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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Gull Goei Za Kokuou)Summoning Technique:Gull Guard of the King
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After preforming the necessary hand seals the user summons Kichiro,the Guard of the King.He was personally chosen by Kichiro to be his personal guard.He is double the size of Sasuke's hawk (which he summoned in his fight with Danzo) and has white feathers covering his whole body with the exception of his tail feathers which are brown.He is a rather grumpy bird,and isn't very communicative.He talks only when he is asked to or has to say something.He has mastery over Doton but can't use them without hand seals.His feathers are formed so they resemble fingers so he is able to prefrom hand seals.He wants to be respected,and he will respect a person once the person proves themselves to him.
    Note:Can only be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note:Every move used by Hiroko counts as the users move.
    Note:He stays on the field for 3 turns and can be summoned 2 times per battle.

    ~Approved~

    Name: (Koumorigasa)Umbrella
    Rank:S
    Typeffensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The umbrella is a specially made umbrella,created to be used as a deadly weapon.It is a black Japanese fashioned umbrella made of bamboo which was reinforced with very resistant metal thus making it nearly unbreakable.It can be used for several purposes such as attacking or defending.It has a handle which is 1.5 metres long.Inside the umbrella's handle,a katana that is about 1 meter long is hidden which can be drawn when needed.The sword has no special abilities,though it can channel elemental chakras.The user can send Fuu chakra into the umbrella which can make the user float through the air,though that will not be very fast.It is fast enough to dodge a kunai coming from mid range at high speed.Also,by spinning the umbrella the user can release a rain of about 100 senbon at the opponent.But the umbrellas strongest ability is that it can absorb any water technique up to A rank (excluding A rank techs).This makes the umbrella a great tool for both offensive and defensive purposes.
    Note:Can only be used by -Cobalt-.
    Note:The user can channel Fuu chakra into the umbrella 2 times per battle.
    Note:Senbon can be launched 2 times per battle.
    Note:The user can defend from water techs 5 times per battle with a cool down period of 2 turns after every use of this ability.

    ~Declined~ There are too many abilities stacked on top of the other and some of them are too powerful. Either restrict those better, or take some away.

    This is what it looks like:



    Name: (Kuchiyose No jutsu:Gull Kokuou)Summoning Technique:Gull King
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short
    Chakra:50
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user preforms the required hand seals to summon the King of The Sea Gulls,Kichiro.Kichiro is a male gull,with extreme strength and power.He is slightly smaller than Gamabunta and has white feathers covering his whole body.He can fly at very high speeds if he wants to and can carry up to three persons on his back.He has a bright and warm personality which fits his element,Fire Release.He has mastered all techniques and is able to preform them without hand seals.He also has the strength to lift a heavier objects and launch them at the users opponent.If he does that he will be tired and won't be able to move anymore due to the exhaustion.He can lift up to one ton without a problem.He will respect all summoners that respect him.Once per battle he can absorb any fire technique but that will make him disappear in the next turn.
    Note:May only be used and taught by -Cobalt-.
    Notence summoned,Kichiro stays on the field for 3 turns,and he can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note:He will disappear after the 3 turns pass or if he is hit by 2 S rank and 1 A rank technique.
    Note:Must have signed the Gull contract.
    Note:Every move Kichiro uses counts as the users move.

    ~Declined~ Make it S-rank, check the bold part and edit (summoning can't use forbidden techniques so take that in consideration). Lastly, take out the part where you describe what is needed to make it disappear.
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    Name: (Kuchiyose No jutsu:Gull Kokuou)Summoning Technique:Gull King
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user preforms the required hand seals to summon the King of The Sea Gulls,Kichiro.Kichiro is a male gull,with extreme strength and power.He is slightly smaller than Gamabunta and has white feathers covering his whole body,except for his tail feathers which are a fiery red color.He can fly at very high speeds if he wants to and can carry up to 4 persons on his back.He has a bright and warm personality which fits his element,Fire Release.He has mastered all techniques (except the Forbidden ranks) and is able to preform them without hand seals.He also has the strength to lift heavier objects and launch them at the users opponent.If he does that he will be tired and won't be able to move anymore due to the exhaustion.He can lift up to one ton without a problem.He will respect all summoners that respect him.
    Note:May only be used and taught by -Cobalt-.
    Notence summoned,Kichiro stays on the field for 4 turns,and he can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note:Must have signed the Gull contract.
    Note:Every move Kichiro uses counts as the users move.

    Kichiro is the boss summon.

    ~Declined~ Always put the added part in bold when re-submitting a custom, otherwise we won't bother checking it.
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    Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Gull Kisaki)Summoning Technique:Gull Queen
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After preforming the necessary hand seals the user summons Mayu,the Queen of the Gull's.She is Kichiro's mate,and the strongest female gull.She is a highly temperamental Gull and can become very vicious if angry.She dislikes being summoned unless she is really needed.She is slightly smaller than Kichiro and has white feathers covering her body,with the exception of her tail feathers which are a light blue color.She is big enough to carry 3 people on her back.She isn't very strong but she makes that up with her speed.She can fly at incredible speeds but if she overloads with people she loses speed.She has mastered the Lightning Release and can preform all techniques without hand seals (excluding the Forbidden ranks).It will take time to get her to respect a summoner,but in time she will.
    Note:Can only be used and taught by -Cobalt-.
    Notence summoned,Mayu stays on the field for 4 turns,and she can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note:Every move Mayu makes counts as the move of Mayu.

    ~Approved~

    Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Gull Sekkou)Summoning Technique:Gull Scout
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Chakra:15
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After preforming the necessary hand seals the user summons a normal sized Gull that serves as a scout.The bird has the ability to sense any nearby chakra source.Over a chakra link with the user the bird sends the acquired information giving the user a type of a mind map of a location.
    Notence summoned it can stay on the field for 6 turns.It can be summoned 2 times per battle.
    Note:Can only be used and taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note:Must have signed the Gull contract to use.

    ~Declined~ I don't mind you having chakra sensing summon, but no telepathy.


    Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Gull Taii Za Goei ) Summoning Technique:Gull Captain of The Guard
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After preforming the necessary hand seals the user summons the female gull,Emo.She is the Captain of the Royal Guard of the Gulls.She is second in command right after the King and Queen.She is a very versatile Gull and a very powerful at that.She is double the size of Gamakichi and can carry 2 people on her back.White feathers cover her body with the exception of her tail feathers which are green.She can be a very nice Gull to talk with but in battle she is very strict.She focuses completely on the battle and won't let the summoner down.She has mastery over Wind Release but needs to preform hand seals to do the techniques.
    Note:Can only be used and taught by -Cobalt-.
    Notence summoned Emo stays on the field for 3 turns,and can be summoned 2 times per battle.
    Note:Every move of Emo counts as the move of the user.

    Please edit where ever you want so it is acceptable for approval

    ~Declined~ Please explain to me how a bird would perform hand seals when it doesn't have any hands.
    Resubmiting:
    Name: (Koumorigasa)Umbrella
    Rank:S
    Typeffensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The umbrella is a specially made umbrella,created to be used as a deadly weapon.It is a black Japanese fashioned umbrella made of bamboo which was reinforced with very resistant metal thus making it nearly unbreakable.It can be used for several purposes such as attacking or defending.It has a handle which is 1.5 metres long.Inside the umbrella's handle,a katana that is about 1 meter long is hidden which can be drawn when needed.The sword has no special abilities,though it can channel elemental chakras.Also,by spinning the umbrella the user can release a rain of about 100 senbon at the opponent.The umbrellas strongest ability is that it can absorb any water technique up to A rank (excluding A rank techs).This makes the umbrella a great tool for both offensive and defensive purposes.
    Note:Can only be used by -Cobalt-.
    Note:Senbon can be launched once per battle.
    Note:The user can defend from water techs 5 times per battle with a cool down period of 2 turns after every use of this ability.

    I removed the flight part and restricted the senbon launching to once per battle.

    ~Declined~ Still OP. A technique that can nullify all A-rank and under water 5 times a match, while not counting as one of the 3 moves in your turn is unacceptable. If I deem it OP in your next re-submission I'll decline it for good.

    Name: (Kuchiyose No jutsu:Gull Kokuou)Summoning Technique:Gull King
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user preforms the required hand seals to summon the King of The Sea Gulls,Kichiro.Kichiro is a male gull,with extreme strength and power.He is slightly smaller than Gamabunta and has white feathers covering his whole body,except for his tail feathers which are a fiery red color.He can fly at very high speeds if he wants to and can carry up to 4 persons on his back.He has a bright and warm personality which fits his element,Fire Release.He has mastered all fire techniques (except the Forbidden ranks) and is able to preform them without hand seals.He also has the strength to lift heavier objects and launch them at the users opponent.If he does that he will be tired and won't be able to move anymore due to the exhaustion.He can lift up to one ton without a problem.He will respect all summoners that respect him.
    Note:May only be used and taught by -Cobalt-.
    Notence summoned,Kichiro stays on the field for 4 turns,and he can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note:Must have signed the Gull contract.
    Note:Every move Kichiro uses counts as the users move.

