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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The first thing the user does is rotating a part of his body by using one of his legs as a post while the other one rotates backwards in a circle motion (compare it to a compasses). This way the user can avoid thrusts completely and he can postpone the moment a horizontal slash would hit him (he can't dodge that one). Either way the user turns one of his shoulders 90 backwards, which gives the ideal stance for the attack: The user holds in each hand a sword horizontally, however with a reversed handgrip. One hand is positioned at the users hip, while the other one is positioned just above the head.
    Then when the opponents attack is avoided or postponed, the user brings the upper sword down and the lower sword up like a double guillotine untill the users both arms are completely stretched (the lower is now up and vice versa). This way the user can cut of an entire arm, make the opponent drop his sword or even cut half his head off.

    *Can only be taught by Caliburn*
    *If the user can use the Santoryu-style, he can place a third sword in his mouth, creating a triple guillotine which adds +10 damage*

    Position of the swords before the strike:

    After the strike:




    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short/Medium
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user crosses his two swords across his chest upwards. Then the user focuses katon based chakra into his feet to heet up the space around him, making him and his swords look bending or waving (that effect you see when it's extremely hot). This results in making it extremely difficult to block/avoid the attack as you can't really see it well (unless Byakugan/Sharingan).
    After that the user uses the same chakra in his feet to give him a speed-boost, he catapults himself forwards and attacks the target by swinging the swords across his chest, resulting in a descending flat diagonal-crossing slash from both swords while the swords are twisted during the slash for added force, ending in a position with the stretched arms and the swords point forwards behind the opponent. The attack is strong enough to break through opponents thrusts and it can attack multiple targets at the same time.
    When used with Yubashiri, due to the friction of the swords and Yubashiri being very flammable, the swords get on fire, increasing the damage with +10 (doesn't count as a fire jutsu) or with a normal sword katon-chakra can be infused with it as you already were doing that to give yourself a boost (in this case it counts as a fire jutsu) and it is called Yaki Oni Giri - Burning Demon Slash -
    As last the move can also be done without first making heat, thus making the user attack a bit sooner. Though it will not have any effect on the damage, in this case it's called Oni Giri - Demon Slash -


    *Can only be taught by Caliburn*
    *Can only be used three times per battle*
    *The fire-combo (with Yubashiri or a normal sword) can only be done once per battle*
    *If the user can use the Santoryu-style, he can place a third sword in his mouth, creating a third slash on top of the other two at the same time and adds +10 damage*

    Before the attack:

    After the attack:




    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defence at the same time
    Range: Short/Medium
    Chakra cost: 60
    Damage points: 120 (-20)
    Description: This is the ultimate and strongest technique of the Santoryu-style. The user grabs his sword with his left hand in a reversed handgrip and points the tip of the blade diagonally down to the right. The user grabs with his right also a sword with a normal handgrip, points the tip of the blade diagonally up to the right and places the end of the handle at the guard of the other sword, making the hands of the user be close together.
    After that the user quickly starts spinning both swords. The one the left counterclockwise, while the one the right clockwise which results in giving the swords extreme momentum.
    After that the user goes at max speed (chakra in the feet) towards the opponent (or if the opponent attacks he just steps forwards). The spinning blades can nearly nulify/destroy any incoming sword-based attack and when the user is close at the opponent he makes two incredibly powerful horizontal slashes, using the momentum of the spins. As last, by holding a sword in his mouth, the user can do one more horizontal slash to finish just after the two other slashes and he ends behind the opponent.
    It can be used as a defence against jutsu's due to the extreme spinning motion, however it depends on the type and nature of the jutsu (FE it will not defend against a jutsu that attacks the user from all sides).

    *Can only be taught by Caliburn*
    *Can only be used when learned the Santoryu-style*
    *Can only be used once per battle*
    *User takes -20 damage due to the strain on the body*
    *When combined with Butai Kyuuen the added strenght will be +40 instead of 20 as the spinning motion creates an enormous blaze of the used element. It will however backfire giving the user another -20 damage + Butai Kyuuen can't be used anymore for 4 turns*



