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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Umi no ō no Fīrudo) - Water Style: Field of Sea Kings
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By distributing one's own suiton chakra around whole battlefield, user can enhance the forming speed (and speed in general) of water jutsus two fold.
    *Lasts for 4 turns
    *Can be only used once
    *Can be only used by Kaziname

    ~Declined~ Interesting idea, please tell me (and be precise), how will your enemy be able to use that water if it's highly infused with your chakra? If your answer is; "he can't use it", then it's an auto-decline. You could be standing on the sea (terrain) and hence make it impossible for your enemy to do anything.

    (Suton: Umi no Me) - Water Style: Eyes of the Sea
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing suiton chakra user is able to create eyes of water to aid him in combat by covering blind spots or in spying by allowing him to scan the area without exposing himself to danger. Eyes hover on the place they were created and don't repair themselves after getting damaged.

    ~Declined~ I've seen that jutsu before, so if it's your re-submission, please add the original in your post. Also, how many eyes? What range can they get away from you? Restrictions?

    (Shio no Hakobi-shu) - Tide Bringer
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This sword was said to be wielded even by the infamous "Blackbeard". Sword was held as the strongest of all swords on the sea and gave the user unparalleled mastery over water element. However, sword fell into oblivion once "Goddess of Water", strongest of all, was retrieved from the depths of seas. As everyone's attention followed "Goddess of Water", blood trail left by "Tide Bringer" was almost lost... There is rumor that some ninja found it and claimed it as his own, but it will take a while for the glory of "Tide Bringer" to reach it's old proportions.
    *The user will be able to use water jutsus with one hand seal less then normally as long he has Tide Bringer with him.
    *Sword gives the user's water jutsus +15 and the opponent -5 to his.
    *Sword can be infused with water chakra to attain chainsaw-like blade.
    Notes:
    *Sword is indestructible, though that doesn't mean it can destroy everything.
    *Looks: http://steelswords.com/pimages/thumb...38_inch_70.jpg

    This one was left for Caliburn to check, but... he never checked it :D

    ~Pending~ I'm almost certain I've seen and checked that one. When re-submitting a jutsu, you need to have the original in a quote and all the added details in your submission need to be in bold.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 09-16-2011 at 02:47 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Note: These are not required to be checked by Scary Yamato, as they were declined following general rules, not out of Scary Yamato's judgement...

    Quote Originally Posted by Luiz View Post
    (Oumu Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Pigmy no Buntai) Parrot Summoning Technique: Pygmy Squad
    Rank: B
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user is able to summon a squad of 6 gigantic pygmy parrots, thus standing at half the size of a human femur. They are very fast, but they're true power comes with the ability to freely shoot their beaks at bullet speed, regaining a new one each turn they're on the field. Once the beaks are about to hit someone, they grow to the size of a human hand and do a gripping motion to lock an opponent's limbs pinning them to a surface or choking them. The parrots can stay on the field for 3 turns, during which the user gains the ability to create a hand-sized beak and shoot it at bullet speed, a technique considered B rank. The pygmy parrots talk in unison, and so fast that no one understand them, ending every sentence with "Cara"
    *Can only be summoned twice per battle*


    (Oumu Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Lloyd no Chickin ) Parrot Summoning Technique: Lloyd, the Chicken
    Rank: D
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Pinocchio is a very dum looking parrot that can't fly, because it is in fact a chicken dressed as a parrot. It dwells among the Altorio parrots, without any apparent purpose, suspiciously looking at everyone, as some say, yet the chicken retains the same moronic, intelligent voided looking eyes. No one knows how it got in, or how it got to use the Parrot Arts and can be called with the Parrot Summoning Contract, yet it can. It is actually considered to be a failed Parrot Summoning, and once it is summoned, it can appear anywhere on the field. It normally does nothing but standing there looking idiotic. The chicken as some secret agenda, possibly to rule the world.


    (No, no more non-parrot summonings will be submitted . Btw, even though no one has the chicken contract (In the previous page a guy just dropped it), I'm not submitting it, it's just one confused chicken.)
    ~Leaving for scary yamato~

    All 3 egg techniques approved.
    The summons are declined. Like Zen said, no non-parrot summons under a parrot contract, and no squad summons.
    (Oumu Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Carlão) Parrot Summoning Technique: Carlão
    Rank: B
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user is able to summon a gigantic pygmy parrot, thus standing at half the size of a human femur. He is very fast, but it's true power comes with the ability to freely shoot their beaks at bullet speed, regaining a new one each turn he's on the field. Once the beaks are about to hit someone, they grow to the size of a human hand and do a gripping motion to lock an opponent's limbs pinning them to a surface or choking them. The parrot can stay on the field for 3 turns, during which the user gains the ability to create a hand-sized beak and shoot it at bullet speed, a technique considered B rank. Once Carlão is summoned, he is able to multiply is body, similar to the Shadow Clone jutsu, enabling him to create 4 copies of himself. This counts towards the user's 3 jutsus, though it doesn't count as a Cloning technique. The pygmy parrots talk in unison, and so fast that no one understand them, ending every sentence with "Cara or Né"
    *Can only be summoned twice per battle*


    ~Declined~ Creative I'll give you that. Restrict the clone part, lower the number of clones and make sure you state how far those clones can get from you or the perrot (which ever is the one creating them). Make that beak ability restricted too. We generally approve 2-3 three projectile (elemental or not) being used by a summon.

    Changed anything related to a squad. Added the bold part.

    (Oumu Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Lloyd no Chickin ) Parrot Summoning Technique: Lloyd, the Chicken
    Rank: D
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Pinocchio is a very dum looking parrot that can't fly, because it believes it is in fact a chicken, and thus dresses like one. It dwells among the Altorio parrots, without any apparent purpose, suspiciously looking at everyone, as some say, yet the "chicken" retains the same moronic, intelligent voided looking eyes. No one knows how it got in. It is actually considered to be a failed Parrot Summoning, and once it is summoned, it can appear anywhere on the field. It normally does nothing but standing there looking idiotic. The chicken as some secret agenda, possibly to rule the world.


    Not a chicken anymore, just thinks it's one.

    ~Approved~ Lmao

    New ones:

    (Oumu Jutsu: Supa Supa ) Parrot Arts: Pirate Cutlass
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user preform one one-handed handseal, and then extend his hand. From there, 2 parrots will fly at incredible speed, linked together by a thin extensible wire, visible with doujutsu. The parrots will swirl around a target, severing it multiple times before vanishing. They can sever all flesh, no matter the size and even bone, yet can only severe hard substancial techniques (Like Earth, Metal or Kaguya Bone) up to the rank of the technique.
    The parrots can severe several targets, yet they don't stay on the field for long. The pirates move at speeds that overthrow members and their summons of even Sannin rank, in mid-range, yet Kage only in short range, where the technique is pretty much point-blank.
    *Can only be used twice*


    ~Declined~ This is OP. A wire so small you can't see it yet it can cut almost anything? The rank here doesn't change anything. Steal is steal, whether or not it's used in a D-rank or S-rank technique. Work on that part and make sure you don't underestimate Kaguya bones too. Also, work on the bold part, I don't get what you mean there.

    (Oumu Jutsu: Oumu Oumono) Parrot Arts: Parrot King
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: +20 to Parrot Arts, +10 to Taijutsu
    Description: The user gather natural energy provided by his parrots, entering the Parrot Mode. Gaining a more Parrot like appearance, the user will grow a pair of wings, and his nails will grow like parrot tallons. The user gains a strength and speed burst, as well as enhanced Parrot Arts Techniques and Parrot Art Summoning Jutsus. Yet, has a draw back, the Elemental Ninjutsus will be less effective.
    Thus:

    • Ability to Fly
    • -5 Chakra Cost for Parrot Techniques (Summoning and Arts)
    • +20 Damage for Parrot Arts
    • No Handseals required for Parrot Techniques
    • Access to highest level of Parrot Arts, normally restricted to the largest summons
    • +10 Damage for Taijutsu
    • Boost of Speed and Strength
    • Chakra Sensing Abilities, due to the Natural Chakra

    • +5 Chakra Cost to Elemental Ninjutsu
    • -10 Damage Points to Elemental Ninjutsu


    The Parrot Mode lasts 5 turns max, after which the user can't preform Parrot Arts Techniques or Summoning Jutsus for 2 turns. Can only be used once. After the effects wear off, the Elemental Ninjutsu drawbacks stay for 1 turn. Taijutsu will come with an extra cost of 10 chakra, yet will have no change in the damage.
    *Must have signed the Parrot Contract or be a Parrots that holda great political power to enter the Parrot Mode*


    ~Declined do not resubmit~ No more animal modes will be accepted.


