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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Fuinjutsu: Kaminari Den) = Sealing Techniques: Thunder Palace
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: All
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates creates multiple orbs with a special tag on them, filled with enormous amounts of Lightning chakra and suspends them high up in the air in a circular formation around the target. If anyone decides to pass by the orbs, the seal will activate and the one who passed will be immediately zapped by lightning and will be unable to move for 2 turns. If the orbs are destroyed by an outside force, the attacker is instantly electrocuted and unable to move for 2 turns.
    Note: Can only be used once per bate
    Note: The orbs last for 4 turns.
    Note: The orbs can be placed around a whole village.


    This is how the technique looks.


    ~Pending~ Re-submit with clarification on the positioning of those orbs; I won't accept it if they can be summoned next to the opponent, hence electrocuting him on the spot. Also, 2 turns is overkill. Make it 1 turn and only a severe numbness (same as chidori).

    :izuna:
    (Fuinjutsu: Kaminari Den) = Sealing Techniques: Thunder Palace
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: All
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user summons multiple orbs with a special tag on them, filled with enormous amounts of Lightning chakra and suspends them high up in the air in a circular formation around the target. If anyone decides to pass by the orbs, the seal will activate and the one who passed will be immediately zapped by lightning and will be unable to move for 1 turn (pretty much like zapped with chidori nagashi) If the orbs are destroyed by an outside force, the attacker is instantly electrocuted and unable to move for 1 turn.
    Note: The orbs can not be placed in short range radius from the opponent (meaning the user can't summone them next to the opponent, hence electrocuting him on the spot)
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: The orbs last for 4 turns.
    Note: The orbs can be placed around a whole village.


    This is how the technique looks.


    ~Declined~ I don't know why I didn't noticed first; take out or change the bold part, nothing is instantaneous

    Illusionary technique: The hidden seal of Void= Genjutsu: Hitoshirezu Gokuin no Garandou
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This is a secret genjutsu that is being activated by the use of special seal as shown on the picture bellow. The seal represents Nothingness, Emptiness and Void. Once the user performs a row of 5 hand seals, the seal will activate a special genjutsu, that can not be broken unless the seal is broken or deactivated by the user. The genjutsu consist in 2 steps. During the first step, darkness will surround everything and everyone even the user, making it impossible to see through, unless in possession of a doujutsu or any sensing ability. The 2nd step consists in nullifying the sound frequencies, making it impossible for anyone to hear while in the illiusion.
    Note: Can only be taught by Akisha
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns
    Note: Can not be broken through intense pain or any other method. It can only be destroyed by destroying the seal that is being hold in the user.
    Note: Any doujutsu can see through the darkness.
    Note: Any sound user can hear through the genjutsu.


    ~Declined~ Take out the following: "Can't be broken". This is an absolute no-go. Also, this custom is too similar to the 2nd Hokage's Bringer of Darkness technique.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Submissions starting on the 11/28/2011 ending on the 12/04/2011
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ~Resubmitting as New CW~
    Yasha & Sange (No japense word)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The sange in combination with Yasha creates a powerful combination. It is said to be hold of the power of Moon & Stars. Sange represents the moon light and Yasha the star. These swords are attracted to each other, when thrown away one sword, another swordw will draw back the thrown one when it has been added with chakra, the two will link each other with unseen chakra and draw back. The user when added chakra to both sword and hit them like the one shown in the picture below, and user hold it in sky during night, he will be replenished with the unknown chakra.
    The swords are shining with bright purple light when night, and also this energy increase the ability of shadow.
    Notes:
    - The summoning of the weapon count as a turn if not carried before battle
    - When wielding it, the user shadow moves like in the day time since the purple light is bright to support the shadow
    - Can be only used under Renges's permission.
    - Replenishing chakra counts as 2 moves.
    - When an enemy hold it, the sword release powerful purple enegry and shock him
    Looks like


    ~Declined~ First of all, re-read your submission. It's very hard to understand the abilities of this sword because of the poor syntax and grammar. I don't usually decline customs for that reason, but when I can't understand the fundamentals of the customs, it's another story. Secondly, what's this "unknown chakra". Elaborate the abilities in your re-submission.

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    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Pikachu) Summoning Jutsu: Pikachu
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After forming the handseals, the user summon Pikachu. Pikachu is another friend of him, Renges usually carry it on his head or shoulder, it is yellow and has a red cheek. Its body is charged with electric that when the enemy touches him, they will be shocked. It can charge up his summoner attack with C-rank lighting effect when the summoner uses a jutsu while Pikachu is on him. Pikachu can also go down and grab onto enemy and release a powerful B-rank electric discharge.
    - Take a turn to charge
    - The lighting effect will just temporary and can only add to a jutsu each turn
    - When added, the rank of that jutsu goes up by 1 if it is water
    - Cannot add the effect to wind jutsus and other not-in contact attacks
    - Adding lighting effect to a turn does not counts as a move
    - Every time Pikachu attack, it is counted towards user's 3 moves

    Looks like


    ~Declined~ Please precise the range of the B-rank electric discharge. Elaborate "charging up his summoner's attack", can this lightning be directed at an enemy as a C-rank attack, and if yes what is the range. Make it so that every lightning attack used by your summon counts as a move in your turn, even the charge up.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Raticate) Summoning Jutsu: Raticate
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After forming the handseals, the user summon Raticate. Raticate is a large mouse, bipedal instead of quadrupedal, and is mostly tawny in color with a lighter-colored underside. Raticate’s most prominent feature is its very large incisor teeth that grow quickly. Three rows of whiskers extend from its muzzle, which it uses to maintain balance. They also possess webbed feet, which can enable them to swim. Raticate has a rat-like tail, being long, scaled, and bare, and its ears are more ragged in shape. Raticate has teeth that are strong enough to gnaw through steel. They can swim, and they also have the ability to intimidate the lesser summon which has lower rank than A.
    - Raticate can destroy any bite-able defenses lower than B rank, and is counted towards user's 3 moves
    - Every time Raticate intimidate a foe summon, it is counted towards user's 3 moves
    Looks like

    Reference: [ X ]

    ~Declined~ Biting through steel? Let's be serious here... Also, I mentioned before that summons can't use any form of intimidation technique through willpower or ninjutsu (we had enough problems with the actual one).

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    I know that pokemons will be declined, but this is not pokemon, they are normal mice with chakra in them. I take the name, appearance and looks, that's all. I won't spam their actual tech used in Pokemon. Please understand this one that I only take the name and looks. I always wanted to make this one but can't think of a name. If I resummit this with another name, it will be the same justsu useable, same power as these one, I will just change the looks and other facts but the jutsus and everything will be same. So, please think about this, thanks you..
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Sand Style: Binding Inferno
    Type: Offensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80 (40 if sphere is ignited with opponent outside of sphere]
    Description: The User molds scorching ash with his sand to not only add heat to the sand, but also the ability to explode. The User then forms a sphere around his opponent of the infused sand and blows a giant gust of wind to push them to mid range and ignites the Sphere.

