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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    This is my first CJ or rather CW, that i really wants to get approved, as i worked on it so heartedly.

    Shinigami Reaper | Death God Reaper
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: Once the two Giant Death Gods, one from Heaven, and one from Hell were fightning for a holy sword named "Shinigami Reaper", since it was sword who stated that the winner will be the weilder of it. So even after their 100th fight, the result was the same, Draw. Since none of them was the winner and they do not wanted to give it to their opponent. So they, along with the sword decided to give the sword to someone else. And than they met Enzup, both of them tried to kill him, but couldn't be succeeded. So they liked his true braveness, skills, and mastery in fightning. So they bestowned the sword on Enzup, in hope that he is the one capable of holding it, but the sword was the one who had to chose his master himself, it was upto the sword that it would accept him or not, but the sword was the one who liked Enzup the most and decided to help him conquer anything he wants.
    Since the sword was of those Giant Gods, so its size is also very big. The hilt itself is of 2m height, and the blade is of 3m height making a total lenght of 5m, and its cross guard is of 1m length, while the blade is of half meter. It is a double-edged sword. And have a little curvature in the edge part and pointed on front. It also have a very long chain tied to pommel part. The blade is bloody red in colour which is supposed to be the blood of millions of people killed by it. It also has 2 black strips originating from the rain guard to some extent on blade, and it was supposed to be the curse of people died from it. Its original weight is 1 ton but for user its only 1 kg, superlight weight that allows him to use it more fluently and reaction time of user while using the sword is much more fast than of anyone else using a sword.
    It is considered to have life of its own just like samehada. This sword is indestructible by all means and considerd to be sharpest in the whole world, and even in hell or heaven. Thats the reason, user must wield it very carefully, or else he'll just cut himself off. User can also pass any of his chakra to change the shape of its blade and creates a thick layer coating on sword.

    Abilities:
    -The sword can anytime increase or decrease its weight from 10 ton to 10 Kg.
    -This sword is indestructible and have enormous amount of chakra.
    -It can react on its own when required. Can also sense chakra.
    -It can cut and slice through anything just like butter.
    -When Chakra is passed to the sword, than the hilt remains the same but the blade transforms to |Fire- Phoenix|, |Water-Shark|, |Earth- Dragon|, |Lightning- Snakes|, |Wind- Porcupine|

    Restrictions:
    -As this sword was of those Giant Death Gods, which is very heavy and big in size and have some incredible powers, so it is forbidden to use this weapon.
    -Passing any chakra to the sword, counts as a move, which is equivalent to S-rank offense/Defense/Supplementary.
    -Can channel chakra to the sword only once per turn.
    -Must be kenjutsu mastered, as it requires great skills in that.
    -Can only be used if user is of atleast Kage Rank.
    -The sword can only be wielded by Enzup. If someone else even touches the sword or any part of it, than it will paralyze him completely for one turn.


    ~Declined~ 10 ton is unacceptable, you could easily destroy anything on the field with such a heavy sword. No shape shifting, unless the shapes are pre-determined and well explained. I saw that the shapes were animals, but can the weapon shape at will into anything? Why is the damage 100? Does it damage you opponent just by being in your possession? We don't put damages to CW unless they have a special ability that triggers and attack. Sensing abilities are forbidden from the CJ thread (Or so I heard from Cali). Lastly, the restrictions are almost non-existent for such a weapon, you need to fix that.
    Reduced the weight, No it can't transform into anything, only which are classified and not on its on (added a restriction about it), removed the DP. The Sensing abilities are forbidden, but only for elemental jutsus (i think so), so this rule does not apply on my CW. And if you think it still is forbidden, than plz remove the line "Can also sense chakra." , Btw here is the link where Zen announced the rule. >>CLICK HERE<< Also added restrictions.

    Shinigami Reaper | Death God Reaper
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra COst: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Once the two Giant Death Gods, one from Heaven, and one from Hell were fightning for a holy sword named "Shinigami Reaper", since it was sword who stated that the winner will be the weilder of it. So even after their 100th fight, the result was the same, Draw. Since none of them was the winner and they do not wanted to give it to their opponent. So they, along with the sword decided to give the sword to someone else. And than they met Enzup, both of them tried to kill him, but couldn't be succeeded. So they liked his true braveness, skills, and mastery in fightning. So they bestowned the sword on Enzup, in hope that he is the one capable of holding it, but the sword was the one who had to chose his master himself, it was upto the sword that it would accept him or not, but the sword was the one who liked Enzup the most and decided to help him conquer anything he wants.
    Since the sword was of those Giant Gods, so its size is also very big. The hilt itself is of 2m height, and the blade is of 3m height making a total lenght of 5m, and its cross guard is of 1m length, while the blade is of half meter. It is a double-edged sword. And have a little curvature in the edge part and pointed on front. It also have a very long chain tied to pommel part. The blade is bloody red in colour which is supposed to be the blood of millions of people killed by it. It also has 2 black strips originating from the rain guard to some extent on blade, and it was supposed to be the curse of people died from it. Its original weight is 1 ton but only for user its 1 kg, superlight weight that allows him to use it more fluently and reaction time of user while using the sword is much more than of anyone else using a sword.
    It is considered to have life of its own just like samehada. This sword is indestructible by all means and considerd to be sharpest in the whole world, and even in hell or heaven. Thats the reason, user must wield it very carefully, or else he'll just cut himself off. User can also pass any of his chakra to transform the blade and creates a thick layer of coating on sword.

    Abilities:
    -The sword can anytime increase or decrease its weight from 1 ton to 1 Kg.
    -This sword is indestructible and have enormous amount of chakra.
    -It can react on its own when required. Can also sense chakra.
    -It can cut and slice through anything just like butter.
    -When Chakra is passed to the sword, than the hilt remains the same but the blade transforms to |Fire- Phoenix|, |Water-Shark|, |Earth- Dragon|, |Lightning- Snakes|, |Wind- Porcupine|

    Restrictions:
    -Passing any chakra to the sword, counts as a move, which is equivalent to S-rank Offense/Defense/Supplementary.
    -Can channel chakra to the sword only once per turn.
    -The sword can only transform in the animals listed above, and only when user passes chakra to it, not on its own.
    -If user gets hit by a jutsu while holding this sword, than he will receive an addition of +10 damage points.
    -The sword can only be wielded by Enzup. If someone else even touches the sword or any part of it, than it will paralyze him completely for one turn.

    Declined, do not resubmit

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    (Raiton/Suiton/Chakra: Hiningenteki) - Lightning/Water/Chakra: Inhuman
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: User creates 3 shadow clones. One clone releases water chakra, second one releases lightning chakra and the third one releases pure chakra to create a human like creature with wings of same size as of human, carrying sword in his hands. He is very strong as he is a combo of three. His speed is comparable to rock lee without weights because of lightning. He can use water and lightning, and gives 25% more damage to these technique. He does not have any effect of lightning and water upto A-rank, as they will only boost-up the humanoid.
    Note: ~No lightning and water jutsu in same turn.
    ~No S-Rank Jutsu in same turn.
    ~Cannot use any jutsu above A-rank in next turn.
    ~If Inhuman uses a techinue then that will be counted as one move out of 3.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Using clones count as one move.
    ~Lasts untill destroyed.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.



    Declined, do not resubmit
    Its a combo, but if you think than you can add a note, retricting that- It counts as 3 moves of user, since its using 3 separate chakras.

    (Raiton/Suiton/Chakra: Hiningenteki) - Lightning/Water/Chakra: Inhuman
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After creating 3 shadow clones. One clone releases water chakra, second one releases lightning chakra and the third one releases pure chakra to create a human like creature with wings of same size as of human, carrying sword in his hands. He is very strong as he is a combo of three. His speed is comparable to rock lee without weights because of lightning. He can use water and lightning jutsus just like water and lightning clone, but upto S-rank and gives +10 boost to these technique. He does not have any effect of lightning and water upto A-rank, as they will only boost-up the humanoid.
    Note: ~Must create Shadow Clones separately.
    ~No lightning and water jutsu in same turn.
    ~If Inhuman uses a techinue then that will be counted as one move out of 3.
    ~After Inhuman will be destroyed, user can't use any water and lightning jutsus for next 2 turns.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Lasts untill destroyed.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.


    Declined, do not resubmi was what you was previously told, do it again il ban you from the thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sage) - Summoning Technique: Sage
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User claps his hand and summons a terrapin named "Sage", whose size while on 4 legs is same as gamabunta. He has a sword in his right hand and a shield in left hand. He is fire and wind mastered and can use them upto S-Rank and gives a +30 boost to them. He is also indestructible to B-Rank and below techniques but only his shell can block A-Rank techniques. While standing he is that tall that in just one step he can go from short to mid range and from mid to long range and vice versa.
    Note: ~He is advanced form of Terrapins, who can stand on 2 legs.
    ~Can stay on battlefield for 5 turns, if summoned.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.

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    Got this idea from the movie Transformers.. And from now on i'll be submitting transformers characters..

    (Doton: Henryuuki- Bumblebee) - Earth Release: Transformers- Bumblebee
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60 (for earth techs)
    Description: User creates a robot like structure made of earth chakra which is almost thrice in size as of a human, he can shoot earth projectile from his hand equivalent to A-Rank, and can transform into a car when required. The user can sit in the car and ride it with great speed that only 3 tomoe and above can track it. While in car form, it can shoot 2 spears from front or back of the car equivalent to A-Rank.
    Note: ~Every earth projectile or earth spears count as one of 3 moves.
    ~It can transform to robot or to car anytime within a blink of an eye.
    ~Cannot use any earth justu for next turn.
    ~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.

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    Got this idea from movie Tekken- Blood Vengeance (2011).. Watch the video in spoiler for getting the rough or maybe exact idea!

    (Doton/Chakra: Mokujin) - Earth Style/Pure Chakra: Mokujin
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short (around the user)
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+20 for each turn)
    Damage Points: 100 (-30 to user)
    Description: User releases enormous amount of pure chakra from his body in the sky and right after that releases doton chakra which start creating a big mokujin like structure around himself which is made up of very large no. of small mokujins, which is even greater than the size of gamabunta and its whole body is wrapped in giant flames of fire, which keeps everyone far from him. The mokujins are made up of very hardened earth, so they would not be damaged too easily. The user passes his chakra to mokujin and connects himself with the mokujin so that his senses gets connected to him and any
    move which user performs will be performed by mokujin instead of the user. Because of such large size of mokujin, its jutsus becomes more powerful and large in size and thus gives a +20 boost to all elemental ninjutsu and +50 to all physical attacks. As this big mokujin is made up of large no. of small mokujins, so after being partially destroyed it can regenerate that part again on its own by creating appropriate no. of small mokujins.