    (Oumu Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Piu Piu) Parrot Summoning Technique: Piu Piu
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Piu Piu is a huge yellow Kakatoo, about the size of 3 average Altorio Parrots. He is one of the heaviest parrots one can summon, rather heavier for his size, even though the size is quite big on itself. Though he can't fly, his strength and endurance are extraordinary, granting him a boost in Feather throwing and Egg Dropping of +10. His feathers are naturally stronger, acting almost like a armor, allowing him to withstand a total 120 points of blunt damage from Taijutsu and Elemental Ninjutsu up to his rank (2 A rank jutsus. But even 1 S rank jutsu and he takes full damage). Apart from his feather armor, he can take 60 damage, being that S ranks pierce through the armor and affect this count directly. He is quite the adept on Sumo wrestling, and, once per battle can destroy 1 S rank Earth/Metal jutsu, twice per battle can destroy 2 A rank, and three times per battle can destroy B, destroying the rest without restriction. Piu Piu is rather cheerful and happy, and loves to sing.
    *Can only be summoned once, lasting 3 turns*


    ~Declined~ Take out the part about the damage he can block, re-work what he can block (I won't allow it to block higher ranked attack then he is) and make it so that he vanish when it by it (1 A-rank or 1 B-rank kill him, 2 C-rank or 3 D-rank). Restrict him.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 09-16-2011 at 03:11 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~The Norwegian~ View Post
    Gone a week, now resubmitting. Last submitt was 3.September. This weeks submitting starts 10. Septemer.

    Herumusupuritta: Helm Splitter
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short to Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A (40 for the special abilities)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    A giant Hammer made of a special metal that has the ability to conduct earth chakra. The hammer itself is almost indesctrutable and is a formidable weapon. When the user channels either his earth chakra or his normal chakra, he gains acess to some unique abilities:
    Abilities:
    -Channeling normal chakra through it and slamming it into the ground creates an A-Rank chakra shockwave up to mid range.
    -Slamming the ground with the hammer infused with doton chakra creates an A-Rank wave of earth capable of overturning the landscape up to mid range
    -User can channel doton chakra into the hammer and swirl it into a circular pattern in front of him to defend against up to 1 S-Rank technique (follows elemental table)

    Note: Each ability can only be used twice, and the user can only use up to 3 abilities per battle
    Note2: User can't use lightning while using the hammers abilities
    Note3: When used to defend, user can't use earth in the same turn
    Note4: can only be wielded by The Norwegian


    ~Declined~ OP
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    (Doton: Chikyū Bōru) Earth Style: Earth Ball
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: User does 3 handseals and kicks the ground, making a spiked ball of rock pop up in front of him (about 3 meters wide). User can then channel doton chakra into a fist or feet and punch/kick the ball towards the opponent. The ball quickly rages towards the opponent (ball moves only a fraction slower than a normal full running speed of a ninja), gaining size as it gathers rubble from the ground.

    Note: Can only be used 4 times
    Note2: Can only be used on earth/rock ground
    Note3: Ball is created within short range of the user
    Note4: can only be taught by the norwegian.

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    ~Approved~

    I edited those two, the bold parts are what I've changed.

    Mods can edit if they want too.
    New resubmitt

    Herumusupuritta: Helm Splitter
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short to Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A (40 for the special abilities)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    A giant Hammer made of a special metal that has the ability to conduct earth chakra. The hammer itself is almost indesctrutable and is a formidable weapon. When the user channels either his earth chakra or his normal chakra, he gains acess to some unique abilities:
    Abilities:
    -Channeling normal chakra through it and slamming it into the ground creates an A-Rank chakra shockwave up to mid range.
    -Slamming the ground with the hammer infused with doton chakra creates an B-Rank wave of earth capable of overturning the landscape up to mid range
    -User can channel doton chakra into the hammer and swirl it into a circular pattern in front of him to defend against up to 1 A-Rank technique (follows elemental table)

    Note: Each ability can only be used once.
    Note2: User can't use lightning for 1 turn after the hammers abilities
    Note3: When used to defend, user can't use earth in the same turn
    Note4: If used one of the hammers abilities the user can't use any A-Rank Doton jutsus for 2 turns.
    Note5: can only be wielded by The Norwegian

    ~Approved~ Made some change, check the bold part.

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    New jutsu

    Name: Doton: (Atsui Jouki) Earth style: Hot steam
    Type: Suplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damaga points: 35
    The user performs two fast handsigns, and then he release doton chakra into the ground by slamming his hands on the ground. When the doton chakra is sent into the ground it makes a small fissure that cracks up the earth in front of the opponent, and hot steam from under the earth appears and burns the opponents. This also makes the opponent unable to march right at you because of the heat that the steam pumps on them.
    ~Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
    ~Note 2: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Approved~

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Taijutsu: Jointorokku / 身体のテクニック*ジョイントロック) - Body Technique: Joint Locking
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will send chakra to their joints and locks the joints for a short period of time. While the joint is locked, the user's body is much stronger but they lose their flexibility.
    Restrictions:*
    ~Only usable three times.
    ~Joints stay locked for one turn.
    ~Can lock multiple joints at one time. Counts as one use.

    ~Declined~ Doesn't really make sense, blocking your joint would not increase the impact your arm can withstand, it'll only cause it to break when under too big a strain.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 09-16-2011 at 04:13 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Haku Yuki- View Post
    resubmitting ( it got declined mainly because i was over my weekly limit so i didn't have to change any thing yet) weeks up my ban is gone yay

    hyouton koori ayatsuri ( ice relase: ice manipulation)
    Type: supplenmatry
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the user will make 5 hand seals and focas his chakra into already made ice he will then mold the ice into any shape he wishs.
    note: must be already made ice on the filed
    note: no s rank ice jutsu the next turn.
    ~Declined~ Already exists
    New submission

    hyouton moisture kankaku (ice relase: moisure senseing) ( no jap words for moisture >.<)
    Type: supplenmatry
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the user will make 3 hand seals and focas his wind and water chakra into the air where as long as there is moisure in the air the user will be able to sense what ever is in the air including chakra the chakra will sense the jutsu/ person moving threw the air sending signels to the user of the chakra sorce +
    becase as something move's threw the air it will disdort the wind and water chakra in air letting the user know some one or some thing is moving. ( be it chakra or person)
    ( an example would be the hidden mist jutsu cold air or any where near a lake )
    note: can only be used 3 time's per battle
    note: last's 8 turns.
    note: must have moisure in the air for this to work.
    note: basicly this jutsu wouldn't work in a dessert.
    ~Declined~ Find a japanese word
    mod's can add restrictions if they are needed
    you can decline a jutsu because there's no jap name ?

    Yes he can, it's in the rules (official template).

    re submitting

    hyouton shikke kankaku (ice relase moisture senseing)
    Type: supplenmatry
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the user will make 3 hand seals and focas his wind and water chakra into the air where as long as there is moisure in the air the user will be able to sense what ever is in the air including chakra the chakra will sense the jutsu/ person moving threw the air sending signels to the user of the chakra sorce +
    becase as something move's threw the air it will disdort the wind and water chakra in air letting the user know some one or some thing is moving. ( be it chakra or person)
    ( an example would be the hidden mist jutsu cold air or any where near a lake )
    note: can only be used 3 time's per battle
    note: last's 8 turns.
    note: must have moisure in the air for this to work.
    note: basicly this jutsu wouldn't work in a dessert.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. I have a very similar one using moisture in the air.

    new


    Hyouton koori bakudan ( ice relase ice bomb)

    Type: attack
    Rank: forbidden
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 100
    Damage Points: 100 ( damage to the user is explained in the note's
    Description: the user build's up a large amount of fuuton and suiton chakra the user then condense's the chakra's into one point inside of his gut and continue's to buold it up the user will then relase the chakra's in a gaint burst of ice chakra freezeing every thing that it touch's
    note: after use the user will collpase from useing such a massive amount of chakra at once
    note: can't use any more wind,water or ice jutsu's the rest of the battle
    note: user goes numb and is unable to perform hand seal"s
    note: user can not stand for an entire turn
    note: jutsu work's as fast as a explosion.

