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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doujutsu: Ippai Shinjou Marionetto) - Eye Technique: full body marionette

    Rank:S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (+10 if use of weapon on enemies self)
    Description: This is an advanced sharingan in which the user has to simply point all fingers at the enemy and them to have directly looked at the fingers. This then puts the enemy in a genjutsu where the user takes control of the enemies body and can control them to either attack another opponent or make them draw a kunai and stab themselves. however the enemy still has full control of their eyes and is able to watch their body move without their control.

    Note: this jutsu can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
    Note: this jutsu can only be used twice per battle
    Note: lasts for 1 turn
    __________
    |Declined|

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    (Katana jutsu: Shinkirou dageki) - Sword art - mirage strike

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user uses the light reflected off the blade and molds it with chakra sent into the blade. this then intensifies the light reflected towards the enemy and then gives the illusion of multiple blades in which the enemy sees multiple blades coming towards them and find it hard to predict the actual blade.

    Note: this jutsu must be performed with a drawn sword
    Note: this jutsu can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
    Note: this jutsu can only be performed 3 times

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    |Approved|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-01-2009 at 11:45 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Boushi no Mai) - Dance of the Eyes
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Medium
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will concentrate his chakra on any part of his body and an eye will appear (3 max). Then, everything the eye sees, the user can control it. Each eye can only control one object, cannot control elements. This jutsu can only be used twice per battle
    _______
    |Declined| Too bleachy, not enough for naruto context
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-01-2009 at 11:46 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    There was no word for Imbue nor Imbuement in Japanese, so I'll change the name if needed, but for now I'll leave it as is.

    (Suji Imbuement) String Imbuement
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Instead of shooting normal jutsu through puppet strings, the user will imbue elemental chakra through a chakra string. The user can imbue any elemental chakra that they have in the string. Whatever element they put in the string, the puppet that the string is controlling can use it. Example: If you were to run fire chakra through a string, that puppet can now use fire jutsu up to whatever rank the user knows.
    Note: The user can use this as many times as they want throughout battle but only once per turn and can only use at as long as they have enough strings to use.
    Note: If this is used along with "(Kugutsu No Jutsu) - Puppetry Technique" it can count as one move. Because of the fact that it would be exactly like extending a chakra string out, just adding elemental chakra into it instead of normal chakra. Despite this, the jutsu can be used at any time, but it will only count as one jutsu when used with the said technique.
    Note: If the user comes with a puppet, they can have it already activated, but only one puppet as said with the first restriction.
    Note: Must be a puppet user.
    ___________
    |Declined|

    Remove that can use any jutsu up to whatever the user knows.
    Make it so that the puppet can release said element.
    Also make S rank and three times per battle.

    Or

    Make a custom puppet that can use elemental attacks. Resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-01-2009 at 11:50 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    This Thread Will be closed until Monday!

    Apparently you guys can't count 7 days from your last post.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Thread is now Open.

    You can only post 5 jutsu during a seven day period, and yes resubmits count.

    This is your first warning, go over and begin to spam, i'll infract.

    Have fun submitting jutsu.^^
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Emono O-ba) - Game Over
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: All
    Damage Points: N/A (will make the heart of the user stop)
    Description: The user will concentrate all of his chakra in its heart and will release it all at once. This will make the user to have huge speed and strength and will make him able to use very strong jutsus which will drain all of the user’s chakra. Thanks to the enormous amount of chakra released the user can control his element at will with no need of hand signs and some jutsus that require a huge mass of chakra can be used. Lasts 4 turns, after this, the user’s heart will stop and he will die.
    ___________
    |Declined|


    (Raiton: Bakuyaku Onidenkou Nami) - Lightning Release: Explosive Demon Lightning Wave
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 100
    Damage Points: 150
    Description: One of the 3 jutsus that cause inimaginable damage but carries the fate of the user's death. The user will concentrate all of his lightning chakra and suddently will release it, making an huge explosion around him. This explosion is said to be even bigger than Deidara's self destruction jutsu. This jutsu totally obliterates the field but the user will die using it because of its immense power. Last resort jutsu.
    ___________
    |Declined|


