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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Dual Swords Summoning: The Sun and The Moon (dyuaru subeta Summin: sono San Sono getsuei)
    Rank: A
    Type: supplementary
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: none
    Description: The user takes out a scroll and summons the two great dual blades the sun and the moon.
    *The Sun* This Sword has a ruby colored handle to it with the mark of the sun the sword also has a yellow-orange looking material that acts and cuts like steel also the sword can cancel out fire jutsu up to A rank.
    *The Moon* This Sword has a sapphire colored handle to it with the mark of the moon also it has a whitish-grayish looking material that acts and cuts like steel also the sword can cancel out water jutsu up to A rank.
    (Note: only chago can wield this swords.)
    (Note: Can only be used twice in battle.)
    (Restriction: The swords last only three turns.)
    (Restriction: You can only cancel out one jutsu in one turn.)

    -Declined: a sword can't just like that cancel jutsus, it needs a bgd for it-


    White Slash Barrage (howaido Slish danmaku)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: short/long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user swings his/her sword and makes a series of white energy slashes that are thrown at the enemy. The energy slashes follow the enemy till they strike them and can cut through lighting jutsu up to A rank.
    (Note: only chago can teach this jutsu.)
    (Note: can only be used three times in battle.)
    (Restriction: This technique can only be used with the sword of ventus.)
    (Restriction: only up to 5 energy slash waves at a time.)
    (Restriction: must wait two turns to do this jutsu again.)

    -Pending: white energy slashes: define and explain how-
     
         
    Last edited by ★ Rei ★; 02-13-2010 at 05:33 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Mugiwara View Post

    (Tessenka no Mai Senshu) - Dance of the Clematis Bow
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user pulls out his spinal cord, and infuses it with chakra, making it less flexible. The user then uses a wire string for both ends of the spinal cord, forming it into a bow, which the user can easily shoot the bones as arrows, which he extracts from his arm. The arrow is extremely fast and hits with great impact. It can be compared to Kidomarus bow and arrows. Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: The bow lasts until the user drops the bow down, thus the chakra in the bow disappears, making it too flexible to use as a bow

    ~Declined~ Make it S-rank and add more restrictions.

    (Teshi Sendan: Kikanjuu) - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets: Machine Gun

    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: Using the Shikotsumyaku ("Dead Bone Pulse") the user is able to fire their distal phalange(finger-tip) bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact. The user focuses more of chakra into his finger tips, to increase the rate that the finger tips fire at and the power of the bullets. While this technique is over, the user can fire 10 finger tips per second.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: The jutsu lasts for 3 rounds.

    Declined~ Make it 2 turns.
    (Teshi Sendan: Kikanjuu) - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets: Machine Gun

    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: Using the Shikotsumyaku ("Dead Bone Pulse") the user is able to fire their distal phalange(finger-tip) bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact. The user focuses more of chakra into his finger tips, to increase the rate that the finger tips fire at and the power of the bullets. While this technique is over, the user can fire 10 finger tips per second.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: The jutsu lasts for 2 rounds.


    -Declined: you can't regenerate bones that fast. The speed and ratio are the problems here-

    (Tessenka no Mai Senshu) - Dance of the Clematis Bow
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user pulls out his spinal cord, and infuses it with chakra, making it less flexible. The user then uses a wire string for both ends of the spinal cord, forming it into a bow, which the user can easily shoot the bones as arrows, which he extracts from his arm. The arrow is extremely fast and hits with great impact. It can be compared to Kidomarus bow and arrows.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: The bow lasts until the user uses some other technique with his hands, thus dropping the bow.
    Note: The user cannot use:Tessenka no Mai Tsuru the same round or next round
    Note: Can't shoot arrows the same round as the bow is created


    -Pending: a mod should check this also, i think you need a round before usage to form all these-
    ~Approved but changed it so that you have to wait a round before you can shoot the arrows~
     
         
    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 02-13-2010 at 07:12 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Ikazuchi monsu-n kiri)Wind Style: Thunder Monsoon Drill Jutsu
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Medium
    Chakara cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user must release chakra into the air. The Chakra released into the air has two jobs. One is to move the air in a circular motion (clockwise). This, after about 9 seconds, will create a sort of a very large but weak-ish tornado, very wide though. This creates energy in the air, helping to create lightning. The other job has more work to it. The user must focus their chakra from the sky to their target. The lightning will then follow along the chakra down from the sky to the target, while the tornado (made earlier with the chakra) will speed up in spinning. The user must then, finally must focus the chakra in the air that made the tornado, to close in on the target while still spinning. It will make the tornado faster as it closes in, while making it stronger. When it closes up, it will make a strong drill downward toward the target, and brings the summoned lightning closer to the target.
    *Can Not Use Lightning Or Wind for 1 Turn*
    *May Only Be Used 3 times*

