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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Divine Log (Kami no rogu)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The divine log is a powerful log and legendary weapon used in old ages. Renges Nara found this while he is on a mission. It looks heavy but the holder only know that it is lighter than a normal sword. The wielder is said to be chosen by the Log itself. The log is as hard as steel. It ordinary looks is just a log but inside, it has a humongous and massive chakra. Renges is the next chosen one. A blow from this can crack bones.
    Notes:
    - Can be only used under Renges's permission.
    - A slam to the ground with this log can create shock waves at short range and it is C-rank.
    - The shockwave slam can only be done 3 times
    - A blow to a chest can make a final blow.
    - It can float on water.
    - When carried by others, the log become very heavy for them.
    In case you might misunderstood of something:


    ~Declined~ While the medium is different (a log lol) the abilities are the same as any club or some gauntlet that enhance strength. The whole "hitting the ground creating a shockwave" was done dozens of time so it's a no go. Take out the part where you say you can kill your opponent with a blow to the chest, this is ridiculous.

    Divine Log: Divine blow(Kami no rogu: Kami no ichigeki)
    Type: Attack/Weapon move
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60(But very critical)
    Range: Long
    Description: Using the divine log, the user charge all of its chakra with it. Slamming the ground with it. It creates earthquakes and fissures, which then turn into powerful shockwaves which attack the target's feet, making the powerful chakra of log flows into the target and hit him hard.
    Notes:
    - A large area effect
    - The user cannot use any jutsu after using this jutsu
    - Can only be used with Divine log

    ~Declined~ Divine log wasn't approved.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-28-2011 at 02:32 AM. Reason: remove a jutsus and will make a summoning

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton Chikyū no shitsuryō no sōsa) Earth style: Earth mass manipulation
    Type:Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: C - S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20\25\30\40
    Damage Points: 30\40\60\80
    Description:The user gathers their earth chakra carefully then slams their palms on the ground. The amount is what depends on the strength and range of the attack. The users their earth chakra their fullest then releases it into the ground. Either making it very soft to escape or else iron hard to use as a defense. The effect doesn't last forever but just two turns - three turns. It could be used to make the ground soft to suck the enemy in then change the earth again to make it hard so he can't escape or gets crushed.
    * C is only on the ground below you
    * B and A are up to short range
    * S is up to med range
    * Can only be used twice for C - A.
    * Can only be used once for S rank.
    * Can only be used on one person at a time.
    * Can only be taught by Alphonse Elric

    (Please edit this jutsu where you see fit. The S rank seems a bit OP and I'm not sure if it should be removed or not. So do so if you desire.)

    ~Declined~ This jutsu is a mess @__@ re-read yourself. Either make 1 for every rank or make it a fixed rank (no C-S rank will be accepted). Look around the thread for the customs that were accepted and try to follow that template.

    (Doro no same) Mud shark
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C - A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost:20\25\30
    Damage Points: 30\40\60
    Description: By doing several hand seals the users summons 1 - 3 sharks in a mud river. The mud sharks can be healed if they are still in the mud when they are hit unless it's by a lightning jutsu. Which then they can not regenerate where they got hit. They must be summoned in a mud source. If combined with water they can move faster with the current.
    * Can only be taught by Alphonse Elric

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

    (Moruaraiguma) Molecoon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Molecoon is slightly larger then little raccoon. He spent most of his time from birth until now underground. Becoming one with the earth. He is able to use up to B rank earth techniques that doesn't require hand seals. His fur is constantly covered in the earth's minerals making him slightly more vulnerable to lightning techniques. Due to being underground most of his life he has poor vision, can only see up to short range. He relies mostly on his advanced hearing skills to find his enemy.
    * Using one of his earth techniques counts as your own move.
    * If a C+rank fire technique goes towards him he is blinded.
    * Lasts for only 3 turns
    * Must have raccoon contract

    **Edit where you see fit.**

    ~Declined~ We only accept real animals, not fictional creation. If it so happens the "molecoon" exist, submit it as a new contract.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-28-2011 at 02:36 AM. Reason: Corected spelling errors and editted jutsu slightly. x.x

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fuuton| Renkuudan - [Wind Release| Steroid Blanks]
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user collects chakra in his arm summoning wind in a "blank round," and then punches out directing the chakra through his arm and out his fist as powerful blasts of invisible swirling wind embedded with incredible amounts of chakra shoot foward that can clear whole stretches of forestry and blast straight through a fire technique of A-rank and below gathering the fire onto itself. Even the most powerful of ninjas can't create more then three blanks in a single battle without destroying their lungs.
    [Usable Twice]

    ~Declined~ Make it clear whether you can shoot more then one blank with each usage of the jutsu and re-submit.

    Doton| Monolith Spear [Earth Release| Yamayari
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user first creates four hand signs Dog → Bird → Ox → Horse while interjecting chakra into the ground. When complete, a gigantic spear of rock about the size of one of the ones used for Earth Release| Mountain Smash will shoot from the earth, hitting the opponent, and causing damage as the spear sends them flying. It's massive size can also be used to give the user a vantage point in the sky.
    [No Earth Techniques next turn]

    ~Declined~ Restrictions on it's usage? Also, re-work it, I'm still unclear on what it does. You're basically creating a giant ass spike right?

