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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Name: Shoton: Kouki Atemi no Jutsu - Elemental Release: Final Strike Technique
    Rank: Forbidden
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage:90
    Range:long
    Type: Attack
    Description: In this attack, Kakuzu joins all four of his Black Elementals together, along with himself, to create a giant, tendril being. When Kakuzu is in this form, Kakuzu will combine the elemental attacks of all of his Elementals, and their elements. He will focus them all into his own mouth, and launch a total, elemental blast. This blast cannot be stopped, by any means necessary, and uses all of the elementals superiorities. This blast will obliterate anything in it's path, and the blast will cover an area to rival Deidara's C5 technique. This can only be countered by a defense that is also an offense, that is launched to counter it, and if so, the blast will be even more devastating, with absolutely no survivors, even Kakuzu himself. This blast can only be used 1 time a day, and after that, Kakuzu will need about a week to recover. This attack is so strong, not even gravity, the Soratodai Defense, or anything elemental, or demonic will even hope to survive the blast. There is also a toll to pay, this attack may obliterate all in it's path, but it takes out two of Kakuzu's 'lives', which is why he'll only use it, for a very powerful enemy, or barracks.
    *This can only be used by Kakuzu*
    *This attack can only be done once in a fight*
    *After this attack is used the Kakuzu lose two hearts*
    *once this jutus is used no more jutus can be done that turn*

    Have Roku Check.
    ~Declined~ Way too OP...besides the chakra cost is wrong anyway
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Curtana - Shinzo) - Sword Of Mercy: Divine Spear
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user releases Raiton chakra and forms like a spear that can impale an opponent wherever he goes at mid range as long as the user can sense his chakra. This jutsu cannot be dodged because of it's speed but it can be easily countered by Fuuton jutsus. The Shinzo can paralyzes the enemy hardly but if the jutsu connects, the user is also paralyzed slightly. Both of them can't use Raiton jutsus for 1 turn and they can only use 2 jutsus for 2 turns. The opponent can live if an attack jutsu is not followed after the Shinzo. This can only be used twice.

    Declined Get the sword approved.

    (Curtana - Zangetsu) - Sword Of Mercy - Cutting Moon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user infuses Katon chakra on Curtana and the user makes a slashing attack on the opponent and the Katon chakra releases fire like a moon and ranges up to long range and can burn the opponent severely. This jutsu can only be used twice and cannot be used again.

    Declined Read above and this isn't bleach!
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 11-25-2009 at 04:34 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    The 5 different patterns of wind cut called dan'atsu:

    these are patterns used for the wind tendrils,
    each pattern result to different effect,
    such effect are named accordingly...

    1. kanetsu [heat] - fire
    2. eiri [sharpness] - wind
    3. shinkan [silence] - sound
    4. namida [tear] - water
    5. kushin [pain] - lightning

    Reason why this should be used:

    to make sure the wind tendrils doesnt hit the user itself
    and to give them special effects before hitting the enemy;
    effects differ with each use of pattern
    all in all there are 5 patterns that can be used
    and each had different effect to the wind tendrils

    (Futon: Kaze Kireme - Kanetsu) Wind Cut - Heat
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short [Wind Tendrils]
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 to wind cut]
    Description: This is the 1st pattern to wind cut, it should be used while using wind cut. when it is time to manipulate the wind tendrils Fire release is combined to them [wind tendrils]. the effects to the enemy when hit is being cut and burned at the same time.


    (Futon: Kaze Kireme - Eiri) Wind Cut - Sharpness
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short [Wind Tendrils]
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 to wind cut]
    Description: This is the 2nd pattern to wind cut, it should be used while using wind cut. when it is time to manipulate the wind tendrils more wind release is combined to them [wind tendrils]. the effects to the enemy when hit is being cut at tremendous speed also this last longer than other dan'atsu.


    (Futon: Kaze Kireme -Shinkan) Wind Cut - Silence
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short [Wind Tendrils]
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 to wind cut]
    Description: This is the 3rd pattern to wind cut, it should be used while using wind cut. when it is time to manipulate the wind tendrils sound is combined to them [wind tendrils]. the effects to the tendrils is making them soundless or silent so the enemy won't hear the tendrils coming near [that is if the tendrils are not seen].