    I added the bolded part.

    ~Approved~Just added the word "fire" in your already bold part.

    Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Gull Taii Za Goei ) Summoning Technique:Gull Captain of The Guard
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After preforming the necessary hand seals the user summons the female gull,Emo.She is the Captain of the Royal Guard of the Gulls.She is second in command right after the King and Queen.She is a very versatile Gull and a very powerful at that.She is double the size of Gamakichi and can carry 2 people on her back.White feathers cover her body with the exception of her tail feathers which are green.She can be a very nice Gull to talk with but in battle she is very strict.She focuses completely on the battle and won't let the summoner down.She has mastery over Wind Release but she cannot use them without hand seals.Her feathers are designed so they resemble fingers,thus allowing her to preform hand seals.
    Note:Can only be used and taught by -Cobalt-.
    Notence summoned Emo stays on the field for 3 turns,and can be summoned 2 times per battle.
    Note:Every move of Emo counts as the move of the user.

    Edited the bolded part.

    Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Gull Sekkou)Summoning Technique:Gull Scout
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Chakra:15
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After preforming the necessary hand seals the user summons Scout,the head sensor of the Gulls.Scout has the ability to sense any nearby chakra source.He is very serious and communicates with someone only when he has info.
    Notence summoned Scout can stay on the field for 5 turns.It can be summoned 2 times per battle.
    Note:Can only be used and taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note:Must have signed the Gull contract to use.

    Removed the telepathy part and added the description,but nothing regarding abilities and such.
    Added the bolded part,and removed the telepathy business.

    ~Both Approved~ Made it 5 turns for the scout.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-09-2011 at 10:35 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mizu no hōshutsu: Shōtotsu suru miu no kabe)Water Release Colliding Water Wall

    Type: Defense/ Attack
    Rank:S
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Description: The User Will do One Handseal and make three spinning Water Vortex that collide and make a giant protective wall. The user can eitherUse the wall to defend againist attacks or have the giant wall fall onto their oppent and drown them

    Note: Can only Be used by -Itachi- Unless taught
    Note: Can only be used Three time per Battle

    ~Declined~ Where are the damages?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kasō shīrudo) Virtual shield
    Rank: A
    Type: Deffensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 0
    user infuses his samurai sword with chakra then makes two slashes in thin air one vertical on horizontal make a cross, in a split second after; the the cross in the air expands too make a large dome shaped shield over the user which can defend against A rank ninjutsu, not only does this shield defend the user but the user may also freely move in and out the chakra shield with ease.
    -can only be used by samurai

    (Jiton: Jishaku Shōkōgun )Magnetisim Release: Magnet syndrome.
    Rank: A
    range: n/a
    chakra cost: 25 upon release, 5 chakra points each turn active
    damage points: n/a
    By charging his whole body with magnet chakra,the user is able to turn anything he touches into a powerful magnet (except non metal object, but works on humans as shown in the manga). Once the user has touched an opponent whilst this jutsu is active, it creates a magnetic field in which the user of the jutsu can sense,therefore can pin point the location of an opponent once touched, in addition due to the opponents strong magnetic presence the user of the jutsu can easily throw magnitised shuriken, kunai and other metal weapons, with great success as the object fly straight towards the opponent.
    -this jutsu itself lasts three turns.
    -once enemy is touched user can feel the magnetic field an extra 3 turns
    -can only be used twice per fight.
    (Sen no naifu no beruto)Belt of a thousand knifes
    Rank: A
    range: n/a
    chakra cost: 20
    damage points:n/a
    The user holds around his waist a large belt attche with a thousand tiny knifes all in which have the ablity to be infused with chakra and extended like the samurai do.
    -can only be ued by samurai
    -cannot be used again in the match after all thousand knifes have been used

    these knifes are wrapped round a belt with small pouches
    Art of knife manipulation (Sōsa no geijutsu Naifu)
    Rank: A
    range: n/a
    chakra cost: 20
    The user throws any amount of knifes of his choice at his apponent,each knife can be controlled by the user too take any weapon shape possible using samurai special weapon transformation techniques.These knife can easily cut threw normal kunai or non chakra infused weapons.
    -The knifes can only be extended by a maximum of approx 10cm each side of the knifes
    -can only be used by samurai
    -The belt of a thousand knifes must be equiped

    (jiton: Jiki Akumu)Magnetic nightmare

    Rank: A
    range:medium
    chakra: 40
    The user infuses magnetic chakra around a large area in the ground he then slaps his hands, to create several large iron spiked pillars completely surrounding the enemy, not only does this jutsu attack the enemy but if he stands with thin 2 meters of a single pillar, his body will become a large magnet, allowing the user to throw desire magnetised metal objects with pin-point accuracy .
    ~All Declined~ How many times must I write this down for everyone to see? THIS IS NOT A BEAUTY CONTEST. Keep your submission plain and simple, don't put them in quotes/spoilers, don't add font or anything for that matters.

    Resubmit properly.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Velvet Ants
    General Description: Velvet ants, which is a common name for the Mutillidae family, are a collection of several species of wasps who's females resemble ants. Their name "velvet ant" refers to their dense pile of hair which most often is bright scarlet or orange but may also be black, white, silver, blue, or gold. They are known for their extremely painful sting, facetiously said to be strong enough to kill a cow, hence the common name "cow killer" or "cow ant" is applied to some species.
    The exoskeleton of all velvet ants is unusually tough (to the point that some entomologists have reported difficulty piercing them with steel pins when attempting to mount them for display in cabinets). This characteristic allows them to successfully invade the nests of their prey and also helps them retain moisture. Like related families in the Vespoidea, males have wings but females uniformly are wingless. > Picture <
    Scroll Owner: Nexus
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: Not existing yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Not existing yet

    Future Boss summoning if approved:

    Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kisakiwasu Ari - (Summoning technique: Queen-wasp of the Ants)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kisakiwasu Ari is the Queen of all the Velvet Ants. Being the queen, she is naturally the biggest of all Velvet Ants, resembling Gamabuntas height. She is equipped as any other female Vevlet Ant with a stinger that bares a powerful poison that she can use at her own will.



    Approved.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Transcription Seal: Flying Thunder God (Tensha Fūin: Hiraishin)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: Death if Contact.
    Description: A delayed variation of the Flying Thunder God technique. The technique seals the flying thunder god technique within the time/space seal. The technique works by adding another kanji (待) in the sealing formula of the Flying Thunder God. The required chakra cost would be used in advance. The technique would trigger upon the users will regardless of the situation or condition of the user.
    Declined, no teleportation variations allowed as customs

    Illusion Technique: Flying Thunder God ( Genjutsu: Flying Thunder God
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All as long as within sight
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The technique gives its target a quick illusion of the use of Flying thunder god technique. The user in front of the targets eyes would teleport anywhere to confuse the target, it would even create unreal seals to make the illusion seem realistic. Since it’s a quick illusion of a rather quick technique the genjutsu is quite difficult to detect because a genjutsu of teleportation is unexpected and the targets would commonly react on instincts and try to defend himself.
    Declined same as above even though its genjutsu
    For Izuna to check. I was told to resubmit these.

    Transcription Seal: Flying Thunder God (Tensha Fūin: Hiraishin)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: Death if Contact.
    Description: A delayed variation of the Flying Thunder God technique. The technique seals the flying thunder god technique within the time/space seal. The technique works by adding another kanji (待) in the sealing formula of the Flying Thunder God. The required chakra cost would be used in advance. The technique would trigger upon the users will regardless of the situation or condition of the user.

    ~Declined~ This is too similar to Bisha's version. The only difference is that you decide when it activates, where his would activate on contact.

    Illusion Technique: Flying Thunder God ( Genjutsu: Flying Thunder God
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All as long as within sight
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The technique gives its target a quick illusion of the use of Flying thunder god technique. The user in front of the targets eyes would teleport anywhere to confuse the target, it would even create unreal seals to make the illusion seem realistic. Since it’s a quick illusion of a rather quick technique the genjutsu is quite difficult to detect because a genjutsu of teleportation is unexpected and the targets would commonly react on instincts and try to defend himself.
    -Can only be used 4 times per match

    ~Approved~ Added a restriction.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi)Revelations the Porcupine
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user does 6handseals and use his own blood to summon Revelations, he is 16ft because he is the boss. so he is easy rideable, he has 3open spots on his body, one on the top (normally where someone would ride him. his face. and his under) he Specalizes in S Rank-Water jutsus and A-rank Genjutsu. when he feels endangered as a defense mechanism his spikkes automatically flare off. he is also able to attack with his pines at will, the pines go 50PH
    -Note: can only be summoned once in a battle.
    -Note: will stay for 4 turns.
    -Note: Can only use his pine move twice
    -Note: Once he uses his pines move twice, his whole body is vulnerable
    -Notenly be taught by teno757
    -Note:He is gray-big boss

    (Edit ANYTHING or take something off u see fit. if he cant use gen jutsu. can you change it to S-rank lightning)

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    Name:Trickle
    Rank:A
    Type:Weapon
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 25 per move move
    Descrrption:This blade was once used by a God Death Reaper General, seeing how most death repears had a one sided scythe he had a 2sided scythe to show he was Superior and diffrent from the rest. legend has it that his own death reapers turned agenst him to gain power but knowing him . he being a stubborn person he was going to die with nobody in the seat. Nobody was going to take him down. so 2countless days he fought his own men. it was only about 30 of them. but little did he know. his own weapon was draining power out of him. his final kill was also his death. the sword is said to drain your power once weak. a magnetic field to drain your electrons in your body when its most vulnerable.

