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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Golonya) Earth Style: Golem
    Type: Offence, Deffence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Rank: A-Rank
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 per turn)
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses their doton chakra into the ground, and causes the earth in front of them to flake off of the ground, and into the air. The flakes of earth then come together and form a sphere of earth with stubby arms, legs, and a neckless head. The Golem is 4'7" and can withstand up to A-rank attacks. Once per battle, the Golem can lose it's arms, legs, and head, and roll like a steamroller towards the target at high speeds.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Lasts for up to three turns
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~Steamroller counts as a move
    ~The Golem will break apart after Steamroller


    ~Declined~ No. If I accept this, we'll have dozens of Pokemon being submitted here.

    (Doton/Fuuton: Tabin) Earth/Wind Style: Turbine
    Type: Offence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Rank: S-Rank
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user focuses their doton chakra into the ground, and causes earth to rise around the target in a giant circle. Three earth blades will then sprout from three points in the circle towards the inside, behind the target. The earth from the blades will wrap around the target's wrists and ankles, holding them in place like a cross. The finished product looks simmilar to a fan with a man "crusified" on the blades. The user will then focus their fuuton chakra in the air in front of or behind the turbine, and will create a blast of wind which spins the the blades, and subsequently the target, at a rapid rate. This jutsu can be followed up with either a katon (creating a wind/fire combo) or a suiton (creating a whirlpool/hurricane-like attack) jutsu.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~The turbine will crumble to dust after the turn it is used
    ~In order to use a katon/suiton combo with it, the user must first stop their Fuuton chakra, making the turbine lose momentum
    ~As this jutsu uses two chakra natures, it counts as two moves for the turn

    ~Declined~ I read it several times, and I'm having problems picturing what this jutsu looks like. Re-work it.

    (Kiai) Kiai
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Rank: A-Rank
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu)
    Description: A basic taijutsu "enhancement", the user will perform a physical technique and expel all of the air in their lungs at the same time in one short, loud burst. The gathering of an "inner energy" is used to put extra force into taijutsu and to startle the target.
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used four times per battle

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ You didn't even try to make it work with the Narutoverse. The explanation for this boost is nonexistent.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Sorry for being late everyone:

    Submissions starting on the 11/21/2011 ending on the 11/27/2011

    I'm sure you all know how it works by now so don't be afraid, I won't ban anyone who posted before me, only those who posted they new submissions on Sunday
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Re submitting

    | Katon : Ame No Honoo |Fire Release : Rain Of Flame |
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user firstly gather great amount of his katon chakra,channeling it into his fingers ,as the chakra into his fingers he form the chakra into flame so his fingers will turn into flame ,then he points his fingers towards the sky ,shooting bullets of flames from his hand ,as it reach the sky it fall from the sky in form of rain but bigger than the rain droppings it's bigger than the rain ×3 times making all the air full of flame which fall from all around short to mid range
    -CAN only be used/taught by -Kamishiro-
    -must master Katon And AACT
    -can't use any katon jutsu at the same turn nor above S rank on the next turn
    - can only be used 3 times


    Beowulf

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 5 to any Kenjutsu/taijutsu (+10 To any Lightning)
    Description:Beowulf is a powerful weapon made of special metal ,It has white and silver color ,and the shoes has some paws on it,it was made by a lightning release user,he designed it to be able to use all lightning jutsus to it ,and due to that he made a special hole on it at secrets spot he made that when the user wears it , small amount of lightning appears around it which means it's surrounded by lightning all over it ,so by that the user earn 10 points to every lightning attack ,also due to being surrounded by lightning when the user hold a sword the lightning surround the sword which means it make the kenjutsu stronger however the user can't shoot anything he can just make lightning surround it to make it stronger ,also as it made of lightning the user can sense of any lightning jutsu he make or any one make.
    - can only be wielded by -Kamishiro-
    - must master lightning release
    -must enter the battle with it
    - can only sense lightning techniques 4 times
    [/CENTER]

    ~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
    Thank you.
    | Katon : Ame No Honoo |Fire Release : Rain Of Flame |[/U][/B]
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user firstly gather great amount of his katon chakra,channeling it into his fingers ,as the chakra into his fingers he form the chakra into flame so his fingers will turn into flame ,then he points his fingers towards the sky ,shooting bullets of flames from his hand ,as it reach the sky it fall from the sky in form of rain but bigger than the rain droppings it's bigger than the rain ×3 times making all the air full of flame which fall from all around short to mid range
    -CAN only be used/taught by -Kamishiro-
    -must master Katon And AACT
    -can't use any katon jutsu at the same turn nor above S rank on the next turn
    - can only be used 3 times
    ||Declined|| Do not Resubmit (I have a technique very similar to this)
    __________________________________________________ ________________________________

    Beowulf
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 5 to any Kenjutsu/taijutsu (+10 To any Lightning)
    Description:Beowulf is a powerful weapon made of special metal ,It has white and silver color ,and the shoes has some paws on it,it was made by a lightning release user,he designed it to be able to use all lightning jutsus to it ,and due to that he made a special hole on it at secrets spot he made that when the user wears it , small amount of lightning appears around it which means it's surrounded by lightning all over it ,so by that the user earn 10 points to every lightning attack ,also due to being surrounded by lightning when the user hold a sword the lightning surround the sword which means it make the kenjutsu stronger however the user can't shoot anything he can just make lightning surround it to make it stronger ,also as it made of lightning the user can sense of any lightning jutsu he make or any one make.
    - can only be wielded by -Kamishiro-
    - must master lightning release
    -must enter the battle with it
    - can only sense lightning techniques 4 times

    ||Declined|| Do not Resubmit
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    Earth Release : Mad Ground | Doton : Kichigai Gurando
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Rank: S-Rank
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gather great amount of his doton chakra , then he channel it onto his hands , slamming his hands on the ground and focus it onto the ground that surround the opponent , and then he make from the surrounding ground 10 sharks that surround the opponent from all sides and angels and then he direct it towards the opponen
    - Can only be used 2 times
    - Must master Doton
    - Can't use any Doton jutsu at the same turn
    - Can't use Doton jutsu higher than b rank for the next turn
    - Must take the permission from -Kamishiro- to use it
    ||Approved||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Name: (Ninpou:Chakra Fuusa) Ninja Art:Chakra Blockade
    Rank:C
    Type:Supplementary/Defensive
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user focuses and places a blockade onto his chakra flow letting his chakra stop flowing.He then releases the chakra left in his body becoming completely free of chakra.The point of this is to stop any kind of attempt of detection based on chakra.The user's chakra cannot be sensed because it is gone until the user releases the blockade and let's chakra come back into his system.The user can also do this on his opponent stopping the opponents chakra completely (the opponent will still be able to preform 3 moves the following turn because of the chakra left in his system).
    Note:Can only be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note:When this is activated the user is unable to preform any techniques related to chakra.
    Notence the user stops this technique by removing the blockade he cannot use this technique for the following 2 turns.Also after it stops the user will require 2 turns to get his chakra on a stable level.
    Note:If the user stops the opponents chakra flow,the blockade on the opponents chakra system will be removed after 2 turns.
    Note:The user is unable to preform this technique on the opponent if he has first used it on himself.
    Note:The ability to block the opponents chakra can be used 3 times per battle.

    ~Declined~ The logic of your jutsu is flawed. Just because you stopped a river from flowing, doesn't mean the water disappeared.

    Name: (Ninpou:Sakashima Chakra Fuusa)Ninja Arts:Reverse Chakra Blockade
    Rank:C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short (Self)
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user prematurely removes the chakra blockade allowing him to use his chakra again.
    Note:After the Chakra Blockade has been activated and the user uses this the users chakra flow will stabilize after 2 turns.In the meanwhile the user cannot use chakra related techniques.

    ~Declined~ Chakra blockade wasn't approved.

    Name: (Genjutsu: Prometheus Kashaku)Illusion Technique: Prometheus Bane
    Rank:B
    Typeffensive/Defensive
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description:The user preforms the usual procedure to put his opponent in a horrifying genjutsu.The opponent will unknowingly find themselves chained to a tree or rock.Suddenly a shadow will fall over them as an eagle soars down and start chopping the liver of the victim.After the opponents belly is hollow their belly will heal and the bird will start feasting upon them again.The pain inflicted by the bird will not put them out of the genjutsu though.The user than has an opportunity to attack his opponent while the bird distracts them.
    Note:Can only be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note:Can only be used twice.