    ~Declined~ OP: Up to long range and freeze everything that it touch? No matter how many restrictions you put there it'll never get that one approved. Re-word the description of your jutsu.

    Quote Originally Posted by -Haku Yuki- View Post
    hyouton: mizu freezeing no jutsu) ice relase water freezeing jutsu ( no jap name for freezeing >.<)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: short to long.
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: -
    Description: the user odes a row of ten hand seals and then focas's his wind chakra into an already amde water soruce cooling it untill it becomes ice.
    note: only works on water the user used ( in other words i can't use this jutsu to freeze and enmey's water jutsuonly my own )
    note: no more a rank ice jutsu for the next two moves.
    note: can only be used 3 times

    ~Approved~
    updateing

    hyouton: mizu freezeing no jutsu) ice relase water freezeing jutsu ( no jap name for freezeing >.<)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: short to long.
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: -
    Description: the user does a row of ten hand seals and then focas's his wind chakra into an already amde water soruce cooling it untill it becomes ice.
    note: Can only freeze an enemy's water jutsu up to a rank
    note: no more Srank ice jutsu the next turn
    note: can only be used 3 times

    ~Declined~ I don't know who approved the first version of your technique, but it already exist. I guess you can be happy you got the first one approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Mugen- View Post
    sorry I really didnt.
    I'll edit it than ^_^

    (Kyousei-Katana no Netsu Seijin ) Great Sword of the Temperature Sage
    Rank: S
    Type: weapon
    Range:N/a
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: It is said this sword was once wielded by one of the family members of the Rokuddu Sage that possessed a ability to control temperature.Being constantly infused with that sages chakra,the sword actually inherited the ability.It is also said that the sword still has a small part of the Sages will left in it, so whenever someone who is not the weilder touches it, he get instantly ignited.The current and only weilder of this sword currently is Mugen who has the same ability as the Sage in the tales.(My CE)
    The sword like previously said has a ability to manipulate temperature to a certain point.The user has the choice of canceling any A-rank or Below water or earth jutsu much faster than by doing a regular jutsu,it also gives a advantage that it looks like the user was hit by the jutsu. It works by infusing either cold or hot temperature into the jutsu itself.(this is done by slashing or stabbing) the jutsu.This can also be used on a regular sword of the opponent if it is close combat.
    *The special ability costs 32 chakra
    *The special ability does count towards the 3 moves per turn rule.
    *The special ability can only be used once every 3 turns.Meaning you use it,than wait 2 full turns for it to cool down,than on the third you can use it again.
    The sword looks like so

    ~On Hold~ I want Cali to check this to see if it conflicts with his 7SM swords
    jutsu above hasnt been checked yet.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Jacob Moore View Post
    None of the above were checked yet >_>
    (Removed Law of the Twin Fish)
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    Custom Summoning
    Summoning animal: Tasmanian Devil
    Scroll Owner: Jacob Moore
    Others who have signed this contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss: (Will make one if approved)

    ~Approved~

    (Kuchoiyse:Tasmanian Devil-Akira)-Summoning Technique:Tasmanian Devil-Akira
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Akira is the first born son of Taz, the boss of the Tasmanian Devil's as well as Jacob's personal summon. Unlike most of his kind, he is extremely relaxed, never over-reacting, and always analyzing his each situation presented to him. Akira has black fur, as well as a stripe of white fur across his chest. In his human form he carries his blade "Debiru Ketsurui" in a black and white sheath (A regular Longsword, capable of conducting chakra to increase lethality). In his human form, Akira has shaggy Black hair, and noticeably enlarged canine teeth. He wears a black kimono, with a white sash around his waist. Akira's size dwarf's that of trees, and some buildings, he is also capable of changing the size of his body, so that his size doesn't become a nuisance in certain situations (Like Gamatatsu). In his shrunken state, he stands at around 1 foot tall, and can stand on the user's shoulder. Unlike other members of his species Being the first born son of Taz, Akira is one of the most powerful of his species. He specializes in Earth Style Ninjutsu, as well as Kenjutsu.
    ~Stays on the field for 5 turns.
    ~Akira can only use up to C Rank Earth jutsu.
    ~Akira's transformations count as the use a jutsu
    ~In his regular form, he cannot use Kenjutsu (Being that his species don't have aposable thumbs)


    ~Declined~ No human form, you're summoning an animal, not a hybrid. Re-work the description.
    Resubmitting

    (Kuchoiyse:Tasmanian Devil-Akira)-Summoning Technique:Tasmanian Devil-Akira
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Akira is the first born son of Taz, the boss of the Tasmanian Devil's as well as Jacob's personal summon. Unlike most of his kind, he is extremely relaxed, never over-reacting, and always analyzing his each situation presented to him. Akira has black fur, as well as a stripe of white fur across his chest. Akira's size dwarf's that of trees, and some buildings, he is also capable of changing the size of his body, so that his size doesn't become a nuisance in certain situations (Like Gamatatsu). In his shrunken state, he stands at around 1 foot tall, and can stand on the user's shoulder. Unlike other members of his species Being the first born son of Taz, Akira is one of the most powerful of his species. He specializes in Earth Style Ninjutsu.
    ~Stays on the field for 5 turns.
    ~Akira can only use up to C Rank Earth jutsu.
    ~He leaves the field if hit by..
    1 S Rank jutsu
    1 A Rank jutsu
    2 B Rank jutsu
    3 C Rank jutsu


    He leaves the field.


    ~Declined~ When re-submitting a custom, put the added part in bold. If you took out something, then bold it in your original version and mention it in your re-submission. Btw, take out the part I putted in bold.

    (Kuchoiyse:Tasmanian Devil-Akira)-Summoning Technique:Tasmanian Devil-Taz
    Rank:S
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Taz is the leader of the Tasmanian Devil species, and Jacob's summoning boss. Taz is bigger than his son Akira, and dwarfs him by 25 meters. But unlike his son, he is unable to manipulate the size of his body. Taz is notorious for his extremely short temper and little patience. If there's one this that does make Taz happy, its food. His appetite knows no bounds, and he will eat anything and everything in sight if given the opportunity. Taz's anger tends to get the best of him, as he usually lashes out at anyone who so much as looks at him the wrong way. Being the boss of the Tasmanian Devil's, Taz is also the strongest of his kind. Taz has two elemental affinities. The first of which is Earth, and the second is Fire. Taz has become very adept at using these two elements, and often uses them in collaboration to create more devastating effects.
    ~Can use up to A Rank Fire, and Earth jutsu
    ~Remains on the field for 4 turns
    ~If hit by...
    1 S Rank jutsu
    2 A Rank jutsu
    3 B Rank jutsu
    4 C Rank jutsu

    He will leave the field.


    ~Declined~ I will not accept summons with 2 elements anymore. Also, take out the part where you state what is required to make him disappear.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Cutie Pie View Post
    (Genjustu:Meikyo )-Meikyo
    Type:Genjustu
    Rank:A
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user must look directly into the enemy's eye's and if the enemy looks back. He is then trapped in a state,where he see's me and can attack me but every time he attack me my body disseapers and reappears in a different location.And can only end when i attack.
    -Can only be used 2 times in a battle


    (Katon:honoo)-Cutie Pie's Special
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user drinks Cutie Pie's special liquid,and then channel the liquid throughout there body.Then when it evenly through your body you blow it out,makeing blue O's.The first one is big while the 2nd is medium while the 3rd one is the smallest.
    -Liquid can only be used by Cutie Pie or people she gave permission to
    -THe user can use the O's as rope to,burning the victim till he/dies
    -Liquid kill the user if they arent above Sannin

    (Taijustu:handou)-Anti-Manner Kick Course
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Medium
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: THe user gathers all the power he/she can muster and delivers a massive vertical kick by lifting one of his legs a full 180 degrees in the air, This attack is usually aimed at the very center of the opponent's torso (front or back) and is almost always enough to defeat any opponent with one shot.
    -Drains your chakra to near death lvl's
    -Kills the user if below Sannin
    ~All above declined~
    Grim Reaper

