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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Shinkirō) - Mirage
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Legendary skill said to cause "movement without moving". Concept of this technique revolves around moving your chakra along with your body. The easiest way to explain this extraordinary skill would be by equating it to a glass full of water. If you move the water inside the glass you would inevitably move the glass, with glass full of water representing a human body full of chakra in reality. This allows the user to attain double speed for a short amount of time. However, it's legendary description ("movement without moving"), stems from the fact that user can, with this technique, move without any physical movement.
    *Can be used for a maximum of three times per battle
    *Each use lasts for one turn

    ~Declined~ Your description is false. Water inside a class of water can move without the glass moving, it's called the Vorticity of a fluid (fluid dynamics). Also, for it to have any impact on the class, the force exerted on the axis parallel to the base of the glass need to be greater then it's inertia (static friction multiplied by the normal force).

    (Kinzoku-sei no Hando) – Strong Metal Hand
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: A technique where practitioner infuses his own hand with chakra in order to be able to even rip through steel with it. Some, more talented, practitioners were seen to even add a small coating of chakra to technique when facing armed opponents (for obvious reason of not getting cut by the weapon). Although regarded as one of the most destructive taijutsu techniques, it has rather big flaw. Technique cannot be sustained for too long due to strain to nerves and tendons in hands. If overused, one's hand can remain crippled forever.
    *Cannot be sustained for more than two turns
    *There has to be one turn window between two usages

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Tamashī o Hasai Sutoraiku) – Soul-Crushing Strike
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique in which the practitioner circulates chakra through his body, and releases it through his fist at the same time he extends his hand. Releasing chakra too late will cause technique to fail, while releasing too early can cause severe damage to the hand. Technique has got it's name by the way it damages the opponent. Although it can shatter a rock with ease, when used against a human it shatters very bones. The way it shatters them is the interesting part. Once the punch connects it does no apparent damage on the outside. However, the bones on the inside fracture beyond repair.
    *Can be used for a maximum of three times per hand (e.g. if I use the technique with my left hand, there won't be any strain on my right. That is why the separated maximum usage count)
    *If used for more than three times technique will fail and hand will be rendered useless for the rest of the match due to strain.

    ~Declined~ OP and similar technique already exist.

    (Jinwongak) – Focus Stomp
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The practitioner uses one leg to stomp the ground. First he raises his knee to match a desired angle and then moves his shin right to the half of knee's angle. After that, he concentrates his chakra on the sole of his foot and brings it down on target. The technique is capable of crushing concrete and literally cut flesh and bone.

    ~Declined~ Restrictions?
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-24-2011 at 12:58 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Piccolo Kaguya~ View Post
    (Taijutsu: osoi unten) Taijutsu Style: Slow motion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40 Chakra
    Description: Adrenalin forces the brain to "think" faster, making the person perceive time much slower. This uses chakra to imitate this effect and time "seems" to slow down resulting in better reaction time.
    -Lasts 5 turns
    -Can only be used once in a battle
    -This only increases reaction time by x2 doesn't increase strength, speed, or durability of body
    -Does not give better vision, only slows down time for user
    -Can only be taught by ~Piccolo Kaguya~

    ~Declined~ You'd OD (overdose) withing the first turn and die.


    Btw, you might want to contact Mugi and Goro to check that post if you want thing to go faster.


    The first three is based on Goro Kaguya's CW that is why it must go through him but I am submitting it as its mine...
    Also make changes where needed :D
    (Taijutsu: osoi unten) Taijutsu Style: Slow motion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 30 Chakra
    Description: Adrenalin forces the brain to "think" faster, making the person perceive time much slower. This uses chakra to imitate this effect and time "seems" to slow down resulting in better reaction time.
    -Lasts 4 turns
    -Can only be used once in a battle
    -This only increases reaction time by x2 doesn't increase strength, speed, or durability of body
    -Does not give better vision, only slows down time for user
    -Can only be taught by Piccolosan

    Lowered rank, lowered how long it lasts, lowered chakra used to counter the OD...

    ~Declined~ I thought I was clear, "you'd OD within the first turn and die". Do you realize they shoot adrenaline directly into people's heart when it's failing? That's how powerful a drug it is. You can't possibly abuse it without severe drawbacks.

    (Katon: Majin Faia) - Fire Style: Demon Fire
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self-affected
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 each turn.)
    Damage points: N/A (+20 fire.)
    Description: The user will via nature manipulation transform all his chakras into one of the basic five elements, Fire Release. By doing so, he will only have fire chakra running through his entire chakra system and his entire body, this will forcefully heat his body up to an extreme level where the user most likely becomes resistent to most fire attacks, as they simply do not burn him, making him resitent up to A-rank fire attacks. The heat from the user will aswell numb the user's nerves in his entire body, which will result that he won't even flinch if he got stabbed but simply continue on his movements. Also due the fact that the fire chakra the heart will pump faster, the brain work faster, which will result in him increasing his own speed (3rd gates speed), reaction time, and strength. However, not enough with that, the user will gain extra powers in the fire element, increasing it with one rank. However not only good things comes with power, this jutsu also is having it's downs. As the user will only be capable of using fire release only when this technique is activated, as he simply transformed all his chakras into fire. The user cannot stay in this mode in eternity, this state is limited to four turns, whereafter the user will be completly drained from chakra, leaving him only 1% of his chakra back. Once activated, a M appears on the user's forehead.
    ~Lasts four turns.
    ~User can only use fire when activated
    ~After four turns, the User automatically loses the fight if not won by that time.
    ~User needs to be Kage rank to use this
    ~Must master fire and water elements to use this
    ~Can only be USED by Piccolosan

    ~Declined~ OP. Lots of stuff to fix, I'll leave it up to you to figure some of them out and I'll be more precise in your re-submission.