    (Katon: Bakuyaku Oninami) - Fire Release: Explosive Demon Wave
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 100
    Damage Points: 150
    Description: One of the 3 jutsus that cause inimaginable damage but carries the fate of the user's death. The user will concentrate all of his fire chakra and suddently will release it, making an huge explosion around him. This explosion is said to be even bigger than Deidara's self destruction jutsu. This jutsu totally obliterates the field but the user will end by losing control of the jutsu, which will burn him to death. Last resort jutsu.
    ___________
    |Declined|


    (Fuuton: Suraisu Oninami) - Slicing Demon Wave
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 100
    Damage Points: 150
    Description: One of the 3 jutsus that cause inimaginable damage but carries the fate of the user's death. The user will concentrate all of his wind chakra and suddently will release it, in form of huge and strong slicing winds. This jutsu totally obliterates the field but the user will end totally mutilated since he cant control the power of this jutsu. Last resort jutsu.
    ___________
    |Declined|



    Can't have you dying on me
    Sacrifice ftw!!
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 08:54 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Emperor View Post
    Next one in my series of sword jutsu !!!

    Kenjutsu no Kaito : Pegasus ( Sword Style of the Emperor : Pegasus )
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: To perform this technique, the user points their sword at the opponent. Almost immediately, the user dashes forward in a straight line at high speed ( much as if the user is on a conveyor belt, but faster - there is no movement of legs , only body as a whole ). The user is surrounded by wind travelling at high speeds to a distance of about two metres, in much the same shape as a comet ( with the user in the head of the comet shaped wind ) which slices any physical objects that touch it. Due to the wind travelling at high speeds, just beneath the wind is a layer of vacuum, though this has no offensive application whatsoever. Because of the wind surrounding the user, the impact of this technique does not leave a stab wound, but rather blows a large chunk of the object away, as if hit by a large beam of energy. The user, after the point of impact, continues on for another five or six metres before stopping due to the high speeds. Once the user stops, the wind dissipates into weak blades that spread out 360 degrees.
    This move does 15 damage to the user whether successful or not due to the strain caused on the user's body.
    ___________
    |Declined|

    Clarify the bolded text? Just slice right
    Remove the wind blades

    And then

    Kinjutsu : Haikkekaku Fuuin ( Forbidden Technique : Consumption Seal )
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: On Self
    Chakra: 50
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user focuses all their life essence into one spot on their body, creating a seal there, which looks like three snakes in a circle with a six pronged star in the middle. This means that if the user is hit in any other place of their body, their body will regenerate its wounds and the user will not die. However, if the opponent so much as touchesthe seal, the user will die - even from a D ranked jutsu or a simple punch hitting the seal. Even if the user attempts to hide this seal by an armour, the seal will shine through the armor, and touching the armour at that point will kill the user. However, if suppose the seal is on the user's arm and the user cuts off their arm so that the seal is split in two, the user will not be vulnerable to the effects of the seal, but will lose their arm. Unfortunately, to prevent a person from being practically immortal by forming it on the arm and cutting their arm off, the seal always forms on the middle of the torso, because there is almost no way for the user to cut their torso into half without dying.This jutsu takes 25 chakra per turn, and the user loses 15 health per turn.

    _________
    |Declined|


    Excuse me, but these jutsu in the quoted message havent even been CHECKED since 24. 08..... They don't count as my submissions for this week....

    Raiton : Dendou Munashii ( Lightning Release: Electric Void )
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user shoots a bolt of lightning at any water technique or water source. This bolt causes the water to become elctrolysed, splitting into its constituent parts, Hydrogen and Oxygen. The heat of the lightning bolt causes the Hydrogen to explode, also combusting the Oxygen, enveloping the enemmy ( if they are near the water ) in a wave of fire and explosions.
    -Can only be used thrice per battle-
    -Does 10 damage to the user-
    ___________
    |Declined|

    Similar to pure water...

    See Electrolysis - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

    ________________________


    Raiton : Enkohi ( Lightning Release: Arc Blaze )
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user shoots a bolt of lightning, ionising any air near the opponent, causing a phenomenon similar to a lightning arc to occur. This heats the surrounding area to roughly 10,000 K, incinerating the opponent.
    -Can only be used twice per battle-
    -Does 20 damage to the user-

    See Arc lamp - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
    Electric arc - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
    ___________
    |Declined|
    Overpowered.