    Rank: A
    Type: Bow
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage:60(+10 if a element is added to the arrow)
    Description: The user focus some chakra into there hand and focus on the image of a bow.And it appears and this bow it called Grim reaper and it's arrows are made of special wood that allows the user to add a element to it.
    -The user can add a element to the arrow
    -Arrows can be coated with poison
    -Bow shocks anybody who takes touches it and numbes then for 1turn
    ~Declined~ No poison. is the bow made out of raiton?
    Im sorry Rei i forgot to quote it,and does this count as my 2nd custom justu submission?And i didnt add poison to it,and the bows just a regular bow that stays on my back.And could i make a Justu for my bow to

    Grim Reaper
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack|Bow
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:N/A (+30 for special)
    Damage Point: N/A (+60 for special attack)
    Description: A special bow created for channeling and amplifying nature chakra with no stationary solid mass such as earth and water. the arrows are made of special alloy that can channel these natures without effecting the user. When the user channels a nature chakra into the bow, arrows released from the bow are natured charged with different properties.
    Lighning: When an arrow is released with lightning chakra, it moves at extreme speeds and numbs the spot it hits aswell as damages.
    Wind: the arrows travels even faster and pierce almost anything they hit.
    Fire: The arrow has destructive properties of fire and burns on contact aswell as damage.
    Notes:
    -Can only channel one nature chakra into one arrow
    -Maximum of 6 shots
    -Can only be wielded by Cutie Pie

    ~Declined~ There are several custom bows that already do the exact same thing. So, make it drastically different in its abilities or don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Gin-San View Post
    Added detail
    (Raiton: juu touken za keigoku)-:Lightning release: Ten Swords of Punishment
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will concentrate his lightning chakra into the air. The chakra will travel to the opponent and will surround him (As fast as lightning travels, this will take less than a second). After the lightning surrounds the opponent, the lightning will shape into ten swords, 1.4 meters long each, covering a 360 degree area (the swords are 3 meters away from the opponent, meaning that there is 4.4 meters between the opponent and a sword). The altitude of the swords is approximately the mid-body of the opponent. The swords will start to rotate at mid speeds (you can still define each blade, like a fan going in low but slower), and then all of them in a single second all of them will stop and will be attracted to the target in the center of them, impaling the target. The blades will follow the opponent until the blades stop moving to attack the target.
    Restrinctions:
    -Only usable 2 times
    -No other lightning jutsu in this turn, as all the lightning chakra is concentrated in the blades
    -No higher than A-rank lightning next turn
    -Must have mastered raiton
    -Only Sannin and above can use this jutsu, as it requires enough experience to control the flow of the swords
    -The user was to keep visual contact with the enemy all the time, by failing to do so, the blades will not be able to rotate appropriately and will disperse into their natural lightning chakra, which could harm the opponent as a C-rank
    -If the opponent touches one of the blades (which could be possible if he moves at a faster pace than the swords following him) the user will be discharged with A-rank power lightning
    -The swords will keep rotating for 5 seconds, but the user can contract the swords towards the opponent anytime within that interval
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San

    ~Declined, do not resubmit~

    Changed everything in this pretty much
    (No Japanese translation) Gold dust: Pistolero
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Range dependent of the user's field of vision.
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user points his index finger (with the pulgar pointing up) from his hand in the opponent's location (the hand will shape a pistol).
    By pulling his hand backwards, the user shots a bullet made of gold dust. The user can continue this action and he will keep shooting bullets until the user stops. The bullets have a caliber close to .32 and will rotate within themselves to produce a much stronger penetrative force. The speed of the bullets are comparable with Bee throwing a lightning influenced pencil. The user can slightly control the direction of the bullet, just enough to be able to curve the bullets, but not enough to change their direction (Meaning the bullets will still go in the predetermined location, but the bullets can be curved, like an arc, but only sideways).
    -Only usable 3 times per battle
    -The user can only shot 6 bullets (the capacity of a revolver)
    -Only Yondaime Kazekage bios
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San

    ~Declined, do not resubmit~

    added more detail
    (Jiton: Atorakuta)- Magnetic Release: Attractor
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user will pin point any location in the arena with his index finger (as his field of vision can allow).Sending magnetic chakra into that certain location. The site will become extremely magnetic. Any magnetic properties (metal for example) will be attracted and stuck in a sphere-like object. The user cannot attract an enemy (even if the enemy is magnetized, it wont work). Objects between 0-2 pound are attracted within long distance of the magnetized area; objects between 2-4 pounds are attracted within mid-distance; objects heavier than 4 pounds can only be attracted within short distance. Maximum weight that can be attracted is 40 pounds (but 20 pound and more will not fly towards the magnetized area, but more like crawling towards it).
    -Usable twice per battle
    -The effect last for 3 turns
    -The user needs to wait 2 turns after the effect is over to be able to use it again.

    -No other magnetism related techniques in the same turn
    -Only Magnetism Users
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San

    ~Declined similar jutsu exists~
    Fixing old cj:



    to:

    (Sakin: Sakin nohara) Gold Dust: Gold dust field
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40 (-10 per turn while activated)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After 5 handseals the user will slam his hands on the ground, elevating large amount gold dust particles in the surface from underneath the ground, creating a thin layer of gold dust in all ranges for incoming gold dust jutsus. Gold dust related techniques speed up because the dust is already in the battlefield. Gold dust will keep flowing from the ground while this technique is still active (only the user control the gold dust as his chakra is mixed in it), when the technique deactivates, gold dust will stop been created, but the gold dust will still be there for future use (anyone will be able to control the gold dust though, as the chakra of the user has left the gold dust)
    Restrinctions:
    - Can stay for the whole battle
    -Can only be used one time
    -Needs to activated before the end of the third turn
    -The user is unable to perform any other gold dust jutsu at the same turn
    -The user is unable to perform any taijutsu while the technique is active

    -Can only be used by 4th Kazekage bios
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San

    ~Approved~
    New submissions:

    (Sakin: go-ruden tora) Gold dust: Golden Tigers
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user will release his chakra in the ground, summoning a considerable amount of gold dust, which takes the shape of 10 tigers (if there is gold dust already in the ground, the first step is unnecessary). The tigers then will run at high speeds towards the opponent (at approximately the same speed of a living healthy tiger). The user predetermines where and how the tigers will run towards the opponent, then after releasing the tigers, the user is unable to alter their curse, as they go auto. When the tigers (or the closest tiger) come(s) into short range of the opponent, he/they launch himself/themselves like a torpedo, rotating at high speeds slashing and perforing the target, leaving mortal wounds.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -No other gold dust technique in the same turn
    -The user is unable to use magnetic related techniques in the next turn
    -Only 4th Kazekage bios
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San

    ~Declined, decrease the ammount of tigers created to at least 4~
    (Sakin: go-ruden tora) Gold dust: Golden Tigers
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user will release his chakra in the ground, summoning a considerable amount of gold dust, which takes the shape of 4 tigers (if there is gold dust already in the ground, the first step is unnecessary). The tigers then will run at high speeds towards the opponent (at approximately the same speed of a living healthy tiger). The user predetermines where and how the tigers will run towards the opponent, then after releasing the tigers, the user is unable to alter their curse, as they go auto. When the tigers (or the closest tiger) come(s) into short range of the opponent, he/they launch himself/themselves like a torpedo, rotating at high speeds slashing and hitting the target.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -No other gold dust technique in the same turns[/B]
    -The user is unable to use magnetic related techniques in the next turn
    -Only 4th Kazekage bios
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San


    ~Approved~ I took out the part about your attack doing "mortal wounds".