    -Declined: Red parts don't make sense-

    (Tenma Kusari)Demon Chains
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakara Cost:40
    Damage Points:20(If Used With Fire)
    Description:To use this technique, some hand seals are needed: Boar, Dragon, Horse, Serpent. After the seals have been performed the user will either pound their hands on the ground or stomp with their feet.About 5 plethora of iron chains will appear beneath the user and will grip the opponent and bring them to their knees. They can be broken with hard work, but it helps if your chuunin or higher. This jutsu is used to contain people and hold them still.You May Also Add Katon Chakara To Make The Chain burn The Opponent while they Are Hold Still.
    *Note Can Only Be Used Once*

    -Declined: You can't just stomp and create iron chains :/-

    (Kaze dageki)Wind Strike
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Medium
    Chakara Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description: This Move Is Considered A Taijutsu Based Attack. The User will focus Wind chakara on the bottom of their feet. Then the user will do a round house kick or a side kick etc. and a huge gust of wind will come about. The gust of wind is capable of blowing your opponents away and blowing away thrown projectiles.
    *Can Only be used 2 times*

    -Declined: Your chakra alone cannot throw away projectiles unless you are a Jinchuu. If you are this should be at least A ranked-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Mato~kun View Post
    X- ryoukin (X-Charge)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: While the user has his X-Gloves on, he will close both his hands to charge the Gloves up then with an instant the user will open both hands releasing out a powerful charge of fire that will burn anyone or anything that comes into short range of the user, this jutsu is best used when the opponent tries to rush the user or tries to sneak up behind him.
    Note: must have gloves on
    Note: this jutsu can be performed in seconds
    Note: can be used three times in battle
    ~Declined~ Limit it to once
    X-bakudan(X-Bomb)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage Points: 120 (-30 damage to user)
    Description: Once the user has fusion his X-Glovers with the Mare Sky ring, he will be able to perform this attack, the user will hold one X-Glove in the air and began to let out a powerful flame. Then he will use the other glove to shape the fire in to a Giant Sphere of fire, once the fire ball is shaped the user will throw it at his opponent. The fire ball being so powerful that it will turn the ground under it to molten rock. The user will be able to close his hands together causing to the fire ball to explode instantly. Any jutsus of lower rank that makes contact with this fire ball will be destroy once it touches the surface, the only way to stop this attack is to complete cover the attack in a large body of water and A-rank water jutsus will not be strong enough to stop it.
    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: – 30 damage to user from chakra strain, making user bleed from their nose.
    Note: user cannot perform Fire element next turn
    Note: If the user was to make the Fire ball explode while in close or mid range he would be caught in it too
    ~Approved~ However, a water jutsu such as Bursting Water Shockwave, used at the right time, should be able to stop this attack

    X- ryoukin (X-Charge)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: While the user has his X-Gloves on, he will close both his hands to charge the Gloves up then with an instant the user will open both hands releasing out a powerful charge of fire that will burn anyone or anything that comes into short range of the user, this jutsu is best used when the opponent tries to rush the user or tries to sneak up behind him.
    Note: must have gloves on
    Note: this jutsu can be performed in seconds
    Note: can be used one times in battle
    ~Approved~

    X- mo-do(X-Mode)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A(user 15 damage per turn this is active)
    Description: This is one of the Strongest moves the X-Gloves can perform once fusion with the Mare Sky ring, the user will drain all the power from the X-Gloves this will cause the Gloves and the ring to become powerless and fall off, once the gloves fall off the user hands, the user eyes will turn red and his body will heat up in to a incredible rate causing steam to come from his nose every time he breaths while in this Mode the user will get the speed of the 7 gates and all fire jutsus performed will go up a rank and other fire jutsus used on the user will become useless
    Note: While in this Mode can only use Fire Jutsus
    Note: this Mode will burn the user inside per turn If the user stays in this mode longer then 3 turns his inside will be burned to the point where he will be unable to fight
    Note: Gloves and ring are gone for the rest of the fight after the user comes out of this mode he will be unable to use any fire for the rest of the fight
    ~Declined~ Speed of 7 Gates makes it OP

    X-Absorb
    Rank: S
    Range: long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: Whatever the attack used power is plus +10
    Description: Once the user has equipped there self with the X Glover the user will have the ability to absorb other fire attacks used against him. The jutus works like this the user points his hands outwards towards the fire attack coming at him he then makes a triangle shape with his hands giving him the power to Absorb any fire justu S-Rank and below after Absorb the fire attack he will send it back at the opponent.
    *can only be used in battle once*
    *Only can be used on fire attacks*
    *only Mato~kun can use*
    ~Declined~ Limits?

    Name: Katon: Kousenchitai no Jutsu ~ (Fire Release: War Zone Technique)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will first perform a chain of hand seals that directs chakra flow out of the tenketsu points of the feet. The chakra will then be directed underground by the user and gather at the spots they choose. When the user snaps their fingers the fire molded chakra will expand into a raging sphere of inferno, incinerating everything caught inside. The technique is comparable to a war zone because the user can create explosions as quickly as they can look at a target and snap their fingers. The farther the target zone is, the more chakra that must be expelled. If the user has the ability to see through walls and other objects, they can even trigger the attack inside a location from the outside. Unless the opponent can see the chakra flow underground, it will appear as though the user can create explosions simply by snapping their fingers and the attack can come without warning.
    Note: can be used twice in battle
    Note: Can make two fires come up per use
    ~Declined~ OP and no side effects. Really?

