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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Submitting My Very Own Custom Taijutsu/Kenjutsu Style

    (Champuru/champloo Kendo)

    Description: Highly unorthodox swordplay and a fighting style based on breakdancing the Style also take Movements from almost every kind of Marital Arts the Style allows the Users movements to be unpredictable and very deadly. The user can use this to even defend himself in very small and tight area's. Most movements of this style of Taijutsu and Kenjutsu are done with Flips and by the using their feet and is done low to the ground. Even thoe most movments are unpredictable the Style has it weakness due to the fact that it involes flips and is done close to the ground the user unless properly is left open in the middle of dodging a Attack. Some of the Style can also be mistaken with Rock Lee's Drunken Fist and with some of the Movements seen by Sasuke while fighting Naruto on the roof before Sasuke left the village. This style allows very few Chances to use any Chakra Infused Attacks because while using the style the user is in consent movement either attacking or defending againist his opponent.This style does not have to be done with a sword but works best with one

    Pictures of This Style:





    Requirements to use Champloo Kendo:

    • Must be Atleast Sannin Rank
    • Must Have Atleast Started Basic Kenjutsu
    • Must Have Mastered Basic Taijutsu
    • Must Have My permission and Proof of beginning Kenjutsu and Mastery of Taijutsu
    • Can Only Be Taught By Me (-Itachi-) Unless I sate otherwise



    ~Approved~

    As we talked about earlier. make sure none of the techniques match kaito tai. there is a technique in there that involves cartwheeles and such to dodge incomming attacks



    (Chanpurū kendō: Bōshi heddokikku) Champloo Kendo: Spinning Head Kick

    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The User will drop down to the Ground and start to spin on their head while spinning on their head the user will spread their legs out kicking their opponent Constantly Until the user Stops Spinning

    Restrictions-
    • Must Have Been Trained in Champloo Kendo Up to this Jutsu
    • Can only Be Tought by -Itachi-


    ~Approved~

    (Chanpurū kendō: Furippingu ken suraisu) Champloo Kendo

    Rank:B
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will Flip into the air and first land a strong kick almost like landing on their opponents head and then flip upwards and pull out their sword and deliver a dead slice to their opponents HeadRestrictions-
    • Must Have Been Trained up to this Jutsu in Champloo Kend
    • Can Only Be Taught By -Itachi-
    • Depending on how used the user can also injure themselves by using this


    Declined. describe the green part better so the user can visualize the move. right now I cant picture how I land a kick on the opponent head and then flip upward and slice thier head. is it flip, kick, land, flip again slice downward into the top of the head?
     
         
    Last edited by Scary Yamato; 10-26-2011 at 09:16 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Tauburn- View Post
    These next ones are Dark release cj's, i have a Dark Release Bio in my sig. (Black Mist of Kirigakure)

    (Meiton: Sekkikyokuryuu)- Dark Release: Black Devil Sword
    Type: Supp
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user releases a burst off dark chakra from their lower daimond, while making a handseal with the user right hand. Releaseing the chakra summons the Black Devils Sword, from the users left hand. The sword its self will disappear if the user release their hold on the sword.
    Black Devil Sword

    ~Declined~ Restrictions?

    (Meiton: Ikkitousen)- Dark Release: First Demonic Blade Blow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: when the user has the Black Devil Sword already out and in their hand, the user will release dark chakra onto the sword, from their lower daimond, as the user starts to release dark chakra to the sword the user will hold the Black Devil Sword above their head then swing downward releaseing all of the dark chakra as a blast from the sword.
    - Usable 4 times per battle.
    - Never twice in a row.
    First Demonic Blade Blow

    ~Declined~ Black devil sword wasn't accepted.

    (Meiton: Nikitousen)- Dark Release: Second Demonic Blade Blow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: another version of the First Demonic Blow, but with this one the user will thrust their sword at the opponent, releaseing all of the dark chakra from the sword in an arrow like form, striaght for the opponent.
    - Usable 4 times per battle.
    - Never twice in a row.
    Second Demonic Blade Blow

    ~Declined~ The first demonic blade blow wasn't accepted.

    You should make all your submissions so dependent of one another.
    Wow im getting bad about remembering my restrictions lol.

    (Meiton: Sekkikyokuryuu)- Dark Release: Black Devil Sword
    Type: Supp
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user releases a burst off dark chakra from their lower daimond, while making a handseal with the user right hand. Releaseing the chakra summons the Black Devils Sword, from the users left hand. The sword its self will disappear if the user release their hold on the sword.
    - Must have Dark Release to summon it.
    - Can be summoned 4 time per battle.
    - Will stay in battle for 2 turns, then must be released.

    Black Devil Sword

    Declined. since you have a restriction that it disappears when released front he left hand, make a note saying that the sword will be released in order to make handseals

    (Meiton: Ikkitousen)- Dark Release: First Demonic Blade Blow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: when the user has the Black Devil Sword already out and in their hand, the user will release dark chakra onto the sword, from their lower daimond, as the user starts to release dark chakra to the sword the user will hold the Black Devil Sword above their head then swing downward releaseing all of the dark chakra as a blast from the sword.
    - Must have the Black Devil Sword summoned.
    - Usable 4 times per battle.
    - Never twice in a row.
    First Demonic Blade Blow

    (Meiton: Nikitousen)- Dark Release: Second Demonic Blade Blow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: another version of the First Demonic Blow, but with this one the user will thrust their sword at the opponent, releaseing all of the dark chakra from the sword in an arrow like form, striaght for the opponent.
    - Must have the Black Devil Sword summoned.
    - Usable 4 times per battle.
    - Never twice in a row.
    Second Demonic Blade Blow

    Both Declined, pending approval of the sword
     
         
    Last edited by Scary Yamato; 10-26-2011 at 09:45 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~The Norwegian~ View Post
    (Katana modo)-Sword mode
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Katana modo is a secret jutsu that allows the user to change any part of his body into sharp swords. The user can change his arm, foot, stomach and all he knows into swords except for his head. Katana Modo also strenghten the body due to the swords inside and therefore only attacks above B-Rank can damage the user. If the swords are focused into the arms or the legs of the user the swords can't be broken. For those who know Katana Modo you can enter it in a split second without any handseals, but it only lasts for 5 seconds.
    ~Note: Can enter Katana Modo 3 times per battle
    ~Note 2: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Where you seriously thinking I'd accepted something like this?

    Kairai Ginou: Usopp)-Puppet skills: Usopp
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Usopp is ~The Norwegians~ best offansive puppet. He looks like a normal human human, only there's two small diferances: His nose it a bit to long and his feets are huge, giving him a perfect balance, improving his aim. Usopp carries a small slingshot and he has some very special balls for his weapon that he can fire at the oppponent and all the balls reach long-range in high speed. The balls that Usopp fires counts as one of the three moves per round.

    (Kaji Bo-ru)-Fire Ball
    Usopp shoots a small ball right against an opponent at a very high speed with perfect direction. When the ball gets close to the opponent it explodes into a huge fire that burns them.

    (Raikou Bo-Ru)-Lightning Ball
    Usopp shoots a small ball right against an opponent at a very high speed with perfect direction. When the ball gets close to the opponent it explodes into lots of lightning that shocks the opponent so they're unable to move.

    (Kemurri Bo-Ru)-Smoke Ball
    Usopp shoots a small ball right against an opponent at a very high speed with perfect direction. When the ball gets close to the opponent it explodes into a huge smokescreen that can't be seen trough even with Byakugan due to special chakra in the smoke blocks its powers.

    (Kairai Ginou: Zoro)-Puppet skills: Zoro
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Zoro is a puppet made by ~The Norwegian~. He looks like a normal man with green hair and a green wristband. Zoro wields three swords, one in each hand and one in his mouth. The swords are able to cut trough any Doton-Jutsus except forbidden ranks. Zoro moves realy fast and his swords are almost impossible to block if you don't know his weakness. Zoro's only weakness is a spot on his stomach where there is a hole. To cover up the hole Zoro wears a white shirt. Since there's a hole there Sasori can transfer his heart to Zoro on time each mach.
    ~Note: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Both Declined~ The first puppets has abilities which were separately submitted by One Piece's fans. The second is grossly OP.

    (Doton: Tetorisu)-Earth Style: Tetris
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    The user will focus a huge amount of earth chakra into the sky and there it will take the shape of many different figures that starts to fall down at the opponent. The figures are large, and as long as the user keeps sending chakra into the sky the blocks won't stop falling. If the opponent gets trapped under the opponent they will be smashed. The user can controll where the blocks shall land.
    ~Note: While the user sends Doton chakra into the sky the user can't use any other jutsus.
    ~Note 2: The user can stop the jutsu at a second if wanted.
    ~Note 3: Can only be used once per battle and lasts as long as the user wants.
    ~Note 4: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ I'm warning you, if you re-submit such ridiculous jutsu I'm banning you for two week from this thread.

    (Doton: Rimen Maunten)-Earth Style: Reverse Mountain
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    The user will create two huge mountains that will emerge from two sides of his body and will be pushed out from the user untill it gets stopped. The mountains can withstand almost everything and can stop other mountains from moving.
    ~Note: Can only be used once per battle
    ~Note 2: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined~ Unrealistic and OP. Shooting two mountains? Really ~__~?
    (Doton: Rimen Mounten)-Earth style: Reverse mountain
    Rank: S
    Type: Deffence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    The user will create two mountains that raises from the earth at both sides of the user. The mountains can't move, but can only defend against incomming attacks from both sides and push away objectes.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note 2: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

    Declined. How is this any different from what Izuna delcined?