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    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 02-25-2010 at 05:03 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Hasashi~ View Post
    T_T fine i will give up on storm mode


    anywho


    fire style: fire fart (katon: kasai onara)
    rank: S
    type: attack
    range: short-long
    chakra: 40
    damage: 80
    description: upon entering flame on mode and the users entire body becomes flames the user can focus his chakra to his anus and let out a very powerful and damaging fart the fart smells so bad that someone who has enhanced smelling can literally die from the smell and a normal person will have blurred vision and be forced to stop whatever they are doing to cover their nose furthermore b/c the users body is fire from the users anus a HUGE wave of fire that travels very fast and gets an added bonus in damage (plus 20) do to the fart and plus 30 from flame on mode it can literally incinerate an opponent who gets caught in it
    ~once per battle
    ~must be in flame on mode
    ~the user has immense pain to his anus afterward and cannot focus for about 3 seconds
    ~does 20 damage to the user


    the description is kinda what i mean so i didn't change it =/

    fire style: fire explosion (katon: kasai ekusupuro-jon)
    rank: S
    type: attack
    range: short-mid
    chakra: 20 (in flame on mode it is easier to preform fire jutsu therefor it takes less chakra)
    damage: 80
    description: once in flame on mode the user will focus his fire chakra throughout his body once done the user will erupt and spread everywhere his flames will completely incinerate anything they come in contact with
    ~once per battle
    ~the user reforms after usage
    ~30 damage to the user

    ~Change the first two to forbidden and I'll reevaluate~
    summoning animals of storm (kuchitose ikimonos of suto-mu)
    rank: S
    type: supplementary
    range: short
    chakra: 40
    damage: n/a
    description: the user will bite his thumb and spread the blood along the side of his arm (tattoo) once done he will slam his hand on the ground and summon an animal of storm (hawk, tiger, lion, snake, monkey,) these animals are not actual animals with flesh and blood although they have a conscious the animals are made up of storm their bodies although a solid look as if on the inside there is a huge storm going on they are made up of lightning, rain, cloud, thunder, all things that involve a storm they can use lightning jutsu up to the user's rank although this lightning is actual lightning not the chakra lightning (though it is not nearly as powerful it is still more powerful then average lightning)
    ~once per battle
    ~if the storm animals are cut 3 times they will go poof (xD)
    ~the user can use all lightning jutsu without hand signs while storm animals are on the field
    ~only one storm animal can be summoned
    ~the storm animals all have different sizes
    hawk= same size as sasuke's hawk tiger= gamakichi lion= gamabunta = snake=manda monkey= enma
    ~this is a new contract with storm animals they are not one actual race of animals they are storm animals so no contract is needed with any animals listed above
    ~Declined~ OP
    fire style: heat vision (katon: atsusa vijon)
    rank: A
    type: attack
    range: short-mid
    chakra: 30
    damage: 60
    description: the user emits fire chakra from his eyes directed at the opponent the fire chakra works that it stays chakra until it hits something and it instantly becomes flames burning whatever it hits it can also be used to heat up a metal instantly so if the opponent is hold a kunai the user can use this to heat up the kunai thus burning the opponent
    ~3 times per battle
    ~invisible to the naked eye
    ~Declined~ OP Plus this would cause severe damage to your eyes so no


    fire style: fire fart (katon: kasai onara)
    rank: forbidden
    type: attack
    range: short-long
    chakra: 40
    damage: 80
    description: upon entering flame on mode and the users entire body becomes flames the user can focus his chakra to his anus and let out a very powerful and damaging fart the fart smells so bad that someone who has enhanced smelling can literally die from the smell and a normal person will have blurred vision and be forced to stop whatever they are doing to cover their nose furthermore b/c the users body is fire from the users anus a HUGE wave of fire that travels very fast and gets an added bonus in damage (plus 20) do to the fart and plus 30 from flame on mode it can literally incinerate an opponent who gets caught in it
    ~once per battle
    ~must be in flame on mode
    ~the user has immense pain to his anus afterward and cannot focus for about 3 seconds
    ~does 20 damage to the user

    ~Declined~ Sorry but i can't possibly think of a way for this jutsu to be approved. every time i read it i just keep thinking no...sorry
    the description is kinda what i mean so i didn't change it =/

    fire style: fire explosion (katon: kasai ekusupuro-jon)
    rank: forbidden
    type: attack
    range: short-mid
    chakra: 20 (in flame on mode it is easier to preform fire jutsu therefor it takes less chakra)
    damage: 80
    description: once in flame on mode the user will focus his fire chakra throughout his body once done the user will erupt and spread everywhere his flames will completely incinerate anything they come in contact with
    ~once per battle
    ~the user reforms after usage
    ~30 damage to the user
    ~Declined~ add a time and touch restriction because you would need some time to build up the chakra and if you were to be touched it would cancel it. and remove the part in blue