    Abilities #1:By twirling it around real fast you create a force which blocks a magnetic items,Iron sand under A Rank and Gold Sand under A rank (Can only be used 3times), And it sends back the attack with half the damage

    Abilities #2: Speeds up your movement by +10

    Abilities #3: Every hit the user gets with this weapon they become more and more of like a magnet

    Notence he uses one of the special abilities, the blade starts draining his power (-20) per each turn until he puts it away

    (Edit where u see fit, even if u have to take somerthing out, i just really want this custom weapon approved)

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    (magunetto youshiki: magunetto bakuhatsu) Magnet Style:Magnet Explosion
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The User does 5hand signs then slams his hands on the ground. making the magnetic current flow through the earth real fast. the whole area gets a magnetic charge. so once it reaches the target it explodes underground right under the target causing a real big explosion with a overwhelm magnetic charge.

    Note:Can explode 2places at once
    Notenly can be used 3times
    Note:If used at short range. you get hit with half the affect
    Notence you slam your hands on the ground, unless you want to cancel ur attack, ur hands have to stay on the ground while u finish your attack
    Notenly magnet style users can use this
    Notenly taught by teno757

    EDIT ANYTHING u see fit
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    (kikan metsuki) Genjutsu:Mirror Eyes
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Type:Suplamentery
    Chakra Cost:60
    Damge points:N/A
    Description:This can only be use if someone does a genjutsu with their eyes. as the enemy cast genjutsu. the user body react to the genjutsu a put invisble mirror eyelids in their eyes. making the genjutsu counter. to make the person who used genjutsu. get caught. Ex. Sauske Use genjutsu on me. my mirror eyes come into play, hes in the genjutsu he tried to put me in

    Notenly can you use in battle
    Notenly taught by teno757
    Note:Vision is disrupted for 1turn

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    (denkou-youshiki kamikaze kuro-n) Lightning style:Kamikaze Clone
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplamentery/Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:70
    Damage points:70
    Description: As i do 1hand seal. a lightning clone of me appears from the sky. As that happens. it can do 1 of the 2 things. it can protect me. (It can use up to C-rank lightning) or the lightning clones runs into u. and cause a big explosion

    NOTE:Can only be use once
    NOTEnly stay in battle for 3turns
    NOTE:If hit once he Disappear

    EDIT OR ADD ANYTHING IF NEEDED

    ~All declined~ members under a current ban will not have their customs checked during their ban. Resubmit when it's lifted.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user starts by blinding the opponent with either a jutsu or a smoke bomb, then they send one puppet underground and the other above. The underground puppet bursts from the earth and impales the opponent while the above puppet drops several bombs on them*
    ~Must have two puppets on the field~
    ~Can only be though by Rikerslade and must be a puppetuser~



    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user sends a large amount of iron sand into the ground and settle it under the opponent. Once this is done, the sand violently explodes around the opponent and traps them in a ball of sand, leaving only their head and hands revealed, preventing them from using jutsu
    ~Must be have a means of using Iron Sand~
    ~Can only be though by Rikerlade~
    ~Only usable twice per battle~



    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After performing the Iron Binding jutsu, the user has the ball explode inwards, crushing the opponent and breaking multiple bones
    ~Only usable once per battle~
    ~Can only be thought by Rikerslade~
    ~Must have used Iron Binding first~



    ~All declined~ Look a couple of post above for ~Tampe E~'s customs. I will not accept jutsus that are in this form.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kumonon Ame no jutsu) | Cloudless Rain Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user focuses a suiton chakra into the atmosphere and begins to condense water molecules into rain drops. Rather than creating clouds that release the rain, the rain drops seemingly form out of mid air and fall to the earth. Once the chakra is released into the air it acts on its own, allowing the user to preform other techniques while the rain is active. Similar to the chakra sensing rain technique, since the created rain is imbued with the user's chakra it carries sensing abilities.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -Lasts three turns once used.

    ~Approved~ Brilliant.

    (Suiton: Tsurutsuru Itsu Uetto) | Water Style: Slippery When Wet
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: Equal to the Speed of the Opponent
    Description: The user focuses their chakra into a wet surface and enhances the slickness of the water. When someone or something attempts to run on the surface they will slip and fall. Depending on how fast they were moving according to the speed chart they will receive that number of damage. For example a taijutsu master sage with the 2nd gate open will receive 22 damage ((8+3) x 2).
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -Lasts two turns once used.

    ~Declined~ Rather then making the water more slippery (which would be extremely hard chemically), say you mix it with oil of some slime. Also, never refer to the speed chart, so change the way you deal the damages.

    (Doku Ame no Jutsu) | Poison Rain Technique
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 10 per turn
    Description: After creating a source of rain the user will either himself release poison gas into the atmosphere or have a capable summon do it for them. In the sky the poison will mix with the rain causing the rain to become purple in color. The poison becomes diluted by the water, but is still dangerous. Each turn in the rain the enemy receives damage and becomes slightly slower and weaker. Each turn their speed and reaction ability is reduced the equivalent of one rank while they take ten damage. The effects of the poison last for several turns before wearing off. The user is also vulnerable to the poison unless they have a way of nullifying it through either natural resistance or another technique.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -Lasts three turns once used.
    -Slowing effects last two turns after the rain stops.

    ~Declined~ Only Med-senseis can submit poison-related customs. If you are, please VM me and I'll re-check that one.

    (Shibou) - Blubber
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This "technique" is the result of a high fat diet and years of drinking unhealthy amounts. The person accumulates a large amount of weight through the formation of a thick layer of fat around their body. The thick layer of fat acts as a cushion against incoming blunt attacks, greatly reducing the effectiveness of things such as punches or kicks. It also acts as a buffer between the muscles and organs of the body. For instance a cut that would spill the intestines of a normal sized person would fail to reach the insides of a person using this. It will still hurt and leave a large wound, but won't be life threatening. Being an anhydrous tissue, fat is a poor conductor of electricity. As a result the person is protected from paralytic affects from unfocused lightning techniques. Fat is also a very good insulator of heat allowing the person to maintain a relatively stable internal temperature in cold weather, though they may be prone to heat exhaustion. The excess weight also reduces the person's speed and agility by the equivalent of one rank.
    -Must be attached to the character's biography.
    -Only available to "large" characters (i.e. Akimichi or reasonable Customs).
    -Only affects areas where layers of fat accumulate.
    -Reduces the character's speed by one rank.

    Link stating fat is a poor conductor of electricity: http://www.glenhealth.net/bodyFat.htm

    ~Declined~ While I find it refreshing to see someone wanted to become morbidly fat instead of ripped like a DBZ character, you've overextended the abilities of your technique. While it does make it harder for electricity to be conducted toward your organs and muscle, the result is simple; severe burns. When electricity isn't channeled, it's because there's a resistance hindering it; meaning it will be released in the form of heat and or light. So all in all, your fat would cause you to be more succeptible to get burned to the second and third degrees when hit by lightning (be it focused or non-focused). You're the opposite from safe when it comes to lightning.

    I'm okay with the resistance to cold, but to what extent? Also, while you can't use the speed chart in your jutsu description, did you really thought that with all those boost I'd accept a mere 1 rank drawback? You need a lot more restrictions and physical drawbacks.


    (Raiton: Touza Bakufuu) - Lightning Style: Capacitor Blast
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage: 90 (-20 to user)
    Description: The user will place their hands parallel to each other in front of their chest as if they were praying. They will keep the hands as close as possible without actually touching and begin circulating an electrical current through their body, arms and hands in a circular pattern turning their body into a make-shift parallel plate capacitor. As the charge circulates a positive charge builds in the left hand while a negative charge builds in the right. The continued movement of electrical current through the system causes charge to build up to critical levels between the two hands. At that moment the user pushes their palms forwards breaking the circuit and releasing the built up energy in the form of a massive blase that shoots forward. Because what's being released is purely energy, the actual attack portion of the attack isn't composed of chakra and is much more like a directed explosive blast. The backlash from the blast harms the user, specifically the hands.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -No lightning techniques the next turn.
    -Hand seals are slowed to half speed for the next two turns.
    -The user takes 20 damage.
    -Kind of looks like:


    ~Declined~ You're making me write a lot O__O.