    Note: Requires (Fūton: Hanachiri no Mai) - Wind Style: Falling Petal Dance
    (Katon: Haisekishou) - Fire Style: Burning Ash Accumulation
    & (Sabaku Rou) - Sand Prison

    Note: Requires short range but pushes enemy to mid-range
    Note: User cannot use S-rank sand for 3 turns
    Note:Can only be taught by Zaxelzero1

    ~Declined~ Unless you've learned Yin Yang (which I doubt), this technique require that you mold 3 different chakra independently, hence it would take up 3 moves in your turn and would be as long as performing each of them individually. You can resubmit if you want but keep what I just said in mind and mention it in your jutsu.

    Infernal Whirlwind
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank S
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage:90 [0 If used in Short range]
    Description: After performing a series of handseals, The user molds his Katon Chakra into the Air around him, seemingly creating an Aura of flame. He then Rapidly Merges the Aura with his Fuuton chakra and creates a vortex around his body which merges with the Flames. The user then releases the Vortex towards his opponents position, allowing the flames to expand around his opponent. This causes the temperatures around the opponent raise massively and scorching the land that they stand upon. This can be used to attack multiple targets at once.

    Note: Can only be taught by Zaxelzero1
    Note: While in the merging stage, the jutsu can be used defensively
    Note: Jutsu causes reduced damage to Opponents who move underground to dodge as it still heats the ground in the area.
    Note: Mid-Long range becomes heated until the end of the Users next turn, still causing damage
    Note: Can only be used once

    ~Declined~ Read what I wrote above and follow the proper template for S-rank.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Mizu Sumai) – Water Release: Water house
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user quickly summons a wall of water in front of him which is able to protect the user against Fire jutsu ranked S and lower. (The water can be situated in any position the user chooses. For example the user can summon the water to cover him from attacks coming from above him)
    Note: Requires a water source
    Note: Can only be used by RockLeeGreenBeast and those he shares this jutsu with.

    ~Declined~ Restrictions? And why does it do damage?

    (Futon: kaji Tama) – Wind Release: Wind bullets
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user does the tiger hand-seal and is able to shoot out Six bullets concentrated with the users wind chakra. The user can decide to shoot 3 bullets from each hand or can shoot all six with a chosen hand.
    Note: Can only be used by RockLeeGreenBeast and those he shares this jutsu with.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Suiton: Fusicyo) – Water Release: Phoenix
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user spits out water which is concentrated with his chakra and as it goes out of his mouth it forms the shape of a phoenix which is able to fly around the battle field until it is taken down by the opponent by an appropriate jutsu. During its time it can easily deflect Fire jutsu ranked S and lower.
    Note: Can only be used by RockLeeGreenBeast and those he shares this jutsu with.
    Note: If it is not taken down within 3 turns it simply disperses.
    Note: Can be taken down by Earth jutsus ranked B and higher or by any other attack of equal rank with the exception of Fire jutsus.


    Add Restrictions or Edit any if you need/want to.

    ~Declined~ How many times per match can you use it? Any restrictions? Also, there's a difference between deflecting something and protect from. Change deflect to protect in your description please.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by USSJ Future Trunks View Post
    Enemy Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
    Rank: A
    type: supplement
    description: Instantly copies your opponent and summons to the battlefield an avatar equal to the original in chakra but not in stamina and intelligence. requires blood from the target like edo tensei. distracts your opponent and enables you to find out his weaknesses even after an encounter.

    suiton style: boil jutsu
    Rank: B
    type: offensive
    range: short
    Description: combines fire style and water style to heat up the water and surround your opponent, cooking him

    gunpowder release: thousand explosions.
    rank: S
    type: offensive
    range: long
    description: a bloodline limit which uses explosive powder as an offensive weapon but too dangerous to use in defence as an opponent can use katons to blow you up.

    gunpowder release: secret jutsu
    Rank: A
    type: supplement
    range: mid
    function: clogs up the opponents defence by flooding the battlefield with powder and covering them in it.

    fire style: kage bunshin dragon flame
    rank: A
    range: mid
    type: offense
    function: clones dragon flame jutsu into an arsenal, consisting of hundreds.

    kuchiyose: shinobi call for aid
    rank: S
    type: supplementary
    range: unknown
    summon allies instantly to the battlefield anywhere at any time without a contract seal.

    suiton: water dragon wave.
    Rank: S
    Type: offensive
    range: long
    function: a huge and powerful tsunami of water crushing everything in its path. originally devised by tobirama senju.

    aburame style: henge rhino beetle
    Rank: B
    range: close combat
    transforms one into a giant rhino beetle that can run down anything in their path.

    ninja art: eight arms
    Rank: A
    range: short
    one can grow 6 extra solid arms for offence and defence.

    metal release: sword and shield.
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense and defence.
    range: short
    organic metal that can be bended and manipulated using powerful chakra. the ultimate of all shinobi bloodlines.
    Ahh dude, look at the jutsus and use the structure they used instead of just 3 random lines and you're only allowed to submit 3 jutsus each time. Read the first page and make it easier for whoever checks >_<

    EDIT: You're only genin so highest rank you can make a jutsu is D. so Remove all jutsus which are ranked C and higher...which in this case means all of them. lol.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton: Wakusei no Inshō)- Planetary Impression
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will bring both hands together, separated by just a few inches. Then, they will manifest a orb in between their hands, made up of lightning. The user then directs the sphere into the ground in front of them, sending it forward towards the opponent. Since the sphere is composed of lightning, the traveling sphere cuts into the earth a few inches, leaving a small ravine in its wake. The jutsu is capable of destroying even the strongest of earth defenses. If needed, the user can perform two hand seals, which creates a 360 degree blade, which appears in the middle of the sphere. Using this, the jutsu can now puncture through powerful earth defenses, and can also climb vertically up cliffs or walls.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by HereticPassage
    *Note: The sphere is only capable of destroying earth jutsu; the sphere with the blade in the middle can puncture through earth
    *Note: Must not have used ration in the previous turn
    *Note: Usable once per battle

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exists, you only added a blade in it =/

    (Suiton: Ekitai Yubi Burēdo)- Liquid Finger Blades
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Med/Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user performs the following hand seals, Monkey → Ram → Boar, and then brings their hand to their mouth. They place their hand horizontally in front of their mouth, with the thumb facing up. Then they will spit out a fast moving jet of water through their four fingers (not including the thumb). This action separates the water jet into 5 different horizontal blades of water. As the blades leave the users hand, they expand; each blade is five feet in length.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by HereticPassage
    *Note: Each blade is a weak B-rank; together they are an S rank
    *Note: Usable twice per battle

    ~Approved~

    (Suiton: Sansui sōchi)- Sprinkler System
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Med
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user, by channeling suiton chakra to their feet, will inject their chakra into the ground, as far as mid-range. Then, performing a single hand seal, the user will force their chakra from the ground, using nature transformation to change the chakra into water. This ejects a large amount of water from three places mid-range from the ground, similar to the function of a sprinkler. The water from the ground will then remain on the battlefield, allowing the user to use the water for any techniques up to A-rank.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by HereticPassage
    *Note: Can only be used on a battlefield that has no water present
    *Note: Water lasts for 5 turns; usable twice per battle

    Feel free to edit any.