    Doton| Monolith Cannon [Earth Release| Yamahou]
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After using Doton| Monolith Spear, the user will flash another three handseals Ox → Horse → Bird and slam his palm on the Spear. By doing this it opens up 6 holes in the monolith which will fire massive boulders at the opponent.
    [Usable Once]

    ~Declined~ Monolith Spear was declined.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-28-2011 at 02:39 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Dimension Sword (Jigen no ken)
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: Chakra Slice: 60
    Elemental Slice: 70
    Description: The blade is a special one. It was rumored to be founded in a strange land and even Hell itself. The blade has a special power where the user can pour chakra into it and launch the chakra in the form as a slice of energy. This move can also be used with elements, launching a blade of lightning, a strong wave of water, or a stream of fire. The user can also infuse it with chakra to repair any damage done by B rank or below jutsu. The blade can also emit chakra in the form of a red shield capable of blocking C-rank or below techniques.
    ~Can only be wielded by Rikerslade or those with his permission~
    ~Only one bio at a time can have this blade period unless summoned by another bio~
    ~After five turns, the blade loses its ability to repair damage for the remainder of the match~
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    ~Declined~ No sword shooting blasts/crescent blasts or absorbing elements will be approved. You seriously need to work on the restrictions for this sword; how many times can you use an ability?
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-28-2011 at 02:41 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ("Tetsusaiga" Raikou Buzzard Shikon) "Tetsusaiga" Lightning Buzzard Fang
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short (Mid-Long for special ability)
    Chakra Points: N/A (+30 for Wind Scar)
    Damage Points: N/A (+60 for Wind Scar)
    Description: Tetsusaiga is a special great sword carved with a special alloy making it as hard as cold steel and special feathers from the lightning buzzard, allowing it to channel lightning chakra for more cutting power. The fur at the end is a conductor, so the user is unaffected by Wind Scar. Due to its sheer size, it can over come smaller weapons such as Katanas, staffs, nunchucks etc. unless it has special properties. The weapon also has a special ability called "Wind Scar" where the user releases a blast/wave of yellow lightning that levels almost anything in its path. The weapon itself can absorb lightning of B-rank and lower to add to the power of Wind Scar.
    Notes:
    -Wind Scar is equal to A-rank Lightning
    -Wind scar can be used 4 times
    -Counts as one of the three used justu per turn
    -Can only absorb lightning of B-rank and lower
    -Can only absorb one lightning tech every 3 turns


    The sword itself and the move it uses


    Owned by Taiketsu and note that I had to take out the reference to the speed chart due to the CJ rules Approved

    (Tetsusaiga: Raikou gachin Ken) "Tetsusaiga" Lightning Clash Sword
    Type:Attack|defend
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: When the user releases the yellow lightning of tetsusaiga, he will use advance chakra control to cause the lightning to surround the great sword completly. The sword will become three times the size it was before and take on a golden hue. It has the properties of lightning, making it sharper and because the yellow lightning was compressed, its much more powerful. One swing of this sword can over come almost all defenses and literaly cause a "scar" in the earth.
    Note: Counts as one of the times Wind Scar can be used

    Owned by Taiketsu approved
    Im dropping Tetsusaiga and jutsu for this new CW if approved. (I thought outside elemental blasts atleast xD)

    "Bakusaiga"
    Rank:S
    Type:Weapon
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description: "Bakusaiga" the weapon of legend that gave the holder the supposed power of a tailed demon. Whoever held this weapon would get a very dense chakra so ominous that they were put into legends and folk tales. Taiketsu Yagami found this sword and the truth behind it came with a tablet only readable by those combatible with the chakra. The sword's abilities actually come from a monster known as "Yama" A artificial chakra monster with chakra levels so dense and high, it was considered a 0 tailed beast. The Sage of Six Path's decendent was able to kill off the monster and seal his chakra into the sword while engraving a seal that allowed the chakra to mix with the person who held it if compatable. When the user releases the seal, they become infused with the chakra making them a monster in a sense by giving them demonic chakra with very high chakra levels.

    ~Abilities:
    -This sword syncs with the user making the user's chakra become very dense and demonic while taking on a green hue, increasing the power of non-elemental ninjutsu[+5] aswell as making all chakra based techniques to be equal to an elemental technique of the same rank.
    -The amount of chakra being channeled causes the user's chakra levels to rise substantually. (They can be considered a tailed beast without a tail like Kisame)
    -When a foreign object touches the user's chakra, they get burned in a similar manner to Naruto in his incomplete form since the chakra is so demonic.
    -The sword itself is virtually indestructable due to alloy it is made from and can stand very high temperatures.

    ~Restrictions:
    -While using this sword, the user can only use techniques that require creating the jutsu or element itslef since this chakra can't be channled into foreign objects.
    -The sword's granted abilities last 5 turns after activation
    -The user suffers in a similar manner to Naruto while wielding it after activation. (After 5 turns of using this chakra, the user's body begins to shut down starting with right arm, next turn left arm, next turn legs, and then next turn body making them completely paralyzed and in need of medical attention.
    -The user is limited to only two moves a turn while this is active
    -Can only be wielded by Taiketsu Yagami (Anyone else, the chakra would severly injure as it can't mix with theirs.)



    ~Approved~ Well done.