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton Hijutsu: Kiri-Mizu Kata)Water Release Secret Technique: Mist-Water Style
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A (-10 to enemy jutsu.) (-20 to enemy Fire jutsu.)
    Chakra Points: 40 (Activation.) +10 (Added to every water move performed while this is activated.)
    Description: The user will use their teachings from Kirigakure, namely the Mist-Rain technique, which gives the water used in that technique the ability to absorb chakra and become mist upon absorption, as a basis for this technique. The user will apply these traits to existing water techniques by means of either creating the water with these traits through the specific chakra control specification to get this effect or by infusing pre-existing water with chakra of this nature.
    Note: Must be a member of Kirigakure.
    Note: After initiation, this technique lasts for five turns.
    Note: The chakra absorption ability of the water does not affect the user, as this effect is brought about by the user's own chakra.
    Note: Can be used twice per battle.

    ~Declined~ I understand what you want to do with this, but it's too vague for the moment. Can you apply this technique at a water jutsu such as water dragon? If yes, what happens when it comes into contact with a chakra source such as another technique? Vanis into a mist? Make it clearer.

    Here's the canon technique on which the above technique is based:
    (Suiton Hijutsu: Kirisame) - Water Release Secret Technique: Mist Rain
    Rank C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 15 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage points: N/A (-10 to opponents ninjutsu)
    Description: A technique known by Kirigakure Shinobi where the user first performs the following hand seals Ram > Dog > Rat and then they make it rain. Any chakra that comes into contact with this rain will be eaten and reduces the power of the techniques by -10 damage. This technique lasts three turns.
    Note: Can only be used by biographies from the Hidden Mist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (mizu youshiki: gekiha hando) Water Style: Crushing Hands
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Chakra Damage: 70
    Description: The user does 4 hand seals,once thats done water from a huge water source forms a big wall behind me real thick. once the water is form 2 huge arms come from behind me from the water. one arm on each side of me, it then slams his hand together with the oppenent in the middle crushing the oppepent

    -Note: Need a huge water supply
    -Note: Takes 2 slots to attack
    -Note: Only Used by Teno757

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exists.
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    (mizu/ikazuchi youshiki: Zeus & nepuchu-n
    jajjimento) Water/Thunder/Style: Zeus Neptune Judgement
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Type : Attack
    Chakra Cost : 90
    Chakra Damage: 80
    Description: The user spits out a fireball into the sky to cause a huge thunder cloud above the oppenent. once the user does that they then do 5 hand seals to increase the lightning in the clouds. then do 2more hand seals once they do that a huge amount of water will fall from that one cloud above the user heads engulged with huge amounts of lightning. Crushing him with the weight of the water and electrocuting him with the huge amounts of lightning and water.

    -Note: Since its a chakra drainage wont be able to use any jutsu the next turn
    -Note:Cant use water or lightning for 2 turns
    -Note:-2slots to use
    -Note:Cant use any A rank water Or Lightning throughout the whole battle (your choice)
    -Note: Only can be taught by teno757

    ~Declined~ Rain would crush someone O-o? Unless you specify that the water will gather to force a huge mass, then crush the opponent, it's not realistic. Also, you're using fire chakra, water chakra and lightning chakra, so unless you have Yin Yang training, this technique counts as 3 moves.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Panisshā) - Punisher
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 (15+ for each of it's abilities.)
    Damage cost: 80
    Description: The design of this weapon is rather rare as it's shaped like a giant cross, it's huge and heavy and is made of the purest steel. It has an handle where the joints meet. the Punisher is capable of having any kind of chakra running through it. The cross is usually held by holdning your arm around the top joint of the cross while and place their hand onto the handle on the crossway of the joints, and with the long end pointing towards the enemy. The Punisher have several abilities and from that, is said to be filled with mercy. The Punisher is capable of extension abilities(Like Enma in staff-form.) and is capable of reaching great distances(Mid-range.) and cause great blunt damage, when transfered chakra into it. The Punisher have a seal located on it which activates when the user uses the Punisher's extension ability. The seal will activate and put the opponent(s) under a genjutsu which causes the extensions of the weapon it be invisble for the naked eye, thus the oppoenent(s) would be needed to have a Dojutsu, or realize their under the effects of a genjutsu. The Punisher will look like it use to, when the seal is activated. The long joint which is usually pointed towards the opponent, can split up revealing a Kunai shooter(Which have been shown in several movies, and by puppets.) which can shoot at the opponent with great speeds. It have one last abilities, which activates if an opponent should happen to pick up the Punisher; Upon contact with the Punisher it will release a torrent of poison inflicted senbons from all over it without warning which makes the opponent loose consciousness for two whole turns. When not being used the Punisher usually is kept hiddin in bandages like Shamehada, wrapped on the user's back.
    ~The seal of genjutsu can only activate once, for each battle.
    ~When wielding(When not wrapped in bandages.) the user cannot use above S-ranked Wind/Lightning techniques.
    ~The Punisher is indestructible.
    ~Picture;




    Notes; This will of course replace my other CW. If any parts you don't like feel free to take it out(Though would be nice if you contacted me about thsi first. ), and about the Kunai shooter >_> It's still visible and it's not like normal gun shots. They're able to be countered. If there will be more abilities it will be submitted as CJs to the CW.

    ~Declined~ Well, the weapon in itself is awesome, but the abilities already exists. For the extension, I'm ready to give it to you because it's not a sword or something that could cause lethal damage on impact (without chakra in it). However, the genjutsu part cause by the seal is one of my customs:

    (Bōkyaku) - Oblivion


    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Attack points:N/A
    Description: This a simple and yet devastating genjutsu where the user affect the sight of his enemy. When under this genjutsu, he is incapable to see fast incoming projectile such as kunais. The enemy still see the user make a throwing motion with a kunai in hand, but the moment the kunai gain speed, it simply disappear.
    -Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha
    -Can only be used three times per battle, and each time lasting one turn


    The gun is awesome. Lastly, I just want you to make it clear that your opponent need to take the cross and not simply come in contact with it, otherwise you could just use your extending ability to end the match easily.


    Quote Originally Posted by Gobi Gobletsson View Post
    (Fuuinjutsu: Fainda, Kanshu) - Sealing Technique: Finders, Keepers
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage cost: N/A
    Description: Fainda, Kanshu is an advanced sealing technique, actually one of the most advanced ones, and devolpmented by Grimm & Gobi. Its an ability copying tech that involves sealing the ability and memory into a scroll; The sealing technique is dealt up in two parts and is both used with a certain scroll, the first part is called extraction and the second, implatation, it's actually more like a ritual.
    Extraction; The first part of the sealing technique. The user will place the victim on the ground (alive and knocked out) and place a head set, similar to the ones used to communicate other shinobi long distance telepathically, on his head and the victim's. He will then wrap a scroll around the victims face whereafter he performs a long row of hand signs with the help of his partner. They will then slam their palms onto the ground causing a huge amounts of kanjis appear on the ground in a circle around the victims body. Once formed, the users forms a singel hand sign causing all the Kanjis to move into the scroll around the victims face. By doing so the scroll will now step in character and start to extract a certain memory. The head set will help the user gather the memory from the victims mind. It would not delete or make the victim forget this memory, the scroll would just copy it into the scroll.
    Now to the second part of the sealing technique;
    Implatation; This part is used in battle, unlike the other part which is used outside of battle. With the stored scroll the user will wrap the scroll around his arm and form a single hand sign. The Kanjis on the scroll will in an instant spread out across the users body whereafter it implodes into his forehead, leaving the kanji for sealing. Once done so the user have obtained the certain memory(s), for an example; How he did, how to do it, how he learned about it. Which will allow the person who uses implatation to do the same.
    Deactivation; Whenever the user wants to deactivate the technique he forms another hand sign, causing the kanji for sealing in the forehead of the user, to explode out on the user's body again, spreading the seals across him whereafter back into the scroll. The scroll cannot be used the rest of the battle.
    Restrictions;
    ~Extraction can only be used after the battle, and only one time on the same target(Unless if the current one gets destroyed.)
    ~Implatation can only be used once in battle, and transfers all memories in the scroll into the user's mind.
    ~The scroll can only stay activated up to six turns(That will mean 5 full turns.), if kept activated the user will gain a mental illness which will make him pass out after 2 full turns, and leaves the user unable to continue battling.
    ~One scroll can have up to 4 memories saved.
    ~If the scroll gets destroyed in fight he would have to fetch a whole new batch of memories.
    Note;
    ~Only one scroll at play at a time, no exception. This means, if Ninja A and B, both posses the jutsu and Ninja A, seals three memories within the scroll, Ninja B can only seal one. If Ninja B gets the scroll destroyed both Ninja B and A need to fetch a new batch.