    ~Leaving this for Roku to re check~
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 02-14-2010 at 11:26 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Wind Style: Armour of Wind (Fuuton: Kaze no Yoroi)

    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user manipulates his chakra and the wind around him to create a wind armor around his body. The user's body which is coated by a form of wind basically makes the body lighter making capable of faster movements in par of the 3rd gate and unaffected by Lightning jutsu of equal rank or lower.
    Note: Last 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used twice


    -Declined: Similar jutsu already exists-

    Wind Style: Shift Control (Fuuton: Shifuto Seichuu)

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: When in need to stop in a mid-air or movement, the user immediately have an outburst of wind chakra from all over their body in order to stop movement completely in all directions or even just one. This stops the user from moving mementarily while falling, or even catch the opponent off guard as they blast past the user while in pursuit
    Can only be used three times


    || Declined ||

    Fuuton:Mazoku Raikou (Wind Style: Demonic Wings)

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:
    Description:The user manipulates wind chakra around his body, back, shoulders, and neck area. Upon command demon-like wings form around the user’s body. Several wings will from in fact a total of six forming. These wings are large and expansive.This enables the user to take flight.This technique also improves the agility and speed of the user.These wings are like shadow clones which means they stay in battle as long as they’re destroyed and disappear whenever the user wants.
    Note: Can only be used once in battle
    Note: Wings last three turns or until all destroyed


    -Declined: Similar jutsu already exists-

    (Katon: Masubi no Misairu Kyoumou)- Fire Release: Fierce Fire Missiles

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user consecutively shoots out of their mouth three extremely fast fire "missiles". The missiles launch at their target in a straight line and detonate on contact, each releasing a large firey explosion. These missiles are extremely fast and generate a lot of kinetic energy; as a result, if the user uses this technique in mid air, he will be thrown backwards due to the recoil. If the user moves their head while using this technique, they can shoot the missiles in a "spray" fashion - in this way, each of the three missiles can have a different trajectory.
    Note:Can on be use once per battle
    Note:The user take 20 damage due from the heat of the blast becasue of coming from the mouth


    ~Approved~

    (Raiton: Denkou no Yari)- Lightning Release: Spear of Lightning

    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 35
    Damage: 60
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a large spear of lightning in their hands. They may wield this spear as a melee weapon, or they may throw the spear at a target. Due to the lightning spear's nearly inexistent air resistance and near-weightlessness, it travels extremely fast when thrown and extremely far.
    Notenly two can be create at a time
    Note:Can only be used 3 times a battle


    -Declined: Similar jutsu already exists-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fire style: Megaflame
    Rank: S
    Description: In order to perform this technique the user will need one shadow clone to assist him to gather huge amount of fire energy. The shadow clone’s fire energy will pass on to the user through channeling and once been done, the user will blow huge amount of fireball from his mouth causing havoc to the area. The shadow clone will be gone once it’s been done successfully.

    Note: Can only be used thrice
    Note: Must be taught by EAM

    -Declined: When you create a shadow clone your own chakra gets decreased and then you transfer energy again? This doesn't make sense-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: kaki kabe) Fire style: Fire wall jutsu
    Type: Deffence
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Desciption: The User focusses the chakra into there hands held out in front of them forcing the chakra out into a wall of fire as a defence.

    Note: Only lasts for one turn
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Doesnt stop weapons (eg. kunai)

    -Declined: Similar jutsu already exists-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Raiton : Niiro Keta - Lightning - Style : Red Beam
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: User Consetrates Lightning Chakra To His Body Hand And Moves It To Arm And After It To User's Finger And Shoots A Thin Beam That Can Break Throught Some Defences.

    - Can Be Used 2 Times Per Battle -
    - Only I Can Teach This -


    -Approved-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 70
    Damage: 100
    Desciption: The user will place there scabbard infront of them then slowly putting it behind them on right side, they will take there sword out but before fully taking the sword out the user will dash running at high speed (that only people with 3 tomoe sharingan or masters at byakugan can track them). Using that speed, the user will run to what they see as there opponent's right side, then by fully taking out there sword the user will pull spirit reaper backwards slicing the opponent so quickly they won't realise until a few moments after, then by side stepping around them which will see like a flicker of the body. The user then strikes the opponent's back and channeling chakra through Soul reaper they will make the sword longer increasing the pain and then the user will follow back to their orginal spot in a blink of an eye just by walking normally but using better speed.
    -The user can only use this once per battle
    - Must have the sword of soul reaper
    - The user must be in a special group.
    - The user to use the full effect in speed must activate Ring of Sauren otherwise the opponent can still see the user if that isn't activated



