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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Resubmitting: I worded it wrong, sorry. The scroll serves as a vessel to shape the chakra from the user in chain-like bindings shaped as the kanjis. When i said it was as strong as s-rank elemental jutsu i meant that it could only be broke by S-Rank or above elemental jutsu, unlike my other chakra based jutsu that are weaker than same rank elemental jutsu, but i reword it. I was just trying to avoid saying how it could be broken or released ^^

    Ninpou: Omori No Kei Go | Ninjutsu: The Weight of Strong Words
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    A special ninjutsu of the highest caliber that can only be done by those who have excelled in ninjutsu. The user takes out a scroll which he previously prepared by writing a text in Jõko Nihongo (Ancient Japanese) with Hiragana and Katakana scripts instead of Kanji. As he takes the scroll out and unfolds it in air in front of him in a semi crescent gesture, he claps his hands focusing chakra, performing 3 hand seals (Horse+Hare+Boar) and touching the scroll. The Hiragana and Katakana caracters, glow in a light blue color and rapidly converge from the scroll, like snakes, raging towards the target. As they reach the target, they wrap around it like chains and bind its movement completely. This jutsu has a more powerful yet more limited performing method: the user will take a smaller scroll (only slightly larger than his hand) with the same caracters and slam it with his palm on the enemy. The moment there is contact, the rows of Katakana and Hiragana caracters spread across the enemy's body as chains, resctriting his movement. Although faster and having no need for hand seals, this alternative method has the same binding strength as the normal method. This jutsu can be done to restrict anything solid, with equal strength regardless of size or mass.

    Note1: Can only use jutsu up to S-rank in the same turn
    Note2: Usable only twice
    Note3: Because of the advanced shape manipulation required, this jutsu can only be broken by equal rank elemental or regular ninjutsu or taijutsu
    Note4: User can't use other regular ninjutsu in the same turn
    Note5: The binding doesn't require user to maintain contact and lasts until broken or released
    Note7: Can only be taught by Scorps

    ~Approved~

    New ones:

    Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Bukotsu Zou No Sochi | Lazy Fist: The Clumsy Stomp of The Elephant
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    One of the most dangerous moves in Lazy Fist but also one of the simplest. The user focus a big amount of chakra on his palms or foot and does either a strong double open palm trust or a full strong single foot stomp into the opponents upper torax sending him flying backwards. This disturbs the enemy's chakra flow and produces a deep, strong S-Rank illusion. This painful illusion makes the enemy feel as if his lungs and chest were completely crushed in the impact, making him unable to inhale or exhale. This produces a hipoxia-like effect, making the enemy start to feel lightheaded and dizzy, leading to complete loss of conscience. If the enemy looks or tries to feel his torax/chest he'll see/feel as if it was in deed completely crushed, making it hard to decipher/see through the illusion.

    Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
    Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note3: Impact stance can be used without limit but, if connected, illusion only works once
    Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery

    ~Declined~ While being able to make the opponent feel the pain of asphyxiation, it does not really affect him. I know we could get into a heated debate on the "mind over body" topic (believing so hard you're unable to breath, that you actually do stop to breath), but I will not accept Genjutsus that make you feel a certain emotion, and actually make it happen. It's a line I'm not ready to cross. I remember accepting jutsus that were somewhat close to that, but they were kept within certain boundaries.

    Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Tonsou No Ranningu Panda | Lazy Fist: The Escape of the Running Panda
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Perhaps the strongest of all of the Lazy Fist stances, this technique is a more advanced form of The Dance of The Drunken Haze, using the same Chu Gar (Southern Praying Manthis) stance with the same basic abilities but used to a much higher caliber. Using this technique, the Lazy Fist Master is able to defend any taijutsu or kenjutsu attack (be it elemental fueled or not, since the chakra coating protects his hands and forearms and up to A-rank), as well as up to C-rank small elemental projectiles like with the mentioned technique. However, upon simple contact with the enemy, the user induces an S-Rank Genjutsu by disturbing the targets chakra flow. This Genjutsu affects all of the enemy's senses, making him see the user disappear into a burst of bamboo leafs and hear him run away from the enemy. The enemy will even see and hear small signs of movement in the ground around him, further fueling the illusion that the user has ran with a full burst of speed away from him. This technique serves as the ultimate defense/escape for Lazy Fist Masters.

    ~Declined~ OP. I cannot accept a technique that allows you to defend against all taijutsu and kenjutsu techniques. Some of them are terrifyingly powerful.

    Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
    Note2: The illusion effect only connects twice
    Note3: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery
    Sorry, my bad. Those were lame submissions. So i'm resubmitting: First one i lowered the effect for what i really wanted to induce: extreme pain. Second one i copied parts from the lower rank technique and explained what i can block concretely.

    Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Bukotsu Zou No Sochi | Lazy Fist: The Clumsy Stomp of The Elephant
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    One of the most dangerous moves in Lazy Fist but also one of the simplest. The user focus a big amount of chakra on his palms, fingers, fists, feet, elbows or knees and hits the opponent up to 6 times. This disturbs the enemy's chakra flow and produces a deep, strong S-Rank illusion. This painful illusion makes the enemy feel an intense pain, as if the hit area was completly crushed. The enemy may even faint from the agonizing pain if he doesn't release the genjutsu. If the enemy looks or tries to feel the affected area he'll see/feel as if it was indeed completely crushed, making it hard to decipher/see through the illusion.

    Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
    Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note3: Impact stance can be used without limit but, if connected, illusion only works twice
    Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery

    ~Approved~

    Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Tonsou No Ranningu Panda | Lazy Fist: The Escape of the Running Panda
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Perhaps the strongest of all of the Lazy Fist stances, this technique is a more advanced form of The Dance of The Drunken Haze, using the same Chu Gar (Southern Praying Manthis) stance with the same basic abilities but used to a much higher caliber. By using this stance the user is able to use his hands in wide, fluid movements to deflect incoming projectiles or taijutsu attacks directed at him. He must keep his hands coated in a layer of chakra that protects them while he deflects the projectiles or attacks. Upon contact with the enemy, the user induces a powerful S-Rank Genjutsu. This Genjutsu affects all of the enemy's senses, making him see the user disappear into a burst of bamboo leafs and even hear him run away. The enemy will even see and hear small signs of movement in the ground around him, further fueling the illusion that the user has ran with a full burst of speed away from him. This technique serves as the ultimate defense/escape for Lazy Fist Masters.

    Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
    Note2: The illusion effect only connects twice but the stance can be used without limit
    Note3: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery
    Note5: Can deflect any S-Rank or lower Taijutsu attack (except gates)
    Note6: Can be used to deflect or block Kenjutsu moves of the A-Rank or lower.
    Note7: Can be used to defend against C-Rank or lower elemental projectiles within reason
    Note8: Can be used to defend against basic weapons even if infused with chakra or poisoned (chakra coated hands protect the user)


    ~Pending~ Perhaps I'm not seeing it, but where are the restrictions on this one? Does it have a time limit?
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-22-2011 at 02:52 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Piccolosan View Post
    (Taijutsu: osoi unten) Taijutsu Style: Slow motion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 30 Chakra
    Description: Adrenalin forces the brain to "think" faster, making the person perceive time much slower. This uses chakra to imitate this effect and time "seems" to slow down resulting in better reaction time.
    -Lasts 4 turns
    -Can only be used once in a battle
    -This only increases reaction time by x2 doesn't increase strength, speed, or durability of body
    -Does not give better vision, only slows down time for user
    -Can only be taught by Piccolosan

    Lowered rank, lowered how long it lasts, lowered chakra used to counter the OD...

    ~Declined~ I thought I was clear, "you'd OD within the first turn and die". Do you realize they shoot adrenaline directly into people's heart when it's failing? That's how powerful a drug it is. You can't possibly abuse it without severe drawbacks.

    (Katon: Majin Faia) - Fire Style: Demon Fire
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self-affected
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 each turn.)
    Damage points: N/A (+20 fire.)
    Description: The user will via nature manipulation transform all his chakras into one of the basic five elements, Fire Release. By doing so, he will only have fire chakra running through his entire chakra system and his entire body, this will forcefully heat his body up to an extreme level where the user most likely becomes resistent to most fire attacks, as they simply do not burn him, making him resitent up to A-rank fire attacks. The heat from the user will aswell numb the user's nerves in his entire body, which will result that he won't even flinch if he got stabbed but simply continue on his movements. Also due the fact that the fire chakra the heart will pump faster, the brain work faster, which will result in him increasing his own speed (3rd gates speed), reaction time, and strength. However, not enough with that, the user will gain extra powers in the fire element, increasing it with one rank. However not only good things comes with power, this jutsu also is having it's downs. As the user will only be capable of using fire release only when this technique is activated, as he simply transformed all his chakras into fire. The user cannot stay in this mode in eternity, this state is limited to four turns, whereafter the user will be completly drained from chakra, leaving him only 1% of his chakra back. Once activated, a M appears on the user's forehead.
    ~Lasts four turns.
    ~User can only use fire when activated
    ~After four turns, the User automatically loses the fight if not won by that time.
    ~User needs to be Kage rank to use this
    ~Must master fire and water elements to use this
    ~Can only be USED by Piccolosan

    ~Declined~ OP. Lots of stuff to fix, I'll leave it up to you to figure some of them out and I'll be more precise in your re-submission.
    (Taijutsu: osoi unten) Taijutsu Style: Slow motion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40 Chakra
    Description: Adrenalin forces the brain to "think" faster, making the person perceive time much slower. This uses chakra to imitate this effect and time "seems" to slow down resulting in better reaction time. Because of the heavy use of chakra to the occipital lobe, after this jutsu wears off the users will experience blindness for one turn and blurriness for the rest of the battle.
    -Lasts 4 turns
    -Can only be used once in a battle
    -This only increases reaction time by x2 doesn't increase strength, speed, or durability of body
    -Does not give better vision, only slows down time for user
    -Can only be taught by Piccolosan

    I think I understand what your saying about heavy draw backs

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ I should've done this the first time I checked it, sorry for wasting your time. The whole idea of slowing time was abused in this thread and will most likely never be approved again.

    (Katon: Majin Faia) - Fire Style: Demon Fire
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self-affected
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 each turn.)
    Damage points: N/A (+20 fire.)
    Description: The user will via nature manipulation transform all his chakras into one of the basic five elements, Fire Release. By doing so, he will only have fire chakra running through his entire chakra system and his entire body, this will forcefully heat his body up to an extreme level where the user most likely becomes resistent to most fire attacks, as they simply do not burn him, making him resitent up to A-rank fire attacks. The heat from the user will aswell numb the user's nerves in his entire body, which will result that he won't even flinch if he got stabbed but simply continue on his movements. Also due the fact that the fire chakra the heart will pump faster, the brain work faster, which will result in him increasing his own speed (3rd gates speed), reaction time, and strength. However, not enough with that, the user will gain extra powers in the fire element, increasing it with one rank. However not only good things comes with power, this jutsu also is having it's downs. As the user will only be capable of using fire release only when this technique is activated, as he simply transformed all his chakras into fire. The user cannot stay in this mode in eternity, this state is limited to four turns, whereafter the user will be completly drained from chakra, leaving him only 1% of his chakra back. Because of so much strain to the body after 3 turns the user will go back to normal speed, thus the user still have one turn left with only fire jutsu to finish the battle. Once activated, a M appears on the user's forehead.
    ~Lasts four turns.
    ~User can only use fire when activated
    ~After four turns, the User automatically loses the fight if not won by that time.
    ~Must master fire and water elements to use this
    ~Can only be USED by Piccolosan

    I added a restriction to the speed of this jutsu, I honestly don't know what else to restrict without actually changing this jutsu.

    ~Declined~ You don't get it, I never said to restrict it more, I said to take away abilities. This whole jutsu is a rip off of many already existing jutsu and you combined them together. If it isn't drastically different in your resubmission, I will decline it for good. Just a hint; don't mention the gates, don't make yourself resistant to fire (up to A-rank at least), the whole idea of turning all your chakra to fire was already done too.