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Mathias View Post
    (Doton: Tsuchi Suponji) - Earth Style: Earth Sponge
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Tsuchi Suponji is a very simple technique that any earth master can perform. The user will channel his chakra into the ground. He then will change the earth itself to open up pores everywhere that soaks water up like a sponge. This technique can be used to absorb large quantities of water.

    Note: Can be used three times per battle
    Note: Must have mastered Earth
    Note: Must be taught by Mathias
    Declined, specify better the ammount of water that can be absorbed such as amount of techniques
    (Doton: Tsuchi Suponji) - Earth Style: Earth Sponge
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Tsuchi Suponji is a very simple technique that any earth master can perform. The user will channel his chakra into the ground. He then will change the earth itself to open up pores everywhere that soaks water up like a sponge. This technique can be used to absorb large quantities of water.

    Note: Can be used three times per battle
    Note: It can absorb one natural water source or A-Ranked and below Water technique per use, as long as the water is keeping contact with the ground.
    Note: It can not be used to absorb an oceans worth of water.
    Note: Must have mastered Earth
    Note: Must be taught by Mathias

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (Look through Zenryoku's customs if I'm correct).

    (Ninpou: Inku Manipyure-shon) - Ninja Art: Ink Manipulation
    Rank:B
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user will change the shape of a special ink source to create small weapons like daggers, kunais etc, shields, or pillars made of ink by manipulating the users chakra that is already inside the ink source. The items can also be pre-drawn inside a scroll. The method of manipulating and ink source instead if drawing it out inside a scroll based on "(Ninpu: Sumi Nagashi) – Ninja Art: Ink Balance" where Sai pours the special ink onto the ground to create snakes without drawing them.

    Note: Can be used five times
    Note: The user can only manipulate his own special ink.
    Note: Must have an Ink Bio
    Note: Requires Ink source
    Note: Must be taught by Mathias

    ~Approved~

    (Fuuinjutsu: Chuubuu Gekitai) - Sealing Technique: Paralysis Repulse
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Chuubuu Gekitai is a special seal located in the users back. The seal automatically activates when the user has been shocked or paralyzed by an electrical current. Upon activation, the seal will start pouring out wind chakra, manifesting wind throughout the users body. Wind having an incredible resistance to electrical currents, will cause the prevention of further spreading. The after effect of this process will be numbness throughout the body for one turn, due to the electrical current straining the body.

    Note: Must know Fuuinjutsu.
    Note: Must be placed in the users biography.
    Note: Each biography can have up to two seals. Meaning this technique can be used twice per battle. One Seal will be located in the upper back and the other will be on the lower back.
    Note: The user cannot perform any genjutsu in the same round.
    The user cannot perform any summonings for the same and the following 2 turns.
    Note: If the electrical current has enough volts to kill, the seal is void.
    Note: Can only be used by Mathias.

    The genjutsu and summoning notes are cannon restrictions, I wanted to include just in case.

    ~Approved~

    :izuna:
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    The reason I have 5 submissions here is because I still had two more submissions from last week. Link to post. I wanted to wait until my previous customs were checked to submit my other two but time ran out and I was unable to edit anymore so im posting them here with this new week's submissions if thats alright with u. If not u can ignore the first two submissions.

    Last time's submissions:

    "Kei Sekken" Strong World "Pulse"
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack|Defend
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: Those who have trained in Kei Sekken's second training procedure of channeling chakra into their attacks eventually learn this technique known as Strong World "Pulse". The user channels a large amount of chakra into his/her fore arms and palms enhancing their defensive properties and destructive force. The user will then or after countering a technique; Perform a powerful thrust palm into the opponents torso or back releasing the chakra as they make contact causing what looks like a pulse of the user's palms that sends the opponent flying with an impact strong enough to shatter ribs and other possible internal damage.
    Notes:
    -Must be a sannin or higher to use
    -Usable 3 times

    "Kei Sekken" Strong World Inertia
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack|Supplementary|Defend
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: One of the counters in Kei sekken. When the opponent comes in for an attack that is either above or below the waist, the user will channel chakra into either his arms (above the waist) or legs (below the waist); reinforcing those corosponding limbs to take the impact of a technque. Apon contact with the user, this chakra is released in a sort of pulse that in a sense repels the opponent by blowing them back a meter away, giving an opening in the opponents defense for the user to exploit.
    Note:Usable 4 times
    Note:This can block and counter up to B-rank taijutsu.


    ~Both Declined~ There's no such thing as stacking custom jutsu submission. Next time you do this I'll consider it as submitting 5 customs.

    New Submissions:

    "Kei Sekken" Strong World Cannon
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: After training in both strength and chakra channeling, one who practices Kei Sekken learns this. The user will channel chakra into his/her fist to increase impact and damage aswell as channel a large amount of chakra into his elbow. The user will then or after countering a technique; Punch the opponent through either a hook or haymaker while releasing that chakra from the elbow in the form of a propolsion system increasing the speed and velocity of the attack giving it enough power to seriously injure the target and in some cases even knock them out if aimed for the head and jaw area.
    Notes:
    -Must be S-class or higher and have training in Kei sekken
    -Usable 3 times

    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing technique.

    "Bakusaiga"
    Rank:S
    Type:Weapon
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description: "Bakusaiga" the weapon of legend that gave the holder the supposed power of a tailed demon. Whoever held this weapon would get a very dense chakra so ominous that they were put into legends and folk tales. Taiketsu Yagami found this sword and the truth behind it came with a tablet only readable by those combatible with the chakra. The sword's abilities actually come from a monster known as "Yama" A artificial chakra monster with chakra levels so dense and high, it was considered a 0 tailed beast. The Sage of Six Path's decendent was able to kill off the monster and seal his chakra into the sword while engraving a seal that allowed the chakra to mix with the person who held it if compatable. When the user releases the seal, they become infused with the chakra making them a monster in a sense by giving them demonic chakra with very high chakra levels.

    ~Abilities:
    -This sword syncs with the user making the user's chakra become very dense and demonic while taking on a green hue, increasing the power of non-elemental ninjutsu[+5] aswell as making all chakra based techniques to be equal to an elemental technique of the same rank.
    -The amount of chakra being channeled causes the user's chakra levels to rise substantually. (They can be considered a tailed beast without a tail like Kisame)
    -When a foreign object touches the user's chakra, they get burned in a similar manner to Naruto in his incomplete form since the chakra is so demonic.
    -The sword itself is virtually indestructable due to alloy it is made from and can stand very high temperatures.