    Summoning Animal: Rhino
    Scroll Owner: ~The Norwegian~
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: King Rhino
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Not at the time

    ~Approved~

    (Genjutsu: Hangyaku)-Illusionary Techniques: Treason
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    The user will release chakra into the brain of a clone that the opponent have made. The user disrupt all the senses inside the clone and take controll of it with no use of any handseals or any sign that will reveal what he's doing. He can then use the clone for himself. This technique will not work on a normal human, only his clone.
    ~Note: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

    Declined. Seriously? you are taking Shisui's MS technique and turning it into a B-ranked genjutsu. Do not resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by ~The Norwegian~; 10-31-2011 at 03:22 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Resubmitting


    BRONTE

    Range: Mid
    Description: The Hammer is of unknown origins. The wielder of the Hammer feels as if the hammer weighs 10g to others it feels as if it weighs 3tonnes. Another thing to be noted the Hammer is made from an unknown metal and has been proven so far to be indestructible this created rumors that it was created in a dying star and it's power and energy was infused into the metal.
    Being struck by it is the equivalent to a punch of this weight. It can be thrown by the user and called back thanks to a seal on the hammer and the user. It has the ability to cast lightning from it that is similar to a chidori spear that reaches mid range and does not require handseals. The user can also direct the spear at the ground and cause the earth all around to mid range to crack protrude out the ground.
    If the user strikes the earth it will cause an earthquake that goes to Mid range causing nearby enemies to simply fall over and negates their current jutsu.
    If spun in the air it will also cause a hurricane that can go to mid range and throw opponents to long range and disperse any shadow clones.

    Restrictions:
    • Can only cast Hurricane once per battle
    • Can cause 3 Earthquakes
    • To us the chidori spear like ability from the hammer it charges and glows blue making it noticeable that its about to be fired. Although to charge it only takes 2-3s
    • Can only be wielded by Thor


    Elder Connor (Shōkan: Erudākonā)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: Connor is thee oldest Orangutan and is an expert in Lightning Jutsu and can use all up to A rank. He cannot perform any Taijutsu as he is too old but is the same size as Gamabunta but much slower. Another advantage of having Connor on the field is he acts as a catalyst for Raiton chakra and if the user is within short range adds to the lightning damage by +15. He also increases the speed for all Lightning jutsu as the Raiton chakra is gathered faster the user requires less handseals. Like all Orangutan he can harden his hairs as a defense but due to repeatedly doing this and his age his hairs are constantly spiked and act as a constant defense.
    Restrictions
    • Can only be summoned once per battle
    • Will stay on the field for 3 turns
    • Can only be summoned if the Orangutan contract has been signed.


    Resubmitting - edited.

    Both Declined. Lack of propper template, and skilltype ( its Kuchiyose BTW)
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Nagato.. View Post
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    (Meiton: Fōsu o isogu) - Dark Release: Rushing Force
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will focus his dark release chakra into his blade and swing it in an arc at an angle towards the ground infront of him causing dark release to hit the ground sending a wave of dark release energy and earth to rise and rush along the ground towards the opponent within seconds. This technique can be done without a sword, but you would need to perform 5 handseals in order to use it and send the dark release from your hand towards the ground.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: This technique is 7 meters wide.
    Note: No Dark Release techniques for the following turn.
    Note: Must Be Kage ranked.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato..

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Enough with the swords shooting elemental blasts.
    I remember we discussed this over PMs that removing any affiliation makes it a new submission..


    (Meiton: Fōsu o isogu) - Dark Release: Rushing Force
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will need to perform 5 handseals & focus his dark release chakra into his hand(s) waving either hand towards the ground at an arc or angle towards the ground sending the dark release energy infront of him causing dark release to hit the ground sending a wave of dark release energy and earth to rise and rush along the ground towards the opponent within seconds.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: This technique is 7 meters wide and 4 meters in height.
    Note: No Dark Release techniques for the following turn.
    Note: Must Be of at least Kage ranked.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato..



    ~Declined~ I'm not quite sure I picture how shooting something toward the ground would end up going toward the opponent and up to long-range at that.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-27-2011 at 04:34 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Customs for the week of 10/24/2011-10/30/2011

    1. (Riptide) ɸ Anaklusmos
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplmentary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The legendary weapon used by Heracles himself, Anaklusmos, otherwise known as Riptide, is Percy's greatest weapon. Riptide is an indestructible katana molded in the depths of Atlantis by Poseidon himself, stolen by Heracles and later recovered and granted to Percy Jackson. As a reword for saving the earth from the Titan Lord Kronos, Poseidon recrafted the sword once more, this time allowing it to take a new form. Riptide draws its power from the ocean, which is why it works well for Percy. In its dormant form, it is a disposable ballpoint pen that reads "Anaklusmos" on the side when not in use. Once the pen is uncapped or clicked, it transforms into one of it's two forms: Sword Form or Trident Form. Its sword form blade is about 2 feet and a couple of inches,the hilt only 4-6 inches. It's second form takes on the form of Percy's fathers Trident, with the staff's length being 4 feet and the two end prongs being 1 foot long themselves with the middle prong being slightly longer. In sword form, Riptide increases the user's water jutsus by +10 damage points if channeled through the sword. It is almost impossible to lose as it is enchanted to appear in Percy's pocket if it is somehow lost. In trident form, the user gets the same boost as mentioned before and the user is able to cause an A-rank Earthquake as well as A-rank tsunami when the earth or water is struck with the trident. If the trident some how becomes lost, it is enchanted to appear on the user's back. Riptide is very territorial and will only obey Percy. If grasped by someone other than him, Riptide will revert to it's pen form and a turn later, return to Percy's pocket, regardless of it's previous location on the field.
    *Takes an entire turn to reappear if lost somehow*
    *Trident's earthquake/tsunami effect lasts only one turn and can only be used thrice a battle. Counts as one of the user's three jutsus per turn*
    *Cannot use both forms in one turn (i.e cannot use a jutsu with the sword than use the trident's effects/jutsus and vise-versa)*
    *In trident form, if the earthquake/tsunami effect is used, the user can only use 4 water jutsus through the trident before it reverts to pen form. Takes a turn wait before it can be used again*
    *Can only be used by Lord of Kaos*

    Sword form (minus the sheath):


    Percy holding the Trident:


    ~Declined~ I know you want to make it similar to the movie, but take out the part about it magically appearing in your pocket or on your back. Secondly, make it +5 to water. Lastly, restrict the abilities more clearly. What's with the 4 water jutsu thingy before it reverts back to a pen? I thought you could only use those abilities 3 times. If not, then make it 3 times overall (earthquake and tsunami combined (and elaborate on the size of the wave you're summoning, a tsunami sounds like overkill)).

    Also this jutsu was put on hold a while back, I'm just checking up on this jutsu so it technically shouldn't count as a submission.


    Quote Originally Posted by Lord of Kaos View Post
    I hold the Liger contract, which are the cross-breed of Male lions and a tigress. The leopon contract was recently approved which is the hybrid corss of male leopard and a lioness. Seeing as to how both of those contracts are approved and are legitimate animals, I wish to submit the inverse of the Liger contract, Tigons (or Tiglons). Tigons are the hybrid cross between male tigers and lionesses.


    4.Summoning Animal: Tigons
    Scroll Owner: Lord of Kaos
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A at the moment
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    Pictures:




    Wiki-link: Tigons



    Thats a bit of stretch for me. I'll get back to ya. Pending
    ~Declined~ Let's not play with words here, the Liger was accepted, it covers for both Tiglon and Liger.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Oasis Nara View Post
    Resubmitting, Adding and Remove according to your Guidance (the bolded part)


    (Doton : Terakotta-gun) – Earth Style : Terracotta army
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user summon 100 legendary Chinese army made of rock, the Terracotta army which their body as solid as the hardening tech can be use to protect the user for incoming attack, they will move charge with rumbling sound, then attack the opponent with strong fist and kick from different angle and direction.

    Restriction :

    -Able to defense from S-Rank Earth, Wind and A-Rank fire attack (when they are gather as a human shield in front of the user)
    - Able to defense 1 F rank water jutsu as they are earth based affinity which strong against (when they are gather as a human shield in front of the user)
    -Only usable once in every battle
    -No Doton jutsu for the next 2 turn
    -Can only be use and taught by Oasis Nara


    Picture of Terracotta Army

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ There's no hope for this one.


    (Jiton: Satetsu o ikiru) - Magnetism Release: Living Iron Sand
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80(-10 to the user)
    Description: The 3rd Kazekage puppet gather his massive iron sand into the sky then pour them down across the battle field like rain of iron sand spike which will impale the enemy, then iron sand will cover the entire battle field excluding sasori’s ground, and the iron sand itself which spread on the ground will turn into a living swamp of iron sand so will suck down and sink who/whatever above it surface.

    Restriction :
    *Can only be used twice per battle.
    *No Iron sand tech for the next 2 turns
    * Can only be used by Oasis Nara
    *Can only be used by Sasori bio (3rd Kazekage puppet)

    ~Declined~ What's with all those OP technique? Don't add restriction this time, take out abilities off this jutsu.

    (San-sō Chūgoku no idaina kabe) Three Layer Chinese Great Wall
    Type: Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: N/A (-20 to the user)
    Description: The user must do blood sacrifice then perform 10 serial hand seal, slam his both hands into the ground to summon the Chinese great wall in front of the user in form of three layer with different usage, the wall capable of blocking almost any attack up to Forbidden Rank according to the layer of the wall.

    Layers ability:
    ~First Layer, takes the direct attack
    ~2nd Layer, mitigate the attack power
    ~3rd Layer, completely dispel the attack

    Restriction :

    *Can only be used once per battle.
    *Causing extremely exhausted to the user and will not be able to use any jutsu for the next 1 turn
    *The wall stays for 2 turns then crumble apart by itself
    *Can’t be perform by a clone
    *No Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
    *Only A-Rank jutsu after the next 1 turn and for 2 turn
    *The user takes damage -20
    *Strong S-Rank Lightning can pierces the wall
    * Can only be used by Oasis Nara

    ~Approved~

    Resubmitting

    (Jiton: Satetsu o ikiru) - Magnetism Release: Living Iron Sand
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The 3rd Kazekage puppet gather his massive iron sand into the sky then pour them down across the battle field like rain of iron sand spike which will impale the enemy, then iron sand will cover the entire battle field excluding sasori’s ground.