    (Suna: osoi suna) Sand style: Slow Sand
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 Chakra
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The use gathers in a huge chakra amount and quickly slams his hand on the ground. Then releasing this chakra unto the ground, the user uses the chakra to bring up the strongest of minerals from the ground. This is spread out up to long range and with an explosion the sand is brought up. This does not change the terrain rather it only brings up the sand. The explosion will only hinder vision for 5 seconds, after that all the sand will drop down to the ground. This creates one foot of sand, with this the opponents movement speed is cut in half, meaning running, zig zagging, etc anything that involves using the sand to move. Because this is has the users chakra, the user does not get slower.
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -No S rank sand jutsu at the same turn and the following one.
    -Can only be taught by Piccolosan

    ~Approved~ Took out the part where you can sense your enemy and added the bold part.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Hyouton jounin on rui (ice style standing on thin ice)
    Rank: c
    Type: supplementary
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points:
    Description: The user will make five hand seals and place his hands on the ice below him. He will then focus his water and wind chakra into the ice and with his chakra he will make the ice as weak and brittle as possible making it easily broken. If either the user or the enemies step on the ice in front of the user it will break and they will fall into the water below the ice.
    Note: must be standing on a frozen lake bed to use jutsu
    Note: only useable once per battle
    Note: only Haku Yuki can use
    note: also weakens all ice jutsu used with the ice soruce by 10 but not ice made from the user only ice used from the ice that was just weakend

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I want to make some changes to my approved custom weapon.
    Original:

    (Yami no Tankyū-sha)- Seeker of Darkness
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This sacred bow has been passed down through generations of the Nara clan. With this bow, the user won't need to perform handseals for shadow jutsu when holding the bow and they can be "shot" from the shadow of the bow by pulling back the string and releasing it which gives regular shadow jutsu the speed of a flying arrow and allows them to reach long range. They can be shot faster if they travel through shadows and can boost the speed of already fast shadow jutsu. This bow also heightens the restricting ability of shadow jutsu. If someone who isn't from the Nara clan touches the bow, he won't be able to move until he is separated from it.
    -Can be summoned once per battle
    -Only one jutsu can be shot from it per turn
    -Must be a member of the Nara Clan to use

    Edited:

    (Yami no Tankyū-sha)- Seeker of Darkness
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: N/A (-10 each turn)
    Damage: N/A (+5 to shadow jutsu)
    Description: This sacred bow has been passed down through generations of the Nara clan. It is pitch black with a bladed edge on the front of it and it made of lightweight but durable metal capable of having chakra channeled into it. It was said to have been originally white and gained its dark color by absorbing the chakra of its owners which in turn increases their skill in manipulating shadows. While in possesion of the bow the user's shadow jutsu won't require handseals. They can be "shot" from the bow or its shadow by drawing and releasing the bowstring. The speed of the jutsu shot is increased to that of a flying arrow and is allowed to reach long range. This bow also heightens the restricting ability of shadow jutsu. If a non-Nara clan member willingly touches the bow, he won't be able to move until he is separated from it.
    -Can be summoned once per battle
    -Only one jutsu can be shot from it per turn
    -Each jutsu shot from the bow counts as one in the user's turn
    -Must be a member of the Nara Clan to use

    ~Approved~ Added the bold part. I added one word in the description to make it clear that you can't throw the bow on someone and paralyze them if it touches them.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: Kasumi Endu Moumoutaru no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Mist Covering Dense Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user can spew out a medium scaled widespread flammable gas out from their lungs. This gas reaches out to mid-range and when contact is made with fire, the gas let's off a large scale explosion even more mightier than Fire Style: Mist Covering Technique.
    ~Can only be used twice
    ~Can only be taught by ~CoOkie Monster~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This is an exact rip off of the already existing cannon technique, you only mentioned it was stronger -___-. I feel I'm being to forgiving with everyone ripping cannons. I'll be more strict in the next pages.

    (Katon: Honoo Suihou) - Fire Style: Flame Bubble
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After performing the ram handseal, channels their fire chakra from their body and then user moves his hands at high speeds to "paint" a wall of flames around the user like a dome. This dome is a powerful wall of fire and the user can then push out the wall of flames in an outwards direction which reaches up to mid-range and if made in contact with the opponent, the target can be severely burned.
    note: When wall reaches Mid-range, rank decreases one down.
    note: Can only be used twice
    note: Can only be taught by ~CoOkie Monster~

    Side note to mod...I don't know if it being S-rank would deem it OP, if so, then could you change it to A-rank? If not...S-rank would be nice.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Reopon Gigei: Debari Tsume) ~ Leopon Arts: Projection Claw
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: King Leo channels his chakra into his claws and makes a swiping motion. As he swipes, he release a huge amount of chakra. The chakra is released in the form of the shape a claw swipe would leave on an object, like a tear. This is a wide-scale attack that only reaches up to mid range and is extremely powerful and is one of the leopons secret techniques.
    Note: Can only be used by Leo
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Can only use it after a 1 turn break
    Note: Can only be taught by ~CoOkie Monster~

    Side note: This jutsu projects similar to Grimmjow's Desgarron (just the actual projection):


    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon:Ryū-hi) Fire Release: Dragon Fire
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80(+10 when in contact with Wind)(-30 when in contact with B-rank and higher water)
    Description: The user channels fire to his fist and it explodes and creates a cyclone around the user. The user then launches himself at the opponent and high speeds, giving them the appearance of a spinning tornado-like torpedo of fire with a dragon's head where the fist is located. Afterwards, the user is left with a few burns left on the hand that does the move
    ~Must have Rikerslade's permission~
    ~Must be of Sannin rank~
    ~This can only be used twice~
    ~Can be blocked by B-rank water~
    ~Due to high movement speeds, the user needs a Dojutsu or chakra-sensing method to use accurately~

    ~Declined~ You're contradicting yourself; you say it can be blocked by B-rank water and yet you mention -30 in the damage section when in contact with B-rank water. Fix it.

    (Raiton: Kaminari keimusho) Lightning Release: Lightning Prison
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user makes three seals and releases several large bolts of lightning from his mouth. The lightning bolts then cling to the victim, shocking them and preventing movement
    ~Must have Rikerslade's permission~
    ~Movement restriction lasts one turn~

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kankangakugaku Satetsu) - Heated Iron Sand
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: All (Iron Sand)
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A (60 if touched)
    Description: The user uses their Iron Sand and grinds their Iron Sand together. As the Iron Sand particles create a high amount of friction between each particle, the friction results in a release of heat that is sustained in the Iron Sand. The heat sustained in the Iron Sand causes it to be dangerous to touch and can burn through rocks (A-Rank Doton).
    Restrictions:
    ~Can only be used twice.
    ~The Iron Sand sustains the heat for four turns.
    ~If the Iron Sand touches the skin of a human, it can burn through their skin.
    ~The user doesn't have to use this jutsu on all of their Iron Sand.

