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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning: Scout Squad Alpha (Kuchiyose: Sekkou Buntai Arufa)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Scout Squd Alpha is an elite squad of four condor each are small in size being about 4 feet in height with a wing span of 2 and a half feet. They each fly at fast speeds comparable to Rock Lee without weights. They have a strong sence of sight able to see small prey such as rabbits and small game from heights of 35 ft in the air. They also have a great sence of hearing able to tune out unessesary noise and focus on the opponent or opponents, finding their location and then releying that location to the summoner via a Condor speak that the summoner has learned to use. Each of the 4 condors act and scout differently. Alpha is the leader and he scouts on his own using his sight and great sense of sound to find the opponent and rely the message. Beta and Omega work as a team Omega has the best hearing of the squad able to hear the opponent from 20 ft away(One range away if he is in Mid he can hear in Short and Long) while Beta has the best sight of the group able to see something as fine as an ant on the ground his range of sight can traverse one range as well. Lastly is Gamma he is a loner he has a lower sense of hearing and sight so he usually stays close to the summoner for quick response in short range attacks. They are not to strong when it comes to battle but if they attack an opponent they will most likely go for the eyes pecking and gouging them out and then either returning to their range or returning to the summoner.
    Note: ~Can only be summoned for 5 turns
    ~Cannot summon a condor the turn before
    ~Cannot summon another condor the same turn
    ~Speed while flying rivals Rock Lee without weights
    ~Gamma can sense an opponent in the same range as him using sound and sight usually short
    ~Beta and Omega can sense someone one range away via Sound for Omega and Sight for Beta
    ~Alpha can only sense what is in his range usually Long using both sound and sight

    ~Declined~ Condor speak?

    ワードフォーム - Wādofōmu (Kata Forms)
    Description: The user, after performing a sequence of moves and forms, or Kata, will be able to move quiker and strike harder due to releasing chakra through their bodies as they move. Different levels of Kata are designed to allow the user to perform differently in their taijutsu use (greater speed, more fexibility, stronger foot-related taijutsu, ect.). After using certain Kata, the user is allowed to use certain techniques tied into the Kata.

    (Wādofōmu - Tango no Senshi) Kata Forms - Warrior Kata
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu and kenjutsu)
    Description: The first of the Wādofōmu Kata's, Tango no Senshi is used to increase the strength of one's punches and kicks, as well as heighten their reflex's. After performing deep stances in quick succession and focused, controlled strikes, releasing chakra through their body the whole time, the user will come out of the Kata with a bow, and their eye's will glow with the chakra that had been circulating their body as they moved. This is the only of the Wādofōmu Kata's that can be directly transfered to weapons.
    Note: ~Distruption of the Kata will result in chakra distruption, thus breaking the user out of genjutsu (if that is how the Kata is disturbed), but also makes the user unable to use chakra during the next turn
    ~Only one nin or genjutsu may be used per turn while this Kata is active
    ~Can only be used three times per battle
    ~Lasts for three turns
    ~Only one Kata can be active at a time
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    (Wādofōmu - Senshi Sutoraiku) Kata Form - Warrior Strike
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: After performing Tango no Senshi, the user will then engage their opponent in hand-to-hand combat, and perform this specific strike. The user will throw a punch towards their opponent, and then at the last second angle their punch either up or down with their heightened reflex's allowing them to judge such a split-second strike. The unanticipated, sudden strike is designed to catch one's opponent by surprise, making it difficult, if not impossible to dodge. This can be transfered to a weapon by comming in with a slash at one's opponent, and then creating a circular motion to slash from the opposite angle (instead of down and to the left, the new slash is up and to the right).
    Note: ~Can only be used while Tango no Senshi is in effect
    ~Can only be used four times per battle
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    (Wādofōmu - Senshi no Ishi) Kata Form - Will of the Warrior
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu and kenjutsu)
    Description: After being injured, the user's focused chakra will activate almost instantly. The user will be able to move faster than before, allowing their strikes to move quicker and land harder. If the user is holding a weapon, their chakra will be focused through it as this technique activates, and the material of the weapon will become stronger and sharper (if it's not a blunt weapon), yet no heavier or awkward to wield.
    Note: ~Tango no Senshi must be active to use this technique
    ~Due to using the chakra that was focused into the user's body for Tango no Senshi, the Kata's effects will wear off at the end of the turn
    ~Only taijutsu and kenjutsu may be used in the turn that this is activated
    ~This technique can be cancelled by the user, but it will still count as one of the three moves in the turn due to the chakra control needed to supress it
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork



    ~All Declined~ Too similar to the gates. You basically rely on the same principles as the gates to use those taijutsu moves.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-11-2011 at 08:02 PM. Reason: Izuna's Post About Summonings Has Changed

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Rin Okumura View Post
    ( Koumaken, The Blue Demon Slayer, Satan's Flame | 紅魔館 青デビ)
    Rank: S
    Type: Att ' Def
    Range: Short.
    Chakra cost: -Up to 40 if used with the special ability.
    Damage points: -Up to 80 if used with the special ability.
    Description: The Koumaken, or Blue Demon slayer, is one of the most powerful sword's of all time. Said to be forged by some of the best Black Smith's known to man. It was also said to have slayed Demon's in ancient times, and that was it's intention. It's blade is made from a special material, that man created from the ground long ago. It's spilled so much blood, including that of a human's. It earn's it's name with the help of both of it's chakra affinity's, Lightning and Fire. This is an elemental combination purely used for techniques that are sharp, but also hot. And due to these two element's being combined, there is a flame to the sword from the fire element, but it turn's blue due to the combined lightning element. It is said that when this sword is unsheathed, it also gives the user a new found strength in their heart's. And upon Unsheathing Satan's Flame, the user will be covered in the lightning/fire chakra around the body.
    Ability's:
    § Blue fire addition: This sharp, and also hot technique allow's the user to cut through A rank wind, and even up to A rank Doton techniques. Now you know by now what it would do to a humans body.
    § Satan's Flame: Once Unsheathed, the blue flame will cover your body, and it has to accept you. It will cover the outside area of the body (Around the clothing also) and there will be two flames above your head that look like horns. This technique protect's you from D-Rank Wind techniques and D-Rank Doton. But between using this Technique and any other ability's for Satan's flame, it will have to be used alone, and after being used you will have to wait two turn's before using another technique for it. The sword's blade will still be covered in the blue flame, it just can't cut through Doton/Fuuton at the time.
    § Heart: Once unsheathed, the user will feel more powerful. Although the user gains no extra physical ability's, his fighting will grows in his heart. And this can make anyone more powerful through the mind.
    Koumaken:

    Koumaken:


    Koumaken getting ready to be used with the fire lightning combination.






    魔: Limit's one the fuuton and Doton cutting.

    A rank: Twice per battle.
    B rank: Three times per battle, if used once already can only cut up to one more A rank or B rank.
    C rank: Can also be cut three times, and if cut twice can still cut one A-Rank.
    -And the same from C rank goes for D and E rank's.


    ~Approved: Well done, and well restricted~
    Re-Doing the name, and making Techniques for it ^^... Finally .

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    ( Kurikara, The Blue Demon Slayer, Satan's Flame | 紅魔館 青デビ)
    Rank: S
    Type: Att ' Def
    Range: Short.
    Chakra cost: -Up to 40 if used with the special ability.
    Damage points: -Up to 80 if used with the special ability.
    Description: The Kurikara, or Blue Demon slayer, is one of the most powerful sword's of all time. Said to be forged by some of the best Black Smith's known to man. It was also said to have slayed Demon's in ancient times, and that was it's intention. It's blade is made from a special material, that man created from the ground long ago. It's spilled so much blood, including that of a human's. It earn's it's name with the help of both of it's chakra affinity's, Lightning and Fire. This is an elemental combination purely used for techniques that are sharp, but also hot. And due to these two element's being combined, there is a flame to the sword from the fire element, but it turn's blue due to the combined lightning element. It is said that when this sword is unsheathed, it also gives the user a new found strength in their heart's. And upon Unsheathing Satan's Flame, the user will be covered in the lightning/fire chakra around the body.
    Ability's:
    § Blue fire addition: This sharp, and also hot technique allow's the user to cut through A rank wind, and even up to A rank Doton techniques. Now you know by now what it would do to a humans body.
    § Satan's Flame: Once Unsheathed, the blue flame will cover your body, and it has to accept you. It will cover the outside area of the body (Around the clothing also) and there will be two flames above your head that look like horns. This technique protect's you from D-Rank Wind techniques and D-Rank Doton. But between using this Technique and any other ability's for Satan's flame, it will have to be used alone, and after being used you will have to wait two turn's before using another technique for it. The sword's blade will still be covered in the blue flame, it just can't cut through Doton/Fuuton at the time.
    § Heart: Once unsheathed, the user will feel more powerful. Although the user gains no extra physical ability's, his fighting will grows in his heart. And this can make anyone more powerful through the mind.
    Koumaken:

    Koumaken:


    Koumaken getting ready to be used with the fire lightning combination.