    ~Declined~ It was a nice read, and the best Inception adaptation so far (if it's not an adaptation it really resembles one lol). My only concern here is the application of this jutsu. Can you steal Customs with this technique? Come up with several examples in your re-submission and I'll come to a verdict.

    (Fuuinjutsu: Fainda, Kanshu) - Sealing Technique: Finders, Keepers
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage cost: N/A
    Description: Fainda, Kanshu is an advanced sealing technique, actually one of the most advanced ones, and devolpmented by Grimm & Gobi. Its an ability copying tech that involves sealing the ability and memory into a scroll; The sealing technique is dealt up in two parts and is both used with a certain scroll, the first part is called extraction and the second, implatation, it's actually more like a ritual.
    Extraction; The first part of the sealing technique. The user will place the victim on the ground (alive and knocked out) and place a head set, similar to the ones used to communicate other shinobi long distance telepathically, on his head and the victim's. He will then wrap a scroll around the victims face whereafter he performs a long row of hand signs with the help of his partner. They will then slam their palms onto the ground causing a huge amounts of kanjis appear on the ground in a circle around the victims body. Once formed, the users forms a singel hand sign causing all the Kanjis to move into the scroll around the victims face. By doing so the scroll will now step in character and start to extract a certain memory. The head set will help the user gather the memory from the victims mind. It would not delete or make the victim forget this memory, the scroll would just copy it into the scroll.
    Now to the second part of the sealing technique;
    Implatation; This part is used in battle, unlike the other part which is used outside of battle. With the stored scroll the user will wrap the scroll around his arm and form a single hand sign. The Kanjis on the scroll will in an instant spread out across the users body whereafter it implodes into his forehead, leaving the kanji for sealing. Once done so the user have obtained the certain memory(s), for an example; How he did, how to do it, how he learned about it. Which will allow the person who uses implatation to do the same.
    Deactivation; Whenever the user wants to deactivate the technique he forms another hand sign, causing the kanji for sealing in the forehead of the user, to explode out on the user's body again, spreading the seals across him whereafter back into the scroll. The scroll cannot be used the rest of the battle.
    Restrictions;
    ~Extraction can only be used after the battle, and only one time on the same target(Unless if the current one gets destroyed.)
    ~Implatation can only be used once in battle, and transfers all memories in the scroll into the user's mind.
    ~The scroll can only stay activated up to six turns(That will mean 5 full turns.), if kept activated the user will gain a mental illness which will make him pass out after 2 full turns, and leaves the user unable to continue battling.
    ~One scroll can have up to 4 memories saved.
    ~If the scroll gets destroyed in fight he would have to fetch a whole new batch of memories.
    Note;
    ~Only one scroll at play at a time, no exception. This means, if Ninja A and B, both posses the jutsu and Ninja A, seals three memories within the scroll, Ninja B can only seal one. If Ninja B gets the scroll destroyed both Ninja B and A need to fetch a new batch.
    ~This cannot be used to steal anykind of custom submitted techniques(Excluded C.Es.).
    ~This Jutsu copies the memory of a whole period where the user(The 'victim'.) have train or taught, in using the certain ability. Let's take Earth for an example; The user(Who uses Implatation.) will then be capable of using all the earth techniques up to his current rank. This doesn't make a chuunin capable of using B-ranked jutsus, as his rank only allows him to use C-ranked. Also, this jutsu doesn't allow the user to use the victims' custom earth jutsus, as stated above this note.
    ~Max one C.E and all it's additional C.E CJs can be inscripted into this scroll.


    I didn't know exactly what you meant with more examples, though I added some more notes to make the jutsu more clearer etc. Also if you find it un-approvable with C.E thing, I think Grim and I can(Though if it can stay, we would highly appriecate it.) live without it.

    ~Declined~ I'm sorry but I can't approve this. I know you've put lots of time on this one, but I this will most likely cause a mess if I approve it. The usage of this techniques are obviously oriented at "off-battles" usages and from what I read, and the notes you added, it's unacceptable. Learning techniques without training, and learning/stealing CE is absolutely prohibited.

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    (Doton: Ragu no Furue) - Earth Release: Quaking Runner
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplmentary/Offensive
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 15(-15 per turn)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: When the user activates this jutsu, he will release small amounts of earth chakra into the ground everytime he takes a step, lands, runs, etc. By doing so the user will create minor quakes reaching from his location, and up to mid-range around him which will cause his opponent to loose balance, and leave him open. However when having this jutsu activated the user cannot use other elements than the ones that's based on Earth Release(Like Diamond.).
    ~Can be activated up till three times per battle.

    ~Declined~ I like it, a lot, but making it C-rank doesn't change the fact that it needs to be restricted in it's usage. I'll leave the details up to you. Also, a C-rank technique would cause quake, but nothing powerful enough to make an opponent fall to the ground when you walk. Mention that while it may surprise the opponent at first, and make him lose balance, he can very much adapt and prepare himself to keep his balance after the first quakes.
    (Doton: Ragu no Furue) - Earth Release: Quaking Runner
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplmentary/Offensive
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 15(-15 per turn)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: When the user activates this jutsu, he will release small amounts of earth chakra into the ground everytime he takes a step, lands, runs, etc. By doing so the user will create minor quakes reaching from his location, and up to mid-range around him which will cause his opponent to loose balance, and leave him open. However when having this jutsu activated the user cannot use other elements than the ones that's based on Earth Release(Like Diamond.). The jutsu may surprise the opponent at first, and cause him to loose balance, though the opponent may be able to adapt and prepare him/herself to keep the balance after the first several quakes.
    ~Can be activated up till three times per battle.
    ~However when having this jutsu activated the user cannot use other elements than the ones that's based on Earth Release(Like Diamond.).

    I just want to noticed out that I based it's rank on the World Shaking Technique which also causes the opponent to loose balance and most likely fall. So I thought it would fit. Though if it isn't so, is it needed to make it B-ranked? x.x

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kojaku) - Arc Sparrow
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A ( +10 to Jūken and Kyūjutsu )
    Description: A bow that has been passed down for many generations in the main branch of the Hyuuga clan to skilled marksmans . The ex-head of the Hyuuga clan had once crafted a bow to cover up for the Gentle Fist's lack of range of any sort and this is the result of his efforts . However , there was none but one who truly showed exceptional marksmanship with this bow which is probably a result of having an affinity with the bow , that one Hyuuga is named Arc . It is a unique type of bow where when in the hands of a Hyuuga clan member , the user will be able to pull back the string of the bow and create a highly condensed chakra blast that will be shot when the user releases the string , for Hyuugas have the extreme chakra control which the bow demands for the user to be able to mold the chakra blast . This bow is capable of shooting chakra blasts out as Jūken strikes which in a way , works like ranged Jūken and has the same effects as a Jūken strike . Arc Sparrow , having an affinity with Arc Hyuuga , grants a boost of an additional 10 damage to every arrow shot out of it .

    -Jūken techniques can be used by this bow to a certain extent , but replacing the Jūken strikes used in the techniques with chakra blasts
    -Can only be used by Rokusho..
    -Can shoot chakra blasts out of it only once per turn


    ~Declined~ Being related to the Hyuuga's doesn't change that fact that a bow shooting chakra blast as been done dozens of times. Similar technique already exist.

    Quote Originally Posted by Rokusho.. View Post
    (Kyokudai Inguramu) - Maximum Ingram
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user shouts "Kyoukugen" to induce a genjutsu on the opponent where it seems that the user is moving at speeds high enough to create afterimages . But in reality , the user gathers chakra into his legs to increase his speed for a brief moment and his fists to increase his striking power momentarily for one clean corkscrew blow to the opponent's chest which knocks the breath out of the opponent , causing the opponent to breathe heavily and unable to catch his breath for a brief moment , leaving him open to a follow-up attack .