    ~Declined~ Burn through rock O_~? It would need to be heated up to thousands of degrees celcius to do this, and I doubt you can achieve such temperature with friction alone (not impossible, but you don't have the means to do it).

    (Jiton: Rumetsuki) - Magnetism Release: Red Eyes
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: User's Natural Sight
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 to keep active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will use their magnetism chakra to create electromagnetic waves that emit an infrared light that can't be seen by normal eyes. The infrared is then connected to the brain cells connected into the user's sight. The infrared light will hit objects and return that information back as an image to the user's brain. The infrared image will show heat signatures. This ability allows the user to view through solid objects and spot heat through objects. This however doesn't restrict their view of objects that do not emit heat.
    Restrictions:
    ~Only usable twice.
    ~Lasts three turns.
    ~No magnetism jutsu the turn after use.
    ~Must wait two turns before reactivating.
    ~Allows the user to see through Hidden Mist, Steam (Created from B-Rank or lower clashes), Earth, Lightning, Wind (Due to wind moving natural heat and it shows in a differentiation in heat signatures), Fire (Small fires or un-concentrated fires), Ice, Plastics, and any other object that emits heat.

    ~Declined~ Unless you suffer from a very rare condition known as Tetrachromacy (only a few humans were know to have this mutation), which allows you to see from 4 distinct sources (including infrared), then I will never accept this jutsu.

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    (Meiton: Masuku Rikugun) - Dark Release: Vizard
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: N/A (+5 to Taijutsu/Basic Ninjutsu, +10 to all fire/lightning jutsu, +15 to all Dark Release jutsu)
    Description: The user will hold their left hand to their left eye and begin exerting their Dark Chakra through out their face, the Dark Chakra then progresses their the user's body in a high rush. The Dark Chakra comes from a sealed portion of it in their left hand, inside the Meiton mark of their hand. The Dark Chakra then takes the form of a white mask that seeps Dark Chakra. The Mask adds Dark Chakra throughout the user's body and gives them a boost in their chakra system (due to the rush of Dark Chakra through their chakra system, they can't be put under Genjutsu B-Rank or lower). The mask also gives more thrust to the user's taijutsu, Basic Ninjutsu, Dark Release jutsu, Lightning jutsu, and Fire jutsu.
    -Only Lightning, Fire, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu (Including Kaito's Taijutsu), and Dark Release jutsu are usable while under the mask's effects.
    -Can't have done more then two jutsu the previous turn.
    -Only lasts 4 turns.
    -Can't absorb jutsu while under the effects of the mask.
    -No Dark Release jutsu after use for 3 turns.
    -No A-Rank or higher Water jutsu the turn after expiring.
    -No S-Rank or higher Lightning jutsu for 3 turns after expiring.
    -No S-Rank or higher Fire jutsu for 3 turns after expiring.
    -The user will feel exhausted after using the mask and not be able to move as fast as they could before for two turns.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be used by Dark Release users. Each mask is unique to the user. (Effects are the same.)
    -Can only be taught by ~Xanthe~



    ~Declined~ This is ridiculously OP. You do realize you're boosting all your S-rank fir/dark technique to F-rank in this mode? Even with all the restrictions you added it's unacceptable. Also, bleach rip off are quite hated in here (). If it was Roku who'd check those it would've been an instant "do not resubmit".
    (Meiton: Masuku Rikugun) - Dark Release: Vizard
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: N/A (+5 to Taijutsu/Basic Ninjutsu, +5 to all fire/lightning jutsu, +10 to all Dark Release jutsu / 10 to all fire/lightning jutsu, +15 to all Dark Release jutsu (If previously absorbed a jutsu.))
    Description: The user will hold their left hand to their left eye and begin exerting their Dark Chakra through out their face, the Dark Chakra then progresses their the user's body in a high rush. The Dark Chakra comes from a sealed portion of it in their left hand, inside the Meiton mark of their hand. The Dark Chakra then takes the form of a white mask that seeps Dark Chakra. The Mask adds Dark Chakra throughout the user's body and gives them a boost in their chakra system (due to the rush of Dark Chakra through their chakra system, they can't be put under Genjutsu B-Rank or lower). The mask also gives more thrust to the user's taijutsu, Basic Ninjutsu, Dark Release jutsu, Lightning jutsu, and Fire jutsu.
    -No S-Ranks or above are usable while in this mode.
    -Only Lightning, Fire, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu (Including Kaito's Taijutsu), and Dark Release jutsu are usable while under the mask's effects.
    -Can't have done more then two jutsu the previous turn.
    -Only lasts 4 turns.
    -Can't absorb jutsu while under the effects of the mask.
    -No Dark Release jutsu after use for 3 turns.
    -No A-Rank or higher Water jutsu the turn after expiring.
    -No S-Rank or higher Lightning jutsu for 3 turns after expiring.
    -No S-Rank or higher Fire jutsu for 3 turns after expiring.
    -The user will feel exhausted after using the mask and not be able to move as fast as they could before for two turns.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be used by Dark Release users. Each mask is unique to the user. (Effects are the same.)
    -Can only be taught by ~Xanthe~



    ~Pending~ I would decline this one for good, but since I'm not the bleach expert around here, I'll leave it for Roku .
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kinjutsu Unagi Mo-do) Forbidden Eel Mode
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (+15 Ninjutsu and +10 Taijutsu)
    Description: Forbidden Eel Mode is achieved by the perfect balance of the combination of a ninja's chakra with the spiritual energy. This skill called Konjutsu, meaning the ability to draw the spiritual energy inside of them blending it with their own chakra. This, creates a new type of chakra, the Konjutsu chakra that enables the user to enter a powered state called Forbidden Eel Mode. Every type of skill art is now changes, every attack and defense technique of Ninjutsu and Taijutsu becomes extremely more powerful however the user of this mode can not use Genjutsu, soul arts or rather Konjutsu are taught by the Eels in their homeland, "Unagiirie" (Eel Cove). The user's physical strength and durability drastically increase. The user will be able to achieve speed three times faster then normal. while in this mode The user gains the ability to sense chakra withing living organisms (trees, plants, people etc.) A Master of Eels will Be branded with a Tattoo on their Back of a Giant Serpent. This Serpent is "Souzousha" (The Great Eel Creator). The tattoo of Souzousha holds a large spiritual chakra reserve that can be used in battle. The user will need focus their chakra on the tattoo to draw out it's power. The tattoo will expand over the user's body, resembling that of the Curse Mark, although it has no connection to it. upon deactivation of this Mode, the tattoo will retreat and the user will be exhausted.
    Note:
    -Because the user only has limited spiritual chakra. and it cannot be replenished, means the user can't stay in this mode for extended periods of time
    -In order to gather enough charkra to initiate the tattoo for the transformation into Eel Mode, the user must remain perfectly still. Because of that, the user can be an easy target for an opponent
    -As soon as Eel Mode ends the user is left in an exhausted state, and can easily be attacked.
    -No S-Ranked for 4 turns after deactivation of Mode
    -Can only be use once per battle
    -No Genjutsu while in this mode
    -Last 5 turns
    -Must sign Eel contract