    summoning animals of storm (kuchitose ikimonos of suto-mu)
    rank: S
    type: supplementary
    range: short
    chakra: 40
    damage: n/a
    description: the user will bite his thumb and spread the blood along the side of his arm (tattoo) once done he will slam his hand on the ground and summon an animal of storm (hawk, tiger, lion, snake, monkey,) these animals are not actual animals with flesh and blood although they have a conscious the animals are made up of storm their bodies although a solid look as if on the inside there is a huge storm going on they are made up of lightning, rain, cloud, thunder, all things that involve a storm they can use lightning jutsu up to the A rank although this lightning is actual lightning not the chakra lightning (though it is not nearly as powerful it is still more powerful then average lightning)
    ~once per battle
    ~if the storm animals are cut 3 times they will go poof (xD)
    ~the user can use all lightning jutsu without hand signs while storm animals are on the field
    ~only one storm animal can be summoned
    ~the storm animals all have different sizes
    hawk= same size as sasuke's hawk tiger= gamakichi lion= gamabunta = snake=manda monkey= enma
    ~this is a new contract with storm animals they are not one actual race of animals they are storm animals so no contract is needed with any animals listed above
    ~no lightning jutsu for the rest of the battle
    ~no wind or water jutsu the rest of the battle
    ~Declined~ Changed their usage rank but remove the part in blue
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50 (10 for a different chakra and 5 chakra to keep it the same type.)
    Damage Points: Must be used in conjunction with Gentle fist style.(Gentle fist taijutsu damage + 5.)
    Description: The user has this with him at all times. This weapon is made of metal and has multiple, hardly visible, holes throughout the club. With griped handles the user can use these Tonfa to defend and attack with ease. These Tonfa allow the user to manipulate chakra easier. Though it is hollow within, the user has no need to worry about the Tonfa being easily broken. The hollow inside and the small holes leading the the surface allow the user to insert and freely use chakra within them. This function can be used to make the Tonfa have fire/wind/lightning/earth/water chakra for 1 turn. The user must focus on 1 type of chakra each turn and in turn it costs energy to keep changing it. The user's chakra have the same weaknesses and strength's as the normal elemental chart. Lightning will shock the opponent (not stun or anything just damage lol), wind with cut, earth will provide more physical blunt damage, fire will burn the opponent, and water will deal water damage and can be used alone for supplementary use. Depending on the chakra type, the user will have different effects. If the fire chakra is within the Tonfa the user will deal 10 more damage with fire jutsu and 5 less damage with water jutsus. This weapon was created by weapon specialists in the Hyuga family trying to enhance their Gentle Fist style through weapons.
    Note: Only members of the Hyuga family can wield this pair of weapons.
    Note: These are indestructible, but it can't destroy anything.
    Note: User must specify in the beginning of their turn what chakra type it is.
    Note: If the user starts with this at the beginning of the fight, then he is deducted 50 chakra + 10 if he chooses a chakra type as well. 10 chakra will also be used to switch form turn to turn. 5 chakra will be used if it is kept the same.
    Note: If this weapon is used, the user can't use a different weapon throughout the battle.
    Note: Only Musasibou can give/make these out.
    Note: Gentle fist Taijutsu gained 5+ damage.




    Tell me if I need to add more restricts or change something. Please and thanks. ^^
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (plus 5 damage with shurikan/kunai)
    Description: The user can make these sparrows for defense or for a projectile attack. Can also add shuriken/kunai for hidden extra damage. The user creates multiple medium sized swallows of condensed water surrounding him or her. Spiraling around him or her the swallows can protect him from fire jutsus in a sphere shape of defense. The user can then use them as a projectile by ordering them to attack the opponent. These swallows are very fast and can pierce through rock and trees.
    Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
    Note: Must specify if extra damage is used, if reaction time is allowed.
    Note: Up to 5 Sparrows can be thrown at the opponent.
    Note: User can't used another water jutsu this turn.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.




    ~ DO not deserve their ranks ~

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gathers chakra to create earth walls after slamming his foot to the ground and directing the chakra to it's desired location. The user can form walls of refined ores and rock from the earth's crust to make a highly dense prison. This can also be used as a shield or a 360 degree cover for the user. This shield/prison withstands up to A rank fire/wind/lightning, S rank Earth and Forbidden rank Water. When the targeted opponent is trapped the user will then clap his hands to crush the opponent.
    Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
    Note: These walls are as tough as iron walls.
    Note: The user can't perform earth jutsu next turn.
    Note: The user can use this ore as earth material.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.