    (Katon: Faia sogekihei) - Fire Style: Fire Sniper
    Rank: S-Rank
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gathers in Katon chakra and at the same time inhales. Then as the user exhales, they will mix the air with their katon chakra. At this time the user will bring up both hands up to the mouth, with both hands the user will create a "barrel". As the user exhales a powerful amounts of fire, the users hands will act like a gun barrel and will make the fire into a concentrated stream of fire. Because the fire is condensed into a stream, it becomes very power and accurate.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Can not use fire justu A rank or higher for current turn and the next turn as well
    -Must have fire mastered to use this jutsu
    -Must be Taught by Piccolosan

    ~Approved~ Made it up to Mid-range.

    (Suiton: hashira burokku) Water Style: Pillar Block
    Rank: B-rank
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Description: User makes one handseal, and releases suiton chakra unto the ground. Then the user makes four water pillars burst from the ground in order to block the opponents jutsu. This jutsu is effective at blocking any B rank jutsu and below (except Earth jutsus). Because the user is not connected to the water lightning jutsu will be blocked and attracted to the water pillars causing the lightning jutsu to shift away from the user. This does not require any water source, but it also gives out alot of water...about an inch on the ground. For that turn that the user makes this jutsu the water will not touch the user. Four pillars can be made however, this is in order to block a jutsu with multiple shots.
    -User can not use any other water jutsu in the same turn
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by Piccolosan

    ~Approved~ Look at bold part.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-24-2011 at 01:05 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyūmanoido Taifū no Sutairu- Kobushi no Arashi) Humanoid Typhoon Style- Fist Storm
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: the user utilizes his Souma no Kou kekkei genkai to move swiftly throwing a barrage of punches using his brothers limbs at the same time making it harder for the opponent to counter. The punches are hard to be read since, if the opponent is able to read the moves, he will only be able to read the main bodies punches and not the dormant body’s punches as they explode out of the main body.
    *Note: Can only be used by a Souma no Kou.
    *Note: Can only be used while fused.
    *Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku

    ~Approved~

    (Hyūmanoido Taifū no Sutairu- Taifū Danmaku) Humanoid Typhoon Style- Typhoon Barrage
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user utilizes his Souma no Kou kekkei genkai to move swiftly spinning around as the dormant body’s limbs spin around the main body as well unleashing a typhoon of punches and kicks while spinning utilizing his complete speed. The user uses his wind chakra to speed up his punches and kicks and add to the damage.
    *Note: Can only be used by a Souma no Kou.
    *Note: Can only be used while fused.
    *Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    火災のスタイルが徐々に消えうせる (Fire style Melt Away)
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:50
    Chakra Damage:N/a
    Description: The user does 3hand signs. once the signs are done the user slams one hand on the ground sending his fire chakra to the oppenents feet. causing the earth under the oppenents feet to melt and harden. making your oppenent get stuck in the earth
    -Notenly can be used 4times
    -Note:After i use the move i cant do any other elemental move but fire
    -Note:Stays in turn for 2 turns

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    火災のスタイルブレイジングチェー (Fire Style-Blazing Chains)
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:60
    Damage points:50
    Description: The User does 3 hand signs. after that i slam my hands together making 5 blazing chains appear from underground. wraping around the oppenets neck/arms/legs. burning them. and restraining them from moving as the chains are pulling down. kinda like shikamarus shadow sewing.
    -Note: Only use Twice
    -Note: Chains can be broke by using any rank water jutsu on the chains. Hot Metal+Water=rust (i think) but yea.
    -Note:Cant use any fire rank jutsu above A the next go around

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    フォーメーションを烈火のスタイル (Fire style Blazing Formation)
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost:45
    Damage points:85
    Description:I do 1 hand sign. as i do. 4 blazing poles appear around the oppenet in a square formation. as it does i then do 5hand signs. igniting each of the polls. making a fire wall to each poll making it like a fire wall where the user cant get out.. after that is complete. i then do 1 more hand sign. sending all the fire from each poll into the middle causing an explosion 10ft in height (The square is 10ft wide also)
    -Note:Cant use no fire jutsu for 2turns afterwards
    -Note:Can only use B-rank or lower fire jutsus for the whole battle after use
    -Note:Can only be used Once
    -Note:Can break through the fire walls with A-Rank Water or S-Rank Wind
    -Note:If jutsu is to close to me i take half the damage

    (Edit or add or take away ANYTHING if needed or wanted)
    can be used by teno757 and sadako

    ~All Declined~ We want the Japanese name in the phonetic form, no kanjis. Re-submit them all following the proper template.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    Its been a complete week and few hours since my last Submission

    (Buki: Oni Subeta) - Weapon: Demon Sword
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: It is a special sword named Demon Sword and was wielded by a true shinobi named Dante and it was passed down to his brave family member i.e. Enzup, after many hard works. This Sword is 1.5 m high and 15 cm broad. The Sword has its affinity towards lightning and can use upto A-rank lightning. And also the Sword can protect the user from any lightning jutsu as the user will intake the lightning jutsu of the opponent in his sword and will pass that lightning to the ground by stabbing the ground with his sword, or that lightning can be used in combo with combining it with other element like water, but that jutsu (which has to be combined with the opponent's lightning) has to be used instantly after intaking the opponent's lightning.
    And also this Sword is mainly popular due to its shape and structure i.e. it has a trigger beside the handle of the sword, which can be pulled and then the sword bends by making a right angle to the blade and the handle, then the blade of the sword starts spinning very fast in clockwise direction, then user can fly by facing the sword in upward direction, just like helicopter's blades.
    Note: ~User can block any lightning jutsu by passing it in ground. User can do this to all lightning jutsu because he is not absorbing it, he is just simply passing it underground.
    ~Can be put in bio, or if summoned then lasts for 4 turns.
    ~Can only be summoned 2 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.
    Look of Sword
    Front view of sword when spinning