    Note : Take out the ability as you suggested

    ~Approved~

    New Submission.

    (Kage-me haiteku) - shadow eye tech
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After performing the rat hand seal, the user able to manipulate any shadow within his sight such as the opponent own shadow, trees, rocks, any solid object which has shadow then the user have the free usage using that shadow by extend the shadow towards the opponent and forming it like a rope of shadow to tie up and bind the opponent until they can’t move.

    ~Declined do not resubmit~

    Human Puppet bio submission

    Double G [Goku and Gogeta)
    Rank: S-Rank Puppet
    Name: Goku and Gogeta
    Link to bio: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=108740
    Link to the fight: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=110475

    Description: This puppet able to use 5 basic element, Rain release and normal Taijusu, Goku and Gogeta puppet is kept in a scroll that's stuck on Sasori's back, and he can be summoned by Sasori as Sasori wants to.
    ~Note: Can only be wielded by Sasori, and Sasori has to be owned by Oasis Nara

    ~Declined~ 5 elements plus a KG? No.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Loki. View Post
    Tablet of Life and Time is a continuation of one of 6 jutsus from this page of jutsu that I made. So if the Vault of Odin was approved, then the Tablet of Life and Time can be checked as well.....if not, then you dont have to bother checking it.....just in case the same mods didnt check both techniques.
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    Tablet of Life & Time
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user summons a tablet after making 5 handseals and immediately injects themselves with a serum while reading from a table that appears in their minds eye (opponent cannot see it), healing all injuries by rapidly reproducing the cells, not unlike the technique of Tsunade. This jutsu however, does not last as long as hers, and is only a quick fix, granting the user 3 turns of renewed life before death occurs. This is only to be used as a last resort, and when the opponent has left them for dead.
    Note: this technique cannot be used unless you have Mednin training.
    Note: Can only be used once by the user and lasts for 3 turns (not including the turn it was used in)


    ~Declined~ Vault of Odin wasn't approved.

    Itazuna Toraidento -God of Mischief’s Vibroblade Trident -
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the blade made with the properties of a kunai such that it may have chakra channeled into it without destroying it. This trident is one of a kind vibroblade in the shape of a 7 foot tall trident. It originally belonged to the God of Mischief, and fell into the possession of Loki the Mandalorian mysteriously. He believes that he was given this because they shared the same name, and because of this, it has never left his side and will only respond to him. The blade uses ultrasonic vibrations to increase its cutting effectiveness. If stabbed into the ground, the user’s chakra take form and can spread through the ground by way of the vibrations. When up against a normal weapon (dagger, sword) if the blade of the trident stays connected with the blade for too long then weapon will break. If up against another vibroblade, both blades will break.
    Note: Can only be handled by Loki Laufeyson.
    Note: Can be infused with any chakra of a lightning or Wind like affinity (Black Lightning, White Lightning, Divine Wind, Solar Wind, etc) to give it the desired speed and or power boost of said element.
    Note: Channeling chakra into the ground does not count as a move in the user’s turn.

    ~Declined~ Nice one, but it needs some work. Elaborate on it's ability to spread chakra into the ground with the trident, what does it do other then spreading chakra? Can you break the ground through resonance frequency? Make it so you can only infuse the basic 5 elements. Lastly, define "if the blades stay connected for too long", what is too long?

    Green Secret Technique: Geppeto Puppetry Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: ALL
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A large shadow of the Puppet Master Geppeto appears looming behind the user. Only the opponent can see Geppeto, which causes them to think they are in a Genjutsu. Geppeto is attached to the user by chakra strings that protrude from the user's back. Geppeto forms an infinite amout of chakra strings from his hands and latches onto every body part of all the puppets on the entire battlefield. Through Geppeto, the user can control or move every puppet or part of a puppet throughout the battlefield with a mere thought. Geppeto will move the body of the puppets for the user. If the user wants to use any chakra strings for any reason, they will come from Geppeto.
    Note: User cannot move of his own accord.
    Note: Geppeto moving 1 or more puppets in a turn counts as 1/3 moves in that turn.
    Note: This technique can only be used one time per battle.
    Note: This technique lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: Can only be used by Puppet User's
    Note: Can only be taught by Loki

    ~Declined~ OP, I'll leave you figure out why, I think it's pretty obvious. Also, why would the opponent think he's in a genjutsu? How does he know the user can't see it?
    -Geppeto Tech....Yea it was. I admit it. lol. I figured I could make it like the Third Hokages Technique, where they couldnt see it at all at first but then when they did they thought they were seeing things. Sortive like Zoro's Asura Technique where he gains three heads and 6 arms. He doesnt know he does, but his opponent does. lol. Also, so it would free up my hands for an idea I had. I figured I would see if it would get approved first before submitting all of them and then someone take my idea. lol.

    -Vault of Odin Techs - You know you liked them . lol. And yeah they are a wee bit OP. I think I probably would have liked to have had the Gauntlets over anything though. Capable of Following through Time/Space Jutsu, causing a quicker reaction speed and time? Increasing the rank of one of your techs by one rank up to S Rank. Its OP but it was a Sick idea based off of Asgardians.

    I did like all your Thor related techniques as I'm a fan, but you must understand that everything connected to that universe is OP beyond anything the Narutoverse can handle. Hell, he's one of the strongest superhero ever.

    -Vibroblade - Glad you like it. I have to stick to basic 5? ok *snaps fingers*

    Resubmitting.

    Itazuna Toraidento -God of Mischief’s Vibroblade Trident -
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the blade made with the properties of a kunai such that it may have chakra channeled into it without destroying it. This trident is a one of a kind vibroblade in the shape of a 7 foot tall trident. It originally belonged to the God of Mischief, and fell into the possession of Loki the Mandalorian mysteriously. He believes that he was given this because they shared the same name, and because of this, it has never left his side and will only respond to him. The blade uses ultrasonic vibrations to increase its cutting effectiveness. If stabbed into the ground, the user’s chakra take form and can spread through the ground by way of the vibrations. When up against a normal weapon (dagger, sword) if the blade of the trident stays connected with the blade for more than a second, then weapon will break. If up against another vibroblade, both blades will break.
    Note: Can be infused with any basic 5 chakra. (one chakra per turn)
    Note: Channeling chakra into the ground does not count as a move in the user’s turn. When it does, each Element has the resonating frequency from it causes these effects when slammed into the ground blade first.
    *Fire - Causes the ground under the user's Range to turn into a thin layer of Lava. (Anywhere from 1-5 feet in thickness)
    *Wind - Causes dust to flowfrom around the user in a circlular area. The dust will stay at a low level and travel with great speed out towards mid range with the cutting power of a wind blade. (Picture Whitebeard slamming his Halberg on the ground and the effect it causes)
    *Water - Causes the earth to become mud at the user's range.
    *Earth - Causes a violent, concentrated B Ranked Earthquake that goes out to Mid Range.
    *Lightning - Has the Same Effect as Nagashi at the user's Range.
    -Trident will remain in the ground for one full turn before it can be taken out and used again, Giving it a Once every other turn usage limit.
    Note: Can only be handled by Loki Laufeyson.

    Where are the changes O__O?

    ~Declined~ When re-submitting customs, you need to put the added part in bold or explain what you took out from the original.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (yuri kyou koshou) lilly and pepper
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: after swiping blood on the summoning tattoo the user summons lily (girl) and pepper (boy) they are twin Leoliguar they are slightly larger then gamakichi in naruto they are great at climbing both can use wind jutsu up to A rank and they have a special ability that as long as one is in contact with the summoner the summoner can preform the handseals for either ones jutsu lilly and pepper can be summoned up to mid range from the summoner
    -can only be summoned once per match
    -they can stay on the field for up to four turns
    -must have signed Leoliguar contract and have the tattoo
    -this is the tattoo


    ~Declined~ Check the bold part, I really don't understand what you meant.

    (fuuton: fantomu ken) wind release: phantom blades
    Rank: S
    Type: Offence
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the user swings a fan and creates several shards of fuuton which are invisble at first and cant be seen until they get to mid range and they have time to fully form and gather more wind
    -can only be used three times per match
    -no wind for the next two turns
    -can be done without fans requires three handseals and you blow the wind out your mouth
    -can only be taught by Heavens Blade

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (though the fan wasn't used in the jutsu I had in mind, still the effect is the same).

    (Kōton: Kōsame renda) steel release: steel shark barrage
    Rank: S
    Type: Offence
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the user does two handseals then places there hand on the ground and makes five sharks out of steel which travel underground two will come to distract the opponent while a third comes from under the opponent and drag them under the earth where the 5 sharks rip him apart same speed as water shark bomb
    -this jutsu can only be used three time per match
    -shark travels 2 times faster if steel field is in play
    -can only be used by steel bios
    -can only be taught by Heavens Blade

    ~Declined~ How would steel sharks travel through ground? Granted it's in the Narutoverse, but let's keep it somewhat realistic.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Resubmit

    Quote Originally Posted by wastedmonkey View Post

    (raitoningurirīsu: Sutatikkunoizu) lightning release: Static noise
    type: Attack/defense
    rank: B
    range: Short-long
    chakra cost: 25
    damage points: 40 (+ 10 on hearing enhanced individuals and in caves, wooded areas…etc)
    description: The user utilizing the lightning chakra’s crackling sound, sends his/her lightning chakra throughout the field. The result is a loud static noise (i. E. Radio static, & tv static noise) that hurts the ears of the opponent(s). This noise can cancel sound jutsu of the same rank and below. This technique also is more effective on hearing enhanced individuals of any kind and in caves, wooded areas…etc.