    "Kei Seken"
    Also known as "Strong Worlds" taijutsu; This style of combat was invented by barbaric ice warriors who pillage villages taking down their mightiest warriors using this style. This style was later adopted by wise monks who were able to incorporate it into a even more deadly style of combat which would explain it's somewhat brutal and barbaric type of attacks. This style became known as "Kei Sekken" Strong World Taijutsu. Kei Seken is based off enduring blows to the body while performing one hit knockouts using all strength and energy into one specific blow rather than multiple ones. The user's stance is always having a fluid lower body while having a solid upper body (Opposite of gentle fists techniques that require fast paced with little damage) meaning that most techniques are slower but deal way more damage and this can be reversed to make kicks devestating. The fluid lower body is so that the user can move around freely and quickly while the solid upper body is to keep the muscles tense and clinched for powerful impacts(reverse if for legs). Some masters of this art were actually able to take it a step further and were able to incorporate their spirit and physical energy(chakra) into their body to increase it's reflexis, strength, and impacts to perform very powerful techniques that under normal circumstances, they can't perform (Nowhere near that of the 5th Hokage and Sakura although could be considered a water downed version). Most techniques of Kei Sekken involve enduring, countering, or dodging a technique and then performing a deathly blow to the opponent mostly through using a part of the body that can deal the most blunt damage such as the elbow, fist, knee, fore head, foot, etc. Its not the fastest style but it makes up for it in power

    (Learning Requirements and pluses to learning):
    -To learn this style, the user must already have a certain degree of strength and endurance(S-Class Ninja) and have trained in basic taijutsu as its not effective with people who are of weaker body or untrained.

    -Pluses to learning is the strength and durability development in both mind and body. The user would be able to match someone a rank higher than him in both strength and endurance (Does not apply with being a sage). Also, the user could now ignore his/her surroundings except the opponent if he/she wants to.


    ~Approved~

    Example:

    "Kei Sekken" Strong World Reversal Blow
    Rank:B
    Type:Attack|Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description: One of the basic counters those who train in Kei Sekken learn after raising their endurance in battle. After being hit by the opponent in any location above the waist line that doesn't inflict great pain (such as being hit in the neck, jaw, or other very vital areas), the user counters by grabbing the opponent's arm/leg tight between their tricep and side so that they are locked in place for a moment (more effective with leg as they also lose balance). The user keeps hold of the arm/leg and channels chakra into their other elbow to increase impact and damage; Then performing a very powerful elbow drop into their stomach that is so pwerful, it knocks them out of the user's grip and sends them plummiting into the floor. This causes tremendous damage to the opponent's torso possibly fracturing the rib cage if aimed for the chest.
    Note:Can only be used after being hit by a technique up to D-rank or free form taijutsu. The user still takes damage from that technique but due to endurance, they can still pull this technique off.
    Note: Exceptions are being punched or hit in vital areas such as the neck, jaw, etc.
    Note: Does not work on opponents with higher durability/stamina/strength etc. if stated in bio (meaning they are stronger or more durable then the user is so this wouldn't work)
    Note:Must be S-Class or higher to use.


    ~Approved~

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    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-28-2011 at 03:07 AM. Reason: Cleared up "Kei Sekken" and Strong World Reversal Blow's description

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ‡Yamato - The Devil's Blade‡
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 [+20 per turn to maintain the sensing ability]
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 to Wind Release Techniques, +5 to Kenjutsu Techniques]
    Description: The Yamato 閻魔刀 Or in other words "The Devil's Blade" Resembles a Japanese Ōkatana though it's said to cut through Almost any ordinary sword with ease, as it's even sharper than a normal Ōkatana, it's either strapped on the user's left or right side, Yamato is an Ōkatana which has a black scabbard with a golden ribbon tied around it with the blade's handle itself was wrapped in white silk cloth with an intricate design of black silk covering the sides of the handle make a straight line to the guard while sheathed, What makes the Yamato sharper than a Normal Ōkatana is that it takes the use of the user's Wind release chakra around the blade and has the power to amplify the user's wind release techniques, when the user infuses wind chakra to the blade a raging wind aura forms around the blade increasing it's sharpness as the wind aura spins around rapidly allowing the user to use any wind release techniques that requires the usage of handseal with one less handseal than it normally requires and the user can perform wind release techniques on a faster rate than a normal ninja as if the user has the wind specialty, the last special ability to the blade is that it releases wind infused with the user's chakra which resembles a non-harmful wind breeze in the whole battlefield that let's the user sense the surrounding and know the exact location of any object or person that contains chakra within when it comes into contact with the wind breeze, this sensing ability only let's the user sense over anyone over the ground or into the air, the user can't sense anyone that's located underground from him and he is able to sense his location only when the opponent is emerging from underneath the ground to the surface of the ground, the user has to be holding the blade in one of his hands for this special sensing ability to work as he has to infuse the sword with a small amount of wind chakra every turn to maintain the sensing ability active.
    Note: Must have mastered the Wind Release to weild this Ōkatana
    Note: The user's Wind Release Techniques gain +10 additional damage points.
    Note: This Ōkatana is indestructible however it doesn't mean that it can cut through everything.


    ~Declined~ Take out the sensing ability, it was already created. Make it +5.

    [Ranton: Rasen kachū No Bōfū] - Storm Release: Spiraling Vortex Of The Storm
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 [+5 for each additional small thundercloud]
    Description: This is an advanced Storm release technique that's similar to the lightning fang technique, After forming a small set of handseals [Snake → Ram → Monkey] the user gathers a large amount of water and lightning chakra simultaneously and sends it's essence at the sky using his storm release Kekkei Genkai, causing one large thunder/Storm clouds to form that's entirely made from the storm release chakra with small thunderclouds spinning around it though it's completely different than Kirin's thunderclouds as it's made by the user's storm release chakra not made by the natural occurance of rapidly heating up the atmosphere, using these thunderclouds to trigger a F-5 spiraling energy blast along with 2-F smaller energy beams that's made from the smaller thunderclouds that thrusts downwards onto the battlefield at fast speeds due to it's lightning chakra propitiates in a spiraling motion devastating what it comes in contact with and leaving a huge crater in the air it touches from the ground.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Can only form up to 3 small thunderclouds around the main big thundercloud.
    Note: The user can't use Storm Release techniques for the Next turn.