    Your Excused!
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-01-2009 at 01:50 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Jishaku Ninpou: Denjiki) - Magnetic Ninja Art: Electromagnetism

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user carefully controls their chakra and creates a pulse of chakra shooting out of their hand. this pulse creates a electromagnetic field and attracts protons and neutrons in lightning based attacks and draws them into the centre of the electromagnetic field and discharges the collected energy into the ground. ( takes a toll on the user so they cant use magnetic ninja art the following turn)

    Note: can only be used by 3rd Kazekage bio or sasori bio
    Note: can only be used 3 times
    Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
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    ___________
    |Approved|


    (Jishaku Ninpou: Kouin anime) - Magnetic Ninja Art: time animation

    Rank S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user emits magnetic pulses which can disrupt the electromative impulses that the brain sends throughout the body to communicate with the limbs and holds the enemy in a state of suspended animation for short period of time making their reaction to attacks a last minute option.

    Note: can only be used by 3rd Kazekage bio or sasori bio
    Note: can only be used twice
    Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
    Note: enemy can only use two jutsu in the turn instead of 3
    ------------------------------------------------------
    ___________
    |Declined|

    EMP's (Electric Magnetic Pulse) cannot (to my knowledge) stop the electrical impulses sent though our brain nuerons that connect throughout your bodies. It's why humans were safe from the robots in the matrix, .


    (Jishaku Ninpou: Jiki Kanchiki) - Magnetic ninja art: magnetism sensor

    Rank: A
    Type: supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user creates a magnetic field which expands over a 10 meter radius and covers underground by 5 meters. This magnetic field can pick up the slightest magnetic charges coming from any enemy that happens to be within the magnetic field and relays the postion to the user.

    Note: can only be used by 3rd Kazekage bio or sasori bio
    Note: can only be used 3 times per battle
    Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
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    ___________
    |Approved|


    (Tsuin Tenma Sai) - twin demon sai

    Rank A
    Type: Weapon
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: the Twin demon sai's are a pair of handheld weapons made from infused chakra metals. They are commonly used by the uchiha clan for their unique offensive fightning style capabilities. they have the ability to absorb the users chakra and coat the blades in three different elements of either fire , lightning or wind. when the pair of blades are run along each other ( by the middle spike) they release a energy blast of raw chakra and can be infused with the elemental chakra that they absorb. these raw chakra blasts create different affects. lightning will numb area of contact, fire will induce 3rd degree burns and wind will simply shred the outer skin layers. These twin demon sai's are carried in the sleeves of the users top and can be wielded as blunt objects to increase damage from punching the enemy.

    Note: Can only be used by an uchiha Bio
    Note: Can only be taught by uchiha Kaito
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    ___________
    |Declined|

    Make them S rank and limit their uses.


    (Han Sochi jutsu)- Half Step technique

    Rank: S
    Type: offence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This is a style of chinese martial arts where the user uses precise chakra control to move half a step out of the way when being attacked at close range. The user is then facing the side of the enemy.This advanced technique can be followed up with an attack and the opponent cant react because the user is in too close proximity and allowing the user to directly cause damage quickly to the enemy.

    Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    ___________
    |Declined|

    I understand what your saying, but i don't understand how this can't be blocked. Some fighters are great a proximity fighting.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 09:04 AM. Reason: adding custom weapon

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    When will the group be opened again? o.O

    Counter summoning (Tentou Kuchiose)
    Rank; B
    Type; Supplementary
    Range; Entire Feild
    Chakra cost; 25
    Damage points; N/A
    Description; Summoning and reverse summoning acts as a time/space ninjutsu transporting users from eithers blood ports to the opposite chakra ports. The jutsu switches the chakra ports thus stopping a summoning from taking place.
    Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle.
    --
    using time/space, reverse summoning and summoning, summons humans or monster summonings using time/space, u use time/space and replace the chakra ports
    like what minato did to develop flying thunder god, instead of getting something to the target it gets the target somewhere. (Summoning-Flying thunder god relationship) replacing the ports,
    ___________
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    You still haven't explain how you can replace the ports with out direct contact.
    Do not resubmit.