    ~Restrictions:
    -While using this sword, the user can only use techniques that require creating the jutsu or element itslef since this chakra can't be channled into foreign objects.
    -The sword's granted abilities last 5 turns after activation
    -The user suffers in a similar manner to Naruto while wielding it after activation. (After 5 turns of using this chakra, the user's body begins to shut down starting with right arm, next turn left arm, next turn legs, and then next turn body making them completely paralyzed and in need of medical attention.
    -The user is limited to only two moves a turn while this is active
    -Can only be wielded by Taiketsu Yagami (Anyone else, the chakra would severly injure as it can't mix with theirs.)


    Owned by Taiketsu Approved
    My one jutsu for Bakusaiga

    "Bakusaiga" Demonic Blessing of Taiketsu Yagami
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Attack|Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:50
    Damage:N/A (+15 to chakra techniques such as rasengan that involve pure chakra)
    Description: The Demonic Blessing of Taiketsu Yagami is when Taiketsu releases all the chakra within Bakusaiga at once and channel it into his body. The over load of chakra causes Taiketsu to take on the demonic features of the Yama of which the chakra was taken from. While active the user's pure chakra techniques become enhanced and Taiketsu grows chakra wings with serrated edges not only giving him flight but having the ability to cut through rock. These wings are extremely durable also being able to endure the impacts of almost anything up to S-rank making the user virtually indestructable for a moment. Although while this is active the user is unable to use anything but taijustu, kenjutsu, and pure chakra techniques as the user loses the ability to swich chakra natures. The wings are very strong but they can only take so much as after being hit by techniques with the euivalent power of an S-rank technique, they brake off and disperse.
    Notes:
    -This mode lasts 2 turns
    -Must be used in the same turn as releasing the seal of Bakusaiga
    -After deactivation all granted abilities of Bakusaiga disappears and the user gets paralyzed through out his entire body
    -The wings cannot block cannon techniques such as amaterasu, Kirin, etc. (One hit killers that are unblockable or unavoidable)

    ~Declined~ Flight and invincibility (even for a short moment) are a very bad mix from my point of view...lol. Take both those out, we have enough techniques that grow wings already to make any new ones a rip off. About the invulnerability part, I think you know exactly what to do.

    (Katon:kasai hitoya) Fire Release: Fire Prison
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A( +10 if they touch the fire)
    Description: This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable dome of fire.The user will gather his fire chakra in his hands, slamming them into the ground forming a ring around the opponent. The user will then make it rise forming a dome around the opponent. Not only will this trap the victim but it will burn the oxygen inside so if the opponent doesn't escape in three turns, he will run out of breath and die.
    -Jutsu can only last for three turns
    -Can only be used or taught by Taiketsu Namikaze
    -Can be escaped by jutsu like "Hide like a mole" or with a powerful water jutsu

    (Owned by Taiketsu Approved)
    Im updating the range on this jutsu to better suit the RP

    (Katon:kasai hitoya) Fire Release: Fire Prison
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A( +10 if they touch the fire)
    Description: This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable dome of fire. The user will gather his fire chakra in his hands, slamming them into the ground forming a spark of flames that travels to the opponent at high speeds and apon reaching 3 meters close to him/her, the fire expands into a ring around the opponent which then rises into a dome of fire trapping the opponent inside. Not only will this trap the victim but it will burn the oxygen inside so if the opponent doesn't escape in three turns, he will run out of breath and die.
    -Jutsu can only last for three turns
    -While keeping this jutsu active, the user can't use any other jutsu or remove his hands from the floor as the jutsu will cancel, although clones could make up for that
    -Can only be used or taught by Taiketsu Namikaze


    ~Declined~ How could such a technique get approved in the first place? Take out the inescapable part and I'll re-check it.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Bandicoot (Eastern Barred Bandicoot, to be specific)
    Scroll Owner: Sharingdork
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Crash
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A (TBA)

    ~Approved~

    (Kurasshubandikū) Crash Bandicoot
    Type: Summon
    Range: Short
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Crash is a bipedal Bandicoot who wears shoes, pants, and wrist braces. Crash is a very fit creature, and the leader of the Bandicoots. Being a young and physically active Bandicoot, Crash can move very quickly, and jump higher than average ninja. Crash can use all non-elemental ninjutsu the summoner can, weaving the handseals himself, and can take the braces off his wrists in order to throw free-form taijutsu in more rapid succession. Once per battle, Crash can spin around, his arms flailing around himself to hit any target within arms reach.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be summoned once per battle
    ~Jutsu Crash uses counts towards the users 3 moves per turn
    ~Crash's spin counts as a move


    ~Declined~ This is the Narutoverse, try and adapt your custom to it. No animals would wear cloths, shoes and wrist braces -___-. Limit his use of ninjutsus to S-rank.

    (Sennen Pazzuru) Millennium Puzzle
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Self (All ranges for communication)
    Rank: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A (-5 to communicate) (-15 for light)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The Millennium Puzzle was an item given to Yugi for a specific purpose. After completing the Puzzle, the soul of Atem, Yugi's Souma No Ku twin, was released into Yugi's body. Now Yugi wears the Puzzle all the time, slowly unlocking it's abilities, the first of which was separating into two Puzzles whenever the twins split into two people. They then found that by focusing chakra into the Puzzle, they could communicate telepathically with whoever was wearing the other Puzzle no matter how far away they were. The Puzzle also allowes them to know where the other is in relation to themselves, and allows them to sense what kind of chakra the other was moulding while separated. The Puzzle also allows Souma No Ku users to switch the dormant bodies so if the main body is severely injured, they can rest. They later discovered that the Puzzles abilities work with clones, as well as with Souma No Ku users, with the exception of the changing dormant bodies. Once per battle, the Puzzle can emmit a bright light that blocks the targets vision.
    Note: ~Can only be used by Sharingdork and those whom he allows
    ~Works for Souma No Ku twins and clones
    ~Sensing where the other user is or what chakra type they're using counts as a move
    ~The light counts as a move


    ~Declined do not resubmit~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Renji Kōyō no Jutsu] - Range Enhancement Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a basic ninjutsu technique that's used for the simple purpose of enhacing a certain technique's range making the technique travel at further distances, meaning that if the user uses a ninjutsu or a genjutsu technique that extends only to mid range, the user will use this technique afterwards causing it to extend up to long range, or if the user uses a ninjutsu or a genjutsu technique that reaches only up to Short range, the user will cause it to reach up to Mid range, in order to achieve this after the usage of a ninjutsu or a genjutsu technique, the user releases his normal or elemental chakra according to the technique's required chakra that's to be infused, the user infuses additional chakra into the technique that he released beforehand, causing the chakra of the technique that's infused by this not to fade after reaching it's original position, but to continue towards the direction that it was shot in, this technique only works on ninjutsu or genjutsu techniques including elemental techniques and only works on techniques that are thrown, it doesn't work on techniques that are stationary or made into the user's hand [like the rasengan/Chidori for ex.]
    ~Can only be used 5 times per battle.
    ~Lasts for a period of 1 turn when it's used.
    ~Only enhances the techniques with an additional short range. [Ex. if the technique reaches short range it will be enhanced to reach Mid range only]
    ~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ For obvious reasons I will not accept this (the most obvious would be to increase the range of Genjutsus to long-range which is plain OP). Also, many techniques are design to fit a certain range and would lose their purpose and feasibility if the range was altered.