    If you want to use science when making customs, you have to get your info straight. A capacitor will discharge between one plate to the other when it reach a critical point (based on the capacitance of your capacitor). If this limit wasn't reached while all your electrons were gathered into one of your hands, then breaking the circuit wouldn't do anything. Why? Simply because the one place where all those electrons want to go in to a possitivelly charged spot (your other hand). Since that other hand has basically no electrons in it, it is most likely the most possitively charged spot on the field, meaning your discharge would naturally flow from one hand to the other, severely burning you.

    The very basic of a capacitor is to "unleash" an arc of lightning composed of electrons when even the resistance caused by the air in between the two plates (your hand in that case), isn't enough to stop the electrons from moving. Conclusion, there's no way all those electrons would be unleashed as a wave, and even less chance they'd go anywhere other then toward your other hand.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Raccoons
    Scroll Owner: Alphonse Elric
    Other Users who have signed contract: N\A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N\A yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N\A

    Summoning Boss if approved:
    Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ritorurakūn- (Summoning technique: Little Raccoon )
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: >>Looks<< He is half the size of ponta which is how he got his name little raccoon. Like all of his kind he is quite intelligent and crafty. It has greater sense of smell then normal being able to sense the enemy up to mid range. The raccoon's paw has a great sense on touch mostly in it's claws. The little raccoon's claws are very powerful and can injury someone easily. Due him being awake mostly during the day he can see further then most of his other raccoon family. One person can ride him however it can't be for to long. His ears are quite perceptive like most raccoons. He can hear various movements quiet easily being able to hear 50–85 kHz and worms moving in the ground or other quiet noises if he concentrates.

    *Must be taught by Alphonse Elric
    *Using a C+ Rank fire jutsu will blind the raccoon's eyes for a bit.
    *Can only be summoned three times during battle.
    *Has enhanced vision unlike other raccoons allowing it to see up to mid range.


    Sutōngāgoiru no ken (Stone Gargoyle Sword)
    Type: Custome Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Points: 30 (+10 if channeling chakra into it)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:

    It's a 2ft long sword made out a special metal which can absorb doton chakra into it making it take a bit of a rock appearance. It has a gargoyle face for a hilt giving it's the name gargoyle. This sword is unique in a sense because instead of making high level jutsu more powerful then the rest it allows the lower rank jutsu to become more powerful as gargoyles have always been a kind of a tricksters. The sword has no true owner so anyone can wield it in battle which makes it a easy target to be taken.

    *+5 damage to d, c and b rank doton jutsu
    * -5 damage to all lightning jutsu.

    *Edit were you see fit*

    ~Approved~ Made it +5 for d-b rank.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Mugen- View Post
    sorry I really didnt.
    I'll edit it than ^_^

    (Kyousei-Katana no Netsu Seijin ) Great Sword of the Temperature Sage
    Rank: S
    Type: weapon
    Range:N/a
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: It is said this sword was once wielded by one of the family members of the Rokuddu Sage that possessed a ability to control temperature.Being constantly infused with that sages chakra,the sword actually inherited the ability.It is also said that the sword still has a small part of the Sages will left in it, so whenever someone who is not the weilder touches it, he get instantly ignited.The current and only weilder of this sword currently is Mugen who has the same ability as the Sage in the tales.(My CE)
    The sword like previously said has a ability to manipulate temperature to a certain point.The user has the choice of canceling any A-rank or Below water or earth jutsu much faster than by doing a regular jutsu,it also gives a advantage that it looks like the user was hit by the jutsu. It works by infusing either cold or hot temperature into the jutsu itself.(this is done by slashing or stabbing) the jutsu.This can also be used on a regular sword of the opponent if it is close combat.
    *The special ability costs 32 chakra
    *The special ability does count towards the 3 moves per turn rule.
    *The special ability can only be used once every 3 turns.Meaning you use it,than wait 2 full turns for it to cool down,than on the third you can use it again.
    The sword looks like so

    ~On Hold~ I want Cali to check this to see if it conflicts with his 7SM swords
    jutsu above hasnt been checked in 4 weeks...

    ~Re-submit it~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mephisto)-Mephisto
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Points: 40
    Damage Points: (40 by normal attack, 80 special attack)
    Description: Mephisto is a legendary weapon which origins are unknown. Tales tell that it comes from the God of Hell himself, forged with his own blood and effort. Other stories tell that was created by Masters of the Dark arts, which enable them to create this terrifying weapon.
    The weapon has mysterious abilities, such as the capacity to absorb/cut through ninjutsu. The user receives -5 of damage every-time he absorbs (such as Fire and Lightning) or cuts through elemental attacks, supposedly because the wielder of the weapon suffers from Hell itself.
    By absorbing an attack, the user is able to channelize this attack through his sword, and amplify it with his own chakra, making his attack an equivalent of an S-rank technique. Depending on the element (or non-element) absorbed, the user is able to shot the wave of energy of the same affinity.
    The user is unable to absorb other techniques until he has liberated the previous technique absorbed.
    -The sword can cut through B-ranks and below, but it counts as one of the three moves.
    -The user is able to absorb A-rank and below ninjutsu, up to three times, and counts as one of the three moves.
    -The sword is indestructible, though, it doesnt mean it can cut through everything
    -The sword can only be handled by Gin, anyone else that tries to get a hand on it will be shocked by lightning enough to let go of the sword
    -Only Gin-San can use this sword


    (Genjutsu: Kusari no Makai)- Illusionary Technique: Chains of Hell
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will rise his hands and put his opponent under a genjutsu. Under the genjutsu, chains will rapidly emerge from the ground and trap the opponent's hands, and at the same speed they emerged, they will pull downwards, pulling the enemy with them, restricting the opponent from connecting his hands together or stand up. This genjutsu lasts for one turn, in which the opponent is unable to move.
    -The user has to be able to see the opponent
    -No genjutsu for three turns after this technique is used
    -Can only be used once
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San


    (Kuchiyose: Kea Seijins: Meros and Sarah) Summoning: Kea Sages: Meros and Sarah
    Type: Summon
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A (-10 by summoning them)
    Description: After extracting some blood and making the necessary handseals, the user can summon the Kea Sages. Both have been trained specifically in their element on affinity almost their entire lives, and have mastered even the most destructive jutsus. Sarah is able to use S-rank and below Water and Wind jutsus, proving her vast knowledge in water jutsu. Meros is able to use S-rank and below Fire and Lightning jutsus. Their wings are designed in such way, that they are able to make handseals (their wings have 5 feathers, this 5 feathers are used like fingers to make handseals). Even though they are masters in their own field, they are old, so their capacity to fly at high speeds have decade, and they are only able to fly in a slow-mid paced speed. The user can summon both Keas in his shoulders, or in the ground, depending in where the Keas are summon. If the Keas are summoned in the user's shoulders, they will strongly close their claws in the user's skin, sticking them in place (by doing so, the user loses -5 of health, but does not affect his perfomance). The Keas are unable to fusion to the user, has they aren't able to combine genetically.
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -Can only stay in the battlefield for 5 turns
    -Summoning them counts as two of the three moves in the turn they are summon.
    -Each of their moves count as a move
    -The user is unable to summon other Keas while they are still in the field, the user is unable to summon any Kea for two turns after they leave the battlefield.
    -The user is unable to use higher than A-ranks for one turn after they leave the battlefield.
    -Can only be summoned by those who hold the Kea contract
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San


    (Fuuton: Kaze Bakuyaku Reiki) Wind Release: Wind Explosive Aura
    [Type: Defensive/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will stand in position in an aggressive posture then release a massive amount of wind chakra through the ground. The user can look at the opponent without a problem, but the opponent can only see the user as a dark blur with glowing red eyes. By doing so, Wind will burst upwards into the air, with the user inside of the burst. The user will receive -10 of damage from the burst of air do the chakra strain. If the opponent comes closer and closer to the burst, the opponent will feel weaker and weaker, losing self-confidence and falling in the ground, stunning him for one turn. This defense can defend against Forbidden and below Lightning (except Kirin) and S-rank Wind Jutsus. If the opponent is caught in the burst area, he will be stunned and suffer moderate cuts in the flesh. The burst though, is highly flammable and can combust with B-rank fire and above.
    -Can only bee used twice
    -Can only be used once every 3 turns
    -The user is not able to use above A-rank wind and lightning in the next turn
    -No other wind jutsus in the same turn do chakra restrain
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San

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    Inchato gave me permission to alter Frigid Wind

    (Hyoton: Gokkan No Kaze)-Ice Release: Frigid Wind
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user makes two hand seals and manipulates the air above an opponent to move down upon them at a high speed. As the air moves down, several small, thin blades of razor sharp ice are created, which will cut into the opponent as the wind hits them, slicing into their body and causing external and internal damage.
    Note: This does not necessarily have to be created over an opponent's head.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
    (Fuuton: Gokkan No Kaze)-Wind Release: Frigid Wind
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user makes two hand seals and manipulates the air above an opponent to move down upon them at a high speed. As the air moves down, several small, thin blades of razor sharp wind currents are created, which will cut into the opponent as the wind hits them, slicing into their body and causing external and internal damage.
    - This does not necessarily have to be created over an opponent's head.
    - Can only be used thrice per battle.
    - Can only be taught by Gin-San


    ~All Declined~ Re-submit those in a standard format. No font, no spoiler/code. Plain and simple.