    ~Declined~ Not sure I understand how you interpreted the power of the technique. Is it a beam, a blast/shockwave, or a tornado/vortex? Cause you said it was an F-5 spiraling energy blast Could be interpreted in many ways. Elaborate on that, also take out the small thundercloud or make you jutsu 65 damage with +5 for each thundercloud added (max 3).


    [Ranton: Sankaku Seishō Sōsen] - Storm Release: Triangular Energy Beam

    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 [+20 If used in conjunction with the Laser Circus Technique]
    Description: After forming a set of 4 handseals [Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat] The user gathers a large amount of Water and Lightning chakra into both of their hands resulting in making storm release chakra afterwards the user points both of his palms forward wide open while releasing his storm release chakra nd using shape manipulation abilities to form a shape of a gigantic triangular beam double the same size of the earth and stone dragon teachnique that has 3 tomoe shapes each at the triangle's angle that thrusts at the opponent's location at fast speeds while spinning around rapidly forming a spiraling orb at the center of the triangle that's spinning around rapidly drilling into anything that comes in contact with it , this technique becomes exceptionally powerful when it's used in conjunction[Before] with the laser circus technique, using the static energy beams that the user releases from the laser circus technique and the ability to manipulate[bend] the energy beams at the user's well, the user shoots energy beams from the laser circus technique that merges with each tomoe that are located in each of the angles of the triangular beam, causing it to rapidly increase in size the faster it travels towards the target as well as increase in the triangular shape rotation speed.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: No Storm release techniques for the next turn.
    Note: The laser circus technique must be used after this technique in the same turn in order to enhance it's size and rotation speeds.

    ~Declined~ OP. Twice the size of earth and stone dragon? Might as well destroy the whole field in front of you.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-28-2011 at 02:59 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: Gogyou Kyuutai) - Fire Style: Fire Orb
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40 (if get touched)
    Description: User creates a orb of fire around his whole body of radius 2m. As user is in the centre of the orb, fire jutsus upto B-rank and Wind jutsus upto A-Rank wont affect him.
    Note: ~Wind jutsus wont affect him because if someone uses it, the orb will only become stronger.



    (Fuuton: Kaze Kyuutai) - Wind Style: Wind Orb
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40 (if get touched)
    Description: User creates a orb of slicing wind around his whole body of radius 2m. As user is in the centre of the orb, wind jutsus upto B-rank and lightning jutsus upto A-rank and earth jutsus upto A-Rank wont affect him.
    Note: ~Earth jutsus wont affect him because if someone uses it then it will be sliced.


    (Fuuton: Raikou Kyuutai) - Wind Style: Lightning Orb
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40 (if get touched)
    Description: User creates a orb of lightning around his whole body of radius 2m. As user is in the centre of the orb, lightning jutsus upto B-Rank and earth jutsus upto A-rank and water jutsus upto A-Rank wont affect him.
    Note: ~Water jutsus wont affect him because if someone uses it then the orb will only become stronger.

    Edit any part if required..

    ~All Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-28-2011 at 03:01 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal : Alligators (Crocodiles if you prefer, practically the same, just different characteristics)
    Scroll Owner : -Yusuke- (got him to hold it for me but once I reach Jounin, I'll be handed ownership of the scroll)
    Other users who have signed the contract : Gondar
    Summoning Boss if Existing : Not yet
    Other Summoning Animals Tied to Contract : Chunk ^_^

    (Kuchiyose : Chanku) - Summoning Technique : Chunk
    Type : Summoning
    Rank : B
    Range : N/A
    Chakra cost : 25
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : After performing the required handseals, the user is capable of summoning a moderate-sized alligator with darkish green skin. Chunk is one of the older alligators living among his kind. Unlike other alligators, Chunk has the toughest natural skin among all of them. This is because in all Chunk's life, he has been working and working, day by day, carrying stones on his back due to the uncivilized world they used to live in. It was said that he even tried eating rocks back then but of course it was not true. This rumor has been going around as Chunk has the capability of launching a barrage of materialized earthen pebbles from his mouth. These bullets are amazingly fast but loses their momentum when it passes the point of long-range. The full potential of the stone barrage can only be utilized at opponents at short or mid-range, which is of A-rank damage. It is only at B-rank damage when hits opponents at long-range.

    Note : Can only be used or taught by Gondar
    Note : Must have signed the Alligator contract
    Note : Chunk can only be summoned two times per battle
    Note : Can only shoot the barrage of stones five times per battle
    Note : Barrage of stones counts as a move towards the three jutsu rule
    Note : Must wait a turn before being able to summon Chunk again after he poofs away
    Note : Able of protecting the user against physical damage up to B-rank (Earth, water, wind)

    ~Both Declined~ Contract already exist.

    (Fuuton : Hanpatsuryoku) - Wind Release : Repelling Force
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : C
    Range : Short (Can be activated on solid projectiles at any range)
    Chakra cost : 15
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : This technique is a deception-wise type of technique where the user will cause the wind around a shooting projectile, such as a kunai or shuriken, to repel enemy objects that are shot at it for the purpose of deflecting them. By concentrating the user's wind chakra around the projectile, the wind will rapidly spin around the projectile without having to alter or disturb the speed, strength and range of the shooting projectile. The wind isn't cutting edge enough to harm a human but only to push them back a bit.