    Note: Only usable 3 times per battle
    note: Static noise last for 2 turns
    note: Can only be taught by wastedmonkey and black uchiha
    *co-creator black uchiha

    ~declined~ i like the idea, but since you're the closest to the sound, wouldn't you suffer the most from this technique?


    (raitoningurirīsu: Sutatikkunoizu) lightning release: Static noise
    type: Attack/defense
    rank: B
    range: Short-long
    chakra cost: 25
    damage points: 40 (+ 10 on hearing enhanced individuals and in caves, wooded areas…etc)
    description: The user utilizing the lightning chakra’s crackling sound, sends his/her lightning chakra throughout the field. The result is a loud static noise (i. E. Radio static, & tv static noise) that hurts the ears of the opponent(s). The user, being the one sending out the raiton chakra wont be affected by the jutsu. This noise can cancel sound jutsu of the same rank and below. This technique also is more effective on hearing enhanced individuals of any kind and in caves, wooded areas…etc.

    Note: Only usable 3 times per battle
    note: Static noise last for 2 turns
    note: Can only be taught by wastedmonkey and black uchiha
    *co-creator black uchiha

    *just like when charging up chidori, the user wont get harmed because he is using his raiton chakra to charge it*

    ~Declined~ You don't seem to understand my point. Sound is causing damage, not lightning. Since you're not a sound ninja, you can't control it not to harm you, so it would still be extremely harmful to you.


    NEW SUBMISSION

    (Raiton: Raikou Yuki) - Lightning Release: Lightning Revenant

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40(+5 for every turn active)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Risen from the souls of the fallen and forgotten, the revenant courses through battle a fiery remembrance of the ill fate that the damned of war are destined to fulfill. The user will make 8 hands seals and release huge amounts of raiton chakra into the field. The raiton chakra will take a form of a ninja that is made out of lightning but twice as big as the user.

    Note: Revenant last on the field until destroyed
    Note: Revenant can only use raiton jutsu up to A-rank
    Note: Jutsu used by the Revenant count as a move
    Note: Revenant is unaffected by raiton jutsu
    Note: If Revenant gets hit by S-rank jutsu or A-rank wind it will be destroyed
    Note: User cant use raiton jutsu when revenant is on the field
    Note: User can only use up to A-rank raiton jutsu for two turns after Revenant is destroyed
    Note: Only usable once per battle.
    Note: Can only be used/taught by WastedMonkey



    New Weapon Ability

    Quote Originally Posted by wastedmonkey View Post
    Kanshō and Bakuya
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kanshō and Bakuya was forged using chakra making it harder and denser than normal swords. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. When the opponent tries to touch or wield the sword it will release red electrical current that will shock the opponent making them drop the sword. The main ability of the swords is their strong bond with each other, which not only allows them to attract each other, but it is also said they will return to their owner even if events cause them to be lost. If one is thrown while the other is held, the thrown sword will return to the wielder much like a boomerang.

    Note: If not wielded in the beginning of the match the sword must be summoned by the user unless stated.
    Note: Summoning the swords count as a jutsu.
    Note: Cannot be used with any other Custom Weapon.
    Note: Can only be wielded by WastedMonkey




    when swords is infused with chakra




    ~Approved~ Added a note.




    (Kanshō and Bakuya - Raiton: Dendo Shio) - Kanshō and Bakuya - Lightning Release: Electric Tide
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user first pierce the ground/wall with one sword. Then the users charges huge amounts of raiton chakra into the other sword. The swords, having a strong bond with each other, will channel the raiton chakra. The sword that is not with the user will then release an electrical tide of lightning around it (in a horizontal manner up going outwards up to mid range from the sword).

    Note: Usable only twice
    Note: No Raiton Jutsu for a turn after use
    Note: If user gets hit by the tide, user will take half the damage
    Note: Only usable if user wields Kanshō and Bakuya
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    looks something like this




    ~Declined~ Both technique already exist (the first one was made in another element).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Omori No Kei Go | The Weight of Strong Words
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Med
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    A special ninjutsu of the highest caliber that can only be done by those who have excelled in ninjutsu. The user takes out a scroll which he previously prepared by writing a text in Jõko Nihongo (Ancient Japanese) with Hiragana and Katakana scripts instead of Kanji. As he takes the scroll out and unfolds it in front of him in a semi crescent gesture, he claps his hands focusing chakra. He then performs 3 hand seals (Horse+Hare+Boar) and touches the scroll. His chakra takes the form of the Hiragana and Katakana caracters, glowing as light blue chakra constructs. These rapidly converge like snakes to the enemy, binding him like chakra chains, stopping him from moving. This jutsu has a more powerful yet more limited performing method: the user will take a smaller scroll (only slightly larger than his hand) with the same caracters and slam it with his palm on the enemy. The moment there is contact, the rows of Katakana and Hiragana caracters spread across the enemy's body as chains, resctriting his movement. Although highly faster and having no need for hand seals, this alternative method has the same binding strength as the normal method. This jutsu can be done to restrict anything solid, with equal strength regardless of size or mass.

    Note1: Can only use jutsu up to S-rank next turn
    Note2: Usable only twice
    Note3: Because of the dense chakra in them, the chakra bindings are as strong as elemental jutsu of the same rank
    Note4: User can't use other regular ninjutsu in the same turn
    Note5: The binding doesn't require user to maintain contact and lasts until broken or released
    Note7: Can only be taught by Scorps


    This is an old submission which i only maintained the name and revamped the whole thing (although Zen said to no resubmit, this is very very different from the previous technique so i'm submitting it as a completely new one but i'll still provide the quote to the previous one)

    ~Declined~ OP. From what I read, it seems like it'd take an immense amount of strength to break it (considered it's chakra based and not a simple scroll), or a Forbidden ranked technique considering it's as strong as S-rank elemental technique. Either re-word it if I misread something or lower the abilities. Also, you'll notice I made it Short-Mid range, keep it that way.
    Resubmitting: I worded it wrong, sorry. The scroll serves as a vessel to shape the chakra from the user in chain-like bindings shaped as the kanjis. When i said it was as strong as s-rank elemental jutsu i meant that it could only be broke by S-Rank or above elemental jutsu, unlike my other chakra based jutsu that are weaker than same rank elemental jutsu, but i reword it. I was just trying to avoid saying how it could be broken or released ^^

    Ninpou: Omori No Kei Go | Ninjutsu: The Weight of Strong Words
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    A special ninjutsu of the highest caliber that can only be done by those who have excelled in ninjutsu. The user takes out a scroll which he previously prepared by writing a text in Jõko Nihongo (Ancient Japanese) with Hiragana and Katakana scripts instead of Kanji. As he takes the scroll out and unfolds it in air in front of him in a semi crescent gesture, he claps his hands focusing chakra, performing 3 hand seals (Horse+Hare+Boar) and touching the scroll. The Hiragana and Katakana caracters, glow in a light blue color and rapidly converge from the scroll, like snakes, raging towards the target. As they reach the target, they wrap around it like chains and bind its movement completely. This jutsu has a more powerful yet more limited performing method: the user will take a smaller scroll (only slightly larger than his hand) with the same caracters and slam it with his palm on the enemy. The moment there is contact, the rows of Katakana and Hiragana caracters spread across the enemy's body as chains, resctriting his movement. Although faster and having no need for hand seals, this alternative method has the same binding strength as the normal method. This jutsu can be done to restrict anything solid, with equal strength regardless of size or mass.

    Note1: Can only use jutsu up to S-rank in the same turn
    Note2: Usable only twice
    Note3: Because of the advanced shape manipulation required, this jutsu can only be broken by equal rank elemental or regular ninjutsu or taijutsu
    Note4: User can't use other regular ninjutsu in the same turn
    Note5: The binding doesn't require user to maintain contact and lasts until broken or released
    Note7: Can only be taught by Scorps

    ~Approved~

    New ones:

    Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Bukotsu Zou No Sochi | Lazy Fist: The Clumsy Stomp of The Elephant
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    One of the most dangerous moves in Lazy Fist but also one of the simplest. The user focus a big amount of chakra on his palms or foot and does either a strong double open palm trust or a full strong single foot stomp into the opponents upper torax sending him flying backwards. This disturbs the enemy's chakra flow and produces a deep, strong S-Rank illusion. This painful illusion makes the enemy feel as if his lungs and chest were completely crushed in the impact, making him unable to inhale or exhale. This produces a hipoxia-like effect, making the enemy start to feel lightheaded and dizzy, leading to complete loss of conscience. If the enemy looks or tries to feel his torax/chest he'll see/feel as if it was in deed completely crushed, making it hard to decipher/see through the illusion.

    Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
    Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note3: Impact stance can be used without limit but, if connected, illusion only works once
    Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery

    ~Declined~ While being able to make the opponent feel the pain of asphyxiation, it does not really affect him. I know we could get into a heated debate on the "mind over body" topic (believing so hard you're unable to breath, that you actually do stop to breath), but I will not accept Genjutsus that make you feel a certain emotion, and actually make it happen. It's a line I'm not ready to cross. I remember accepting jutsus that were somewhat close to that, but they were kept within certain boundaries.

    Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Tonsou No Ranningu Panda | Lazy Fist: The Escape of the Running Panda
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Perhaps the strongest of all of the Lazy Fist stances, this technique is a more advanced form of The Dance of The Drunken Haze, using the same Chu Gar (Southern Praying Manthis) stance with the same basic abilities but used to a much higher caliber. Using this technique, the Lazy Fist Master is able to defend any taijutsu or kenjutsu attack (be it elemental fueled or not, since the chakra coating protects his hands and forearms and up to A-rank), as well as up to C-rank small elemental projectiles like with the mentioned technique. However, upon simple contact with the enemy, the user induces an S-Rank Genjutsu by disturbing the targets chakra flow. This Genjutsu affects all of the enemy's senses, making him see the user disappear into a burst of bamboo leafs and hear him run away from the enemy. The enemy will even see and hear small signs of movement in the ground around him, further fueling the illusion that the user has ran with a full burst of speed away from him. This technique serves as the ultimate defense/escape for Lazy Fist Masters.

    ~Declined~ OP. I cannot accept a technique that allows you to defend against all taijutsu and kenjutsu techniques. Some of them are terrifyingly powerful.

    Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
    Note2: The illusion effect only connects twice
    Note3: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Crow~ View Post
    [Raiton/Suiton: Saishuu Sabaki] - Lightning/Water Release: Final Judgment
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100 [-40 to Black and Aquarius each]
    Description: This is a collaboration technique between "Black" the boss of crows and his wife "Aquarius of the skies" the queen of crows, generated by Black's strong affinity towards the lightning element and Aquarius's strong affinity towards the water element, by using both most of their chakra when they are summoned together side by side on the battlefield and on the user's command, Aquarius using her ability to utilize the water element without having to use a water source to blow a giant wave of water from her mouth, upon reaching the opponent the beam of water expands rapidly covering most of the area targeted with water [Meaning if it's used on a Mid ranged opponent it covers all over Mid range], while at the same time that Aquarius does this, Black utilizing his strong affinity towards the lightning element, being the most powerful giant crow that was ever born, he shoots a rapid stream of lightning energy along with the water that Aquarius is making at the shape of a crow made out of lightning energy that's so powerful that when mixing with the water wave it forces the water to take the same shape of the lightning stream, the aftermath of this technique is a Lightning/Water Crow that's on the same size as either of Aquarius or Black, towards the direction of the enemy.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~This can only be used by Aquarius and Black together not seperately.
    ~The major requirement of this technique is that Aquarius and Black to be already summoned on the battlefield with separated summoning jutsus.
    ~Because this technique requires a massive amount of chakra, both Black and Aquarius are unable to continue the battle due to the enormous chakra strain on their bodies, and vanish from the battlefield immediately.
    ~The user can't summon any Crow for 5 turns after the usage of this technique.

    ~Declined~ OP and you completely ignored the fact that it was forbidden. Where are the physical drawbacks from such a technique? Either make it so you need to give some of your chakra to your summon to do that jutsu (hence there'd be a reason to have drawbacks), or make it so summoning both these on the field leave you completely exhausted (then elaborate on the drawbacks). Also, take out the bold parts. On a more picky side, you say that your female crow shoots out a wave, then it becomes a beam that expand on impact...what is it exactly?
    [Raiton/Suiton: Saishuu Sabaki] - Lightning/Water Release: Final Judgment
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100 [-40 to Black and Aquarius each]
    Description: This is a collaboration technique between "Black" the boss of crows and his wife "Aquarius of the skies" the queen of crows, generated by Black's strong affinity towards the lightning element and Aquarius's strong affinity towards the water element and a large amount of chakra released into Black and Aquarius giving them the necessary chakra to utilize this technique, and also by using both most of their chakra when they are summoned together side by side on the battlefield and on the user's command, Aquarius using her ability to utilize the water element without having to use a water source to blow a giant wave of water from her mouth that's equivalent in size to the water shockwave technique but shot directly at the opponent in the shape of a beam of water, while at the same time that Aquarius does this, Black utilizing his strong affinity towards the lightning element, being the most powerful giant crow that was ever born, he shoots a rapid stream of lightning energy along with the water that Aquarius is making at the shape of a crow made out of lightning energy that's so powerful that when mixing with the water wave it forces the water to take the same shape of the lightning stream, the aftermath of this technique is a Lightning/Water Crow that's on the same size as either of Aquarius or Black, towards the direction of the enemy, as both Black and Aquarius suffer a large amount of damage from this technique making them vanish from the battlefield leaving the user extremely exhausted afterwards.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~This can only be used by Aquarius and Black together not seperately.
    ~The major requirement of this technique is that Aquarius and Black to be already summoned on the battlefield with separated summoning jutsus.
    ~Because this technique requires a massive amount of chakra, both Black and Aquarius are unable to continue the battle due to the enormous chakra strain on their bodies, and vanish from the battlefield immediately.
    ~ No Lightning or Water jutsu higher then A-rank for the following turn, and S-rank the turn after.
    ~The user's body becomes extremely slower than normal after the usage of this technique as the slightest movements affect him greatly and his body becomes extremely weak for 2 turns after the turn this technique is used the, however he's able to perform the handseals as normal.

    ~Approved~ Added a restriction.

    (Arumiton: Arumi Modo) - Aluminum Release: Aluminum Mode
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A [+15 to Aluminum techniques, +10 to Fire and Earth techniques]
    Description: The user gathers a huge amount of chakra into the center of his body and flowing his aluminum chakra into every cell of his body to activate this technique upon releasing all of his aluminum chakra at once, for this technique a set of changes into the users body occures, the user's skin turns into aluminum metal of dull gray color allowing the user to gain extra damage while using the aluminum techniques or elemental techniques that create the aluminum i.e. Earth and Fire elements, but unlike the iron skin technique the user isn't immune to attacks as it's sacrificed for faster usage of aluminum techniques as well as fire and earth elements, the user continuously releases his aluminum chakra through his body to maintain his form at hand, but at the same time the user has an advantage of being immune to genjutsu techniques techniques that of B-rank and lower due to the continous release of the aluminum chakra through his whole body and allows the user to know whenever he's under a genjutsu as if the user is attacked with a genjutsu the aluminum skin-like quality that the user gains with the usage of this technique slowly deteriorates with due to the suppression of the opponent's chakra into the user's body thus slowly stopping the continuous chakra flow that's used to maintain this technique, but the continuous release of the aluminum chakra has a major disadvantage that is the user can only use aluminum techniques because if the user changes his aluminum affinity he loses the control over this technique, as well as earth and fire techniques that are used to form the aluminum metal.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~This mode lasts for 4 turns.
    ~Only Aluminum, Earth and Fire elements are to be used within this form however this doesn't include non elemental ninjutsu and taijutsu.
    ~No genjutsu can be utilized while in this form.
    ~No Aluminum techniques at all for 3 turns after this mode is deactivated.

    ~Declined~ Restrictions are a bit off. When leaving a mode, you're supposed to feel the drawback from it's usage. Also, why wouldn't you be able to use Aluminum for 3 turns but still be able to use fire and earth? Make it +5 and +5 or +10 for aluminum and +0 for the others.

    [Katon: Kaen Karasu] - Fire Release: The Blazing Crow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100 [-40 to the user]
    Description: This is an advanced fire technique that's taught to the user by Blaze the legendary crow of fire and the most experienced crow in the fire release, this technique is given to the user after proving skilled enough in the arts of fire release and showing a sufficient amount of respect towards the crows, After the user forms a set of handseals (Ram ? Monkey ? Horse ? Bird ? Tiger) The user gathers a large amount of fire chakra into his lungs as well as inhale a large amount of air and mixes both air and fire chakra to create fire which is shot out of his mouth in the shape of a huge fire stream the same size as the "oil flame bullet technique", immediately the user using his shape manipulation to turn turn the fire stream as it's shot out of his mouth into the shape of a soaring crow of fire that's the same size as Gamabunta scorching the ground as it heads for the target and making a noise equivalent to 100 crows screaming as it's heading for the opponent, this technique becomes exceptionally powerful if used after a wind technique that's possible to merge with this technique making it a fire/wind combination, the crow of flames absorb the power of the wind as fuel and becomes larger than it already is, but after this technique is used the user's body becomes extremely exhausted due to chakra overuse.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~The user is unable to use fire techniques at all for the next 2 turns.
    ~This technique counts as 2 moves of the 3 moves allowed per turn.
    ~This technique puts a huge strain on the user's body in the following turns due to the chakra overuse the simplest movements puts a huge strain on the user's body and the speed of the user drastically decreases for the next 3 turns.
    ~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

    ~Declined~ As big as Gama? Now that's OP.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Katon : Purotekuto Fenikkusu No Jutsu | Fire Release : Protecting Phoenix
    Type: Forbidden
    Rank: Defensive - Attack
    Range: short(while attacking mid -long)
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: 100 (20 to the user)
    Description: The user gather great amount of his katon chakra,Amount can make a ship of chakra like the titanic ,As he has the chakra he channel the chakra into all his body parts ,Then as the technique that the opponent reach the user the user release all the katon chakra creating huge phoenix around his whole body the phoenix can protect him ,And also in the same time that it protect him it destroy all things on the short range,Also the user can either throw it towards his opponent or simply protect him self with it
    -Can only be used once
    -Can't use any technique at the same turn or the two next
    -Can't use any water jutsu at the same turn
    -must be a sage
    -must master fire and AACT
    -Can't use any customs on the same turn or the next
    -Can only be used/Taught by -Kamishiro-
    -Count as 2 moves
    - It makes the user very weak and very slow after it ,it makes him as half of his life and half of his speed


    Katon /Doton : Arma Demon No Jutsu : Fire Release/Earth Release : Iron Spiral
    Type: S Rank
    Rank: Attack/Defense
    Range: mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user gather great amount of his Katon chakra then he channel it to his mouth ,Then he keep it on his mouth and while that he gather great amount of his Doton chakra then He release the doton chakra making alot of earth spears but just up to 10 ,Then as the spears appear he throw the fire from his mouth and as the both the same rank they will combine with each other making spears of lava but it will become spears of lava as it reach mid/long range
    -can only be used 3 times
    -must master doton
    -must master katon
    -can't use any doton/katon technique at the same turn
    -can't use any katon technique at the next turn higher than B rank
    -can't use any doton technique higher than B rank
    -Can only be used/Taught by -Kamishiro-