    Again everyone, this isn't a beauty contest, you can make them look nice and shiny once they're approved and in your personal custom thread.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi)Psalms the Porcupine
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage points: 50
    Description: The user gets does 6handseals and use his own blood to summon Psalms, he is 13ft so he is easy rideable, he has 3open spots on his body, one on the top (normally where someone would ride him. his face. and his under) he Specalizes in B- Rank-Wind jutsus. when he feels endangered as a defense mechanism his spikkes automatically flare off. he is also able to attack with his pines at will, the pines go 50PH
    -Note: can only be summoned once in a battle.
    -Note: will stay for 3 turns.
    -Note: Can only use his pine move twice
    -Note: Once he uses his pines move twice, his whole body is vulnerable
    -Notenly be taught by teno757
    -Note: All the techniques done by the summon counts toward the user's 3 moves per turn.


    (I Have permission by teno757 to sign a contract with this animal)

    ~Approved~ Added the bold part.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Nagato.. View Post
    It would be greatly appreciated if my checker could edit if possible to allow the technique to be approve able, if its within reach.



    (Fuuton: Ōfū no Tekunikku) - Wind Style: Crosswind Technique
    Type: Defense /Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80

    Description: The user clasps his hands together channeling his wind chakra into the air causing the wind to form a cross like formation around the user that rotates rapidly creating a shield around the user that defends well against most techniques, even from under his feet as well as can cause serious skin lacerations if the opponent is caught within range of this technique.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: Cannot perform fire techniques while inside the sheild.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato or Zenryoku

    ~Declined~ Please explain how a "cross" could rotate around you and protect from underground attacks without constantly hitting your legs? Other than that it seemed fine and should be approved once you fix that part.



    (Doton: Akuma chikyū no dōka) Earth Style: Demonic Earth Assimilation

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a

    Description: User gathers his earth chakra and manipulates his body to form into a loose mud like substance that allows him to avoid certain techniques by seeping into the earth or mud basically being soaked up by the soil and the user can travel through the earth/swamp and reform out of the ground as the mud like substance retaking form. It looks similar to Suigetsu's Hydration technique.

    Note: Can only be done 3 times per matchup.
    Note: User has to be standing on earth or in contact with earth.
    Note: Works faster if the ground is wet or the user is trapped in mud.
    Note: Getting hit by lightning is fatal to the user.
    Note: Can only perform Earth techniques up to B rank while in this form.
    Note: Can only be taught/used by Nagato..

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ No more Suigetsu's Hydration rip off.






    (Hiero Taka Geijutsu: Hiero mōdo) - Hiero Falcon Arts: Hiero Mode

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: -10 per turn
    Damage Points: +10 Tai +10 Nin

    Description: To enter Hiero Mode the user must be in a meditative state or be completely still while a previously summoned Hiero Falcon will send its chakra into the user which can happen pretty fast. The user contains the chakra and manipulates his the given chakra with his wind chakra and slowly attains characteristics and special ablities that Heiro Falcons have. The abilities the user obtains are the following:

    -The user's five senses, speed, and reflexes are enhanced beyond the normal capabilities of the average ninja. The sense of smell is now capable of tracking the opponent if the user has lost sight of him/her. The users eyes will form silver patches over them that extend from the temple to the nose.

    -The strength of the user also is increased to a level that can stand up with Sakura's strength. The hands & feet take a claw-like appearance using manipulation of wind chakra and underneath the users arms small underwings will form from wind chakra as well that allows the user to fly.

    -After Hiero Mode is worn of, the users body will be exhausted because of the drastic changes his body had to undergo.

    Note: Mode only lasts for 4 turns
    Note: User Gains a +1 Base Speed Lvl & x1.2 Reaction Speed
    Note: The user can't perform any jutsus while trying to obtain Hiero Mode since he has to be completely still.
    Note: User will be unable to perform wind element for the next two turns after this wears off.
    Note: The falcon(s) used to attain Hiero Mode will automatically disperse.
    Note: After Hiero Mode has worn of, the user can't perform S-rank techniques or above for one turn.

    Originally declined by Zenryoku but he gave permission to remake this technique. Ask him if needed.


    ~Declined~ OP. Also, did you get my approval to have the Falcon summoning?

    (Fuuton: Ōfū no Tekunikku) - Wind Style: Crosswind Technique
    Type: Defense /Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80

    Description: The user clasps his hands together channeling his wind chakra into the air causing the wind to form a various ring-like formation around the user that rotates rapidly with enough wind force to excavate the earth and fling it outwards from underneath the user creating a shield around the user that defends well against most techniques, even from under his feet as well as can cause serious skin lacerations if the opponent is caught within range of this technique. When the technique is over, a small round hold it underneath the uses feet.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: Cannot perform fire techniques while inside the sheild.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato.. or Zenryoku

    ~Declined~ Re-submissions won't be checked if the changed/added part aren't put in bold.


    (Hiero Taka Geijutsu: Hiero mōdo) - Hiero Falcon Arts: Hiero Mode

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: -20 per turn
    Damage Points: +10 Tai +10 Nin [Death is the toll of the user]

    Description: To enter Hiero Mode the user must be in a meditative state or be completely still while a previously summoned Hiero Falcon will send its chakra into the user which can happen pretty fast. The user contains the chakra and manipulates his the given chakra with his wind chakra and slowly attains characteristics and special ablities that Heiro Falcons have. The abilities the user obtains are the following:

    -The user's five senses, speed, and reflexes are enhanced beyond the normal capabilities of the average ninja. The sense of smell is now capable of tracking the opponent if the user has lost sight of him/her. The users eyes will form silver patches over them that extend from the temple to the nose.

    - The hands & feet take a claw-like appearance using manipulation of wind chakra and underneath the users arms small underwings will form from wind chakra as well that allows the user to fly at a fast rate.

    -The user will have a small boost in strength and speed by x.5


    Note: Mode only lasts for 5 turns
    Note: x1.2 Reaction Speed
    Note: The user can't perform any jutsus while trying to obtain Hiero Mode since he has to be completely still.
    Note: The falcon(s) used to attain Hiero Mode will automatically disperse.
    Note: The user can't perform S-rank techniques or above in the same turn.
    Note: User will die when Hiero mode is completely over.

    Removed standing up to Sakuras strength & increasing +1 in base speed, other than that I dont see what can be left OP about it. Plus I added death as the toll of using this sacred technique.

    ~Declined~ No more hybrid mode will be approved (human/animal mix).


    (Ninpou: Dākuchakura) Ninja Art: Dark Chakra of Hatred Summoning

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: +30
    Damage: Cost of 65% of the users life force

    Description: User will think about pain and all the struggles and harm hes caused similar to your life flashing right before his eyes, in this brief second he will be consumed by hatred and chakra will burst from all directions around being able to defend form an incoming attack from all around. He then will have the ability to use the Dragon of the Darkness Flame.


    Note: Only Lasts 5 turns then the user will be left almost depleted of his life energy.
    Note: No S ranks or above after this technique is over.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato..


    Looks like this [Minus The Third Eye]


    ~Declined~ This is too unrestricted for a Forbidden technique. Make it last 3 turns. Does this blast coming out from you when you enter the mode last for more than 2-3 seconds? Can it block more then one attack? What rank can it block? Add some physical drawbacks.


    (Ninpou: Yami no honoo no ryū) Ninja Art: Dragon Of The Darkness Flame

    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: All
    Damage: Cost 10% of the users life.

    Description: After unleashing his pain in a violent rush of chakra the user will summon a dragon made out of chakra to burst from his arm, swirling around to attack the opponent from any direction above ground. The Dragon is attached to the users arm and can be manipulated to change directions at will. When the dragon is near the user when entering short range from the opponent it will expand also opening its mouth to consume them.

    Note: When the technique is over the user will be left knocking on deaths door.
    Note: No A ranks or above after the techniques over.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato..

    Looks like this


    ~Declined~ The mode needed for this jutsu was declined. Also, take away the 10% of user's life considering you already had 65% of your life taken away from the mode you must enter. Replace it with something else.


    (Ninpou: Shisubeki Honoo no Kobushi) Ninja Art: Fist Of The Mortal Flame

    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80

    Description: The Fist of the mortal flame is a mass of unfocused chakra. The user releases this out of their dominant hand and collects it in a mass. He/She then releases it all at once it explodes outward. It has enough force to knock any opponent in Short range back as well as breaking a few bones and tearing at their flesh. It can be launched into Mid-Long range as a projectile it slams into the opponent with enough force to smash bones and it will explode outward releasing waves of chakra that can knock the opponent unconcious if hit directly. It can also be used as a devastating short range punch that can if hit directly in the chest can stop the opponent's heart.

    Note: Can Only Be Used 3x Per battle
    Note: No S Ranks or above after for the next turn
    Note: Must be taught by Nagato..