    Note : Can be used five times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by Gondar
    Note : Not suitable for cutting or slicing purposes
    Note : Can only be used upon shooting projectiles such as kunais, shurikens and others
    Note : Not capable of repelling huge objects such as walls or anything as big as a human, only a push

    ~Approved~ Brilliant.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal : Mice (Mausu)
    Scroll Owner : Renges
    Other users who have signed the contract : N/A
    Summoning Boss if Existing : N/A
    Other Summoning Animals Tied to Contract : Fur

    ~Approved~

    Summoning jutsu: Giant Mice (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodai Mausu)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: These mice are humongous, and they have the size of Gamabunta. They are specially trained to resist heat and weather effects. They varies in shape and structures but they are all powerful because of nutritious food. They are also capable of using their chakra to attack More information on (CLICK)

    ~Declined~ You can't summon multiple mice at once (unless it's a very particular summon that summon 2 or 3 (max) smaller summons that work together). Create a jutsu for a specific summon with specific ability. Don't be vague. Also, the size is a no-go. Only your boss summon can be as big as Gamabunta.

    Summoning Animals Tied to Contact
    Summoning jutsu: Fur (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kegawa)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After forming the handseals, the user summon Fur. Fur is the greatest friend of Renges, and Renges always summon it first. It teeth are sharply edged, and claw too. Renges named him "Fur" because his fur is so cozy and good to sleep on him. After charging its chakra, Fur will open his mouse and make a huge hurricane like C-rank wind attack.
    - Take a turn to charge
    - Every technique Fur performs count toward the user's 3 moves per turn

    ~Approved~ Added a restriction.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    The Dagger (Za Tanken)
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    Type: Weapon

    Rank: A

    Range: Short/Mid

    Chakra Cost: N/A

    Damage Points:

    Description: The Dagger, or Za Taken is a medium sized sword for one on one combat. It is very sharp and consists of indesructible metal plating on its surface. slim as It looks, it is very dangerous in the hands of a fast user. The User can also insert his/her lightning chakra in it so that the blade's cutting ability is increased. When in chakra infused mode, the blade can cut through solid rock.

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    ~Approved~ I took out the damage part. We usually never put damage because it's somewhat irrelevant for a sword.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Pegasus Blade & Sharp Sound Sword

    Type: Weapon (Sword)

    Rank:S

    Chakra Cost: N/A

    Damage Points: N/A

    Description: Pegasus Blade:
    A Blade made of Steel. This blade has been passed down from users of the legendary Pegasus beyblade. This blade is mainly made of Steel, but this Steel is imbued with Fire Chakra, so you can combine Katon with this blade with Quickness and Strength unseen before. The hilt is made of Pegasus feathers and more Steel covered with the feathers.

    Sharp Sound Sword: Other Names: Mic. Sword. This sword is remembered for being shaped like a Microphone and having the ability to produce sound from its hilt after clashing with another blade. these sounds can cause genjutsu if you add chakra into the blade. This sword is made up of Sharp Sides and Gold Additions. The hilt looks like a Microphone, hence the name. In it's sheath, it resembles a bat with the same hilt.

    Pictures: Pegasus Blade:


    Sharp Sound Sword (Microphone Sword):


    ~Declined~ Only submit 1 CW at a time (considering you're allowed 1 CW, I'll rephrase it that way: choose 1 sword between your 2). If you take the genjutsu one, you need to elaborate on the genjutsu, how you use it, how you cast it on your opponent...etc.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Washi) - Wind Style: Wind Eagle
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user focuses he's wind chakra and blows out forming a visible wind style attack which is shaped like an Eagle, The Eagle moves at fast speed and attacks in a swerving motion meaning it will end up hitting the enemy from the side, Which side it hits the enemy is decided by the person who uses this jutsu.
    Note:Can only be used by RockLeeGreenBeast

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    Summoning Animal: Wolverine
    Scroll owner: RockLeeGreenBeast
    Other users who have signed this contract: None.
    Summoning boss if any: None.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None.


    Kuzuri: Kamimasu (Wolverine:Bite off)
    Type:Summoning/Attack
    Rank: B
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 35
    Damage Points:45
    Description:The user summons a wolverine which moves in a swerving motion at fast speed towards the opponent, the wolverine then digs through the ground and digs out behind the opponent and attacking by biting the opponents arm off.

    ~Declined~ The Wolverine contract already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal:Armadillo
    Scroll Owner:TheGreyFox
    Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:stag the the giaint armadillo
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A


    Bonce slam(baundo gachan)
    Type:Summoning/Attack
    Rank: B
    Range:Mid/long
    Chakra Cost: 35
    Damage Points:45
    Description:The user summons a giaint armadillo that shoots up in to the air and slams into the enemey trying to crush the enemey

    Roll out(ro-ru auto)
    Type:summoning/Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:long
    chakra cost:45
    Damage:50
    Description:The user summons the armadillo and its curls up into a ball and rolls twords the enemey at a blinding speed smashing eneything in its path

    Spike roll out(gosunkugi,ro-ru auto)
    Type:summoning/Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:long
    chakra cost:50
    Damage:55
    Description:The user summons a giaint armadillo and the giaint armadillo and covers the user in a ball by useing theair combind charka thay create spikes and rolls twords the enemey

    Man best combo(banbutsunoreichou kan konbo)
    Type:summoning/fusion
    Rank:A
    Range:long
    chakra cost:50
    Damage:60
    Description:The user summons the boss stag the the giaint armadillo and preforms the man best fusion combining the two the user now has armadillo skin makeing the suer stronger and giving the user the ablity to cover the users body when needed


    ~All Declined~ You were banned from this thread up to the 5 of December. I would've banned you again for not respecting the 3 submissions per week rule anyway.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by TheGreyFox View Post
    Summoning Animal:Black Rhino
    Scroll Owner:TheGreyFox
    Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:Rinox the black rhino
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    I have the Rhino summon, so please delete this.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    RESUMBIT

