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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Weapon: Claws Of Raiden
    Type-Attack
    Rank-N/A
    Range- Close-Mid Range
    Chakra cost- N/A or 30(if they channel lightning style chakra into the gloves)
    Damage- 25 if hit normally /50 powered with chakra
    Description- A pair of mysterious black gloves. Fingernails made of a mysterious metal and are as sharp as any katana. The user can channel only Lightning style chakra into the gloves and upon doing so the metal finger nails shoot out, being connected to the glove with "wires" of lightning style chakra, thus extending its overall reach from close to mid-range. Although not powerful enough to cut through blades [like lightning blade] (yet) it will shock the enemy and deal quite a bit of damage.

    *Can only be use by Raiden Ichiro
    *Chunin:Limited to 1 use of the gloves per battle (this includes using them in combination with any kind of jutsu)
    *S-Jounin Rank -Jounin : Limited to 3 uses of the gloves per battle (this includes using them in combination with any kind of jutsu)
    *S-Class-Sannin: Limited to 4 uses of the gloves per battle (this includes using them in combination with any kind of jutsu)
    *Kage-Sage: Limited to 5 uses of the gloves per battle (this includes using them in combination with any kind of jutsu)

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~T-Chidori-Sasuke~ View Post
    summoning white tigers ministers ( Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora )

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: this is a summoning of the three huge tigers that fight with the summoning boss " tiggara " they are huge enough to get any summoning together and wears an defensive armor especially wind that protect them from any attack and there speed is brilliant, they are faster then snakes and there claws and teeth is huge enough to cut throw almost everything

    ~ i know white tiger summoning

    ~ Declined, too OPed ~

    raiton : doragon-ken ) lightning style : dragon blade

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40 ( - 15 for each turn its in use )
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: by charging the user's lightning chakra, he shall focus it in an blade like huge dragon shaped lightning from his hand " like an dragon chidori spear " but it can be moved like huge link to so that its flicks able if the user want to, and can make huge damages to the opponent , and perfect against others earth jutsus.

    ~ can only be user 1 times in a battle ..
    ~ cant stay more then two turns
    ~ - 10 for each time its in use for the user's health " because it injures his hand

    ~ Approved, but I changed it to only once per battle ~

    ( toko kusari ) endless chains

    Rank: a
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30 ( -4 for each chain that has been released over each turn )
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: this is 7 chains that spins around the users arm with a kunai at it's end and its so long that can never been fully released , ans its controllable by the over user's chakra and its faster then any other attack of kunai or shuriken and can be powered with other elemental attacks , and can protect from others attack
    - can be used 5 times each battle
    - doesn't effect the user's speed

    ~ Explain it better please ~
    summoning white tigers ministers ( Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora )

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: this is a summoning of the three huge tigers that fight with the summoning boss " tiggara " there size each is three white tigers together and wears an defensive armor especially from wind and protect them from almost any attack and there speed is brilliant, they are faster then snakes and there claws and teeth is huge enough to cut throw almost everything

    edited~

    ( toko kusari ) endless chains

    Rank: a
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30 ( -4 for each chain that has been released over each turn )
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: this is 7 chains that is weared around the users arm with a kunai at it's end and its so long that can never be fully released from the arm , and its controllable by user's chakra strings, and its faster then any other throw-able attack like kunai or shuriken and can be powered with other elemental attacks , and can protect from others attack by circling around the user .
    - can be used 5 times each battle
    - doesn't effect the user's speed

    ~ Both declined, OPed ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-10-2010 at 09:37 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Wrath. View Post
    (Houkei Keisei Disuta-bu Chakra Shiyou) - Square Formation of Disruption Chakra Method
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: At least four ninjas (including summons and clones) are needed to do this technique. They will surround the enemy forming a square, then they will do the handseals and chakra lines will appear, connecting the 4 people. All of them will then send their chakra through the ground and air to inside the square and they will make their chakra to mix with the opponent's chakra flow, but isntead of disturbing the opponent mind like in a gengutsu, they will disturb the opponent's chakra system and can even make them unable to move. To this jutsu to be successfuly used, none of the users can be interromped, otherwise the jutsu will faill. The drawback of this jutsu is that the users's need to be still and can't move while they do this so they can focus their chakra on the opponent and because of that, the users can be an easy target for an opponent. Can only be used once per battle, lasts 2 turns.


    ~ Declined. Extremely unrealistic. All you are doing is focusing your chakra into the air and ground, How will this affect the opponent's chakra flow ? How can you force your chakra into the opponent's system ? Even a Hyuuga can only do so on contact. Furthermore, is your chakra some sort of special power that seals off other's chakras ? Do you have some sort of chakra that works like a Hyuuga's Jyuuken ? Even the demonic chakra of the Kyuubi no Kitsune cannot seal off other's chakra flows. If you are allowed to use Fuuinjutsu, then submit this as a Fuuin, when it might be approved ~
    Like in a gengutsu, you mix your chakra with teh opponent's chakra flow and you make them see what you want (illusions), but here, instead of affecting the mind of the opponent, it affects his whole chakra system.

    ~ Then this will only be an illusion, and not have an actual effect. Submit it as a Genjutsu if you want ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-10-2010 at 11:03 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Wrath. View Post
    Like in a gengutsu, you mix your chakra with teh opponent's chakra flow and you make them see what you want (illusions), but here, instead of affecting the mind of the opponent, it affects his whole chakra system.

    ~ Then this will only be an illusion, and not have an actual effect. Submit it as a Genjutsu if you want ~
    Meh, the fact that i mix my chakra with the opponent's chakra flow doesnt mean it has to be a gengutsu --' This has nothing to do with a gengutsu, i was just saying thats how i disrupt the opponent's chakra (by mixing my chakra with his).

    And i cannot submit is has Fuuinjutsu because it would need to be at least S-rank and there is that stupid rule which doesnt make sense and says only medninjas can make fuuinjutsu customs over A-rank.