    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will grab two katanas and rush the opponent at high speeds. He will then use his chakra to slash and before it makes contact the sword seems to split into two. Making the opponent very confused and distracted from the real attack which is actually the other sword. The target is then slash horizontally and then stabbed in the chest with the next sword. This is possible with genjutsu making the swordsman be able to trick the opponent at critical times to get the upper hand. The target will become confused and distracted enough to be slashed by the other sword and then with good timing the swordsman can then stab the opponent for the finishing blow. This requires high genjutsu skill and swordsman skill to execute and can be done from left handed or right handed sides.
    Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
    Note: Does not require Infinite One-Sword Style Setup.
    Note: Can't be performed with another Infinite One-Sword Style attack other than the setup.
    Note: Must have 2 swords available.
    Note: User can't use genjutsu next turn.




    ~ Needs to be limited to X number of times per battle ~
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will cast a genjutsu upon the target by touching contact (Hitting, blocking, ect...). Without realizing what is happening to the opponent the victim of this genjutsu will continue his actions, but start to feel sluggish. The opponent will begin to slow down to the point where he thinks he is stopped in place and the user is moving at lightning speed. The user will then have the ability to attack the user. The user can also use this to stop a jutsu from executing correctly or at all.
    Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
    Note: The user can't perform genjutsu the following turn, and cannot perform this for 3 turns.
    Note: This can be used to help stop a jutsu from activation.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: The user can only use 1 other move this turn.



    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 02-26-2010 at 12:46 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fire style: gust of fire attack
    rank: S
    type: combo (wind/fire)
    range: short - long
    chakra: 60
    damage: 100
    description: The user focusses fire chakra into one hand whilst focussing wind chakra into the other, then the user claps there hands together making i giant gust of fiery wind combo, sending it at there opponent at high speeds.

    Note: usable twice per battle

    ~ Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 02-26-2010 at 12:46 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    name:Raiton:Lightning Release: God of Lightning
    rank:S
    type:Attack/Supplementary
    range:short
    chakra:40
    damage:80(+10 each lightning and water style attack after)
    description:The user is struck by lightning and his surrounded by an aura of electricity that can stun an enemy at direct on contact.But is not as strong as the Raikages lightning armer
    note:can only be used by Dauri
    note:last 3 turns
    note:can be used twice
    ~Declined~ How are you harnessing the natural lightning
    name: (Raiton Katanas meiun)Lightning release: blades of doom
    rank:Forbidden
    typeffense/Deffense
    range:Mid
    chakra:50
    damage:90
    description: Darui makes three Raiton blades that he can use to kill from the inside out.His blades enable him to miss with his opponents brain waves when he makes contact with his opponent or opponents.
    note: can only be used by Dauri
    note:last 3 turns
    note: only used once
    ~Declined~ Just no
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Wrath. View Post
    (Suiton: Kiriteijou) - Water Release: Stationary Mist
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Medium
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user will add more water chakra to the mist already on the field. With this the user can add more intensity to the mist so that it can't be blown away by any wind jutsu
    *Can be used three times per battle
    *Can stand up to 3 attempts of been blown away with a wind jutsu each time it's used.


    (Honeton: Hone Kubikiri Hōchō) - Bone Release: Bone Decapitating Carving Knife
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: -
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: -
    Description: After seeing Zabuza's sword, Heihachi found it very usefull so he made his own version of the sword, which is equal but it's completly made of bone and therefore much more resistant. It's only special abilitie is that the user can use bone jutsus with/from it since it's main purpose it's for silent killing.
    *Useable twice per battle.


    (Honeton: Hone Shuriken) - Bone Release: Bone Darts
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Medium
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will fire a large number of small explosive "darts" from his body (elbows, hands, knees, feet, etc) with enough charge to demolish huge buildings. They dont exactly explode but the impact and shockwave released are so big it looked like they exploded. They look somewhat similar to an axe blade, but with an indention in the middle and they're shoot with greet speed, so great that the naked eye has difficulty keeping up with their movement.
    *Useable three times per battle


    (Honeton: Howaido Kenhou) - Bone Release: White Sword Gun
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user points out Hone Kubikiri Hōchō at the opponent and compresses the minerals on the sword, then shoots the tip of the blade with extreme force from the blade, leaving it with half it's size. Then he uses his bone KG to reconstruct the tip of the blade again.
    *Useable twice per battle
    Sorry for this post but I have already made a jutsu like
    • (Suiton: Kiriteijou) - Water Release: Stationary Mist
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Shippou Hane) - Silverwing
    Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Silverwing is a sword of mystery, made by the monks out of titan. The monks infused their power into the sword giving it many abilities, some of them are yet to be discovered.
    Known abilities:
    • Gives +20 damage to each lightning jutsu of the wielder.
    • The opponents wind jutsu's lose -10 damage.
    • The user can stab the sword into the ground and spread his wings letting him fly for 2 turns. User infuses the Silverwing's power and can fly up to 25m.
    • Silverwing can be infused with lightning, letting the user swing it 2 times faster then normal and giving more speed to the user.
    • The user can use silverwing's hidden ability: Demon's shield. The user raises Silverwing and a huge black ring of chakra surrounds the user protecting him from any up to A-rank attack.