    Quote Originally Posted by WastedMonkey View Post
    (Raiton: Raikou Kagai - Lightning Style: Lightning Blitz

    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the user focuses their lightning chakra in between their hands and will make a shape of a ball. the user will then drop the concentrated lightnng chakra and kick it towards the enemy with great speed. The Blitz generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

    Note: Can be used 3 times
    Note: No A-rank and above lightning jutsu for the next round.
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey


    ~Declined~ Already exist


    (Raiton: Raikou Kagai)- Lightning Style: Lightning Blitz

    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the user focuses their lightning chakra all over their body, then they do 3 hand seals and release the raiton chakra towards the direction of the opponent. The raiton jutsu will take the form of the user and it will generate more force the longer it takes to hit the target. The Blitz rushes towards the opponent with great speed it generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

    Note: If used from long range and hits the opponent, the opponent will be stunned for 1 turn.
    Note: Blitz cannot change direction
    Note: Can be used 3 times
    Note: No A-rank and above lightning jutsu for the next round.
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    ~Pending~ You're basically doing a lightning clone that rush toward you opponent? VM me for explanations and re-submit afterward. Take out the part where destroy everything that touch your attack, that's just OP.

    Quote Originally Posted by WastedMonkey View Post

    (Kanshō and Bakuya - Raiton: Dendo Shio) - Kanshō and Bakuya - Lightning Release: Electric Tide
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user first pierce the ground/wall with one sword. Then the users charges huge amounts of raiton chakra into the other sword. The swords, having a strong bond with each other, will channel the raiton chakra. The sword that is not with the user will then release an electrical tide of lightning around it (in a horizontal manner up going outwards up to mid range from the sword).

    Note: Usable only twice
    Note: No Raiton Jutsu for a turn after use
    Note: If user gets hit by the tide, user will take half the damage
    Note: Only usable if user wields Kanshō and Bakuya

    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    looks something like this




    ~Declined~ Both technique already exist (the first one was made in another element).

    (Raiton: Dendo Shio) - Lightning Release: Electric Tide
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 40/60/80

    Description: The user will first do 2 handseals and gathers raiton chakra all over their body. The user will then do a third handseal and release the gathered raiton chakra all around him in a circular manner to make an electrical tide up to long range. When the tide hits its maximun range, it will then travel back to the user. The damage dealt is base on the distance from the user. If the opponent is in short range the tide deals 40, mid is 60, and long is 80.
    Note: Usable only twice
    Note: No Raiton Jutsu for the same turn and turn after
    Note: Opponent only takes damage once
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    looks something like this




    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    New Submission
    (Raiton: Yari no Shirei) - Lightning Release: Spear of Command
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will do two quick handseals and charge raiton chakra into both of his hands. the user then brings his hand together and release the raiton chakra. A spear of lightning will the emit form the users hands towards the direction of the opponent. The user will be able to control the direction and movement of the spear as long as their hands are together.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times
    Note: No Ration Jutsu the same turn
    Note: Hands must be together to control the spear.
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. Watch out, this is very similar to a cannon technique. I ban anyone who copies cannon techniques.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton-Mizu dorein)Water release: Water drain
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user sends a strong amount of water chakra into any water surface. Then he makes that chakra rotate around in high speeds thus creating a whirlpool on the water which will or can suck the opponent into the water and due to the swirling chakra the opponent will get hurt.

    Note:Must be on a water source
    Note:This move can send a opponent about 5 meters into the water

    ~Declined~ I think I made myself clear on cannon techniques so far, no rip off will be tolerated .Your jutsu is identical to this cannon technique, only 2 ranks higher:

    (Suiton: Daibakuryuu) - Water Style: Great Exploding Current
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: User creates a whirlpool that sucks any opponent in range underwater.(Must be performed on a water source)

    You are hereby banned from this thread for a period of 1 week. Your ban will be lifted on the 5th of December.


    (Fuuton:kaze hando) Wind release: Protected hand
    Type: Offence/defence
    Rank:S
    Range:short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user concentrates on his Wind chakra and sends it into his palms Via his hands and once all the chakra has come in place the user releases the chakra outside but once done the user will make the chakra turn around in his palms and hand so it looks like a mini tornado covering his arms,this technique can stop lightning based attacks below the rank of B.

    Note:Can be only used Once
    Note:No wind for a turn
    Note:This technique lasts 2 turns so once active no wind jutsus until the move finishes

    (Doton: Doton kanon)Earth release:Earth Canon
    Type: Offence/defence
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user starts this move by first, sending his doton chakra into the ground and once done he will use shape manipulation to make a earth canon which is filled with earth so then the user can shot earth balls at the opponent.

    Note:The Bullet can't be directed
    Note:Can be used only Once per battle
    Note:No earth above A-rank for the next turn

    ~All Declined~ Currently banned from this thread.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Black-Leg View Post
    1. ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Extra Haché ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Highest-rate Mincemeat
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Close
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60 (- 10 to user)
    Description: An user that knows Black-Leg taijutsu and has high speed can, once taught, use Highest-rate Mincemeat. The technique includes fast footwork and will work only if the target's short or close range from the user. To begin with this technique, user must jump in air and once he/she gets close enough to the opponent, user starts delivering fast paced kicks aimed at mainly opponent's torso area. The technique isn't automatically 60 damage but can be less if the opponent is a taijutsu specialist and/or has sharingan to increase their reaction time that he/she uses to block the hits. Even the hits are blocked, the kicks will hurt. If not blocked, user can aim at opponent's vitals and cause quite alot damage by hitting opponent's internal organs and bones. If this is combined with Diable Jambe, the technique gains burning attributes. As long as user's airborne he/she can attack their target with more taijutsu but once user lands, he/she is forced to jump backwards and allow their feet to rest for a short period of time (the higher user's rank is, the shorter time is required for feet to rest).
    • Can be used twice per battle with three turn interval between each usage.