    魔: Limit's one the fuuton and Doton cutting.

    A rank: Twice per battle.
    B rank: Three times per battle, if used once already can only cut up to one more A rank or B rank.
    C rank: Can also be cut three times, and if cut twice can still cut one A-Rank.
    -And the same from C rank goes for D and E rank's.


    ~Approved~

    (Kurikara, Satan Kaen Sosa | サタン火炎操作)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary.
    Range: Short-Long.
    Chakra Cost: 40.
    Damage Points: 80.
    Description: The user will release the Kurikara's power, and take full control over it. Once the user has accomplished this, his body will be covered in a blue flame. The user is not harmed by the blue flame, nor are loved ones close by. Although, the users target will be completely annihilated at will. The user can create hands, arm's, and claws that extend from the body, to attack the target. This has great effect on fuuton/doton techniques.
    § Can only be used twice per battle.
    § Lasts 4 turns when activated.
    § -10 chakra for every extra turn used.


    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing techniques made with different elements.

    (Kurikara, Ao no honoo bāsuto | 青の炎バースト)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary.
    Range: Short-Long.
    Chakra Cost: 30.
    Damage Points: 60.
    Description: The user unsheathes the Kurikara, and unleashes Satan's flame. The user will then perform a powerful slash with the sword, and using his power he will release Satan's flame. Causing a large blue slash (Blue Flames) to emerge from the blade, once it reaches the desired target the flame will explode into a huge burst of Satan's flame, burning all in it's path.
    -Can only be used 3 times per match






    ~Approved~ Added a restriction on the usage.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-11-2011 at 08:11 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Have 2 more submissions for this week
    (Kchuysei: Honoo) Summoning: Flame
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After the user does the hands signs they can summon Flame. Flame is the bother of Crawdaunt and is a red lobster lobsters. He is the same size of Crawdaunt but he uses up to B fire release. He has also allows people to ride him and go inside his mouth to go underwater.
    Note
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Lobster Contract.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned 3x per battle.

    (Ranton: Arashi no 10 hōō) Storm Release: The 10 Phoenixes Of The Storm
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After the user does the require hand signs this technique that creates 3 light blue phoenixes that are big as Sasuke's Hawk. The phoenixes are sent at the user's will to attack the opponent in whatever direction and angle the user chooses.
    Note: Usable 2x a match
    Note: No Ranton for the next turn
    Note: Water and Lightning are restricted to B rank for the next turn.
    Note: Must have Storm Release.

    ~Both Approved~ Made it 4 phoenixes in your second jutsu. Considering their size, it's more then enough.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-11-2011 at 08:24 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Owl. (fukurou)
    Scroll Owner: ~Gildarts R. Clive~
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
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    Summoning Technique: Flame Wings (enkou tsubasa)
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage points: 50
    Description: The user does 5 hand seals and use his own blood to summon Grimlock, he is 20ft so he is rideable, he has human-like claw so he can perform jutsus he Specalizes in A Rank-fire jutsus. when he is threadned his wings turn into flames being able to touch anything with them and burn it to ashes. He can also fly at a very high distance.
    -Note: can only be summoned once in a battle.
    -Note: will stay for 4 turns.
    -Note: Can only use his Fire wing move twice.
    -Note: Once he uses his fire wing move twice, his only able to fly half as he could when he was summoned. And its agility lowers drasticly.
    -Note:Only be taught by ~Gildarts R. Clive~

    You can edit anything that is wrong if you want. :D

    ~Declined~ The owl contract is a cannon contract.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-11-2011 at 08:26 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by black uchiha View Post
    Resubmits

    (Konchū sutairu: Shamen no tama) Insect Style: Sphere of Absolution
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user sends two massive amounts of insects out the gourd carried on their back (at once). One to blacken the sky of the battlefield, the insects blanket the sky (mid-range from the ground) not letting anything in from the outside (light, rain…etc). The second mass of insects digs 6ft underground, under the user and opponent (unknown by the opponent). The two masses connect making a dense chakra draining sphere of insects around both user and opponent blinding them both (due to the darkness).
    -Must have a gourd, and said gourd must be listed in your bio
    -Empties the gourd and almost half the bugs inside the user
    -After this technique (if the insects are destroyed) the user can only use C-rank and below bug techniques (until the use of insect cocoon)

    - Only last 2 turns
    - Can only use 2 times per battle
    - Can only use B-rank and below bug techniques while in useUo
    - Dojutsu users can see the chakra of the underground insects
    - Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    Declined. there isn't a mention of this insect gourd in the bio currently in your sig.

    New submissions

    (Raitoningurirīsu: Sutoroboraito) Lightning Release: Strobe Light
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user sends a basketball size ball of lightning behind them. The lightning ball strobes, and shines of into the opponent’s eyes. This causes the opponent to have a mild seizure from the strobing effect of the light. This making a muscle spasm of the opponent’s legs, paralyzing them (for 1 turn).
    -Can only use two times per battle
    -Lasts 3 turns
    -Paralyzes last one turn
    -Can be blocked by sunglasses
    -Only A-rank and below lightning techniques while in effect
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    the description needs work. declined

    Resubmits

    (Konchū sutairu: Shamen no tama) Insect Style: Sphere of Absolution
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user sends two massive amounts of insects out the gourd carried on their back (at once). One to blacken the sky of the battlefield, the insects blanket the sky (mid-range from the ground) not letting anything in from the outside (light, rain…etc). The second mass of insects digs 6ft underground, under the user and opponent (unknown by the opponent). The two masses connect making a dense chakra draining sphere of insects (that can withstand A-rank and below elemental attacks of any kind) around both user and opponent blinding them both (due to the darkness).
    -Must have a gourd, and said gourd must be listed in your bio
    -Empties the gourd and almost half the bugs inside the user
    -After this technique (if the insects are destroyed) the user can only use C-rank and below bug techniques (until the use of insect cocoon which is B-rank but it doesn't use bugs)

    - Only last 2 turns
    - Can only use 2 times per battle
    - Can only use A-rank and below bug techniques while in use
    - Dojutsu users can see the chakra of the underground insects
    - Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    It was mentioned in my bio on the 23rd, and u checked it on the 27th....I just forgot to put it in my sig...lol...but its there now and if not here is the link
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=103867

    ~Declined~ This jutsu doesn't make sense. How could you cover such a large surface when you initially had nothing more then a gourd filled with insects. You had a certain volume of bugs which cannot be possibly bigger then your gourd and your body combined.

    (Raitoningurirīsu: Sutoroboraito) Lightning Release: Strobe Light
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user sends lightning chakra into the air three feet above their head. The chakra condenses into a basketball size sphere of lightning over their head, slightly behind him. The ball of lightning fixed in place (doesn't move/stays in place), flashes, strobes, and shines into the opponent’s eyes. This causes the opponent to have a mild seizure from the strobing effect of the light. This makes a muscle spasm in the opponent, paralyzing them (for 1 turn).
    -Can only use two times per battle
    - Last for around 15 seconds
    - Opponent need to look at the sphere for several seconds to begin seizing
    -Can effect the user
    -Lightning sphere stay in place/doesn't follow the user

    -Paralyzes last one turn
    -Can be blocked by sunglasses
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Approved~ Added bold part.

    New Submissions
    Please edit where needed

    (Konchu sutairu: Chakura no ezuke) Insect Style: Chakra Feeding
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (if feed on directly)
    Description: The user has a selection (of his choice) of his insects, to feed on/devour any available chakra (I.e. his chakra, chakra strings, chakra shields...etc) effective up to S-rank. In doing this, the insects increase their power & durability
    -Can only use 3 times per battle
    -No other S-rank bug techniques in the same move
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Declined~ I like the idea, but what does it actually do when your bugs gain power and durability? Make it clear that it's non-elemental chakra techniques that they can devour. Make it twice per match.