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    (Oni Subeta: Herikoputa- Ken) - Demon Sword: Helicopter Blades
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User pulls the trigger and then the sword bends by making a right angle to the blade and the handle, then the blade of the sword starts spinning very fast in clockwise direcion, just like helicopter's blades, which can block any jutsu upto B-Rank within its size.
    ~Can only be used by using the "(Buki: Oni Subeta) - Weapon: Demon Sword".
    ~As this is simply spinning of the sword, so it can be done any no. of times.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.
    Front view of sword when spinning


    ~Both Declined~ Don't know what's up with that sword but it's been submitted 3 times by 3 different member lately. I think the first one was named "red queen" look it up. I can't accept this one because you both use that "trigger" ability of the sword. Similar technique already exist.
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    (Ninjustu: Chakra Oushou) - Chakra King
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 80 (if got hit by sword or claw)
    Description: The user creates a chakra manipulated king like creature made up of pure chakra that surrounds and protects the user as it can act on his own. The chakra king always remains with the user. The chakra king has a sword in his right hand and chakra claw in his left hand, which can be used to attack or defend. This chakra king has a total of 200 health, so in order to destroy it, one must give him 200 damage points, and also chakra king can cut through some earth techniques using his sword.
    Note: ~One must have a sword in his one hand and should make a rasengan in his other hand to activate the Chakra King.
    ~Does not have any effect of ninjutsu.
    ~Can't use any ninjutsu for next 2 turns.
    ~Lasts untill destroyed.
    ~As the moment the chakra king is destroyed, user gets exhausted and fatigue due to which his speed decreases by 1 level for next 2 turns.
    ~20 More chakra will be required to perform any jutsu for next 2 turns.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.



    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Susano'o rip off.
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    (Myou Mo-Do) - Dark Mode
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: When user receives injury or gets hurt in the battlefield, then user closes his eyes and memorizes all the bad things happened in his whole life, all the pain, sadness and darkness of his life. Due to which he user gets very angry and a few drops of tears is seen in his eyes and wants to kill everyonw who comes in his way. A dark chakra is observed around his whole body. Due to the wrath and the dark chakra the user gains +15 speed, gives extra 50% damage points and receives 50% less damage points to any jutsu. While in the dark mode genjustu upto A-Rank have no effect on it. Also in this mode, he can sense the chakra and the danger.
    Note: ~This mode can only be used once per battle and lasts for 4 turns.
    ~ Before entering in dark mode, user first has to be injured for awakening his feelings.
    ~After the dark mode is over, the user gets very exhausted and fatigue due to which the speed is decreased by 5 levels.
    ~Cannot use any jutsu above B-Rank.
    ~Gives less 20 damage points, receives 20 more damage points and requires 25 more chakra points for any jutsu.
    ~The all demerits lasts for complete 2 turns and after that user comes to normal.
    Look of user, when dark chakra covers him.


    ~Declined~ I'm pretty sure I declined a very similar technique lately, if it was yours, you always need to quote your last submission when re-submitting while putting the added part in bold. If it wasn't you, then don't resubmit since this jutsu already exist.
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    (Fuuton: Zennou Clap) - Wind Stye: Almighty Clap
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user spread his arms and then clap with all his power in the direction of target. The huge amount of wind blows with wind blades in that direction, making the opponent flow with it by giving him the injury due to wind blades and/or repelling any fire style jutsu upto A-rank with double the speed and effect, as it has affinity and polarity towards fire.
    Note: ~Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~Declined~ OP, lower the abilities.
    Its been a complete week and few hours since my last Submission

    Resubmitting, with restriction

    (Fuuton: Zennou Clap) - Wind Stye: Almighty Clap
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user spread his arms and then clap with all his power in the direction of target. The huge amount of wind blows with wind blades in that direction, making the opponent flow with it by giving him the injury due to wind blades and/or repelling any fire style jutsu upto A-rank with double the speed and effect, as it has affinity and polarity towards fire.
    Note: ~Cannot use any wind technique in same turn.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~Declined~ What didn't you understand when I said "lower the abilities"? Adding restrictions doesn't change the fact that this technique is OP.
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    Summoning Animal: Terrapin
    Scroll Owner: Enzup
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    ~Approved~
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    (Hulk Mo-Do) - Hulk Mode
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User passes his chakra to each cell of his body and expands the size of cells and thus user's body also gets expanded by almost double size. So that he looks like a monstor and his power and physical strength becomes 10 times then a normal shinobi. And after that he passes doton chakra to make his body even harder than diamond and because of physical strength and hardness he does not have any effect of earth techniques.
    While in this mode he can take instant jumps upto 30m height and moves to any range and when landing from sky, he can destroy everything on earth's surface by punching it, within its range. His speed increases tremendously which is comparable to the raikage's speed while lightning armour activated. In this mode user can't use any of the basic 5 elements except earth and lightning (hardness and speed). He gives double damage points to any taijustu move and 50% more to other moves, and receives 50% less damage to any jutsu and does not have any effect of jutsus upto C-Rank due to the toughness, power, physical strength and hardness.
    Note: ~Can only be used once per battle and lasts for 4 turns.
    ~Biggest demerit of this mode is that after entering in this mode, user can't use basic 5 elements except earth and lightning.
    ~After this mode is over each and every cell of user's body starts paining him very hard for next 2 turns.
    ~User gets exhausted and fatigue due to which his speed decreases by 2 levels.
    ~User can't use any jutsu above B-Rank for next 2 turns.
    ~User gives 20 less damage points and receives 20 more damage points and requires 20 more chakra points, for any jutsu.
    Just try imagining him in skin color, instead of green color.




    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Just no.
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    Resubmitting, in a complete different manner

    (Buki: Yoshimitsu's Dyuaru Heika) - Weapon: Yoshimitsu's Dual Swords
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: These are the two swords i.e. green and crimson red, which were wielded by yoshimitsu and then passed down to Enzup. It is believed that they were the swords of the lightning God (green) and fire god (crimson red) which are sharper than laser. These both swords are flexible, and no-one can even touch these swords without user's will and if someone tries to do so then it will give shock(green sword) or will burn(crimson red sword) that person's hand. So, that person can't hold it anymore.