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This is a blatant rip off of Sage Mode.
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    (Kchuysei: Unagi Uzumaki no Jutsu) Summoning: Eel Whirlpool Technique
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will make 3 handseals summoning a Mass of Eels under the opponent, these Eels will swim in a large circle quickly forming a whirlpool. This will suck the opponent into the bottom of the center where the mass of Eels will then converge, crashing down with the water on the opponent and feed on his flesh.
    Note:
    -Can only use 3 time's per battle
    -Requires a water source
    -Must have Signed Eel Contract

    ~Approved~

    (Unagi Sumasshu no Jutsu) Eel Smash technique
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The User will slam his hands together summoning a large Eel half the size of Manda over the opponent, the Eel is coiled in a sphere and will drop down smashing the opponent where they stand before poofing away.
    Note:
    -Can only use 2 time's per battle
    -Must have Signed Eel Contract

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Rip off of a cannon technique.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Professor Sarutobi View Post
    (Jishaku Ninpou: Magunetto Zonbi: Arnold)Magnetic Ninja Art: Magnet Zombie: Arnold
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: User unrolls his 5th scroll and summons his Arnold zombie. This is the stronger versions of the Bruno zombies and are even more heavily armored and powerful. Can withstand up to 2 A rank attacks without being destroyed and has a large chest compartment that stores a scroll of weapons containing 10 swords, 20 kunai and 40 shuriken stored within itself. The weapons can be taken out of the scroll and used for magnetism jutsus quickly by using some of the already flowing chakra being used to control Arnold himself. Arnold also has 25 bomb tags all located inside its head and should the need arise can be detonated with a single hand seal, using arnold's head as sharpnel to damage the enemy (if in short range)
    -If the weapons are used from his scroll Arnold loses a turn of use due to taking the magnetism chakra from him to quickly control the weapons.
    -Only Magnetism bios can use.
    -Only Professor Sarutobi can use.

    ~Approved~

    (Ninpo:Koudo Yajuu Ishiki ) Ninja art: Advanced Senses of The Beast
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 every turn active)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: While Senses of the beast is active the user redistributes the chakra to focus it into only one sense, losing the other 4 boosts in exchange for gaining a large boost in the single sense.

    -Sight of the Hawk. The user focuses chakra into their eyes allowing them to see movements even in dense fogs or jungles very clearly even from long range.

    -Nose of the Shark. The user focuses chakra into their nose allowing them to smell even the slightest drop of blood or the sweat from an enemy even from long range, thus if an enemy has been cut during the battle or the fight has been going on for several turns the user will be able to track them easily even if they can't see or hear them. (up to long range and above ground)

    -Ears of the Owl. The user focuses chakra into their ears to enhance their hearing to be able to track opponents from being able to hear footsteps or heavy breahing even from long range

    -Touch of the Manatee. The user spreads his chakra along his entire body specificly into the hairs on his body to act as detectors to temperature, wind current (on the ground level) and vibrations on the ground (up to mid range)

    -Tongue of the Catfish. The user spreads his chakra into his tongue to triple the sensitivy of the taste buds and be able to "taste" chakra in the air around him by just breathing(up to mid range)

    -lasts 5 turns.
    -Once per battle.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

    ~Declined~ Sorry pal, I've got a very very similar technique:


    (Fuuinjutsu: Tenrai Kanji) - Sealing Technique: Divine Senses

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A(-50)
    Description: The user will make the tip of his index glow and will carve a seal in the flesh of his forehead. This seal as the ability to stop/suppress any sense: Sight, Hearing, Taste, Touch and smell. The more sense will be sealed, the more the remaining ones will be develop. For example if everything is sealed but the sense of touch, the user can feel any movement in a radius of a mile around him. The user can seal as many sense as he wants, but can only unseal one.The user will also get a huge boost in speed and strength for each sense that is sealed (the more sealed, the bigger the effect).
    -For the next turn the user will only be able to perform A-rank and lower
    -The user can only unseal one sense after being sealed
    -This jutsu can only be used once per match
    -This jutsu can only be used by Izuna Uchiha and -Naruto Uzumaki-


    (Raiton:Keika)- Lightning Release: Firefly Light
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 25
    Description: The user focuses lightning chakra in both their palms then holds their hands out and releases the chakra as 20 condensed balls of lightning that spread out around the field and as soon as they come in contact with a person besides the user they burst, paralyzing the target for 1 turn.
    -Balls float around for 2 turns before losing shape and harmlessly dispersing.
    -Can't be used for 2 turns afterwards.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

    ~Declined~ Limit this jutsu (/per match). Also, take out the damage, only say it paralyze.

    (Doton&Fuuton:Kuutaichimisairu Doroppukikku)-Earth&Wind Release: Air-to-surface Missile Drop-Kick
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user, While in the air focuses a large amount of wind chakra below their feet to push off the air behind them rocketing them downwards towards the enemy the user then directs their feet in front of them pointed at the enemy and focuses earth chakra into their feet and legs to harden them increasing the damage on contact.
    -Can't use for 3 turns afterwards and no A or above Taijutsu next turn.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi

    ~Approved~ Awesome.