    ~ HOW do you mix chakra with the opponent ? You cannot just force your chakra into the opponent's body ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-10-2010 at 02:07 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Aburame Clan: Bugs of the Exotic Death
    (Aburame Batsu: Ekizochikku Oujou no Konchuu)

    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: With a special tattoo on the user's body, he is able to bring forth one different specie of bugs. These ones are forced by chakra, and do not share a conection with the user. He is efficient enough to use an extraordinary big swarm, even when is not on the bug's own nature, but all the effects last only 3 turns. After those the insects are de-summoned back to the tattoo. The user acquires a nearly perfect immunity to the bugs under his control, and the most poisonous insects produce only a little itchy feeling, wich grows more in long term exposure. Insects with contact poison are kept above clothing and not directly on the skin, but can still travel across the skin during a battle, if the moment seems right. Every summon imeadiatly de-summons the previous Exotic Bug, and takes away one Elemental Chakra from the user. The summons last 3 turns. At the end of the turn the bugs are de-summoned. D rank element appears, then C in the next turn, then B, then A, then S, then Forbidden. The user can only summon 3 types of bugs per battle.
    The bugs are killed on a ritual of summonization, where the user writes multiple tags and symbols around the floor and then preforms the handseals. The spirit of the bug is sealed and thus creates a forged contract with all the bugs of the same species. The more proficient the user is in chakra control, larger is the number of insects summoned. The Tattoo can only seal 9 animal species.



    Goliath Birdeaters
    Description: Birdeaters are the largest spiders in the world, their colours varies from dark to light brown. They have hairs all around their bodies and they're used to wet enviroments. These spiders make a hissing noise when disturbed. This noise is called stridulation and is produced when the spider rubs the bristles on its legs together. Birdeaters can defend themselves by biting or by kicking urticating hair towards their perceived assailant. These hairs can be severely irritating to the skin and lungs, and have been reported to feel like shards of fiberglass




    Africanized Bees
    Description: Africanized Bees are hybrid bees created to better endure tropical enviroments, but turned out to be more agressive then they should. One sting from an Africanized bee is no worse than a sting from the common honey bee. It hurts but is rarely fatal. Unfortunately the Africanized bees attack in swarms. Their victims may be stung thousands of times. That many stings can and does kill.


    Black Widows
    Description: The Black Widow is a medium sized spider with a body about a half-inch in length.The venom is considerably stronger than that of a rattlesnake. Fortunately the amount of venom injected is too small to kill most people.
    The venom injected from the Black Widow Spider bite causes a considerable amount of pain. Muscles lock and they break out in cold sweat. Sometimes the symptoms include difficulty breathing. The symptoms can go on for days. Some victims never totally recover.



    Death Stalkers
    Description: These scorpions are straw yellow in color, and can grow 3.5 to 4.5 inches (9 to 11.5 cm) in length. Its very potent venom helps it compensate for its smaller size and narrow, weak pincers; this scorpions sting injects extremely toxic venom (a neurotoxin) that can cause extreme pain, fever, convulsions, paralysis, and often coma or death in humans (by heart or respiratory failure).


    Japanase Giant Hornets
    Description: These wasp body length is approximately 50 mm (2 in), and have a wingspan of about 76 mm. The sting of these wasps has flesh-melting properties, and an allergic human stung by the giant hornet may die from an allergic reaction to the venom, but the venom contains a neurotoxin called mandaratoxin which can be lethal even to people who are not allergic if the dose is sufficient.



    Human Bot-fly/Mosquito
    Description: The Human Bot Fly lays its eggs on a horsefly or a mosquito, something that will attempt to land on a human. This carrier finds a human and lands on him or her. The eggs rub off onto the human, whose body heat hatches the eggs. The larvae drop onto the skin and burrow right in. Where they live. Under your skin. Eating.
    The larvaes have been seen devolping on multiple other places, such as the mouth and breathing pipes, or even inner organs, such as the lungs, and the brain.
    These are the only kind that work together under the user's control. The Flies rarely leave the clothes, and that's why it's easy for him to control both species at the same time.




    Puss Caterpillars
    Description: The inch-long larva is generously coated in long, luxuriant hair-like setae, making it resemble a tiny Persian cat, the characteristic that presumably gave it the name "puss." The 'fur' of the larva contains venomous spines that cause extremely painful reactions in human skin upon contact. The reactions are sometimes localized to the affected area but are often very severe, radiating up a limb and causing burning, swelling, nausea, headache, abdominal distress, rashes, blisters, and sometimes chest pain, numbness, or difficulty breathing.



    Green Darner Dragonflies
    Description: The dragonfly, Anax junius, is commonly called the green darner, after its resemblance to a darning-needle. The Green Darner is one of the largest dragonflies extant: males grow to 76 millimetres (3.0 in) in length with up to an 80 millimetres (3.1 in) wingspan. These are the fastest insects in the world, capable of reaching speeds up to 23.7m/s. The dragonflyes can bite, but aren't poisonous.


    This data is factual.
    Yes, the real word is a b!tch.


    ~ Declined for the same reason as the last time - i.e., only one type of ug allowed ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-11-2010 at 05:57 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Saka ma ku ame) - Rolling Rain
    Rank: A
    Type: supplementary
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:The user puts the tip of their sword in the water focusing their chakra into the tip, the user then lifts up the blade swiftly, causing a 2 giant water typhoons to form, this water typhoon can only defend the user, the reflection of the water off the user can cause illusions for the opponent and giving the user time to escape if necessary and hide the user's whereabouts giving them the advantage to counter attack
    Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
    Note: can only be taught by Axle
    Note: Water source needed


    ~ Declined ~

    (Shajiku no Ame) - Axle of Rain
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description: the user focuses their chakra in their feet,then releases in an instant causing the user to charge towards the opponent like the user was shot out of a cannon,and while charging the user is holding the blade with 2 hands in a thrusting motion, this attacks power is equivalent to one of Tsunade's punches.
    Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
    Note: can only be taught by Axle


    ~ Needs restrictions ~

    (same do re) - Early Summer Rain
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user rushes in toward the opponent holding the blade with one hand, in the middle a sideways swipe towards the opponents face, the user drops the blade with excellent timing, causing the blade to fall in the user's other hand, for a clean sweep at the opponents mid-section
    Note: can only be used while in Shigure Sousen Ryu
    Note: can only be taught by Axle