    [Kōshō Kagame Hōhō no Jutsu] - Mirror Connection Method Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: All Ranges
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a basic ninjutsu technique following the same methods of the shadow clone technique but more advanced and has different usages than the standard shadow clone technique, purely developed by Sharingan holders that know, above all their lack of forcing their genjutsu onto the targets, as their have to be a mutual eye contact between the targeted opponent and the user as the opponent has to be looking into the user's Sharingan eyes in order to be caught into a Sharingan genjutsu which is very rare, knowing this the Uchiha developed a technique that finally stops that restriction to their eyes, this technique is very simple in which the user projects a gignatic image of his eyes connected straight to his Sharingan anywhere he wants on the battlefield which can be made at any angle they want according to the situation at hand, this can be made into the opponent's line of sight making the opponent instantly be caught into the Sharingan genjutsu that the user wishes to use, regardless of the range of the Sharingan genjutsu technique.
    ~Can only be used 5 times per battle.
    ~This only works on standard 3 Tomoe genjutsu techniques and below, however it doesn't work on Mangekyo Sharingan level genjutsu techniques.
    ~Can only be used by a Sharingan Kekkei Genkai biography.
    ~Can only be used by ~Crow~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Again, extremely OP and declined for obvious reasons. You can argue about this one, but trust me, it will not get approved for the sake of our RP.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Bijuu : Sabureoni toutatsu) - Tailed Beast Technique : Sand Demon's Arrival
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 35
    Damage points : 70
    Description : When this technique is in play, sand that can be found around the field starts manifesting the shapes of ghouls made out of sand. This happens due to the presence of the Shukaku's chakra being exposed to the surrounding. These ghouls will attack anything that is a threat to the user. Despite being made out of sand, these ghouls travel very fast through the air by turning into sand particles and drift through the air. The number of ghouls determines the size of each and every one of the ghoul. The more ghouls there are, the smaller they are. On average, ten sand ghouls would be the size of a regular human being, a single ghoul could be the size of the Complete Shukaku.

    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : Must be in Incomplete Form at the least
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used by the Jinchuuriki of the Ichibi
    Note : Sand ghouls are unable of performing sand techniques

    ~Declined~ Give me a fix number of ghouls you can make, and what they can withstand if attacked. Also, do they reform?
    RESUBMITTING :

    (Bijuu : Sabureoni toutatsu) - Tailed Beast Technique : Sand Demon's Arrival
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : When this technique is in play, sand that can be found around the field starts manifesting the shapes of ghouls made out of sand. This happens due to the presence of the Shukaku's bijuu chakra being exposed to the surrounding. These ghouls will attack anything that is a threat to the user. Despite being made out of sand, these ghouls travel very fast through the air by turning into sand particles and drifting through the air. The number of ghouls determines the size of each and every one of the ghoul. The more ghouls there are, the smaller they are. On average, ten sand ghouls would be the size of a regular human being, a single ghoul could be the size of the complete Shukaku.

    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : Must be in Incomplete Form at the least
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used by the Jinchuuriki of the Ichibi
    Note : Sand ghouls are unable of performing sand techniques
    Note : There can only be a maximum of ten sand ghouls present on the field
    Note : Sand ghouls can only be in play for at least three turns if not destroyed
    Note : Able to reform with nearby sand if hit by a physical form of attack or a part of it is destroyed

    ~Declined~ 10 sand ghouls that can reform without costing a move or chakra? That's OP. Either make it so they can't reform or make it so you summon 1-2 ghouls.

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    (Doton : Yochizaisan) - Earth Release : Property of the Earth
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user will slam both hands, widespreading his earth chakra throughout the entire battlefield, both behind and in front. The moment the user slams his hands onto the ground, the target(s) can consider themselves already in the clutches of this technique. Nothing will happen to them though but now, the earth will take the enemy as theirs slaves and will not free them for the period of this technique. The purpose of this technique is to prevent the enemy from taking air advantage or escaping by flying into the sky by having several earth hooks burst out of the ground and grapple them the moment they try to escape and pull them back down onto the earth, hurting them in the process. As long as the enemy doesn't try to take air advantage, no harm will be done to them up until the point till the technique wears off.

    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : This technique lasts for five of the user's turns
    Note : Can be released by performing the Snake handseal
    Note : No S-rank or above earth techniques can be used while active
    Note : No damage shall be done to the enemy as long as he doesn't take it into the air and stay on land

    ~Declined~ Great idea, but tell me, how will this jutsu make the difference between a Shinobi jumping to avoid a technique or attack, and a Shinobi trying to take flight (air advantage)? Please clarify in your re-submission.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Depp~ View Post
    (Yonseijinyajuu)- Four Saint Beasts
    Type: Puppets
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (If summoned)
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The Four Saint Beasts are puppets made by, The Mad Hatter. The Mad Hatter once said after making them "If used by the right puppet master, they coud take down a forest in a single night." Each of the four puppets have their own abilities, weapons, and appearence to match them, they all are able to detach most of their body parts from one another, with no visable joints to the opponent.


    ~~ First and Slowest but most durable of the puppets is, Genbu the Stone Beast, he is made from hardened wood wrapped in iron, covering every part of his body, standing 7ft, with a large shell covering his whole back like a tortois, that is able to pop open from his tail and stand like its connected to his neck; his arms positioned in a knuckle walk position like an ape; clawed toes like a dinosaur; the segmented tail of a snake and the spiked; tusked primitive face of an ogre with large white eyes with small black pupils, with a bold black kanji on his forehead standing for power 力.
    ~ Shell sheild on his back, that will pop open from his tail then stand as if its attached to his neck.
    ~ Two berrals in his throut, the first releases blasts of Fire, while the other release shells of senbon that once fired from his throut will release the senbon just like a buck shot.
    ~ Body is able to release thick triangle sword blades from around his shells edge, the blades can be used my the puppeteer, can be weilded just like swords.

    ~~ Second is the most muscluer looking puppet and hairiest, Byakko the White Toger, Byakko is made of solid metal with hidden conpartments hidden under his fur like cover, standing just under Genbu, he takes the appearance of a large humanoid tiger with a mane-like sea green hair that flows down his back with light bluish fur with grey stripes on his arms, in both of his shoulders are hidden poles with 5 blades attached to the pole that spin able to cut boulders in half, also another set in his knees, with his two bottom canine teeth large enough to reach up his cheeks, in Byakko's throut is a hose that release blasts of water from it, he has a preloaded shuriken in his mouth, he is able to shoot them from his mouth, around the hose in his throut. He has yellow eyes with red pupils and a kanji symbol for beast on his forehead 獣. He wears a toga and what appear to be leg warmers in animal skins of the leopard, and has a red sash as a belt.
    ~ 5 bladed poles installed in his shoulders and knees.
    ~ Water hose in his throut.
    ~ Shuriken shooter in his throut.
    ~ Large War hammer on his back.