    (Futon: Kaze Kireme - Namida) Wind Cut - Tear
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short [Wind Tendrils]
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 to wind cut]
    Description: This is the 4th pattern to wind cut, it should be used while using wind cut. when it is time to manipulate the wind tendrils Water release is combined to them [wind tendrils]. the effects to the enemy when hit is being cut also water droplets would fall continously around the enemy inwhere he can get hypnotized [paralyzed]


    (Futon: Kaze Kireme - Kushin) Wind Cut - Pain
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short [Wind Tendrils]
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A [+10 to wind cut]
    Description: This is the 5th and last pattern to wind cut, it should be used while using wind cut. when it is time to manipulate the wind tendrils Lightning release is combined to them [wind tendrils]. the effects to the enemy when hit is being cut and paralyzed at the same time because of the electric charged placed into the wind tendrils.


    *being paralyzed last for 2 turns*

    What is "wind cut" post that jutsu along with this patterns for it.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 11-25-2009 at 04:36 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Shinn~ View Post
    Weapon Summoning:Yamenage
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Description:the user summons a sword that surpasses human size(Sephiroths sword)that one slash of it if added with wind chakra can slice a building because of the sharpness of the wind.This sword can only maximize the sthrenght of wind chakra and no other
    *Only shinn can use this jutsu*
    *Can be summoned once per battle*



    ~declined~
    add restrictions to how many times u can use the wind slicing blasts


    Summoning:Dinosaur:Chomp
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Description:Chomp is a large trinosaurus dinosaur at the siza of gamabunta and chomp specialize on the element Raiton/Lightning
    *Only shinn has the contract*
    *Can be summoned once per battle*

    Petit Size


    Summoning:Dinosaur:Ace
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Description:Ace is a large size dinosaur at the size of gamabunta and ace specialize on the element Fuuton/Wind
    *Only shinn has the contract*
    *Can be summoned once per battle*
    Petit Size


    Summoning:Dinosaur:Terry
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Description:Terry is a large size T-Rex dinosaur at the size of gamabunta and Terry specialize on the element Katon/Fire
    *Only shinn has the contract*
    *Can be summoned once per battle*
    Petit Size

    ~declined on all dino summon~

    Fire Style:Fire Wolves
    Typeffensive/Defensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Damage:60
    Chakra Cost:30
    Description:The user will breath out fire that will turn shape into wolves,the wolves can then defend or chase the target.The wolves explode when they are near or close to the target
    ~approved~
    Weapon Summoning:Yamenage
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Description:the user summons a sword that surpasses human size(Sephiroths sword)that one slash of it if added with wind chakra can slice a building because of the sharpness of the wind.This sword can only maximize the sthrenght of wind chakra and no other
    *Only shinn can use this jutsu*
    *its special moves can be used up to 3x in battle*
    *Can be summoned once per battle*

    Declined Work on your description. Slice a building?




    Sword art:ButtaGiri
    Typeffense
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Damage:80
    Chakra Cost:40
    Description:The user infuses the sword with wind or fire chakra and strikes upward making a slash that can scar the earth.
    *Only shinn can use this jutsu*

    DeclinedGet the sword approved first

    Wood art:Root Bind
    Type:Supplement
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Description:the user will infuse its wood chakra to the ground and make roots come out from the sides of its opponent and bind him and constricting him.As the roots contnue to constrict the target it also takes chakra out of the target(since its a root and all).The target then can't use s-class jutsu since his chakra is being sip out of him.
    *Only shinn can use/Teach this jutsu*
    *Can be used 2x in battle*
    *wood users*

    DeclinedSince when can moukton absorb chakra(non bijuu chakra)?

    Wood art:Wooden Insertion
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Description:the user will insert himself in the trees around him making him undetectible and move freely between the trees.
    *Only shinn can use/Teach this jutsu*
    *Can be used 2x in battle*
    *wood users*


    Approved


    Wood art:wooden tigers
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Damage:60
    Chakra Cost:30
    Description:the user will infuse its wood chakra and make tigers out of woods and the tigers will then chase and attack the target.
    *Only shinn can use/Teach this jutsu*
    *wood users*


    Declined List how many tigers can be made.


    ps:why was my dino summons canceled????
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Submission #1


    (Raiton: Rashirudo) - Lightning Style: Rashield
    Type: Defence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user releases lightning chakra to create a giant wall that protects the user. It can reflect fire, earth, water and wind attacks of B-Rank level and lower back at the enemy, also it can reflect ice jutsu C-rank level and lower, with some lightning added to it; if the user uses it yet again, should it already be in effect, the existing Rashield doubles in size. The size of the wall can also be increased by firing Zagurzem at it.
    *Can only be used Twice per battle
    *Can only be used/taught by Hazure
    NOTE: This cannot defend against CE jutsu (excluding Ice)
    Looks:


    Declined Lightning doesn't have a reflect ability in naruto, mr zack bell. lmao


    Submission #2


    (Raiton: Zugeruzemu) - Lightning Style: Zagerzem
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: A jutsu that charges anything it strikes with electricity. It takes the form of a sphere of light. When an offensive jutsu is cast, the stored electricity explodes and increases the power of any electric jutsu cast by the user. Another strength of Zagurzem is that, if multiple Zagurzems are cast and stored in separate objects, an electric jutsu will be redirected to the closest object charged with a Zargurzem and growing more powerful due to absorbing the previous Zagurzem, especially useful if the enemy is charged as the attack will home in on them. Also known as "chain jutsu".
    *Can only be used Three times per battle
    *Can only be used/taught by Hazure


    Declined
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by +Kariru+ View Post
    Summoning Animals: Horses

    (Kuchiyose: Uma: Yuki, Sona Shiroi Uma)Summon: Horse: Yuki, the White Horse.

    Rank: A
    Range: Long-Range
    Type: Attack
    Chakra cost: 30 Chakra
    Damage points: 60 Damage

    Description: Yuki is the valiant leader of the Uma Family. Being the only white horse in the family, he's always pressured with the umas' expectations of him but despite that, he's always doing his best not to fail them. He uses ice attacks and releases, sending the opponent frozen even before he could attack and very skilled in combat. His size is as big as a mountain. He's very fond of his summoner, Takara, and he always comforted her whenever she's down.

    *Can be summoned once per battle
    *Can only be use by Takara


    ~declined~
    u have to have a ice bio to summon creatures that can do ice based attacks. your creature is too dam big



    (Kuchiyose: Uma: Yuri, Sona Momo Ikkakujuu )Summon: Horse: Yuri, the Peach Unicorn

    Rank: D
    Range: Short-Range
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra cost: 10 Chakra
    Damage points: 20 damage

    Description: As the weakest of the Umas, Yuri can be very helpless at times. She admires her brother Yuki very much that despite her being weak, she strives to become more helpful to others. She can heal and cure her summoner and her fellow horses(except for huge ones) with the use of her horn in times of danger even if she's to scared to go out of battle. She's the same size as an ordinary horse. At first, she's very scared of Takara when she was first summoned but as time passes by, she was very attached to her. She's also trained to fight alongside Takara, because of her size.

    *Can be summoned twice per battle
    *Can be used only to Takara


    |DEclined|


    ~pending~
    ask goro and roku to check


    (Kuchiyose: Uma: Kura, Sona Kuroi Tenba) Summon: Horse: Kura, the Black Pegasus

    Rank: B
    Range: Long-Range
    Type: Attack
    Chakra cost: 25 Chakra
    Damage points: 40 Damage

    Description: Kura can be very bossy with every uma he sees, especially Yuki, who has become their leader. With his jet black wings, he can use aerial attacks and wind releases to blow away his enemies. He's always in second of Yuki, despite his efforts to claim the thrown.He's of the same size as Yuki. He's also very cold towards his summoner even if it she talks to him nicely. Kura is considered as the most talented fighter in the uma family. He can do high kicks and more..(can't explain how^^"")
    *Can be summoned once per battle
    *Can be only be used by Takara


    ~pending~


    |and more? Explain|
    ask goro and roku to check


    I'm gonna post this previous summons again with edited profile...hope it get approve this time:D

    Summoning Animals: Horses

    (Kuchiyose: Uma: Yuki, Sona Shiroi Uma)Summon: Horse: Yuki, the White Horse.

    Rank: A
    Range: Long-Range
    Type: Attack
    Chakra cost: 30 Chakra
    Damage points: 60 Damage

    Description: Yuki is the valiant leader of the Uma Family. Being the only white horse in the family, he's always pressured with the umas' expectations of him but despite that, he's always doing his best not to fail them. He uses water attacks and releases, drowning the opponent even before he could attack and very skilled in combat. His size is as big as Gambunta. He's very fond of his summoner, Takara, and he always comforted her whenever she's down.
    *Can only be summon once per battle
    *This summmon is own by Takara
    *Attacks are based on the summoner's attack but it is twice as powerful than the summoners




    (Kuchiyose: Uma: Yuri, Sona Momo Ikkakujuu )Summon: Horse: Yuri, the Peach Unicorn