    (Konchu sutairu: Adobansu konchu no muyu) Insect Style: Advance Insect Cocoon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced form of the insect production jutsu (Insect Cocoon). The user wraps himself inside a cocoon to aid in the rapid reproduction of his insects, in this cocoon the user not only produce more insects but also splice traits into the new insects, to make them more resistant/effective towards techniques that they have survived before; creating a new breed of insect. This jutsu is dangerous to the user because it leaves him static and unable to move
    -Can only use twice per battle
    -Bugs must be hit by the same attack twice at a certain rank/level (ex. 2 A-rank lightning/2 A-rank fire...etc) to produce that rank of immunity
    -Can only make one rank of certain immunity, per elemental/technique immunity, per battle
    -Takes 2 turns to complete
    -Can only withstand up to/use against up to A-rank
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Pending~ Re-submit with an example because I find this extremely confusing. Re-word it to make it clearer.

    (Ninja ato: Chakurashotto) Ninja Art: Chakra Shots
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user forms up to 5 (50cc sized) needles/syringes made and filled with chakra. The syringes can be thrown or held. If the opponent is hit with 1 needle they will lose chakra control I.e. can't walk on water/trees...etc (lasts 1 turn) If the opponent is hit with 2 needles, they will lose the ability to mold chakra properly and lose power to their techniques (down 1 rank) for 2 turns.
    -Chakra control loss only last 1 turn
    -Chakra power loss only last 1 turn
    -Can only use 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    Please edit where needed

    ~Approved~ Made it 3 times per battle and took out the part about it being invisible "because chakra can't be seen". Is the rasengan invisible? Also, made the power loss last 1 turn.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Water Release: Water Tri Canon Blast
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Using shape manipulation, the user creates 3 canons in water. These canons can shoot powerful water balls and on impact, the water balls can break limbs and cause serious damage to the opponenet.

    Note: Can only be taught by ~Jellal.F~
    Note: Strong enough earth Tech can destroy canons
    Note: When water balls are shot, it can be combined with wind to raise the speed, lightining to raise its destructive power.

    ~Declined~ Restrictions?

    Fire Release: Flamming Hammer
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short/Mid-range
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user creates a hammer made out of fire using shape manipulation. When swung, the hammer leaves a long streak of flame behind it. On impact, the hammer can melt through objects. The users range with this jutsu can also change due to the user being able to throw the hammer.

    Note: can only be taught by ~Jellal.F~
    Note: Any water tech can defeat it

    ~Declined~ Again, restrictions? And "melt through object" is too vague, elaborate.

    Earth Release: Earth Marine Battlefield
    Rank:S
    Typeffensive/Defensive
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user builds up large amounts of chakra and channels it all into the battlefield. The user can now manipulate the ground below them creating walls, pillars or manipulate the earth to diverse shapes. The battlefield would be under the users control making it hard for the opponent to attack or defend against. This jutsu can be the uktimate defense and offensive at the same time.

    Note- can only be taught by ~Jellal.F~
    Note- can be used 2 times in battle
    Note- if low in chakra, this jutsu cant be used because it requires large amounts of chakra.

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ No free manipulation of element
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Mizu pikku)-Water Style: Water Picks
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user holds thier hand in the tiger claw popsition when attacking the in close range combat. When the user is about the hit the opponent with thier "claw" the user will shoot cutting jets of water from thier fingertips. These jets can cause deep cuts when used in a slashing motion or can pierce deep into the body if thrust stright towards the opponent. The jets of water are very condensed at the tip of the finger, but as the fingertips move farther way from the target the jets lose ther concentration, so maximum cutting power will require direct contact (or a few millimeters away).
    Notes:
    -Requires no seals.
    -While normally used as a supplement for hand to hand combat, this jutsu can be used to block against fire attacks.
    ____________
    -Approved-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Lions
    Scroll Owner: Blade Hyuga
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:
    Other Animals tied to contract: N/A

    Summoning Technique: Legendary Lion Suicune
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage points: 20-80
    Description: The user does 5 hand seals and use his own blood to summon Suicune, he is 6ft so he is rideable. Suicune can bite an opponent and freeze them, also he can shoot high concentrations of water from a small streak able to slice throught rocks to a large blast smashing down trees

    Summoning Technique: Entei The Legendary Lion
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage points: 20-80
    Description: The user does 5 hand seals and use his own blood to summon Entei, he is 6ft so he is rideable. Entei can bite an opponent and burn them, also he can shoot flames from a little ember to a giant flameball that is strong enough to withstand up to B rank water jutsu.

    Summoning Technique: Raikou the legendary lion
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage points: 20-80
    Description: The user does 5 hand seals and use his own blood to summon Raikou, he is 6ft so he is rideable. Raikpu can bite an opponent and paralyze them, also he can shoot high concentrations of lightning from small streak able to slice throught rocks to a large thunderstorm creating a huge lightning strike also making lightning jutsu easier to use

    note- only one of the 3 legendary lions can be summoned per battle
    note- They last only 4 turns
    note- Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga

    ~All Declined~ Even though it is not in the official list, the Lion contract already exist and was created by an older member.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Tsuru Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Aoi Yūgure | Crane Summoning Technique: The Blue Dusk
    Type: Attack/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short (Long on abilities)
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Blue Dusk is a big Blue Crane. This crane is pale blue-gray in color with a white crown, a pink bill, and long, dark gray wingtip feathers which trail to the ground. She is the queen of all cranes and a mastermind of perverseness. Her majestic looks contrast highly with her dirty mind. She has a wingspan of fifteen meters and can fly at high speeds with two humans on her back. Her main asset however is her agility and her Suiton chakra nature that both give birth to her abilities. While flying she is very quick and agile. Her chakra is constantly pulsing, thus being released into the field. As it's mixed with the air it reacts to water molecules and moist which allows her to feel everything around her up to long range. Due to her affinity to Suiton she can use it for both attack and defense. When attacking she exhales a high volume S-Rank spiraling stream of water, enough to flood most of the battlefield which can serve also as a water source for the rest of the match. When defending she creates a S-Rank spherical water shield around her and the user. She is also immune to water below B-Rank and fire up to B-Rank. Her jutsus count towards the three jutsus per turn.
    Note: Can use Suiton only four times per battle due to limited chakra resource
    Note: Jutsus performed by the summon count towards three per turn
    Note: Stays on field for turns
    Note: Must sign the Crane Summoning contract
    Note: Summoning Boss


    ~Declined~ This ability to sense others through the moisture in the air was already made through a CJ. It would be ripping it off to accept this summon of yours. You know what to do.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Drizzy~ View Post
    ~resubmitting, it has been 7 days ~

    Earth Release:Rise of the Mighty Pillars [Kigen za Tsuyoi Chuuseki]
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S rank
    Range:Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Costs: N/A
    Description: The user performs six handseals, he then stomps the Earth, releasing a very large amount of his doton chakra, as it circulates throughout the Earth, while maintaining the chakra and using chakra and nature manipulation, The user then clasps his hands together, as this is done, at the users Will, up to nine giant pillars can be risen from the earth, large in size and mass, These pillars can lock around the tails of any tailed beast, if this is successful, the pillars can keep the tails locked onto the ground for one full turn of the opponent. At he end of this turn, the pillars will crumble. The amount of pillars can be increased or reduced. If this technique is used on a human, the pillar will tightly restrict the opponent from all movement [with exception of the head].
    Note
    -If used on a tail beast, The pillars only restrict the tails by pinning them down onto the ground, any other part such as the arms and legs can still remain with motion, the pillars only restrict the Creature from running, dodging, jumping etc. While this is in place, the beast still has power to perform jutsu.
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -Can only be taught by ~Drizzy~
    -No Earth Jutsu for the following turn
    -No S rank and above jutsu for the next two turns
    -Only Sannin Ranked or Higher can use this technique

    ~Approved~

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    Genjusu:Tenma sutachu za auta toorimichi [Illusion Technique: Demonic Statue of the Outer Path]
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chacra Cost:50
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user performs six handseals, finishing with a clap of the hands. By doing this, the user releases chakra into the atmosphere. As basic Genjutsu procedures, the chakra is used to disrupt the flow of chakra present in the victim's brain,which can disrupt the senses. As soon as this is done, the user will form another handseal, the seal of the tiger, activating the launch of the jutsu. A demonic statue will rise from the ground, from the Head to the fingers on top of the earth,the statue rises from below the opponent, it is positioned so that the opponent is lifted as it rises in the right hand of the statue, the atmosphere and surroundings change, the sky turns red, the clouds black, and the grass and any other vegetation is dull in color. This demonic statue has nine closed eyes, and a scroll in it's mouth. As the opponent is on the right hand of the statue, drenched in fear, leaving the user in reality a chance to attack.On the left hand of the statue, positioned on the palm, is a small human sized replica of the staue, in full body form, this replica has only two eyes, both, blood red.The replica then jumps onto the right hand of which the opponent is located, and slashes his throat with a specially designed kunai. As this is done, the opponent falls out of the genjutsu, traumatized, this causes the opponent to faint in reality, and can remain unconscious up to a period of one full turn.
    -Can only be used once
    -requires the space of two moves
    -No Genjutsu for the rest of the match
    -Can only be taught by ~Drizzy~

    I removed the requirement of sharingan


    ~Declined~ The effect of your genjutsu is basically an instant win if you succeed. Change the effect to something like:" the opponent is paralyzed in fear from living his own death".