    ~~ The Third and most human looking besides the greenish blue skin is Seiryu the Blue Dragon, Tall and slim, Seiryu is the only normal sized one of them all, while possessing pale green skin and black facial hair hiding holes in his head which will release wires from them able to perice through rocks and trees with ease. His blue martial arts robe is tied at the waist by a large white strap and features the image of a blue dragon wrapping around his shoulder. To match his robe, Seiryu wears a dark, blue cap covering just the top part of a symbol on his forehead for ice 氷, and on his feet he wears a simple pair of black shoes, from Seiryu's left arm has a chakra sheild installed in it, while in his right arm he has a powerful vaccum hose installed in his palm that is able to blow and suck.
    ~ Wires in his head, that can be freely controlled by the puppeteer.
    ~ Left arm chakra sheild of A-rank.
    ~ Right hand has a powerful vaccum hose that can blow and suck.
    ~ Dragon sword on the left side of his waist.


    ~~ Last and smallist of the Four Saint Beasts, Suzaku Ho-oh, Suzaku is made of a milable steel, has lightning chakra that the user injects into Suzaku at the begining of the puppets useage, giving suzaku an electical charge during battle. Has long orange hair parted down the middle, with two red strands that are actually his antennae, which are able to launch at the opponent with a cord attached to them, having full control over the antena the puppeteer will use them to attack the opponent at free will, between the antennae is a kanji symbol for speed 速. Suzaku also has polls that will extened from his palms to the ground, will senbon loaded in each of his fingers that are able to be thrown by Suzaku waving his arm in the direction.
    ~ Launchable antennae, attached by cords.
    ~ Polls in his palms. (just a poll that comes out of his palm able to be used as a sword.)
    ~ Senbon loaded in his fingers.
    ~ Dual blades on his back.

    ~ Only Two of the Four Saint Beasts can be used in one turn.
    ~ Each of the puppets Elemental installments can be used, but count as a jutsu for the puppeteer, with a B-rank useage.

    Animal Contract..... (didnt see anything about foxes in the Approved customs summons)



    Summoning Animal: Foxes
    Scroll Owner: ~Depp~
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: n/a


    ~All Declined~ I've already warned people about this -___-. The limit is 3 jutsu per week, I will let anyone submit jutsu that have multiple summons or multiple jutsus included in them. If you want to submit all those beats, you'll get them approved individually and then submit the jutsu to summon them all at once. This is your only warning, next time I'm banning you from this thread for a week.
    ~~ Last and smallist of the Four Saint Beasts, Suzaku Ho-oh, Suzaku is made of a milable steel, has lightning chakra that the user injects into Suzaku at the begining of the puppets useage, giving suzaku an electical charge during battle. That will up his damage on opponents and cause numbnes on the opponents body. Has long orange hair parted down the middle, with two red strands that are actually his antennae, which are able to launch at the opponent with a cord attached to them, having full control over the antena the puppeteer will use them to attack the opponent at free will, between the antennae is a kanji symbol for speed 速. Suzaku also has polls that will extened from his palms to the ground, will senbon loaded in each of his fingers that are able to be thrown by Suzaku waving his arm in the direction.
    ~ Launchable antennae, attached by cords.
    ~ Polls in his palms. (just a poll that comes out of his palm able to be used as a sword.)
    ~ Senbon loaded in his fingers.
    ~ Dual blades on his back.

    ~Declined~ Just like the others, where are the restrictions? What's the rank of the electrical surge and it's range?

    (Kage Tai)- Shadow Form
    Type: Def
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user will focus his chakra into his shadow then begin to ingulf the user in his own shadow, while in the shadow the user is free to move anywhere else on the feild there is a shadow. (from short to mid is the max distance that can be traveled while in the shadow.)
    - Can only be used once per battle.
    - No elemental jutsu can be used in the same turn.
    - Must be a member of the Nara Clan.
    Shadow Form

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ No instantaneous transportation will be accepted (let's not beat around the bush, this could be used to move anywhere on the field through shadows, so it's a time/space technique and those are forbidden).

    (Keibi Kage)- Guard Shadow
    Type: Def
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user will release chakra throughout there shadow, a munipulate the shadow into a pile of arms, creating a deffensive dome of shadow arms over the user.
    - Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    - Must be a member of the Nara Clan.
    Guard Shadow

    ~Approved~ Keep the link in the description of the technique so your opponent knows what it looks like.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Chakra Release: Sphere Bomb(bun'ya bomu)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Chakra come out of the hand look like a rasengan but is a perfect sphere it doesnt rotate or move once the enemy get hit is power is to create a chakra explosion inside of the person making him unable to move and damaging his inside organs
    Is a Hyuga Jutsu only does who master the chakra control can use it (also it has no element on it) thats why is just chakra.

    Fire Release:Blaze Fortress (Katon Style:kaen toride)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: mid and short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:Everything around start to burn a circle of 1/2 mile distance this jutsu is mostly for trapping enemy ,it user cant be hurt by the flames, the flames only surround the enemy but the heat is strong because of the extreme heat they cant last long depending on the chakra since the jutsu main power is to steal the chakra the end or wall of the jutsu are the strongest and highest it cant be jump or just go throw it is like jumping to amaterasu(only raikage would do that) so that the enemy cant escape that easy because of it the user cant use other jutsu during this or the jutsu will break and his doesnt have also his weak again outside attacks

    ~Both Declined~ You don't have the appropriate rank to submit those customs.

    Wind Style:Tropical Breath (Futton Style:toropikaru iki)
    Rank:D
    Chakra Cost:10
    Damage:10
    Type:Attack
    Range:long and mid
    Description:The attack is really weak but it does have cutting power like a kunai , his main usage is to break rope and think like that when you are trap and your hand are tie up this jutsu need no hand sign . It only need to breath air to use it because it need no hand sign you need a special sign written in your body

    ~Declined~ Description is incoherent and unclear. Re-submit.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Sandāboruto Yari) - Thunderbolt Lance
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: -10 per turn
    Damage Points: Depends (+10 to Raiton jutsu)
    Description: The harpoon itself is 1m long and is composed of a silver star metal. The rope is a special rope made of the hair of a Yak, infused with Zinc so the rope itself is able ton conduct a stream of electricity. The rope can allow the spear to be thrown and pulled back, up to mid-range. The rope is only able to be destroyed with an A-Rank Jutsu or higher. The Spear itself is indestructible. The user can infuse their own lightning chakra into the harpoon before throwing it to increase the speed of the aerial harpoon. Upon penetration of the opponent, the harpoon can emit an electrical surge to them, stunning them. The user can also stick the harpoon into the ground and send lightning through the spear, spreading throughout the earth. The lightning can only spread out from a short area of the spear. The earth within short range cannot be altered by any Doton jutsu.
    Notes:
    - Must master Raiton before wielding the Sandāboruto Yari.
    - Must be wielding the Harpoon in some way for chakra effects to work.
    - Using the chakra effects with the harpoon counts as a move.
    - Stunning affect lasts for one turn.
    - Can only be wielded by Omnom (and those whom he allows).