    -DeclinedP and how do you get to have this speed?-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Doton : Handos No Yurasu - Earth Style : Hands Of Rock )
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Desciption: After Making The Handseals User Puts His Hands Into Earth And Takes Control Of Hands Made Of Rock, User Can Take Enemys Legs And Hold Them So Enemy Cant Move.
    - Can Be Used One Time -
    - Only I Can Teach This -


    -I must be reading something wrongly here, please re submit with a better description~


    (Shuukan Buki : Yaibas no Boufuu - Custom Weapon : Blades Of Storm )

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Desciption:User Concetrates His Chakra And Making Handseals After They Are Made Dual Swords Appear Front of The User's Feet With The Blade Part At Earth.
    - Only Suffering Pain Has These -
    - Blades Boosts Lightning Attack's With 5 -


    ||Declined||

    ( Fuuton : Shuuren No Undo - Wind Style : Drill Of Wind
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: User Concetrates Wind Chakra To Their Hand, After Making The Handseals User Punches Our A Fast Wind Spiral That is At Shape Of Drill , It Can Drill Throught Skin.
    - Can Be Used 1 Time Per Battle -
    - Only I Can Teach This -


    -Pending: make this an A rank and fix the chakra info-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Technique: Turtle of Mass Destruction (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: kame messe kujo)
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description:The user wipes the blood on the seal of his arm, summoning a turtle beside the user, the turtle has giant spikes on it's back, and has a very hard body, that can only be pierced by S-rank and above attacks.This turtle is as big as Gamabunta, one step of this mighty beast causes a mini earthquake cancelling earth manipulation for 1 turn
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: must have signed a contract with turtles
    Note: only Axle may teach

    -Pending: change the red part-

    (Yottsu Iregyura Chakra Heika) Four Irregular Chakra Swords
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user then focuses pure chakra into 4 swords, an extra long sword (about the length of 2 arms) in one hand and 3 short handles of swords in one hand, the user can throw the short swords at very high speeds, they only work with the users chakra. When the chakra is focused in the long blade, a blue aurora is produced around the blade, so that if the opponent tries to block short range, then he will still be cut, when focused in the short handles, nothing but a blue aurora is produced.
    Note: lasts 3 turns
    Note: can only be used twice per battle
    Note: can only be used by Axle

    -Declined: cause of the red parts-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the nessecary hand seals for the tool summoning after signing the Panda Kunoichi Contract. This summoning calls upon the powers of Panda Kunoichi Xennah. She is the martial artist of the female panda kunoichis and is considered to be the creater of panda style fighting. Her weapon form is a pair of gloves with iron knuckle attachments which gives the following effects.
    • The user becomes light on his or her feet and gains a reaction speed boost from the gloves. This allows the user to use taijutsu at a higher speed, rate, and strength.
    • Gains a pair of gloves with iron embedded knuckle attachments to give a person's punch a bit more damage.

    The user also gains a side effect of losing chakra while wielding Xennah in Katana form since she is always focusing chakra to keep you going, so she needs to absorb the user's. Her personality is calm, collective, and very mature. She loves the hunt and is always up for a fight. Though she looks tiny and weak she strikes and attacks fiercely. She can use A rank Taijutsu and B rank Ninjutsu. She prefers to fight in normal form since she feels useless as a tool.
    Note: Only Musasibou can use/teach.
    Note: Must have signed the Kunoichi Contract.
    Note: Can only used Twice per battle.
    Note: Can't summon another Kunoichi till Xennah dissipates, returns, and 1 turn after she is gone.





    -Problem here is that you are summoning a Kunoichi; I don't see how this can be allowed sorry-


    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user grabs a giant container of katanas that is wrapped in a type of cloth or wire to hold/travel with it (This can also be done if a scroll that holds multiple swords like tenten's.). The user then throws it above him and his opponents location and then the swords slide out and land around the battlefield making around 10 to 20 sword scattered around. This is only to supply the swordsman with multiple katanas to fight with. This technique was created by the belief that no swordsman needs a perfect sword, but the ability to wield any sword with great skill. Each sword has a little trick to them which only allow the user of this technique and others that know it use them freely. If the opponent with no knowledge of this trick attempts to wield one of these swords the hilt will extend needles to hurt the opponents hands like Kisame's shark scale sword. Due to that, the Infinite One-Sword Style was created to help the swordsman, aid allies in battle, and to put extreme psychological pressure towards the opponent from the exaggerated amount of blades.
    Note: Only musasibou can teach this.
    Note: Can only use once per battle.
    Note: Only users of this technique can wield the swords.
    The technique is from the first 15 seconds of this video.
    YouTube - Amv Black Star vs Mifune




