He works like a mirror, doing the exact move as the enemy, as long as he can reach up the range. This is highly advanced technique of shadow. The user himself cannot use any other moves of shadow but he is limited with his chakra control so that the shadow can move properly and react the attacks fast enough. The move seen so similar but the shadow cannot redo elemental attacks so that he will change into a shield like structure and then reform continue to attack. It will move to short range first and then attack the enemy with taijutsu only. He can almost repel any taijutsu attack with the exact same moves. The user can instantly break connection with the shadow in instant.
    Notes:
    - No more Shadow tech unless the user break it.
    - Lasts every turn unless the user break it.
    - The shield transformation can protect up to A-rank techs.
    - The user is limited to 2 moves per turn and only allow to use B-rank techs.
    - Can only be used once per battle.

    ~Declined~ I'm not a grammar Nazi, but when I can't understand the description of the jutsu you're submitting, something's wrong. Re-read yourself, make it clearer and re-submit.

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    (Suiton: Mizu Iwa) Water Release: Water Rock
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user make some hand seals and then make a palm on the ground which release multiple Water Rock around him up to mid-range.

    Notes: These rocks are of various size and each can block up to B-rank attacks. The user after making, send more chakra making the water hardened like a rock. The user can also use this to make a single larger rock but it is limited to short-range but when done a single, it can protect very wide attacks.
    - Can only be used once in a battle
    - The user cannot use A-rank and higher water tech for next 2 turns
    - Must be used on Water Source

    ~Declined~ First of all, calling them rocks doesn't change the fact that they'll be round projectiles and we already have several jutsu for that. Secondly, you didn't precise the amount of projectiles, which is unacceptable since you could say you fired a thousand B-rank bullets. The more you have, the lower the rank of each water bullet.

    (Suiton: Kage Mizu Bakudan) Water Release: Shadow Water Bomb
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:User creates a ball of water in which his shadow chakra are molded. When the ball is released, and it is launched towards the enemy, the enemy takes some damage but if launched towards the shadow, the ball can summon the shadow chakra and control the target. The user can launch it multiple time. Tactic is that the user can launch it to the body whilst he launch more at the shadow.
    Notes
    - The shadow possession occur if succeed
    - Can launch multiple balls
    - No A rank or higher water and shadow tech in next 2 turns
    - Can only be used thrice in battle.
    ~Declined~ Same as above: how many? In fact, for this technique, just make it one water ball. The only reason I'm considering accepting this one is because it's actually different from any water projectile that was ever submitted. Keep the core of this technique (your Shadow chakra hidden in the sphere) and just make it a simply attack toward your opponent.
    (Suiton: Mizu Iwa) Water Release: Water Rock
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user make some hand seals and then make a palm on the ground which release multiple Water Rock from the water around him up to mid-range. These rocks are of medium size and each can block up to B-rank attacks. The user after making, send more chakra making the water hardened like a rock, making it denser to be simple. The user can also use this to make a single larger rock but it is limited to short-range and when done a single, it can protect up to A-rank. Due to that it is created many rocks at once, the user exhaust from it but can block multiple attacks.
    Notes
    - Can only be used twice in a battle
    - The user cannot use A-rank and higher water tech for next 2 turns
    I don't know why, when I edit again the description turn only into one sentence O.o and it is not a projectile, it create a rock-shaped water to protect the user


    ~Declined~ You completely ignored what I said in your last submission.

    (Suiton: Kage Mizu Bakudan) Water Release: Shadow Water Bomb
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:User creates a large ball of water in which his shadow chakra are molded. When the ball is released, and it is launched towards the enemy, the enemy takes some damage but if launched towards the shadow, the ball can summon the shadow chakra and control the target.
    - The shadow possession occur if succeed
    - No A rank or higher water and shadow tech in next 2 turns
    - Can only be used thrice in battle.