    Genjutsu : Unchi Kaibutsu Raiku No Touhou | Genjutsu : Oh Crap , A Monster Likes Me
    Type: Forbidden
    Rank: Attack
    Range: short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: The user gather great amount of his chakra,Then he transfer his chakra into his opponent's minde ,Making him think that he is alone in the joungle and in front of him a terrible monster and as the opponent see the monster ,The monster with his eyes make the user so afraid ,Then as he can't move as he is so scared ,So the monster rush towards him tilll he reach him then he eats him,While he is eating him the opponent feel all the pain making him not able to do anything nor moving ,Allowing the user to attacks him
    -can only be used once
    -can't use any genjutsu on the battle after that
    -count as 2 moves
    -the user will be so tired as it will take all of his concentration and it will cause a headache
    -after it the user will only move with his half speed due to the chakra that he used

    ||All Declined||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ View Post
    Re-Submitting

    (Tekken No Suitaru): Style Of Iron Fist

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 100 (-10 each turn it is active)
    Damage Points: N/A (-20 to the user when activating and -10 each turn it is active)
    Description: The user focuses incredibly high amount of chakra into his legs and arms so that his strength increases on the level that of Godaime Hokage Tsunade Senju. While in this state the user can´t use any Ninjutsu or Genjutsu. The user can use Tekken Techniques tho (will be submitted later if this style is approved). When the user leaves the state of Tekken, the user can´t move, he can only stand on 1 place and he cannot use any jutsus of S-rank and Forbidden rank. When the user is in the state of using Tekken Style, the user´s muscles are under huge pressure and cause him great pain.

    Notes:
    Can only be used once per battle
    Lasts only for 3 turns
    User cannot use ANY Ninjutsu or Genjutsu techniques when he´s using Tekken Style
    After 3 turns, the user can´t move from the place he´s standing because of muscle exhaustion
    No S or Forbidden Rank jutsus by the user for 2 turns after the Tekken Style has ended
    Can only be taught by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~

    ~Pending~ Seems fine, but I need to know if it affects your speed in any way. Re-submit.

    (Zero Kelvin has permission to use this at the same moment as/if it gets approved)



    (Buzzard Kuchoiyse No Jutsu: Ra) Buzzard Summoning Technique: Ra

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 100
    Damage: Depends on used jutsu (-50 to the user from too much chakra being used at once)
    Description: Ra is one of the two Buzzard elders in the Buzzard Realm. Unlike other summonings, Ra is the the strongest Buzzard known thus far. His sheer size and golden armor makes him look godly to those who don't know him. Ra's size is half that of Gamabunta but his wing span stretches past gamabunta's width meaning he could crush almost anything under him. He is actually worshipped as a deity to the low ranking Buzzards. Ra is capable of using "Killing Intent" to the degree of S-Rank where he shows his domination and killing intent over what he considers inferior beings causing them to be paralyzed with fear. Ra's best know ability is being able to use all lightning based techniques and the ones that require hand seals can be done by the summoner. The best part is that due to his sheer size it will seem like techniques reach a range longer. An example is that if he used Gian it would reach up to Long-Range (in other words if used jutsu is only up to Mid-Range, it would reach to Long-Range). The armor like feathers Ra has is sturdy enough to be unaffected by techniques of B-rank and below.


    Notes:
    Can be forced to be summoned back to it´s land if hit by 180 damage points
    Can only be used/taught by Migualon J.J.
    Must have signed the Buzzard summoning contract
    All his techniques are considered as 1 of the 3 techniqes per turn
    The user cannot use S-rank or higher techniques while Ra is on the field, but Ra can use S-rank Lightning Jutsus
    He stays on the field for 3 turns


    ~Declined~ No Forbidden summoning will be accepted. Using killing intend? No, enough problems were caused from members using that technique I won't allow summon to use it too. Summons can only use up to S-rank so fix that part. Extending range is OP. Take out the 180 damage part. If I hit it with amaterasu you can be it'll die.
    Re-submiting (again )

    (Tekken No Suitaru): Style Of Iron Fist

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 100 (-10 each turn it is active)
    Damage Points: N/A (-20 to the user when activating and -10 each turn it is active)
    Description: The user focuses incredibly high amount of chakra into his legs and arms so that his strength increases on the level that of Godaime Hokage Tsunade Senju. While in this state the user can´t use any Ninjutsu or Genjutsu. The user can use Tekken Techniques tho (will be submitted later if this style is approved). When the user leaves the state of Tekken, the user can´t move, he can only stand on 1 place and he cannot use any jutsus of S-rank and Forbidden rank. When the user is in the state of using Tekken Style, the user´s muscles are under huge pressure and cause him great pain. It doesn´t change users speed.

    Notes:
    Can only be used once per battle
    Lasts only for 3 turns
    User cannot use ANY Ninjutsu or Genjutsu techniques when he´s using Tekken Style
    After 3 turns, the user can´t move from the place he´s standing because of muscle exhaustion
    No S or Forbidden Rank jutsus by the user for 2 turns after the Tekken Style has ended
    Can only be taught by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~

    ||Approved|| Nice.


    (Buzzard Kuchoiyse No Jutsu: Ra) Buzzard Summoning Technique: Ra

    Rank: S
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 60
    Damage: Depends on used jutsu
    Description: Ra is one of the two Buzzard elders in the Buzzard Realm. Unlike other summonings, Ra is the the strongest Buzzard known thus far. His sheer size and golden armor makes him look godly to those who don't know him. Ra's size is half that of Gamabunta but his wing span stretches past Gamabunta's width meaning he could crush almost anything under him. He is actually worshipped as a deity to the low ranking Buzzards. Ra is capable of using Genjutsu up to S-rank. Ra's best know ability is being able to use all S-rank and below Lightning based techniques and the ones that require hand seals can be done by the summoner. The armor like feathers Ra has is sturdy enough to be unaffected by techniques of B-rank and below.


    Notes:
    Can be forced to be summoned back to it´s land if hit by 80 damage points
    Can only be used/taught by Migualon J.J.
    Must have signed the Buzzard summoning contract
    All his techniques are considered as 1 of the 3 techniqes per turn
    The user cannot use S-rank or higher techniques of different element than Lightning while Ra is on the field
    He stays on the field for 3 turns


    ||Declined|| Several things wrong with this. Incorrect chakra cost, All genjutsu and Lightning Jutsu up to S-rank as well as all of the other elements A-rank and below? no. Try again.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Taiketsu Yagami View Post
    [I]Resubmitting:

    "L.O.D Reach"
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack|Defend|Supplementary
    Range:Short (Long for ability)
    Chakra:N/A (+30 for L.O.D Flame Spike)
    Damage Points:N/A (60 for L.O.D Flame Spike) (-10 to water and earth ninjutsu)
    Description: L.O.D Reach is actually a full body armor that can be summoned through a seal tattoo on the user's back. The armor itself is made of a special alloy built to be light so that it does not effect the user's mobility. The armor itself has no special properties about it but it is capable of enduring small impacts that could come from normal punches, kicks, kunais/shurikens (small amount up to 10 at once), etc. that do not have special properties. When the armor is released, it is equiped with a lance and an oversized shield which each have different abilities and are connected to the armor.

    -L.O.D Shield: The L.O.D Shield has a special barrier made from 4 kanjis that are capable of blocking and dispersing incoming chakra based techniques with no definate mass up to A-rank meaning it can block any incoming jutsu with no particular solidness such as lightning, wind, fire, and other elements with no definate mass and can block anything up to D-rank, even other weapons with no particualr special abilities. The shield is practically big enough to cover the entire user's body so even full scale jutsus of B-rank wont affect him. The drawback of this technique is the user can't move while dispersing the technique making him vulnerable to other attacks and can't perform a technique of the same element in that turn

    -L.O.D Lance: The L.O.D Lance is an advanced piece of equipment built like a lance with a sharp point and a serrated edge so that it can pierce or cut through most objects with no very high density such as steel or iron. The lance is very adept in the fire and element and is linked to the user. Whenever the user performs a fire jutsu, the lance's white coating will turn flaming red. The user can channel fire chakra through this lance to add the burning effect of what it pierces or slashes. Its most famous ability known as "Flame Spike" is where the user channels fire chakra through the lance and expanding it. The user will look as if he is carrying a giant spear made of fire 4 times the size of the lance itself. This flaming spike can be shot at the opponent at very high speeds inveloping everthing it touches in flames while also having the piercing and destructive power to punch through concrete. (Equal to A-rank).

    Restrictions:

    ~Restrictions to L.O.D Armor:
    -The armor is unfit for earth and water ninjutsu so these techniques do less damage than normal
    -While wearing this equipment, the user is slowed in movement due to the heavy weapons but not drastically... ( I cannot match the speed of someone my rank who is a taijutsu specialist) Although, the user still keeps his reaction speed and the giant shield and spear make up for that.
    -Armor last 3 turns and can only be summoned twice in battle and the abilities of the armor do not reset when summoned again
    -Can only be worn by Taiketsu Yagami and who I let choose to wear it

    ~Restrictions to L.O.D Shield:
    -The L.O.D Shield is only capable of blocking and dispersing 3 techniques in battle and it only takes a couple seconds to do so depending on the size or power of the technique
    -the L.O.D Shield can't block incoming jutsus with a particular mass such as water, earth, or other elements with a definate mass besides D-rank
    -Dispersing of a technique counts as one of the user's techniques in a turn

    ~Restrictions to L.O.D Lance:
    -The L.O.D Flame SPike can only be used 4 times in battle
    -It counts as one of the user's techniques in a turn
    -The flaming spike last a full turn unless expeled from lance (Shot at the opponent)
    -While the Flaming Spike is in play, the only other technique that can be used is Flame Spike Gatling



    ~Declined~

    -A spear 4 time as big as the original? Shooting a fire spear? Re-read what I said last time I declined it. And the 4 times bigger is just OP, you'd be able to reach mid-range with a lance lol.
    -Summoning the armor twice for 3 turns? No. Make it once.
    -Also, restrict the lance to 2 times per battle.