    -Well you gotta tell us what this trick is, else it cannot be approved-

    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: This technique utilizes the numerous swords involved in the use of the Infinite One-Sword Style and both the user's skill and speed as a ninja. The user attacks the opponent a total of eleven times in rapid succession, each at different angles and positions. With each strike the sword is left behind attached to the opponent. He then lands the final blow, making a total of twelve devastating blows. This technique pins and hurts the opponent. The reason why the swords can be powerful and stay on the opponent is because the blunt of the blade is used. The attack itself relies upon the high speeds of the individual attacks and the momentary stun inflicted by the previous blows, allowing the user to grab one of the surrounding swords and continue with the technique. This attack when used and if added with multiplication will put a great strain on the user making him or her dizzy and very exhausted. This is a finishing combo and is to knock out the opponent.
    Note: Only musasibou can teach this.
    Note: Can only use twice per battle.
    Note: The user cannot use this technique again for 3 turns.
    Note: The user can only perform two attacks this turn, this is included to that tally.
    Note: User can only use 2 moves next turn.
    Note: User can not use genjutsu or taijutsu for 1 turn.
    Note: This can be blocked to minimize damage. (-10)
    The technique is from 3:20 to 3:40.
    YouTube - Amv Black Star vs Mifune




    -Approved-

    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (45 to the user)
    Description: This is a follow-up to the user's Addition technique. While the opponent is still impaled by the previous twelve strikes, the user attacks once again, striking these remaining swords so as to repeat the succession of movements preformed previously. This results in doubling the attack damage that was already done, as it cuts his opponent with the twelve swords all over again. This totals up to twenty-four strikes being recieved by the enemy within an incredibly short period, leaving little to no chance for a counter attack. This attack causes damage to both the user and the opponent since this uses chakra and body speed/power to repeat the action it puts a immense strain on the users body. The user will be sluggish and be unable to do anything next turn.
    Note: Only musasibou can teach this.
    Note: Can only use once per battle.
    Note: This technique can only be done right after Infinite One-Sword Style - Addition.
    Note: The damage from this can not be blocked.
    The technique is from 3:40 to 3:58.
    YouTube - Amv Black Star vs Mifune




    -Declined: make this a separate technique, cause as it is now connected with the previous one becomes OP-

    I changed the descriptions and added more restrictions and side effects to the attacks. Also I changed the ranks to forbidden on the one sword styles. I changed the summon to something else. I am re-submitting the one sword styles and count the panda summon as something new. I'll add more jutsus after these have been judged before the new week. Please give me any advice to help me get these approved please. I would truly appreciate it.

    Follow my instructions and resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Futatsu-Houto Kagami]:Two-Way Mirror Eye Glasses

    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:-
    Range:-
    Chakra:Cost:30(to keep the inside of the eye glasses dark)
    Damage Points:
    Description: This are special eye glasses,That the lens of the eye glasses are made of a thin and almost-transparent layer of metal (usually aluminum). The result is a mirrored surface that reflects some light and admits the rest.When one side is brightly lit and the other kept dark, the latter becomes difficult to see from the former because it is masked by the much brighter reflection of the lit side.a mirror which is partially reflective and partially transparent. When one side of the mirror is brightly lit and the other dark, it allows viewing from the darkened side but not vice versa.


    -Declined: please keep your jutsus realistic and Naruto-like-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suterusu)-Stealth
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:C-rank
    Range:Close
    Chakra Cost:15 (-5 each time it is active)
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will focus both his normal and wind chakra in his feet, creating a layer of chakra between the feet and the ground (much like water-walking technique). The chakra layer is meant to have a strong grip on the ground as he run while the wind layer will be used to make each step very swift. Almost no sound is produced when stepping on the ground.

    (Naibun Fuu zonokiri)-Heavy Mist
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:B-rank
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: By focusing his wind and water chakra on an already created mist, the user will be able to keep it stable by making it denser, heavier and fixed in place with strategic wind current. Only an A-rank wind jutsu and higher can clear this mist.

    -Can only be used 3 times per match


    (Doton: Yurasu no Sentou)- Earth Release: Spire of Rock
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to cause a large spire of rock to shoot up out of the ground in the area of their choosing. This jutsu has many uses; it can elevate the user or his opponent, or, if used on an unprepared target, can launch the target high into the air, off of the spire.

    These customs have already been made by other people and you have copied them directly, doing this again will earn you punishment up to but not exceeding banning from submitting custom jutsu's
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (yochi saku) earth rope
    Rank: e
    Type: Offensive
    Range: long/Mid
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: 5\10 depending on area
    Description: after hand signs the user can form a rope from the earth and manipulate it along the ground to wrap an opponents legs and make them trip (this is more effectively used on soft ground than sand or rock)
    any one can learn

    -Hm. You can just carry a rope on you and you'll be fine-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Fireflies
    Scroll Owner: Me
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Yoritzu, The Superglow Firefly
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: ...Not right now.
    (Kuchyose: Yoritzu Hotaru) Summoning Jutsu: Yoritzu Firefly
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will bite there fingers and perform one handseal, where the user bites their fingers will start to glow orange and then their whole body will glow orange, summoning Yoritzu who will cause a blinding glow that blinds the opponent for a turn, while Yoritzu is very big for a firefly and so the user can fly on Yoritzu. Yoritzu can launch fire and lava jutsus a-rank and below without any handseals or bother on focusing fire chakra.
    Note: Yoritzu can only be summoned once per battle
    Note: Yoritzu lasts 4 turns
    Note: Yoritzu can fly


    -Skye Kaguya holds this contract-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Genjutsu: Kurai Kyōfushō ) - Illusion technique: Dark phobia
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive / Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: This genjutsu can be triggered from any body part or as deadly gas that user will spread in air ( Gas causes the damage to opponent and both body movement and gas can be used at the same time ). The Genjutsu causes opponent's world to turn dark and makes opponent see his/her worst nightmares that leave him fallen on ground while opponent is having cold sweat and is paralyzed by own fears.