    Fire Style; Infernal prison (katon; inferunul keimusho)
    Rank; S
    Type; Attack
    Range; Short-mid(on the ground where the glyph was formed)
    Chakra;40
    Damage; 80(10 to the user)
    Description; The user summons flame in a circular glyph under the opponents feet. As long as the target is on the ground the attack is really difficult to avoid, The glyph can be moved and the flame comes from 4 corners of the glyph and covers till mid range of the air above the glyph. The flames are very voilent and harmful at contact.
    ___________
    |Approved|

    On the condition that the mid range in the air part is removed.


    Water Style; Blessed Drop (Suiton; keitaku tekika)
    Rank; S
    Type; Attack/Defense (can be both at the same time)
    Chakra cost; 40
    Damage points; 80
    Description; The user collects moisture from the air into an orb shape, the user keeps on collecting water and condenses it into the orb, the friction upon condensing produces electricity, thus an orb of condensed electrified cold water, upon impact the orb releases large ammount of water capable enough of blocking the highest level wind fire combo's and strong lightning techniques.
    Note; No water source needed to perform this technique, though a water source can increase the speed of forming the orb.

    At the blocking part i said blocking not overpowering, don't misunderstand that part.
    ___________
    |Declined| Remove the highlighted area. resubmit.


    Earth Style; Ground Dasher (Doton; Daichiyakushin)
    Rank; S
    Type; Attack
    Chakra cost; 40
    Damage points; 80
    Description; The user stomps on the ground that first makes a tomb of earth binding the opponent tight, then the user stomps again the brings rock out of the ground that goes rushing towards the opponent. The opponent gets crushed if he is underground due to flipping of the earth and stomping.
    ___________
    |Declined|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 09:10 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Nero~ View Post
    (Oton: Oton tama) Sound style: Sound sphere
    Type: Attack
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40 (+5 if made disrupt)
    Damage: 80 (5 each turn ears bleed)
    Description: The user creates a sphere of unvisble and silent sound either by mouth or by palm and then sends it out towards the opponent if this jutsu is hit by a object it disrupts and sends out a ring towards every opponent except the user making the sound ring in their ears for over 3 turns if the opponent takes the hit this jutsu deals 80 plus five each turn the ears bleed.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle

    This is not a rasengan -_-
    _____________
    |Declined|

    (Oton: Oton anpurifaia) Sound Style: Sound amplifier
    Type: Supplimentary/Attack/ Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 0 (5 to the user when activated)
    Description: The user unlockz a seal that amplifies sound giving him better hearing. This jutsu allows the user to hear things from any point on the terrian. This jutsu amplifies sound by 20 damage but also adds chakra on by 10. This jutsu makes the user unaffected to any jutsu dealing with any type of sound. Every turn this jutsu is active the user takes 5 damage. Any ringing that the opponent hears is added by 1 turn
    Note: This jutsu only last for 3 turns
    Can only be used once.
    Only people who know sound the element and have been taught by nero can use this technique.

    _____________
    |Declined|
    Remove this,"This jutsu makes the user unaffected to any jutsu dealing with any type of sound." and "Any ringing that the opponent hears is added by 1 turn". Also make S rank. Resubmit next week.
    (Oton: Oton anpurifaia) Sound Style: Sound amplifier
    Type: Supplimentary/Attack/ Defense
    Rank: Srank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 0 (5 to the user when activated)
    Description: The user unlockz a seal that amplifies sound giving him better hearing. This jutsu allows the user to hear things from any point on the terrian. This jutsu amplifies sound by 20 damage but also adds chakra on by 10. Every turn this jutsu is active the user takes 5 damage.
    Note: This jutsu only last for 3 turns
    Can only be used Twice.
    Only people who know sound the element and have been taught by nero can use this technique.
    ___________
    |Approved|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 09:13 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Fuuton: Asenburu Mou ) Wind Style: Reassemble

    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: Consist on manipulating any kind of dust ( Sand, Metal, Dirt ) using Wind Chakra. After tossing the dust, the user can spread it and reassemble the dust any where within the range, creating small objects.
    If the opponent inhales the dust, the user will only have 2 seconds to reassemble the dust, or the conection with that part of dust will be lost.
    Lasts only the turn it's used.
    ___________
    |Declined|

    No reassembling dust inside people. Especially at C rank.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 09:14 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Senpo: Kawazu Naki)-Sage Art: Frog Call
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long/Mid/Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Both Shima and Fukasaku sing, releasing large, loud, and powerful sound waves that effectively annoy, distract, and temporarily paralyze the target.
    Note:Both Shima and Fukasaku need to be present on the battle field to use the jutsu.
    ___________
    |Approved|

    Limit to twice per battle.