    Not much is known about the crimson sword till now.

    The Green Sword has its affinity towards lightning and can use upto A-rank lightning. And also the Sword can protect the user from any lightning jutsu as the user will intake the lightning jutsu of the opponent in his sword and will pass that lightning to the ground by stabbing the ground with his sword, or that lightning can be used in combo with combining it with other element like water, but that jutsu (which has to be combined with the opponent's lightning) has to be used instantly after intaking the opponent's lightning.

    The user can spin any sword very fast in clockwise direction, then user can fly by facing the sword in upward direction, just like helicopter's blades.
    Note: ~User can block any lightning jutsu by passing it in ground. User can do this to all lightning jutsu because he is not absorbing it, he is just simply passing it underground.
    ~Can be put in bio, or if summoned then lasts for 4 turns.
    ~Can only be summoned 2 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.




    ~Declined~ Sharper then lasers, flexible swords, protecting the user from any lightning, all those makes it unacceptable. Take out the part where you can absorb lightning, many swords can already do that so yours is a rip off.
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    Resubmitting, removed the activation part

    (Ninjustu: Chakra Akuma) - Chakra Demon
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (if got hit by sword or claw)
    Description: The user releases his pure chakra from the whole body and shapes it in the form of a creature by using shape manipulation that surrounds and protects the user as it can act on his own. The chakra manipulated demon always remains with the user. The chakra demon has a sword in his right hand and chakra claw in his left hand, which can be used to attack or defend. This chakra demon has a total of 200 health, so in order to destroy it, one must give him 200 damage points, and also chakra demon can cut through some earth techniques using his sword and block some by using claw.
    Note:~Does not have any effect of ninjutsu.
    ~Can't use any ninjutsu while chakra demon is on battlefield.
    ~Lasts untill destroyed.
    ~As the moment the chakra demon is destroyed, user gets exhausted and fatigue due to which his speed decreases by 1 level for next 2 turns.
    ~20 More chakra will be required to perform any jutsu for next 2 turns.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.

    Its just the simple shape manipulation of pure chakra.
    Look of Chakra manipulated demon



    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Anything even slightly related to Susanoo will be instantly declined.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-24-2011 at 01:13 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Submissions starting on the 10/17/2011 ending on the 10/23/2011
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Hyouton: Mabayui bakari no rifurekushon | Ice Release: Blinding Reflection
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: While the field is on ice, user sends his chakra into the ground. After spreading his chakra through the ground, he manipulates it to deflect the sun into his opponents’ eyes. Due to the reflection being very strong and concentrated into one point, i.e. opponents’ eyes, he stays blinded for one turn.
    Note: Usable only three times per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can use this


    ~Declined~ Aren't you exaggerating a bit, having light reflected in his eyes and he's blinded for 1 turn?

    Hyouton: Kōrudotatchi | Ice Release: Cold Touch
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: While standing on a water surface, user simply gathers Hyouton chakra in both hands and places them on the surface. As his hands gets in contact with the surface his chakra spreads through the water and freezes it, creating an around one meter thick layer of ice. If the opponent is caught standing on the water surface while the water underneath him is freezing he will be trapped. Once the freezing process completely ends the surface is safe to walk on.
    Note: Usable only four times per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can use this


    ~Approved~

    Hyouton: Kinkyū-ji no bāsuto | Ice Release: Emergency Burst
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: User does a single handseal and releases a strong unfocused burst of Hyouton chakra that even disturbs his own chakra flow. That burst is also capable of freezing and stopping an S-Rank Suiton or Fuuton jutsu that is directed towards the user. Because of the burst, user's skin turns blue-ish which raises his skin's resistance and makes him resistant to B-Rank taijutsu and normal or chakra enchanced ninja tools. While his skin is blue-ish he can't perform any Katon jutsus.
    Note: Usable only three times per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can use this


    ~Declined~ Restrictions are off. How long does this blue-ish state last? Make it 2 times per match and take out the part where you can withstand chakra enhanced weapon and make the taijutsu up to C-rank.

    Hyouton: Hyōten Hyakkasō| Ice Release: Frozen Heaven Hundred Flower Funeral
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: User claps his hand together and releases a huge burst of Hyouton chakra into the sky. The burst creates an opening in the sky from which dozens of ice drops fall over the battlefield. As the drops hit the ground they transform into spiky flowers. They expand very quickly and cover the whole field in ice. If they spread around opponents’ body they can trap him and freeze him to death.
    Note: Usable only twice per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can use this



    ~Declined~ OP. This one as been submitted dozens of times, and was never accepted (as far as I can remember), dunno how you can actually make it work while keeping the essence of the jutsu.

    Hyouton: Sennen Hyōrō | Ice Release: Thousand Years' Ice Prison
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: User does a signle handseal and slams his hands on the ground. Then he disperses his Hyouton chakra and uses it to make several ice spikes protrude form the ground, in a circle, around his opponent. As they appear from the ground he makes them move inwards, towards his opponent, crushing him.
    Note: Usable only twice per battle
    Note: No S-rank or higher Hyouton, Suiton or Fuuton jutsu the following turn.
    Note: Only McRazor can use this



    ~Approved~ Added a restriction.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Jaglion/Liguar
    Scroll Owner:Heavens Blade
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

    ~Approved~



    NOTE: i only want this if the first contract is not approved if it is please decline this
    NOTE: A jaglion or jaguon is the offspring between a male jaguar and a female lion (lioness).
    A liguar is the offspring of a male Lion and a female Jaguar.
    NOTE: since there the same just parents are reversed id like both

    (Kōton: hagane soujuu) steel release: steel manipulation
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementry
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: /
    Description: by doing two handseals the user can manipulate the molecules in steel a steel object user extending if or manipulate the size (by making it longer but skinner) and shape of steel objects however they cant increase the amount of steel only the shape of it
    -steel bios only
    -can only be taught by Heavens Blade