    *Silverwing can only be wielded by Faust.*
    *After flying the user doesn't feel the ground and does everything slower.*
    *Demon's shield can only be used once.*
    *The sword can be infused with lightning twice and has greater speed when infused.*
    *The wielder can't use any basic Ninjutsu/Genjutsu for 2 turns after using silverwing.*


    (It was pending, so I thought I need to re post it again...)
    ~Declined~ OP
    (Doton: Kyokan Mukade)-Earth style: Giant Centipede
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After preforming the required hand seals the user will pick a spot anywhere on the ground and focus chakra on it. A huge centipede made from rock will emerge from that spot and lunge at a target with its jaws open. If the target is not quick enough, the centipede will capture in its jaws and a slam it back into the ground. Once the centipede hits the ground it will crumble.
    *Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    *Note: Faust can only teach this.

    ~Approved~
    (Genjutsu: Hyoukai Jinniku)-Illusion Technique: Melting Flesh
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This will cause an opponent to feel and see the flesh on his bones slowly waste away. The look of this will cause tremendous fear and pain, rendering the enemy useless in combat.
    *Note: Only 1 handseals is needed.
    *Note: Can be used twice in battle.
    *Note: Faust can only teach this.

    ~Declined~ add to the description, how long does this last?
    (Fuuton: Kaze Kyodan)-Wind Style: Wind Missles
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Medium/Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: This jutsu sends highly long ranged, fast-paced wind missiles at the target. The user will send out five bursts of wind highly concentrated to a point. These are extremely sharp, fast paced, piercing blasts capable of piecing various defences, and even if they are dodged or blocked the shock wave they create, throw the opponent off balance. The user is able to guide these blasts slightly by holding the seal used to create them, however, they move so fast that often a slight turn in the missiles direction is all that can be made even at long distances. They are extremely hard to avoid because they are so fast.
    *Note: Usable once per battle.
    *Note: 5 missiles are created and they travel at great speed.
    *Note: If the opponent tries to block this with a fire move, the fire is turned back with a boost.
    *Note: Cause of the great chakra exhaustion the user cannot perform wind, genjutsu, ninjutsu for the next two turns.
    *Note: If the wind is blocked, the opponent is thrown off balance cause of the great wind blast.
    *Note: The missiles can be controlled only mid range by holding the seal used to create them.
    *Note: Faust can only teach this.

    ~Declined~ If a fire move is used that is the same rank as this, than it would over power it not give yours a speed boost
    (Katon: Shouten Kaen Tama)-Fire style: Focus Flame Shot
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Medium
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Performing the first handseal and holding the second one for as long as they focus their fire chakra. Streams of heat will flow off the hands, as the user pushes their hands forward. Releasing a powerful fast flying shot of flame, so powerful that it is capable of leveling almost anything in its path.
    *Note: Usable 2 times in battle.
    *Note: Can overpower wind attacks up to S-rank.
    *Note: Faust can only teach this.

    ~Declined~ OP and fire already beats any wind up to a rank and weakens s rank so it can't beat S rank if its an a rank
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~T-Chidori-Sasuke~ View Post
    (Ninpo: Kiji Tenma no Jutsu) Ninja Art: Cloth Demon Technique

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 40
    Description: the user takes out a scroll making a few hand seals to release a piece of the cloth attached at both ends demon windmill shuriken. The user will focus their chakra into the cloth and manipulate the cloth by performing a sort of dance where the cloth is shot at the opponent using the demon windmill shuriken and dealing heavy damage.
    ~Declined~ How can you control the cloth without any chakra strings?
    (Heikou Ryou no Jutsu) – Balancing skill Technique

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will concentrate their chakra into their ears to help correct their balance when it is disrupted from a technique or disturbance of their balance.
    ~Pending~ Ask Rei if this is possible since she's the medical expert
    (Ninpo: Kiji Tenma no Jutsu) Ninja Art: Cloth Demon Technique

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 40
    Description: the user takes out a scroll making a few hand seals to release a piece of the cloth attached at both ends demon windmill shuriken. The user will focus their chakra into the cloth and manipulate the cloth by performing a sort of dance where the cloth is shot at the opponent using the demon windmill shuriken and dealing heavy damage.
    ~could be charged with lightening chakra to make the demon go even faster by only mentioning it
    ~ strings are connected.
    ~Declined~ How would you charge the cloth with lightning just by mentioning it?
    (Heikou Ryou no Jutsu) – Balancing skill Technique

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will concentrate their chakra into their ears to help correct their balance when it is disrupted from a technique or disturbance of their balance.