    -Declined: Needs poison release and that is my and med school's special technique-

    ( Suiton: Mizu Oshi kyūtai ) - Water release: Water pressure orb
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive / Defencive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After forming Dog - Dragon - Rat handseal user will focuse large amount of water chakra into stomach and release it in form of high pressured orb. The orb is made from condenced water molecules that will turn into lake of water when the user makes the handseal ram. This orb is able to drown out wind and fire combos due the high amount of water that's condenced inside of it.

    -Declined: Similar Jutsu already exists-



    ( Raiton: Denki Suu ) - Lightning Release: Electricity Absorb
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive / Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: User makes Rat handseal and sucks out the electricity that's near him/her. After user has absorbed electricity he/she can guide the electricity into any place he/she wants to with own lightning chakra added to it causing it deal higher damage.
    Note:
    - Usable only three times
    - Works best on fixing clay explosives
    - Can absorb any lightning attacks up to forbidden rank expect Kirin.

    -Declined: Jutsu already exists (made by Wrath)-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Wazawai kara sono Sora) Summoning Technique: Jenova, Calamity from the Skies
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Performing the handseals, the user bites his finger and puts his blood on a surface and summons Jenova. This summon has the ability to consume an enemy's body allowing her to gain their abilities as well as their memories. Jenova can change her appearance to match that of anyone she has consumed, though her most common appearance is that of a womanly figure with blonde hair and no clothing. When Jenova comes into contact with the skin of an opponent she can inject her cells into their skin. This leaves a "geostigma" which puts the opponent into a genjutsu-like state that makes them go to Jenova. The only way to overcome this is to get rid of the geostigma.
    *Note- This jutsu may only be used once a battle and lasts 4 turns.
    *Note- Only Sephiroth can teach this contract.

    ||Declined||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ~i post this now to save myself a seat of this week submitting, i will get it edited soon enough so please wait for it ~


    Rank:S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: By charging the user's hand with a fuuton: rasen-shuriken meanwhile charging a Katon: Zukokku in his mouth, the user brusts the flames through the making it transform into huge waving flames that circles forward toward the target and covers huge area.
    ~ can only be used three times per battle
    ~ -10 for the user because of the controlling mistakes while brusting the flames at the rasen-shuriken
    ~the user must be trained over rasen-shuriken and zukokku to use this jutsu.




    -Declined: you can't do that simultaneously. Fire is Yang and Wind is Yin. You will explode.-


    Rank:S
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the user charges his chakra through the ground then release it in water waves form, what ever this wave sucks get covered with thick ice making it unable to move.
    ~ this jutsu can only be used once per battle.
    ~ this wave can be created from any point in the ground.
    ~+10 damages if it was created from a covered with ice ground.
    ~ the user can't use ice jutsus in the same turn because of his ice chakra loss in this jutsu.



    -Declined: Jutsu already exists and since when do you have Ice KG? -

    rank : S
    range : short\mid
    Chakra cost: 40 ( +10 chakra for each turn )
    Damage points: 0
    Description: by opening an scroll called " the power of tiggara ", the user can summon by doing hand seals an new armor for tiggara that replace her old armor, this armor have two jets near her legs from both sides and two small wings that she uses to control the jets with chakra, moreover it got an glasses that makes tiggarra see everything moving slowly around her as if she control the time making her able to dodge the enemies attacks easily , those glasses see throw the dust and mist so that she can find her Target(s).

    ~ can only be summoned once per battle
    ~ the user must be signed over the blood contact
    ~ can only be used for 3 turns



    -Declined: there are no such glasses and especially made for a tiger-


    rank : S
    range : short\mid
    Chakra cost: 40 ( +15 chakra for each turn )
    Damage points: 0
    Description:by opening a huge scroll, the user make some hand seals then slap his palm over it making ink in it turn to red blood as bones began to appear in the shape of tigers and covered with blood, then an white fur appear over ,making them look like bones that has an white fur over there back, those tigers are un-ride-able and can't be destroyed because of there ability of teleportion,they have an sensing ability as well making them smell any chakra movement and there claws and teeth absorb chakra that make them turn more and more to be white tigers.