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ We don't accepted free manipulation anymore, plus I see many problems with this one if it's approved.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~CoOkie Monster~ View Post
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    (Kuchiyose: Kokuou Reo) ~ Summoning: King Leo
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user offers a sacrifice of blood and then stretches their arm at full length to summon the King Leopon, Leo. Leo has the size and strength of a lion. But, unlike the lion, he has extraordinary climbing abilities like the leopard, which enables him to climb on Natural objects such as trees allowing him to pounce at an angle at prey. He has a very strong jaw and can use a unique arsenal of jutu to his advantage (He can do Earth, Water), and has his own set of jutsu that he utilizes against his prey.
    ~Can only be summoned by ~CoOkie Monster~
    ~Lasts 5 turns
    ~Can do B-rank of Earth and Water
    ~Can only be summoned once

    ~Declined~ Make it so he can use only 1 element. You can specify that he can use that element up to S-rank considering he's your boss summon.

    (Kuchiyose: Kokuou Reo) ~ Summoning: King Leo
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user offers a sacrifice of blood and then stretches their arm at full length to summon the King Leopon, Leo. Leo has the size and strength of a lion. But, unlike the lion, he has extraordinary climbing abilities like the leopard, which enables him to climb on Natural objects such as trees allowing him to pounce at an angle at prey. He has a very strong jaw and can use a unique arsenal of jutu to his advantage (He can do Earth), and has his own set of jutsu that he utilizes against his prey.
    ~Can only be summoned by ~CoOkie Monster~
    ~Lasts 4 turns
    ~Can do up to S-rank of Earth
    ~Can only be summoned once

    ~Approved~
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    Custom Weapon

    (Subeta of Inferuno) ~ Sword of Inferno
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user takes a bit of blood and wipes it on a specific scroll which cause the mighty Sword of Inferno to erupt into the battle field. While the sword is wielded, the user is protected by a constant heat wave which radiates on the skin. This heat causes the wielder to be immune to all non-water D-rank jutsu. The wielder can also channel chakra into the sword to fuel the sword to send a wave of flames from the tip or ignite the sword increasing damage or to destroy projectile attacks. The wielder can also place chakra into the sword and let it detonate when activated.

    ~Can only be wielded by ~CoOkie Monster~
    ~Lasts up to 3 turns
    ~Can only be summoned once
    ~Power of blade is = B-rank.
    ~Can do up to B rank projectile attacks (Like "Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu" by swinging the sword) ( The amount of swings needed is = 1/2 handseals required)

    ~All attacks done by the sword

    ~Declined~ I won't approve any swords that shoot projective or release shockwaves anyome, as well as swords absorbing attacks. It's been done so many times already so I can easily say: similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katana modo)-Sword mode
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Katana modo is a secret jutsu that allows the user to change any part of his body into sharp swords. The user can change his arm, foot, stomach and all he knows into swords except for his head. Katana Modo also strenghten the body due to the swords inside and therefore only attacks above B-Rank can damage the user. If the swords are focused into the arms or the legs of the user the swords can't be broken. For those who know Katana Modo you can enter it in a split second without any handseals, but it only lasts for 5 seconds.
    ~Note: Can enter Katana Modo 3 times per battle
    ~Note 2: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Where you seriously thinking I'd accepted something like this?

    Kairai Ginou: Usopp)-Puppet skills: Usopp
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Usopp is ~The Norwegians~ best offansive puppet. He looks like a normal human human, only there's two small diferances: His nose it a bit to long and his feets are huge, giving him a perfect balance, improving his aim. Usopp carries a small slingshot and he has some very special balls for his weapon that he can fire at the oppponent and all the balls reach long-range in high speed. The balls that Usopp fires counts as one of the three moves per round.

    (Kaji Bo-ru)-Fire Ball
    Usopp shoots a small ball right against an opponent at a very high speed with perfect direction. When the ball gets close to the opponent it explodes into a huge fire that burns them.

    (Raikou Bo-Ru)-Lightning Ball
    Usopp shoots a small ball right against an opponent at a very high speed with perfect direction. When the ball gets close to the opponent it explodes into lots of lightning that shocks the opponent so they're unable to move.

    (Kemurri Bo-Ru)-Smoke Ball
    Usopp shoots a small ball right against an opponent at a very high speed with perfect direction. When the ball gets close to the opponent it explodes into a huge smokescreen that can't be seen trough even with Byakugan due to special chakra in the smoke blocks its powers.

    (Kairai Ginou: Zoro)-Puppet skills: Zoro
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Zoro is a puppet made by ~The Norwegian~. He looks like a normal man with green hair and a green wristband. Zoro wields three swords, one in each hand and one in his mouth. The swords are able to cut trough any Doton-Jutsus except forbidden ranks. Zoro moves realy fast and his swords are almost impossible to block if you don't know his weakness. Zoro's only weakness is a spot on his stomach where there is a hole. To cover up the hole Zoro wears a white shirt. Since there's a hole there Sasori can transfer his heart to Zoro on time each mach.
    ~Note: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Both Declined~ The first puppets has abilities which were separately submitted by One Piece's fans. The second is grossly OP.

    (Doton: Tetorisu)-Earth Style: Tetris
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    The user will focus a huge amount of earth chakra into the sky and there it will take the shape of many different figures that starts to fall down at the opponent. The figures are large, and as long as the user keeps sending chakra into the sky the blocks won't stop falling. If the opponent gets trapped under the opponent they will be smashed. The user can controll where the blocks shall land.
    ~Note: While the user sends Doton chakra into the sky the user can't use any other jutsus.
    ~Note 2: The user can stop the jutsu at a second if wanted.
    ~Note 3: Can only be used once per battle and lasts as long as the user wants.
    ~Note 4: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ I'm warning you, if you re-submit such ridiculous jutsu I'm banning you for two week from this thread.