    New Submissions:

    CW:

    (Touyako 洞爺湖) Lake Toya
    Type: Defensive/ Supplementary/ Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10 each turn the weapon is been wielded
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Lake Toya is a katana with a wooden sheath and handle. In a simple view, it looks like a normal bokuto, which can be used as one. The sword, as been covered by wood of the greatest qualities, is highly resistant to lightning and is indestructible to blunt and cutting attacks.
    The story of the sword goes back to the 1st Hokage era. In times of war, the Hokage noticed a young swordsman with amazing skills in the art of kenjutsu, and decided to concentrate in creating the perfect wooden sword. The 1st Hokage wrapped a sharp blade from the finest quality with his wood element, wrapping it in the strongest wood he ever has made. The story goes that the young swordsman was capable on defeating the personal guard of the 1st Raikage, who based his attacks on lightning. The sword also grew stronger as the battle progressed, making him much more stronger against lightning attacks. In his dying breath, the now old swordman passed the sword to his son, and this happen generation through generation. Now the sword has reached the wielder he has today.
    The way the sword is invulnerable at lightning is its wooden properties. Wood is known not to be a lightning conductor, but more of an insulator. Once lightning is released, the user will release a slight amount of lightning chakra into the sword, and will attract the lightning into the sword without harming the user. The sword itself will not receive any damage from the lightning.
    -Lake Toya is naturally Immune to A-rank and below lightning attacks
    -The sword is capable in resisting lightning attacks S-rank and above only 3 times, but because of the high voltage of the attack the user will receive -10 of damage (the sword is unable to resist Kirin).
    -The katana can be unsheathed any time and work as a katana, though, the sheath is the only thing that has the special abilities.
    -The sword and the sheath are indestructible
    -The user has a summoning tatoo in his right shoulder in case he wants to summon it during battle, but it will cost 40 of chakra to summon.
    -The user does not have to summon it if it brings it on battle.
    -No other abilities
    -Can only be wielded by Gin-San


    ~Declined~ You really need to work on that one...in our RP, Wood is weak to Lightning. Check the Elements & Weaknesses thread in the training ground.

    New Submissions:

    (Fuuton: sakashima kazu) Wind release: Reverse Wind
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: All ranges
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After the opponent creates hurricane fist, the user will use wind currents around the opponent's arm and rotate them the opposite way the hurricane fist is rotating, which effectively cancels the wind jutsu. This jutsu does not require the user to blow or the wind to travel towards the opponent, but use the unstable wind currents from the hurricane fist to create a reverse wind to cancel the wind.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San


    ~Declined do not resubmit~ You can never take control of your opponent's own jutsu.


    (Doton: Kōzan) Earth release: Mines
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will stomp his foot in the ground, then several small rocks with a diameter of 6 inch each will be released from the ground upwards surrounding the opponent (around 15 of them surrounding the opponent) between the neck and middle body. Then, by the user's command, the rocks will blow up, releasing a large amounts of small spikes that fly towards the opponent at high speeds. Strangely, induced by the user's chakra, the spikes will only travel inwards towards the opponent, meaning no spikes will travel towards the user.
    -Can only be used 3 times
    -The user cannot use A-rank Earth and above next turn
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San


    ~Declined~ This as been done countless times; Earth exploding into spikes toward the opponent .


    (Katon: Aoi Kasai) Fire Style: Blue Flames
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: +15 Fire based attacks
    Description: By using the regulating the right amount of oxygen and atmospheric pressure, the user is capable on on creating blue flames from normal fire. The results of this regulations will cause the fire to increase in it's power attack (the intensity of the flame) and reduce the size to make it much more concentrated and powerful. The fire becomes much more stronger because the temperature of the attack exponentially increases. This means the size of any fire attack will be reduced 1/3 of its original size. This mode though, causes great complications to the user. The user is unable to user water correctly, meaning that water techniques lose -10 in damage and cost +5 more chakra.
    Fire attacks gain considerable damage, but the use of water becomes strongly affected.
    -The user's fire jutsus increase +15 in damage
    -Water jutsus lose -10 in damage and cost 5 chakra points more
    -This mode only last 5 turns, but can be deactivated any time
    -The user is unable to perform fire jutsus the next turn the mode is over.
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San


    ~Declined do not resubmit~ If you want to create a new type of flame using Wind and Fire, submit it as a CE, not here.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Typhon View Post
    (Iado: Ikazuchi Senkou) - Quick Draw Technique | Thunder Flash
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80 (-10 to user)
    Description: The user stands with one hand on the middle of their sheath and the other on the grip of their sword. They channel a large amount of chakra through their sword into their sheath building up a large amount of chakra. While they do this they control the chakra with the hand that's placed on the sheath keeping it tightly packed within the sheath and building up the pressure. A moment before the technique is released a faint glow can be seen on the sheath. From there the user quickly unsheathes their sword in a slashing motion releasing the built up chakra from their sheath in a blast that extends up to mid range. The release of pressure from the sheath also works to push the katana out making the actual slash of the technique faster than standard iado, though the slash is confined to short range. The momentary speed the arm gains puts strain on it, causing ten damage to the user.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -Can only be used by samurai.


    (Bushido: Abatā) - Way of the Samurai | Avatar
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
    Damage: +15 to Kenjutsu
    Description: This technique is an advanced form of the samurai saber technique in which rather than coating the blade with chakra, the samurai instead concentrates chakra within the blade. By doing this the sword begins to shine brightly taking on a bright white color while maintaining its original form, representing the soul of the Samurai within the blade. By concentrating the chakra into the blade rather than around it, it becomes more focused and powerful allowing normal slashes to cut through metallic weapons such as kunai or other swords in the same was as a chidori current. Also due to the shine of the blade it becomes difficult for the opponent to follow its movements as it becomes harder to pinpoint where the actual blade is within the light. The light isn't enough to blind the enemy, but if there were to look directly at the blade they would have to squint. The technique is not without drawbacks. It must be used with their dominant arm and since the user must keep the chakra under better control it puts more strain on their body, especially the arm holding the sword. As a result once the technique wears off they lose use of that arm for two turns afterwards. It also makes the sword used become very brittle to the point that if it were to clash with another sword it would be easily broken (regardless of any custom weapon that says its indestructible). The technique can be activated and deactivated multiple times per battle, but the number of turns the technique can be active in total is not to exceed four. Every time it is activated it must be counted as one of the three moves that turn.
    -Can only be used by Samurai.
    -Can only be used for a total of four turns per battle.
    -User loses use of their dominant arm after the fourth turn for two turns.


    (Genjutsu: Chikin-icchi) - Demonic Illusion | Chicken Pox
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 20
    Description: The user will either scratch their arm or neck causing the target to fall under an illusion. In the illusion the opponent's skin will become irresistibly itchy causing them to claw at their own body. They begin to scratch so hard that they actually cause themselves to bleed in several places. The pain caused by the scratching is enough to break them free of the genjutsu, making it very brief, but leaving them with numerous minor cuts on their body.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -The motion of the user scratching themselves must be seen.
    ~All Declined~ Do not resubmit the thunder flash jutsu, it already exists
    (Bushido: Abatā) - Way of the Samurai | Avatar
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
    Damage: +10 to Kenjutsu
    Description: This technique is an advanced form of the samurai saber technique in which rather than coating the blade with chakra, the samurai instead concentrates chakra within the blade. By doing this the sword begins to shine brightly taking on a bright white color while maintaining its original form, representing the soul of the Samurai within the blade. By concentrating the chakra into the blade rather than around it, it becomes more focused and powerful allowing normal slashes to cut through metallic weapons such as kunai or other swords in the same was as a chidori current. The technique is not without drawbacks. It must be used with their dominant arm and since the user must keep the chakra under better control it puts more strain on their body, especially the arm holding the sword. As a result once the technique wears off they lose use of that arm for two turns afterwards. It also makes the sword used become very brittle to the point that if it were to clash with another sword it would be easily broken (regardless of any custom weapon that says its indestructible).
    -Can only be used by Samurai.
    -Can only be used once and lasts five turns.
    -User loses use of their dominant arm after the fourth turn for two turns.

    Reduced the added damage from 15 to 10, completely removed any part about the light making it hard to follow the blade. Removed the ability to activate and deactivate numerous times, making it so its activated once and lasts a certain amount of turns. Since once activated you're stuck with it until it wears off I increased the turn duration from four to five.

    ~Declined~ This jutsu doesn't make sense when you consider what we know of chakra infused weapon. There is already chakra inside the weapon when you normally infuse it with an element,. However, it's the way you mold it (elemental manipulation) that gives you weapon an extra boost. You can re-read Naruto's training with Asuma if you want more info on it.

    (Genjutsu: Chikin-icchi) - Demonic Illusion | Chicken Pox
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 10
    Description: The user will either scratch their arm or neck causing the target to fall under an illusion. In the illusion the opponent's skin will become irresistibly itchy causing them to claw at their own body. They begin to scratch so hard that they actually cause themselves to bleed in several places. The pain caused by the scratching is enough to break them free of the genjutsu, making it very brief, but leaving them with numerous minor cuts on their body. While the genjutsu is in use the user is incapable of using other techniques.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -The motion of the user scratching themselves must be seen.