    ~ Approved ~

    (shi bu ki ame) - Spraying Rain
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user puts all their chakra in their sword, then strikes the water, causing a giant water splash, this splash causes the opponent not to see the user
    Note: can only be used while in Shigure Sousen Ryu
    Note: can only be taught by Axle
    Note: Needs a Water source


    ~ Approved ~

    (Shino tsu ku ame) - Pelting Rain
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user rushes in as if to clash with the opponent, bu almost instantly slides down as if playing baseball, and slices the opponents, and leaving the opponent vulnerable to another attack
    Note: can only be used while in Shigure Sousen Ryu
    Note: can only be taught by Axle


    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-11-2010 at 06:00 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Akiza View Post
    Tigrerra's combo-(Tigrerra konbo)
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: As Tigrerra gets angry, she jumps with incredible force and lands, and strikes the ground with her claws as she throws the enemy with a cut simultaneously. At that moment, she strikes with her other claw and catches the enemy with it as he nears being crushed above the ground. She then gets all of her legs up to make all the weight fall on that on leg that the enemy is under causing him to be crushed.

    ~ Needs restriction ~

    The assistants’ assassination charge- (tetsudaite kison denka)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: When Tigrerra’s assistants come to believe that it’s time to end the battle, they all get out of there quickly and run at the enemy. With their speed it can’t be seen, except to Sharingan eyes, so they get to their positions with the same speed and then burst through the enemy with large amounts of chakra charged in each one of their big claws to cut the enemy to pieces if they sense any attack of the enemy near the user.

    ~ Needs restrictions ~

    Dark cloaked white tigers - (kuro uea shiro)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: By doing this summoning, the user can summon up to 15 cloaked tigers wearing skull like masks who are silent even while moving at an incredible speed, for they are none other as Tigrerra's assassin squad, with their fantastic power and weird defensive armor that has horns everywhere even at their tails. For they are called "The demon tigers.”

    ~ Needs restrictions ~
    White tiger fusion mode (shiro shinken modo)

    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50 (- 20 for each turn)
    Damage Points: 80 (+ 20 for any taijutsu)
    Description: After summoning Tigrerra or a powerful white tiger such as Tigrerra, the user does handseals, and then slaps his two hands over her head making her soul merge with the user’s making the user’s body transform to a human-tiger shape which includes hand growth, claws, increased speed, keener eyesight (unlike Sharingan) that the user can use to see through mist and movements.
    notes :
    1- The fusion makes many damages to the user's body which makes it paralyzed after the fusion ends for one entire turn.
    2- Lasts for 3 turns
    3- Can be used only once per battle
    4- After the fusion ends, the Tigrerra summon will vanish.

    ~ Declined, merging with summons is impossible ~
    Restrictions added:

    Devil White Tiger Trosaduk Summoning

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50 (-20 to user per turn he is on the field.)
    Damage Points: 100
    Description: A summoning of a huge shining snow-white tiger that is the size of Tigrerra who was sealed for 40 years in a cave for his demonic abilities. He is about as powerful as Tigrerra herself because of his massively huge claws and great speed. He wears a platinum armor that doesn’t slow him at all that is comparable to Tigrerra’s battle armor. Due to the user breaking the seal that holds him in the cave, he slowly drains the user’s chakra for every turn he is summoned.
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -He can only stay on the field for a maximum of 5 turns.

    ~ Explain the "demonic abilities" ~

    Tigrerra's combo-(Tigrerra konbo)
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: As Tigrerra gets angry, she jumps with incredible force and lands, and strikes the ground with her claws as she throws the enemy with a cut simultaneously. At that moment, she strikes with her other claw and catches the enemy with it as he nears being crushed above the ground. She then gets all of her legs up to make all the weight fall on that on leg that the enemy is under causing him to be crushed.
    Can only be used whenever Tigrerra is on the field, and can only be used once per battle.

    ~ Approved ~

    The assistants’ assassination charge- (tetsudaite kison denka)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: When Tigrerra’s assistants come to believe that it’s time to end the battle, they all get out of there quickly and run at the enemy. With their speed it can’t be seen, except to Sharingan eyes, so they get to their positions with the same speed and then burst through the enemy with large amounts of chakra charged in each one of their big claws to cut the enemy to pieces if they sense any attack of the enemy near the user.
    Can only be used whenever Tigrerra’s white tigers are on the field, and can only be used once per battle.

    ~ Approved but I changed it to once ~

    Dark cloaked white tigers - (kuro uea shiro)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: By doing this summoning, the user can summon up to 15 cloaked tigers wearing skull like masks who are silent even while moving at an incredible speed, for they are none other as Tigrerra's assassin squad, with their fantastic power and weird defensive armor that has horns everywhere even at their tails. For they are called "The demon tigers.”
    Can only be used once per battle.

    ~ Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-11-2010 at 06:02 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Falling Dragon Barrage)shikkyaku doragon danmaku
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description:The user jumps in mid-air then makes four clones then the clones all charge at the opponent and kick him up to mid-air as well directly below the user then the clones quickly appear in mid-air where the opponent is and each on grabs the opponent's legs and arms then the user dives down and does a barrage of kicks and punches to the opponent till the user slams him to the ground creating a mid-size crater.

    (Lighting release: Electric Sword Charge) Raiton: erekutorikku subeta denka
    Type:supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage points:N/A
    Description: the user is able to infuse lighting chakra in to his sword making a rotating aura of electricity that may zap and paralyze and opponent when the aura comes in contact with the opponent.
    (Note: can only be used by chago)
    (Note: each turns the user loses 5 chakra points)

    (Sword Arts: Blade Illusion Mirror) subeta gigei: ken irixyu-jon mira-
    Type:defense
    Rank:B
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage points:N/A
    Description: the user concentrates chakra on to his blade so he can expel and reflect genjutsus up to B Rank against the opponent.
    (note: can only be used twice in battle)

    ~ All Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-11-2010 at 06:03 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Hyuuga Taijutsu:Sa-Ti-Roku Kujo Hirate) -Hyuuga Fighting Style: 36 Destructive Palm
    Rank: S
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The User strike's the opponent 36 times with his open palm then sending a shockwave of charka through the opponents each time he strikes the shockwaves his the power to damage organ's and brake bones

    Can only be used twice per battle

    ~ Declined ~


    Hyuuga Hijutsu: Seikuken) -Hyuuga Secret Arts:Seikuken
    Rank: S
    Type:Defense
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:When the user actives this move he/she are able to read the opponents charka flow and can predict taijutsu moves and can block or counter attack faster then usual.