    ~Approved~ No reference to the speed chart will be allowed so I took them out. The rest seemed fine.



    2. ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Armée de L'Air ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Air Force
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Range: Short - Close
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A (+ 40)
    Description: Air Force is a Black-Leg taijutsu technique designed for a counter attack or an opening. The technique itself is a chakra infused kick which takes form of 360 crescent kick. The kick itself is strong enough to send opponent flying away from the user. The kick can also be used to send allies flying into other ranges, though once a strong(er) kick is attempted user must spend more time concentrating before kicking. This can also be used quickly in openings to deal a quick hit to the opponent and then expose them for further combinations.
    • Can be used twice per battle
    • If you attempt on sending your ally to other range, the ally must jump on your leg just as you're kicking to guarantee the strength of kick to send him/her away.


    ~Approved~

    New one:

    3. ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Venaison Shoot ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Venison Shoot
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Close
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 60 (- 20 to user)
    Description: Before using this technique, one is required to have knowledge of how using Highest-rate Mincemeat and Diable Jambe. Combining these two attacks, Black-Leg taijutsu user is able of using a technique that is fatal on closer ranges. First, one must have activated Diable Jambe. After that the user jumps above opponent and starts spinning horizontally in a position where user's leg is pointing down at their opponent, he/she starts furiously kicking with one of their feet at opponent's chest and belly area as already activated Diable Jambe increases their strength. The kicks aren't dealing internal damage but are extremely strong and the places where hits are dealt can be seen through opponent's back as the user's ignited, glowing leg lands kicks on the target. After the spinning stops, user finishes with a powerful axe kick on the opponent's head/shoulder area which is strong enough to break stone. This technique is strong enough to deal considerable damage even to medium-sized summoning creatures.
    • This technique disables Diable Jambe after using (without strong cramps/leg strain to user that would come from Diable Jambe).
    • Can be used once per battle, and like after every fast paced attack, user requires few seconds to let their leg muscles relax.



    (jutsus one and two were completely remade with the same idea, but with better detail and restrictions)

    ~Declined~ Take out the part where you say it's fatal, no such jutsu will be approved. Rest seemed fine.
    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Venaison Shoot ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Venison Shoot
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Close
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 60 (- 20 to user)
    Description: Before using this technique, one is required to have knowledge of how using Highest-rate Mincemeat and Diable Jambe. Combining these two attacks, Black-Leg taijutsu user is able of using a technique that is powerful on closer ranges. First, one must have activated Diable Jambe. After that the user jumps above opponent and starts spinning horizontally in a position where user's leg is pointing down at their opponent, he/she starts furiously kicking with one of their feet at opponent's chest and belly area as already activated Diable Jambe increases their strength. The kicks aren't dealing internal damage but are extremely fast and the places where hits are dealt can be seen through opponent's back as the user's ignited leg lands kicks on the target. After the spinning stops, user finishes with a powerful axe kick on the opponent's head/shoulder area which is capable of shattering bones. This technique is strong enough to deal considerable damage even to small to medium-sized summoning creatures.
    • This technique disables Diable Jambe after using (without strong cramps/leg strain to user that would come from Diable Jambe).
    • Can be used once per battle, and like after every fast paced attack, user requires few seconds to let their leg muscles relax.



    ~Approved~

    ( Suiton: Kuēsā ) - Water release: Quasar
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive - Supplementary
    Range: Short ( - Mid )
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Quasar is an advanced water technique that got it's name from a supermassive blackhole which is surrounded by 140 trillion years old cloud of steam. To use this technique one must first coat themselves in Water chakra. The water chakra instantly attracts hydrogen and oxygen atoms around oxygen, pulling them towards the user while reforming these atoms into H20. In a flash user's surrounded by a dense orb of water with an air pocket in it (user isn't in contact with the water though) which can be used to defend incoming attacks quickly. Another way of using this technique is by performing the same steps as above but instead of creating a dense orb around user, large water droplets that extend all the way to mid-range are created which then can act as a conductor of electricity.
    • Can be used only twice per battle.


    ~Declined~ This technique is in no way different to any Water orb that was ever submitted.

    ( Jiton: Katsu ) - Magnetism release: Conquer
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive - Defensive - Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 10/20/30 (depending on the range where conquered)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Possessor of magnet release has an ability to create magnetic fields and strengthen them. By following this basis, one has the ability to reject and pull metals towards them. Conquer is an advanced version of the idea, giving the user an ability to magnetize objects at their will (It'll work only on metals that are affected by magnets). Just by pointing their hand at the target's direction, one can ''conquer'' by sending out a magnetic field that latches on to the magnetic field of the target that occurs naturally due to the static electricity that naturally flows through their body. This way user can move his/her target by waving their hand. This technique can also be used with two hands, giving user a control over two targets at the cost of weakened magnetic field(s). However, once this is active, user cannot perform hand seals. One other way of using is to magnetize area around themselves, making it reject metals that are affected of magnets for example (costs - 30 chakra by default). Advanced ninjas can notice this to be a magnet release technique.
    • No Magnet release techniques can be used while this is being used
    • User cannot perform hand seals/elemental techniques when this is active.
    • Advanced ninjas can identify this technique as a magnet release technique
    • Can be used three times per a battle with two turn interval between each usage.


    In short, it's a remote version of Jiga's ability make others magnetic by touching them.