    ]
    Im resubmitting the CW. If need be, I can submit Blue Autum as a seperate ninjutsu but is is connected to the armor like its other attacks til now. I just named it is all

    "L.O.D Reach"
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack|Supplementary|Defend
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A (+40 to activate a kanji)
    Damage Points:N/A(+10 to fire ninjutsu)(-10 to earth ninjutsu)
    Description:

    ~L.O.D Reach is actually a full body armor that can be summoned through a seal tattoo on the user's back. The armor itself is made of a special alloy built to be light so that it does not effect the user's mobility. The armor itself has no special properties about it but it is capable of enduring small impacts that could come from normal punches, kicks, kunais/shurikens (small amount up to 10 at once), etc. that do not have special properties. It may be a armor but chakra can still be channeled through it meaning the user can still perform ninjutsu and elemental ninjutsu although earth is weaker than usual. When the armor is released, it is equiped with an oversized shield and lance which has abilities of its own and are connected to the armor.

    ~L.O.D Shield: The L.O.D Shield is an oversized shield made from a very special metal that is built for absorbing virbrations and impacts. The shield also has a special barrier made from 3 kanjis around it's rim that are capable of blocking and dispersing incoming chakra based techniques with no definate mass up to A-rank meaning it can block any incoming jutsu with no particular solidness such as lightning, wind, fire, and other elements with no definate mass and can block anything up to D-rank, even other weapons with no particualr special abilities. The shield is practically big enough to cover the entire user's body so even full scale jutsus of B-rank wont affect him. The drawback of this shield is the user can't move while dispersing the technique making him vulnerable to other attacks and can't perform a technique of the same element in that turn

    ~L.O.D Lance: The L.O.D Lance is a very large/advanced piece of equipment. The lance has the piercing power to be able to punch through most things with no high density such as rock or metal. The special thing about this lance is that it is partly a containment unit filled with a special fire known as "Yama" that is of golden color only found in the buzzard realm and is capable of amplifying a fire based technique, not only making the fire become golden but increasing it's destructive power making it more solid and faster than normal fire but still having the burning properties fire has. This form of fire can slightly overpower a technique of the same rank.

    Restrictions:

    ~Restrictions to L.O.D Armor:
    -Armor last 4 turns and can only be summoned once in battle
    -Cannot perform genjutsu in this armor
    -Can only be worn by Taiketsu Yagami and who I let choose to wear it

    ~Restrictions to L.O.D Shield:
    -The L.O.D Shield is only capable of blocking and dispersing 3 techniques in battle and it only takes a couple seconds to do so depending on the size or power of the technique
    -the L.O.D Shield can't block incoming jutsus with a particular mass such as water, earth, or other elements with a definate mass besides D-rank
    -Dispersing of a technique counts as one of the user's techniques in a turn

    ~Restrictions to L.O.D Lance:
    -Theres only enough amplify 3 fire techniques in battle.
    -After amplifying a technique, the user can't use water in that turn
    .
    Base armor:



    ~Declined~ No special fire coming from another real. We already have enough fire variation.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo.. View Post
    (Yougan No Benihime) - The Red Lava Queen | The Lava Godess
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Benihime is a special blade forged in the Iwagakure village with sacred methods which allowed the blade to look black because they forged it out of many volcano diamonds that is why it is black. The blade itself is indestructible, making it quite effective in blocking and deflecting incoming attacks from basic weapons. Anything above a B-Rank attacks would hit the sword out of the users hand. If, benihime is unsheated it will cover itself with lava. This only works when the sword is in one of the users hands and they state that they are doing so. The user is able to focus their charka into the sword surrounding it with lava charka, though this lava turns to black due to the sword's effect. This black lava increases the damage of basic kenjutsu by +10 damage. This lasts for up to 4 turns and can be used once per battle.
    The abilities of this sword are quit simple: The use can release a small wave of lava from the blade but doing so they will need to add 10+ more chakra but this move can only be used once per battle and only if you're fighting a close range battle with your opponent.

    .Note: The user must have mastered Fire/Earth/Lava inorder to use this wepon.
    .Note: Only I Ichigo can use this sword.
    .Note: The user must be at Kage rank.
    .Note: This sword can only be used if your bio has the lava KG.
    .Note: Can only be used once per battle.


    Yougan No Benihime:

    Feel, free to edit any restrictions etc. if needed

    ~Declined~ Questions: you said the sword would fly off your hand if it's hit with a B-rank or higher, does this mean you can block B-rank and under with it? Also, you really need to give me a good description of the wave. Is it a physical wave (like a water wave) that rush toward your opponent or is it a shockwave of lava? Lastly, but the chakra and damage to work with the wave that's shot from the blade (if the wave is S-rank, 40 /80...etc). Make it +10 for the kenjutsu boost.
    The Red Lava Queen | The Lava Godess
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+10 for the kenjutsu boost.)
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Benihime is a special blade forged in the Iwagakure village with sacred methods which allowed the blade to look black because they forged it out of many volcano diamonds that is why it is black. The blade itself is indestructible, making it quite effective in blocking and deflecting incoming attacks from basic weapons. Anything above a B-Rank attacks would hit the sword out of the users hand but, it can't block it. If, benihime is unsheated it will cover itself with lava. This only works when the sword is in one of the users hands and they state that they are doing so. The user is able to focus their charka into the sword surrounding it with lava charka, though this lava turns to black due to the sword's effect. This black lava increases the damage of basic kenjutsu by +10 damage. This lasts for up to 5 turns and can be used once per battle.
    The abilities of this sword are quit simple: The user can release a small Shockwave of magma (which is the highest form of lava and the hottest) from the blade but doing so they will need to add 10+ more chakra but this move can only be used 2 times per battle.
    The wave it self is a S-Ranked jutsu and it can be fired at Mid-Range.

    .Note: The user must have mastered Fire/Earth/Lava inorder to use this wepon.
    .Note: Only I Ichigo can use this sword.
    .Note: The user must be at Sage rank.
    .Note: This sword can only be used if your bio has the lava KG.
    .Note: Can only be used once per battle.

    .Note: Can only be used for 4 turns.
    Yougan No Benihime:

    ~Approved~ Made it last 4 turns and you can only use the blast twice.
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    (Yoton: Maguma Bakudan) - Lava Release: Magma Bomb
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage Points: 85
    Description: The user will focus his/her chakra into the surrounding lava on the battle field and form a ball with his/her chakra (size of a basketball). Then the user will compress it into a tiny ball (size of a golf ball) with his/her chakra, the user will do this two times and send it the opponent. Because its infused with the users chakra, and upon hitting the opponent it will explode into many lava droplets bevore the opponents face causing enormous burns and melting because of the lava.

    .Note: There has to be a lava source on the field.
    .Note: Can only be used whenthe user mastered Fire/Earth/Lava.
    .Note: The user must be at sage rank to use this jutsu.
    .Note: Can only be used twice per battle.


    ~Declined~ This concept as been done with each and every possible elements. Similar technique already exist.
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    (Yoton: Maguma Tatsumaki) - Lava Release: Magma Tornado
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (-10 Damage to the user)
    Description: The user will simply roatate his/her body and focus a large amount of chakra into the surrounding Lava on the field and keep roatating. In the proces he/she will create a F1 tornado made out of lava/fire and hot rocks. Afterwards the user will send it in the direction of the opponent. If it touches or even gets near you, it will inflict enormous damage to the opponent.

    .Note: There must be a lava source on the field.
    .Note: Must have mastered Earth/Fire/Lava inorder to perform this jutsu.
    .Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    .Note: The user must be at Kage rank to perform this jutsu.


    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. Taking an already existing jutsu and changing the element doesn't make it a new technique, it's a rip off of the original.
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    (Raiton: Raikou Tsubasa) - Lightning Release: Lightning Wings
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will concentrate his\her lightning chakra into the
    shoulders and form the serpant handseal and release two wings made out of lightning, these wings are 2 meters long each. These wings are like a extension of the user and can be used for flight in battle. These wings have a very unique structure that makes it so the Lightning is very light but its still solid and so is able to allow the user to fly. It can also, block simple wepons like kunais, shurikens Etc.

    .Note: Can only be used if the user mastered Ligtning.
    .Note: This jutsu can be used 4 times per battle.
    .Note: Must be taught by Ichigo.
    .Note: The user must be at sannin rank or higher to use this jutsu.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. Same as above.
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Mizu Furasshu)-Water Style: Water Flash
    Type:Attack
    Rank: E
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 5
    Damage Points: 10
    Description: This is one of the most unorthodox jutsus existing. Although most jutsus are strong for their high rank, this one is strong for it's low. By utilizing water-based chakra, user can create a small projectile (5 cm in diameter) with striking power no stronger than normal spear thrust. However, it's strength lies in speed of jutsu. Due to it's low rank and small amount of water needed, jutsu is created almost instantly and with it's high traveling speed it's trackable only by sharingan (1 tomoe and above).
    ||Declined|| To what extent can this jutsu damage?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Voldemort View Post
    (Meiton: Mei katana)Dark release: Dark Swords
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:User creates two swords out of hardened dark chakra which can be either the user's own chakra or an opponents chakra.This can cut through Normal Objects but the user can only create two swords.
    Note:Last for 3 turns
    Note:Can only be used once per battle
    Note:The chakra can be used by either the user's or opponents

    ~Declined~ How could you use your opponent's chakra to perform this technique?