    Lasts 3 turns
    can only be used 1 per battle
    Byakugan Must be Activated

    ~ Declined ; how ? ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Atsui Satetsu Doragon) - Molten Iron Sand Dragon
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Medium/Long
    Charka Cost: 40 (+15 for each turn this is active)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user focus fire chakra into the iron sand to make it heat up to its melting point, then forms the molten hot iron sand into a large dragon which can either be you to crash into the opponent or shoot molten iron senbons.
    Note: after 3 turns the dragon hardens and turns back to sand, the user must pay 30 chakra to make the sand molten again

    (Satetsu Shuriken) - Iron Sand Shuriken
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Medium
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: A burst of 10 balls of iron sand balls flung at the opponent that cause blunt damage like breaking bones and if hit in the right area can cause organ damage.
    Note: each ball is the size of a tennis ball

    ~ Both declined, existing jutsu are there ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-11-2010 at 06:04 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Raiton: den'atsu katana ( Voltage blade )

    Rank:A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 50
    Description:The user uses their chakra to create a very strong electric current to their Double-wielded blade. Then with incredible power the user runs at their opponent to slice and seriously injure the adversary.

    Note* Anbu578 can only train this

    * Double-wielded blade is needed

    ~ Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Hakke: Haruka Nihyakugokyurosho) -Eight Trigrams: Distant Two Hundred-and Fifty Six Strikes
    Rank: FORBIDDEN
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user focuses their chakra into the air. He then stands in the traditional Jyuuken posture before striking with his hands 256 times. The air near the opponent reacts to it and acts as an extension to the user's hands, striking the opponent. 128 of these strikes disable tenketsu; the other 128 use wind chakra to make small cuts on the opponent's face, neck and torso. This technique causes disabling of the chakra system as well as bleeding. This technique is fast enough to strike an opponent before they use any technique of a moderate-high speed to escape ; however usage of a very fast technique to escape is acceptable.
    ~ User can only use this technique once
    ~ No ninjutsu/taijutsu that require physicle contact for 4 turns
    ~ No handseals the next turn
    ~ - 40 damage to user
    ~Declined~ If its long range how do you come in contact with them? and if its long range, how would you be able to hit them so fast that they would be unable to counter?
    lightning style: lightning death dome (raiton: denkou oujou enchou)
    rank: forbidden
    type: attack/defense
    range: short-looooooooong
    chakra: half the users chakra (from where it was at the beginning of the battle)
    damage: death (if the user can evade 100 to the user)
    description: the user will send a small bolt of lightning into the air just as it hits 50 meters high it will burst out creating a dome down the middle of the dome comes a wall that separate the user and his opponent the wall of the dome and the the wall are INDESTRUCTIBLE stopping the user and the opponent from escaping also underground the dome forms together stopping the opponent and the user from escaping that way at the top of the dome is a huge orb with 8 holes in it 4 on the user's side and 4 on the opponents side inside the orb is lightning building up ready to burst out this lightning can ONLY be destroyed if the opponent (or the user) send 4 A rank wind blasts and up inside the holes AT THE SAME TIME but not that the opponent sends in 2 and the user sends in 2 it wont work only 4 on the same side at the same time after 2 turns the lightning will be ready and it will shoot out of all 8 holes destroying everything in its way at this point it cant be blocked the entire dome will fill with lightning destroying everything inside it even the user
    NOTE: once per battle
    NOTE: nothing can destroy the walls of the dome or the wall in the middle they are indestructible
    NOTE: after this the user will be nearly (or completely) out of chakra
    NOTE: no ninjutsu can be used the next turn and no S ranks for the rest of the battle
    NOTE: it takes 4 turns for the dome to form and while it is forming it is almost impossible to destroy
    NOTE: the user cant use lightning or wind for the rest of the battle
    ~Declined~ Description is still confusing
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Shishou Kage Subeta) - Stabbing Shadow Sword
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Medium/Long
    Charka Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: User puts Their palms together after taking the sword.Making shadow sword that stabs the opponent four times a row to where the user stabs with Hes/Her Palms.
    *NOTE:Sword Is Needed for this jutsu*
    *NOTE:Can be User By Nara Clan Members Only*


    ~Explain it better ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~T-Chidori-Sasuke~ View Post
    summoning white tigers ministers ( Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora )

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: this is a summoning of the three huge tigers that fight with the summoning boss " tiggara " there size each is three white tigers together and wears an defensive armor especially from wind and protect them from almost any attack and there speed is brilliant, they are faster then snakes and there claws and teeth is huge enough to cut throw almost everything

    edited~

    ( toko kusari ) endless chains

    Rank: a
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30 ( -4 for each chain that has been released over each turn )
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: this is 7 chains that is weared around the users arm with a kunai at it's end and its so long that can never be fully released from the arm , and its controllable by user's chakra strings, and its faster then any other throw-able attack like kunai or shuriken and can be powered with other elemental attacks , and can protect from others attack by circling around the user .
    - can be used 5 times each battle
    - doesn't effect the user's speed

    ~ Both declined, OPed ~
    first: wat so op in the first one..
    sec: if i made the chains 4 will u accept it ?

    ice style : all direction ice shuriken explosion ( hyouton : issai shuriken haretsu )

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Offense/Defense
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 ( + 10 if it used as a wall or to imprison the enemy )
    Damage Points: 60
    Descriptions: as the user make the ice shurikens jutsu, the user make the shurikens explode with ice by expanding its size in the second it hits the enemy making the injuries expand with it, and can be used to make a wall of the ice shuriken jutsu that protect from moderate attacks, and can also be used to imprison the enemy inside the ice
    - can only be used if ice shurikens was used
    - can only be used twice per battle

    ~ Approved , I edited a bit ~

    ice growth ( hyouton : hi houkou )

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/sub
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 80
    Descriptions: by focusing your ice chakra through any ice within the range, te user will have the full control of making it grow to imprison the enemy or attack him or even protect of his attacks, and changing the ground's shape if the ice was over the ground, basically its the jutsu or making the ice grow in shapes.
    - can only be used once
    - -10 for each turn the user keeps the enemy imprisoned inside the ice
    - can't last for more then three turns

    ~ Declined ~

    and my last submit for this week T_T :

    Summoning: White Tiger Ministers (Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora)

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This is a summoning of the three huge white tigers that fight with the summoning boss, Tigrerra. Their size is the size of three normal white tigers, and they wear a defensive armor which protects them from almost any attack. They also have great speed. They are faster than snakes and their claws and teeth are huge enough to cut through almost anything.
    -Can be summoned with or without Tigrerra on the field.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.