    Rank: D
    Range: Short-Range
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra cost: 10 Chakra
    Damage points: 20 damage

    Description: As the weakest of the Umas, Yuri can be very helpless at times. She admires her brother Yuki very much that despite her being weak, she strives to become more helpful to others. At first, she's very scared of Takara when she was first summoned but as time passes by, she was very attached to her. She's also trained to fight alongside Takara, because of her size. Uses her horn as a weapon in battle and can also use water releases.
    *Can be summoned twice per battle
    *This summon is own by Takara
    *Attacks are based on the summoner's attack but twice as powerful than the summoner's





    (Kuchiyose: Uma: Kura, Sona Kuroi Tenba) Summon: Horse: Kura, the Black Pegasus

    Rank: B
    Range: Long-Range
    Type: Attack
    Chakra cost: 25 Chakra
    Damage points: 40 Damage

    Description: Kura can be very bossy with every uma he sees, especially Yuki, who has become their leader. With his jet black wings, he can use aerial attacks and wind releases to blow away his enemies. He's always in second of Yuki, despite his efforts to claim the thrown.He's of the same size as Yuki. He's also very cold towards his summoner even if it she talks to him nicely. Kura is considered as the most talented fighter in the uma family. He can do high kicks and loop attacks like those in a horse racing.
    *Can only be summoned once per battle.
    *This summon is own by Takara
    *Attacks are based on the summoner's attacks but twice as powerful than the summoner's


    All Approved.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Kirigakure Kakujuu No Jutsu (Hidden Mist Expansion Jutsu)
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : C
    Range : Long
    Chakra Cost : 20
    Damage Points : N/A
    Description : The User Uses Water Chakra To Condensate More Mist And Expand The Current Mist Jutsu To A Longer Range.
    *This Jutsu Can Only Be Used After Using Kirigakure No Jutsu*
    *When Using This Jutsu More Times Then Once From The Second Time The Chakra Cost Doubles (Second Use Of Jutsu During The same Battle = 40 Chakra, Third Time = 60 And So On.)*
    *Only Members Of The Hidden Mist Village May Use This Jutsu*

    Declined
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kusanagi no Tsurugi: Kū no Tachi)-Kusanagi Sword: Long Sword of the Heavens
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid Range
    Chakara Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description: Orochimaru retrieves his Kusanagi by opening his mouth and extending a snake which then opens its mouth and produces the sword. Orochimaru was seen producing the sword handle first so he could use it freely, or blade first to attack his opponent instantly. The sword can extend its blade to attack from afar and it can cut through almost anything. Should the wielder be disarmed, the sword can fly back to them through a hand motion.
    *Only Orochimaru Can Use*
    *Can Only Be Used Twice Per Battle*
    Declined

    (Hiru Banshō: Bōka no Jutsu)-Leech All Creation: Attack Prevention Technique
    Type:.Defense
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakara Cost:25
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Using this jutsu, the user can merge with another object and take on its properties to avoid any damage. Orochimaru uses this to merge with a tree just before his battle with his former student, Anko Mitarashi. The User Can Not Attack The Turn He Preforms This Trick.
    *Can Only Be Used Once Per Battle*
    *Only Orochimaru Can Perform*
    Declined

    (Raiton: Tokkan Ryu)-Shock All Creation
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Long
    Chakara Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:This jutsu requires no hand seals, after taking a few moments to charge up their lightning chakra, the user of this jutsu will then direct their hand at the intended target. A powerful and surprisingly large blast of lightning is then released in the shape of a dragon which races towards the target and has the power to smash through rocks.
    *Can Only Be Used 3 Times A Battle*

    Declined
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Michioso Tenshou)-Hot Water Style
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakara Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A(+10 Every Water Move & +8 For The Higher The Hotness)
    Description:This jutsu, by itself, will heat normal water to a boiling temperature. However this jutsu has a unique supplement effect - when coupled with a Suiton ninjutsu, the water in the technique will become hot water. The jutsu can be used with all Suiton ninjutsu, but some may not have any effect; for example, Water Clones will not be changed in any useful way, but Water Bullets by comparison will burn the enemy when hit.
    This jutsu requires a small amount of chakra and an added amount on each jutsu its used with.
    10 to 25 degrees celcius requires 5% more chakra.
    25 to 35 degrees celcius requires 15% more chakra.
    35 to 45 degrees celcius requires 25% more chakra.
    45 to 55 degrees celcius requires 35% more chakra.
    55 to 65 degrees celcius requires 50% more chakra.
    65 to 85 degrees celcius requires 70% more chakra.


