Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦
Omori No Kei Go | The Weight of Strong Words
A special ninjutsu of the highest caliber that can only be done by those who have excelled in ninjutsu. The user takes out a scroll which he previously prepared by writing a text in Jõko Nihongo (Ancient Japanese) with Hiragana and Katakana scripts instead of Kanji. As he takes the scroll out and unfolds it in front of him in a semi crescent gesture, he claps his hands focusing chakra. He then performs 3 hand seals (Horse+Hare+Boar) and touches the scroll. His chakra takes the form of the Hiragana and Katakana caracters, glowing as light blue chakra constructs. These rapidly converge like snakes to the enemy, binding him like chakra chains, stopping him from moving. This jutsu has a more powerful yet more limited performing method: the user will take a smaller scroll (only slightly larger than his hand) with the same caracters and slam it with his palm on the enemy. The moment there is contact, the rows of Katakana and Hiragana caracters spread across the enemy's body as chains, resctriting his movement. Although highly faster and having no need for hand seals, this alternative method has the same binding strength as the normal method. This jutsu can be done to restrict anything solid, with equal strength regardless of size or mass.
Note1: Can only use jutsu up to S-rank next turn
Note2: Usable only twice
Note3: Because of the dense chakra in them, the chakra bindings are as strong as elemental jutsu of the same rank
Note4: User can't use other regular ninjutsu in the same turn
Note5: The binding doesn't require user to maintain contact and lasts until broken or released
Note7: Can only be taught by Scorps
This is an old submission which i only maintained the name and revamped the whole thing (although Zen said to no resubmit, this is very very different from the previous technique so i'm submitting it as a completely new one but i'll still provide the quote to the previous one)
~Declined~ OP. From what I read, it seems like it'd take an immense amount of strength to break it (considered it's chakra based and not a simple scroll), or a Forbidden ranked technique considering it's as strong as S-rank elemental technique. Either re-word it if I misread something or lower the abilities. Also, you'll notice I made it Short-Mid range, keep it that way.
Originally Posted by Scorps
Panda Ninpou: Mezameru | Panda Arts: Awakening
Range: Short (Long on senses)
The Panda Masters, after centuries of negating the aggressive instincts of their Bear ancestors in exchange for a life of peace and perfect communion with Gaia (Nature), have came to accept their predatory background and its usefulness. As such, years of meditating have allowed them to awaken their dormant instincts and their predatory senses. As a result of their own close connection to Gaia, Panda Masters that Awaken not only gain new abilities as they also boost their already powerful skills. They gain increased senses and become able to hear and smell with enhanced accuracy and range and they gain the ability to sense anything in contact with the Earth. Scorps was the first human ever to master this art and the only one ever since. To awaken the user must clap his hands and start focusing on his chakra for a second. As his chakra changes and powers up his body, two dark circles appear around his eyes mimicking the pandas and when completely formed, give proof of the user having achieved full awakening.
-Enhanced Seventh Sense (user can sense everything in contact with Earth long range around him)
-Enhanced Hearing and Smelling (user gains the ability to hear way beyond the normal boundaries of human hearing, both below and above the normal range and with increased perception, accuracy and range, gaining the ability to block some hazardous sounds; gains the ability to smell as accurately as a good ninja dog and block enemy pheromone/smell induced effects and techniques)
-User only fully awakens in the turn after he activates the technique
-User remains in full Awakening mode for 4 turns
-Can only be used once per match
-User is limited to S-Rank techniques and below in the turn after the technique ends.
Note: must have signed Panda Contract and have the contract Tattoo
Note2: can only be taught by Scorps
~Declined~ You may have a nice background story behind this jutsu, but the abilities are almost similar to existing techniques. I approved one recently, and if you want to witness one for yourself, here's mine:
While mine share many similarities to yours, I can assure you there are which resembles yours even more.
Doton: Omotai no Gozen | Earth Release: As Heavy As Can Be
Rank: A-S Rank
Damage: 60 to a normal weapon attack (+20 to Kenjutsu Attacks)
Using his Earth Chakra, the user infuses hand weapons (Katanas, Swords, Ninjatos, Staffs, etc) or objects to make them heavier. This increases both momentum and impact but has no effect on the weapons/objects inherent strength (in regards to destructibility). This technique can increase the weight up to 100 times (a 1 kg sword can weight about 100 kgs). The user won't feel the weight of the weapons or objects as he manipulates them and will be able to throw them with the same ease as before. Its best used with long, dull weapons in downwards slams rather than sharp weapons and sideways slices. To use without physical contact with the Objects/Weapons, the user must perform 2 hand seals (Boar+Serpent) and spend more chakra, becoming an S-Rank technique.
Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note2: Can't change weight of organic matter like flesh, wood, etc
Note3: User can't use above S-Rank on the same turn
Note4: Object/Weapon stays passively infused the whole turn
Note5: Can only be taught by Scorps
~Declined~ OP. Making it's weight 100 times heavier while not feeling the difference? That just doesn't make any sense IMO. Also, please explain how infusing it with earth chakra would make them heavier? Creating extremely dense matter inside the kunai? (If yes then it'll be declined. To make an object 100 times heavier would required an insane amount of energy which makes it equally OP).
Genjutsu: Tsuyoi Haji no Odaku Ko no Hitotsu | Illusionary Arts: The Mighty Grab of the Perverted Old One
Originally Posted by Scorps
The user gazes upon his enemy intensely and makes him experience the sensation of being grabbed and squeezed in a specific region of the body, preferably the butt. This distracts the enemy and can even make a shy enemy blush. Although it doesn't do any damage, one must be careful to use this on a woman as it often leads to uncontrollable rage or, in some cases, marriage. To enhance it, the user can wink an eye and use some random dirty pick-up line to further augment its perverted effect.
Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note2: Requires direct dirty eye contact and complete lack of shame from the user
Houyi No Meimei Ya | Houyi's Divine Arrow
It is said that Houyi, the ancient chinese God of Archery, once challenged Apollo, the greek God of War and Archery to a duel. In an attempt to easily defeat and embarrass the old god, Apollo sabotaged Houyi's bow. As he picked it up, the bow broke between Houyi's fingers. Without a weapon, he resorted to his own spiritual and physical energies to produce a pure bow and arrow, completely obliterating Apollo and his pride and claiming the title of Great God of Archery to himself. Using advanced shape manipulation, the user focuses his chakra on one of his arms forming a bow of pure chakra. Then, by joining both his hands and pulling the other hand back, he forms a dense arrow made of pure chakra. The user then releases it at his opponent with great accuracy as he would do with a normal bow and arrow. The arrow lacks the piercing ability of a normal arrow (its dull and can't actually pierce) but carries great momentum and speed and at impact can shatter bones or give severe internal injuries from the sudden decompression of chakra and its inherent small shockwave. Because of the advance shape manipulation needed to produce such a dense chakra arrow, it becomes as strong as elemental ninjutsu. The speed of the arrow is slightly above to that of a normal arrow but can still be followed by the vision of a normal ninja. The arrow and the bow, formed by pure chakra, are both visible in a color spectrum between Glowing White and Solid Black, according to both the users mastery of the technique and his own emotions.
Note: Usable 3 times, once per turn with a 1 turn cold down
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: Color of the technique is given when training in this technique
Note4: Scorps color is a light glowing blue
~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist (flame bow, water bow, wind bow, chakra bow, ice bow...etc, they've all been made).