    ~ The purple part is the OPed part ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-11-2010 at 06:07 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Chidori Bakuha ) – One thousand birds Blast
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The User creates a very concentrated Chidori in his dominated hand. Since the chidori is concentrated Upon contact with the opponent the chidori will burst. Using chakra control the user directs into a front wards blast that engulfs the opponent in lightning. By squeezing the chidori to the point of explosion he can self activate the blast and forward it toward his opponent (from Mid range maximum).

    ~ No lightning next turn
    ~Can only be taught by Sinister

    ________

    (Chidori Kakuhan) – One thousand birds Whips

    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user performs 2 chidori’s 1 for each hand. He then Manipulates The 2 chidori’s into long Whips of lightning. These whips serve many purposes. They can Attack the opponent(s) or they can Bind and shock the opponent.

    ~The user wields the whips for 3 turns
    ~Can only be taught by Sinister
    ___________


    (Raiton: Kyanseru) – Lightning Style: Earth Cancel
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user Charges his hand full of lightning and slams the onto the ground releasing a mix of lightning and regular chakra. Since Lightning has dominance over earth the tech will caccel out the usage of earth jutsu and anything associated with it for 3 turns.

    ~Earth is canceled for 3 turns
    ~Can only be taught by Sinister

    ~ All Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Katon/Raiton Kenjutsu: Saishuu Zenshin (Fire/Lightning Sword Art: Last Drive)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Desription: The user first charges fire chakra into thier weapon and then they release that chakra creating a wall of searing Fire scorches those close, then the user hacks away at a single target until ready to fire a beam of lightning that hits the target.
    (No Fire/Lightning till 2 turns Afterwards)
    (Usable 2 Times)

    ~ Approved ~

    Raiton Kenjutsu: Ragunaroku (Lightning Sword Art: Ragnaroc)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 60
    Damage: 120 (-30 to user as they will be caught in the blast slightly)
    Description: The User kicks the opponent into the air and begins a Short Aerial Combo comprised of 6 Slashes., the last hitting sending the opponent to the ground. Then Using Lightning Chakra. They fire multiple bolts of lightning from their off-hand that explode on contact.
    (No Lightning 2turns afterwards)
    (Usable 2 times)

    Kenjutsu: Kuraimu Penaruti (Sword Art: Crime and Punishment)
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user takes there swords and using chakra causes it to hover around them (Such as Oro did) allowing it to attack on its own but have it close enough to still focus elemental chakra into it. After is has been charged the sword can release elemental attacks at the target.

    Wind: Multiple wind blades hit the opponent
    Earth: The sword implants itself into the ground causing the earth to cascade towards the target. Implaing them.
    Fire: Multiple Fire blast are sent at the target
    Lightning: Multiple lightning bolts are produced that zap surround the user from all angles and spread outwards.
    Water: Torents of water are sent outwards hitting the target. carring them away on contact

    (User loses the respective element next turn)
    (Usable 2 times)

    Raiton/Fuuton: Mabushii Unari (Lightning/Wind Release: Radiant Howl)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The User concentrates a large amount of wind and lightning Chakra in his mouth that when releases sends out massive shockwaves of lightning and wind that can destroy and push back whatever is in it path. The rippling wind and lightning creates a deafening howl that is able to drown out all sound and causes the user and opponent to be deaf for the turn afterwards.
    (No Lightning/Wind Next Turn)
    (Usable 2 times)

    ~ Other 3 Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Fuuton: Shodaime Hokage Senju Hashirama no Iji ) Wind Release : Memory of the First Hokage, Hashirama Senju
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 35
    Damage: 70
    Description: The user focuses their wind chakra, and a huge figure of the stoic Hashirama Senju will appear behind them, made out of wind. The figure then dissolves into a large number of wind blades that strike the ground, throwing up huge masses of earth and rocks at the opponent from all directions. The weight of these will crush the opponent under them.
    *Only twice per battle

    ( Fuuton: Nidaime Hokage Senju Tobirama no Iji ) Wind Release : Memory of the Second Hokage, Tobirama Senju
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 35
    Damage: 70
    Description: The user focuses their wind chakra, and a huge figure of the playful Tobirama Senju will appear behind them, made out of wind. The figure then dissolves into a large amount of wind that strikes any water source in the area, throwing up huge waves at the opponent. This can alternately be used to focus any Rain in the arena into a wave at the opponent, or return a water jutsu headed at the user like a wave at the opponent [ the force of the wind blows the water back at the opponent ]
    *Only twice per battle
    ~both Declined~ Please use the correct Chakra and Damage points and resubmit for further evaluation
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~T-Chidori-Sasuke~ View Post
    first: wat so op in the first one..
    sec: if i made the chains 4 will u accept it ?

    ice style : all direction ice shuriken explosion ( hyouton : issai shuriken haretsu )

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Offense/Defense
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 ( + 10 if it used as a wall or to imprison the enemy )
    Damage Points: 60
    Descriptions: as the user make the ice shurikens jutsu, the user make the shurikens explode with ice by expanding its size in the second it hits the enemy making the injuries expand with it, and can be used to make a wall of the ice shuriken jutsu that protect from moderate attacks, and can also be used to imprison the enemy inside the ice
    - can only be used if ice shurikens was used
    - can only be used twice per battle

    ~ Approved , I edited a bit ~

    ice growth ( hyouton : hi houkou )

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/sub
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 80
    Descriptions: by focusing your ice chakra through any ice within the range, te user will have the full control of making it grow to imprison the enemy or attack him or even protect of his attacks, and changing the ground's shape if the ice was over the ground, basically its the jutsu or making the ice grow in shapes.
    - can only be used once
    - -10 for each turn the user keeps the enemy imprisoned inside the ice
    - can't last for more then three turns

    ~ Declined ~

    and my last submit for this week T_T :

    Summoning: White Tiger Ministers (Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora)

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This is a summoning of the three huge white tigers that fight with the summoning boss, Tigrerra. Their size is the size of three normal white tigers, and they wear a defensive armor which is about as powerful as tiggera's. They also have great speed. They are faster than snakes and their claws and teeth are huge enough to cut through almost anything.
    -Can be summoned with or without Tigrerra on the field.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.