    (Raiton:Keika)- Lightning Release: Firefly Light
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user focuses lightning chakra in both their palms then holds their hands out and releases the chakra as 20 condensed balls of lightning that spread out around the field and as soon as they come in contact with a person besides the user they burst, paralyzing the target for 1 turn.
    -Balls float around for 2 turns before losing shape and harmlessly dispersing.
    -Can't be used for 2 turns afterwards.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

    ||Approved||

    (Kami-e)-Paper Drawing
    Rank:B
    Type: Defence
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes his body go limp and using a practiced form of dodging is able to avoid many attacks while looking like their body is floating like a piece of paper.
    -Can't avoid A rank or above taijutsu.
    -Can't be used for 2 turns afterwards.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

    ||Declined|| Please specify "many attacks." Does this apply to Ninjutsu as well or only Taijutsu?

    (Fuuton: Rankyaku)- Wind Release: Storm Leg
    Rank:A
    Type: Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses wind chakra into one leg and releases a kick at very high speeds and strength, sending out a sharp compressed air blade that can slice objects and greatly damage a human body.
    -Can only be used by taijutsu specalists and masters.
    -Can only use 3 times per battle.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

    ||Approved||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    New week new submissions

    (Kairai Ginou: Karitoriki)-Puppet skills: Reaper
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Reaper is ~Johninto Uchiha~ most used puppet that is carried in a scroll in a bag. He looks like the Grim Reaper and carriers a scythe on his left hand. Reaper carries hidden in his mouth senbon so that the user can have them launch at the opponent. Reaper also has a hole in both hands and at the user's will shurikens and senbon will launch out at the opponent. Reaper can also use his scythe to slash enemies.
    Looks like


    ||Declined|| Incorrect rank/chakra/damage
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Buki: Sendo's Kenshiki)- Sendo's Pride
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs three hand seals (Ram-Hare-Snake) and pulls out a small scroll from it poofs a small curved sword. If the sword is added into the persons bio it can be worn and does not need to be summoned. It is a sword that was gifted from the leader of the Condors to the first contract holder. It is made of a metal found only at the site of the Condor Nesting Ground and this metal has the ability to store Raiton Chakra from the holder. The sword itself has two simple abilities. First it can rank up Raiton jutsu up to A rank meaning A rank becomes S rank, but S rank jutsu are uneffected. It does this by adding in extra Raiton chakra that it has gained from the holder making the lightning stronger and more deadly. Next if used by a person who has a Raiton specialty it denotes the use of Hand seals to one meaning the person must only use one hand seal while weilding this sword to perform Raiton jutsu.
    *Can be used by any signer of the Condor contract but can only be added into my bio*
    *Can only be used 6 turns then the abilities become void the sword can still be used as a sword*
    *Must have signed the condor Contract*
    *Must have mastered Raiton*



    ||Declined|| Add more Limitations. And I'm not sure about the whole "one hand seal" thing.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Manaka Finga) Middle Finger
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: E
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 5
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This Jutsu requires no handseals, the user simply extends the middle finger of either hand whilst lowering their other fingers and holding them down with the thumb. The user then must take the proper stance placing their dominant leg forward and the opposing hand on their hip assuming the "Captain Morgan" stance. Upon proper extension of the middle finger and proper stance acquired, the hand is then directed towards their opponent and then waved around.

    Upon being seen by the opponent, they instantly begin raging and lose all cognitive function. Possible aneurysms ensue.

    Chippumunku (Chipmunks)
    Summoning Animal: Chipmunks
    Scroll Owner: Zombie
    Others Users who have signed contract: None at this time.
    Summoning Boss if existing: Alvin
    Other summoning animals tied to contract: None

    Chipmunks are rodents that exist throughout most of the world. They're cute, they're fury, and absolutely adorable. In the Narutoverse, chipmunks will be about the size of toddlers and will have extremely annoying voices. They can also sing. Chipmunks also tend to wear long shirts and baseball caps.

    (U-tatazumai buro-hou) The U-Shaped Blowgun
    Rank: E
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 5
    Damage: 10 (to self)
    Description: Exactly as the name implies, it's a U-shaped blowgun. The user will place a dart in the primary opening. The user then exhales violently through the primary opening causing the dart will travel at a high pressure. Because the blowgun is U shaped, it is incapable of hitting anything in front of it, and will only hit yourself in the face.
    • This weapon can be used and wielded by anybody retarded enough to pick it up.


    ||All Declined|| Please refrain from making a joke out of CJ submission. Also, none of these submissions were funny. In internet terms, please lurk moar.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fire:kochou)- Fire Style- Butterfly Attack
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gathers alot of fire chakra into his/her hand, and then they close there hand. And release there fire chakra and once they release it they shape manupliate, the fire chakra into 20 Fire Buttery Fly's.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    - Butterfly's Burn anything they touch

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exists.

    (Genjustu: koigokoro)- Genjustu- True Love
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    RangeShort
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user activates there shairgan 2nd tomoe, and blows a kiss towards there enemy. And if they look at the kiss they are stuck in a genjustu, where th enemy has to obey anything there love say's
    -USer can't tell the enemey to kill themselves
    - Can only be used 1 time per battle
    - User has to have 2nd tomoe Sharigan
    - can be broken out of if the oppent has a sharigan or if he/she i stronger then the oppent.

    ~Declined~ Do a little research on genjutsus, you'll see that it affect the five sense but it doesn't force your opponent to do anything they don't want to. The thing is, you need to trick them into doing what you want

    (Taijustu: appa-katto)- Taijustu Style- Uppercut Combo
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    RangeShort
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gets up close to the enemy, and when he/she's close they uppercut the oppent with both hands sending him into the air. And as he in the air the user jumps and spin's there body doing a whole 360, and as there spinning they use there right or left feet and kick the oppent sending the enemy flying with a broken rib or bone.Because of the spin it gives the kick more power.
    -can only be used 1 time per battle
    - can only be used close up

    ~Declined~ The jutsu is ok but the description is messy and somewhat incoherent. Re-work it, resubmit it and take out the part where you broke your enemy's rib. Replace it with that:"the kick is strong enough to break bones".
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Earth Style: Earth Shield (Doton: Tsuchi Toku)
    Rank: B
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:25
    Damage points:40
    Description: The user simply does hand seals pertaining to the element and raises up a wide wall made of earth as a shield to protect against attacks and techniques
    Note: Can be used Four times in battle
    Note: Must wait 3 turns to use again

    (Jiton Tetsu no kill jutsu) Magnetic release: Iron Kill Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points:60
    Description; The User does this jutsu in long range by sending the iron underground to hit the opponent unaware then focusing on chakra and shape manipulation then forms a huge round mass around the opponent which surrounds him and traps him in it then exploding on impact and squashing the opponent to pieces.
    Note: Can be used twice
    Note: Must wait three turns to use justu again



    (Raiton: Seiteki roddo) Lightning Style; static rods
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:25
    Damage points:40
    Description; The user brings out multiple iron rods shaped like arrows and passes electricity through them making them static and sharper then sends it to the opponent on a point blank range when this hits it damages the opponent body and weakens him severely

    Note: The arrows are powered by light which makes it faster and difficult to dodge a dojutsu might be required to block it.