    -Genjutsu is of S-rank
    -Pattern of the way the user moves while using this jutsu is up to the user
    -No other Genjutsu the turn this is used
    -Can only be used 3 times
    -Can only be taught by Rokusho


    ~Approved~
    Updating . . .

    (Kyokudai Inguramu) - Maximum Ingram
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user shouts "Kyoukugen" to induce a genjutsu on the target where it seems that the user is moving at speeds high enough to create afterimages and that the target himself is moving at turtle speed , ruining his ability to perceive the actual motion of the user and his ability to react accordingly . In reality , the target's muscles are being restricted to a certain extent by the genjutsu to avoid resistance from the target while being able to close in for a taijutsu attack . To the user , the target will seem to be moving in slow-motion and the user has to follow up with a taijutsu attack and nothing else .

    -Genjutsu is of S-rank
    -No other Genjutsu the turn this is used
    -Can only be used 3 times
    -Can only be taught by Rokusho

    ~Declined~ I'm fed up with time dilation in genjutsus. You were lucky that I approved the first one. This update doesn't make any sense in term of genjutsu. A genjutsu doesn't just restrict you from moving, there's a reason for it (perceiving chains wrapping around you for example).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Spider
    Scroll Owner: Bolt
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Basic Information: Spiders are air-breathing arthropods that have eight legs, and chelicerae with fangs that inject venom. The best-known method of prey capture is by means of sticky webs. Varying placement of webs allows different species of spider to trap different insects in the same area, for example flat horizontal webs trap insects that fly up from vegetation underneath while flat vertical webs trap insects in horizontal flight. Web-building spiders have poor vision, but are extremely sensitive to vibrations.



    ~Declined~ The contract already exist.

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    (Tetsu Jin) - Iron Man
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60(or XX) [-20 to user]
    Description: When falling from 20m of above height user releases wind chakra from his feets while facing downwards, so that he start falling with great speed. And then he makes his whole body just like steel by passing earth chakra, and then he crashes on his enemy, crushing his most of the bones and leaving 2m wide and 2m deep crater.
    Note: -Beacuse of such great speed, any tecnique used on him will give only 50% damage to him and user will continue his falling with same speed by cutting through it.
    -Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    -Can only be taugh by Bolt.

    ~Declined~ Not only does it count as two techniques, but the wind technique you're using to increase your speed already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Bunny
    Scroll Owner: Ouacus
    Other Users who have signed contract: none for now o.O
    Summoning Boss if existing:Soel
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Soel) -Summoning Technique-Soel
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user take out his blood, then user slams his palm to the floor to summon Soel .Soel is a white bunny with a red gem in his forehead similar to his twin bunny brother. Although he looks weak and harmless, he is extremely storng for his size. He can do up to A-rank fire jutsu.

    Soel

    Note:
    -can only be taught by Ouacus
    -Stays on the field for 5 turns and can only be summoned twice per match

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Larg) -Summoning Technique-Larg
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user take out his blood, then user slams his palm to the floor to summon Larg .Larg is a black bunny with a blue gem in his forehead similar to his twin bunny brother. Although he looks weak and harmless, he is extremely storng for his size. He use do up to A-rank water jutsu.

    Larg:

    Note:
    -can only be taught by Ouacus
    -Stays on the field for 5 turns and can only be summoned twice per match

    ~All Approved~ I added a little restriction to both summon.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Ningyō no mojiretsu: Sabējibīsuto no shizukesa) Puppet Strings: Calm of the Savage Beast
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user begins to pluck/play his puppet strings (strings can be made with this jutsu or can use existing strings) making the strings produces a music/sound that places the opponent(s) summoning/animals in a relaxed state. The relaxed state affects the summoning/animals by putting them to sleep for 2 turns.
    -Can only use 3 times per battle
    -Sleep last 2 turns
    -Effects last 1 extra turn on any hearing enhanced summoning/animals
    -Doesn’t work on boss summoning
    -Only 1 hand needed to perform (can be used on strings connected to puppets)
    - Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ I'm not the sound master of NB, but I won't let this one get accepted. Making music with Chakra strings? No. Furthermore, you're basically aiming at a 1 move pwn with this technique.

    (Ningyō no mojiretsu: Supainarutappu) Puppet Strings: Spinal Tap
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user once behind his opponent, sends a chakra string into the epidural space along the opponent's spine. The injection causes the opponent to feel both a loss of sensation and a loss of motor skills (paralysis) throughout the body, caused by the chakra string jamming into nerves in or near the spinal cord.
    -Can only use twice per battle
    -Can only be used from behind the opponent
    -Paralysis last 1 turn
    -Must wait 3 turns to use again
    -No S-rank puppet jutsu in the same turn
    -All other puppet string connections will be lost
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Declined~ First, you aren't a Hyuuga. Since you aren't a Hyuuga, you can't use your chakra threads to hit the Tenkentsu point on your opponents body. Secondly, if you're aiming at physically affecting your opponent with the threads (which I think is what you're trying to do), you'll simply fail to penetrate his system and affect his nerves. The chakra need to be tangible to do so, hence your technique isn't well described. If you want to make it a physical attack, it begins just anothing variation of a needle attack or a chidori...You get my point.

    Quote Originally Posted by black uchiha View Post

    (Seigi no kodai no amyuretto to gantoretto) Ancient Amulet and Gauntlet of the Righteous
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Points: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This two part weapon consists of an amulet wore around the neck and a gauntlet that dons the right arm of the user. This combo was said to be forged from the Insect King’s right arm. As the story goes, the Insect King fell into a large river, and on the brink of death was saved by a righteous human (thought to be an Aburame member). Thereafter the Insect King had the indestructible weapon combo made and gave it to the man as a sign of his gratitude, his loyalty, and the loyalty of his family and all the insects under his rule. The Insect King told the man to pass these items throughout his bloodline and the insects would be there to help them. This was thought to be the first contract with insects, the Aburame’s insects to be more specific.

    Abilities: The Gauntlet being indestructible; can block and deflect normal and special weapons with ease, it also has an extendable blade (dagger sized) above the wrist. It can have the user channel his chakra into it indefinitely (equal to A-rank). Upon absorption the gauntlet takes on the properties of the absorbed element (Claw of flame= Normal, Phoenix of light= Wind, Morning Jewel= Water, Susanou= Lightning, Abaddon= Earth, Hephaisto= Fire).

    The Amulet grants the insects that serve the wielder something called chakra sharing, where after absorbing an elemental chakra into the gauntlet, it then is transferred to the insects that help the user giving them and elemental coating and the properties of that element. The coating doesn’t give the insects more power, it only coats/infuses them with the element (like one would do with a kunai). The amulet also makes the user more in tune with his insects, letting him feel their emotions as Shino does with his insects but up to mid-range unlike Shino’s short-range.

    Photos: Amulet: http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l2...1/images-3.jpg
    Gauntlet: http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u.../Gauntlets.jpg

    Notes:
    -Gauntlet change/absorption last 2 turns (infused gauntlet & blade)
    - Coating last 2 turns
    -The coating doesn’t increase power just gives elemental properties (wind=cutting, lightning=cutting/paralyzes, earth=strength, water=erosion)
    -While infused with an element if other elements are used the user must add +10 chakra to the non-infused element(s) for them to work.
    -After chakra sharing the user suffers -5 chakra drain for each turn the coating lasts
    -Can only feel the emotions of insects within mid range of the user

    -Can only be used/lent by Black Uchiha
    Amulet:

    Gauntlet:


    ~Declined~ First of all, define the strength of your "indestructible" gauntlet. You said it could block simple attack; what is a simple attack? C-rank? Secondly, I'm really not sure about the whole coating of insects. It'd be like giving your insects a lightning armor like the Raikage. Let's face it, your insects aren't like normal weapons/tools. What does "erosion" does? How strong do they become when they're infused with earth?

    My point is, a normal kunai can't perform jutsus, your insects can and hence infusing an elemental chakra in them is a simple way of giving them a boost in any element you desire and this is too much IMO. Don't VM to ask what to do with this jutsu, I don't know. It's up to you to find something when/if you resubmit it.
    First of all, define the strength of your "indestructible" gauntlet. You said it could block simple attack; what is a simple attack? C-rank?
    I said it can block and deflect normal and special weapons (bolded and underlined below)
    Secondly, I'm really not sure about the whole coating of insects. It'd be like giving your insects a lightning armor like the Raikage. Let's face it, your insects aren't like normal weapons/tools.
    The coating doesn't give any increase in power or speed (as the Raikage's lightning armor does)...and they are not like normal weapons but thats why the coating doesn't give any enhancements.