    Note: ~While user releases enormous amount of chakra, it is impossible for anyone to come near him or they will be pushed back by taking huge and severe injury.
    ~If anyone even comes near the mokujin, he will start feeling the tremendous amount of heat and in no time or in couple of moments, he will catch the fire.
    ~Its one punch is strong enough to break madara's susanoo final form's ribs and bones completely.
    ~Regenrating counts as a move.
    ~To extinguish fire from mokujin's body, the opponent has to extinguish every bit of fire from his body, or else it will again catch fire on his body.
    ~It is vulnerable to strong lightning.
    ~After the technique ends, user can't even move from his place for the whole remaining battle due to excess amount of chakra used in the technique.
    ~And also he can't use any technique above B-Rank for the whole remaining battle.
    ~His each and every cell in the body will pain him too much, that for concentrating on his jutsus, he has to perform additional 4 handseals for every jutsu which require handseals.
    ~ -30 to user because of excessive chakra used.
    ~Must be of atleast Kage for using it.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.


    All declined do not resubmit
    If something is missing or if you find something wrong with it, than plz tell me what to edit/change, in order to make it approvable.

    (Doton/Chakra: Mokujin) - Earth Style/Pure Chakra: Mokujin
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short (around the user)
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+20 for each turn)
    Damage Points: 100 (-30 to user)
    Description: User releases enormous amount of pure chakra from his body in the sky and right after that releases doton chakra which start creating a big mokujin like structure around himself which is made up of very large no. of small mokujins, which is even greater than the size of gamabunta and its whole body is wrapped in giant flames of fire, which keeps everyone far from him. The mokujins are made up of very hardened earth, so they would not be damaged too easily. The user passes his chakra to mokujin and connects himself with the mokujin so that his senses gets connected to him and any
    move which user performs will be performed by mokujin instead of the user. Because of such large size of mokujin, its jutsus becomes more powerful and proportionate to his size and thus gives a +20 boost to all elemental ninjutsu and +50 to all physical attacks. As this big mokujin is made up of large no. of small mokujins, so after being partially destroyed it can regenerate that part again on its own by creating appropriate no. of small mokujins.

    Note: ~While user releases enormous amount of chakra, it is impossible for anyone to come near him or they will be pushed back by taking huge and severe injury.
    ~If anyone even comes near the mokujin, he will start feeling the tremendous amount of heat and in no time or in couple of moments, he will catch the fire.
    ~Its one punch is strong enough to break madara's susanoo final form's ribs and bones completely.
    ~Regenrating counts as a move.
    ~To extinguish fire from mokujin's body, the opponent has to extinguish every bit of fire from his body, or else it will again catch fire on his body.
    ~It is vulnerable to strong lightning.
    ~After the technique ends, user can't even move from his range for the whole remaining battle due to excess amount of chakra used in the technique, i.e. he can only move within short range.
    ~And also he can't use any technique above B-Rank for the whole remaining battle.
    ~His each and every cell in the body will pain him too much, that for concentrating on his jutsus, he has to perform additional 4 handseals for every jutsu which require handseals.
    ~ -30 to user because of excessive chakra used.
    ~Must be of atleast Kage for using it.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.

    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    01-02-2012, 03:10 PM - Last submission

    Quote Originally Posted by Selendrile View Post

    Link to Contract

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Konpeki wa Mananda)- Azure the Learned
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After drawing blood from any part of the body onto their palms, the user will clasp both hands together, summoning Azure in sky above them, or at any place short range from the user. Azure is a medium sized heron, smaller than Cerulean, but still capable of being ridden by the summoner. Azure is a highly intelligent Heron, and is the only one able to communicate verbally with the summoner, speaking fluent English. With his naturally increased vision and superb intelligence, he is able to carefully watch and then deduce the hand signs of the opponent, determining what element technique the opponent is preparing to use. He is able to do this due to the fact he has studied, and spent countless hours examining the shinobi jutsu scrolls present in his home tree. Because he is able to speak English, this means he is also able to read script, which allows him to study techniques. This hand seal perception can be used twice per battle. Azure is also capable to using fire techniques up to S-rank. Being a bird, all of the Herons have naturally increased vision.
    *Note: Must have signed the Great Blue Heron contract
    *Note: Any technique performed by Azure counts as a move of the user; hand sign reading does not count as a move
    *Note: Azure remains summoned for five turns; once per battle

    ~Declined~ It's incredible how sometimes it all comes down to one word: deduce. What to you mean when you say your summon can deduce the hand seals? Can he predict them before they're being done? Can he see them from very far away and know what hand seal the opponent is doing? Can he see, let's say, 3-4 hand seals in a jutsu that requires many hand seals and know instantly what technique will be used? You need to elaborate that part. Also, in the restrictions you say that reading hand seals doesn't count as a move, and in the description you say that "This hand seal perception can be used twice per match". If it's an ability that can only be used a certain number of time per match, it's bound to count as a move.
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Konpeki wa Mananda)- Azure the Learned
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After drawing blood from any part of the body onto their palms, the user will clasp both hands together, summoning Azure in sky above them, or at any place short range from the user. Azure is a medium sized heron, smaller than Cerulean, but still capable of being ridden by the summoner. Azure is a highly intelligent Heron, and is the only one able to communicate verbally with the summoner, speaking fluent English. With his naturally increased vision and superb intelligence, he is able to carefully watch, recognize, and then alert the summoner to the hand signs of the opponent, determining what element technique the opponent is preparing to use. Within the first two hand signs made by the opponent, Azure can immediately determine what element technique the opponent is using. If the technique requires only a single hand seal, Azure is still able to determine the element technique, but his conclusion to the elemental technique is slightly slower. He is able to do this due to the fact he has studied, and spent countless hours examining the shinobi jutsu scrolls present in his Hometree. Because he is able to speak English, this means he is also able to read script, which allows him to study techniques. Azure is also capable to using fire techniques up to S-rank. Being a bird, all of the Herons have naturally increased vision.
    *Note: Must have signed the Great Blue Heron contract
    *Note: Any technique performed by Azure counts as a move of the user; hand sign reading does not count as a move
    *Note: Azure remains summoned for five turns; once per battle

    Removed hand sign reading as a move; as it is a special ability, and be used be as many times as necessary if he is summoned.

    Link to Approved Deidara Biography
    Approved

    (Bakuton: Kibaku Shiroi Ne no Ki)- Explosion Release: Explosive White Root tree
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will put a single hand in their side pouches filled with clay, and begin to mold and shape it. Then, they will release the explosive clay into the ground, keeping it connected to his hand, where they are able to grow a single explosive clay tree anywhere on the battlefield. The explosive clay tree has a circumference of eight feet, and is around twelve feet tall. Its roots also extend into the ground ten feet deep, and ten feet in any direction of the tree. At any time after the explosive clay tree has been created, it can be detonated by performing the Tiger hand seal, and by yelling, "Katsu!". Blast radius covers the area short range around the tree.
    *Note: Must have a Deidara biography
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    *Note: Usable three times per battle
    Declined this is not a B rank level technique and should be higher ranked

    (Doton: Kuro no Fuka-Sa Kara no Shisha no Hebi)- Earth Release: Serpent Envoy from the Black Depths
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will begin by first performing a series of three hand seals. Then, by manipulating the earth on both sides of the opponent, they will raise two, large stone serpents, with an open mouth full of razor sharp stone points. These serpents are slightly smaller than the dragons present in the Earth and Stone Dragon Technique. The serpent on each side of the opponent will then rush them at a high speed, smashing into them with deadly force. When the serpents collide with the opponent, they both grasp him in their mouths, and continue to travel opposite directions. Due to the massive opposing forces applied to the opponent’s body, the brute tearing force is capable to ripping off limbs, or even large sections of the body.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    *Note: Usable twice per battle
    *Note: Both serpents must arise at least 10m. away from the opponent on each side, in order to gain enough force to do sufficient damage
    *Note: No earth techniques above A-rank for the next turn
    Declined, similar jutsu already exists
    Edit as you see fit!
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    As the below techniques are D or C Rank technique, and utilizes very less chakra so they can be used any no. of times.

    (Fuuton: Guraida-) - Wind Style: Glider
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: While falling from a height, user spreads both of his arms and focuses his wind chakra in his armpits and in the space between both the legs, creating a thin layer of wind chakra, which enables him to glide in air for a period of time with some reasonably fast speed enabling to dodge techniques that arent very fast.
    ~Can only use this jutsu when falling from 10m or above height.
    ~User glides in air for a minimum of 2 turns
    ~Can only be taught by bansal.

    Approved

    (Doton: Atsui Tei Kikyuu) - Earth Style: Hot Air Balloon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User creates a Hot Air Balloon by using his earth chakra, and creates a thick layer on it of wind chakra, which lightens its weight and enables him it to fly at good speed. And user can control it anyhow, and can also ride it.
    Note: ~It can ride people, according to its size.
    ~Can only be taught by bansal.
    Approved

    (Doton: Banbu-copter) - Earth Style: Bamboo-Copter
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 15 [+5 for each extra]
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User focuses on his earth chakra and grows a Bamboo-copter at the top of his head, and coats it with wind chakra. Whose shaft starts spinning very fast, enabling the user to fly. And due to wind chakra its speed is very high. User can also simply create these bamboo-copters in his hands, and than can give it to someone else to fly.
    Note: ~Can only be taught be bansal.