    (Meiton:Mugetsu)Dark release: Black Sky
    Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points:90(-10 to user)
    Description:The user charges large and highly compressed dark chakra which he then release into the opponent.This Jutsu is mainly pure dark chakra which the user then releases into the opponent as this Jutsu is wide it can reach nearly 15 meters long and 5 meters wide.
    Note:No Dark release techniques for 4 turns
    Note:Can only b used once per battle
    Note:Since the chakra is highly compressed and big it burns the user making -10 damage.

    ~Declined~ Releasing chakra into your opponent? First, how would that hurt him? Secondly, no jutsu that immediately take effect on the opponent will be accepted.


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    RESUBMITTING:

    (Katon: Hiendan Jutsu) – Fire release:Hell Rising
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user focuses on his chakra which then he sends into the ground and then using that chakra he molds the chakra into thin layers of fire which he compresses so that he has the power to pierce through the ground,and once the user has done that he can control the chakra so that it comes shooting through the ground and this pierces the enemy.

    Note:The jutsu can only be used once per battle.
    Note:No fire Jutsu above A-rank for the next 2 turns
    Note: Opponent with Byakugan can see this,as they can see the chakra underneath them.

    ~Declined~ When re-submitting if you don't put the added part in bold, I won't check your CJ.
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    Resubmitting

    (Katon: Hiendan Jutsu) – Fire release:Hell Rising
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user focuses on his chakra which then he sends into the ground and then using that chakra he molds the chakra into thin layers of fire which he compresses so that he has the power to pierce through the ground,and once the user has done that he can control the chakra so that it comes shooting through the ground and this pierces the enemy.

    Note:The jutsu can only be used once per battle.
    Note:No fire Jutsu above A-rank for the next 2 turns
    Note: Opponent with Byakugan can see this,as they can see the chakra underneath them.


    ||Declined|| Do Not Resubmit. (Similar Technique Exists)

    Dark release: Dark Swords
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30[None if Used Opponents Chakra]
    Damage Points:60
    Description:User creates two swords out of hardened dark chakra which can be either the user's own chakra or an opponents chakra.This can cut through Normal Objects but the user can only create two swords.
    Note:Last for 3 turns
    Note:Can only be used once per battle
    Note:The chakra can be used by either the user's or opponents
    Note:The user must perform the Inhaling maw if he wants to use the opponents chakra.

    ||Declined|| Do Not Resubmit (Similar Technique Exists...mine to be precise)

    (Meiton:Mugetsu)Dark release: Black Sky
    Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points:90(-10 to user)
    Description:The user charges large and highly compressed dark chakra which he then release towards the opponent or anything he wishes.This Jutsu is mainly pure dark chakra which the user then releases into the opponent as this Jutsu is wide it can reach nearly 10 meters long and 5 meters wide.Since the chakra is filled with compressed and dense energy,the chakra then will have the power to burn the desired target.

    Note:No Dark release techniques for 4 turns
    Note:Can only be used once per battle
    Note:Since the chakra is highly compressed and big it burns the user making -10 damage.

    ||Declined|| Mugetsu. And come on, 10 by 5 meters? You can do better than that.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kokoro no Go-Ruden Ikazuchi): Heart of the Golden Thunder
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage Points: 20(If Blades are in contact with opponents weapon)
    Description:
    The legend tells it that these dual blades were created especially for the founder of Kumogakure in other words for the First Raikage,whos name up to this very day is unknown.Crafted by master blacksmith and given the ability to be infused with lightning chakra and none other then lightning.The hidden power of these Dual Blades can only be awakened in the hands of lightning expert.To be fully able to use the Blade's Power one must have fully mastered lightning release.Once infused with lightning the blades have fully increased their cutting power more then standard wind infused weapons.If these blades are used for blocking opponents weapons such as katana,swords,kunai etc. it will automaticly be electrified causing a shock to opponents body.If lightning jutsus are used along with these blades it adds +10 Damage to lightning techniques up to A Rank, techniques wich are S Rank have +5 more Damage.These blades have their very own lightning techniques wich need to be awakened by the user.Its been told that before First Raikages death he sealed some of his lightning chakra into the blades wich is why the blades have been given name Heart of Golden Thunder.Once in the hands of a true lightning master the lightning that is channeled into the blade takes on a much brighter form then normaly.

    Note: Lightning techniques wich are up to A Rank have their damage increases by +10, the ones wich are S Rank are increased by +5.
    Note: This effect can only be used three times per battle.
    Note: Lightning infusion lasts four turns.
    Note: Drains chakra every turn when effect is active. (-5)
    Note: Able to deflect one A-Rank and up earth techniques per battle(counts as users move).
    Note: Able to deflect two B-Rank and below earth techniques per battle(counts as users move).
    Note: Electrically Shocked on touch if not lightning specialist.
    Note: Can only be used by Zancrow.

    ||Declined||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Gobi Gobletsson View Post
    (Doton: Ragu no Furue) - Earth Release: Quaking Runner
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplmentary/Offensive
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 15(-15 per turn)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: When the user activates this jutsu, he will release small amounts of earth chakra into the ground everytime he takes a step, lands, runs, etc. By doing so the user will create minor quakes reaching from his location, and up to mid-range around him which will cause his opponent to loose balance, and leave him open. However when having this jutsu activated the user cannot use other elements than the ones that's based on Earth Release(Like Diamond.).
    ~Can be activated up till three times per battle.

    ~Declined~ I like it, a lot, but making it C-rank doesn't change the fact that it needs to be restricted in it's usage. I'll leave the details up to you. Also, a C-rank technique would cause quake, but nothing powerful enough to make an opponent fall to the ground when you walk. Mention that while it may surprise the opponent at first, and make him lose balance, he can very much adapt and prepare himself to keep his balance after the first quakes.
    Quote Originally Posted by Gobi Gobletsson View Post
    Resubmitting;
    (Bishamon-Mura) - War-Lots of Grass
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will materlize a high amount of blades made out of chakra in the air, at the users desired location. These blades emit a distinctive and intimidating howling sound upon generation but despite the evident danger they possess from being suspended precariously around/above the intended victims, both of these qualities serve only to belie the technique's true nature. The attack's actual threat lies within its fragility, which results in the production of numerous razor-sharp shards that descend down at the target when disturbed by the foreign chakra(Opponent's), subsequently mincing the enemy to pieces. If one blade triggers, the rest triggers aswell.
    ~Can be use twice per battle.
    ~The Blades last aslong they haven't been destroyed.
    ~The blades would 'detonate' when foreign chakra goes through the air, past them, or jutsu being fired from target's location.


    Sorry but I didn't really get what you meant, as I think it's already stated in the next exluded the last bolded part. I just added that one, as I simply forgot to add in my first submission. How they're gonna be triggered is aswell already noted in the CJ description. So, to be honest I haven't really changed much, as I think it's already stated in the CJ description/restrictions. =S

    ~Declined~ My bad, I guess I didn't see the last restriction last time. However, one thing remain, are the blades visible? Generally, when manipulating raw chakra to the point where it's dense enough to harm someone, it's visible (example: rasengan). Re-submit with a good explanation and it's good to go.

    New;

    (Doton: Gurandoāsu no Kobushi) - Earth Release: Grand Earth Fist!
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damge points: 80
    Description: This is an mere advanced of Earth Fist Technique itself. By channeling earth chakra around the user's entire arm he will materlize a fist of earth around his arm. The user will dash/jump at the target at incredible speed. As the user gets into the range the user will slam the earthen fist against the target, sending them flying with high speeds. The fist is capable of sending a summon back.
    ~Useable twice.
    ~One turn inbetween usage.

    ~Declined~ If it's that big and powerful, how are you able to move at high speed with it? Or simply walk around with it for all that matters. To push back a summon you'd need a giant earth arm.
    I've dropped the idea of Sheer Will for now. I will figure a way to get it approved. O^O

    Resubmitting;

    (Bishamon-Mura) - War-Lots of Grass
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will materlize a high amount of blades made out of visible chakra in the air, at the users desired location. These blades emit a distinctive and intimidating howling sound upon generation but despite the evident danger they possess from being suspended precariously around/above the intended victims, both of these qualities serve only to belie the technique's true nature. The attack's actual threat lies within its fragility, which results in the production of numerous razor-sharp shards that descend down at the target when disturbed by the foreign chakra(Opponent's), which would cause the swords to trigger and they will subsequently mincing the enemy to pieces. If one blade triggers, the rest triggers aswell.
    ~Can be use twice per battle.
    ~The Blades last aslong they haven't been destroyed.
    ~The blades would 'detonate' when foreign chakra goes through the air, past them, or jutsu being fired from target's location.

    ||Pending|| Not yet, Gobi. Please explain what you mean by "disturbed by the foreign chakra." How does one's chakra disturb the blades. Is it upon contact, movement, by being near the blades, ect.? You can PM the answer to me if you want.

    (Doton: Gurandoāsu no Kobushi) - Earth Release: Grand Earth Fist!
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damge points: 80
    Description: This is an mere advanced of Earth Fist Technique itself. By channeling earth chakra around the user's entire arm he will materlize a fist of earth around his arm, which he then will attack his target with.
    ~Useable twice.
    ~One turn inbetween usage.

    ||Declined|| Similar Technique Exists

    Removed some parts and added a new one. This does not mean he can go by incedible speed, I actually that to put some more fill onto the description in the start, aswell with the summon. .-.

    A little note btw;How would you like to change my Quaking Runner? I'm quite unsure, you want me to simply restrict it's usuage? Or like restrict what I can use while using it? Though I have added that I only could use Earth-related jutsus/elements when having it active. Also I took the rank out from the knowledge of Earth Shaking the C-ranked in the canon list, would it work if I put it to B-ranked then? (Yes I asked alot of questions there. .-.)
     
         
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