    ~Approved~
    Feel free to edit how you wish

    Human Puppet Submission:

    Kurokiri Setsuna
    Rank: S-Rank Puppet
    Name: -Tauburn- (Kurokiri Setsuna)
    Link to bio:http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=111402
    Description: This puppet can use the Dark KG and all elements are mastered, along with ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu. The Setsuna puppet is kept in a scroll that's stuck on Sasori's back, and he can be summoned by Sasori as Sasori wants to.
    ~Note: Can only be wielded by Sasori, and Sasori has to be owned by Omnom and who he allows.

    Link to Battle: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...81&postcount=1

    First time submitting a human puppet, so please change whatever you need.

    ~Leaving for someone else, dunno much bout puppets~
    Declined, the puppet of characters can only use the Kekkai genkai or special abilities
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Daiki View Post
    I have permission of Riku.. to make the Iguana summoning contract



    Summoning Animal: Iguana
    Scroll Owner: Daiki
    Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Takeru
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
    I'll post them if they get approved.

    Description:
    Iguana is a herbivorous genus of lizard native to tropical areas of Central and South America and the Caribbean.Iguana possess a dewlap, a row of spines running down their back to their tail, and a third "eye" on their head. This eye is known as the parietal eye, visible as a pale scale on the top of the head. Behind their neck are small scales which resemble spikes, known as tuberculate scales.
    Iguanas have excellent vision and can see shapes, shadows, colors and movement at long distances. Iguanas use their eyes to navigate through crowded forests, as well as for finding food. They use visual signals to communicate with other members of the same species,



    Signers of the contract must get the Iguana tattoo


    ~Contract Approved~

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Takeru ) - Summoning Technique:Takeru 'Scaled Tank'
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage: N/A
    Description:Takeru is the boss Iguana summon,He is the largest of the Iguanas and is around half the size of Gamabunta although is very long due to his huge tail.He isnt the Fastest of Iguana's although has a huge layer of scales making attacks A-rank and below useless against him.This has earned him the nickname of the "Scaled Tank". His elemental affinities are Earth and water,which allows him to release a powerful S-ranked blast twice per battle which counts towards the user's three moves. This can't be used on consecutive turns.Takeru can also use his tounge to whack over enemys and his huge tail to smash through A-rank Rock.Summoners can easily ride Takeru and escape attack from jutsus by hiding in special protection pods in his cheeks,Takeru has incredible area awareness due to his "Third Eye" allowing even slight change in the Environment to be Detected
    -Can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Can only remain on the battlefield for four turns.
    -S-ranked Blast can only be used twice per battle and not on consecutive turns.

    Boss Iguana Declined. Too over powered. Godzilla couldnt take this guy down

    Replacing with

    Permission from Nexus to make Bullet ants since he has the Velvet ant contract



    Summoning Animal: Bullet Ant
    Scroll Owner: Daiki
    Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Shinichi
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
    I'll post them if they get approved.

    Description:
    Bullet Ants are a genus of ant consisting of a single species, commonly known as the lesser giant hunting ant or conga ant, , named on account of its powerful and potent sting, which is said to be as painful as being shot with a bullet.It inhabits humid lowland rainforests from Nicaragua south to Paraguay. The bullet ant is called "Hormiga Veinticuatro" or "24 (hour) ant" by the locals, referring to the 24 hours of pain that follow being stung.They are 18–30 mm long and resemble stout, reddish-black, wingless wasps.The pain caused by this insect's sting is purported to be greater than that of any other Hymenopteran, and is ranked as the most painful according to the Schmidt Sting Pain Index, given a "4+" rating, above the tarantula hawk wasp. It is described as causing "waves of burning, throbbing, all-consuming pain that continues unabated for up to 24 hours".The legs of the ant are very strong so they can run very quickly. If a man could run as fast for his size as an ant can, he could run as fast as a racehorse. Ants can lift 20 times their own body weight. An ant brain has about 250 000 brain cells. A human brain has 10,000 million so a colony of 40,000 ants has collectively the same size brain as a human.Bullet ants have extremely strong jaws being able to crush objects with their pincers,and also have amazing sense of smell and sight using they antenna.



    Signers of the contract must get This tatoo on their right arm, to symbolise a signer of the contract.



    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Takeru ) - Summoning Technique:Shinichi 'First son'
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Shinichi is the boss ant,he is extremely large male ant who is around 1/3 of Gamabuntas height and twice the size in length.He has a black body with a red arrow like marking on his abdomen.Shinichi is a fast summon who can run at over 45mph to stample over terrain and opponents.He is also able to utilize his 6 legs to jump high into the air to avoid/dodge attacks and crush the ground beneath him.He has powerfull pincer attack thats able to crush and pierce through A rank rock and wood.Twice per match he can release a S-rank fire and earth mix beam out of his pincers.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Can only remain on the battlefield for four turns.
    -S-ranked Blast can only be used twice per battle and not on consecutive turns.

    ~All Declined~ It's Animal Contract, not insect contract. Insects are reserved for Aburama, and they don't need summoning contracts to summon them.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Bolt View Post
    This weeks-
    Edit any part for approval


    (Fuuton: Haipa- Janpu) - Wind Style: Hyper Jump
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Advanced version of "Super Jump", in which user contrates a very huge amount of wind chakra in his legs, and then releases it, resulting in a hyper jump upto 30m height in an instant in any direction the user wants.
    This technique can also be used to jump from short to long or from long to short range as it is very advanced.
    Note: Must know "(Fuuton: Su-pa Janpu) - Wind style: Super Jump" to use this technique.
    Note: Can only be taught by Bolt.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per match.

    ~Declined~ 30m in an instant? Not in a million years.

    (Raiton: Dendou Ame) - Lightning Release: Electric Rain
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After Using the technique "Rain at Will Tiger", user uses this technique to add raiton chakra in rain to make it electric infused with water, which gives small bolts to opponent when hit.
    Note: ~User is immune to this tech because it is his raiton chakra only.
    ~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.

    ~Declined~ What's the purpose of your technique if there's no damage? Also, be aware that there would be no lightning left in the water droplets as it hits the ground. Electricity quickly diffuses through the air or heats the water.

    (Suiton: Hazumi Netto) - Water Release: Rebounding Net
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User creates a net of jelly made of water in front of him so that when a earth or similar projectile technique hit it, the net rebounds that projectile in that same direction with same speed.
    Note: ~Can rebound upto one rank higher techniques.
    ~Can only be used 5 times per battle, as it requires dense water chakra.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.