    Declined Seems more like a katon technique

    (Kinoucho Kinpichi Sao)-Orb Of Protection
    Type:.Defense
    Rank:A
    Range:Mid Range
    Chakara Cost:30 MAX(Half The chakara Of What is Being Absorbed)
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This is a very powerful jutsu that few can use. The jutsu creates a giant shield that absorbs damage done to it. The shield can absorb chakra and elemental damage that touches the shield. The orb has a diameter of 5 to 10 feet.The orb consumes a large amount of chakra in its first creation and can block twice the amount of chakra put in. Afterwards, more chakra can be put in to protect against more attacks. If no chakra is put in, the shield will disperse. The jutsu requires heavy concentration, a large chakra pool and excellent chakra control. The person creating the shield can't move while controlling it and if they are moved, the shield will implode with chakra damage.
    *Can Only Be Used Once Per Battle*

    Declined Do not resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton:Hisan ShinGai)-Scattering Shock
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    Range:Long
    Chakara Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: With the Accumulation and Knowledge of the Fore Fathers that came before Mist. Encountering the same element as Raiton, a technique was developed. This Technique requires no hand seals, however is very hard to get precise control. After putting wire on his sword Hiramekarei. Chojuro Forms Lightning Chakara Around the wire that well then go full power on the sword that well then form a Lion that will target the opponent and go after him while he move the wire up and down.

    *Must Have A Weapon To Do*
    *Only Chojuro Can Teach*
    *Can Only Be Used 3 Times A Battle*

    Declined
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton:Toruko Shuuren)-Earth Realese: Turquoise Drill
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80(+10 to the user)
    Description: The user gathers rocks around the users hand shape like a drill. The user makes the drills spin at 80 mph making it abe to drill through almost any substance.He/She Can shoot the dense spinning drill at the opponent but with twice the force than when it was on the persons arm.
    -This Jutsu May only be used 3 Times per battle
    -This can only be used by ~Minato~

    Declined
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Sumiton: Sumi Shinkeidokuso) Ink Release: Ink Neurotoxin
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 60
    Damage: 120 (-20 to User)
    Description: Kirabi releases a Small Trace amount of Ink Onto his sword(s), then once he hits the opponent its only a matter of time before the effects kick in. After 2 turns the opponents motor skills begin to fail, causing indefinate paralysis, then his respiratory systems shut down causing respiratory arrest which in turn leads to Cardiac Arrest due to the lack of Oxygen.
    (No More Ink Jutsu for the rest of the battle)
    Based on Real-Life Octopuses
    The blue-ringed octopus is 5 to 8 inches, but its venom is powerful enough to kill humans. There is no blue-ringed octopus antivenin available.

    The octopus produces venom that contains tetrodotoxin, 5-hydroxytryptamine, hyaluronidase, tyramine, histamine, tryptamine, octopamine, taurine, acetylcholine, and dopamine. The major neurotoxin component of blue-ringed octopus venom was originally known as maculotoxin but was later found to be identical to tetrodotoxin, a neurotoxin which is also found in pufferfish and cone snails. Tetrodotoxin blocks sodium channels, causing motor paralysis and respiratory arrest within minutes of exposure, leading to cardiac arrest due to a lack of oxygen. The toxin is created by bacteria in the salivary glands of the octopus.


    Declined Kirabi's Ink shows no poisonous capabilities.


    Sumiton: Sumi Shinsui (Ink Release: Ink Flood)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (if it hits Opponent)
    Description: Kirabi Releases a Massive Amount Of Ink That Can be Used as a basis for other Ink Jutsu. The Ink's Sticky Quality Causes the opponents movements to be slowed.
    (Only one other jutsu may be used the turn this is activated)
    Declinedlimits

    Sumiton: Sumi Kiri (Ink Release: Ink Mist)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage (-10 To opponent per turn)
    Description: Kirabi Release Ink in a mist form that causes the are to go pitch black and irritate the opponents eyes and smell.
    (No other ink this turn)

    Declinedlimits
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by madaraUchiha View Post
    (Kusanagi no Tsurugi: Kū no Tachi)-Kusanagi Sword: Long Sword of the Heavens
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid Range
    Chakara Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description: Orochimaru retrieves his Kusanagi by opening his mouth and extending a snake which then opens its mouth and produces the sword. Orochimaru was seen producing the sword handle first so he could use it freely, or blade first to attack his opponent instantly. The sword can extend its blade to attack from afar and it can cut through almost anything. Should the wielder be disarmed, the sword can fly back to them through a hand motion.
    *Only Orochimaru Can Use*
    *Can Only Be Used Twice Per Battle*