    Added that the user can't preform other techniques during the duration of the genjutsu. Reduced damage from 20 to 10 since the damage aspect isn't the main purpose of this technique. Not really sure how else to change it without killing it.

    ~Declined~ Change the way it's cast on your opponent. Scratching yourself? Even Itachi had to point a finger at his opponent while having his Sharingan activated. Make hand seals and make it so you need a direct contact with your opponent.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Sage~ View Post

    (Raiton: Gokumon) Lightning Release: Prison Gate

    Rank:A to S (If adding more chakra to make stronger)
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost:35(A rank) 45(S rank)
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:
    The user gathers chakra in to their strongest foot, does some hand signs and then stomps on the ground. Lightning style prison bars, shoot up from the ground, around the user and entrap them in a lightning styled cube.

    Note:Can only use 2 times per battle.
    Note:Can only use raiton justu for 2 turns.
    Note:It only stays active for 2 turns after performed
    Note:Can only be used and taught by ~Sage~.


    ~Approved~ Don't really see the point in trapping yourself for two turns though...
    Can i get rid of this one i quoted for the on below?
    It was meant to entrap the opponent, not the user, it was a typing error. Sorry.

    (Raiton: Gokumon) Lightning Release: Prison Gate

    Rank:A to S (If adding more chakra to make stronger)
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost:35(A rank) 45(S rank)
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:
    The user gathers chakra in to their strongest foot, does some hand signs and then stomps on the ground. Lightning style prison bars, shoot up from the ground, around the Opponent and entrap them in a lightning styled cube.

    Note:Can only use 2 times per battle.
    Note:Can only use raiton justu for 2 turns.
    Note:It only stays active for 2 turns after performed
    Note:Can only be used and taught by ~Sage~.


    ~Declined~ Similar technique exist (and I don't mean yours ). I don't mind you dropping your other jutsu, but that one is now too similar to an existing one =/

    (Akuma Raimei Makaze) Demon Thunder Storm of the Devil

    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:
    The user gathers raiton chakra from the core of their body, as they aim their palms to the sky. The user then releases the chakra in one big burst towards the sky, causing a disruption in the atmosphere and creating a disastrous thunder storm in the the sky.

    Note:Covers the sky with thunder clouds.
    Note:Last's for 2 turns.
    Note:Can only be used twice per battle
    Note:Can only be used and taught by ~Sage~


    ~Approved~ Took out the +5 to raiton techniques. It's not because you're fighting on the ocean that your water techniques will get stronger, same goes for your technique.

    (Animal Summoning)

    Summoning Animal: Liger
    Scroll Owner:~Sage~
    Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
    There is one that was bred, so it's not extinct or mythological.



    ~Declined~ Contract already exist.
     
         
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    (Satetsu: Supea) Iron Sand: Spear
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user holds up their arm and channels iron sand into there hand and forms it into a spear, the user then throws the spear. This spear can easily penetrate human flesh, killing the enemy
    ~Can only be taught by Savior..

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    (Satetsu: Satetsu Endan) Iron Sand: Iron sand Platform
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user creates a platform of iron sand below him and can use it to fly around on top of. The user can use aerial attacks on top of the platform
    ~Can Only be taught by Savior..

    ~Both declined, do not resubmit~ The first one already exist and the second is an exact rip off of Gaara's technique.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Ninpou: Tsuyoi Shushi No Kushin! | Ninjutsu: The Mighty Finger of Pain!
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (+10 if he hits something)
    Description:
    User gathers and focuses a huge amount of chakra in his middle finger and holds it with his thumb. When he flicks his finger upon his opponent he unleashes that chakra in a form of a focused impact that sends the enemy flying to long range at enormous speed. He can damage the enemy further by sending him flying towards a solid object.

    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note2: Can only be used in short range but doesn't require physical contact
    Note3: Can only be used 3 times

    Looks like this at 0:13s


    ~Declined~
    Ressubmitting, last one of the week

    Tsuyoi Shushi No Kushin! | The Mighty Finger of Pain!
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 20 (+10 if he hits something)

    Description:
    User holds his middle finger against his palm with his thumb while he focuses chakra into it. He will point it at his enemy and release the finger, flicking it. This releases a blunt impact that sends the enemy flying backwards. This can only be done in close quarter fights but doesn't require physical contact. Can also be used to deflect small projectiles and weapons.

    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note: This jutsu is as harmful as a direct punch
    Note2: Can only be used once per turn up to 4 times

    Looks like this at 0:13s



    Wasn't sure what to do for this to be approvable, so i lowered its rank (this is way weaker than a Rasengan, so A-Rank was only wishful), changed its description a bit and restricted it slightly differently. Tks ^^

    ~Approved~ Edited the damage and added a note. This way it's clear that its purpose is to push away the opponent while dealing some damage.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Hyouton: Aisu Kousei)- Ice Release: Ice Regeneration
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Tange: short-long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: With single hand seal the user send's his chakra into previously created ice technique and regenerate it. For instance, if enemy hit users ice technique with lower rank technique, this will be able to repair the damage done and restore its previous strenght.
    Additionaly this can be used to prevent destruction of ones ice jutsu if it is struck by enemys technique of same power , though it needs to be done in the same moment the two techniques are colliding and can only be used twice this way.

    -Preventing destruction can only be used twice
    ~Declined~ Usage restrictions for healing?
    (I just realized it is kind of similiar to expansion jutsus, though it is not increasing damage of anything. If you think it is too similiar and shouldn't be approved because of this, coul you just delete the part from "Additionaly..." please? *hopes it doesn't happen* )
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    (Hyouton: Aisu Kousei)- Ice Release: Ice Regeneration
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Tange: short-long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: With single hand seal the user send's his chakra into previously created ice technique and regenerate it. For instance, if enemy hit users ice technique with lower rank technique, this will be able to repair the damage done and restore its previous strenght.
    Additionaly this can be used to prevent destruction of ones ice jutsu if it is struck by enemys technique of same power , though it needs to be done in the same moment the two techniques are colliding and can only be used twice this way.

    -Regenerating ice can be used up to four times
    -Preventing destruction can only be used twice

    ~Declined~ Elaborate on the bold part, not sure I can grasp the full potential of your technique so far.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: That of the jutsu used
    Damage Points: That of the jutsu used +30%
    Description: This katana, named the Dragon blade is one of the greatest sword ever known to the man kind it is made from an un-named metal some people say it was made from a dragon scale(only sayings). it has affinity towards fire . It even reduces two hand seal for every fire jutsu and increases impact by 30% rank for every fire type move . it supports user against wind type move also and is weak agaist water type moves..and user can infuse his fire type chakra in it to give it that extra edge and use it as a narmal katana~if placed in bio need not be summoned~
    ~can only be thought by gitanshu~
    ~is strong against fire and wind ~
    ~weak against water~
    it look likes

    ~Declined~ Follow proper template, you need a name and a japanese name.
    (doragon :tsurugi) Dragon Sword
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-long(precisely of the jutsu used)
    Chakra Cost: That of the jutsu used
    Damage Points: That of the jutsu used +(50% & 20% for others elements)
    Description: This katana, named the Dragon blade is one of the greatest sword ever known to the man kind it is made from an un-named metal some people say it was made from a dragon scale(only sayings). it has affinity towards fire . It even reduces two hand seal for every fire jutsu and increases impact by 50% and 20% for the rest of the element type of moves . it supports user against wind type move also ..and user can infuse his fire type chakra in it to give it that extra edge and use it as a normal katana
    ~if placed in bio need not be summoned~
    ~can only be taught by gitanshu~
    ~is strong against fire and wind ~
    ~no elemental advantage for suiton & Doton~

    NOTE- sorry for bothering but i dont think the sword will itself use any chakra

    ~Declined~ This swords is OP. Reduce the ability and limit it to 1 element. And please, be creative in your abilities, I will not accept any "lowering hand seals" and "+X damage" to an element. It's been overdone lately.