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    Fuuton:Tsuyoi kadou [Wind Release: Mighty Vortex]
    Rank:S
    Type: Defence
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:The user clasps his hands together, using his chakra to instantly release a chakra vortex which spins around the user, which is capable of restricting wind circulation around the user. Any A rank or lower technique is destroyed if it comes in contact with the vortex.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by ~Drizzy~

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.
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    (Kaze/koudo/faia soshi konbo|Enkou nagareboshi hitoame) Wind/Earth/Fire Elemental Combo |Flaming Meteor Shower
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range:Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user performs four handseals, he then releases his chakra into the earth [by foot eg.stompimg], he then inhales a normal proportion of air, as this is done, the user forms the tiger handseal, the indication of fire element, the user then stomps on the ground, as 10 boulders [each the size of a regular human body in height and are of spherical shape] are ejected from the ground, up into the air, the user then clasps his hands together, this engulfs the boulders in flames, as the extreme heat of the fire changes the boulders color to glowing red, the user then manipulates wind chakra into the air to forcibly push the boulders to strike the opponent, the wind also slightly increases the power of the fire.This scenery is a shower of meteors.
    Note:
    The boulders are formed in front of the user [in short range],added by fire and then launched by the wind [to mid or long range], When the boulders make contact to the ground, the entire terrain of a range will be entirely devastated into the form of a crater, while patches of flames are scattered throughout that entire area.
    -Requires the space of two moves [since the usage of multiple elements]
    -Usable only once per battle
    -Usable for Sannin Rank or Higher
    -Can only be taught by ~Drizzy~

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    i already checked the meteor one above for similar jutsu [the search thread button], i don't see any similar.

    ~Declined~ I have nothing against this technique, but re-word the description to make it clear that it's a succession of different chakra you're using and not using 2-3 chakra at the same time. To do this, you'd have to receive Yin Yang training.
    Genjusu:Tenma sutachu za auta toorimichi [Illusion Technique: Demonic Statue of the Outer Path]
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chacra Cost:50
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user performs six handseals, finishing with a clap of the hands. By doing this, the user releases chakra into the atmosphere. As basic Genjutsu procedures, the chakra is used to disrupt the flow of chakra present in the victim's brain,which can disrupt the senses. As soon as this is done, the user will form another handseal, the seal of the tiger, activating the launch of the jutsu. A demonic statue will rise from the ground, from the Head to the fingers on top of the earth,the statue rises from below the opponent, it is positioned so that the opponent is lifted as it rises in the right hand of the statue, the atmosphere and surroundings change, the sky turns red, the clouds black, and the grass and any other vegetation is dull in color. This demonic statue has nine closed eyes, and a scroll in it's mouth. As the opponent is on the right hand of the statue, drenched in fear, leaving the user in reality a chance to attack.On the left hand of the statue, positioned on the palm, is a small human sized replica of the staue, in full body form, this replica has only two eyes, both, blood red.The replica then jumps onto the right hand of which the opponent is located, and slashes his throat with a specially designed kunai. As this is done, the opponent falls out of the genjutsu, traumatized,this causes the opponent to be paralyzed in fear, since Visualizing his own painful death .
    -Can only be used once
    -requires the space of two moves
    -Can only be taught by ~Drizzy~

    ~Declined I don't know why I didn't realized this the first time, where are the restrictions and why is thy a Forbidden-rank technique? You have absolutely no physical drawbacks and no reason to rank it that way. Fix it.
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    Custom Weapon

    Exhibition: Hakurankai 展覧会
    Type:Weapon
    Rank: S rank
    Range:Short - Long
    Chakra Cost:40 [+ 30 when blocking Lightning Techniques]
    Damage Points: 20 for normal use [+ 10 to Lightning Techniques]
    Description: Exhibition is a special sword, made of a rare, valuable metal. The Exhibition has a shiny silver blade, and a black handle, with silver diamonds extending throughout. St the tip of te sword handle, Raiton is marked onto it. This sword is not heavy as it doesn't take up much mass, at the end of Each Lightning jutsu, the sword is coated in unfocused Lightning chakra [as of Nagashi but much weaker]. As the sword can be thrown at the opponent as this Lightnin coat can only be short ranged. This sword can only release up to S rank Lightning techniques not requiring handseals. And can also absorb All A rank and lower Lightning Techniques.
    注意 Requires the mastery of Lightning
    注意 Can only absorb three Lightning techniques
    注意 10 damage points are obtained when absorbing a lightning technique
    注意 Can only be wielded by ~Drizzy~

    ~Declined~ OP. Absorbing A-rank and lower makes it stronger than the 7SM. Take that out.
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    Earth/Fire Release: Pillar Explosion|Doton/Katon :chuuseki ekusupuro-jon
    Rank: A rank
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user stomps the ground, releasing his chakra into the earth, adding it to the users recently created pillar, manipulating it to explode. Theis explosion is made up of fire [C rank strength] and the earth of the pillar will be shattered into small bullet like structures [C rank Earth]
    注意 Only usable twice per battle
    注意 The Pillar Explosion must be in the same turn as the original Pillar was created.
    注意 Can only be taught by ~Drizzy~

    I'm not familiar with the elemental combinations about the C + C = A part, if I'm wrong can you please edit with the correct?


    ~Declined do not resubmit~ There are enough explosion technique already to consider every other techniques based on it to be a rip-off.
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    (Kaze/koudo/faia soshi konbo|Enkou nagareboshi hitoame) Wind/Earth/Fire Elemental Combo |Flaming Meteor Shower
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range:Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user performs four handseals, he then releases his doton chakra into the earth [by foot eg.stompimg], he then inhales a normal proportion of air, as this is done, the user forms the tiger handseal,and focuses his katon chakra, the user then stomps on the ground, as 10 boulders [each the size of a regular human body in height and are of spherical shape] are ejected from the ground, up into the air, the user then clasps his hands together, this engulfs the boulders in flames, as the extreme heat of the fire changes the boulders color to glowing red, the user then focuses and generates wind chakra into the air to forcibly push the boulders to strike the opponent, the wind also slightly increases the power of the fire.This scenery is a shower of meteors.
    Note:
    The boulders are formed in front of the user [in short range],added by fire and then launched by the wind [to mid or long range], When the boulders make contact to the ground, the entire terrain of a range will be entirely devastated into the form of a crater, while patches of flames are scattered throughout that entire area.
    注意 Requires the space of two moves [since the usage of multiple elements]
    注意 Usable only once per battle
    注意 Usable for Sannin Rank or Higher
    注意 Requires the space of two moves [since the usage of multiple elements]
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~

    ~Declined~ First of all, make it count as 3 moves because that's basically 3 different techniques. Secondly, where are the restrictions and drawbacks from using a Forbidden-rank technique?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Resubmitting.


    Range: Short
    Description: The blade is a gift from the Orangutans and is made of special metals unknown to anyone but them. It is indestructable and has the ability to absorb Lightning attacks(see Restrictions.)
    The blade will absorb a lightning attack no matter where the blade is on the battlefield as it attracts the lightning to it like a magnet it negates the use of lightning in the battle by both the wielder and the opponent.
    The only way to use Lightning is to holster the sword(As the holster also made by the Orangutans holds the "magnetic" charge) or get the sword out of range of the battlefield.