    Declined, this would be of a rank greater than D rank being use with wind chakra and how can earth element grow bamboo , bamboo is a grass and wood so therefore it would require the wood elemental release
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Karasu Geigei: Hari Yobouchuusha] - Crow Arts: The needle shots

    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user forms a string of two handseals [Horse → Tiger] summoning a massive number of crows around the user.Then the user directs the crows to attack the opponent by making them release their feathers at the opponent and when the feathers hit or go near the opponent,the user can make the feathers explode at any time.
    Note:Can use this technique 2 times per battle
    Note:Must have signed the Crow contract

    [Karasu Geigei: Hari Yobouchuusha] - Crow Arts: Blackness

    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a string of two handseals [Ram→ Tiger] summoning a massive number of crows around the user.Then the user directs the crows to fly at the opponent at high speed and then once the crows surround the opponent,the user makes the opponent think he is in pure blackness and that he is getting stabbed by feathers.
    Note:Can use this technique 2 times per battle
    Note:Must have signed the Crow contract

    Both Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fukurō no sutairu: Fukurō no katachi)- Owl Styel: Form of the Owl
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does four hand seals, and then forces chakra through their body. The user then can take on several different properties of an owl, but only one at a time. The user can: Grow owl wings, gain the eye sight of an owl, gain the hearing of an owl, or the claws of an owl.
    Notes:
    -Transformation lasts for 3 turns
    -Only one feature may be active at one time
    -Must have signed and mastered controlling all Owl Summonings
    -No Owls/ Any other summons may be on the field at the same time as this jutsu is active
    -Only teachable by Omnom

    ~Declined~ No human/animal hybrid transformation will be accepted

    Human Puppet: Kurostuchi
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Depends
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: Depending
    Description: After a confusing conversation, Kurostuchi (Pop123) allowed herself to become a human puppet. Sasori (Omnom) took the bio, and using his secret techniques, turned it in to a human puppet. The puppet has been modified in several ways, but it still can use it's KG, Lava Release. Along with being able to use lava, the puppet has several weapons, identical to the Third Kazekage puppet's additions.

    Link to Battle: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post5213674

    Link to Bio: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=133865

    ~Declined~ This fight is a scam. If you haven't heard it and truly won, I won't accept your human puppets.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Aoi: (Blue)
    Rank:A
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points:60
    description: This bow is one of the few lost bows in the ninja world . It is made out of a special iron and wood that makes it light weight.It comes with 40 arrows that are made with a special material that makes them able to withstand all chakra natures.The bow has blue black and white on it making it different from its brothers.

    ~Can only be used by minato491
    ~has to be jounin rank
    ~has to have training in 4 elements
    ~obsorbing chakra takes up 2 of users jutsu spots
    ~Can obsorb Water chakra blasts and fire blasts
    ~Can only obsorb chakra 3 times per match
    ~after chakra is obsorbed it can turn into a chakra arrow of the element that is equaled to a b rank jutsu


    Looks



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    ~Declined~ I'm a bit confused at everything in bold. Do you meant "infusing your arrow with chakra"? Because absorbing chakra sounds like you can absorb your opponent's attack. Clarify that part. Also, no chakra arrows, it's been done before (not the same as imbuing chakra in your arrow though).


    (Ration: kaki ya)-fire arrow
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user focuses their kation chakra into their finger tips then they pull out a arrow from the group of arrows they have on their back . After the user continues to focus and get the chakra all around the arrow.
    ~can only be taught by minato491
    ~has to own a bow
    ~needs to have training in the element

    (sution: mizu ya)-water arrow
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user focuses their sution chakra into their finger tips then they pull out a arrow from the group of arrows they have on their back . After the user continues to focus and get the chakra all around the arrow.

    ~can only be taught by minato491
    ~has to own a bow
    ~needs to have training in the element

    Note feel free to edit for approval

    ~Both Declined~ As I've mentioned above, chakra arrows have been done already. Also, imbuing chakra in your arrows doesn't count as a jutsu.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Genjutsu: Haiena Hakuryoko ) Illusionary technique: Hyena's intensity
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user locks eyes with the enemy and places them in a genjutsu where the area around the user turns black and a pair of massive hyenas eyes and teeth appear in the black area and the enemy hears a hyena's laughter blocking their sense of hearing. The user can move or attack during the illusion but the enemy will see them keeping eye contact and standing still while in the illusion.
    -Only 3 times per battle.
    - can only be used by those who have signed the Hyena contract.

    ~Declined~ Why would the enemy stand still?

    Quote Originally Posted by Professor Sarutobi View Post
    ( Genjutsu: Kanzen Saimin ) Illusionary Technique: Complete Hypnosis
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost:40(+20per turn active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After summoning the Giant Clam, the user holds his palms on to the clam's shell and focus his Yin chakra into it allowing it to exude a powerful mist from its siphons with a stronger chakra concentration than its mirage technique. The genjutsu generated through this stronger mist is capable of wiping both the Clam and the user and any clones of the user from the target's five senses completely, instead of replacing them with mirages, effectively making it seem as if all of them no longer exist. It controls the five senses to the point that it can make the target misinterpret another person's form, shape, mass, feel and smell to be that of the enemy. If the enemies are able to touch the user or Giant Clam they will be able to dispel the genjutsu, this technique however is strong enough to fool average sensor ninjas but not exceptionally skilled ones such as Muu or Karin.
    Note:
    ~Can only be used once per battle
    ~Only lasts 3 turns
    ~Only A-rank and below jutsu may be used while this jutsu is active
    ~Can only be used with a Second Mizukage bio
    ~Can only be taught/allowed by Professor Sarutobi or Sharingdork

    ~Approved~ I added a restriction.

    (Furui ki Hozuki jouin: Poseidon )Ancient Weapon of the Hozuki Clan Lords: Poseidon
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15 to reform or reshape
    Damage points:+5 to kenjutsu damage, +10 to water jutsu
    Description: This weapon was created by the founding members of the Hozuki clan in the days before the 5 great village system and lost during war until the 2nd Mizukage found where it had been sealed away by the 1st hokage at the bottom of the ocean. The weapon itself has no one true form as it was forged to work with Hozuki lords it can be turned into water at will or shaped into any size or shape, when solidified the weapons metal takes on the form of steel with a blue tint and its cloth or wood will be dark blue. The unique powers imbued in Poseidon also allows Hozuki users of Sannin rank and above to use C rank water techniques without hand seals as long as Poseidon is in the users possesstion. If hit by lightning or fire of high enough power (B rank and above)Poseidon will becomes mist for a short time ( 2 turns) before reforming, making it impossible to destroy for good. Poseidon can also be merged into its master's body at will for safekeeping and surprise attacks.
    - Can be turned into any basic weapon the user can think of and use (counts as one of the 3 turns)
    - If the user has been knocked out Poseidon will retreat inside of their jelly like body and revive them with its chakra( once per battle)
    -Can only be used by members of the Hozuki Clan. If someone else tries to hold Poseidon it simply becomes water and returns to its master. ( or if its master has been obliterated it turns into a fine mist and reforms in the ocean it was found originally.)
    - Can only be wielded by Professor Sarutobi and those he gives permission

    ~Declined~ OP. You took several existing weapons and mixed them (whether it was conscious or not isn't important). The fact that it can turn into anything you want is a no go. With that simple description you could turn it into a spear that reach as far as you wish. Reviving the user is also OP.

    (Suiton: Dokomo Metsuki no Jutsu) - Water Release: Everywhere Eyes Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:30(+10every turn active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user concentrates chakra into his head and using the Hozuki's unique anatomy creates 4 eyes made of water that emerge from his skull,1 eye on each temple and one on the back of his head and finally one on the top of his head looking straight up, these are all connected giving the user 360 degree vision.
    -Only lasts for 3 turns.
    -Can only be used twice per match.
    -Can only be used by members of the Hozuki Clan.

    ~Approved~ Made it last 3 turns and twice per match.

    (Furui ki Hozuki jouin: Poseidon )Ancient Weapon of the Hozuki Clan Lords: Poseidon
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15 to reform or reshape
    Damage points:+5 to kenjutsu damage, +10 to water jutsu
    Description: This weapon was created by the founding members of the Hozuki clan in the days before the 5 great village system and lost during war until the 2nd Mizukage found where it had been sealed away by the 1st hokage at the bottom of the ocean. The weapon itself has no one true form as it was forged to work with Hozuki lords it can be turned into water at will or shaped into any size or shape, when solidified theweaponsmetal takeson the form of steel with a blue tint and its cloth or wood will be dark blue. The unique powers imbued in Poseidon also allows Hozuki users of Sannin rank and above to use C rank water techniques without hand seals as long as Poseidon is in the users possesstion. If hit by lightning or fire of high enough power (B rank and above)Poseidon will becomes mist for a short time ( 2 turns) before reforming, making it impossible to destroy for good. Poseidon can also be merged into its master's body at will for safekeeping and surprise attacks.
    - Can be turned into any basic weapon the user can think of and use (counts as one of the 3 turns) but it is limited to its own water source so it can't become any larger then Samehada or longer then 3 meters
    -Can only be used by members of the Hozuki Clan.If someone else tries to hold Poseidon it simply becomes water and returns to its master. ( or if its master has been obliterated it turns into a fine mist and reforms in the ocean it was found originally.)
    - Can only be wielded by Professor Sarutobi and those he gives permission

    Removed the c rank no seals thing, removed the revive ability and limited its size

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ As I said before, your weapon is a mix of several existing weapon, hence it will never be acceptable. I didn't thought I needed to put the "Do not resubmit" on the last submission for you to understand =/.

    Quote Originally Posted by Professor Sarutobi View Post
    (Suiton: Gen'yu Nami no Jutsu)-Water Release: Oily Tsunami Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Using the snake hand seal the 2nd Mizukage releases a small oceans worth of his unique Oily Water that floods the area
    -3 times per battle.
    -Can only be used by a 2nd Mizukage bio.
    -Can only be taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    Approved

    (Suiton:Ōhamaguri) - Water Release: Giant Clam Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The 2nd Mizukage makes the snake hand seal and sends his water chakra into the air around him making water materialize and form into a clam shell the same size as his personal summoned Giant Clam. This water is heavily compacted and after being formed the 2nd mizukage mixs his unique Oily water into it. This allows the clam to withstand being pierced by A rank and below Earth techniques and seep into any sand in contact with the shell and make it crumble.
    -3 times per battle.
    -Can only be used by a 2nd Mizukage bio.
    -Can only be taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    Approved

    (Suiton: Kyousei Mizu Katai no Jutsu) - Water Release: Great Water Leg Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks done with legs)
    Description: By putting the Hydration Technique into practical use, the muscles in the user's legs are temporarily enlarged and strengthened. Moisture is gathered from the whole body and compressed into the both legs. However, because it is essential to properly control the moisture balance inside the body, this technique's degree of difficulty is very high. This jutsu gives the user superhuman speed easily matching lee without his weights, the user is also then capable of crushing both rock walls and making large dents in steel doors with a single kick.
    Note: Must use Hydration Technique before hand and be a member of the Hozuki Clan.
    Declined, this wouldnt give the user quite the same speed as rock lee without training weights, also make it clear that the rock techniques are C rank and below
    (Suiton: Kyousei Mizu Katai no Jutsu) - Water Release: Great Water Leg Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks done with legs)
    Description: By putting the Hydration Technique into practical use, the muscles in the user's legs are temporarily enlarged and strengthened. Moisture is gathered from the whole body and compressed into the both legs. However, because it is essential to properly control the moisture balance inside the body, this technique's degree of difficulty is very high. This jutsu gives the user enhanced speed the user is also then capable of crushing both rock walls (c rank and below) and making large dents in steel doors with a single kick.
    Note: Must use Hydration Technique before hand and be a member of the Hozuki Clan.