    (kagirinai-supin) Eternal Spin
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: While the user is in possesion of the doragon :tsurugi he holds it with both of his hand and from one hand supplies fire type chakra and from another wind type chakra and then takes a 360 degree spins three times in a fracton of second and releases strong waves of fire and wind type chakra infused togother .
    ~need to be in posseseion of doragon :tsurugi~
    ~need to be taught by gitanshu~
    ~can only be used 3 times~

    (pa-fekuto-shi-rudo) Perfect Shield
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:While the user is in possesion of the doragon :tsurugi he holds it with one of his hand and tranfers pure chakra in it and rotates it in a circular motion and a shield of pure chakra is formed which is capable enough of blocking all the elemental jutsu upto A rank(shield is broken completely)
    and below (Shiel suffers a little damage but can take on one more attack)
    ~need to be in posseseion of doragon :tsurugi~
    ~need to be taught by gitanshu~
    ~can only be used 4 times~

    ~Both Declined~ The sword was declined.

    (hari-moui)Needle Fury
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The users put his hands on the ground and needles from below the ground of the opponents start to shoot at the user and its mixed with wind type chakra they are almost undodgeble because of this property they continue to shoot out till the user places his hand on the ground
    ~need to be taught by gitanshu~
    ~can only be used 2 times~
    ~No Suiton in the same tern~

    ~Declined~ Doesn't make sense and is OP (check bold). Where does those needle come from? Are they made of earth?

    (suiton;nami benkai soshite raishuu) Water Wave Of Defence and Attack
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will gather raw suiton chakra in there hand and will release it in form of a wave which is able to cancel all the fire moves upto s rank and can also be used to attack when the opponent is at mid range
    ~need to be taught by gitanshu~
    ~can only be used 3 times~
    ~No Suiton in the same tern~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Karasu Mo-do) Raven Mode
    Type: Supplemenary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    ChakraCost: 40
    Damage points: +10 Nin, +10 Tai
    Description: This jutsu is based off of the principle that where there is light, darkness lingers near. The user draws in nature chakra from his/her surrounding area and instead of stoping at that, the user concentraits on their own hatred and malace. The darkness in that nature chakra is drawn to the user and used instead. When the transformation is complete, The Users hair becomes longer and black, there nails become black and slightly pointed, their iruses become yellow and the sclera becomes black. The Dark nature chakra is shaped into black feathers and stored arround the waist and back. The user uses the dark nature chakra to enhance their strength and ninjutsu. Because of it's dark nature, the user risks loosing themselves in there own hatred. As the jutsu begins to wear off, the feathers start to fall of of their body and eventually dissapear all together. When Karasu Mo-do wears off, the user is left exohsted.
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91.
    Note: Must have signed the Raven contract.
    Note: This jutsu lasts for 5 turns.
    Note: After this jutsu wears off, the user cannot use ninjutsu for one turn.
    Note: The user cannot summon in this mode.
    Note: It takes one turn to use this jutsu
    Note: Can only be used ONCE per battle

    ~Declined~ Work on the restrictions, add more then those already in place.

    (Karasu Mo-do: Kuro Kyuutai) Raven Mode: Dark Orb
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: While in Raven Mode, The user focuses Dark Nature chakra into their dominant hand and forms a large black orb corsing with energy. The orb is then shot at the target, causing some of the black feathers to fly arround the user and dissapate. When it hits the target, it explodes causing massive damage to the surrounding area.
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91.
    Note: Must be in Raven Mode to use.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle

    (Karasu Mo-do: Kuroi Kiri) Raven Mode: Black Blade
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: While in Raven Mode, the user will hold both hands out and form a large black sythe made out of dark nature chakra. The sythe is corsing with sparks of the dark nature chakra and leaves a dark ora around itself. When the user swings it at the target, it leaves black feathers behind.
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91.
    Note: Must be in Raven mode to use.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

    (Karasu Mo-do: Kuro Bakushin) Raven Mode: Dark Dash
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: While in Raven Mode, The user concentraites their dark nature chakra into their feet and uses it to dash from on point to another almost instantly and effortlessly.
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91
    Note: Must be in Raven mode to use
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle

    (Karasu Mo-do: Kage Dageki) Raven Mode: Shadow Strike
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: While in Raven Mode, The user concentraites dark nature chakra into either their fists or their shins and strikes the enimy with them. When they hit or miss the target, a large burst of dark nature chakra comes out of the limb used, nocking the target away from the user and dealing tremendous damage.
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91.
    Note: Must be in Raven Mode to use.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

    ~All Declined~ Raven Mode was declined
    Re submition

    (Karasu Mo-do) Raven Mode
    Type: Supplemenary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    ChakraCost: 40
    Damage points: +10 Nin, +10 Tai
    Description: This jutsu is based off of the principle that where there is light, darkness lingers near. The user draws in nature chakra from his/her surrounding area and instead of stoping at that, the user concentraits on their own hatred and malace. The darkness in that nature chakra is drawn to the user and used instead. When the transformation is complete, The Users hair becomes longer and black, there nails become black and slightly pointed, their iruses become yellow and the sclera becomes black. The Dark nature chakra is shaped into black feathers and stored arround the waist and back. The user uses the dark nature chakra to enhance their strength and ninjutsu. Because of it's dark nature, the user risks loosing themselves in there own hatred. As the jutsu begins to wear off, the feathers start to fall of of their body and eventually dissapear all together. When Karasu Mo-do wears off, the user is left exohsted.
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91.
    Note: Must have signed the Raven contract.
    Note: This jutsu lasts for 5 turns.
    Note: After this jutsu wears off, the user cannot use ninjutsu, taijutsu, or summon for one turn.
    Note: The user cannot summon in this mode.
    Note: It takes one turn to use this jutsu
    Note: Can only be used ONCE per battle
    Note: Cannot use Genjutsu in Raven mode

    ~Declined~ If you do this, I will accept it: Take out the connection to your summon, I don't want animal/human hybrid (so take out the part about your feathers and all). Make it last 3 turns. Elaborate on what this "exhausted state" means to your aptitude to fight; can you stand and walk around freely?


    (Karasu Mo-do: Kuro Kyuutai) Raven Mode: Dark Orb
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: While in Raven Mode, The user focuses Dark Nature chakra into their dominant hand and forms a large black orb corsing with energy. The orb is then shot at the target, causing some of the black feathers to fly arround the user and dissapate. When it hits the target, it explodes causing massive damage to the surrounding area.
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91.
    Note: Must be in Raven Mode to use.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle

    (Karasu Mo-do: Kuroi Kiri) Raven Mode: Black Blade
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: While in Raven Mode, the user will hold both hands out and form a large black sythe made out of dark nature chakra. The sythe is corsing with sparks of the dark nature chakra and leaves a dark ora around itself. When the user swings it at the target, it leaves black feathers behind.
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91.
    Note: Must be in Raven mode to use.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

    (Karasu Mo-do: Kuro Bakushin) Raven Mode: Dark Dash
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: While in Raven Mode, The user concentraites their dark nature chakra into their feet and uses it to dash from on point to another almost instantly and effortlessly.
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91
    Note: Must be in Raven mode to use
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle

    (Karasu Mo-do: Kage Dageki) Raven Mode: Shadow Strike
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: While in Raven Mode, The user concentraites dark nature chakra into either their fists or their shins and strikes the enimy with them. When they hit or miss the target, a large burst of dark nature chakra comes out of the limb used, nocking the target away from the user and dealing tremendous damage.
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91.
    Note: Must be in Raven Mode to use.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

    ~All declined~ Raven Mode wasn't approved. I suggest you wait for your mode to be approve before re-submitting those. Otherwise you're just wasting your submissions.
     
         
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    ( Nakkuru's Kyoukudai Kyuukei ) - Knuckle's Maximum Break
    Rank: S
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: ( +15 to taijutsu and +15 to ninjutsu )
    Description: The user gathers chakra and channels it into every muscle of the body to energize the cells in the muscles by using chakra . By doing so , the user's mitochondria in the cells of his muscles produces ATP at a much faster rate , giving the user the speed of the 4th Raikage in his armor and the strength of Tsunade . But after it deactivates , it leaves the user in a state of exhaustion and he would be unable to use jutsus B-rank and above for 2 turns . If the effects wear off the second time this is used , the user would be left in a near-death state from overworking his body .