    ~Declined~ When re-submitting/editing jutsus, you need to put the added/altered part in bold. If you only took out part of your jutsu, you need to mention what was taken away.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Feel free to edit anything which you feel needs to be edited ^_^
    Weapon- (Ransadōru Verude)-Green Lancer
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The Green Lancer is a double-sided lance. (Picture is on the right) The Green Lancer is made of very tough iron, and cannot be broken easily. The ends of the weapon is extremely sharp, and can pierce through human bodies with almost no effort. The greatest ability of this "weapon" is that Nel can throw this lance with great force at the opponent in battle. If Nel focus her chakra into the weapon and throws it at the opponent, The Green Lancer will travel at extreme speeds towards the opponent. The catch is that, as the Green Lancer travels through the air, it starts to spin and build up energy. The energy is pink in colour and the Lance continues to build up momentum and power. When it hits the opponent, it acts as a drill and it inflicts extreme piercing damage. Due to the power it got from all the spinning, the Green Lancer is able to pierce through B-rank defences and below. It can travel up to mid-range and it will return to the user after being thrown

    - Can only be used or allowed by me
    - If allowed, the person cannot use this weapon against me in a battle
    - There is a cooldown of 2 turns before you can throw the weapon with great force again.

    I know the translation isn't completely accurate, but I couldn't find any translation.

    ~Declined~ Restrictions are off. Such a technique need to be restricted to a certain number of use per match.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Izumi Annai) - Earth Style: The Fountain of Guidance
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing the Boar → Dog hand seals, the user will focus chakra into the ground, causing a body of earth to rise up from the ground creating two monoliths wielding a large bowl that has a runway to drain water/mud in any desired direction. As the monoliths are being created, the user will have to decide on which way the drain mechanism will be created. This technique does not create water in any shape or form.

    Note: Can be used three times per battle
    Note: Must have mastered Earth
    Note: Must be taught by Mathias



    ~Approved~ Keep the image in the description of the technique. +1 for the effort with paint

    (Sogeki Geijutsu: Ransōtengai) - Sniper Arts: Heavenly Suit
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 chakra per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Ransōtengai was created by Sellanes, he was Mathias' grand-father. Sellanes was the first and only bow master of his time. During the first great ninja war, Sellanes created the technique so that he could continue fighting and shooting arrows while having dislocated and immobilized limbs. This technique has been passed down from generation to generation between sniper prodigies. The technique involves pushing shape manipulation to its absolute limits. The user will gather up and release pure chakra outwards, coating his immobilized limbs and dislocated joints with a web-like effect, to forcefully move them. However, it does come with some drawbacks. The user will only be able to use Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Sniper Arts, and Regular Ninjutsu while this technique is active. This technique does not enhance speed nor strength.

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Must have knowledge over Sniper Arts
    Note: The technique lasts for three turns
    Note: No Sniper Arts for two turns after the technique ends.
    Note: After the technique is over, the user will no longer have any control over those limbs for the rest of the battle
    Note: Due to forcefully pushing the bodies' limbs/joints to their limits, the user will receive -5 damage per turn.
    Note: Can only be used by Mathias.




    ~Declined~ I have no trouble with the actual technique (though I have my doubts on whether or not it was already done), but the restrictions are off. -5 doesn't mean anything in a fight, and such a technique should come with some form of drawback other than no sniper arts for 2 turns. Let's face it, all the other restrictions don't affect you since you couldn't move your limbs to begin with before using this technique.

    (Sogeki Geijutsu: Za Tama Hogosha) - Sniper Arts: The Soul Guardian
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: Mathias will gather up and release 50% of his chakra reserves. As the chakra is pouring out of his body, it will manifest a very bright blue angelic wing on his left shoulder, surging with energy. He will then hold out his hand and gather all that chakra into a very powerful arrow, while pulling the string of his bow, releasing the arrow towards his target. As the arrow is travelling it will leave shock wave-like effects throughout the air. The speed in which the arrow is travelling can only be tracked by 3T sharingan or above. As the arrow is travelling it will expand in size, leaving a huge crator throughout the path that it is travelling.

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: No usage of bow or sniper art techniques for the rest of the battle
    Note: No ninjutsu of any kind (including elemental ninjutsus) for one turn after this technique is performed.
    Note: The used hand to pull the string can not be used to perform hand seals for 2 turns.
    Note: 40 damage to the user
    Note: 50% of the user's chakra is drained.
    Note: The user wont be able to run or walk for two turns due to exhaustion and chakra loss.
    Note: This counts as 2 of the 3 moves per turn
    Note: Can only be used by Mathias



    3:48 - 3:55


    Feel free to edit, to help its approval ^_^

    ~Approved~ Check the bold parts.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 01-18-2012 at 11:18 PM.

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