    ~Declined~ First of all, many similar techniques already exist, but since this is characteristic to the Hozuki clan, I'll accept it. Now, this is no B-rank. Make it S-rank and restrict it accordingly. I will not accept a technique that you can use for an unlimited amount of time, with no drawbacks, that makes you significantly faster and stronger.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Coyote View Post
    Resubmitting.

    I changed the summoning requirements so the summoning of weapons would be a different tech that goes along with the weapon it sefl but in regards to your statement I did say that everything else but the summoning of weapons counted as a move so it's already there about the cutting of earth.

    Ranton: Joushou Kihou Ψ Storm Release: Rising High
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user will proceed to slam their fists together and when they bump both hands begin to glow and halo a bright ring. Then simultaneously with the left hand the user will face it towards the ground in any fashion (i.e. directly towards the ground, at and angle) and fire a beam of light that lifts them off the ground and with the right hand the user will aim and unleashes several beams of lights at the target as they're in the air.

    Ψ Restrictions Ψ
    • Usable twice per battle
    • Unable to use Storm technique in next move
    • Only usable by "Storm Release" user
    • Only usable/trainable by Coyote

    ~Declined~ I'll need you to be clearer on the amount of beam you can shoot. Be aware that the higher the numbers of beams, the weaker they should be.
    Ranton: Joushou Kihou Ψ Storm Release: Rising High
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user will proceed to slam their fists together and when they bump both hands begin to glow and halo a bright ring. Then simultaneously with the left hand the user will face it towards the ground in any fashion (i.e. directly towards the ground, at an angle) and fire a beam of light that lifts them off the ground to avoid an attack or push back into a different range and with the right hand three bright balls form. Simultaneously they unleashes 3 beams of light that can be wither shot directly in a straight line parallel to each other or they can branch out in an arc to cover more of an area. These beams of light have the same effect as those from "Laser Circus" causing an explosion of sorts to emit from the area of impact.

    Ψ Restrictions Ψ
    • Usable twice per battle
    • Unable to use Storm technique in next move
    • Only usable by "Storm Release" user
    • Only usable/trainable by Coyote

    ~Approved~

    Ranton: Manako Sono Boufuu Ψ Storm Release: Eye of the Storm
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    The user will preform a row of 3 handseals then the user will send their water & lightning chakra into the sky. While in the sky Storm cloud will form in a certain point in the sky, from that point clouds will extend in a spiral manner at a very quick pace so if you'd look at the sky you would see a giant cloud that would resemble a sea shell in a sense. However as the storm clouds in the sky grows bigger and bigger it begins to rain down lightning beams all over the field under the cloud. The cloud can grow up to 2 ranges meaning it can start at long and go into mid. The beams that rain from the sky are rather strong and can puncture into the ground about 10 feet. The beams are controlled by the user. They can either be concentrated onto one area or over a wide range to trap a enemy in a hail of lightning beams. The maximum about of lightning beams that can be rained down at a time can be 7 and anything less than that to form up stronger beams.

    Ψ Restrictions Ψ
    • Usable once per battle
    • Unable to use Storm technique in next move
    • Only usable by "Storm Release" user
    • Only usable/trainable by Coyote

    ~Declined~ I never accept techniques that have a "chance factor" in them. In this technique, you can make 7 bolt crash down on the earth, for god knows how long and either at random locations or focused on your opponent. Let's say you make it rain down on a vast area, I could simply say that by luck no lightning hit me. You get my point?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    [ Muijitsu ] | Innocent

    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon - Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 40 [ +5 chakra to the genjutsu ]
    Damage: 80 [ +10 to lightning techniques ]
    Description: Innocent is a sword which was made a long time ago, this sword has a dragon sign in it and when Innocent reveal or get's a new owner the dragon will glow like water is flowing through it. Innocent is a really sharp sword, for the user to be able to use it he first has to know how to use the sword since with one stab it could kill someone, this sword is also kinda long and is also really light. Innocent has really great powers, not any member could control them. Innocent is able to trap people on his special genjutsu which let the opponent see that they are on the same fight and they still battling normally but they really not, the genjutsu is a s-rank type but not only that the user is able to control the opponent mind once his trapped and by doing that he has to spin the sword around making the sword dragon shine the user is able to control the fight on the opponent mind for example, if the user want's he could do a forbidden technique on the opponent mind and if the opponent get hit, he will physically think is a real hit and so the opponent brain will crush due to the great deal of damage that the opponent could get from the genjutsu. The sword is also able to give the user a +10 to lightning techniques. To trap the enemy on the genjutsu the user has to spin their sword.

    • Only Pain.. could use this sword and control it's power
    • Once the genjutsu is on the user can't use any elemental attack until the opponent release himself/herself from the genjutsu
    • The Genjutsu can be use once and it last two rounds
    • The Genjutsu count's towards a move





    ~Declined~ When re-submitting/editing jutsus, you need to put the added/altered part in bold. If you only took out part of your jutsu, you need to mention what was taken away.

    ( Kuchiyose: Frenimes ) Summoning: Frenimes

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will either wipe blood on his/her tattoo or either do the long way which is do the necessary hand seals and slam their hands on the ground but both work fine, once the user has done one of these two a small Raven will be summon, known as 'Frenimies' this Raven has a large amount of seals under his wings which works for fuuinjutsu. Once Frenimes has put a seal on the opponent the user can use the seal for fuuinjutsu even thought the user didn't put it on the enemy, which give's Frenimes a unique attack. This raven is extremely small, even smaller than the smalles toad.

    • It last five turns
    • When the Raven puts a seal on the opponent it counts as a move
    • Must sign the Raven contract
    • Can only be taught by Pain.. or -Ace-


    ~Declined~ Unacceptable. You didn't mention which seal, you didn't mention how it would be transferred, and lastly, smaller than the smallest of toads? No.

    [ Katon: Ryuuki Enkou ] Fire Style: Rising Flames

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40 [ +10 when the user uses the pinky ]
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will focus a large amount of fire chakra on his/her index finger while at the same time he will make the finger face the opponent, once the user is done a laser made out of fire will appear on the user Index finger, this laser is controllable at any will but at the same time the user could also, send another laser made out of fire which will be shoot with the user left hand and instead of using the index finger the user will use his pinky, but this version is a lot stronger but it cannot be controllable, this version explode when the user wishes, when the user adds a little bit more chakra onto the pinky the fire laser will explode which would burn everything on it's path at high will, the user could make the laser explode just by making a heavy step. Both of the lasers are sharp and if they come in contact with a body they will burn the opponent organs.

    • The user could use both of them as one move but when used at the same time it counts as two moves
    • When the pinky laser explodes it takes up to four yard of explosion
    • Only usable once per battle


    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
    [ Muijitsu ] | Innocent

    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon - Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 40 [ +5 chakra to the genjutsu ]
    Damage: 80 [ +10 to lightning techniques ]
    Description: Innocent is a sword which was made a long time ago, this sword has a dragon sign in it and when Innocent reveal or get's a new owner the dragon will glow like water is flowing through it. Innocent is a really sharp sword, for the user to be able to use it he first has to know how to use the sword since with one stab it could kill someone, this sword is also kinda long and is also really light. Innocent has really great powers, not any member could control them. Innocent is able to trap people on his special genjutsu which let the opponent see that they are on the same fight and they still battling normally but they really not, the genjutsu is a s-rank type but not only that the user is able to control the opponent mind once his trapped and by doing that he has to spin the sword around making the sword dragon shine the user is able to control the fight on the opponent mind for example, if the user want's he could do a forbidden technique on the opponent mind and if the opponent get hit, he will physically think is a real hit and so the opponent brain will crush due to the great deal of damage that the opponent could get from the genjutsu. The sword is also able to give the user a +10 to lightning techniques. To trap the enemy on the genjutsu the user has to spin their sword.

    • Only Pain.. could use this sword and control it's power
    • Once the opponent is under the genjutsu he can't use any elemental attack until the opponent release himself/herself from the genjutsu
    • The Genjutsu can be use once and it last two rounds
    • The Genjutsu count's towards a move




    ~Declined~ The description is a mess and the genjutsu used by your sword already exist.

    ( Kuchiyose: Hawkie ) Summoning: Hawkie

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will do the necessary hand seals or wipe blood on his/her tattoo, once the user has done this the user will summon a Raven call Hawkie. Hawkie is a raven which specialize in speed. Hawkie is one of fastest raven and he also travel at fair speed when walking but when flying he travels at amazing speed. Hawkie is also, able to do a wind technique, this wind technique requires no hand seal and is made a fair speed. The wind technique is specialize as a shield, once the technique is made a wind tornado will surround the user as a shield and when the opponent gets near the tornado the tornado will easily cut the opponent and make a deep wound. Hawkie is half size of Gamabunta and can carry two people on his back.

    • It last five turns
    • Hawkie special technique counts as a move
    • Must sign the Raven contract
    • Can only be taught by Pain.. or -Ace-
    • Once the tornado is form it last until the Raven goes back which is four rounds




    This is the Raven's tattoo.


    ~Declined~ The ability to form a tornado around the user was done dozens of times. You didn't precise to what rank your summon could use wind. A B-rank summon being half the size of bunta? No.

    ( Katon: Hikaui Enkou ) Fire Style: Low Flame

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will focus fire chakra on his tip of his Index finger, once the user has done this a small fire ball will appear on top of the user Index finger once done the user will aim his finger to the target and make a 'Pulse' with his left hand which will led to the fire ball being shot and when the user makes a heavy step the fire ball will explode and the smoke of the fire is extremely hot which would burn the user skin and the explosion is three yards long.
    • Once per battle
    • The user can't use a fire technique on same move
    • Must be taught by Pain..