    Note: Must wait 3 turns to use again

    Note: Can be used 4 turns

    (Suiton: Supiningu ana )Water style: Spinning hole
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost:25
    Damage points:40
    Description; The user does some hand seals and then slams his palm into the water from a distance while also pin pointing where the opponent is and then opens the water and making a big spinning hole like a void which draws the opponent in the water and covers the target to drown.
    Note: Must Be Done Where there is water
    Note: Can Be used two times
    Note: The user must wait a turn to use again

    ~All Declined~ You are only allowed 3 submissions per week. Since you broke that rule, you are hereby banned from this thread up till the 5th of December.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Kyokudo Hea Kasei- Extreme Hair Growth
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:C
    Range:short-mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: User uses their Chakra to increase the flat cells and keratin in their body thus allowing their hair to rapidly grow to extraordinary lengths. The hair can grow all the way down to the floor, surrounding the user several feet around themselves. Can be used as a setup to various other techniques.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (a cannon one at that).
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    Hea Henkan- Hair Transformation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: By using their chakra, the user is able to harden their hair to the point where its as hard as rope.

    ~Declined~ You're just ripping off all of Jiraiya's techniques.
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    Hea Gaijo- Hair Removal
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User cuts off bodily connections to the desired parts of the hair causing the hair to disconnect at any chosen area of the users head/hair. However, their chakra still remains in the strands of hair. (Like how Ino was able to do so with her hair in the chuunin exams)

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Iwabi View Post
    Resubmitting the following:

    (Kuchiyose: Thor) - Summoning: Thor
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Thor is the King of the Red Panda. He is as tall as Ponta and he bears a large double headed war hammer that has been crafted from chakra metal which enables Thor to channel his elemental natures into the weapon for added power and he carries it on his back. he wields the hammer with his exceptionally large tail. He has an affinity for Lightning Element and can use the techniques up to what the user know's. He is capable of slamming his hammer onto the ground to activate the earth elemental techniques. He is capable of using the Killing Intent ninjutsu by simply inducing it by a roar. He is also the largest Red Panda summoning and due to his size he can travel across terrain quite quickly. He has thick fur that prevents him from being harmed by C rank and below Ice ninjutsu. He also has good hearing and a kean sense of smell allowing him to find hidden targets even when his field of vision is blocked.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per match
    Note: Can only remain on the field for 4 turns

    (I have removed the second element making it useable of lightning element, and made it S rank)

    ~Declined~ Elemental natures? I hate it when people just chop a part of their jutsu and don't take the time to re-read themselves. Take out the killing intent part, don't know why I didn't mention that before. Summons won't be allowed to use that jutsu, it's already a mess with normal shinobis.

    (Doton: Shukushō Shitsu no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Shrinking Chamber Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: A relatively simple technique where by performing the ram - tiger - horse hand seals the user is able to manipulate a chamber of earth and cause it to shrink thus reducing the space within so if an opponent is inside the chamber they could be forced into a tight enclosure and thus induce mental stress from the tightened space and could even cause the target to be crushed.
    Note: Can only be used every two turns.

    (Doton: Shitsu no kakudai no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Expanding Chamber Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique is the opposite to the Earth Release: Shrinking Chamber in that it expands a surrounding chamber that is to small or enclosing on the user and forcibly pushing it outwards away from the user and thus creating space. For example techniques such as dessert burrial the user could use this technique to prevent being crushed.
    Note: can only be used every two turns.

    ~Both Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

    (Kuchiyose: Thor) - Summoning: Thor
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Thor is the King of the Red Panda. He is as tall as Ponta and he bears a large double headed war hammer that has been crafted from chakra metal which enables Thor to channel his elemental nature into the weapon for added power and he carries it on his back. he wields the hammer with his exceptionally large tail. He has an affinity for Lightning Element and can use the techniques up to what the user know's. He is capable of slamming his hammer onto the ground to activate the earth elemental techniques. He is also the largest Red Panda summoning and due to his size he can travel across terrain quite quickly. He has thick fur that prevents him from being harmed by C rank and below Ice ninjutsu. He also has good hearing and a kean sense of smell allowing him to find hidden targets even when his field of vision is blocked.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per match
    Note: Can only remain on the field for 4 turns

    (Edited the mistake and removed the killing intent as per requested)

    ~Approved~

    New submittion

    (Doton: Hisan'na Kanbatsu no Jutsu ) - Earth Release: Disastrous Drought Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ram - Tiger - Dragon - Horse - Snake and then by manipulating their chakra and placing their hand on the ground the user will then cause the ground itself to begin drying up as water is then forced further down into the earth and causing the top layers of earth infront of the user to crack and cause the terrain to change with pieces of earth rising and falling a few meters which can be used for various strategic means such as causing the cracks to act as drainage for incoming water techniques that flow across the surface or cause the opponent to become unsturdy on their feet distracting them. This technique is also a perfect means to reveal and upturf any hidden underground dangers within a 2 meter depth.
    Note: The user can only be used every two turns and a maximum of three turns per battle.
    Note: The user cannot perform High Level Earth Techniques of A rank or above the following turn.

    ~Declined~ This technique is too similar to an existing one. The part where you dry the land from water is just a plain rip off, but the rest is ok. I suggest you re-work it and elaborate more on the ability to reveal hidden techniques/person underground.

    (Doton: Numachi Kengen no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Swamp Manifestation Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user makes the ram hand seal and then releases from their mouth the same substance that creates the swamp of the underworld but on a much smaller scale and they can use this to restrain their targets movements as it weights down on their body.