    ~Declined~ I'm ok with the whole concept, but your restrictions aren't done well. Define a time limit on it's activation (how long can you keep control over metal with this jutsu?). 3 times a match is too much. I'd rather you making it S-rank and keeping it 2 times a match for 1 turn or 1 times a match for 3 turns. Your call. Lastly, make it clear you can't affect metal that are within short range of your opponent. I'm sorry but I'll never accept a technique that can turn the Kunai in your opponent's pouch against him before he could even react. With such a technique you could cripple your opponent without him having any chance to react. Same goes for him throwing a kunai.

    (I make it twice a match for 1 turn because of it allows you to be strategical with it's usage, opposed to 1 time for 3 turns.)
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Siberian Tiger
    Scroll Owner: Zanji
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: None at the moment
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None at the moment
    -This is different than Akiza's white tiger summoning, and I have her permission to create this summoning (only difference that I know of is color seeing as she summons White Tigers which is most likely of the Bengal Tiger Subspecies the Panthera Tigris Tigris, while this is the subspecies of the Panthera Tigris Altaica)

    ~Approved~

    (Nejibana) Twisted Flower
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A (+5 to water techniques, +10 when used liked a Ji/Trident or Bo staff)
    Description: Nejibana is a cross between a Trident and a Ji, with a crystalline appearance. Like most Ji's, it bares a horsehair tassel, with the only exception of it being blue rather than the traditional red. It also the two side blades are straight with concave edges, opposed to the usual crescent blade. At the end of the staff it has a corkscrew/drill shape. When the possessor of this weapon channels their water chakra into this weapon, water will freely flow from trident and the end of this weapon.
    Note: Only Zanji may use this weapon
    Note: This weapon is indestructible

    ~Declined~ Please elaborate on the +10. Is it referring to the water affinity or the damage done by the weapon when used in close combat? Also, what does it doe when water flows from the trident? You mean it will fill the field with water (or at least the your vicinity)?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Ying Yang Blades

    Rank : S
    Range : Short
    Chakra : N/A
    Damage : N/A
    Description : These blades were forged from the deepest pit in Mt. Torment. These blades have the affinity of fire, so Katon chakra courses through them, and they can make large fireballs that take 10 seconds to create that to 40 damage to the person it hits (costs 25 chakra to create) These blades are thick, yet light since they were made so perfectly.
    Note : Kyuubisan is the only one who can use it
    Note : Fireballs can only be used 5 times per battle
    Note : Fireballs are short/mid ranged
    Note : When the user uses a wind jutsu before a fireball +10 damage is added




    ~Declined~ No Weapon shooting elemental attacks will be approved. It's been done over and over again. Also, next time, don't put your jutsu in a spoiler, just the picture.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fūton: Kazerappa ) – Wind Release: Wind Trumpet
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user forms the dragon handseal and launches a large jet of wind from their mouth through their hand. This gives the appearance of playing a trumpet, hence the name. With small wind blades roatating within the violent trumpet/orb of slicing wind that draws in anyone near by and cuts on the microscopic level, it can suck in multiple opponents at once.

    .Note: Can only be used trice per battle.
    .Note: Can only be used if the user has mastered Wind.
    .Note: The user must be at Sannin rank or above.
    .Note: Can only be taught by Ichigo.


    ~Declined~ Why would it cut on the microscopic level when it's a common wind blast with wind blades? You need to be a lot more descriptive if you want this one approved with those abilities. Also, the whole blades with wind blast is really getting old and overused. Try to be more creative with your re-submission.
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    (Yoton: Yougan no Ashige) - Lava Release: Lava Kick
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: By doing a simple kick the user shoots out two powerful waves of lava at great speeds being able to slice through solid objects or cut down attacks. It travels at tremendous speed. As soon as the schockwave is launched and makes contact with anything it will come back towards the user like a boomerang and disperse turing into regulair lava again.

    .Note: Must have mastered Lava/Earth/Fire.
    .Note: Can only be taught by Ichigo.
    .Note: There must be a lava source on the field.
    .Note: The user must be sannin or above.


    ~Declined~ This jutsu doesn't make any sense whatsoever. Waves cutting through solid objects? Did you mean to say crescent shape blasts or something? And what's up with it coming back? This ain't a sonar, it's supposed to be a lava blast. Lots of work needed on that one.

    Edit: After further review, you are hereby banned from this thread up till December 12th for ripping off an already existing custom.

    (Raiton Bu-meran Ashinami) Boomerang Lightning Step
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: By doing a simple kick the user shoots out two powerful beams of lightning at great speeds being able to slice through solid objects or cut down attacks. As soon as the beam is launched and makes contact with anything it will come back towards the user like a boomerang and disperse.

    ♦ Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    ♦ Must have mastered lightning.
    ♦ No lightning techniques of S-Rank or above for one turn after the use of this technique.
    ♦ Can only be taught by Mathias


    DECLINED DO NOT RESUBMIT


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    (Doton: Nenshou Jouki) – Earth Release: Burning Steam
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Charka Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user stomps on the ground, while stomping the user sends a portion of there chakra into the ground, which causes small cracks to appear, below the ground and all over the field, and causes hot steam to rise up from the depts of the earth, not arround the user of course. And than, immediately Hot steam erupts, burning the opponent(s) from multiple places on the field, the steam can go about 10 meters high. Opponent(s) that are underground are harmed too. [The cracks appear in an instant]

    .Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    .Note: Can only be used if the user, has mastered the earth element.
    .Note: The user can't perform any earth technique the next turn.
    .note: The use must be sannin rank or above to use this jutsu.


    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-29-2011 at 02:51 AM.

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