    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Heavens Blade View Post
    (fan doki: kyo shotto) fan wrath: big shot
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: while in fan wrath mode the user will swing there fan creating a large ball of wind this ball is slow moving but extremely durable once the ball reaches mid range the ball turns into hundreds of small balls of wind (bout the size of a marble) these balls are launched in a 180 degree radius and are very fast moving
    -can only be used in fan wrath mode
    -can only be used twice per battle
    -can only be taught by heavens blade

    (fan doki: tsubame gaten) fan wrath: swallows assent
    Type:Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: one of the few long range fan wrath moves the user jumps into the air swings there fan shooting a large but invisable amount of fuuton chakra to the the ground short range from them then the fuuton chakra travels underneath the ground and rises from underneath the opponent in the form of a large visable swallow (while the fuuton is invisable it still does make a visable hole in the ground)
    -the fuuton can be seen by doujutsu
    -can only be used in fan wrath mode
    -can only be used 3 times be match
    -can only be taught by heavens blade

    ~Both Pending~ You really need to put the "Fan Warth Mode" in spoilers when submitting related customs. Otherwise I can't be sure of what can and can't be done. Resubmit.

    (leoliguar kata: otakebi za predator) leoliguar style: roar of the predator
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the leoliguar lets out a loud roar and places the opponent into a deep genjutsu in the genjutsu the opponent believes they have shrunk down to the size of a mouse and is then eaten by the leoliguar
    -the leoliguar can't preform anymore leoliguar kata for the remander of the time its on the field (effect doesnt carry over if they are resummoned later)
    -can only be used once per match (meaning even if you bring out a different one they cant use it as well)

    ~Declined~ Sound jutsus are restricted to sound users. I'm almost positive you didn't receive such training. If I'm wrong contact me and I'll re-check this one.
    (leoliguar kata: kiba za predator) leoliguar style: fang of the predator
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the leoliguar bares his teeth at its opponent and places the opponent into a deep genjutsu in the genjutsu the opponent believes they have shrunk down to the size of a mouse and is then eaten by the leoliguar
    -the leoliguar can't preform anymore leoliguar kata for the remander of the time its on the field (effect doesnt carry over if they are resummoned later)
    -can only be used once per match (meaning even if you bring out a different one they cant use it as well)
    Note: slightly changed the name and how they placed in the genjutsu

    ~Declined~ Showing his fang and falling in a genjutsu? How cheap is that lol. Make it so you need to perform hand seals and then make your summon show his fangs (or anything else that implies a connection between the animal/user and the opponent). I'd like you to add a restriction for you, not just the summon (ex: the user will be unable to perform ninjutsu the following turn).


    (fan doki) fan wrath
    Type: Mode
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 to wind techs]
    Description: fan wrath is a fighting style which uses as the name suggest a fan it combines the fan as a weapon and as a catalyst for fuuton jutsu while in this mode you can only use fuuton jutsu and fan doki jutsu [which will be fan related moves and fuuton] the upside to this is most fuuton atacks will no long require handseals and you gain a ten point boost to wind techs fan wrath is primarly mid range fighting style that generally has the user useing the fan as a blunt weapon to push the opponent into mid range if they are short so they can deal devestating fuuton jutsu this fighting style requires the user to adept in weapon use as well as fuuton jutsu
    -can only be traind be battleandthebad and heavens blade
    -last 4 turns
    -can be entered once in a match
    -can be left at any time
    -cant use fuuton jutsu the next turn after you leave this mode and on the second turn after deactivation futon jutsu do 10 less damage
    -cant use any other elements besides fuuton while in this mode


    (fan doki: kyo shotto) fan wrath: big shot
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: while in fan wrath mode the user will swing there fan creating a large ball of wind this ball is slow moving but extremely durable once the ball reaches mid range the ball turns into hundreds of small balls of wind (bout the size of a marble) these balls are launched in a 180 degree radius and are very fast moving
    -can only be used in fan wrath mode
    -can only be used twice per battle
    -can only be taught by heavens blade

    ~Declined~ Something doesn't add up. The technique works from short-mid range and when your attack reach mid-range the big ball splits into smaller balls. So, do these smaller balls immediately disperse since you've reached your technique's maximum range?

    (fan doki: tsubame gaten) fan wrath: swallows assent
    Type:Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: one of the few long range fan wrath moves the user jumps into the air swings there fan shooting a large but invisable amount of fuuton chakra to the the ground short range from them then the fuuton chakra travels underneath the ground and rises from underneath the opponent in the form of a large visable swallow (while the fuuton is invisable it still does make a visable hole in the ground)
    -the fuuton can be seen by doujutsu
    -as the fuuton travels under the earth toward the enemy, cracks can be seen appearing on the surface of the ground from the point of impact to the opponent's location.
    -can only be used in fan wrath mode
    -can only be used 3 times be match
    -can only be taught by heavens blade

    ~Approved~ Added a restriction since you mentioned the wind was denting the earth (bold part).
     
         
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    (Genjustu: Makai) - Genjust Style - Hellsbadass tortue
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user makes direct contact with the enemy, and once the user has made direct contact. The enemy is trapped in a Genjustu where they are strapped to a Stair with restraist so he/she cant move, while Hellsbadass has his way with them. By whipping them with his whip or pouring hot water on them till they pass out from the mental pain.
    - Needs 3 Tomoe
    - Direct Eye Contact
    - Only can be used 1 time per battle
    - Last 3 Turns

    (Genjustu: Maki) - Genjustu Style - Hells demons
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user makes direct eye contact with the enemy, and once they've made direct eye contact a portal appears behind the user with demons and fire coming from it. And once it's appeared the user pushes the enemy into it where all the demons slash and cut him while he's being burned, and once he's toture is done they'll throw him outside the portol where it then dissepears. And if the enemy is weak he will pass out from the mental pain of being totured.
    - Required 3 Tomoe
    - Direct Eye contect
    - Can only be used 1 time per battle
    - Last 3 turns

    (Genjustu: kireme) - Genjustu Style - Castration
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The Women user makes direct eye contact with the enemy, and once they've made eye contact. The Male enemy will be trapped in a Genjustu, where he's tied down to a operating table. Where the Women is surrounded by nurses while the user uses a scapel and Castration his testicles, and once this is complete the user shows them to the Male user then burn them in front of him very slowly. Making him either pass out from the mental pain of being Castrated or from the feeling of not being a man anymore
    - Required 3 Tomoe
    - Required Direct Eye Contact
    - Can be used on 3 males if they're caught in the direct eye contact
    - Can only be used once per battle
    - Last 3 turns
    - Women are the only on who can use this Justu
    - Men arent allows to use this Justu
    - Must have approval from Cutie Pie to use this.
    - Cant be used against a girl :P
    - Enemy passes out if uses on somebody who's weaker then the user
    - Can be broken out if the enemy is stronger then the user(in rank or post)

    ~Leaving for another mod~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Bolt View Post
    (Raiton: Dendou Ame) - Lightning Release: Electric Rain
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (+1 for each drop)
    Description: When using the technique "Rain at Will Tiger", simultaneously the user concentrates on rain and adds raiton chakra in rain to make it lightning infused with water, which gives small bolts to opponent when hit.
    Note: ~User is immune to this tech because it is his lightning chakra only which is present in rain.
    ~When lightning is added to the rain, it becomes lightning-water combo.
    ~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.

    ~Declined~ Unless you've been trained in Yin Yang you can't mold two chakra at once.
    Resubmiiting it 4th time.

    (Raiton: Dendou Ame) - Lightning Release: Electric Rain
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (+1 for each drop)
    Description: After using the technique "Rain at Will Tiger", the user concentrates on his raiton chakra and adds raiton chakra in rain. Once its done, it starts raining with lightning infused with water, instead of simple sensory water, which gives small bolts to opponent when hit.
    Note:-User is immune to this tech because it is his lightning chakra only which is present in rain.
    -When lightning is added to the rain, it becomes lightning-water combo.
    -Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Bolt.


    ~Declined~ The damage doesn't make any sense. If each droplets give 1 damage then how did you manage to inflict 60 damage in the first place? I'm sorry but every time I read this technique there's something wrong with it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Bolt View Post
    (Raiton: Hisan Ikkakujuu) - Lightning Release: Flying Unicorn
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+15 for every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user creates a flying unicorn from his lightning chakra by, which can use lightning jutsus upto B-Rank from his horn. While running on ground he is very fast just like horse and while flying in sky he is just fast as bird. But when running in sky while flying, his speed gets increased.
    User can sit on the unicorn as rider.
    Note: ~Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.


    Declined. add a restriction stating that it counts as a move when the unicorn uses a technique
    __________
    (Fuuton: Hisan Ikkakujuu) - Wind Style: Flying Unicorn
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+15 for every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user creates a flying unicorn from his wind chakra by compressing wind chakra, which is very stable and can use wind jutsus upto B-Rank from his horn. While running on ground he is very fast just like horse and while flying in sky he is just fast as bird. But when running in sky while flying, his speed gets increased.
    Note: ~Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.


    Declined. add a restriction stating that it counts as a move when the unicorn uses a technique
    Quote Originally Posted by Bolt View Post
    This week's cj

    resubmitting
    Added the part which you told me to add (bold part)

    (Raiton: Hisan Ikkakujuu) - Lightning Release: Flying Unicorn
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+15 for every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user creates a flying unicorn from his lightning chakra by, which can use lightning jutsus upto B-Rank from his horn. While running on ground he is very fast just like horse and while flying in sky he is just fast as bird. But when running in sky while flying, his speed gets increased.
    User can sit on the unicorn as rider.
    Note: ~If unicorn uses a technique then it would be counted as one of the 3 moves.
    ~Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.



    ~Declined~ This is not a summon, it's a jutsu. I won't allow you to create any mythological creature you want and give it the same properties as a summon while not classifying it as one.

    __________
    resubmitting
    Added the part which you told me to add (bold part)

    (Fuuton: Hisan Ikkakujuu) - Wind Style: Flying Unicorn
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+15 for every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user creates a flying unicorn from his wind chakra by compressing wind chakra, which is very stable and can use wind jutsus upto B-Rank from his horn. While running on ground he is very fast just like horse and while flying in sky he is just fast as bird. But when running in sky while flying, his speed gets increased.
    Note: ~If unicorn uses a technique then it would be counted as one of the 3 moves.
    ~Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.