    - can only be used once
    - this is not a summoning jutsu, becuase the user summons dead tigers bodies which aren't even alive.
    - - 10 charka for each turn this jutsu are in use "summoned"



    -Declined: I didn't get the description anyways, but i decline this now cause of the teleportation ability if this is what you mean-

    ~i post this now to save myself a seat of this week submitting, i will get it edited soon enough so please wait for it ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Shippou Hane) - Silverwing
    Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Silverwing is a sword of mystery, made by the monks out of titan. The monks infused their power into the sword giving it many abilities, some of them are yet to be discovered.
    Known abilities:

    • Gives +20 damage to each lightning jutsu of the wielder.
    • The opponents wind jutsu's lose -10 damage.
    • The user can stab the sword into the ground and spread his wings letting him fly for 2 turns. User infuses the Silverwing's power and can fly up to 25m.
    • Silverwing can be infused with lightning, letting the user swing it 2 times faster then normal and giving more speed to the user.
    • The user can use silverwing's hidden ability: Demon's shield. The user raises Silverwing and a translucent black ring surrounds the user protecting him from any up to A-rank attack.


    *Silverwing can only be wielded by Faust.*
    *Demon's shield can only be used once.*
    *The wielder can't use any basic Ninjutsu/Genjutsu for 2 turns after using Silverwing.*
    *After flying, Silverwing's power takes over and takes away users fire and wind powers for 1 turn.*
    *The sword can be infused with lightning once and has greater speed when infused, lasts for 2 turns.*



    -Pending: all abilities must be submitted before use-




    (Fuuton: Kito Kaze)-Wind Style: Returning Wind
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user blasts out a big blast of wind from his/her mouth returning every fire style attack up to A-rank back to the enemy and making a combo of wind and fire.
    *Note: Fire has the same damage + 30 wind damage.
    *Note: The user can't use wind style next turn.
    *Note: Can only be used 2 times in battle.
    *Note: Faust can only teach this.

    -Declined: not every jutsu of fire can be made a combo with a wind one. Edit that part-




    (Doton: Hayai Suna)-Earth Style: Quicksand
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs the needed handseals, then slams the ground with his leg. Then a big rock comes out of the ground and lifts the user up and the battlefield turns into quicksand. If anybody moves they start to sink.
    *Note: This jutsu needs 1 turn of preparation.
    *Note: Can only be used once in battle.
    *Note: Quicksand lasts 3 turns.
    *Note: Faust can only teach this.

    -Declined: Unrealistic-



    (Tentei Doki)-God's Wrath
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user performs the needed handseals. A 4 element combo comes down from the sky at great speed. (Fire+Wind+Earth+Water)
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: This jutsu counts as a whole move.
    *Note: Cannot be stopped with a normal move.
    *Note: The user can't use Wind and Fire next turn.
    *Note: Faust can only teach this.

    -Pending: poor description-

     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hihi Patoro-ru) Summoning Technique: Baboon Patrol
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Performing the handseals, the user bites his finger and puts his blood on a surface and summons 7 human-sized baboons. Each baboon wears a Konoha headband on their forehead. These baboons move extremely quickly with great agility. They also have increased physical strength. A ninja with normal vision would have a hard time reading their movements, especially if they attacked together. They have no elemental abilities nor do the have the capacity to use any jutsu. They are strictly taijutsu fighters.
    *Note- This summon can only be used by a member of Konoha who has signed a contract with monkeys.
    *Note- This jutsu may only be used once a battle and lasts 4 turns.

    ~Pending: Wrong chakra info for that number of animals and their speed. Make it an A rank plz-
    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hihi Patoro-ru) Summoning Technique: Baboon Patrol
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Performing the handseals, the user bites his finger and puts his blood on a surface and summons 7 human-sized baboons. Each baboon wears a Konoha headband on their forehead. These baboons move extremely quickly with great agility. They also have increased physical strength. A ninja with normal vision would have a hard time reading their movements, especially if they attacked together. They have no elemental abilities nor do the have the capacity to use any jutsu. They are strictly taijutsu fighters.
    *Note- This summon can only be used by a member of Konoha who has signed a contract with monkeys.
    *Note- This jutsu may only be used once a battle and lasts 4 turns.

    -Approved-

    Custom Weapon: Musamune
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This legendary blade is longer than the height of an average man and thin as well. Despite its size it is light as a feather, but stronger than steel. Its sharpness and cutting ability are equivalent to that of a blade with a chidori current running through it (meaning it will cut through an ordinary weapon, but would still lose against a blade with a chidori current). Though this is the extent of its power, it has no elemental properties or special abilities. Its strength is reliant almost entirely on the user.
    - Can only be wielded by Sephiroth
    - Does not need to be summoned, it is always with Sephiroth.