    (Senpo: Futon Sunabokori)-Sage Art: Wind Release Dust Cloud
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Long/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: -
    Description: Shima spits out a massive cloud of dust from her mouth, blocking the target's vision. The dust cloud is large enough to hide a summon as large as Gamabunta.
    Note:Shima needs to be present on the battle field to use the jutsu
    ___________
    |Approved|


    (Zessenbaku)-War of Words Binding
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Long/Mid/Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: -
    Description: After focusing senjutsu chakra to her snaking tongue, Shima will extend it to seek out hidden foes. When the target is found ensnares it to prevent escape and marks it with a corrosive chemical. Shima uses this to find Pain's camouflaged Giant Chameleon.
    Note:Fukasaku needs to be present on the battle field to use this jutsu
    ___________
    |Declined|

    How does she find her hidden foes?


    (Zessenzan)-War of Words Decapitation
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long/Mid/Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After focusing Senjutsu chakra to his snaking tongue, Fukasaku will extend it towards his opponent. Because of the natural energy-augmented chakra built up in his tongue, it will become superfast and sharp. The tongue can then easily cut through most foes.
    Note:Fukasaku needs to be present on the battle field to use this jutsu
    ___________
    |Declined|

    Eh not to comfortable with the highlighted area.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 09:19 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mokuton:Mokuzai Kyojin)-Wood Style:Wood Giant
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: User creates A Giant Made put of wood.The user controls the Giant with specific Handsigns.This Giant is about 4 stories tall.
    Note:this Just can only Be used once in per battle
    *this justu can only be used by Minato1*
    ___________
    |Approved|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 09:19 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Kuroi E-Su) Black Ace
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 *if attacks themselves, if not then no damage*
    Description: The user turns, the setting into darkness, and loads of cards are spinning around the user and opponent, the user will take one of the card if its a king, a queen or an ace, the user can make the target, fall asleep, attack themselves, or die. If the user gets a ace, the target dies, if the user gets a king, the target attacks themselves, if its a queen, the target falls asleep for a turn. If the user doesn't pick ace,queen or king, then the opponent has no effect that turn.
    Note: Can be used twice per battle
    Note: Ace is very tricky to get, and so mostly the choice will be either king or queen
    Note: Can Only Be Used/Taught By SinRival
    ___________
    |Declined|


    (Doujutsu: Metsuki Of Ato Shippuu) Eyes Of A Hurricane
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user activates their doujutsu and looks into the eyes of the opponent,if the opponent looks at the users eyes, they are trapped in this attack, the target starts to feel like is spinning, and then starts to feel getting cut and ripped into pieces, the opponent is hurt very badly and cannot escape once trapped.
    Note: Can Only Be Used Twice Per Battle
    Note: Can Only Be Used/Taught By SinRival
    ___________
    |Declined|

    Remove highlighted area and resubmit.


    (Katon:Yuuen Gekido)-Fire Style: Grand Rage
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user gathers fire chakra into the sky and their stomach, they release fire to the sky, and loads of phoenixs fall and go straight at the opponent, the user the releases a grand fireball and loads of phoenixs that all go at the opponent, a big phoenix will cover the skies, and this attack will destroy anything in its path. The user takes 10 damage as fire will burn the user before it goes towards the opponent.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Can only be used by SinRival and people taught by her
    ___________
    |Declined|

    What?