    (Hiru Banshō: Bōka no Jutsu)-Leech All Creation: Attack Prevention Technique
    Type:.Defense
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakara Cost:25
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Using this jutsu, the user can merge with another object and take on its properties to avoid any damage. Orochimaru uses this to merge with a tree just before his battle with his former student, Anko Mitarashi. The User Can Not Attack The Turn He Preforms This Trick.
    *Can Only Be Used Once Per Battle*
    *Only Orochimaru Can Perform*

    (Raiton: Tokkan Ryu)-Shock All Creation
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Long
    Chakara Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:This jutsu requires no hand seals, after taking a few moments to charge up their lightning chakra, the user of this jutsu will then direct their hand at the intended target. A powerful and surprisingly large blast of lightning is then released in the shape of a dragon which races towards the target and has the power to smash through rocks.
    *Can Only Be Used 3 Times A Battle*
    Dude the first two customs are being made dont make customs that are from the manga or anime customs are for custom made jutsu only
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Raikou Keiriku) Lightning Execution
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (+20 to user, and 10 additional damage to the opponent the next round.)
    Description: The user charges natural lightning from around him into both his palms, as he charges it, he slowly releases chakra from his hands, and two bolts of lightning get created in the user’s palms.As he fully releases the lightning chakra, the ground starts shaking and the user travels at very high speeds towards his enemy.Once reached his target, the user stabs him in a diagonal way with both bolts.If, during the attack, the lightning is watched through a microscop, there can be seen small chakra streams that spread throughout the lightning, and once hit the enemy, the streams get out of the lightning and affect him at a cellular level, and the opponent doesn’t notice in the beginning, but later on he starts feeling pains and gets muscle cramps.The small streams of chakra affect the user too, while he is holding both bolts in his palms.
    - May be used once per battle.
    - If the enemy is hit, the cellular damage is unavoidable.
    - Can be teached only by Shigure and Kaito.


    Get Roku to Check.

    (Shichiakuma) - Shichiakuma
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: -
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: - (+5 to the user each turn)
    Description: Shichiakuma, literally meaning "Seven Devils", are Shigure's seven Chakra Swords.Each one goes in a different support in his body. They are hiltless swords, similar to Killer Bee's swords.They are all able to cut through diamond.Each time a sword hits the enemy, it drains him of +5 chakra. As the swords are hiltless, the user is holding them on the blade, which pretty much hurts him too.

    - Can be used only by Shigure and it cannot be teached.


    Declined Remove the chakra absorption

    (Suisaru) - Drunken Monkey
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This is a variation of "Crazy Monkey".Drunken Monkey which involves a lot of throat, eye and groin strikes as well as tumbling and falling techniques. It incorporates a lot of false steps to give the appearance it is defenseless and uses a lot of off-balance strikes. The practitioner waddles, takes very faltering steps and sometimes fall to the ground and lies prone while waiting the opponent to approach at which time a devastating attack is launched at the knees or groin areas of the opponent.This technique is comprised of a combo of 25 hits.
    - Must have learned Crazy Monkey.
    - Must be in a Drunken state.
    - Must be teached by Shigure.

    (Allowed by Kaito)

    Approved


    (Suimugenru) - Drunken Infinite Loop

    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user kicks the opponent in the chin, sending him upwards, then he appears behind the enemy, and does a 5 kick combo, the first two kicks go to his lower body(groin, legs) the following two go to his upper body (chest, arms, shoulders) and the final kick is towards the head, the kick is strong enough to smash the opponent in the ground.
    - Must be in Drunken state in order to use.
    - Must be teached by Shigure.


    Approved


    (Suikyou) - Ravaging Drunkenness
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: - (-5 to the user every turn for the rest of the battle, and +30 to all Taijutsu attacks, and -5 dmg from any taijutsu attack)
    Description: After drinking a special Sake Bottle, the user will start getting dizzy, and because of the special ingredients in the Sake, he will recieve stomach burns, and muscle cramps during this technique.He will be constantly dizzy, but his moves become very unpredictable, and all his attacks are more efficient, also his defence rate is much higher.This technique will constantly hurt the user's internal organs each turn for the rest of the battle.
    - This mode lasts untill the user is shocked by Lightning or untill he is knocked uncouncious.
    - Must posses Suiken.
    - Must be teached by Shigure.