    -Approved-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Technique: Turtle of Mass Destruction (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: kame messe kujo)
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description:The user wipes the blood on the seal of his arm, summoning a turtle beside the user, the turtle has giant spikes on it's back, and has a very hard body, that can only be pierced by S-rank and above attacks.This turtle is as big as Gamabunta.
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: must have signed a contract with turtles
    Note: only Axle may teach

    -Approved-


    (Yottsu Iregyura Chakra Heika) Four Irregular Chakra Swords
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user then focuses pure wind chakra into 4 swords, an extra long sword (about the length of 2 arms) in one hand and 3 short handles of swords in one hand, the user can throw the short swords at very high speeds, they only work with the users chakra. When the chakra is focused in the long blade, a blue aurora is produced around the blade, so that if the opponent tries to block short range, then he will still be cut, when focused in the short handles, nothing but a blue aurora is produced from where the blade is supposed to be.
    Note: lasts 3 turns
    Note: can only be used twice per battle
    Note: can only be used by Axle

    -Pending: the red part needs editing. What if the opponent has charged his sword with wind and lighting chakra?-


    (X-shi-rudo) X-Shield
    Rank:S
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user focuses chakra in his X-gloves, then he expands the flames out of the glove over the users body forming a sphere. This sphere is produced with highly condensed flames so that it cannot be destroyed by any other S-rank technique except by a water technique
    Note: can only be used twice
    Note: must have on X-gloves

    -Declined: I will not approve any non-Naruto based jutsus-


    (faiapuru-fu soroi) Fire Proof Suit
    Rank:S
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user focuses chakra in a specially made tight suit. When chakra is focused in the suit, it cannot be burned by S-rank or lower jutsus of the opponent. This suit also has wind resistant fabric making the user a little faster. It is a blue suit that goes from the toes all the way to the upper neck
    Note: can only be used twice
    Note: must have on X-gloves


    -Declined: I will not approve any non-Naruto based jutsus-
     
         
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    (Bushido: waruyoi shiryoku sakkaku no jutsu) Drunk sickness eye illusion jutsu
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakara Cost:20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user strikes his sword straight into the ground.The user then does a string of hand seals.Then the user hits the pommel of the sword.The genjutsu activates and a cloud of purplish mist appears around the user going 7 feet from his/her body. Any caught in the mist(excluding the user) will now have the eyesight of a drunken person.The longer the jutsu lasts, the more chakra the user must use.
    -Can Only Be Used 3 Times
    -Longest It Can Last Is 2 Post

    -Approved-

    (garasu uchibari) Glass Ceiling
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakara cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: This is a very powerful water ninjutsu. Using an immense amount of chakra, it makes a large area resemble an aquarium. The designated area is like a large globe of water which forces the people within it to act accordingly. This means that people will have to swim around in it; they can swim all around, move slowly, and everything is near weightless. The user is able to move twice as fast as anyone else in the area. However since there is no actual water the people can breathe normally. It ranges approximately 100 cubic meters for jounin-strength chakra control and pool.
    -Can Only Be Used Once
    -Can Only Last 2 Turns

    -Pending: since there is no water in the area why is it a water ninjutsu? Make it a genjutsu-


    ( Ikite Iru Inabikari)Lightning Dance
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakara Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:A powerful lightning technique, it's sure to finish all but the strongest opponents. It begins by converting a massive amount of chakra into electricity and then surging it through out the body. Then the user performs multiple dash attacks, appearing to be dozens of sparking beams of light striking the target. It's finish by slamming the opponent into the ground by their neck and expelling all the stored lightning into them.
    -Can Only Be Used 2 Times

    -Wrong chakra info, make it S rank-

    (soshi saido kai)Elemental side slash
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakara Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:This jutsu requires no hand signs as all its power comes from the sword itself. The user will focus on the blade in his hand empowering whatever element it may have upon it. It has multiple effects dependent on the users element. It must be re-used for each three attacks, miss or hit.

    -Water (Includes Ice): The blade seems to flow like water, becoming slightly transparent and difficult to see.
    -Fire: The blade becomes red hot and can cause simple burns upon touching the steal.
    -Wind: The blade gains an aura around it of cutting wind making the blade cut someone even if they aren't quite hit by it.
    -Earth: The blade becomes extremely durable, it is counted as being one rank higher for the purposes of breaking.
    -Lightning: The blade is streaked with electrical current and can cause slight shock on touch.
    -Each Element Can Only Be Used Once

    -Pending: change the red op part plz and i don't think that infusing earth would make your sword more durable. Other than that the jutsu is good to go-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (yochi shuuren hira) earth drill palm
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: close
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 30
    Description: after hand signs the user gathers any earth in his or her palm and uses their chakra to rotate it rapidly and form a cone around the hand and fourarm then at a close range unleashes mass damage on the opponent. (can also be used on area to create problem for opponent such as desert=sand tornado, forest=pit trap, snowy area=small blizzard, solid rock=fissure.)
    any one chuunin andup can learn

    -I am sorry, i really don't get what you are saying-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: kaji ari tenshoku ) Summoning Technique:fire ant calling
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: c
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Performing the handseals, the user bites his finger and puts his blood on a surface and summons a colony of fire ants. This summon has the ability to consume an enemy's body giving him constant pain but these are no ordinary ants they explode when their chakra expires

    -Please resubmit this at Jounin rank; You are still only a Chuunin-
     
         
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