    Weapon: Kaisari Of The Flames
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A (30 using fire chakra and touches target)
    Damage Points: N/A (60 using fire chakra and touches target)
    Description: Kaisari is a special katana, sent from the lords of fire, specially crafted and given to Katon by his brother, it is very power and strong. Fire chakra is especially strong in this sword, wind chakra can be used to increase its cutting power, the katana is stronger, and has its special powers.
    Note: Only SinRival Holds This Katana
    ___________
    |Approved|


    (Katana Gigei: Inferuno Of Kaisari)-Weaponry Arts: Inferno Of Kaisari
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user stabs Kaisari into the ground and then makes a handseal,gathering fire chakra they then grab Kaisari and release the fire chakra, making an inferno and fire beasts smashes through the ground but this won't hurt the user.
    Note: Can only use 1 per battle
    Note: Can only be used by SinRival and Must Hold Kaisari
    ___________
    |Approved|
    On the condition that you remove the highlighted areas

    Hope these are approved... Goro..Sensei...
     
         
    Last edited by Sin; 09-03-2009 at 03:11 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Shadow Puppetry Jutsu
    Type- Attack
    Rank- A
    Range- Short-Long
    Chakra cost- 30
    Damage- 60
    Description- The user uses shape manipulation to turn any shadows within his sight into any form he wishes (animal, human, weapon). All the shadows then converge on the target and attack from all sides at the same time.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must be from the Nara Clan to use this jutsu
    *Shadow puppets created by this jutsu only last for this turn
    *Can only be used twice per battle
    *Unavoidable unless with space/time jutsu or 360 degree defense

    ___________
    |Declined|

    Remove the highlighted area and make s rank


    Hidden Shadow Jutsu
    Type- Supplementary/Attack
    Rank- A
    Range- Short-Long
    Chakra cost- 30
    Damage- 60
    Description- The user creates a clone made from his shadow itself. This clone is able to travel through shadows, going in one and able to come out of any other in the users sight, as long as the shadows are connected. The clone can only travel through the shadows as quickly as the user can run. The clone can attack using taijutsu or shadow versions of any weapon the user carries.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must be from the Nara clan to use this jutsu
    *Can only be use 3 times per battle
    *As long as this clone is active no other Shadow jutsus that require the users shadow can be preformed since the users shadow is not connected to him. (techniques such as the Shadow Imitation Shuriken jutsu and the Shadow Puppetry jutsu can still be used as they do not need the users shadow)
    *This is similar to the Underground Fish Projection jutsu where the user travels underground, but its a clone and shadows instead. (So its not time/space since its not instantaneous)

    ___________
    |Approved|


    Touch of the Black Plague
    Type-Supplementary
    Rank-S
    Range-Short
    Chakra cost-40
    Damage-(-5 each turn)
    Description- The user places a special tag on the opponent. Once placed this tag instantly releases, causing a slow-paced disease to effect the opponent. What this does is cancel all modes/power-ups the opponent might be using (Sage mode, Eight gates, Curse Mark,etc) by attacking their chakra systems. This disease also reverses some of those effects. For example, if the mode the opponent was in gives +10 to taijutsu, then this disease cancels that as well as weakening their muscles, making them now have 10 to taijutsu. Lastly it slows the opponents movements to 2/3rds their normal speed.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinjas bios can use this jutsu
    *The damage/negative effects only last for 3 turns but the opponents mode/power-up cannot be used again this battle (This jutsu also does not effect KGs)
    *This jutsu can only be used once per battle
    *This jutsu is ineffective on medical ninja

    ___________
    |Declined|
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Katana: Anrui
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: (30 To Active the Sword then 5per turn after actived)
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Anrui is a Charka blade before actived its just a hilt to a blade then changes to a blade about the length of a regular katana. Anrui has the ability to increase in length to a distance long enough to strike for Medium Range distance an by changing the density of the charka Anrui has whip like ability.
    Note:Can Cut through up to A Rank Hardened Materials(Earth, Ice Etc)
    ___________
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    But change the highlighted area to B rank.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Name:turtle shell(kame tama)
    Type:Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:40 (-15 per turn)
    Damage Points:80 (- 30 to user per turn)
    Description:This jutsu creates a chakra cloak in the form of the Sanbi(three tails) in a dome shape.This chakra dome can use water affinity from the Sanbi to block any fire of lower level and any fisical attack, its also able to use it's tails to attack a grab the enemy.It sences any chakra that touches it from any side.
    (note:can only be used with Sanbi's power)
    (note:can be used for 3 turns)
    (note:can be used 2 times)
    ___________
    |Approved|