    DeclinedLets change the limitation on this shall we.^^
    Shichiakuma
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: -
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: -
    Description: Shichiakuma, literally meaning "Seven Devils", are Shigure's seven Chakra Swords.Each one goes in a different support in his body. They are hiltless swords, similar to Killer Bee's swords.They are all able to cut through diamond. Shigure can manipulate maximum three swords at a time.Each sword is able to cut through air, meaning that once they make a cut that misses the enemy, the sword(s) send an air wave towards the enemy, that can unbalance him.

    - Can be used only by Shigure and it cannot be teached.

    (Removed the chakra absorbtion, but since now they are regular swords, I had to remove the damage I recieve from them too)
    -Approved-
     
         
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    (Raiton: Krigakure raikou kumo) - Lightning Release: hidden mist thunder cloud
    Type: Attack/Suplementery
    Rank: S
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the mist works as a conducter for the lightning the user performs the necessary handseals and Lightning blasts out from the users body in all directions, the mist around the already captured victims conducts lightning chakra from the user shocking them mercilessly no matter where they are positioned inside the mist, just as if they were in a storm cloud.

    *only sensing moves, byakugan and sharingan may see the opponents attack as it is generally performed at mid range where tha opponent cannot see however when in a pinch it can be performed at close range. if they cannot sense what the user is doing or their chakra they cannot block it as the opponent is unaware of the user's actions*
    *the opponent must already be contained in the mist*
    *twice per battle limit*
    *can only be used by an official member of the hidden mist village which knows raiton, and upon leaving krigakure they can no longer use it*
    [putting krigakure as village of alliance in bio does not make you an official member, you must apply to join]


    Declined!

    (hyouton: senkou shimo) Ice release: Flash Frost
    Type: Suplementery
    Rank: S
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: while the opponent is wet or an object with 2 one-handed handseals i can clench my hand after the handseals to freeze any specific area i focus on such as a foot on water or in a puddle, or a wet hand on a sword. this freezes them to the object either to slow them down or to prevent an action. (both mist and rain can be used for this jutsu)
    any frozen situation such as object to hand or foot to floor cannot change until their next turn when the ice thaws.

    *twice per match*
    *can only be taught by kawagiri to other hyouton users*
    -Approved-

    (Hyouton: mugen okan) Ice Release: Infinite chill

    Type: Suplementery/Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the extremely cold ice chakra forced out from my palms is enough to freeze waves and any large or small masses of water. this move can freeze tidal waves and vortex type water moves by freezing them solid or a large lake it cannot stop projectile based moves such as water bullet, water dragon, water shark bomb and also physical forms of water such as sword of draining.

    *can only be used twice*
    *water frozen will thaw out without fire in 5 turns*

    main downside... many jutsus firead at high speed cant be stopped but waves vortexes can.

    -Declined- Make it 3 turns. 5 is too long
     
         
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    (konchuu engo) Insect Protection
    Type-Defense
    Rank-A
    Range-Short
    Chakra-40
    Damage-N/A(-20 chakra if opponent caught by jutsu)
    Description-
    The user releases chakra into the air, causing his bugs to swarm around him in a vortex form, causing them to rapidly form a bug wall, that can disrupt the direction of projectiles(absorbing chakra from them if charged), and block a-rank and below taijutsu


    (su-
    pa kuchiku konchuu) Super Destruction Bug
    Type-Attack
    Rank-B
    Range-Short
    Chakra-N/A(the bugs are moving independantly)
    Description-
    The User commands his Bugs to take bites of flesh from the opponent,
    which are only small unless caught in a giant swarm.




    ( konchuu yobimizu) Insect Stimulation
    Type-Supplementary
    Rank-A
    range-Short
    Chakra-N/A(comes from opponent)
    Damage- N/A
    Description-
    After Using destruction bug, the users bugs then inject the opponents chakra into the user, stimulating his nervous system, and causing him to move and react faster, also letting him to pinpoint his opponents chakra


    (konchuu anda-guraundo) Underground Insect
    Type-Supplementary
    Rank-C
    range-short/long
    Chakra-20
    Damage-N/A
    Description-
    The user sends his bugs underground, To move to attack the opponent by burrowing to them, and trapping their feet by holding them to the ground and absorbing their chakra, prevention them from jumping away
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Chidori Jinrai )-One Thousand Birds: Thunderclap
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80(-5 to the user)
    Description: The user performs a Chidori while in mid-air and then releases all the lighting chakra throughout his body to create a giant human lightning bolt. The user tackles the opponent from the sky with extreme force looking like a lightning bolt striking the opponent.
    -Must Know Chidori
    -Can only be taught by Sinister