    ~ The purple part is the OPed part ~
    Summoning: White Tiger Ministers (Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora)

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This is a summoning of the three huge white tigers that fight with the summoning boss, Tigrerra. Their size is the size of three normal white tigers, and they wear a defensive armor which is about as powerful as tiggera's. They also have great speed. They are faster than snakes and their claws and teeth are huge enough to cut through almost anything.
    -Can be summoned with or without Tigrerra on the field.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    ~Declined~ You didn't change anything
     
         
    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 01-11-2010 at 05:02 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kiwii View Post
    Aburame Clan: Bugs of the Exotic Death
    (Aburame Batsu: Ekizochikku Oujou no Konchuu)

    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: With a special tattoo on the user's body, he is able to bring forth one different specie of bugs. These ones are forced by chakra, and do not share a conection with the user. He is efficient enough to use an extraordinary big swarm, even when is not on the bug's own nature, but all the effects last only 3 turns. After those the insects are de-summoned back to the tattoo. The user acquires a nearly perfect immunity to the bugs under his control, and the most poisonous insects produce only a little itchy feeling, wich grows more in long term exposure. Insects with contact poison are kept above clothing and not directly on the skin, but can still travel across the skin during a battle, if the moment seems right. Every summon imeadiatly de-summons the previous Exotic Bug, and takes away one Elemental Chakra from the user. The summons last 3 turns. At the end of the turn the bugs are de-summoned. D rank element appears, then C in the next turn, then B, then A, then S, then Forbidden. The user can only summon 3 types of bugs per battle.
    The bugs are killed on a ritual of summonization, where the user writes multiple tags and symbols around the floor and then preforms the handseals. The spirit of the bug is sealed and thus creates a forged contract with all the bugs of the same species. The more proficient the user is in chakra control, larger is the number of insects summoned. The Tattoo can only seal 9 animal species.



    Goliath Birdeaters
    Description: Birdeaters are the largest spiders in the world, their colours varies from dark to light brown. They have hairs all around their bodies and they're used to wet enviroments. These spiders make a hissing noise when disturbed. This noise is called stridulation and is produced when the spider rubs the bristles on its legs together. Birdeaters can defend themselves by biting or by kicking urticating hair towards their perceived assailant. These hairs can be severely irritating to the skin and lungs, and have been reported to feel like shards of fiberglass




    Africanized Bees
    Description: Africanized Bees are hybrid bees created to better endure tropical enviroments, but turned out to be more agressive then they should. One sting from an Africanized bee is no worse than a sting from the common honey bee. It hurts but is rarely fatal. Unfortunately the Africanized bees attack in swarms. Their victims may be stung thousands of times. That many stings can and does kill.


    Black Widows
    Description: The Black Widow is a medium sized spider with a body about a half-inch in length.The venom is considerably stronger than that of a rattlesnake. Fortunately the amount of venom injected is too small to kill most people.
    The venom injected from the Black Widow Spider bite causes a considerable amount of pain. Muscles lock and they break out in cold sweat. Sometimes the symptoms include difficulty breathing. The symptoms can go on for days. Some victims never totally recover.



    Death Stalkers
    Description: These scorpions are straw yellow in color, and can grow 3.5 to 4.5 inches (9 to 11.5 cm) in length. Its very potent venom helps it compensate for its smaller size and narrow, weak pincers; this scorpion’s sting injects extremely toxic venom (a neurotoxin) that can cause extreme pain, fever, convulsions, paralysis, and often coma or death in humans (by heart or respiratory failure).


    Japanase Giant Hornets
    Description: These wasp body length is approximately 50 mm (2 in), and have a wingspan of about 76 mm. The sting of these wasps has flesh-melting properties, and an allergic human stung by the giant hornet may die from an allergic reaction to the venom, but the venom contains a neurotoxin called mandaratoxin which can be lethal even to people who are not allergic if the dose is sufficient.



    Human Bot-fly/Mosquito
    Description: The Human Bot Fly lays its eggs on a horsefly or a mosquito, something that will attempt to land on a human. This carrier finds a human and lands on him or her. The eggs rub off onto the human, whose body heat hatches the eggs. The larvae drop onto the skin and burrow right in. Where they live. Under your skin. Eating.
    The larvaes have been seen devolping on multiple other places, such as the mouth and breathing pipes, or even inner organs, such as the lungs, and the brain.
    These are the only kind that work together under the user's control. The Flies rarely leave the clothes, and that's why it's easy for him to control both species at the same time.




    Puss Caterpillars
    Description: The inch-long larva is generously coated in long, luxuriant hair-like setae, making it resemble a tiny Persian cat, the characteristic that presumably gave it the name "puss." The 'fur' of the larva contains venomous spines that cause extremely painful reactions in human skin upon contact. The reactions are sometimes localized to the affected area but are often very severe, radiating up a limb and causing burning, swelling, nausea, headache, abdominal distress, rashes, blisters, and sometimes chest pain, numbness, or difficulty breathing.



    Green Darner Dragonflies
    Description: The dragonfly, Anax junius, is commonly called the green darner, after its resemblance to a darning-needle. The Green Darner is one of the largest dragonflies extant: males grow to 76 millimetres (3.0 in) in length with up to an 80 millimetres (3.1 in) wingspan. These are the fastest insects in the world, capable of reaching speeds up to 23.7m/s. The dragonflyes can bite, but aren't poisonous.


    This data is factual.
    Yes, the real word is a b!tch.