    Looks like this


    ~Declined~ OP. Work on the part where you rip the flesh off your opponent as you simply create the jutsu.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gama Samsara) – Civet Summoning Technique: Gama Samsara
    Rank: A
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Gama is a relatively young and small civet who is part of the Samsara branch of the Civet kingdom; he is known to be one of the most gifted civets in his generation for having a peculiar resistance to genjutsu (except for S-rank and above genjutsu, and Mangekyō Sharingan). It is quite hard to control Gama as he only helps summoners he respects in battle. However, once on good ground, he becomes rather protective and close to the summoner. Gama is a dark brown civet who attaches to the user’s body (most of the time he wraps around the user’s neck) and has the ability to use all ninjutsu the user knows up to C-rank. When joined with the user’s body, Gama can help the user dispel him from any A-rank or lower genjutsu since he can release chakra into the user’s body.
    Note: Gama has a strong bond with the contract holder and/or creator, and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when he’s summoned. As for anyone else, he only stays on the field for 4 turns and can only be summoned once.
    Note: Each of Gama’s jutsu used count as a jutsu of the user.
    Note: Gama can only help the user dispel A-rank and under genjutsu.
    Note: Genjutsu performed by Mangekyō Sharingan cannot be overcome.
    Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.
    ~Declined~ Where's the restriction I asked for concerning the number of time it can get you out of a genjutsu?

    (Hetto-neko no Jutsu: Toku Senbon) - Civet Style: Hide Projectiles
    Rank: C-B
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20-25
    Damage Points: 30-40
    Description: This jutsu is the ability of Civets to shoot hardened strands of their fur towards their opponent, as sharp thrown projectiles. The fur that is shot is akin to sharp metal senbons but may varying in damage depending on the size and amount of chakra used. A Civet summoner can also create such senbon-like projectiles on their hands and can then use them as if they are kunais/senbon as they exhibit steel-like properties during their use, and may be further enhanced by chakra flow. Smaller Civets are capable of manipulating and using their fur to create projectiles that have the same damage and size as regular senbons. Normal Civets and human summoners can create projectiles that have the same damage and size as small daggers/kunais. While larger projectiles that are created by larger Civets would resemble the size and damage of Kushimaru's Nuibari (Sewing Needle) - about 5times the size of a projectile a normal Civet could create.
    Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.
    ~Declined~ Restrictions?

    (Aburame Hijutsu: Bakemono Nioi) –Secret Technique: Phantom Smell II (Aburame)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short-Long (To activate), Short (To effect)
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After getting burnt or electrocuted, the user’s Kikaichū bugs emit a peculiar smell which induces a special genjutsu on the opponent which takes effect gradually; in which the opponent will begin to hallucinate and see false images for a short period of time i.e. fall under a visual genjutsu. The user can decide what the opponent sees. The Kikaichū bugs are capable of emitting such a smell due to the burning of their chitinous (a special substance) exoskeleton. The opponent must be within short range of the burnt Kikaichū bugs for this jutsu to work. Aburame are immune.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
    Note: Must wait at least one turn to activate again.
    Note: Kikaichū bugs are dead if they are burnt/electrocuted.
    Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
    Created by DopeyDwarf
    ~Declined~ I accepted it once because the description was fitting, but I won't allow you to make a series of genjutsu based on 1 chemicals emitted when your bugs are burned. It's like saying that one particular chemical can induce many different reaction when used in the same manner and environment.

    (Kikaichu Bakuhatsu no Jutsu) – Kikaichu Detonation Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: A variation of (Hachi Bakudan No Jutsu) - Bee Bomb Technique where, on command, the user detonates some of his Kikaichū bugs in a small explosion/detonation (similar to a smoke bomb going off). The Kikaichū bugs release a puff of smoke instead of wax, which has devastating effects (irritants, akin to allergens) on the mouth, nose, eyes or open wounds of the opponent but don't really do anything to their skin. It is best used a distraction for the user to flee or attack as the puff of smoke obscures any retreating ninja.
    Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
    Created by DopeyDwarf
    ~Declined~ No more explosion of element/summons.
    (Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gama Samsara) – Civet Summoning Technique: Gama Samsara
    Rank: A
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Gama is a relatively young and small civet who is part of the Samsara branch of the Civet kingdom; he is known to be one of the most gifted civets in his generation for having a peculiar resistance to genjutsu (except for S-rank and above genjutsu, and Mangekyō Sharingan). It is quite hard to control Gama as he only helps summoners he respects in battle. However, once on good ground, he becomes rather protective and close to the summoner. Gama is a dark brown civet who attaches to the user’s body (most of the time he wraps around the user’s neck) and has the ability to use all ninjutsu the user knows up to C-rank. When joined with the user’s body, Gama can help the user dispel him from any A-rank or lower genjutsu since he can release chakra into the user’s body.
    Note: Gama has a strong bond with the contract holder and/or creator, and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when he’s summoned. As for anyone else, he only stays on the field for 4 turns and can only be summoned once.
    Note: Each of Gama’s jutsu used count as a jutsu of the user.
    Note: Gama can only help the user dispel A-rank and under genjutsu.
    Note: Gama can only help the user dispel genjutsu once per turn.
    Note: Genjutsu performed by Mangekyō Sharingan cannot be overcome.
    Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.


    (Hetto-neko no Jutsu: Toku Senbon) - Civet Style: Hide Projectiles
    Rank: C-B
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20-25
    Damage Points: 30-40
    Description: This jutsu is the ability of Civets to shoot hardened strands of their fur towards their opponent, as sharp thrown projectiles. The fur that is shot is akin to sharp metal senbons but may varying in damage depending on the size and amount of chakra used. A Civet summoner can also create such senbon-like projectiles on their hands and can then use them as if they are kunais/senbon as they exhibit steel-like properties during their use, and may be further enhanced by chakra flow. Smaller Civets are capable of manipulating and using their fur to create projectiles that have the same damage and size as regular senbons. Normal Civets and human summoners can create projectiles that have the same damage and size as small daggers/kunais. While larger projectiles that are created by larger Civets would resemble the size and damage of Kushimaru's Nuibari (Sewing Needle) - about 5times the size of a projectile a normal Civet could create.
    Note: Humans can only use B-rank version 4 times per battle.
    Note: Must have mastered ninjutsu.
    Note: Must have mastered Basic 5 elemental ninjutsu.

    Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.


    (Aburame Hijutsu: Bakemono Nioi) –Secret Technique: Phantom Sound I (Aburame)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short-Long (To activate), Mid (To effect)
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After getting burnt or electrocuted, the user’s Kikaichū bugs release/create a peculiar crackling sound which induces a special genjutsu on the opponent which takes effect gradually; in which the opponent will begin to hallucinate and see false images for a short period of time i.e. fall under a visual genjutsu. The user can decide what the opponent sees. The sound that is created by the Kikaichū bugs is a result of the disintegration of their hard and brittle chitinous (a special substance) exoskeleton akin to the crackling of wood when it is burned. The opponent must be within short range of the burnt Kikaichū bugs for this jutsu to work. Aburame are immune.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
    Note: Must wait at least one turn to activate again.
    Note: Kikaichū bugs are dead if they are burnt/electrocuted.
    Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
    Created by DopeyDwarf
    Sound should be able to travel further then smell.

    Declined. Similar technique exists, Do not resubmit. -SY

    (Kikaichu Bakuhatsu no Jutsu) – Kikaichu Mist Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40 per turn (Maximum Damage)
    Description: A special technique in which the user commands his Kikaichū bugs to begin to release/emit a collection of fine, airborne particles akin to smoke or a mist. The resulting puff of "smoke" that is released is highly infused with the user's chakra and is in fact particles that are irritants or allergens which have devastating effects on the mouth, nose, eyes or open wounds of the opponent - causing slight pain in the target's nasal passages/cavity, lungs and stomach, but don't really do anything to their skin. The pain can be easily endured or overcome by experienced/battle-hardened ninja so it is best used a distraction for the user to flee or attack as the puff of smoke obscures any retreating ninja. Aburame are immune.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: Lasts two turns.
    Note: Must wait at least 2 turns after deactivation to use again.
    Note: Opponents that are Sannin rank or lower experience the maximum possible damage (provided they are within the mist).
    Note: Kage rank experience only half the maximum damage (20 damage) and Sages experience half the damage of Kages (10 damage) and so on.

    Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
    Created by DopeyDwarf


    Declined. Similar technique submitted previously by someone else, Do not resubmit. -SY


    New:

    (Kikaichu Tsukamu Nadare) – Destruction Bug Avalanche
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will send a large swarm of his Kikaichū bugs and manipulate them so that they form a large wave which is directed towards the target and is used to wrap around the target and immobilise him. The user can also ride the wave, allowing him to move around the battlefield.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
    Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
    Created by DopeyDwarf


    ~All Declined~ No more customs will be checked if they aren't submitted in a plain and unaltered way. This means no font, no size changes, no spoilers/code...etc. You can make your jutsus look good once they're approved and in your personal custom thread.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Name: Genjutsu: (脳のカット)-Brain cutter
    Rank: A
    Type: Atack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Standing short range from an opponent the user points a finger on the opponents forhead, and when the user does it he/she looks into the opponents eyes, and cast a Genjutsu on them, disrupting thei're senses, and make them belive the user's cutting up their brain with his/hers finger.
    ~Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~Note2: User must have Sharingan
    ~Note3: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Approved~ Edited it and took out the last sentence about your opponent falling to the ground. You can cause pain, but you can't tell how they'll react.
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    Name: Doton: (Doton Tatsu Maki)-Earth style: Earth Tornado
    Rank: S
    Type: Suplumantary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    The user gathers up Doton chakra and release it into the ground, and release all stones from the earth and make them create a huge tornado of rocks that flies around in a circle around the user, and it covers the whole field. The user can increase or decrease the range and amount of the tornado.
    ~Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Note 2: No Doton-Jutsus for 1 turn.
    ~Note 3: While the user is controlling the earth tornado he can't use any other jutsus, bcause he have to hold it flowing.
    ~Note 4: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Similar technique already exist.


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    Name: Katon: (雨の燃焼)-Fire Release: Burning Rain
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    The user sends a huge fireball up into the sky, and when it's high enough up it splits up and turns into lots of burning raindrops that covers the whole area.
    ~Note: If the user doesn't use a jutsu to protect himself, he'll be infected by the rain aswell.
    ~Note 2: Can only be used once per battle
    ~Note 3: The rain lasts 1 round(if not stopped)
    ~Note 4: No Fire jutsus for 3 turns
    ~Note 5: Must be Sannin rank or higher
    ~Note 6: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined~ OP. 1 turn of flaming rain? Change that. It shouldn't last more than the length of your move. Change the description to explain how such small flames can actually do damage. Also, how do the flames make their way to the ground?

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    Name: Katon: (雨のコントロール)-Fire style: Rain Control
    Rank: B
    Type: Defence/Attack
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    If the user has used the Burning Rain jutsu, he can use this to take controll over the rain and form it into whatever he wants.
    ~Note: Must have used Fire style: Burning Rain first
    ~Note 2: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Burning Rain wasn't approved and even if it was, such jutsu would never be accepted.


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    New week, new jutsus


    Name: Katon: (雨の燃焼)-Fire Release: Burning Rain
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    The user sends a huge fireball up into the sky, and when it's high enough up it splits up and turns into lots of burning raindrops that covers the whole area. The small fire drops down so close that they leave burns on the flesh of the opponent. One of the raindrops aren't strong, but together they give a lot of damage. The rain falls down fast, just like normal, heavy rain.
    ~Note: If the user doesn't use a jutsu to protect himself, he'll be infected by the rain aswell.
    ~Note 2: Can only be used once per battle
    ~Note 3: The rain lasts as long as the user controlls it to last, and while doing the burning rain the user can't use any other jutsus, cause he must focus on the rain.
    ~Note 4: No Fire jutsus for 2 turns
    ~Note 5: Must be Sannin rank or higher
    ~Note 6: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Approved~

    (Hank Modo)-Hank Mode
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    The user gathers up his chakra and focus it to his hair. The hair then spreads around the whole body, and turns long and blue, and the face of the user turns into the face of a beast with sharp teeths. The arms of the user turns into giant muscles, and the user grows claws on his feets and hands. When in Hank mode the user can run 5 times faster then he normaly can, punch 5 times harder and jump 2 times higher. Entering Hank mode only takes the user a few seconds, but while entering the user can't use any jutsus. Clones can use Hank Mode (Normal, Lightning, Water, earth clone), but their mode only lasts one round, and only one clone at the time can use Hank mode. When in Hank Mode the user runs so fast that he can only be seen with opponents that have Sharingan with atleast 3 tomes or Rinnegan. When the user is is Hank Mode he's able to withstand the attacks of A-Ranks and lower, because of his thick skin and muscles.
    ~Note: While in Hank Mode, the user can't use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu. Only Tai and Kenjutsu.
    ~Note 2: The speed of Hank Mode is almost equal to A's lightning armor
    ~Note 3: Hank Mode only lasts 3 turns
    ~Note 4: Can only enter Hank Mode once per battle
    ~Note 5: When Hank Mode dies out, the user loses the battle
    ~Note 6: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This is basically a rip off of the gates, you only changed your appearance and added the ability to withstand any A-rank (which is OP in my opinion).

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    (Yuki Meimu)- Snow illusion
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    The user makes it snow at the start of the fight. The opponent thinks this is just normal snow, but the snow never stops. After 5 rounds of snow, if the opponent hasn't gotten rid of all the snow on the field, the user will make the snow spin around the opponent. When the snow spins around the opponent the opponent will belive that the snow are all shurikens and that if they move, they'll get sliced. This keeps the opponent trapped, and gives the user the oppertunity to strike a blow at the opponent.
    ~Note: Must have either a bio or a puppet that can use Hyuton and must have started training in Genjutsu
    ~Note 2: Must be Sannin or higher
    ~Note 3: Can only be used once per battle
    ~Note 4: Can only by used by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Approved~

    (Genjutsu:Tatakai tai seishin)-Illusionary techniques: Struggle against mind
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    The user place the opponent under a Genjutsu by sending chakra signals to the opponents brain. When the chakra reach the brain, it goes trough the memories of the opponent in a second. Then as the ge jutsu has started without the opponent eaven realising it, the user make the opponent see that the user summons a door and the door door appears in front of him. The user then goes trough the door and dissepears. The opponent gets forced into folowing trough the door, and when he goes trough it, it dissepears and replaces with a huge black hole, where he's stuck. This is when the opponent knows he's under a genjutsu, and can try to break free. For all this time, the user and the opponent are just standing infront of eachother, and now the user can take the final blow on the opponent. However, if the user manages to break the genjutsu, the user can't move for one round.
    ~Note: Can only be used once per battle
    ~Note 2: After the opponent is beeing trapped inside the Gen, the user can't use any ninjutsus.
    ~Note 3: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined~ You can't forced your opponent's body to react one way or another, otherwise there'd be no way to escape it. So, work on the part where he walks at the door. Also, I think it's pretty obvious it was a genjutsu when you disappeared in the door, no need to wait up until the opponent past the door to realize it's one.

    (Aoi naibun waza)-Blue secret techniques
    Rank: Depends on the puppets and skills
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Depends on puppets and skills
    Chakra cost: Depends on puppets and skills
    Damage poinst: Depends on puppets and skills
    The Blue secret technique, is the secret puppetry techniques that's been developed by ~The Norwegian~. The Blue secret technique is a combination of the black secret technique and the red secret technique, aswell as many other that ~The Norwegian~ has made. The Blue secret technique allows the user too make new puppets, that's not human puppets and can't use any ninjutsu, and also the Blue secret techniques have several unique puppet techs, aswell as the common puppet techs.. The puppets in the Blue secret technique can have special weapons aswell. All of the puppets in the Blue secret technique must be summoned from a scroll.
    ~Note: The user can only have 3 puppets under the Blue secret technique
    ~Note 2: Must now puppetry techniques
    ~Note 3: Only ~The Norwegian~ knows the blue secret techniques

    ~Declined~ I literally have no idea what this jutsu does. And what's the red and black secret technique? Work on all the ranks, range,damage...etc I want to know what it'll be, don't leave it up to the puppet.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Desperation Head Strike(Jiboujiki hitsu dageki)
    Rank:D(When used without element) and A(when used with element)
    Type:Attack/Defence
    Range:Short
    Chakra:10(for D rank version)/30(for A rank version)
    Damage points:20(for E rank version)/60(for A rank version)

    This is basically a powered headbutt. It can be used to temporarily stun an opponent when aimed at the nose or forehead in order to give the user a chance at a counter attack.It can also be used as a counter to taijutsu techniques that involve the use of fists, when a punch is about to hit, the user can use this technique in order to break the fingers of their opponent thus disabling them from weaving hand signs and using that hand for taijutsu techniques. The user can add known elements to this technique by adding the nature element and focusing it in the forehead area. Fire element will burn opponent once it collides,Water element would distract the opponent because water would enter their eyes as its colliding,Earth element will make the an earth formed horn causing this technique to be deadlier, Wind blows the opponent away after contact is made, Lightning electrocutes the opponent paralyzing them as soon as they make contact and slowing their reflexes making them paralyzed for one turn.