    Name:Water Style: 3's trident(Suiton: san's toraidento)
    Type:Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank:C
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points:30
    Description:This jutsu creates a trident from any water source even moisture in the air, this trident can be transformed in anything the user wants and be manipulated in any way.
    [COLOR="DarkOrchid"]___________
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    Existing jutsu]


    Name:trident forest(toraidento hayashi)
    Type:Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points:30
    Description:After the user pierces the ground with is water trident a forest of this will be formed around the user leaving some space betewn him and the trident's.
    This forest is comparable to the kaguya's.
    (note:this jutsu needs a water source )
    (note:"Water Style: 3's trident" must be used before)
    (note:can only be used once per fight)
    ___________
    |Declined|
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Water Release: Water Controll
    Rank S
    Type:Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range:low-long
    Chakra cost: 70
    Damage Points:
    Descrption: This jutsu make the user able to controll water, like Gaara controlls the sand, therefore it osts so much chakra,
    *active only 4 turns
    ___________
    |Declined|
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kibaku Sumi Bunshin) - Exploding Ink Clone

    Rank: C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:30
    Description:A clone made of ink that takes a physical form.
    This clone like a regular ink clone can use ink jutsu but when the user makes
    the appropriate hand sign the clone will explode but instead of a fire like blast it will be ink. the ink will splash into the air and the user will make a final hand sign forming the ink into ink needles that target the opponent.
    NOTE:can only be used and taught by Volcomguts.
    NOTE:can only be used three times per battle.
    ___________
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    (Hitokugutsu: Sai) - Human Puppet: Sai

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:a human puppet made out of my other bio [http://www.narutobase.net/forums/rpg...-sai-bio.html]]. just like a regular human puppet, when summoned, all the original jutsu the person once had are able to be used by the puppeteer.
    NOTE: Can only be used by Volcomguts
    NOTE: Can only be used by Sasori
    ___________
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Ninpou:Buki Henge) Ninja Art : Weapon Transformation
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:10
    Damage Points:N/A ( + any damage caused by weapons )
    A variant of the normal Henge technique, this technique allows the user to transform their weapons, giving them a longer blade, or tunrning a kunai into a senbon, and so on, to surprise the opponent with their weapon based attacks. The weapons, if normal, do not get any other special abilities. The more different the transformed shape is from the original, the more chakra it will take.

    Make a bio.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Poseidon View Post
    (Ninpou:Buki Henge) Ninja Art : Weapon Transformation
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:10
    Damage Points:N/A ( + any damage caused by weapons )
    A variant of the normal Henge technique, this technique allows the user to transform their weapons, giving them a longer blade, or tunrning a kunai into a senbon, and so on, to surprise the opponent with their weapon based attacks. The weapons, if normal, do not get any other special abilities. The more different the transformed shape is from the original, the more chakra it will take.
    You can only post custom jutsu's if you have an approved bio and I can't find one that you made.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton:Shiroryuu)-Lightning Style:White Dragon
    Rank:S
    Range:Mid-Long
    Type:Attack
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80(+10 damage to the user)
    Description:The user's hand starts glowing blue then a powerful beam of lightning blow out from his arm, starting from the shoulder, the lightning travels with incredible speed and it can't be dodged unless Space/Time jutsu.As it blows out of the users' arm, it slightly electrocutes him too.
    ___________
    |Declined|

    Remove the highlighed area.


    (Ninpou:Shigai Nekki Hyouketsu)-Ninja Art:Body Heat Freeze
    Rank:C
    Range:N/A
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points:N/A (+5 to the user each turn it's active)
    Description:The user temporarily freezes his body temperature/heat, making him undetectable if he is out of the enemies sight.As the users temperature goes down instantly his body will recieve damage more easily, and become cold.
    Note:Cannot be teached.
    ___________
    |Declined|

    Medical Ninjutsu.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 09:38 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Riku.. View Post
    There was no word for Imbue nor Imbuement in Japanese, so I'll change the name if needed, but for now I'll leave it as is.