    Restrictions:
    • Cannot use Lightning jutsu's unless blade is holstered or away from the battlefield
    • Can only absorb 1 S rank, 3 A rank and B rank or below can be absorbed continuously.
    • Can only be wielded by a user who has signed the Orangutan contract




    ~Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
    Thank you.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kaziname View Post
    (Suiton: Umi no ō no Fīrudo) - Water Style: Field of Sea Kings
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By distributing one's own suiton chakra around whole battlefield, user can enhance the forming speed (and speed in general) of water jutsus two fold.
    *Lasts for 4 turns
    *Can be only used once
    *Can be only used by Kaziname

    ~Declined~ Interesting idea, please tell me (and be precise), how will your enemy be able to use that water if it's highly infused with your chakra? If your answer is; "he can't use it", then it's an auto-decline. You could be standing on the sea (terrain) and hence make it impossible for your enemy to do anything.
    Maybe this will work :D

    (Suiton: Umi no ō no Fīrudo) - Water Style: Field of Sea Kings
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By distributing one's own suiton chakra around whole battlefield, user can enhance the forming speed (and speed in general) of water jutsus two fold. However, due to passive state of chakra that is imbued in water, it can be easily "pushed-out" when the opponent uses selected body of water for one of his own jutsus. Once done, that body of water will no longer amplify speed of user's water jutsus.
    *Lasts for 4 turns
    *Can be only used twice
    *Can be only used by Kaziname

    Explained how could opponent use water infused by chakra of this jutsu and added that it can be used twice since the opponent can nullify the jutsu.

    ~Approved~

    Quote Originally Posted by Kaziname View Post
    (Suton: Umi no Me) - Water Style: Eyes of the Sea
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing suiton chakra user is able to create eyes of water to aid him in combat by covering blind spots or in spying by allowing him to scan the area without exposing himself to danger. Eyes hover on the place they were created and don't repair themselves after getting damaged.

    ~Declined~ I've seen that jutsu before, so if it's your re-submission, please add the original in your post. Also, how many eyes? What range can they get away from you? Restrictions?
    (Suton: Umi no Me) - Water Style: Eyes of the Sea
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing suiton chakra user is able to create eye of water to aid him in combat by covering blind spots or in spying by allowing him to scan the area without exposing himself to danger. Eye hovers in the place it was created and doesn't repair itself after getting damaged. It can get away as far as long range.

    This jutsu is made after gaara's sand eye tech (can't remember real name) so I don't think that any restrictions are needed (as there are non for sand tech)

    ~Declined~ Like I said, I saw that technique done with water before, if it wasn't yours then it means that its already been done. Similar technique exist.

    And I want to power up the old jutsu of mine (which I made when I was just starting thus the D-rank ) I added the bolded part because I don't want the opponent to easily break it with water-drill or rasengan.

    (Suiton:Mizu Sheru)-Water Style: Water Shell
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage Points: 5
    Description: Water that covers and encases the enemy in from head to toe. If rain is falling and opponent is standing on/near water he is encased in instant.
    *note- can be only taught by Kaziname


    (Suiton:Mizu Sheru)-Water Style: Water Shell
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short (Short range from water)
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Water that covers and encases the enemy in from head to toe. If rain is falling and opponent is standing on/near water he is encased in instant. Shell is also very flexible, but not flexible enough for opponent to perform hand seals.
    *note- can be only taught by Kaziname

    ~Declined~ Restrictions?

    And another old jutsu that I want to add damage to:

    (Suiton: Mizu Funshutsu )-Water Style: Water Eruption
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: short/mid/long
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing needed handseals, user molds his water chakra in his hands and after that he puts his hands on earth, causing huge water eruption from underground waters. After eruption, deep water covers whole area.
    *note- can be only used once in a battle
    *note- can be only taught by Kaziname


    (Suiton: Mizu Funshutsu )-Water Style: Water Eruption
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: short/mid/long
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After performing needed handseals, user molds his water chakra in his hands and after that he puts his hands on earth, causing huge water eruption from underground waters. After eruption, deep water covers whole area. Jutsu can also be used on a water source (lake; sea etc) by pressurizing the water below and then releasing it.
    *note- can be only used once in a battle
    *note- can be only taught by Kaziname

    Since it's erupting under pressure I think it really should do some damage...

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    Orangutan Summoning Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 60
    Personality: He is a very loyal and stoic summon. He does what's expected of him and doesn't need to be asked. His abilities are more Ninjutsu and some Taijutsu although he is not as fluent or skilled as his younger brother and his father. His Ninjutsu is what makes Rowan stand out from other Orangutans he can use all 4 elements up to B rank and no jutsu at C rank affects him. He also has a giant explosive tag strapped to his back, if he is to ever be captured or going to be killed one handseal from the summoner or Rowan will detonate this tag anything within Short Range will die, Mid will be made unconscious for 1 turn and Long Range will not be affected.

    Restrictions:
    • Can only be summoned once per battle
    • Can only harden hair twice per battle
    • Can only be summoned if the Orangutan contract has been signed.
    • Explosive Tag being detonated kills Rowan





    ~Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
    Thank you.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Minato- View Post
    (Haetorisou Doka no Jutsu) Flytrap Assimilation Technique
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user sprouts (the fly trap grows from their flesh) a flytrap from their body, engulfing the desired target and closing, The flytap acts as a part of the users body and can be controlled in the manner of a limb, Once a target is engulfed, it is assimilated into the flytrap and can be released upon the desire of the user
    Note: Only Zetsu can use this
    Note: The object/person is released upon the opening of the flytrap.

    Declined, needs restrictions being S rank

    (Zetsu Bunshin Bakuhatsu no Jutsu) Zetsu Clone Detonation Technique
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Zetsu forms a single seal and detonates a white zetsu clone, causing a massive explosion
    Note: The explosion extends to Short range around the clone only, the range in the description is the distance from the main body to the clone.
    Note: The Zetsu clone used may not have used any ninjutsu of any kind prior to explosion as it requires the entirety of its chakra to perform.

    Declined, needs more restriction being S rank

    (Furubodi bunri no Jutsu) Full Body Separation Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Personal
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Descritption: White Zetsu and Black zetsu split into two whole and separate bodies with all limbs and a full flytrap each
    Note: Usable Once Per Battle

    Approved

    (Kakusa kiri no gensō) Hidden Mist Illusion
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Descritption: The user casts a genjutsu on the opponent making them see the user preforming the hidden mist technique, however, the mist is actually an illusion and effects the opponent only, leaving the user with clear sight
    Note: Will not work on dojutsu users as they will notice the mist is coloured with their own chakra as well as the opponents
    Note: Useable Once per battle

    Declined, similar jutsu already exists
    Resubmitting:
    (Zetsu Bunshin Bakuhatsu no Jutsu) Zetsu Clone Detonation Technique
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Zetsu forms a single seal and detonates a white zetsu clone, causing a massive explosion
    Note: The explosion extends to Short range around the clone only, the range in the description is the distance from the main body to the clone.
    Note: The Zetsu clone used may not have used any ninjutsu of any kind prior to explosion as it requires the entirety of its chakra to perform.
    Note: Useable Twice per battle
    Note: Main body cannot mayfly this or the next turn


    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This isn't like the actual clone explosion jutsu, zetsu clones are real. They're not only a materialization of the user's chakra. If you want an explosive zetsu, use the regular shadow clone explosion technique.

    New submissions

    (Seiji ketsugō) Sage binding
    Rank: S
    Type: attack
    Range: short - long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will gather a large amount of natural energy out of the ground and make a layer of it around their target/targets, binding them in place, as the layer of sage chakra stops them from moving.
    Note: Useable twice
    Note: Reduces sage mode by 1 turn

    ~Declined~ Usage of sage techniques greatly reduce the time you can spend in Sage Mode. Add restrictions with regard to this (the higher the rank of the jutsu, the shorter you can last in SM).

    (Sējibīmu) Sage Beam
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user fires a beam of concentrated nature energy from their finger at the target
    Note: Usable twice
    Note Reduces sage mode by one turn


    ~Declined~ it's been done countless times with countless element. Enough with the finger beam/laser. Similar technique already exist.