    (Seigi no kodai no amyuretto to gantoretto) Ancient Amulet and Gauntlet of the Righteous
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Points: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This two part weapon consists of an amulet wore around the neck and a gauntlet that dons the right arm of the user. This combo was said to be forged from the Insect King’s right arm. As the story goes, the Insect King fell into a large river, and on the brink of death was saved by a righteous human (thought to be an Aburame member). Thereafter the Insect King had the indestructible weapon combo made and gave it to the man as a sign of his gratitude, his loyalty, and the loyalty of his family and all the insects under his rule. The Insect King told the man to pass these items throughout his bloodline and the insects would be there to help them. This was thought to be the first contract with insects, the Aburame’s insects to be more specific.

    Abilities: The Gauntlet being indestructible; can block and deflect normal and special weapons with ease, it also has an extendable blade (dagger sized) above the wrist. It can have the user channel his chakra into it indefinitely (equal to A-rank). Upon absorption the gauntlet takes on the properties of the absorbed element (Claw of flame= Normal, Phoenix of light= Wind, Morning Jewel= Water, Susanou= Lightning, Abaddon= Earth, Hephaisto= Fire).

    The Amulet grants the insects that serve the wielder something called chakra sharing, where after absorbing an elemental chakra into the gauntlet, it then is transferred to the insects that help the user giving them and elemental coating and the properties of that element. The coating doesn’t give the insects more power, it only coats/infuses them with the element (like one would do with a kunai). The amulet also makes the user more in tune with his insects, letting him feel their emotions as Shino does with his insects but up to mid-range unlike Shino’s short-range.

    Photos: Amulet: http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l2...1/images-3.jpg
    Gauntlet: http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u.../Gauntlets.jpg

    Notes:
    -Gauntlet change/absorption last 2 turns (infused gauntlet & blade)
    - Coating last 2 turns
    -The coating doesn’t increase power just gives elemental properties (I.e. A-rank bug tech + coating = A-rank bug/elemental tech)
    -While infused with an element if other elements are used the user must add +10 chakra to the non-infused element(s) for them to work.
    -After chakra sharing the user suffers -5 chakra drain for each turn the coating lasts
    -Can only feel the emotions of insects within mid range of the user
    -Can only be used/lent by Black Uchiha
    Amulet:

    Gauntlet:


    ~Approved~ Finally , well done.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton/Katon : Atsusayuukai) - Earth & Fire Release : Heated Fusion
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : +20 to affected technique
    Description : With this technique, the user is capable of molding his fire chakra into an earth technique that is shot or materialized such as Stone Spikes, Stone and Earth Dragon or Dropping Lid. This will heat up the technique, eventually melting it in a matter of seconds and give it a lava-based property that can severely burn the enemy if it successfully makes contact.

    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : No other earth techniques are to be used in the same turn
    Note : Can only affect a single earth technique per usage of this technique
    Note : Only gives melting properties that are able to burn the enemy and nothing else
    Note : Cannot be used on earth techniques such as World Shaking, Earth Fissure or Added Weight Rock Technique
    Note : No longer strong against water nor is it weak against it and the same goes for lightning due to the earth not being able to be pierced through easily anymore

    ~Declined~ If you want lava release, just make a bio.

    (Doton : Gosunkugi Chakushu) - Earth Release : Spike Launcher
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Med
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : The user forms a single handseal, Dragon, and focuses his earth chakra into an already existing set of spikes that are on the ground. He will then release that earth chakra, enabling all those spikes to be launched up into the air at the desired target or location. Even after shooting up into the sky, they will fall down from the sky and down onto whoever dares to stand there. This technique can be re-adjusted so that it shoots in a certain angle but the user should also take caution where he aims it or he might just kill himself.

    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Requires an already existing set of spikes
    Note : This technique will hurt the user if used within short-range
    Note : Can kill user if angle is readjusted pointing directly to the user

    ~Approved~ Made it 3 times per battle and up to mid-range.

    (Doton : Buraindosakana) - Earth Release : Blind Fishes
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30 (+20 if user sacrifices chakra for teammate)
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : Much more of an advanced version of the useful digging or merging underground techniques, this technique enables the user to merge and swim across the ground below with a teammate, if wanted to, so that both of them goes underground though the user will have to hold onto the person he wants to go underground with. Once underground, the user's hand will be unable to let go of the person he went underground with and will have to take him or her to wherever the user is going to. When this happens, whomever that is affected will be blind temporarily during the period they are underground due to the complete darkness underground. The user however is the only one that knows what happens as he this technique allows him to sense what happens on the surface similiar to how Hiding Like A Mole does too.

    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be performed five times per battle
    Note : Not necessary to bring a teammate along during this technique
    Note : The teammate will have to mold his own earth chakra around himself
    Note : Whomever is affected by the technique is blind for the period they are underground
    Note : No other technique apart from Earth Release may be used while this technique is active
    Note : User must sacrifice 20 more chakra points if his teammate doesn't want to use his own chakra

    ~Pending~ You keep saying "person he went underground with", can it apply to your opponent?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fūton: Aori no sono Soyokaze - Wind Release: Gust of the Zephyr
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user does 3 handseals and quickly summons a gust of wind in the direction of their choosing, doing a minor push and dealing damage to enemy it hits.

    Note: Usable 3 times per battle
    Note: No A-rank and above wind jutsu for the next round
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    Fūton: Teikiatsu no sono Soyokaze - Wind Release: Cyclone of the Zephyr
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: C/B/A/S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15/20/30/40
    Damage Points: 30/40/60/80
    Description: The user first does the Bird seal and release some amounts of Fuuton chakra into the air around him/her. The chakra will form into small cyclones that automatically patrols around the user in a random manner and damage enemies that comes in contact. The user, on command, can send a cyclone to deflect incoming projectiles such as kunai, shuriken, etc. A cyclone will dissappear every turn after the jutsu is used or when it comes in contact with an object.

    Chuunin - 2 cyclones max
    S Jounin - 4 cyclones max
    Jounin - 6 cyclones max
    S-Class - 8 cyclones max

    Note: Only usable once
    Note: No A-rank and above wind jutsu until there is still a cyclone on the battlefield
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    ~Declined~ 8 cyclones? Are you kidding me? I expect something much less OP in your re-submission, or else it will be declined for good. Also, submit individual technique for all the ranks you want for this technique. I will not accept techniques that can be used on 4 different ranks.

    Fūton: Taifu: no sono Soyokaze - Wind Release: Typhoon of the Zephyr
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80/70/60
    Description: The user first does 5 quick hand seals and release massive amounts of fuuton chakra into the air. It will then form into a mighty typhoon of violent winds, which covers the battlefield with the user as the center. Harsh winds will give anyone caught within a hard time to move. It will also damage anyone within it. The damage will depend on the distance from the center, the closer you are the more damage you take. It also instantly activates Fūton: Teikiatsu no sono Soyokaze - Wind Release: Cyclone of the Zephyr.

    Note: Only usable once
    Note: Typhoon last for 2 turns but only does damage once
    Note: No wind jutsu until the end of the match
    Note: Cyclones will start to dissappear after the typhoon is over
    Note: Activation of the other jutsu count as a move.
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    (Suiton: Kage Mizu Bakudan) Water Release: Shadow Water Bomb
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description:User creates a ball of water in which his shadow chakra are molded in it, when the ball is released, and it is launched towards the enemy, the enemy takes some damage but if launched towards the shadow, the ball can summon the shadow chakra and control the target. When the water ball misses the enemy, the user can make it burst, raining some drops down each with shadow chakra in it, if the drops make contact with the target's shadow, shadow possession will occur.
    Notes
    - Can used by Nara members shared by Renges
    - The shadow possession occur if succeed
    - Can launch multiple balls
    - Based on "(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique" and "(Kage Mane Shuriken) - Shadow Imitation Shuriken"
    - The blast is not strong enough to throw an enemy away

    ~Declined~ I could've accepted it if the water ball made contact with the shadow, but making it so that the droplets can cause the shadow possession technique to occur is just overkill. You know what to do in your re-submission.