    Leaving this for Rei
     
         
    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 02-25-2010 at 05:10 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Icemyster View Post
    (Kuchiyose: ga fugenfugo) Moth Of Silence
    Type-Summoning
    Rank-S
    Range-All
    Chakra-40
    Damage-N/A
    Description-
    One on the Moth elders, The moth of silence is about the same size as a pigeon. This Moth has the ability to transfer his chakra to the user, allowing the user to use moth techniques for three extra turns. His wings also have an image of predatorial eyes(as seen in both butterflies and moths in nature) giving him the ability to cast Genjutsu(S rankand below) upon the opponent by spreading his wings.
    *Can only be Used By Icemyster*
    *Can only be summoned by those with the Mark of the Monarch(moth contract)*

    ~ Needs restrictions ~

    ( Icemyster's giragira) Icemyster's Glare
    Type-Attack
    Rank-S
    Range-Short/Mid
    Chakra-40
    Damage-N/A
    Description-
    The user glares at the opponent, trapping them in this genjutsu(eye contact must be made,), once trapped the opponent begins to believe that their hands and feet have been frozen solid, and they are being encased in ice. Due to the genjutsu the opponent cannot make hand seals or run. Also, due to the strain on the user, he cannot perform any genjutsu for three turns.
    *Can only Be used by Icemyster*
    *Can only Be used once per Battle*

    ~ Explain in detail the time period for this effect to occur ~

    ( kazangan hane ) lava plume
    Type-Attack
    Range-Mid/long
    Rank-S
    Chakra-40
    Damage-80
    Description-
    The User stomps on the ground, causing the earth in front of him to rise into the air, while gathering fire chakra in his lungs, then he expels the chakra in the form of a giant and intense fireball, that drags the earth along with it towards the opponent, turning into lava in the process. Due to the intensity the user cannot use any fire techniques for the next three turns without causing major damage to themselves.
    *Can only be taught be icemyster*
    *Can only be used three times per battle*
    *Cannot be used the turn after used*

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit this ~
    ](Kuchiyose: ga fugenfugo) Moth Of Silence
    Type-Summoning
    Rank-S
    Range-All
    Chakra-40
    Damage-N/A
    Description-
    One on the Moth elders, The moth of silence is about the same size as a pigeon. This Moth has the ability to transfer his chakra to the user, allowing the user to use moth techniques for three extra turns. His wings also have an image of predatorial eyes(as seen in both butterflies and moths in nature) giving him the ability to cast Genjutsu(S rankand below) upon the opponent by spreading his wings.
    *Can only be Used By Icemyster*
    *Cannot use both effects. If chakra is given only C-rank and below genjutsu can be used*
    *Can only be summoned by those with the Mark of the Monarch(moth contract)*

    ~ Needs more restricting ~

    ( Icemyster's giragira) Icemyster's Glare
    Type-Attack
    Rank-S
    Range-Short/Mid
    Chakra-40
    Damage-N/A
    Description-
    The user glares at the opponent, trapping them in this genjutsu(eye contact must be made for one half of a second), once trapped the opponent begins to believe that their hands and feet have been frozen solid, and they are being encased in ice. Due to the genjutsu the opponent cannot make hand seals or run. Also, due to the strain on the user, he cannot perform any genjutsu for three turns.
    *Can only Be used by Icemyster*
    *Can only Be used once per Battle*

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 02-26-2010 at 12:48 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: User will form one handseal, and by doing that handseal, a huge burning storm will form, heating up the sky for use for kirin, but also burning the opponent because of the raising tempature, and with another handseal, The user will be able to form a blast of heat to fall down directly to the opponent burning the opponent alive. The user will form two handseals making the firestorm end, and when it does, it will all seem to heat up the earth so any earth jutsus used using the earth will automatically turn on fire melting it. This also increases fire jutsus damage by +20, and water jutsus used that are b-rank and below, will create steam, blocking view, but any higher water jutsus used will create bigger steam but also cool down the heat, but also will not do as much damage, -20 Damage.
    -After use, user can only use fire jutsus b-rank and down for two turns and then when using it again after 5 turns have past, User can only use b-rank fire jutsus for two turns again
    -Can only use this twice per battle
    -Using this a second time will make it even stronger
    -After use the first time, User must wait 5 turns before using it again
    -If raining, this won't work as well, and -10 in each effect