    (Genjutsu - Kirābanī) Illusionary Technique - Killer Bunny
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user causes the opponent to see a horrifyingly evil bunny burrow out from its hole and attack them and overpower them, no matter what attack they throw at it, causing them to become overcome with terror and attempt to flee from the horrifying beast
    (this genjutsu essentially is used to inspire sheer terror in the opponent, making them too distracted to be able to defend from the next attack)
    Note: no genjutsu next turn
    Note: Usable once per battle
    Note: Dojutsu such as the byakugan, rinnegan and 3 tomoe or higher sharingan can see through this illusion

    The technique is inspired by this sketch (don't watch if you are of a nervous disposition ):



    ~Declined~ I have nothing against this genjutsu but you can't predict how your opponent will react when facing such a monster. Work on the bold part.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Kchuysei: Dendou Ouja) - Summoning: Electric King
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (80 w/ Electricity)
    Description: Dendou Ouja Is the Boss of the Eels, He is the size of Manda II and is Red and white in Color. Dendou Ouja has to large yellow sacks on his back which absorb and store large amounts of Raiton Chakra. It has been seen that on Command, Dendou Ouja can release this Raiton around him to create an A-Ranked Static Field which Electrocutes his prey, this has been seen in countless battles where he eats his own kind.. He swims at fast speed, about the same speed as Manda on land, being one of the fastest eels and has been known to use two spear like antenna to attack his targets. He is Very Cannibalistic and enjoys eating other Eels and hates to be Summoned, when summoned, he brings a large volume of water that is suitable for him to swim in. as he needs it to survive.
    Note:
    -Must have Signed Eel Contract.
    -Can only Summon once per battle.
    -Because of the mass of Water, this summon counts as 2 Moves.
    -Raiton counts as a Move.
    -User can not use Raiton During this Summon.
    -No other Eel can be in Play during this Summon.

    ~Declined~ You say it can absorb lightning? To what extant? Restrictions on this ability are required. Also, to what range does his attack extend (the lightning one).
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    (Doton: Dekai Tsuchi Enchou) - Earth Release: Mega Earth Dome
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The User focuses his Doton Chakra making 10 handseals, The ground around the battlefield lifts from the ground forming a giant dome that encases himself and the opponent. this blocks out the sun leaving them in total darkness. the user keeps a constant flow of chakra through the ground and Dome making them able to sense anything with Chakra that touches the ground or dome. because of the constant use of Doton chakra, the user can not use Raiton Tech above B-Rank during this Jutsu.
    Note:
    -Can only be used once due to scale of technique
    -Cost 15 Chakra per turn
    -No Raiton above B-Rank
    -Can only be taught by Serpent

    ~Declined~ Why is it forbidden if there's absolutely no drawbacks to you and it doesn't put you in any form of danger?
    (Kchuysei: Dendou Ouja) - Summoning: Electric King
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (80 w/ Electricity)
    Description: Dendou Ouja Is the Boss of the Eels, He is the size of Manda II and is Red and white in Color. Dendou Ouja has to large yellow sacks on his back which absorb and store large amounts of Raiton Chakra up to A-rank It has been seen that on Command, Dendou Ouja can release this Raiton around him to create an A-Ranked Static Field which Electrocutes his prey, this field can reach out to Mid range of his Body. This has been seen in countless battles where he eats his own kind.. He swims at fast speed, about the same speed as Manda on land, being one of the fastest eels and has been known to use two spear like antenna to attack his targets. He is Very Cannibalistic and enjoys eating other Eels and hates to be Summoned, when summoned, he brings a large volume of water that is suitable for him to swim in. as he needs it to survive.
    Note:
    -Must have Signed Eel Contract.
    -Can only Summon once per battle.
    -Can only absorb Raiton up to 3 times per match.
    -Because of the mass of Water, this summon counts as 2 Moves.
    -Raiton counts as a move.
    -Absorbing Raiton counts as a Move.
    -User can not use Raiton During this Summon.
    -No other Eel can be in Play during this Summon.

    ~Approved~ Added the bold part and changed it to "can absorb up to A-rank lightning".

    (Doton: Dekai Tsuchi Enchou) - Earth Release: Mega Earth Dome
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The User focuses his Doton Chakra making 10 handseals, The ground around the battlefield lifts from the ground forming a giant dome that encases himself and the opponent. this blocks out the sun leaving them in total darkness. the user keeps a constant flow of chakra through the ground and Dome making them able to sense anything with Chakra that touches the ground or dome. because of the constant use of Doton chakra, the user can not use Raiton Tech above B-Rank during this Jutsu.
    Note:
    -Can only be used once due to scale of technique
    -Cost 15 Chakra per turn
    -No Raiton above B-Rank
    -Can only be taught by Serpent


    ~Approved~
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    (Fuuton: Kazekujo) - Wind Release: Wind Destruction
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user makes 5 hand seals focusing his Fuuton Chakra to it's max. The user then releases all of this Chakra at once creating a Sphere of slicing wind that extends outwards from the user's body. This wind can cut down trees and leave gaping slices in stone. It can also shred an opponent to ribbons. Because of the maximum out put of Fuuton Chakra no other wind Jutsu can be preformed after this Jutsu for the next turn and no wind Justu above A rank next 2 turns. after the user uses this Jutsu, their clothing and skin will be sliced by the winds output leaving them in pain.
    Note:
    -No Fuuton based Jutsu for the next turn
    -No A-ranked Fuuton or above next 2 turns
    -This Jutsu causes 15 damage to the User
    -Can only be taught by Serpent


    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
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    (Kusanagi no Tsurugi: Toppatsu) - Long Sword of the Sages: Outbreak
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Toppatsu, also known as "Outbreak", is a unique Blade that has seen many battles. It is a rare "Kusanagi" similar to the one Orochimaru wields. It is mad out of a strong metal that resembles Jade Stone. It is able to infuse it's self with it's wielders Chakra increasing their ability to Perform Jade Release. This gives the User a +15 to Jade Release and allows them to use half the amount of handseals needed to use it. This blade will move according to its wielders finger movements just like Orochimaru's, the blade emits a bright green light when it's levitating. and has been seen to turn into Eels and slither/swim back to it's owner. Unlike Orochimaru's blade, this sword doesn't have the ability to extend it's reach, meaning it can only strike from close range of itself.
    Note:
    -Cost 10 chakra to levitate
    -Can only be wielded by Serpent

    ~Declined~ No levitation and make it +5. You can try and add other abilities to this sword in your next submission if you want.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Contract
    Summoning Animal: Badger
    Scroll Owner: Swizzik
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A

    ~Approved~

    Summoning Boss if existing: Sunflash the Mace


    He carries a Mace as his weapon.

    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    Badgers in the animal kingdom are known for their ability to dig tunnels and capability to fight off much larger animals such as wolves and bears. Badgers can run or gallop at up to 25–30 kilometres per hour (16–19 mph) for short periods of time. They are tenacious and fast.Unlike many carnivores that stalk their prey in open country, badgers catch most of their food by digging. They can tunnel after ground-dwelling rodents with amazing speed.

    Badger summons are usually the size of big dogs(Akamaru's size) except for their boss Sunflash who is as big as Gamabunta. They have the ability to sense their opponents while they're burrowing in the ground as long as the opponent is touching the ground. Because of their earth affinity they are weak to lightning. They are also rideable. Badgers can enter a state known as blood wrath,it causes the afflicted to go berserk with anger and taint their vision red for a short period of time, enabling him or her to cause a fantastic amount of damage during battle and to withstand a great deal of pain and injury. Fast, Tenacious and deadly these summons are a force to be reckoned with.


    ~Declined~ If you're going to submit your boss summon you need to make it with a proper template. The contract is accepted though.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Custom Summoning Jutsu.Cardinal Mode
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will concentrate on all of the cardinals he/she has the power to summon signaling them. The cardinals who received the user's signal will then go into a deep slumber lending their chakra to the user. The user will then concentrate on the lended chakra and release a red aura of Cardinal chakra all around himself. The user's body then will start to turn red from the neck down concealing his/her clothing under it. The user will then start to rapidly grow blacks lines across his body. Then the user will grow wings out of their back. The user to finish it then grow a mask over their face will black lines going across his eyes. The user will then gain all the abilities of a normal Cardinal. This includes his speed, reflexes and agility to be put to the max. But his stamina stength and logic will fall massively in this state. This state is used as a last resort due to its permanent damage to user's body.
    Note: The transformation will take about 1 minute and 15 seconds to complete and in that time the user is fully open to only taijutsu and S rank and above jutsu.
    *This transformation goes to it's limit by the 4th turn causing the user to turn back into a normal state*
    *The user will face a large amount of confusion and fatigue after the transformation wears off*
    *The user will not be able to use taijutsu, ninjutsu or cardinal summonings for the next 2 turns*
    *Can only be used once per match*
    *Must have signing Cardinal Contract with Rinnegan On The Moon*