    (Raiton:Raion Dageki) Lightning Style: Lion Strike
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: By manipulating lightning chakra into the dominant hand, the user can make the lightning expand to create the form of a Lion. The lion-shape remains connected to the user's hand with a bolt of lightning, allowing them to control it during its attack.
    -Must Know Lightning Element
    -Can only be taught by Sinister

    (Raiton Kage Bunshin)Lightning Release Shadow Clone
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform jutsu and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching.
    -Can only be taught by Sinister
    -Must know Kage Bunshin

    p.s. these were jutsu that were made already (in manga and anime) that were never picked up on this site(the first two i changed to make it "custom") and Lightning clone is a real jutsu.
    -Declined as Requested-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kaito-sama View Post
    Dude the first two customs are being made dont make customs that are from the manga or anime customs are for custom made jutsu only
    My last move Shock all creation is a custom how is that in the anime or in the manga?
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Kire Gokusha) Wind: Slicing Prison
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: A large amount of wind will begin to spin around their target then will quickly form around the opponent in the shape of a 360 degree dome. This dome consists of high pressure cutting winds that rotate at high speeds and cut anything it comes in contact with, the dome of wind can then be decreased in size, but it become more condensed with wind, and crush and rip the opponent to shreads inside it.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    I think a similar jutsu exists. Have Grimm check it

    (Kaeru: Kaeru Shou Ganbutsu) Frog Arts: Frog Call Imitation
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: All
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80(-10 to the user)
    Description: During times when Shima and Fukasaku are not present, the user will imitate Shima and Fukasaku by collecting chakra into their voice and then the user will let out a loud screech from their mouth. The opponent will be paralyzed, confused, and distracted, leaving them unable to move as soon as it is heard, but this jutsu will give out the users position immediately. To use this jutsu you must know how to summon toads, entering Sage Mode is not required.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle and the user must wait at least two turns before re-using. Each time this jutsu is used if the user wishes to enter Sage Mode during the same battle, one turn will be deducted from Sage Modes time limit.
    -Declined- Overpowered
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (X-guro-bu kuuchuufuyou) X Glover Levitation
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Type: Weapon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description Once the user has equipped there self with the X Glover this jutus will give the user the ability to fly, This will not make me move at the speed of the 8 gates or any other speed increasing jutsus. This Justus work by making the flames for the gloves fire down warder towards the ground giving them the power to take flight. The back draw to this jutus is while the user is in the air he is unable to perform any jutsu that require handsigns because if the user would to try any he would fall because the gloves would not be pointing down anymore.
    *These just can only be used by Mato~kun*
    *This jutus cant be performed without the X Gloves
    -Approved-

    (X- ba-na-) X-Burner
    Rank: S
    Range: long
    Type: Weapon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80+10(with the gloves on)
    Description: Once the user has equipped there self with the X Glover the user will be able to perform this attack called the X- Burner. This attack works like this the user turns sideways pointing his body towards his opponent first the user raises his hand fared away from the opponent and points it out wards once done he releases a soft flame this fire is not used to attack it is used to keep the user steady from being blow back by his other hand then the user raises his hand closes to the opponent and lets out super strong fire. This flame is strong enough to beat any jutus of lower rank the opponents jutus must at least be S-rank to match the power of the flame anything lower will be destroy and the attack will continue. The X-Burner maybe used in the air because the soft flame would keep him in place.
    *This attack can be used three times in battle*
    *only must have gloves on*
    *Only Mato~kun can use*
    *After this attack is used the user can’t use any fire attacks the following turn*
    *once this jutus is used no more jutsus can be used that turn*
    -Approved-

    Name: Doton: Jishin Kujo no Jutsu Earth Release - Earthquake Destruction Technique
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: Kakuzu will call on his Earth Elemental, in either its independent form or not. When he does, a great earthquake will commence, shaking the very earth. The earth will twist and turn, causing multiple cracks and pillars will come out of the earth. This, in all, will cause mass destruction, the only way to survive, is to be airborne if you user is on the ground when this jutsus is performed he will be killed.
    *Only can be used by Kakuzu*
    *Once this jutsus is used the earth element dies making it impossible to perform any earth jutsus*
    *only can be used once in a fight*
    -Declined- kind of OP, doesn't make sense. How does earth element die? Oo
     
         
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