    (Doton: Rimen Maunten)-Earth Style: Reverse Mountain
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    The user will create two huge mountains that will emerge from two sides of his body and will be pushed out from the user untill it gets stopped. The mountains can withstand almost everything and can stop other mountains from moving.
    ~Note: Can only be used once per battle
    ~Note 2: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined~ Unrealistic and OP. Shooting two mountains? Really ~__~?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Dei Dei View Post
    -Yellow Secret Technique: Three Puppet Collection of Awesome (Iero Himitsu no Jutsu: San Ningyou Korekushon no Subarashi)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: These three puppets are made by Dei Dei(Greed Kiyoshi). All the puppets wear bright yellow cloaks like the matrix but bright yellow. They all have a kanji on their back for "Peace". These are three taijutsu/weapon puppets. Their arms have chakra shields.

    1. Luffy is the ultimate taijutsu puppet. He really looks like Luffy. He can spit out mulitple poison tipped needles. His top half of his body can stick out one inch thick and one foot long poison tipped spikes. His arms, legs and neck can deattach with a poison tipped blade on the end.
    2. Wrath is the ultimate defensive taijutsu puppet. He looks like Wrath. He have large metal fists with poison tipped spikes on the end to defend against B rank and below attacks with a single fist. He also have a huge shield he holds that blocks B rank and below attacks.
    3. Bruce Lee is the fastest of all three of the puppets. He really looks like Bruce Lee. He has two pair of poison tipped spiked nunchakas that attaches from his legs. He can spit out mulitple poison tipped kunais.


    ~Declined~ If you're going to make them poisonous, please make a separate custom first to submit the poison itself. In order to do so, you need to be a med-student and have learned to work with poisons.
    -Yellow Secret Technique: Three Puppet Collection of Awesome (Iero Himitsu no Jutsu: San Ningyou Korekushon no Subarashi)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: These three puppets are made by Dei Dei(Greed Kiyoshi). All the puppets wear bright yellow cloaks like the matrix but bright yellow. They all have a kanji on their back for "Peace". These are three taijutsu/weapon puppets. Their arms have chakra shields.

    1. Luffy is the ultimate taijutsu puppet. He really looks like Luffy. He can spit out mulitple needles. His top half of his body can stick out one inch thick and one foot long spikes. His arms, legs and neck can deattach with a blade on the end.
    2. Wrath is the ultimate defensive taijutsu puppet. He looks like Wrath. He have large metal fists with spikes on the end to defend against B rank and below attacks with a single fist. He also have a huge shield he holds that blocks B rank and below attacks.
    3. Bruce Lee is the fastest of all three of the puppets. He really looks like Bruce Lee. He has two pair spiked tipped nunchakas that attaches from his legs. He can spit out mulitple kunais.


    ~Declined~ When re-submitting a custom, put the added part in bold or explain what you took away.

    -Summoning Technique: Rainy (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Reini)
    Rank: S
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short(summoning)
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Rainy is a nin dog from Mount. Fang. He is the first nin dog who learned and used Rain techniques. He has mulitple personalities like Rain. He can be calm or wild(angry). When rainy is summoned he sends water chakra into the sky making it rain all over the battlefield. He can make it drizzle or a down pour similar to when it rains when a hurricane is happening. It all depends on his personality right then and there. He has dark blue fur with black eyes and the size of Ibuse(just a reference). He can use rain techs up to S rank. He also has his own awesome jutsu. He shapes the rain into four dogs the size of an almost adult size dog. The dogs form in front, back, left and right of the opponent and attack the opponent smashing into him. The attack is A rank and only used three times per battle and counts as one of the three moves per turn.
    -Summoned once per battle.
    -The rain, rainy makes remain constant on the field as long as he is on the field.

    ~Declined~ While I did approved some custom summons who could use special element, this won't happen soon again. Make it one of the 5 main element.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Raiton: Denkou Maru) - Lightning Style: Lightning Disc
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User releases the lightning onto the earth from the feets beneath him and in the area within short range which takes the form of disc and spreads on the surface of the ground, So that opponent can't use that earth to perform any jutsu and any earth justu of him will not work on the hardened earth.
    Note: ~If anyone tries to use an earth jutsu on that part of earth, then the earth tech will be break down.
    ~Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.

    ~Declined~ Wouldn't the very earth under your feet crumble to a sand-like texture because of the lightning, making you lose your balance as it breaks down?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sakurifaisu Kuchiyose - Vlad) : Summoning: Sacrifice's Summon - Vlad
    Type: Summon
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    This is a secret Gull summoning only known to Sacrifice after he stumbled upon the Gull's secret temple lost ages ago during the "Great Flame Wars" between the Gulls and the Crows. As he entered the temple, he found an ancient codex written by a Gull, he found this surprising because this codex was small and most Gulls were much larger. As he read the codex, he found an old key. He searched the temple for days until he found a key slot in which he placed the key in and suddenly he was teleported to an island, On this island a statue of stone stood. The statue somewhat resembled a Gull but was smaller and was able to stand upright...he read the name on the codex "Vlad" the statue started to lose it's rock texture and Vlad appears in all his glory. Vlad is about the size of Gamakichi so the user is able to right on him, only one person though, he's very fast and quite strong. Vlad has a complete mastery over Fire, he can use them without handseals and have its power increased. Vlad is able to cover his body in fire and absorb all fire techniques up to A-Rank .Vlad has a secret technique which allows him completely cover him in fire and release a "Forbidden Rank" explosive fire orb directly at the target causing everything in that area up mid to long range to be under a sea of fire, in turn destroying everything in the area. This causes him to be completely exhausted and will no long to be on the battlefield for the remainder of the battle.

    Notes:
    - Summon lasts 4 turns
    - Absorbs twice per battle
    - Summon released after Ultimate attack is used
    - Must have signed the Gull contract
    - Only usable by Sacrifice.. & those he allows.