    Summoning Technique: Kaminari-on The Lightning Sound
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Kaminari-on The Lightning Sound will appear. Kaminari-on meaning Lightning Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a red bill, black face and red body like most male Cardinals. She can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Kaminari can use any lightning technique that dosent require any handseals due to the fact that while he was a mere baby bird in Aries he was struck by lightning giving extra power but making him weaker in his sound wave ablilty . Kaminari can also send a high pitched A-ranked sound wave that all Cardinals naturally have the ability to do since they are all sound birds but Kami's is weaker due to him being struck by lightning for reasons unknown.
    *Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning her counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*

    Summoning Technique: Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound will appear. Sukaisaundo meaning Sky Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a white bill, black face and red body unlike most Cardinals. He can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Sukaisaundo can use any Wind technique's up to A rank that dont require any handseals. Sukaisaundo can also send a high pitched S-ranked sound wave that all Cardinals naturally have the ability to do since they are all sound birds.
    *Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning her counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*[/SPOILER]

    ~Leaving for the one who approved the summoning contract~

    Elemental Custom Jutsu
    Wind Style: Buddhist Palm
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user release a large mass of fuuton chakra around them. The will the mold it with the air and use chakra manipulation to make the fuuton carry the user high into the sky over the sun blinding the sight of the opponent when they look at them. The user will then release the chakra making him plummet towards the ground at high speeds with his/her hands clapped together. Before the user hits the ground they will infuse either hand with fuuton and thrust it towards the ground making a palm shaped large wind blast which flattens anything it hits.
    *No wind techs the next turn*
    *Can only be used 3 times*
    *Must be taught by Rinnegan On The Moon*


    ~Declined~ where's the Japanese name?
    Quote Originally Posted by Shade Dracova View Post
    Summoning Animal: Red Cardinals
    Scroll Owner: Rinnegan On The Moon
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Quote Originally Posted by Shade Dracova View Post
    Approved
    Quote Originally Posted by Shade Dracova View Post
    Summoning Animal: Red Cardinals
    Scroll Owner: Rinnegan On The Moon
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    ~Approved On Page 246~

    (No japanese for summoning)Summoning Technique: Naki Tori The Sonic Sound
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Naki Tori The Sonic Sound will appear. Naki Tori meaning songbird is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. She has a pink bill, black face and red body like most female Cardinals. She can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Naki can use any fire technique's up to A rank that dont require any handseals. Naki Tori can also send a high pitched S-ranked sound wave that all Cardinals naturally have the ability to do since they are all sound birds.
    *Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning her counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*
    Approved
    Quote Originally Posted by Shade Dracova View Post
    (Kaze/-sui konbo, doragon no maito)Wind/Water Combo-Dragon's Might!
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user gathers wind an water charka at the bottom of their stomach molding it carefully. He then will release all of that chakra all at once. As soon as it leaves his mouth it takes the shape of a dragon's head and rips across the ground as it heads toward the opponent killing him/her on contact.
    Note: Can be stopped by a jutsu like Fire And Wind Blast Technique
    *May only be used once*
    *No wind or water the next turn*
    *Can only be taught/used by Shade Dracova
    ~Declined~ I'm pretty sure you didn't received Yin Yang training, meaning you can't mold two different chakra at once. If you have then I'm sorry and please VM me and I'll re-check it.

    ~Feel free to edit in anyway~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This is a mixture of several existing technique (mines and Mugiwara's techniques).
    Resubmitting

    (Kaze/-sui konbo, doragon no maito)Wind/Water Combo-Dragon's Might!
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user gathers wind at the bottom of their stomach molding it carefully. He/She then will gather a sufficient amount of water chakra around their mouth. With the water chakra they will create a water net around the rim of their mouth. As this happens they will perform 3 handseals and release the molded wind chakra from their stomach in a giant dragon shaped blast of water and wind.
    *May only be used three times*
    *No wind or water the next turn*
    *Can only be taught/used by Shade Dracova
    I am the current holder of the Cardinal Contract and here are some jutsu that were never checked.

    ~Declined~ this is exactly the same as before. You can't mold two chakra at one. You need to first mold a form of chakra, use it, then mold a second form of chakra.

    Summoning Technique: Kaminari-on The Lightning Sound
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Kaminari-on The Lightning Sound will appear. Kaminari-on meaning Lightning Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a red bill, black face and red body like most male Cardinals. She can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Kaminari can use S-A rank lightning technique that dosent require any handseals due to the fact that while he was a mere baby bird in Aries he was struck by lightning giving extra power but making him weaker in his sound wave ablilty . Kaminari can also send a high pitched S-ranked sound wave that all Cardinals naturally have the ability to do since they are all sound birds but Kami's is weaker due to him being struck by lightning for reasons unknown.
    *Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning her counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed* *
    *Only can use S rank lightning if the summoner's specialty is lightning*
    *This is another version of the previously approved Naki Tori in my quotes*

    ~Declined~ Sound jutsus are heavily restricted in our RP so take that ability away. Also make it so it can use lightning that doesn't need hand seals for A-rank and lower.

    Summoning Technique: Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound will appear. Sukaisaundo meaning Sky Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a white bill, black face and red body unlike most Cardinals. He can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Sukaisaundo can use any Wind technique's up to A rank that dont require any handseals. Sukaisaundo can also send a high pitched S-ranked sound wave that all Cardinals naturally have the ability to do since they are all sound birds.
    *Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning her counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*
    *This is another version of my previously approved Naki Tori summoning*

    ~Declined~ Same as above.

    Cardinal Mode Stage One
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will call upon the energy of a pre summoned cardinal on the field. That cardinal will convert itself into energy that goes straight into the user. When the cardinal chakra finally enters the body of the user the following effects will take place: A red chakra cloak will grown around the user this gives the user +5 on all cardinal techniques. The user will grow red tatoo's on there legs and back giving them the speed of Rock Lee(without weights. There hair will grow a dark red and that is just for show. The user will also gain the ability to release a S rank sound wave attack(all cardinal's specialties are singing so the soundwave seems fit).
    Note: The transformation is so draining that it will require one cardinal of S rank to be converted to keep in the state
    *This transformation last one turn without another cardinal being converted into energy the next turn*
    *The user will face a large amount of fatigue when the mode ends
    *The user will not be able to use taijutsu, genjutsu or cardinal summonings for the next 2 turns after deactivated*
    *Can only be used once per match*
    *The same cardinal cant be converted twice in a match*
    *Must have signing Cardinal Contract with Shade Dracova*
    *The soundwave can only be used once per turn*[/SPOILER]

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ No human-summon hybrid and absolutely no summon turning into energy.

    New

    I will be creating a Taijutsu Custom Set

    (Tera - suwari sutōn no 5 no oshie)5 Teachings of Terra- Sitting Stone
    Type: Attack,Supplementary,Defensive
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description; This is a special taijutsu stance that was first thought of by the Spirit Terra. The user will bring there legs together on both sides and bring both hands together in a praying stance with perfect symmetry. As this happens the user is releasing chakra into the earth as he stands there with his eyes closed waiting for the first movement. As he blocks out his eye sight he/she is enhancing his other senses such as hearing and touch. When the opponent makes the first move it will give a sonar like vibration in the earth which will send a message to the opponent telling him what is about to happen. Also with his enhaced hearing he can hear even the slightest exhale of the opponent. This stance is known as almost perfect due to its very few errors but the opponent cant see so it may be easily tricked with the right strategy. The fighting style of this stance is based around blocking all of the opponents moves until you feel his most vunerable moment then strike will all you power.
    *This stance can only be used/taught by Shade Dracova*
    *While in this stance if the user were to open his eyes for any reason he would be temporarily blinded and confused*
    *The user can also feel motions coming from underground*
    *The sonar effect will only reach short range*
    *Once you decide to release the stance you can open your eyes but you will face loss of hearing and touch for that turn and the upcoming turn*



    I bolded the changes and the previous jutsu from the quotes

    I have included the approved contract for my Cardinal Contract which was approved on pg 246

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This is too similar to an already existing form of taijutsu developed by Goro Kaguya. Zaitochi taijutsu.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (武器: Kin Katana) - Goldbrand
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank:A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Goldbrand is a unique katana made from gold and titanium, 1.6 meters long, its origin is unknown, as Don Roberto acquired it as a jutsu scroll from village elder, when he left his village searching for sensei and exploring the world.
    Goldbrands unique trait is called "Chakra enchantment" which enables katanas defensive and offensive improvements. When "Chakra enchantment" is on , it makes Goldbrand sharper, which swiftly increases its damage (+5 dmg , - 5 chakra(each turn) ).
    And as it is a sword , Goldbrand can dodge other swords,kunais,shurikens, cut thru armor.
    "Chakra enchantment" is activated by a hand sign. (Boar)
    Note: Can be used only for 5 turns.
    Note: Needs to be summoned, by performing proper hand signs. (Bird -> Tiger)
    Note: "Chakra enchantment" lasts only 2 turns, when it ends Goldbrand cannot be used until next battle.