    -Takes a few seconds to fully activate
    -Lasts for 4 turns
    -Usable only 2 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    ~Declined~
    ( Rankyaku Gaichou ) - Storm Leg: Victorious Bird
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short to Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user focuses chakra into his leg and compresses it , then the user kicks the air and releases the compressed chakra in the shape of a bird that is capable of cleaving through steel

    -No ninjutsu the turn after this is used
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    ~Declined~
    ( Nakkuru's Kyoukudai Kyuukei ) - Knuckle's Maximum Break
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: ( +10 to taijutsu and +5 to ninjutsu )
    Description: The user gathers chakra and channels it into every muscle of the body to energize the cells in the muscles by using chakra . By doing so , the user's mitochondria in the cells of his muscles produces ATP at a much faster rate , increasing the user's speed and strength greatly . But after it deactivates , it leaves the user in a state of exhaustion and he would be unable to use jutsus B-rank and above for 2 turns .

    -Takes a few seconds to fully activate
    -Lasts for 3 turns
    -Usable only once per battle
    -Can only be taught by Rokusho


    Sorry if the concept of this CJ sounds weird . . . I was never good with biology

    ~Approved~ changed it to 3 turns and made it +10,+5.

    ( Rankyaku Gaichou ) - Storm Leg Victorious Bird
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short to Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user focuses chakra into his leg and compresses it , then the user delivers a kick through the air and releases the compressed chakra in the shape of a bird which follows the trajectory of the kick . However , if the user performs an extra handseal , he can make it explode upon impact .

    -No ninjutsu the turn after this is used
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc


    Part of the change is just describing it better . . . Do I have to bold those too ? I'll bold it just in case ><" .

    ~Declined~ Take out the part about it exploding. You can make it change its course with another hand seal by infusing chakra or something, but no explosion.
     
         
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    (Sennen Goroshi)-One Thousand Years of Death
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:User sneaks up behind opponent and uses a very simple technique with an over-dramatic name, One Thousand Years of Death is little more than inserting one's index and middle fingers (similar to the Tiger hand seal) into the opponent's rectum, causing constipation, pain and/or embarrassment. It has no effect on unconscious targets. This technique requires you to concentrate your chakra to the tip of your fingers to send the opponent flying.


    ~Declined do not resubmit~ You could be banned for a week for submitting a cannon technique. I will give you a warning this time, don't re-submit cannon techniques.
     
         
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    (Yari Mayonaka Kage) - Spear of the Midnight's Shadow
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    In the outskirts of the endless desert an unknown Nara had forged a spear with the blackest chakra metal in the ninja world. The spear was made to forge with the Nara's shadows to control the darkness and power it. When the user wields the spear it increases their shadows techniques. The spear is able to be thrown if the user aims correctly and hits the enemies shadows it traps the enemies shadow so then the user can use imitation. Normally the spear would only be able to hit at short range but the user is able to increase the range to mid by using the shadow inflicting the spear to extend the shadow into a sharp point.

    Notes:
    - Usable 4 turns per battle
    - If spear is thrown and makes contact with shadow; Spear is useless for rest of battle
    - Increases Shadows by +5
    - Shadow can extend range of spear from short to mid
    - Throwing spear counts as a move.
    - Drains 10 chakra per turn spear is used
    - Only usable by Nara Clan Member
    - Only usable by Oasis Nara and those he allows

    (Kage no kōto) -Shadow Coat
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user wrap around his/her entire body with their shadow which make them invulnerable from physically attack such as Taijutsu or normal physical attack. Once the opponent launch a physical attack then they will trap/bind by the user shadow after comes in contact with the user body.

    Restriction :
    ~ Must have finished his shadow training.
    ~ Must be member of the Nara Clan (Social group).
    ~ Can only be used by Nara's
    ~ Can only be taught by Oasis

    (Kage Tōketsu )- Shadow Freeze
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user shadow able to stop and undo jutsu attack that launch fly toward him which the jutsu attack have shadow with solid or animal shape such as Dragon, tiger, bird, pillar, rocks, staff etc, by trapping and binding the jutsu attack shadow.

    Restriction :
    ~ Requires a row of 4 handseals.
    ~ Able to stop and undo similar rank attack from Earth, Water, and wind element which have shadow
    ~ Can’t stop/undo Fire and lightning jutsu attack
    ~ Can only be used 2 times in battle then can’t use shadow for the next 2 turn
    ~ Must have finished Shadow training.
    ~ Can only be used by Nara's
    ~ Can only be taught by Oasis

    Summon Animal : Legendary Wombat Twin, Romulus and Remus

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Densetsu no u~onbattotsuin, romurusu to remusu)- Summoning Animal: Legendary Wombat Twin, Romulus and Remus
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User unscroll a rare scroll of legendary Wombat, who have been gave to themwhich have been loyal to the Wombat Empire, then the user bites their finger drawing blood then preforms a row of 15 handseals then slams their hand to the scroll and summons Romulus and Remus, the legendary twin from wombat warrior size as a normal human.
    Romulus the older one holding a little scroll, attached in his left arm and has the ability to camouflage himself by putting the scroll in his mouth, as long as the scroll still in his mouth then barely no one can see or sense his present and able to travel fast on the ground as Sannin rank. While Remus the younger one known as the master of illusionist, he has the ability to use up to A-Rank Genjutsu, Romulus and Remus work together side by side as a solid team.

    Restriction:
    Note: Romulus camouflage counts as a move, 2 tomoe sharingan can sense and see him.
    Note: Romulus can’t perform any jutsu.
    Note: Romulus only can perform normal taijutsu/ taijutsu specialist. (speed =Sannin lvl 6 + 2)
    Note: Remus Genjutsu counts as a move.
    Note: The twin summon only lasts for 3 rounds.
    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Must have / sign the Wombat Contract
    Note: Only Oasis Nara can summon Romulus and Remus



    ~All declined, over weakly submission~ You are hereby banned from the CJ thread for the next week submission. You've posted 6 jutsus this week, here's the link to your other submissions:

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...24#post4158824

    Your ban shall be lifted on the 26th of September. If you have anything to say, please do so through VM.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Trans-Am (Toranzamu)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Trans-Am system was created in an attempt to give ninjas the ability to increase their speed and reaction time by 4 and their strength by 2. However, it was deemed too dangerous for widespread usage. By storing chakra in internal tanks, the user is able to release that chakra for a limited time. The user gains increased speed, strength, and reaction time for a period of time till the stored up chakra is used up. When entering the Trans Am System, the user looks like they've turned red from the overload of chakra flowing around them and will leave chakra after images as they move. However there are some side effects. Once the Trans Am chakra is released, the user is left with a very limited amount of Chakra left. The users body is weakened to the same point as someone who has opened the 5th gate.

    Restrictions
    - Can only be used once per fight
    - Can only be used a max of 5 turns
    - For each Shadow Clone on the field, the amount of turns in decreased by one. for example, one clone on the field allows the user and clone to use it for four turns
    - The user is left with roughly half of the chakra at the beginning of Trans Am
    - while in Trans-Am, the user can not use any doujutsu techniques. Sharigan users can still track opponents but they can not use any techniques.
    - For every turn active, the user loses an additional 10 chakra on top of the initial 40

    ~Declined~ This is exactly the same jutsu that was declined earlier, you simply changed the name. Also, take away the Gate reference, I'm trying to get rid of those.
    Trans-Am (Toranzamu)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Trans-Am system was created in an attempt to give ninjas the ability to increase their speed and reaction time by 4. However, it was deemed too dangerous for widespread usage. By storing chakra in internal tanks, the user is able to release that chakra for a limited time. The user gains increased speed, strength, and reaction time for a period of time till the stored up chakra is used up. When entering the Trans Am System, the user looks like they've turned red from the overload of chakra flowing around them and will leave chakra after images as they move. However there are some side effects. Once the Trans Am chakra is released, the user is left with a very limited amount of Chakra left. The users body is weakened to the same point as someone who has opened the 5th gate.

    Restrictions
    - Can only be used once per fight
    - Can only be used a max of 5 turns
    - For each Shadow Clone on the field, the amount of turns in decreased by one. for example, one clone on the field allows the user and clone to use it for four turns
    - The user is left with roughly half of the chakra at the beginning of Trans Am
    - while in Trans-Am, the user can not use any doujutsu techniques. Sharingan users can still track opponents but they can not use any techniques.
    - For every turn active, the user loses an additional 10 chakra on top of the initial 40

    Note: The Gates reference is just for comparisons. Also removed the strength increase as directed by Nexus
     
         

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