    ~Declined~ This is not a summon, it's a jutsu. I won't allow you to create any mythological creature you want and give it the same properties as a summon while not classifying it as one.

    New cj

    (Katon: Hisan Ikkakujuu) - Fire Release: Flying Unicorn
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+15 for every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user creates a flying unicorn from his fire chakra by, which can use fire jutsus upto B-Rank from his horn. While running on ground he is very fast just like horse and while flying in sky he is just fast as bird. But when running in sky while flying, his speed gets increased.
    User can sit on the unicorn as rider.
    Note: ~If unicorn uses a technique then it would be counted as one of the 3 moves.
    ~Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.

    ~Declined~ This is not a summon, it's a jutsu. I won't allow you to create any mythological creature you want and give it the same properties as a summon while not classifying it as one.

    (Hisan Ikkakujuu) - Flying Unicorn
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short (when created)
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 for every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (+40 if get in contact with it)
    Description: The user creates a flying unicorn from any of his elemental chakra. User can sit on the unicorn as rider. And after he gets in contact/sits on that elemental unicorn, he automatically gets covered in that particular element's chakra, which acts as coating on the user's body and protects him from that element's jutsus upto B-rank and from the element it is strong against but is weak to its weak element.
    While running on ground he is very fast just like horse and while flying in sky he is just fast as bird. But when running in sky while flying, his speed gets increased.
    Note: ~Coating lasts for 4 turns and after that one out of three move will be occupied after each 4 turns to remain the coating active, and must be in contact with that unicorn to activate the coating.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.

    ~Declined~ Seriously now...No coating, similar technique already exist just for that. Also, how would you breath if you were coated from head to toe in water? Lasting 4 turns 3 times a match? So you'd have a flying elemental animal for 12 turns in a row? Make it 2 turns max and limit the amount of jutsu it can used while being on the field. Honestly, I don't like this technique, and I'll be strict in the next re-submission so try and restrict it well and be careful not to stack too many abilities.

    Quote Originally Posted by Bolt View Post
    (Doton: Rensei Hando) - Earth Style: Drilling Hand
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: User surrounds their arm in a coat of earth chakra which takes the form of drill, it starts spinning, and can drill through any earth tech upto A-Rank.
    Note:-Coating lasts a maximum of 3 turns, and user can break the coating by making a single handseal.
    -Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Bolt.

    Declined, how can a B rank earth drill through a A rank earth technique? edit this appropriately

    (Doton: Katadzuke Dekata) - Earth Style: Finishing move
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: User Claps his hands and 2 walls of almost 3 ft. which have numerous spikes on one side, rises from the side of the target and then the walls collide to one another crushing the target in between.
    Note: -Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Bolt.
    This is what i wanna Say

    Declined, similar jutsu exists
    Sry for my bad drawing
    (Doton: Rensei Hando) - Earth Style: Drilling Hand
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: User surrounds their arm in a coat of earth chakra which takes the form of drill, it starts spinning, and can drill and break through any earth tech upto A-Rank.
    Note:-Coating lasts a maximum of 3 turns, and user can break the coating by making a single handseal.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Bolt.


    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Tenmyaku Kisatsu: Senga Jinkei| Killing the Spirit of the Divine Pulse: Keen Fang of Divine Might
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack; Taijutsu
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Senga Jinkei is a close-quarter combat technique, in which the user joins their fingers next to the middle one. Then he pushes their fingers into a certain target at a very high speed, leaving a wound similar to a bullet wound, making swords or similar weapons unnecessary. Because the user concentrates all of his body weight and power into his needle-like finger tips and because the area of contact is so small, this technique has incredible penetrating power, being capable of piercing through swords or even strong walls. Tough it's more frequently used with a single finger, the user can use his whole hand for a wider wound/hole on his target.
    *Usable three times per battle
    *For reference and better understanding of the technique:
    http://i998.mangareader.net/gamaran/...an-2871423.jpg
    http://i995.mangareader.net/gamaran/...an-2871427.jpg
    declined, would need to elaborate on the level of the wall as it wouldnt be able to go through all levels
    Tenmyaku Kisatsu: Senga Jinkei ♦ Killing the Spirit of the Divine Pulse: Keen Fang of Divine Might
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack; Taijutsu
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Senga Jinkei is a close-quarter combat technique, in which the user joins their fingers next to the middle one. Then he pushes their fingers into a certain target at a very high speed, leaving a wound similar to a bullet wound, making swords or similar weapons unnecessary. Because the user concentrates all of his body weight and power into his needle-like finger tips and because the area of contact is so small, this technique has incredible penetrating power, being capable of piercing through swords or even strong walls made of wood or earth [up to B-rank] which aren't of great density. Tough it's more frequently used with a single finger, the user can use his whole hand for a wider wound/hole on his target.
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    Restrictions:
    ♦ Usable three times per battle
    ♦ For reference and better understanding of the technique:
    http://i998.mangareader.net/gamaran/...an-2871423.jpg
    http://i995.mangareader.net/gamaran/...an-2871427.jpg

    ~Declined~ Piercing through a sword O__O That's a bit too much. The rest seems fine.

    Bukiomori ♦ Weapon Weight Release
    Rank: A [Level 1]; S [Level 2]
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: -
    Chakra Cost: 30 [Level 1]; 40 [Level 2]
    Damage Points:
    Description: This is a pre-made and pre-applied seal, which is placed on any of the user's weapons. This seal adds an enormous amount of weight to the weapon it is placed on, as a mean of training, in order for the user to get complete mastery over his own weapon.
    By focusing some chakra around the seal, the respective amount of weight disappears and the weapon becomes much lighter. Since the user is already used to manipulate his weapon with this added weight, the fact that it suddenly disappears, increases the user's ability with it several times, being able to deal stronger and much faster strikes.

    Seal Level 1 [A-rank]
    30 chakra - Half of the added weight is released, making the movements the user performs with his weapon become faster. It can be compared with the speed Rock Lee gets when he releases his weights. Opponents with an inferior rank than the user will have difficult keeping up against the attacks performed with this weapon.

    Seal Level 2 [S-rank]
    40 chakra - All the added weight is released, making the movements the user performs with his weapon become much faster. They become so fast, people without proper training will be completely useless against the user. Taijutsu masters, 3 Tomoe Sharingan users and other opponent's with abilities of the sort, will be able to keep up with the user, tough with some difficulty.
    ____________
    Restrictions:
    ♦ Must be posted on the user's biography, stating which weapons contain the seal.
    ♦ Only two weapons may contain this seal.
    ♦ Usable twice per battle [In case the user feels Level 1 isn't enough and wants to release Level 2] and lasts for the rest of the battle.
    ♦ The speed boost, is not applied to the user's movements in general, but to the techniques using the weapons which contain this seal.
    ♦ User will only be able to use weaponry and taijutsu based attacks [including nintaijutsu] as long as this technique is activated. No ninjutsu, gengutsu, summoning, fuuinjutsu or any other type of techniques may be used.
    ♦ Since the user only has to focus chakra on the seal to release it and not actually perform the sealing, a samurai bio can also use this technique.

    ~Approved~ Brilliant. Good job my friend.

    Iai Heki ♦ Bursting Draw Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user places his hand on the hilt of his sword and at the same time flows a great amount of chakra into it. This will cause the sword to burst trough the scabbard, while at the same time, the user performs a swinging motion. Because the scabbard is suddenly destroyed due the great amount of chakra flowing through the blade of the sword, the user doesn't need to perform a drawing motion before slashing the opponent. A slash is immediately made from the point where the user holds his sword, thus, making this technique even faster than other drawing techniques. Also, the massive flow of chakra running through the blade of the sword, adds to its cutting power, making it at the same time, a strong technique.
    ♦ Usable only by a samurai biography
    ♦ Usable twice per battle
    ♦ No Iai/Iaido techniques next turn

    ~Declined~ Great technique again, but tell me, how can you use this technique twice if you destroy the scabbard in the process?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Koe Chūdō | The Way of the Voice
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: The chosen technique +10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Koe Chūdō is the ability to use sounds and words to regulate one’s own chakra, creating an effect similar to regular hand seals. By using the principles of hand seals and transferring them to words and sounds, Koe Chūdō enables the user to replace all hand seals with words and sounds. While regulating and controlling one’s chakra-flow with one’s voice box is indeed harder than using the standardized hand seals, the chakra spill is actually much smaller than one would believe. There are no specific words or sounds representing each seal, but each word must be at least one syllable long. Furthermore, there are simply some techniques that cannot be used with the voice alone without damaging the throat, due to the chakra concentration that occurs when an advanced technique is used.
    -Koe Chūdō can only be used to perform up to S-ranked techniques and only three S-ranked techniques may be successfully used with the usage of Koe Chūdō.
    -Koe Chūdō is not a technique in itself, but an ability. To use it, the user must post it in the beginning of the fight, or include it in his/her bio.
    -Can only be used by Zero Kelvin

    ~Declined do not resubmit~

    Fusenken | Sticky Fist
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (+10 every turn)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Fusenken is a Taijutsu technique that allows the user to implement the sticky properties of chakra into his fighting style. As it has been proven in the Manga and Anime, it is possible to carry one’s own bodyweight vertically upwards, simply by focusing chakra into ones feet. Fusenken takes these sticky properties of chakra to a new level. By consciously focusing on making his chakra sticky, the user is able to create a glue-like effect anywhere on his body. Because of the conscious effort and extra chakra used on creating this sticky effect, it requires incredible strength to break free from these sticky points. The sticky chakra can be controlled at will, enabling the user to trap and free the targets limbs at will. Furthermore, by focusing this sticky chakra into his sweat, the user is able to create a sticky, transparent substance that can be stretched to short range and used to fool a target into believing that he has escaped.
    -Can only be used by Zero Kelvin

    ~Declined~ Not only do I find it completely over the top that you'd be able to use your sweat to such an extant, but the ability in general is misused. It's clearly stated in the description of the Tree Climbing Practice that if there's too much chakra, they won't be able to climb:

    "If it is too strong, the user will be pushed away from the tree, causing the bark of the tree to break around the point of contact and the user to fall."