    I will use these later when I finished my shadow training
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    (Kage no bādosutoraiku) Shadow Bird Strike
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user's shadow rises from the ground and divides into many shadoes which then combine in mid-way into a form of a bird which have wind with sharp pointy shadow. It's speed depends upon daytime. When the bird miss the attack. it redivided into many shaodws and perform "Shadow Sewing"
    Notes
    - Can used by Nara members shared by Renges
    - Must have finished Nara training
    - Cannot use any B or greater shadow justsu for next 2 turns

    ~Approved~

    (Kage no rokkakkei) Shadow Hexagram
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user performs a hexagram field of shadow with the target in middle. The shadow after, rises up to make contact in middle and make a shadow barrier. The shadow become compressed into middle, as the hexagram boundary become smaller too. When in nearby position of enemy, it stops and release shadows to grab the enemy and tied him down, while it launches series of blows.

    The red one is the last form where it stops and start attacking

    Notes
    - Can used by Nara members shared by Renges
    - Must have finished Nara training
    - Cannot use shadow justsu for next 2 turns

    ~Declined~ I've read this one multiple times and it's still a mystery to me...What the hell does this technique does? lol. Re-work it.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Seto Kaiba View Post
    (akuma ha-pu)
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short/long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The harp is made from pure stainless steel but light in weight and is capeable of conducting chakra.its strings are four in number and each strings produces different sharp tone when striked. Each tone brands it's listeners with a particular type of illusion,Also the harp acts as a barrier against illusion attacks thrown at the weilder. Because of it's portablity and stylishness,the weilder is able to strap it unto his or her back,whilst in battle.
    -Note: The user can't perform handseals whilst holding the harp.
    -when in posession of the user,the harp blocks illusiön based attacks,except advanced ones(forbidden or ms illusions) and also illusion shielding counts as one of 3 moves a turn and can only shield 3 times per match.


    -Note: The harp can only be used by Seto Kaiba.

    Removed the increase in damage points,like you asked.


    (genjutsu-i karada) - illusion technique- heavy body
    Rank: S
    Type:Defence/Offense
    Range: mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user does a unique set of handseals that leaves the foe under an illusion,making him think that his whole body has instantly grown so heavy,that he can't barely move a muscle but this is only temporarily.
    -last's for a minute.
    -once per battle.
    -no S-rank and above genjutsu next turn.

    Changed the range and reduced the genjutsu time limit.


    (genjutsu-medusa miyaru) - illusion technique- medusa gaze
    Rank: S
    Type:Defence/Offense
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This a unique secret illusion technique thats is useable by only a byakugan possessor,thus a hyuuga clan member.mostly because of chakra control as it requires the user to infuse his eye balls with chakra,causing it to glow pearl, whiter than that of a byakugan for a seconds.a glance at it by the foe would leave them in an illusion that makes them think their whole body has turned into stone thus temporarily immobilizing them.
    -there must be a mutual eye contact to activate the illusion.
    -last's for one turn.
    -twice per battle.
    -no S-rank and above genjutsu next turn.
    -only useable by hyuuga clan members.


    (suiton water style-water whale
    Rank: forbbiden
    Typeffense
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points:90(20 to user)
    Description:This technique is a complicated move to pull off,since it requires a very large water-source to work.after the user must have done two handseals,with great concentration he/she manipulates and turns a large body of water-source such as river or lake into a giant whale that navigates towards the target with unimaginable speed whilst demolishing everything in its path.Still in motion,the whale is able to absorb some incoming water jutsu thus becoming more bigger and also able to shot off a medium size c-rank shark to do major damager to the target,before crashing into the target leaving no bone uncrushed.
    -Once per battle.
    -no S-rank and above next turn.
    -absorbs 'one' C-rank and lower water jutsus.
    -The user take 20 damage,due to stress.
    -requires a standard water-source.


    (Suiton-Mugen no mizu no yoroi)water style- infinite water armor
    Rank: forbbiden
    Type:defense
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: This technique enable the user to instantly gain an armor made of water,which shields the user from based fire attack.by channeling more water chakra into the armor constantly,the user is able to withstand instense heat or fire,even a lava bath as long as the armor is replenished every seconds.After usage the water washes off the user along with anything on the user's body.but Due to the constant pushing out of water chakra,the user internal organs are fairly damage and overusage of this technique totally destroys the user's organs.
    -Twice per battle and lasts for 3 turns
    -can only shield user from one fire attack and de-activate by itself.
    -user is damaged by 10 every turn this is activate.
    -The user becomes vulnerable to lightning techniques.
    -no water jutsu next turn

    ~All Declined~ You're only allowed to submit 3 jutsus per weak, breaking this rule results in a 1 week ban from this thread (one full cycle). Your ban will be lifted on the 21 of November.
    Demon harp
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short/long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The harp is made from pure stainless steel but light in weight and is capeable of conducting chakra.its strings are four in number and each strings produces different sharp tone when striked. Each tone brands it's listeners with a particular type of illusion,Also the harp acts as a barrier against illusion attacks thrown at the weilder. Because of it's portablity and stylishness,the weilder is able to strap it unto his or her back,whilst in battle.
    -Note: The user can't perform handseals whilst holding the harp.
    -when in posession of the user,the harp blocks illusiön based attacks,except advanced ones(forbidden or ms illusions) and also illusion shielding counts as one of 3 moves a turn and can only shield 3 times per match.


    -Note: The harp can only be used by Seto Kaiba.

    Removed the increase in damage points,like you asked.

    Leaving for Roku.

    (genjutsu-omoi karada) - illusion technique- heavy body
    Rank: S
    Type:Defence/Offense
    Range: mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user does a unique set of handseals that leaves the foe under an illusion,making him think that his whole body has instantly grown so heavy,that he can't barely move a muscle but this is only temporarily.
    -last's for a minute.
    -once per battle.
    -no S-rank and above genjutsu next turn.

    Changed the range and reduced the genjutsu time limit.

    ~Approved~

    (genjutsu-medusa miyaru) - illusion technique- medusa gaze
    Rank: S
    Type:Defence/Offense
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This a unique secret illusion technique thats is useable by only a byakugan possessor,thus a hyuuga clan member.mostly because of chakra control as it requires the user to infuse his eye balls with chakra,causing it to glow pearl, whiter than that of a byakugan for a seconds.a glance at it by the foe would leave them in an illusion that makes them think their whole body has turned into stone thus temporarily immobilizing them.
    -there must be a mutual eye contact to activate the illusion.
    -last's for one turn.
    -twice per battle.
    -no S-rank and above genjutsu next turn.
    -only useable by hyuuga clan

    ~Declined~ Nothing that is related to the alteration of the eyes will be accepted. We have enough of those already.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Sutori-Kingu - Streaking Chakra Needles/Chakra Senbons
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:A Jyuuken technique requiring relatively strong Chakra Control. The ninja Raises concentrates and fires off small needle like Chakra projectiles from any tenketsu in their Body. These Chakra needles are sharp and pierce into flesh and (regular human) bone. When hitting a target these needled disrupt the targets chakra flow in the area where they hits. These needles are usually 3 inches long and hair thin, but contain enough concentrated chakra to be slightly visible to the normal eye as a thin shining sliver. This technique can be used to fire multiple needles at a time in rapid fire succession, increasing the total damage done. This can result in complete overwhelming of an opponents chakra system, or it can take them down on the pain alone or can simply be used to disable them long enough to close in and finish them off. or the Hyuuga can fire a burst of needles from each of her Tenketsus simultaneously in all direction from the user, this being effective mostly in close range, or they can be fired individually, one at a time.
    - Usable only 3 times per battle.
    - Hyuuga Bloodline only.
    - Can't be used twice in the same turn.

    ~Declined~ This is a bit OP. Piercing through bones, really? Either make it so it affects your opponent chakra network, or it physically hurt them, not both. Remember when Neji fought Naruto, he wasn't hurt from the gentle fist's strikes, but his chakra network was destroyed.

    Senjigusuri - Chakra Release
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: - (Contact)
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points:
    Description:This is a simple Jutsu, very much based on Jyuuken, but not dependent on Jyuuken any further than the needed skill set. With this technique, The user will infuse his own Chakra into an opponent through the slightest of contact, whether directly with them, or through intermediates (such as through a weapon like her spear). This Chakra infusion is very subtle, causing no inner damage to the victim whatsoever, Rather it acts to disrupt their Chakra flow, keeping them from molding it or benefiting from it as it becomes too chaotic to properly use. While contact is maintained (this is important, this effect is only active while contact is made), the opponent will feel themselves suddenly somewhat dazed, they will feel dissy, suddenly weakened, and generally “Off”. They will find themselves unable to use Ninjutsu or Mold Chakra. The moment contact is cut however, they will immediately return to normal. Usually this is used with blocks or simple touch, to interfere with the user opponent, usually catching them by surprise and thus creating an opening for them self.
    -Hyuuga Bloodline only.