    ~ Declined , OPed ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 02-26-2010 at 12:48 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Name: Sensory Shift
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user completely shuts off the use of one of their five senses and re-routes it to another. That sense has its ability increases tremendously.
    Specific Senses
    Sight
    - The user gains the ability to see a much further distance as well as minute movements. A flinch, muscle twitch, weight shift or muscle tension can be seen.
    Sound
    - The user gains the ability to hear incredibly faint sounds. They can hear movement, breathing and even heart beats.
    Touch
    - The user becomes incredibly sensitive to vibrations such as those made by a person's movement or disruptions of wind patterns.
    Smell
    - The user's smelling ability grow to that of a nin-dog allowing them to track the movements of things through scent.
    Taste
    - The ability to taste is increased allowing the user to taste faint traces of things in the air.
    Notes:
    *Once a sense is shut off, it cannot be re-opened until the end of the technique.
    *The improved sense is prone to overload.
    *Lasts 3 turns.
    *Can only be used twice.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    Name: Heat-seeking Firebomb
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user gathers a large amount of fire chakra and released it into a small baseball sized ball of fire. This fireball then locks on to the enemy's heat signature and will follow the enemy's movements. At any point the user can click their teeth causing the fireball to explode with a force large enough to leave a crater with a 10 meter radius.
    Notes:
    *No other jutsu is usable while the fireball exists.
    *If a large heat source is created between the target and the fireball the fireball will lock on to that heat source instead.
    *Usable twice per match.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    Name: Mud Beam
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user preforms a series of hand signs (length depends on user's rank) and stomps their foot next to a source of mud. The user then uses the mud to fire up to three beams of concentrated mud at their enemies. Due to being concentrated and travelling at high speeds these beams can pierce rock easily and cut through metal.
    Notes:
    *Must have a source of mud at at least short range.

    ~ Declined, Mud is a CE ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 02-27-2010 at 05:41 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Added More Restriction And Change Some Stuff

    (Bijuu Fuukaku: Hitotsu Saru Imari) – Bijuu Style: One-Tailed Shukaku Prison
    • Type: Attack-Defense
    • Rank: Forbidden
    • Range: N/A
    • Chakra cost: 50
    • Damage Points: 90 (+20 because of Bijuu chakra); (30 damage to user)
    • Description: When Garra transforms in the One-Tailed Shukaku, he concentrates the demon chakra of his bijuu and a lot of sand and wind in a huge and compresses ball,around the opponent,summoning etc.. In prison them in a sand with layers of wind chakra mix with the sand prison giving it a powerful defense to the sand prison.The attack behind this jutsu is that when Garra has in prison the enemies he will increase mass and compressed the prison enough making it explode.
    •Can only be used once and must be in Bijuu Mode
    •After used only Bijuu Style and Sand and Wind Release jutsus can be done
    •A large sand source is required to use this jutsu.
    •Shortens user’s lifespan
    •Reduces bijuu mode by one turn

    ~ Shortens lifespan - explain ~


    (Bijuu Fuukaku: Hitotsu Saru Imari) – Bijuu Style: One-Tailed Shukaku
    • Type: Attack-Defense
    • Rank: Forbidden
    • Range: N/A
    • Chakra cost: 50
    • Damage Points: 90 (+20 because of Bijuu chakra); (30 damage to user)
    • Description: When Garra transforms in the One-Tailed Shukaku, he concentrates the demon chakra of his bijuu and a lot of sand and wind in a huge and compresses ball,in front of his mouth, then he will shoot it at the opponent. The user can make this ball to divide, transforming it into thousands of mini demon-sand balls. Any of the balls, the small or the big one, explode when the user wants to. If the big ball explodes, his strength is enough to blow up one entire village and turn it into a sad waste land, if someone touches the sand, even with the tip of his fingers, the demon chakra within it will burn the opponent’s arm. Same thing happens with the smaller balls, except the explosion each one does is smaller, but if they explode all at the same time, they do the same damages as the big one does. The user can freely control the smaller balls, but the big one can only be shoot forwards in a straight line.
    •Can only be used once and must be in Bijuu Mode
    •After used only Bijuu Style and Sand Release and Wind jutsus can be done
    •Shortens user’s lifespan

    ~ Declined, OPed ~

    (Sunaton: Suna Kankaku )-Sand Release: Sand Sense
    •Type:Supplementary
    •Rank:A
    •RangeShort-Long
    •Chakra Cost:30
    •Damage Points:
    •Description:The user of this jutsu will be able to detect the opponent, summonings etc.. vibrations through sand on top and bottom, sense there location and instantly know there location.
    •Last for 4 turns
    •Need a sand source is required to use this jutsu.