    If there was such a thing as "using sticky chakra" they would never be repelled from the tree. The whole concept behind this exercise is vague and I'd only be ready to accept certain variants of the technique, this is not one of them.


    Enajīribāsu | Reverse Energy
    Rank: S
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Enajīribāsu is an advanced Taijutsu technique that is used to defend against an attack and subsequently counter-attack. By using his many years of experience in Taijutsu alongside several breathing techniques and concentration exercises, the user will mirror an opponent’s Taijutsu-attack as it happens. As the two attacks collide, equally strong, the user utilizes his chakra and muscles to transfer the kinetic energy and power from the attacks into another limb. Already in motion as the two attacks collides, the combined force from the attacks colliding will strengthen the counter-attack with such an amount that it will be a mere blur to the opponent, even if he is a Taijutsu Master, and send him flying back with great force. The impact of the counter-attack will carry enough concussive force and chakra to cause a small pulse of power to explode from the limb as it connects with the target.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be used by Taijutsu Masters.
    -The user cannot use any S-ranked or above Taijutsu techniques for the following turn.
    -The force of the impact causes minor sprains in the limb used for the counter-attack.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin

    ~Declined~ Too similar to the abilities of the Sharingan.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Continuing with a few more Hidan only jutsus like the last ones (thanks for the apporaval btw haha) to help build up some more jutsus for him. So feel free to add any restrictions and any advance is always welcome.

    (Ketsueki Fainda) Blood Seeker
    Rank: B
    Range : Short
    Chakra cost : 25
    Damage points : 10 (as its only little pinpricks)
    Description : This ninjutsu (developed only for use with Hidan) is similiar to (Fukumi Hari) - Hidden Needles, but instead of gathering chakra in the mouth this involves Hidan gathering that same chakra into his hands. Due to the skin obstructing the exit of the needles they stick out of the bottom and top of both hands (2cm long). This means any contact with an opponent will leave them with cuts and the enemies blood on Hidans hands.
    ~For use only with Hidan and my permission
    ~To remove the Needles, Hidan must spend one move of the next turn pulling them out
    ~Can only be used 3 times per match
    ~Hidan can not form any handseals while the needles are there.

    ~Approved~

    (Gai Kousaku Kansei) Scythe Cable Entrapment
    Type : Offensive
    Rank : B
    Range : Short-Long
    Chakra cost : 25
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : Using Hidans scythe, Hiden will throw the Scthye forward and manipulate the cable by rotating the arm, which puts the scythe and the cable into a spin (imagine a skipping rope spinning but moving forward at the same time). This looks like a normal throwing of the scythe but by doing this it allows Hidan to manipulate the extra cable to wrap around and bind an opponent if they block the attack within short range of themselves. They will bindded from waist to neck trapping both arms (both arms down by their side). Once bindded Hiden can retract the cable which will pull him forward towards the opponent.
    ~Can only be used by Hiden using his Scythe and with my permission.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per match
    ~Opponent has to have blocked the scythe within short range i.e. Used a sword or kunai etc

    ~Declined~ I have nothing against the jutsu in general, for the most part, but the description is too unclear. Re-submit with a clearer, simpler description.

    (New Suiton Jutsu for Rasnall i know that i wont be able to use this until i complete my suiton training but im nearly there and was just planning ahead.)

    (Fuwafuwa Mira Kiri) Light Reflection Mist.
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This justu begins with the user building and molding their Suiton chakra and then slowly allowing this to leave there body as a mist, visible to the naked eye as a light greyish colour for the first few seconds. After the few few seconds the mist becomes invisible to the naked eye. This mist is make of thin, sharpened Suiton chakra droplets and surrounds the user like an oval cacoon. Using Light Reflection, all of the tiny water droplets are angled like mirrors and reflect the light from behind the line of sight where the user is stood, meaning when you look at the user, the light from behind the user is reflected infront making the user seem invisible. When used, the user will appear to merge with the background. *Desciption below* Anyone using a Doujutsu will see an oval blur of were the user is stood, meaning they can not make out any features such as posture, handseals, chakra being channeled etc, as all they can see is the Suiton chakra surrounding the user. When the user moves, the mist is still emitted from their body so is effective at any angle but any movement faster then a run (made by the user) will mean the wind resitance acting against the body will be to high and the mist would be blown back faster then it can be produced making the user visible again. Where a Doujutsu user will see the mist moving (still as a blur) it will leave a trail of Suiton charka for where the user once was, (much like a plane does when flying. This however disapates after a minute or two). If the user performs any other jutsu while using this then after the handseals are formed, the jutsus own chakra will push apart the mist, bringing the user back into vision momenterally. As long as the user has paid the chakra cost for that turn however then the mist will continue to flow out of the body and simply forms around the user again in a couple of seconds.

    ~Must have Mastered water and have a bio with a water affinity.
    ~Lasts 3 turns (unless released earlier) and can only be used 2 times per match (while waiting 3 turns from when it was last used).
    ~Each turn that this is active, the chakra cost is deducted and the user can only use 2 other jutsus.
    ~Can only be used by Rasnall

    *Description*
    *Description*

    Using the image above, the light from behind the user is bounced around the user and then into the eye of the opponent. This give the user the appearence of being invisible when in fact the user hasnt moved and the no change to any phycial matter has taken place. Visibility depends on the eyes of the observer and/or the instruments used. Thus an object can be classified as "invisible to" a person, animal, instrument, etc.

    A Doujutsu user will see me like this:


    ~Approved~ Brilliant. It's been a while since I saw such a good idea based on real world science.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Drizzy~ View Post
    The edited is in bold

    Illusion Technique: Za Shourai Tokai sho Rosuto kihakus [The futuristic City of Many Lost Souls]
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The User claps his hands once, releasing his chakra in mass, Which spreads throughout the terrain quickly, it disrupts the senses of the opponent, making him/her visualize a city, the city is built in a faded manner, meaning, buildings and all features just begin fading in to seem as reality, this is a very quick process, thus in little time, the opponent finds him/herself in the center of a City. This genjutsu affects the five senses in the opponent's body, tricking his/her mind, toying with their mental state.
    _________________
    Sense of Hearing:The genjutsu alters the opponents hearing ability, with this, the opponent experiences hearing as people having conversations etc.
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    Sense of Sight:The opponent sees all that is happening around him,and that only, he would not be able to see characteristics of the terrain he was on [before the genjutsu], and so, he can only rely on memory to not walk straight of a cliff [in reality] while he thinks he is walking on a road [in genjutsu] etc.
    _________________
    Sense of Touch/Feeling:The genjutsu alters the opponent's sense of touch also, this being, for example, if he touches a building, his hand would react to being on a solid, he wouldn't just phase [slip] through. If the opponent somehow happens to be injured in the genjutsu [for example, he trip and fell on a rock] He would feel the actual pain as if this is reality.

    _________________
    Sense of Smell:The genjutsu affects the sense of smell, as in a city, there will be different scents, eg. passing a bakery, the user will be able to smell this scent.

    _________________
    Sense of TasteThis is another sense affected by the genjutsu, for example. If the opponent is tempted enough and actually gets something to eat, his sense of taste will cooperate to make him experience tasting/ eating.
    _________________

    With those senses altered, the Opponent is trapped in a virtual world which seems realistic. Common sense of the opponent can give hints to how this is a genjutsu, leading them to be able to escape. The user is also projected in this genjutsu as well as the opponent, they can both perform ninjutsu. If the user is hurt enough, the genjutsu ends. The genjutsu works by responding to the opponent's mind, meaning, If the opponent asks strangers questions, they will most likely answer depending on the questions. If trapped in the genjutsu, the opponent cannot just stab himself to test if it is a genjutsu or not, his/her mind needs solid proof that it is a genjutsu so that his response may break him free. If the opponent is killed in the genjutsu [such as being murdered by a robber], the mental state is disrupted, enough to release him from the technique, though, the opponent will be in great shock, this will trigger dizziness for an entire turn [of the opponent]


    NOTES:
    Can last up to 3 turns [both user and opponent in genjutsu].
    Covers the entire terrain [3 ranges].
    Usable once per battle.
    ✗The user and opponent can only perform A rank and lower techniques while in the genjutsu.
    No Genjutsu for the next 6 turns.

    ~Declined~ First of all, no need to make such a long jutsu for something that is obvious. Just saying you create a city in which the opponent was completely submerged would've been enough. Secondly, the abilities of this technique are ignoring the fundamentals of a genjutsu (check the part I bolded). Since you're not wielding a Mangekyo Sharingan or don't have an advance doujutsu bio (Second Mizukage for example)(correct me if I'm wrong btw), then there's no way for you to create such a genjutsu that defies the normal rules. The rest of the jutsu was fine.

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    Doton/Raiton| Kishou Tsuchi Rippous: Doki za Erekutorikku [Earth/Lightning Release|Rising Earth Cubes: Wrath of Electrocution]
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: With a chain of 4 handseals, Dog, Ox, Snake and Tiger, the user with clasp his hands, keeping his hands clasped, one hundred cubes will rise from the Earth, each cube has blue glowing lines running on them. These cubes are the height of a regular human body [and as cubes, all sides are equal]. They all rise into the air, from solid earth, they my rise, crumbling cliffs, rise out of lakes and rivers [the seabed] Each cube is at a different location, some may hover a meter above the ground, some may be 100 meters in the air, some 50 etc. They are scattered, and are in no orderly manner, once all the cubes have settled [doesn't take long], an electrical surge/charge will be released, the electrical charge is released from all the cubes, everywhere within Mid and Long Range is in contact with the electricity. Even if a few of the cubes are destroyed, it cannot stop the trigger of the jutsu, the Lightning will still be activated.
    NOTES
    Usable once per Battle.
    Hands must stay clasped during the jutsu.
    User cannot perform S rank lightning for the next turn.
    Can only be taught by Drizzy

    ~Declined~ Simply OP. You didn't precise anything about the actual position of the cubes, hence being vague enough to place them to your advantage on the field. Even if your opponent tries to evade or counter you can simply say he forgot one or two behind him. This is ridiculous. Also, for you to keep so much lightning chakra within the earth cubes goes against the very principle of strength and weaknesses of the elements. Lastly, it's impossible for you to mold two chakra at once if you didn't receive yin yang training.