    ~Declined~ No F-rank summons will be allowed, summons can use up to S-rank, no "absorbing an element" as it's been done countless times and would fall under the category of "similar techniques already exist".

    (Fuuton: Raiton Ken Fuuton Toukyuu Ryuu) Wind Style: Lightning and Wind Throwing Axes
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    The user will gather wind chakra in both hand and manipulate it to form up a unique designed axe meant for throwing purposes in both hands. They are about the size of chair, the user then throws the axes where ever he would like, immediately after they leave the users hands, the user will let our an electrical stream of lightning into the axes, increasing there slashing power. The lightning stream must be connected into the axes through the a finger on both hands (similar to lighting beast running) This allowed the user to move the axes around and have the axes attack at once or one at a time, giving it more options.

    Notes:
    - Requires master of Raiton & Fuuton
    - Unable to use a Wind technique in next turn
    - Only usable/trainable by Sacrifice..

    ~Declined~ First of all, this would count as two moves. Secondly, lightning and wind a elemental enemies, the lightning would die out when hitting your axes while weakening it. I suggest re-doing this one as it's flawed in it's basics.
     
         
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    (Doton: Ragu no Furue) - Earth Release: Quaking Runner
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplmentary/Offensive
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 15(-15 per turn)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: When the user activates this jutsu, he will release small amounts of earth chakra into the ground everytime he takes a step, lands, runs, etc. By doing so the user will create minor quakes reaching from his location, and up to mid-range around him which will cause his opponent to loose balance, and leave him open. However when having this jutsu activated the user cannot use other elements than the ones that's based on Earth Release(Like Diamond.).
    ~Can be activated up till three times per battle.

    ~Declined~ I like it, a lot, but making it C-rank doesn't change the fact that it needs to be restricted in it's usage. I'll leave the details up to you. Also, a C-rank technique would cause quake, but nothing powerful enough to make an opponent fall to the ground when you walk. Mention that while it may surprise the opponent at first, and make him lose balance, he can very much adapt and prepare himself to keep his balance after the first quakes.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Chojutsu no Ankoku: Hiketsu) - Écriture of darkness: Rejection
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damge points: (same damage as jutsu send back)
    Description: The user will swing their sword focusing their fuuin chakra into their blade as they as they do so. As they swing their sword, they will release a row of seals into the air that form a rectangular barrier that is 10 inches wide and 2.5 feet long. This rectangular barrier forms in the direction the sword was swung. This barrier is able to not only block, but reflect one attack of A rank at below sending it back to it’s origin. A sword attack will hit the barrier and will be forced back with the same force it was swung, in the opposite direction.

    Note: Usable twice
    Note: Only works on A ranks and below.
    Note: Barrier only blocks attacks the same size or smaller, it is not able to block something like a fireball that would go around the barrier.

    ~Declined~ What's fuuin chakra? Also, while fuuinjutsu are very useful, I feel this technique is very similar to the space time barrier Minato used:




    The only difference being you send it back instead of choosing where it pops out.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Chameleon
    Scroll Owner:Alucard
    Other Users who have signed contract: -
    Summoning Boss if existing: -
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: -
    General Description: Chameleons are a distinctive and highly specialized clade of lizards. They are distinguished by their parrot-like zygodactylous feet, their separately mobile and stereoscopic eyes, their very long, highly modified, and rapidly extrudable tongues, their swaying gait, the possession by many of a prehensile tail, crests or horns on their distinctively shaped heads, and the ability of some to change color. They're uniquely adapted for climbing and visual hunting.
    General Abilities: Their tongue extends out faster than human eyes can follow, at around 26 body lengths per second. The tongue hits the prey in about 30 thousandths of a second
    Chameleon's, being experts in camouflage, can turn invisible and even suppress their chakra, turning completely undetectable by chakra sensors. Also, since they're so skilled with camouflage, capable of turning the same colour of their surroundings, they're very good at performing sneaky attacks.
    Note: Dropping my jackal summoning contract if this gets approved.

    ~On hold~ I need to confirm with the other mods that this contract doesn't exist before checking it.

    (Doton: Guraundo Sakuzen) ~ Earth Release: Ground Drying
    Rank: A; S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 (A-rank); 40 (S-rank)
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user will perform a row of seven hand seals and place his hands or stomp on the ground, releasing his earth chakra in the vicinity. In the A-rank version, the earth will then start to dry up, and any earth structures there may be on the field and are in contact with the ground, like walls, objects or even creatures made out of earth, will crumble and turn into a pile of dust and rubble because of the extreme dryness. In the S-rank version, the same will happen but on a bigger scale. The terrain becomes so dry, it will turn into a rocky field and any water sources there may be in the field will disappear (except rain).
    *Living beings are not affected by this technique
    *A-rank is usable twice per battle. S-rank is usable twice per battle
    *If the S-rank version is used, there must be a gap of three turns before it can be used again.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (I have a water jutsu that does the same thing and Kawagiri also does have a "dryness" custom to fit his Crocodile bio).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Here...
    (Kasai no sutābonbādomento-hō)- Fire Style: Fire Star Bombardment Technique
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:User creates six fireballs in his throat. Using shape manipulation as he is spitting out the fire balls, they turn into little stars. The user leaves a little string from his hand that is attached to the fire stars to contol them, kinda like Puppetry. The user fires the Fire Stars forward. The user directs one underground, under the opponent. The user controls the stars and put one behind the opponent, one above, two to the sides, and one in front. The look of this move is kind of like Piccolo's H*llzone Grenade. After the opponent realizes that he is trapped, the one underground raises the opponent up, and at the same time the other stars are coming, they all burst, sending the opponent in a fiery, burning haze.

    Note: Can only be taught by Gingka Uzumaki
    Note2: Can only be used 3 times in a battle
    Note3: Cannot be used against Gingka Uzumaki.