    (Suji Imbuement) String Imbuement
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Instead of shooting normal jutsu through puppet strings, the user will imbue elemental chakra through a chakra string. The user can imbue any elemental chakra that they have in the string. Whatever element they put in the string, the puppet that the string is controlling can use it. Example: If you were to run fire chakra through a string, that puppet can now use fire jutsu up to whatever rank the user knows.
    Note: The user can use this as many times as they want throughout battle but only once per turn and can only use at as long as they have enough strings to use.
    Note: If this is used along with "(Kugutsu No Jutsu) - Puppetry Technique" it can count as one move. Because of the fact that it would be exactly like extending a chakra string out, just adding elemental chakra into it instead of normal chakra. Despite this, the jutsu can be used at any time, but it will only count as one jutsu when used with the said technique.
    Note: If the user comes with a puppet, they can have it already activated, but only one puppet as said with the first restriction.
    Note: Must be a puppet user.
    ___________
    |Declined|

    Remove that can use any jutsu up to whatever the user knows.
    Make it so that the puppet can release said element.
    Also make S rank and three times per battle.

    Or

    Make a custom puppet that can use elemental attacks. Resubmit.
    (Suji Imbuement) String Imbuement
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Instead of shooting normal jutsu through puppet strings, the user will imbue elemental chakra through a chakra string. The user can imbue any elemental chakra that they have in the string. Whatever element they put in the string, the puppet that the string is controlling can use it. Example: If you were to run fire chakra through a string, that puppet can now use fire jutsu up to whatever rank the user knows.
    Note: The user can use this as many times as they want throughout battle but only once per turn and can only use at as long as they have enough strings to use. And it can only be used on one puppet. Example: One puppet isn't allowed to have all of the elements, only one element.
    Note: This is not to be used on puppets such as Sandaime Kazekage who already have elements.
    Note: The puppet can only use basic jutsu of the element the string has up to A rank. They can not use customs or elemental jutsu that involve kekkei genkais.
    Note: If this is used along with "(Kugutsu No Jutsu) - Puppetry Technique" it can count as one move. Because of the fact that it would be exactly like extending a chakra string out, just adding elemental chakra into it instead of normal chakra. Despite this, the jutsu can be used at any time, but it will only count as one jutsu when used with the said technique.
    Note: If the starts the battle with a puppet, they can have it already activated, but only one puppet as said with the first restriction.
    Note: Must be a puppet user.
    ___________
    |Declined|

    No Using A rank elemental jutsu.
    They can use elements. IE: shoot blast or fire,wind,water. Shoot clumps of earth.

    Or make a solitary puppet, S in rank.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 09:42 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Za Ranpu Katana (The Light Blade)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: +10 each turn.
    Damage points: 80 (+15 damage to all sword attacks)
    Description: This blade is the only one of its kind in the world, wielded only by certain people, and can only be taught to those of great knowledge. The blade consists of a eye blinding light, while the heat of the sword is immensely hot. When the sword is swung, it releases a heat wave of slicing fire, becuase the sword is made out of fire it can with stand fire jutsu attacks, and can even cut fire balls inhalf protecting the user.
    Note: Only Archie can weild this blade.
    ___________
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    Kenjutsu: Katanas Off Funkyuu (Sword Style: Blades of Confusion)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will gather a huge amount of chakra into their feet and legs, they will then charge at the opponent at such a high speed ( Even Doujutsu users have trouble following these movments) that the opponent won’t know what’s hit them, leaving them confused. While the user travels past them, then will slash them with their sword. But because of the extreme speed the opponent will think that they missed, only until a short time after will they realise that they were struck by the users sword.

    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: A katana, or anything in the form of a Kantana is needed to perform this attack.
    Note: Attack happens 1 turn after.
    ___________
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    To move that fast is to mimic the gates and no mimicking the gates...
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 09:45 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fire Style:Cumbustion Pellets
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:long-short-long(can speed up the pellets like a machine gun if added more fire chakra and can be up to 3 pellets per finger)
    Chakra Cost:30 (15)
    Damage Points:40 (30)
    Description:The user shoots out fire pellets from the tips of their fingers.
    Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
    ___________
    |Approved|

    Change to highlighted text, stick to the template on the first page.

    im strarting fresh!!
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 09-03-2009 at 09:48 AM.

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