    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton:Kishou Tsumes)-Earth Release:Rising Claws
    Rank:A
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The User Performs 3 quick handseals and releases his Doton chakra into the ground, he will then create two long Earth arms from the ground that can go to Mid and long range.They are still connected to the ground so they can bend and change direction,When one hits the Enemy it while crush him within his hand causing damage and binding the opponent.It can also be used to create Bridges e.g
    Notes;
    -Can be used 3 times per Battle
    -Must be taught by Daiki

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. Don't resubmit.
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    (Suiton:Kanko Buryoku)-Water Release:Lagoon Force
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:N/a
    Description:The user can swiftly and suddenly create a barrier of water centimeters away from their body, the user can manipulate it to cover a side, quarter a body part etc..
    It Protects from thrown projectiles and any attack B-rank and below, but it weak to earth only being able to protect from C-rank attacks.
    Once used the user can dispel it.
    Notes;
    -Can only be used Twice
    -Cannot protect against attacks B-rank and above, but weak to earth
    -Must be taught by Daiki

    ~Declined~ In what way is this technique to any common water wall that was submitted in the past?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    Extending Sword is a custom weapon in which the sword absorbs the users chakra and uses it to extend and curve itself. It was made by the first swordsman of the hidden mist for the mitsuo family who used it for themselves.
    the blade is capable of reaching lengths equivalent to 80MPH. The mitsuo family passed it down to the first son of all the sons. Mitsuo himself perfected it to where it can travel 100MPH.

    Mitsuo refuses to give away his sword no matter what, even to digest into himself so that he would keep it to himself. ( he likes keeping things to himself for some reason >.>)

    ( Kakuchō ken )- extending sword

    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Cost: 80
    Description: The Blade absorbs the users chakra to allow it to etend to far and wide places. The Blade has a special kind of steel made into it wich allows it to absorbs someones chakra. Since it isn't real metal the blade can curve its selve as well.
    * can only be used 3 times a battle *
    * the blade can be broken if come in clashes with a forbidden weapon *
    * can be used as a regular katana to sword clash with a target...but it can't be extended once that happens*
    (Special Note: Once the blade is extended it can be countered by stronger ( forbidden) or equal strength ( S-rank) to stop it from piercing them.)








    ( Kakuchō ken: Gin no hikari )- : extending sword: silver rain
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Type: Offensive
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The Blade Absorbs the User Chakra which then allows the blade to extend. The Blade Must be charged for it to take to its fullest affect. Once the blade is charged the user aims and extend it at the sky. From the heat and pressure it gets for going up the air the blade breaks into 5 pieces wich shine of the sun and falls down with great speed from the sky . In order to make sure the blade doesn't get to the user, the user can redirect it to go where ever the want it since it is part of blade that absorbed the chakra.
    *once used can't be used again since the blade is broke =/*
    * can only be used by those who posses extending blade/sword

    ( 1 Katana 100 burēdo )- : 1 sword 100 blades
    Rank: B
    Range: close
    Type: Offensive , defensive
    Chakra cost:25
    Damage cost: 40
    Description: This attack consists of a extremely quick, precise thrust of the extending blade to the opponent.The User thrust blade 100 times at the enemy. The user does this with extremley fast thrusts. it can;t be used if there are any injuries to the hand.

    ~All Declined~ I made the mistake of accepting a custom that reach further then mid-range once. It will not happen again. Keep it short range, and maybe mid-range if you restrict it well.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ~Custom Weapon~

    Buki: Gilgamesh
    Rank: S
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: N/A

    Description:A set of black guantlet and greave-like weapons that use the elements of fire and lightning. When equipped they are attatched to the forearms or shins and at their ends channel the elemental claws of Gilgamesh. They are very versatile.When not in use Gilgamesh can be holstered on the users back.
    Gilgamesh's most notable unique trait is it's ability to switch between two elemental states: slow but powerful fire claws, and nimbly weak electric claws. These two states also come with slightly different combo chains, effectively making Gilgamesh two weapons in one. Since Gilgamesh can be worn on both the arm and legs it can be worn however the user wants in battle and changed during battle also. Both pairs of Gauntlets can only use one elemental type of energy at a time so when in its fire mode the abilities of its lightning mode cannot be used unless it will cost more chakra to maintain, in this case one Gilgamesh gauntlet is in Fire mode and the other is lightning mode.

    Normal mode
    -In this mode Gilgamesh has no special abilities and only used to add more effect to taijutsu attacks e.g. clawing an opponent with kicks and slashes


    Lightning Mode
    -When in its lightning Mode Gilgamesh has the ability to destroy on contact any earth element jutsu A rank or lower due to its elements nature
    -It has the ability in lightning mode to numb the opponent on contact
    -It can boost the users speed when worn on the legs in this mode causing the user to move so fast that it causes the user to suffer from slight motion sickness after its used.

    Fire Mode
    -Able to disperse wind element jutsu A rank or lower on contact due to its elemental nature
    -It has the ability to cause second degree burns to an opponent on contact

    ~Restrictions~
    -Switching elemental modes during battle is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Switching between wearing Gilgamesh on arms and legs is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Holstering/drawing Durga in battle is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Speed boost allows the user to evade an attack or get close to the enemy and it can only be used twice in battle
    -Destroying either an earth element attack or wind element attack is equivalent to one jutsu used and can only be used thrice in battle
    -Jutsu that require hand signs and ninja weapons can't be used while wearing Gilgamesh on the arms
    -Cannot stand on water while wearing Gilgamesh on the legs
    -Must be a S-Class Ninja or above to wear
    -Once worn it drains 2 chakra every turn
    -If Durga comes in contact with B rank or above water jutsu while in lightning mode it will shock the user and if it comes in contact while in fire mode with B rank or above water jutsu it will be deactivated for one turn
    -When they are using both elements the user loses 40 chakra points each turn
    Durga can be worn on one arm and one leg but reduces the effects it has on jutsu only able to counter C rank and below jutsu of either earth or lightning
    -Can only be used by Swizzik or any person he gives permission to












    ~Declined~ Make it 1 element, and take out the part where you can dispel any element up to A-rank with it. Also, why in the world would you receive a speed boost? Please elaborate on the abilities and the power ups that it gives you (+5, +10...etc).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I'd like to remind everyone that every approved custom jutsu need to be posted in your personal thread.

    You are forbidden from using your custom if it wasn't posted in your personal custom jutsu thread beforehand.

    For those who were unaware of such rule, the first post of this thread as now been updated with it.

    This rule will be applied starting now. Every member who does not updated his thread (or didn't create one), will be banned from this thread for a period of 1 week.


    Thank you all.
     
         

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