    ~Declined~ No relation to puppetry if you're not a puppet master, find another way to take control over those starts.
    Here: Perfectly
    (Fuuton/Katon: Kasai no sutābonbādomento-hō)- Wind Style/Fire Style: Fire Star Bombardment Technique
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:User creates six fireballs in his throat. Using shape manipulation as he is spitting out the fire balls, they turn into little stars. The user charges Fuuton and seperates the wind into Six Wind Gusts at the same time, to blow at the Stars to direct them, making them sharper as well. The user fires the Fire Stars forward. The user directs one underground, under the opponent. The user controls the stars and put one behind the opponent, one above, two to the sides, and one in front. The look of this move is kind of like Piccolo's H*llzone Grenade. After the opponent realizes that he is trapped, the one underground raises the opponent up, and at the same time the other stars are coming, they all burst, sending the opponent in a fiery, burning haze.

    Note: Can only be taught by Gingka Uzumaki
    Note2: Can only be used 3 times in a battle
    Note3: Cannot be used against Gingka Uzumaki.

    Please, if you still see stuff wrong, thats just minor, please change it. I can't see anything else.

    ~Declined~ When re-submitting customs, you need to put the added part in bold or explain what you took out from the original.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton : buru)- Raging Bull
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user gather a good amount of Doton chakra into there hands,and then release the Doton Chakra into the ground.And once the Doton chakra is in the ground the user shape manupliates the ground forming 5 meduim size bulls that attack the enemy
    -can only be used 2 times in one battle
    -the bulls last for 2 turns
    -the bulls are under the user control
    - Can only be taught by The Mightyy Kamina

    ~Pending~ I'm pretty sure this is a re-submission of you. When re-submitting you need to quote your previous submission so I can see what I commented on the original. If it's not a re-submission, then I can tell you somebody submitted that one already lol.

    (Doton : buru)- Stampede
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gather alot of doton chakra into there hand,then they release it into the ground. And once the Doton Chakra in the ground the user shape manupliate it into 100 large stampedeing bulls that stampede anything in it's way even the user.
    -can only be used once per battle
    -can only last 2 turn
    -the bulls stampede the first thing it see's
    -the user has no control once they are made.
    - Can only be taught by The Mightyy Kamina

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist for another element.

    (Doton : hando)- Rock Grab
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gather a good amount of earth chakra into there feet,and once they have enough they release it into the ground.And manupliate it to where the Enemy is and then shape manupliate the earth into 4 large hands that grab the enemy's leg and arms. LEaveing them stuck in the same spot
    -Can only last 2 turns
    -Can only be used 1 time in a battle
    - THe user has full control of the hands,to the point of where he can make them grab any part of the enemy.
    - Can only be taught by The Mightyy Kamina

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (the existing version only uses two hands lol).

    (Fire :tori )- Arrow Spearow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After preforming the nesseary hand seals, a seemingly unlimited supply of bird-shaped projectiles come out of the users mouth. The Birds ignite in flame when thrown and explode on contact. Avanced users are able to make the flaming projectiles merge into a giant phoenix that flies straight through any series of targets, burning them to a crisp.
    - Can only be taught by The Mightyy Kamina

    ~Declined~ Make it a fix number of birds, take out the part where it explodes and if you're going to use fire too you need to be able to use Yin Yang to mold two chakra at the same time (while making it count for 2 moves). Where are the restrictions btw?

    (taijustu: mokumoku)- Musou Fighting Style
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user closes there eye's and completely shut down there conscious mind and separates his powers from his emotions, using the resulting focus to dramatically increase his speed, precision, reflexes,hearing, and power.
    - Increases Taijustu by 5
    - Can only be used once per battle
    - The user must be sitting down, for one turn to activate Musou
    -Can only be taught by The Mightyy Kamina

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist, check Mugiwara's customs and Goro Kaguya Zaitochi's taijutsus.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Doton/Raiton: sono Kokuou's erekutorikku kouza| Earth/Lightning Release: The King's Electric Chair
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Rank: S Rank
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user performs two handseals, he then releases his chakra into the earth, manipulating it to center under the opponent, with a click of the user's teeth, a majestic royalty- like chair rises from the ground below the opponent, marked onto the handles of the chair is a picture of a crown, three segments of rock ten emerge from the back of the chair, one restricts both arms, the other restricts the opponent's stomach, and the other restricts his feet. As soon as this is completed [which takes a short time] A violent pulse of Lightning is released from the chair, this pulse of Lightning is similar to that of Chidori Nagashi.
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -Usable by Sannin rank and higher
    -Can only be taught by Drizzy

    ~Declined~ When re-submitting customs, you need to put the added part in bold or explain what you took out from the original. Also, you need to quote the original customs for me to check the differences.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Satetsu no Buredo) - Iron Sand Blades
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Long-Range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will manipulate their Iron Sand with their magnetic chakra and form multiple blades of Iron Sand from any source of Iron Sand. The Iron Sand that was formed into the blades is then shot out of the original source of Iron Sand and heads to the target. The blades have a sharpness from Iron Sand's natural sharpness and a controlled cutting quality from the user. The blades cannot be manipulated after they have been shot out of the Iron Sand.
    Restrictions:
    ~Usable once.
    ~The blades cannot be created withing short range from the opponent, leaving him time to react to the incoming attack.
    ~No S-rank and above Iron Sand/Magnetism jutsus the following turn.

    ~The blades can be stopped by S-Rank Wind jutsu.

    ~Approved~ Added two restrictions.

    (Satetsu Taibu Jutsu) - Greater Iron Sand Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary / Defensive / Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates large tools, large objects, large weapons, and large shields out of Iron Sand. The Iron Sand can be suspended in mid-air.
    Restrictions:
    ~Usable three times.

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist. It's not because someone made the exact same technique with water or fire, that making it in another element isn't considered ripping him off.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-24-2011 at 04:05 PM.

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