    ~ Declined for the same reason as the last time - i.e., only one type of ug allowed ~
    Aburame Clan: Bugs of the Exotic Death
    (Aburame Batsu: Ekizochikku Oujou no Konchuu)

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user transforms a bug's ability into a weapon. The user acquires a nearly perfect immunity to the bugs under his control, and the most poisonous insects produce only a little itchy feeling, wich grows more in long term exposure.[/font]


    Goliath Birdeaters
    Description:
    Birdeaters are the largest spiders in the world, their colours varies from dark to light brown. They have hairs all around their bodies and they're used to wet enviroments. These spiders make a hissing noise when disturbed. This noise is called stridulation and is produced when the spider rubs the bristles on its legs together. Birdeaters can defend themselves by biting or by kicking urticating hair towards their perceived assailant. These hairs can be severely irritating to the skin and lungs, and have been reported to feel like shards of fiberglass

    Weapon: The user seals the urticating hairs on a small bomb, like a smoke bomb. Upon impact, or a single handseal, a cloud of urticating air is released to the atmosphere. The cloud has half of the smoke cloud size.



    Africanized Bees
    Description: Africanized Bees are hybrid bees created to better endure tropical enviroments, but turned out to be more agressive then they should. One sting from an Africanized bee is no worse than a sting from the common honey bee. It hurts but is rarely fatal. Unfortunately the Africanized bees attack in swarms. Their victims may be stung thousands of times. That many stings can and does kill.

    Weapon: The user can toss the poisoned infused stings and then fuse them with the wind to create a barrage of projectiles. Every bag has two thousand stings.


    Black Widows
    Description:
    The Black Widow is a medium sized spider with a body about a half-inch in length.The venom is considerably stronger than that of a rattlesnake. Fortunately the amount of venom injected is too small to kill most people.
    The venom injected from the Black Widow Spider bite causes a considerable amount of pain. Muscles lock and they break out in cold sweat. Sometimes the symptoms include difficulty breathing. The symptoms can go on for days. Some victims never totally recover.

    Weapon: The user infuses small needles with this poison, every needle as the same amount of poison that could be released from one spider.


    Death Stalkers
    Description:
    These scorpions are straw yellow in color, and can grow 3.5 to 4.5 inches (9 to 11.5 cm) in length. Its very potent venom helps it compensate for its smaller size and narrow, weak pincers; this scorpion’s sting injects extremely toxic venom (a neurotoxin) that can cause extreme pain, fever, convulsions, paralysis, and often coma or death in humans (by heart or respiratory failure).
    Weapon: The stings of multiple scorpions are attached together and can create a string. The string can be used around the wrists or as a small whip 1 and half meters long.


    Japanase Giant Hornets
    Description:
    These wasp body length is approximately 50 mm (2 in), and have a wingspan of about 76 mm. The sting of these wasps has flesh-melting properties, and an allergic human stung by the giant hornet may die from an allergic reaction to the venom, but the venom contains a neurotoxin called mandaratoxin which can be lethal even to people who are not allergic if the dose is sufficient.

    Weapon: The user can toss the poisoned infused stings and then fuse them with the wind to create a barrage of projectiles. Every bag has one thousand stings.


    Human Bot-fly
    Description:
    The Human Bot Fly lays its eggs on a horsefly or a mosquito, something that will attempt to land on a human. This carrier finds a human and lands on him or her. The eggs rub off onto the human, whose body heat hatches the eggs. The larvae drop onto the skin and burrow right in. Where they live. Under your skin. Eating.
    The larvaes have been seen devolping on multiple other places, such as the mouth and breathing pipes, or even inner organs, such as the lungs, and the brain.


    Weapon: The user incases the the eggs on small needles, wich upon contact drop the egg. Every needle can have 3 eggs. The eggs need warm to hatch, so they're kept relativly when they're not used, but immediatly hatch on the opponents skin.


    Puss Caterpillars
    Description:
    The inch-long larva is generously coated in long, luxuriant hair-like setae, making it resemble a tiny Persian cat, the characteristic that presumably gave it the name "puss." The 'fur' of the larva contains venomous spines that cause extremely painful reactions in human skin upon contact. The reactions are sometimes localized to the affected area but are often very severe, radiating up a limb and causing burning, swelling, nausea, headache, abdominal distress, rashes, blisters, and sometimes chest pain, numbness, or difficulty breathing.

    Weapon: The user seals the hairs on a small bomb, like a smoke bomb. Upon impact, or a single handseal, a cloud of urticating air is released to the atmosphere. The cloud has the size of the smoke cloud.


    This data is factual.
    Yes, the real word is a b!tch.

    ~Declined~ Over submission limit

    No it isn't. This is my second submission this week. I have more 3 to go. I don't know how you count this.
     
         
    Last edited by Kiwii; 01-12-2010 at 10:39 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    katon/doton : fashin tsuiraku kyohaku )- fire\earth style : falling stars

    co-owner: ~TCS~
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/defence ( can do both )
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Desription: by charging earth and fire chakra into the chest, the user can spit up to 5 boulder covered with great flames toward the enemy,this is the perfect against water/wind moves and ca defeat it easily so it can protect the user fom them.
    - - 10 for the user caused by breathe proplems
    - can't use any other attack that need to be spited in this turn and the next one .
    - can be tought by TCS

    ( fuuton: hae jinketsu )- fling super hero

    co-owner: ~TCS~
    Rank: S
    Type: sub/defense ( can do both )
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40 ( + 10 for each turn its in use )
    Damage: 80
    Desription: the user free his wind chakra to cover his body, then release it to make the user with the ability fly in the air " not that high ", and it can be used as an covered shield of wind against lightening.
    - can be used twice per battle
    - can be in use for 3 turns only
    - weak against fire attacks and strong against lightening
    - the user can't use another wind jutsu in the turn it was preformed " just the turn it is preformed the other turns isn't included
    ~Both Declined~ Needs better description
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchyose : Katana No Sumiyaka) Summoning Jutsu : Blade Of Speed
    Rank : A
    Type : Supplementary
    Range : Short
    Chakra : 30
    Damage : 60
    Description : The Blade Itself Has Chakra Within It, Which Once In Touch With It's Owner Starts Sending The Chakra Throughout The User's Muscles Giving Them Greater Speed
    Effect : The User's Speed When Using This Blade Is Doubled
    Note : Only Benazz Posesses This Blade
    Note : This Blade's Effect Lasts For 3 Turns
    Note : This Blade Can Be Summoned Once Per Battle