    ~Declined~ Do you have a Jelly CE? Even if you do, this isn't the right place to submit it.
    Resubmit- removed the instant part.

    (Fuuton: Haipa- Janpu) - Wind Style: Hyper Jump
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Advanced version of "Super Jump", in which user contrates a very huge amount of wind chakra in his legs, and then releases it, resulting in a hyper jump upto 30m height in any direction the user wants.
    This technique can also be used to jump from short to long or from long to short range as it is very advanced.
    Note: Must know "(Fuuton: Su-pa Janpu) - Wind style: Super Jump" to use this technique.
    Note: Can only be taught by Bolt.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per match.

    ~Approved~ Just so we're clear, you got to be in contact with the ground or something else, in order to make that jump. You cannot use it while mid-air.
    resubmit, forgot to add the DP

    (Raiton: Dendou Ame) - Lightning Release: Electric Rain
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (+1 for each drop)
    Description: When using the technique "Rain at Will Tiger", simultaneously the user concentrates on rain and adds raiton chakra in rain to make it lightning infused with water, which gives small bolts to opponent when hit.
    Note: ~User is immune to this tech because it is his lightning chakra only.
    ~When lightning is added to the rain, it becomes lightning-water combo.
    ~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.

    ~Declined~ What stops it from harming the user?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    ‡Yamato - The Devil's Blade‡
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 [+30 per turn to maintain the sensing ability]
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 to Wind Release Techniques, +5 to Kenjutsu Techniques]
    Description: The Yamato 閻魔刀 Or in other words "The Devil's Blade" Resembles a Japanese Ōkatana though it's said to cut through Almost any ordinary sword with ease, as it's even sharper than a normal Ōkatana, it's either strapped on the user's left or right side, Yamato is an Ōkatana which has a black scabbard with a golden ribbon tied around it with the blade's handle itself was wrapped in white silk cloth with an intricate design of black silk covering the sides of the handle make a straight line to the guard while sheathed, What makes the Yamato sharper than a Normal Ōkatana is that it takes the use of the user's Wind release chakra around the blade and has the power to amplify the user's wind release techniques, when the user infuses wind chakra to the blade a raging wind aura forms around the blade increasing it's sharpness as the wind aura spins around rapidly allowing the user to use any wind release techniques that requires the usage of handseal with one less handseal than it normally requires and the user can perform wind release techniques on a faster rate than a normal ninja as if the user has the wind specialty, the last special ability to the blade is that it releases wind infused with the user's chakra which resembles a non-harmful wind breeze in the whole battlefield that let's the user sense the surrounding and know the exact location of any object or person that contains chakra within when it comes into contact with the wind breeze, this sensing ability only let's the user sense over anyone over the ground or into the air, the user can't sense anyone that's located underground from him and he is able to sense his location only when the opponent is emerging from underneath the ground to the surface of the ground, the user has to be holding the blade in one of his hands for this special sensing ability to work as he has to infuse the sword with a small amount of wind chakra every turn to maintain the sensing ability active.
    Note: Must have mastered the Wind Release to weild this Ōkatana
    Note: The user's Wind Release Techniques gain +10 additional damage points.
    Note: This Ōkatana is indestructible however it doesn't mean that it can cut through everything.


    ~Declined~ Take out the sensing ability, it was already created. Make it +5.
    ‡Yamato - The Devil's Blade‡
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 [+20 Whenever using the special wind ability]
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 to Wind Techniques]
    Description: The Yamato 閻魔刀 Or in other words "The Devil's Blade" Resembles a Japanese Ōkatana though it's said to cut through Almost any ordinary sword with ease, as it's even sharper than a normal Ōkatana, it's either strapped on the user's left or right side, Yamato is an Ōkatana which has a black scabbard with a golden ribbon tied around it with the blade's handle itself was wrapped in white silk cloth with an intricate design of black silk covering the sides of the handle make a straight line to the guard while sheathed, What makes the Yamato sharper than a Normal Ōkatana is that it takes the use of the user's Wind release chakra around the blade and has the power to amplify the user's wind release techniques, when the user infuses wind chakra to the blade a raging wind aura forms around the blade increasing it's sharpness as the wind aura spins around rapidly allowing the user to use any wind release techniques that requires the usage of handseal with one less handseal than it normally requires and the user can perform wind release techniques on a faster rate than a normal ninja as if the user has the wind specialty, the last special ability to the blade can take use of the user's wind chakra and enhance it to the point where it can make the user's own wind techniques as powerful as Fire techniques [meaning if an S-ranked fire technique clashed with an S-ranked wind technique they both cancel each other], meaning it cancels the elemental weakness that the Wind techniques has for the fire release, but this also has a drawback in which the user's fire techniques get weaker when this special ability is activated and it only can be activated a set of times, the blade has also to be injected with a set of the user's wind chakra to activate this special ability.
    Note: Must have mastered the Wind Release to weild this Ōkatana
    Note: The user's Wind Techniques gain +10 additional damage points.
    Note: The special ability of making the wind techniques as powerful as fire techniques can only be performed at 2 wind release techniques.
    Note: Whenever the special ability of making the wind techniques as powerful as fire techniques the fire techniques that the user uses that turn loses -20 damage points.

    Note: This Ōkatana is indestructible however it doesn't mean that it can cut through everything.


    ~Removed the Kenjutsu boost and made it only wind.

    Declined, plenty of similar custom swords already exist

    [Jiton/Raiton: Magunechikku] - Magnetism/Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Field
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 [+20 per turn]
    Damage Points: N/A [+5 to Magnetism Release techniques]
    Description: This is an advanced Magnetism release technique which is used in conjunction with lightning release, whenever a normal or a lightning shadow clone on the field, the user release his magnetism release chakra in the middle of the area between him and his opponent while using shape manipulation to form the magnetism release chakra into the shape of an invisible ball of magnetic energy, simultaneously the normal or lightning shadow clone of the user in which exists on the field releases his lightning chakra into the invisible ball of magnetic energy, causing an electromagnetic force field to form in the center of the battlefield which is in the shape of an invisible ball of electromagnetic energy, this electromagnetic field forms electromagnetic waves into all areas around it, as the electromagnetic field forms it creates forms of invisible electromagnetic pulses around at the whole battlefield magnetizing anything that comes in contact with it, when this electromagnetic pulses interact with the opponent it destroys the electromagnetic brain waves in the opponent's brain, causing him not to be able to use his lightning release techniques for a certain period of time.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for 3 turns.
    Note: This technique makes the opponent unable to utilize lightning techniques of A-rank and higher.
    Note: Since the electromagnetic field is made out of the user's chakra it doesn't harm the user.
    Note: Must be a normal or a lightning shadow clone already present on the field.
    Note: The user is unable to use magnetism techniques for 3 turns after the deactivation of this technique.
    Note: Can only be taught by ~Light~
    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 01-02-2012 at 09:43 PM.

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