    ~Declined~ Many similar techniques were based off of that concept. Also, I don't like the fact that you can affect your opponent through a weapon. For that to work, your opponent's weapon would also need to be able to channel chakra. Let's not leave it to chance. And even if his weapon could channel chakra, it really is easily far-fetched.

    Once more, this only interferes with an opponent’s chakra flow while contact is made, it causes them no other harm or damage and the effect will not last once contact is broken or if the user cannot flow there Chakra into there opponent for what ever reason.

    Hirameki no Kaijo - Chakra Barrier
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 ( + 10 each turn the barrier is active)
    Damage Points:
    Description: This technique cancel out any chakra existing within mid range of the Hyuuga. Basically this Jutsu can cancel out an opponent's Ninjutsu of equal rank or lower affecting anything within short - mid range around the Hyuuga by sending out chakra which, when it comes in contact with an opponent's chakra will destroy each other. This can cancel out any area affect jutsu affecting that zone around the Hyuuga or any Jutsu coming at the Hyuuga. So as to make it clear. This will not extinguish Fire or disintegrate water. A flame is a flame, the user won't extinguish it with this, but a fire dragon would become nothing more than normal fire if hit by this. Someone shooting fire balls at the user from 20 feet out will not be hampered by this, the fire, already having been launched, and having been made into Fire, and chakra no longer needed to keep it going, would keep coming at the user. A whip made of fire for example however would fall apart as the chakra holding it together would be extinguished.
    -Can only be used 1 times per battle.
    -The "Chakra Barrier" only last for 3 turns. ( + 10 each turn the barrier is active)
    -The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.

    This Jutsu requires a moment (roughly a second or so) to build up the needed chakra before releasing it, this build up can or course be seen by the Byakugan or Sharingan, or similar Chakra seeing doujutsus.

    ~Declined~ I like the idea, but the way you arranged it, it's OP. Also, the ability to disrupt chakra was already created by Alucard in his CW. Hence; similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    My last submission was on 11-15-2011, 05:14 PM

    (Hakke Kyōsei-teki ni baria) - 8 Trigrams Forcing Barrier
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: As soon as the user gets above his opponent, mid-air, he'll start spinning in the air around his axis at fast speeds, excerting chakra from all parts of his body, creating a cylinder shaped jutsu within mid-air above the opponent, and the barrier will extend into a cylinder shape, slicing him into pieces. This technique works the opposite way like the user is below the opponent, as the opponent is in mid-air, above the user. The jutsu first encloses around the user within mid range of the opponent, then it closes in fast, leaving a huge crater afterwards.
    Note:
    -Can be used 3x
    -Can be taught by Dr. House
    -must master Jyuuken
    -Sannin or above

    ~Approved~

    (Hakkeshou Grateo Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Greater Heavenly Sky
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Similar to "8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky" this technique allows the user to emit a constant stream of chakra from his palms, creating extremely sharp chakra blades what is able to reach onto long range. If the user wishes, he reach any point around her, allowing her to hit any target, within her field of vision. If the user wishes, he may create a really sharp barrier around himself in the process, and afterwards the barrier may shoot out sharp chakra blades what is able to reach onto long range, all around. While using this technique, the user moves extremely fast (her movements become a blur), allowing her to hit hundreds of targets with extreme precision, much like the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms. It is so precise that it can cut smaller targets (like bees) in half. Additionally, Hinata can control the size of the chakra beams in her palms, allowing her to create larger, arc-shaped chakra beams that spread out across her entire attack range. The technique was powerful enough to knock back the Giant Bee.
    Note:
    -May be used 3x
    -Only taught by Dr. House
    -The user has to state as to whether he creates a barrier, then attacks the opponent by excerting blades from the barrier, or first he emit a constant stream of chakra from her palms, creating extremely sharp chakra blades, then when the wished destination is reached, the barrier can be made.
    -The user is able to stop either the barrier making to attack, or stop attacking and creating the barrier, since both of them are coming from the same source, as which is the stream of chakra in his hands.
    -No S-Ranked or above Jyuuken in the same and the next turn
    -Must master Jyuuken, and be Sannin or above.

    ~Declined~ OP much? A blade that can reach to long range, a barrier that can shoot chakra blades and movements that can arguably be compared to the gates...lol no chance of ever getting that one approved. Oh I forgot, there's beams too

    (Hakke 10 No Burēdo) - 8 Trigrams: Blades of The 2
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: As the opponent raises an armor in order to defend against the deadly hits of the hyuuga, members have learned to excert chakra onto different parts of his body, in order to meet these needs. These include only the tips of your finger, the knees, and the tips of your toes. As the user is using any of these body parts, creating a really sharp&dense drilling blades on the wished body part, which is about 15cm, enabling him to go through the strongest armors there is. Once it has gone through, the user may inject chakra into the target, which will paralize their nervous system, damaging his central nervous system, the brain.
    Note:
    -If used against a forbidden armor, the user has to place both of his hands side by side and by making a "poking move" with both hands he strikes on the same spot, then afterwards this technique won't be useable anymore. Because of the pain, the user gets -5 damage, and won't be able to use Jyuuken in the same turn.
    -Can be used 4x
    -Can be taught by Dr. House
    -Must master Jyuuken, and be Sannin or above.

    ~Declined~ Too similar to both cannon techniques (the 3rd Raikage's lightning technique) and custom techniques. Also, your version is OP. Drilling through any armor is just unacceptable, might as well be able to pierce anything, CE included.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Crow~ View Post
    [Karasu Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Naraku] - Crow Summoning Technique: Hades
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A [+15 to The summoner's Fire techniques]
    Description: The user bites his thumb and gathers a large amount of chakra then afterwards he makes a handseal summoning "Hades" on the user's right shoulder, Hades is an elderly Crow at the same size of the elder Toad Fugasaku, he's all covered in black feathers from all over his body with two bright white lines across all of his body, Hades was born with the natural affinity of the fire release and used to master all of the fire techniques but due to his elderly age he can't perform any fire techniques anymore, but instead when he's staying on the user's shoulder or in other words having a physical contact with the user, he injects his fire chakra into the user's body accelerating the speed of the user's fire chakra when it's gathered by the user and increasing the amount, thus making less time for the user to perform fire techniques and allowing the user to perform fire techniques without any handseals required as well as boost their strength by +15 damage points, another special ability that Hades has is that he's Fire chakra sensor, meaning that he senses the heat waves signatures from the opponent(s) and when he channels his fire chakra and knows what technique the opponent is going to use, when Hades injects his fire elemental chakra into the user's body he also transfers this ability to the user but it only lasts when Hades is present on the field, the sensing ability that Hades has is based on charging the air particles with fire chakra and triggering heat waves through the battlefield that allows him to track the heat signature of the opponent(s) that's already present within their bodies.
    ~Can only be summoned once per battle.
    ~Stays on the field for 5 turns.
    ~The user can't use any Water based techniques when Hades is injecting his body with Fire chakra due to the negative chakra natures of Fire and Water.
    ~Must have Mastered the Fire release.
    ~Must have signed the Crows contract.
    ~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

    ~Declined~ Heat sensing already exist and yours is therefor a rip-off. +15 is ridiculous, it's more than the 7SM. No hand seals is just the cherry on top . Make it 1 less hand seal. Take out the whole part about heat sensing and transferring it to you.
    [Karasu Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Naraku] - Crow Summoning Technique: Hades
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 to The summoner's Fire techniques]
    Description: The user bites his thumb and gathers a large amount of chakra then afterwards he makes a handseal summoning "Hades" on the user's right shoulder, Hades is an elderly Crow at the same size of the elder Toad Fugasaku, he's all covered in black feathers from all over his body with two bright white lines across all of his body, Hades was born with the natural affinity of the fire release and used to master all of the fire techniques but due to his elderly age he can't perform any fire techniques anymore, but instead when he's staying on the user's shoulder or in other words having a physical contact with the user, he injects his fire chakra into the user's body accelerating the speed of the user's fire chakra when it's gathered by the user and increasing the amount, thus making less time for the user to perform fire techniques and allowing the user to perform fire techniques with one less handseal than it originally requires as well as boost their strength by +10 damage points, Another special ability in which the Crow has, when it's transferring fire chakra and injecting it into the user's body the crow transfers the special ability to the user in which it balances the user's fire chakra within his body and grants him complete control over his fire chakra, allowing the user to perform two fire techniques simultaneously at the same time.
    ~Can only be summoned once per battle.
    ~Stays on the field for 5 turns.
    ~Ability to use two fire techniques at the same time can only be used twice per battle and each fire technique up to A-rank.
    ~The user can't use any Water based techniques when Hades is injecting his body with Fire chakra due to the negative chakra natures of Fire and Water.
    ~Must have Mastered the Fire release.
    ~Must have signed the Crows contract.
    ~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

    ~Declined~ No on the ability to use 2 fire techniques at once. I didn't edit it myself as you may want to have another shot at this with another ability.