    ~Approved~ Don't put damage for your sword. Leave it blank as the sword itself doesn't do damage. However, you can keep the +5 damage since it will be added to whatever Kenjutsu you perform.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    hyouton: buriza-do ( ice style: blizzard)
    Type:supplemary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: the user will form 5 hand seals and focas his water and wind chakra into the already snowing area the snow will begin to fly sideways at very fast speeds untill it becomes a blizzard the sound of the blizzard will block all sound and the vision will be brought to zero basicly leaveing the user and the enemy with nothing but smell as vision is blocked sound is nothing but rageing wind and feel they will become numb after 2 turns in the strom ( still able to move though )
    note: niether the user nor the enemy can see hear or fell where they are in the strom
    note: dojutsu can see threw the jutsu easy
    note: can only be used once.
    note: lasts 4 turns
    note: after 2 turns both the user and the enemey will become numb ( but will not affect anything other then feeling )
    note: can only be used bgy haku yuki

    ~Approved~

    Ranged kuchiyose no jutsu ( ranged summoning jutsu)
    Rank: c
    Type: supp
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: n/a
    Description: the user will bite his thumb and make the hand seals for the summoning jutsu and place his hand on the ground but the summon instead of appearing under the user will appear where ever the user wants withen mid range ( this is basicy the summoning. Jutsui except it let's you summon the animal where ever you want). How its done the user will wsned the chakra signels for the summon to where he wants say I use this to summon an animal I would use this jutsu send my chakra to a place in mid range like say behind the enemy and it will appear there.
    Note: can only be used 3 times per battle
    Note: this can't be used on an already in play summoning animal it has to be used at the point of summoning.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    My last submission was on 09-24-2011, so new week!

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=4524

    Resubmitting:
    Quote Originally Posted by Dr. House View Post
    (Suiton: Dai iwa Shiroppu no Jutsu) - Water Release: Great Syrup Golem Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (+30 if charged with lightning)
    Description: Similar technique to Great Stone Golem, the user expels a large creature composed of syrup from his mouth. The syrup golem has a fair amount of stamina and brute strength, being able to bite and tear off flesh with its mouth and hands respectively.
    Note:
    -Can be used twice
    -If the golem destroyed, it can continue towards as a water wave, in certain cases.
    -Suiton needs to be mastered in order to do this.
    -Can be taught by Dr. House

    declined. if he is made of syrup how can he tear? wouldn't everything stick to him?


    (Doton/Fuuton: Sentaku-ki) - Wind/Earth Release: Washing Machine
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary, Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: (Depends, read in notes)
    Description: The user simply raises a hollow sided dome, which would act defensively to suck up any projectile justus, as having the justu sent back under the opponent within a tunnel. This justu can suck up to A-ranked projectile justus. The wind what's sucking in, will nullify the justu from destroying the half dome.
    Notes:
    -Can be used 3 times
    -As the opponent's justu sucked in, 80% will be returned to it's owner, underneath him.
    -doton/fuuton has to be mastered.
    -Can be taught on by Dr. House

    Projectile is to broad of a term..What if it's a projectile lightning bolt, or flaming lightning bolt.. lower the rank of projectile engulfed. declined.


    Edit any of them if needed. ok did so ;)
    (Suiton: Dai iwa Shiroppu no Jutsu) - Water Release: Great Syrup Golem Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (+30 if charged with lightning)
    Description: Similar technique to Great Stone Golem, the user expels a large creature composed of syrup from his mouth. Hence the golem is made of syrup, it has the ability to absorb certain mud, suiton, raiton jutsus, up to B-rank, thus making him bigger, than his original size. The golem only expand if he absorbs a suiton or a mud technique. If the opponent gets in contact with him, he'll be sucked in the golem, thus suffocating him to death.
    Note:
    -Can be used twice
    -If the golem destroyed, it can continue towards as a water wave.
    -After absorbing a jutsu the golem will become 150% bigger, regardless of the rank.
    -The golem can only absorb 3 techniques, after which it will crumble.

    -Suiton needs to be mastered in order to do this.
    -Can be taught by Dr. House

    ~Approved~ Check the bold parts.

    (Doton: Sentaku-ki) - Earth Release: Washing Machine
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary, Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: (Depends, read in notes)
    Description: The user simply raises a hollow sided dome, which would act defensively to suck up any justu up to B-rank. The sucked up jutsu then will be tunneled through a tunnel, tunneling it under the opponent, hitting them.
    Notes:
    -Can be used 5 times
    -As the opponent's justu sucked in, 80% will be returned to it's owner, underneath him.
    -doton has to be mastered.
    -Can be taught on by Dr. House

    ~Declined~ You need to elaborate on this one, it's too vague. Some jutsu can't be re-directed this way or wouldn't have enough velocity to go back to the opponent and deal any real damage. I really can't imagine a fire technique making a loop, it would most likely crash into your earth dome first and die there.

    (Suiton:Hakidasa shizuku) - Water Release: Spew Droplets
    Rank: A-S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30 (If A) - 35 (If S)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will basically blow out huge amounts of driplets infuzed with a lot of chakra into the air, thus nullifying the incoming fuuton jutsu by materializing with it's molecules, thus making the molecules heavier, thus forcing the jutsu on the ground, creating a pond.
    Notes:
    -If the user decides to emit S-ranked, it will only be able to nullify an A-ranked wind techs, but If the user decides to blow out an A-ranked, it will nullify a B-ranked fuuton jutsus.
    -the user can decide as how much water driplets he'd like to emit, thus having an A-ranked driplets, or S-ranked driplets.
    -Being able to release high qualities of chakra, the user needs to be Sannin or above
    -Need to be mastered water
    -Only taught by Dr. house

    ~Declined~ Restrictions on it's usage?

    (Suiton:Shiroppu no tebukuro) Water Release: Syrup Gloves
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 35
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will channel highly condensed water onto his hands. If the user wants, he can release the covering syrup from his hands thus create a shield like material infront of him.
    Note:
    -The shield will only be able to deflect A-ranked or lower jutsus, but in a sense that the shield will only stay actice for that second the enemies' jutsu had hit. From the hit, the syrup will rush back onto the user's hand.
    -Only Kages are able to make highly condensed syrup on their hands, on this level.
    -Can stay active for a whole 4 turns
    -Need water mastered
    -Can be useable 3X
    -Taught by Dr. House

    ~Declined~ I'm a bit lost in your restrictions. It's usable 3 times per match per stays active for 4 turns? Really? Might as well have it active for the whole match. Or were you implying that you can only use the shield 3 times? In any case, re-work it and make it clearer.

    Resubmitting approved custom jutsu:

    (Doton:Hyōmen no rokku) Earth Release: Surface Lock
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After a single handseal, the user will channel doton chakra into the ground, bringing the finest qualities up from the soil to the surface, creating a shield under the user, on the ground, which can cover short to mid-range under the user, protecting the user from any incoming ground attacks. The user can also break this slamp of earth in half, making it rise up to a vertical stance defending himself with the slamp of rock, the user is able to defend from any incoming attacks, where the slamp has been broken off..
    Notes:
    -Can be only taught by Dr. House
    -Can be summoned twice
    -only who mastered doton can use this.
    -The user won't be able to go underground, hence it will be blocked.

    Submitting/updating it into this:

    (Doton:Hyōmen no rokku) Earth Release: Surface Lock
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After a single handseal, the user will channel doton chakra into the ground, bringing the finest qualities up from the soil to the surface, creating a shield on the ground, which can cover short to mid-range on the ground. The user can also break this slamp of earth in half, making it rise up to a vertical stance defending himself with the slamp of rock, the user is able to defend from any incoming attacks, where the slamp has been broken off..
    Notes:
    -Can be only taught by Dr. House
    -Can be summoned twice
    -only who mastered doton can use this.
    -The user won't be able to go underground, hence it will be blocked.

    The things I changed in the jutsu: I deleted unrevelant sentences.

    ~Approved~

    Edit if necessary.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-12-2011 at 09:51 PM.

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