    (Kuchyose : Katana No Sutamina) Summoning Jutsu : Blade Of Stamina
    Rank : B
    Type : Supplementary
    Range : Short
    Chakra : 25
    Damage : 50
    Description : The Blade Itself Has Chakra Within It, Once In Touch With Its Owner It Begins Sending It's Chakra Into The Lungs Of The User And Then Makes Them Works At The Same Rate, And Expands Them, Therefore With Expanded Lungs The User Can Hold His Breath Longer And The Due To The Same Lung Rate The User Can Keep Up His Running Speed At All Time
    Note : Only Benazz Posseses This Blade
    Note : This Blade's Effect Lasts For 3 Turns
    Note : This Blade Can Be Summoned Once Per Battle


    ~ Both declined; unrealistic ~

    (Surudoi Shokubutsu No Jutsu) Sharp Plant Technique
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive/Defensive
    Chakra : 30
    Damange : 60
    Rang: Short
    Description : By Using Chakra Within It And Extending It Outside The Body, Zetsu Can Form Long And Sharp Spikes To Come Out Anywhere Out Of His Body, The Spikes Can Easily Penetrate Bones And Other Hard Materials, The Spikes Sprout Really Fast.
    Note : Must Be A Zetsu Clan Member Or Zetsu To Use
    Note : Only Benazz Can Teach This Jutsu
    Note : This Jutsu Can Be Used 3 Times Per Battle


    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-13-2010 at 03:22 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kage itsutsu Kunai Torappu) - Shadow five Kunai Trap
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Medium/Long
    Charka Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 if making explode.45 if using kunais.
    Description: User focuses their Chakra and make the shadow come under the user and make poses.Then user takes kunais from pocket to hand and throw's them to opponent making dodge and jumping to air or letting the kunais hit.To explosive tag's and making shadow to take them to explode and staying long way away from the it.
    *NOTE:Usable for nara clan members only*
    *NOTE:Can be used 2 times per battle*
    *NOTEnly suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach This jutsu*

    (Kage Kikyuu Torappu ) - Shadow Balloon Trap
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/medium
    Charka Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:User puts a balloon that holds kunais in it and moving it by its Shadow jutsu and moving it to high air.After pointing the kunais to opponent user crushes the balloon and the kunais fly to the opponent hurting him seriously.
    *NOTEnly suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach This jutsu*

    ~Declined~ Nara's dont need techniques to do that, they just need ninja tools to be able to create the shadows then they can control them
    (Kage Gouben Torappu ) - Shadow Pool Trap
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Medium
    Charka Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:User Focuses his/her chakra to palms and makes shadow pool under the enemy.Enemy drops to the pool and the pool disappears and appears to high sky and drops the enemy down.
    *NOTEnly suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach This jutsu*
    *NOTE:Usable only 3 times per battle*
    *NOTEnly Nara clan member can use this jutsu*

    ~Declined~ Same as above and OP
     
         
    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 01-11-2010 at 08:24 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Shinn~ View Post
    (hyouton:hi kouu)Ice release:Ice Rain
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:after performing handseal,the user will make the sky ,rain of ice needles that is directed at anywhere under the user's will.the needles will stay for 2 turns
    -only shinn a use this or teach the jutsu-
    -3x per battle-
    ~Declined~ Needs better description
    (hyouton:hi supea)Ice release:Ice spear
    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:after performing handseal,the user will make tice spera that are totall of 4 floating around the user then at his command the ice spears will then be directed to the opponent.
    -only shinn a use this or teach the jutsu-
    -3x per battle-
    ~Declined~ Add more restrictions and a better description
    (hyouton:hi supea)Ice release:Ice spear
    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: as the user make hand seals, he transform his ice chakra to ice spears that are totall of 4 floating around the user then at his command the ice spears will then be directed and can be controlled to the opponent.
    -only shinn teach the jutsu-
    -3x per battle-
    -the user can't use any other ice release in the same turn-
    -the user shall lose -15 chakra if he made 5 spears-
    ~Declined~ give some sort of description of the damage done to the opponent. If you are already at five, I won't count it against you if you resubmit
    how is that ?

    ok lets see : (hyouton:hi kouu)Ice release:Ice Rain
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:after performing hand seal,the user sends his ice chakra to the sky , making it fuse with the clouds above then the user fully control the cloud with his ice chakra,so then the user can make the cloud rain with ice needles anywhere he/she wants for the next two turns.
    ~ can be used 2 times per battle
    ~ shinn is the only one how can teach this~
    ~Declined~ already existing
     
         
    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 01-11-2010 at 08:17 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (kagutsu creeto)puppet create
    type:Supplementary
    rank:a
    chakara cost:30
    damage points:n/a
    Description:the user puts an puppet parts then fuceses some chakara and imagine the puppet shape then focus some chakara and make the parts stuck with each other by chakara then the puppet will be created
    notes:-this jutsu can be learned by curse seal sasuke 2 or yagura or riku
    -this jutsu can be used if youre old puppets are smashed
    -this jutsu can be used while training

    ~ declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 01-13-2010 at 03:23 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Shinn~ View Post
    (hyouton:hi supea)Ice release:Ice spear
    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: as the user make hand seals, he transform his ice chakra to ice spears that are totall of 4 floating around the user then at his command the ice spears will then be directed and can be controlled to the opponent.
    -only shinn teach the jutsu-
    -3x per battle-
    -the user can't use any other ice release in the same turn-
    -the user shall lose -15 chakra if he made 5 spears-

    how is that ?

    ok lets see : (hyouton:hi kouu)Ice release:Ice Rain
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:after performing hand seal,the user sends his ice chakra to the sky , making it fuse with the clouds above then the user fully control the cloud with his ice chakra,so then the user can make the cloud rain with ice needles anywhere he/she wants for the next two turns.
    ~ can be used 2 times per battle
    ~ shinn is the only one how can teach this~
    sorry but how can you create ice rain under ice element when ice rain is already appart of rain element and it also requires 2 turns to form ice rain =/
     
         

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