    Crow Contract:XXX

    (Karasu Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Terra) - Crow Summoning Technique:Terra
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user performs 3 handseals, with the last handseal being of the Tiger, he summons Terra, a majestic female Crow. Terra is the younger sister of Black, the Boss of Crows. The is about the same size as Pain's Summoning Bird. Terra spends most of her time at Mt. Karasu [Land of Crows] as she enjoys resting. Terra has a special ability, massive strength and chakra, she also has the ability to perform Earth techniques up to S Rank without using handseals. Terra can perform all Earth techniques while in mid air, she does this by using a special technique. As she is summoned, with a flap of her wings, some feathers will fall to the ground, these feathers act as chakra recievers for doton, while in the air, Terra sends the chakra to the feathers, the feathers then release the chakra, which then utilizes the Earth for whatever technique. By utilizing her strength and chakra, she can fly at intense speeds with her strong wings, boosting herself with chakra, equal to Rock Lee without his weights, she does this by channeling chakra to her wings, and using her natural strength to alter her speed. Terra is also great for her Beak Charge, with her great speed, massive force and earth chakra, by thrusting her Beak into the enemy, she can crush bones and cause injuries, whenever Terra charges into the ground with her beak, a tremor is triggered which can be felt up to mid range. With her strength, she can smash Earth techniques B rank and lower,.
    NOTES
    Beak Charge usable only three times per battle.
    Earth Smash is usable three times per battle.
    Feathers must be on the ground to receive and spread the chakra.
    Can only be taught by Drizzy.
    Must be a signer of the Crow Contract to use this technique.
    Can only be summoned once per battle.

    ~Declined~ Using feathers as chakra receivers to perform earth techniques tells me you didn't understand how jutsus are performed. You need to mold your chakra with hand seals in order to perform a technique. Even if you send you chakra to the feather, please explain to me how it will mold it to perform earth techniques?
    Illusion Technique: Za Shourai Tokai sho Rosuto kihakus [The futuristic City of Many Lost Souls]
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The User claps his hands once, releasing his chakra in mass, Which spreads throughout the terrain quickly, it disrupts the senses of the opponent, making him/her visualize a city, the city is built in a faded manner, meaning, buildings and all features just begin fading in to seem as reality, this is a very quick process, thus in little time, the opponent finds him/herself in the center of a City. This genjutsu affects the five senses in the opponent's body, tricking his/her mind, toying with their mental state.
    _________________
    Sense of Hearing:The genjutsu alters the opponents hearing ability, with this, the opponent experiences hearing as people having conversations etc.
    _________________
    Sense of Sight:The opponent sees all that is happening around him,and that only, he would not be able to see characteristics of the terrain he was on [before the genjutsu], and so, he can only rely on memory to not walk straight of a cliff [in reality] while he thinks he is walking on a road [in genjutsu] etc.
    _________________
    Sense of Touch/Feeling:The genjutsu alters the opponent's sense of touch also, this being, for example, if he touches a building, his hand would react to being on a solid, he wouldn't just phase [slip] through. If the opponent somehow happens to be injured in the genjutsu [for example, he trip and fell on a rock] He would feel the actual pain as if this is reality.

    _________________
    Sense of Smell:The genjutsu affects the sense of smell, as in a city, there will be different scents, eg. passing a bakery, the user will be able to smell this scent.

    _________________
    Sense of TasteThis is another sense affected by the genjutsu, for example. If the opponent is tempted enough and actually gets something to eat, his sense of taste will cooperate to make him experience tasting/ eating.
    _________________

    With those senses altered, the Opponent is trapped in a virtual world which seems realistic. Common sense of the opponent can give hints to how this is a genjutsu, leading them to be able to escape. The user is also projected in this genjutsu as well as the opponent, they can both perform ninjutsu. If the user is hurt enough, the genjutsu ends. The genjutsu works by responding to the opponent's mind, meaning, If the opponent asks strangers questions, they will most likely answer depending on the questions. If the opponent is killed in the genjutsu [such as being murdered by a robber], the mental state is disrupted, enough to release him from the technique, though, the opponent will be in great shock, this will trigger dizziness for an entire turn [of the opponent]


    NOTES:
    Can last up to 3 turns.
    Covers the entire terrain [3 ranges].
    Usable once per battle.
    [B]✗The user and opponent cannot perform any ninjutsu during genjutsu.
    No Genjutsu for the next 6 turns.

    ~Declined~ When re-submitting/editing jutsus, you need to put the added/altered part in bold. If you only took out part of your jutsu, you need to mention what was taken away.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( kuchiyose: Rakuen karasu )Summoning Technique: Gin

    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description : The user Stabs his palms preforms the needed hand-seals, then places his hand on the ground, summoning Gin the crow paradise bird ( paradise crow exact species) The Paradise-crow, also known as the Silky Crow, is a large-sized (around the size of sasuke's hawk)crow-like bird of paradise with all-dark, soft and silky plumage. It has a black bill, crimson eyes, and a call reminiscent of a dog's bark. he is large enough to carry one person and a small-child. unlike most birds, Gin is the land of winds best.. having an uncommon affinity with wind. it was trained in wind( of course the ones that don't need and hand-seals ) to fend off any who tried to get intel it was carrying. the most recent generation of suna ninja trained with the bird, so they could coordinate attacks, like the user preforms the hand-seals and the bird uses the technique. the bird can use wind techniques up to A-rank Wind.
    -Can speak English, Japanese
    -Can only be in play for 5-turns.
    -Can only be Summoned by Teno757 and Fifth Kazakage Since this is his personal bird. Im making it just for him.
    -Can only be Summoned once per battle.
    -Each Jutsu counts as a move toward the three jutsu of the summoner

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyouton: Tsumetaikan)- Ice Release: Icy Veins
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will make 2 handseals then release their water and wind chakra through the ground, createing a vein of ice under ground out of sight of the opponent. As the ice approches the opponent, it becomes more visable from above ground but while under ground the vein of ice can pop out of the ground and split into five seperate points, able to attack the opponent from multipule spots.
    - Can be used 3 times per battle.
    - Muxt be a member of the yuki clan.
    - Can only split into 5 max.
    - Must have permission from -Tuaburn- to use.

    ~Declined~ You did a good job on describing how the technique would take place, but not what happens when the ice emerge. Can you control the ice? Does it simply spring out of the ground as a spike?

    Hyouga: Shīrudo Suiryoku (Glacier Style: Shielding Thrust)
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Shor
    Chakra: 30
    Damage:
    Description: the User sends their Water and Wind chakra into a bladed weapon. The user will perform a thrusting movement with the weapon and ice will form from the tip of the weapon (not attached to the weapon) into a large thick 10 foot diameter protective shield. If protected from an A Rank or below Water Jutsu (or any liquid CE variant) the shield will grow stronger.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: Technique is capable of blocking S Ranked Fire (or CE variant) as long as it is a wide attack, where the ice would only deflect a section of the fire

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    Hyouga: Tōshō no Kōtingu (Glacier Style: Frostbite Coating)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description: user charges the blade of a weapon with water and wind chakra, effectively coating the blade with ice. If the blade cuts into a body part, that body part will get frostbite and become frozen and paralyzed. If the flat of the blade touches a body part, said body part will become numb but still usable. The User can use this technique on a kunai to press the flat of the blade against their tongue after biting it off, resulting in effectively stopping the blood flow after minimal loss.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. The only original part is in bold, and that has nothing to do with your creation, it's simply using the properties of ice (like saying you'd get burned if you touched fire).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mizu no sutairu: Appuhiru-ryoku)Water style: Uphill Force

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points:80
    Description; The user concentrates on his suiton chakra for over a large period of time, he then does some hand seals needed and focuses his chakra into his palm ,after this he then slams it on the ground after looking or using his sight to pin point the current range of his opponent then brings about massive up hill water force which forces the opponent upwards in an instant and drop him down with brute force leaving the target severely injured And Battered .

    Note: Can only be taught by thunderbolt
    Note: Can Only be used twice
    Note: User must wait three turns to use again
    Note: Must have at least started water training

    ~Declined~ Let me get this straight, you're creating water out of nowhere to lift your opponent upward with great force? If there's the right definition, it's already been done. VM me if I made an interpretation mistake.

    (Kasai no sutairu: Burēdo wa korosu) Fire style: Knife blade

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points:80
    Description; This jutsu is one which bases it self on the concept of chakra and shape manipulation The user gathers a huge amount of katon chakra in his right hand for a considerably large amount of time ,He then uses the focused fire chakra and paces toward towards the opponent in a form of a long knife similar to a a little sword made from or consisted of flames which which is solely as a result of shape and chakra manipulation,when this comes in contact or touches the opponent ,Causes deadly burns to the opponent.

    Note: Can only be taught by thunderbolt
    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: Can not use s rank fire for 3 turns

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    Quote Originally Posted by Thunderbolt View Post
    Resubmitting

    (Doton: Yasumichuu Funkei)Earth style: enclosed Decapitation
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This Jutsu can only be done on ground or where there is earth,the user makes several earth hand seals and focuses his chakra on hands and slamming palm to the ground bringing about 4 large enclosed rock pillars with Multiple sharp edges which quickly when comes in contact with the target causes severe injuries

    In this jutsu as instructed by izuna i removed that parts of it being an auto kill and also removed stuff like can only be countered by a lightning jutsu of a higher rank i have done all of the conditions listed by izuna and have mad minor changes to my grammar

    ~Declined~ It's all good now, but where are the restrictions @__@?

    (Doton: Yasumichuu Funkei)Earth style: enclosed Decapitation
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This Jutsu can only be done on ground or where there is earth,the user makes several earth hand seals and focuses his chakra on hands and slamming palm to the ground bringing about 4 large enclosed rock pillars [B]with Multiple sharp edges which quickly when comes in contact with the target causes severe injuries.

    Note:This jutsu must be taught be thunder bolt to use.
    Note:Can Be used twice in battle
    Note:The user must wait 3 turns to use again


    I have done everything changed all stuff and the reason izuna did not accept it last week was because i forgot to add the previous restrictions this are it above in the bolded part.

    Here is the link to the earth jutsu which was being declined because of no custom jutsu restrictions.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=5381

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Ice Release: Seven Slice Dance ( Hyōton : Nanarenbu)
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After creating sharp blades made of ice on his arms, the user shots himself at the opponent at high speeds and rapidly slashes his enemy seven times.

    This is how it looks.



    ~Approved~
     
         
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