    For example if the user were to add fire element their forehead would look like the picture depicted below.(Besides flaming hands)



    -Restrictions-
    -If The user strikes their opponent with this at their heads they will get +5 damage.
    -If Used with Elemental version can only be used six times and once used can not be used for another 3 turns after each use.
    -Must have mastered Element the user wants to use to at least A rank-

    Can only be taught by Swizzik an hawiianmike(co-creator)

    ~Declined~ Re-submit with proper template, this jutsu just look like a mess. No need to specify which is D-rank and which is A-rank in the damage and chakra section, it's obvious. Re-work it.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Dangan o Hikisaku)- Sniper Art: Tearing Bullet
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: An arrow infused with wind chakra that generates a wide vortex of slicing wind around it that pierces and repels any obstacles in its path like a drill. This technique can be combined with another elemental technique such as water or fire. The arrow may follow a strait or curved path.
    -Usable 3 times per battle and once per turn

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Noizu no Dangan)- Sniper Art: Noise Bullet
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: An arrow that, with a handseal, bursts open and launches a dozen needles from it that all have wires attached to them bound to a central point and numerous exploding tags lining the wires. Another handseal detonates them and causes damage to everything in the area it spans.
    -Usable 4 times per battle

    ~Declined~ Do you realize how many abilities you're stacking up in this jutsu? It's an explosive arrow that lunch needles with bombs attached to the wire of the needles...Work on it.

    (Doton: Dosei no Hinan-sho)- Earth Release: Earthen Shelter
    Type: Defence/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A protective bunker is created out of condensed rock and mud by forming a handseal and focusing chakra into the earth. It may be made with openings so those inside can see outside the bunker and attack while remaining protected.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -No other earth jutsu on the same turn

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Inago no Parēdo)- Locust Parade
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Any locusts the user has summoned rub their legs against another part of their body in harmony with others and produce a genjutsu-inducing sound. In the illusion, a large swarm of locusts fly around the targets that prevent them from seeing or hearing anything else. Locusts and the summoner are unnaffected.
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -Lasts for 2 turns
    -Must have signed the locusts contract

    ~Approved~Made it up to mid-range

    (Fuuton: Harikēn'āmā) - Wind Release: Hurricane Armor
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 each turn active)
    Damage points: N/A (+5 to wind jutsu)
    Description: The user covers himself with wind chakra that is white in color and spirals around every part of his body. The user becomes nearly weightless which greatly enhances the speed of his movements. Wind jutsu also get a slight boost in power. However due to being enveloped by wind chakra, fire techniques cause more damage.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Lasts for 3 turns
    -No S-rank or higher wind jutsu next turn

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
    Resubmitting:

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Noizu no Dangan)- Sniper Art: Noise Bullet
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: An arrow that, with a handseal, splits open and launches a dozen needles from it with an exploding tag attached to each at targets. Another handseal detonates them and causes sigificant damage to targets in the range of the tags.
    -Usable 4 times per battle

    ~Declined~ You say the needles shoots toward your enemy, but how does it know where the enemy is? If the arrow is shot to the right of the enemy, will the needles shoot toward it? Then if it's shot straight at the enemy, will it still shoot on the right? Work on it.

    New:

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Buruzuai)- Sniper Art: Bullseye
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 each turn)
    Damage: N/A (+10 to kyujutsu and Sniper techniques, -10 to other ninjutsu)
    Description: The user imbues large amounts of chakra into his bow which manifests a web-like crosshair in front. It acts as a barrier against frontal attacks and strengthens arrows shot from the bow with once they pass through the one-sided barrier.
    -Usable once per battle
    -Lasts for 6 turns
    -Protects the user from C-rank and lower attacks
    -Only 2 jutsu per turn may be used while this is active excluding the turn it was used


    ~Declined~ I like the idea, but make it a fixed number of attack it can block. Make it last for 4 turns

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Hari no Dangan)- Sniper Art: Needle Bullet
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: An arrow created of pure concentrated chakra is shot from a bow at great speeds and extends towards the target while thinning out so the target will have difficulty judging the distance if it is shot strait at him and less time to react.
    -Usable 3 times per battle

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Sokkyō)- Sniper Art: Improvising
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user forms a handseal and changes the design of his arrows using chakra so he could have some control of them while in flight. The handseal must be held to continue modifying the arrows.

    ~Pending~ Is this jutsu connected to the one above (which got declined)? Cause I can't see how you can change the shape of a normal arrow using chakra.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-10-2011 at 12:29 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton: Keshigomu No Kyanon)- Lightning Release: Eraser Cannon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:First to use this jutsu the user must gather great amount of his raiton chakra from all his body then he channel it into his palm to form a bright-yellow Chakra sphere. Next, he waves his hand forward and fires the attack at the opponent, inflicting a large amount of damage.
    -can only be used by -Kamishiro-
    -can only be used 3 times per turn
    -must master raiton and aact
    -can't use any raiton jutsu at the same turn
    -can't use any raiton jutsu higher than b rank for two turns after he make this
    -can't use any forbidden technique at the same turn

    (Raiton: Auraisu No disuku)- Lightning Release: Destructo Disk
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:The Destructo Disk is a razor-sharp disk of Lightning chakra that can slice through nearly anything; its main weaknesses are that it is generally slow to create, it lacks accuracy, and it can't be guided once it is thrown but a forbidden doton or s rank doton can block it. to use it first the user gather great amount of his chakra then he channel it into his hand he raises his hand into the air then he release the chakra creating a huge lightning disk that has the same size as rasenshuriken
    -can only be used by -kamishiro-
    -must mastered raiton and aact
    -can only be used 2 times per turn
    -can use any lightning attack on the same turn
    -can't use any lightning attack higher than b rank for two turns

    (Katon:Honoo Shouten No Butoukai)- Fire Release: Flaming Death Ball
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:First the user raises his hands above his head and then he gather great amount of his katon chakra after that he release it creating huge fire ball. When he fires it at the opponent, the attack's color changes to dark red and has a flaming coating surrounding it, inflicting greater damage through a powerful flaming explosion.
    -can only be used by -Kamishiro-
    -can't use any katon attack at the same turn
    -can only be used 3 times per turn
    -can't use katon attack higher than a rank for two turns
    -must mastered katon and AACT

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    Red Queen |Gosai Kisaki
    Type: weapon
    Rank: s rank
    Range: short/long
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+ 15 For each lightning technique sense and + 5 for evey lightning jutsu return)
    Damage: (30 for any normal attack ) ( + 20 for any lightning attack)
    Description: The Red Queen is customized version of blades ,It has an ornately etched base , but it's most unique feature is that it has been specially customized to make the user able to control all the b rank lightning or above means that if the opponent made b rank lightning jutsu the user can re throw it with the blade to the opponent,Also as long as the user have it he earn 15 boost to every lightning jutsu ,And as it made of special blade it can sense s rank lightning jutsu or above
    -Can only be used by -Kamishiro- or who is alowed to use it
    -can sense lightning jutsud 4 times per battle
    -must master lightning and AACT
    -must be a kage or sage to use it as it need alot of experiences to use it
    -the user take 5 damage when he return lightning attack
    -the user take 10 damage when he sense lightning attack

    ~All Declined~ I've been giving enough warning about this, if you don't submit your customs in a plain way (no font, size, spoilers(except for pictures), code) then it'll be declined. Make it as easy to read as possible and make it look good once it's approved and in your personal thread.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Ninjutsu: Kakashi's Boiling Point (Ninjutsu: Kakashi's Futtou Ikkaku)
    Type: Supplementart
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kakashi focuses on his opponent and becomes enraged about something the opponent has done. He releases massive amounts of chakra through out his body that increase his Ninjutsu and Taijutsu as well as make his movements flow easier and his hand seals faster. He calls upon the vast number of jutsu he has aquired over the years. Being the "Shinobi who has Copied 1000 Techniques" he easily recalls each and knows what to do in a moments notice. He relies on his killing instints releasing all thought of life and death both for himself and his opponent. He makes the firm decition that if he must die his opponent will as well. His Raiton jutsu gain a considerable amount of power. With the aid of his Sharingan tracking the opponent is near effortless and the fluid movements he gains from this mode make it possible for him to keep up with what his Sharingan tracks. Making fighting easier but there is a major downside to t \his jutsu. A lot like his MS it puts vast strain on his body enough to render his body alomost useless after deactivation. He will have enough chakra after this mode is canceled to fight for 3 more turns before collabsing from shear exaustion. His Raiton jutsu suffer to after this mode is deactivated forfieting the ability to do raiton jutsu faster due to his Speciality.
    *Can only be activated for 4 turns*
    *Cannot fight any further after 3 turns after deactivation*
    *When activated +10 Ninjutsu and +5 Taijutsu to all corresponding jutsu*
    *When deactivated -10 Ninjutsu and -5 Taijutsu to all cprasponding jutsu*
    *When activated Raiton jutsu get +15 damage*
    *When deactivated Raiton jutsu suffer -20 Damage*
    *Can be used once per battle*
    *Can only be used by a Kakashi bio with my permission*

    ~Declined~ Come up with a valid reason why you'd gain a boost. Being angry only makes you powerful in DBZ or when you have a Jinchuuriki.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom Weapon: Demon Regalia
    Type Attack/Defense
    Range:Short-to Mid
    Rank: S
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description: Demon Regalia is a demonic sword given to Jinnouske by his master on his deathbed. It measure around 4 feet long, and 3 feet wide and it emmits a purple-ish black aura. It can be infused with fire chakra to extend it 3 more feet, transforming it into a flaming longsword.

    ~Approved~
     
         
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