    [Kagami Genkaku No Jutsu] - Illusion Mirror Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a simple ninjutsu technique based on the principle of the clone technique that are used to project an illusionary image of the user and also based on projecting the sound to different areas using chakra, but instead of cloning the user's own image as illusions and the voice of the user, the user projects the voice and the image of a technique that's used by him or his opponent, meaning that if the user shots a fire technique for example the user can project the image and sound of the fire technique somewhere else, cloning the technique's shape and sound causing after images to form of the technique that's replicated anywhere on the battlefield heading for the opponent's direction or stationary depending on the cloned technique, this distracts the opponent due to him not knowing which technique is real and which isn't, this can be used to replicate nearly all techniques that the user uses or the opponent's according to the situation at hand, providing that it's a projected technique that can be shot [lightning/wind/fire/water] or just stationary techniques [Earth, Ninjutsu], due to the images being only illusions it won't cause harm to the opponent, only confuses him.
    ~Can only be used 5 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

    ~Approved~

    [Katon: Kaon Harō] - Fire Release: Heat Waves
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 [+15 per turn to maintain active]
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 To the user's fire techniques]
    Description: After forming a set of 4 handseals [Horse → Tiger → Ram → Monkey] the user gathers a large amount of fire chakra into the center of his body and releases it outwards through all of his pours, releasing the fire chakra throughout the whole battlefield in all directions, this fire chakra acts to increase the temperature of the air equally throughout the battlefield creating heat waves that are released from the fire chakra into the battlefield, these heat waves have only a simple purpose, which is to increase the temperature of the fire techniques that the user uses, using the heat waves when the fire technique comes into contact with the heated air, the fire technique absorbs the surrounding air to increase in temperature and become much hotter and thus more powerful than standard fire techniques, the fire color changes from the standard orange-red flames to the color of blue flames to the point where the user can cause the fire technique to be slightly transparent and can see through it, which is hotter than the standard fire techniques that the user is capable of using. These heat waves doesn't harm the user or the opponent, their only external effect is causing the user and the opponent's skin to sweat but does not deal any kind of damage to either one. in order to maintain the heat waves present the user has to continuously release his chakra throughout the battlefield and is left for a disadvantage of not being able to use any water techniques while the heat waves are present, due to the negative charges of the fire and water chakra.
    - Can only be used once per battle.
    - Lasts for 4 turns.
    - The user can't use any water release techniques while the heat waves are active.
    - The user is unable to utilize the fire release techniques for 3 turns after this technique deactivates.
    - Can only be taught by ~Crow~

    ~Declined~ I have nothing against this technique, trust me, it all works out, but the staff made it clear that we'd be done with fire variations. There were enough of them in the CE thread, I won't allow those variations to migrate in the CJ thread (Blue flames were submitted in the CE thread already).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Jiton Tetsu no kill jutsu) Magnetic release: Iron Kill Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points:60
    Description; The User does this jutsu in long range by sending the iron underground to hit the opponent unaware then focusing on chakra and shape manipulation then forms a huge round mass around the opponent which surrounds him and traps him in it then exploding on impact and squashing the opponent to pieces.
    Note: Can be used twice


    Note: Must wait three turns to use justu again

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.



    (Doton: Yasumichuu Funkei)Earth style: enclosed Decapitation
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This Jutsu can only be done on ground or where there is earth,the user make earth hand seals and focuses his chakra on hands and slamming palm to the ground bringing about 4 large enclosed rock pillars with Multiple sharp edges which quickly pierces the opponent heart and if not avoided other organs thus leading to decapitation and making the victim dead in few minutes. Can only be counter altered by a lIgh ning jutsu of a higher rank.


    Note:Can Be used twice in battle

    Note:The user must wait 3 turns to use again

    ~Declined~ The description is non-existent. From what I read you create pillars and then all of a sudden your opponent is shot through the heart and decapitated. Not only is it against the rules of our RP (damage points), but it's ridiculously OP for no apparent reasons.


    Kurisutaru no sutairu: Mirā ga kiru(Crystal style:Mirror Kill)

    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points:80
    Description; Guren holds and focuses on her chakra and then in one stroke place her focused chakra palm on the ground bring up a huge hue enclosed wall made of crystalline with several mirrors to confuse his opponent and keep him from escaping she then send thousands of needle sharp crystalline into the wall tearing the opponent limb from limb the then she send a huge amount of heat blast through her palms to crush the wall and bring it falling down crushing the opponent to death. Its wall can not be penetrated by any A rank jutsu or lower, it can also be you used as a great defensive shield to protect against s rank jutsu or lower the guren does this simply by trapping herself in the wall which can defend against extreme temperature rain or humidity.
    Note: Can only be taught by thunderbolt

    Note: Can Be used two times

    Note: The user must wait a turn to 3 again

    ~Declined~ OP. Read what I wrote above. Also, you didn't mention the rank of this technique (even though I suspect it's S-rank).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Meiton: Kuroi Ho-Ru)-Dark Release: Black Hole
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 60
    Damage points: 110
    The user will start to gather up all of his Dark Release chakra and focus it to his back. When the chakra is stored up, he release it into the sky, creating a pillar of dark “fog” from the back into the sky. Once the dark chakra hits the sky, the sky will turn completely black, and almost all the light on the field will disappear. The darkness of the field will build up the power of the dark chakra, and the user will draw the dark pillar into his body again, and then focus all the newly gathered dark chakra to his hands. When the dark chakra is gathered up, the user slams the hands on the ground, and huge amounts of dark chakra will flow over the ground, and everything it touches will get swallowed up inside it, and they will be crushed into small pieces of themselves.
    ~Note 1: Due to the massive scale of this jutsu, it can only be used once, and since it takes so much chakra it will destroy the body of the user if he use any jutsus above B-Rank within the first 5 turns after this jutsu is used.
    ~Note 2: While the user sends dark release chakra into the sky, he can’t use any other jutsus.
    ~Note 3: The darkness is so thick that only Dojutsu users can see trough it, not even the user can see his opponent.

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ I know what you're trying to do. Leave One Piece techniques where they belong, in One Piece.

    (Meiton: Kemono no tsume) - Dark Release: Claw of the Beast
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: 50 (60 if absorbed a jutsu)
    Description: The user will touch one of their hands to the ground while releasing Dark chakra at any location. At that location, a large claw will emerge out of the ground and will be controlled by the user. The claw can absorb C-Rank or lower jutsu and once it does, it grows much larger in size. It can emerge quickly and silently.
    Restrictions:
    ~The claw cannot move from it's original position.
    ~Usable three times.
    ~Can only absorb one attack. Any B-rank and above technique will destroy it afterward.

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    (Meiton: Kurai Kurage) - Meiton: Dark Jellyfish
    Type: Offensive / Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will focus their Dark Chakra and form 3 handseals. After finishing the three handseals, they form a large, floating body of Dark chakra with 10 extending arms of Dark Chakra that forms a fist on each one (Each fist having a destructive force that can break bones), a Dark Jellyfish. The body of the jellyfish moves slowly through the air but the arms can attack swiftly. The jellyfish's body can absorb C-Rank jutsu and after doing so, can burst in a large mass of blue fire that burns anything short-range of it.
    Restrictions:
    ~Usable once.
    ~After absorbing 3 attacks, the jellyfish will vanish in thin air.
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    ~Approved~ Added a restriction
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-24-2011 at 10:08 PM.

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