    ~ Approved ~

    (Sunaton: Suna Bakuhatsu)-Sand Release: Sand Explosion
    •Rank: S
    •Type: Attack
    •Range: All
    •Chakra Cost: 40
    •Damage Points: 80
    •Description: After performing a single hand sign, any thing sad-related (jutsus, battlefield, etc) will instantly explode violently. The explosion is large enough to damage large summons and kill multiple enemies.
    •Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    •The user must wait one turn before they can use it again.
    •No S-ranked sand jutsu in the next turn

    ~ Reduce strength of explosion ~

    (Sunaton: Suna Katame)-Sand Release: Sand Hardening
    •Rank: S
    •Type: Supplementary
    •Range: All
    •Chakra Cost: 40
    •Damage Points: N/A
    •Description: The user will form a single hand sign and any sand jutsu or source will immediately harden. If the opponent has sand on them, it will harden as well. The opponent won't be able to move the part of their body that is covered in the hardened mud.
    •The user does not need to have physical contact with the sand he/she wishes to harden.
    •3 times per battle
    •No S-ranked sand jutsu in the next turn

    ~ How much sand per use ? ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 02-27-2010 at 05:44 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Hasashi~ View Post
    fire style: fire fart (katon: kasai onara)
    rank: forbidden
    type: attack
    range: short-long
    chakra: 40
    damage: 80
    description: upon entering flame on mode and the users entire body becomes flames the user can focus his chakra to his anus and let out a very powerful and damaging fart the fart smells so bad that someone who has enhanced smelling can literally die from the smell and a normal person will have blurred vision and be forced to stop whatever they are doing to cover their nose furthermore b/c the users body is fire from the users anus a HUGE wave of fire that travels very fast and gets an added bonus in damage (plus 20) do to the fart and plus 30 from flame on mode it can literally incinerate an opponent who gets caught in it
    ~once per battle
    ~must be in flame on mode
    ~the user has immense pain to his anus afterward and cannot focus for about 3 seconds
    ~does 20 damage to the user

    ~Declined~ Sorry but i can't possibly think of a way for this jutsu to be approved. every time i read it i just keep thinking no...sorry
    the description is kinda what i mean so i didn't change it =/

    fire style: fire explosion (katon: kasai ekusupuro-jon)
    rank: forbidden
    type: attack
    range: short-mid
    chakra: 20 (in flame on mode it is easier to preform fire jutsu therefor it takes less chakra)
    damage: 80
    description: once in flame on mode the user will focus his fire chakra throughout his body once done the user will erupt and spread everywhere his flames will completely incinerate anything they come in contact with
    ~once per battle
    ~the user reforms after usage
    ~30 damage to the user
    ~Declined~ add a time and touch restriction because you would need some time to build up the chakra and if you were to be touched it would cancel it. and remove the part in blue

    summoning animals of storm (kuchitose ikimonos of suto-mu)
    rank: S
    type: supplementary
    range: short
    chakra: 40
    damage: n/a
    description: the user will bite his thumb and spread the blood along the side of his arm (tattoo) once done he will slam his hand on the ground and summon an animal of storm (hawk, tiger, lion, snake, monkey,) these animals are not actual animals with flesh and blood although they have a conscious the animals are made up of storm their bodies although a solid look as if on the inside there is a huge storm going on they are made up of lightning, rain, cloud, thunder, all things that involve a storm they can use lightning jutsu up to the A rank although this lightning is actual lightning not the chakra lightning (though it is not nearly as powerful it is still more powerful then average lightning)
    ~once per battle
    ~if the storm animals are cut 3 times they will go poof (xD)
    ~the user can use all lightning jutsu without hand signs while storm animals are on the field
    ~only one storm animal can be summoned
    ~the storm animals all have different sizes
    hawk= same size as sasuke's hawk tiger= gamakichi lion= gamabunta = snake=manda monkey= enma
    ~this is a new contract with storm animals they are not one actual race of animals they are storm animals so no contract is needed with any animals listed above
    ~no lightning jutsu for the rest of the battle
    ~no wind or water jutsu the rest of the battle
    ~Declined~ Changed their usage rank but remove the part in blue
    summoning animals of storm (kuchitose ikimonos of suto-mu)
    rank: S
    type: supplementary
    range: short
    chakra: 40
    damage: n/a
    description: the user will bite his thumb and spread the blood along the side of his arm (tattoo) once done he will slam his hand on the ground and summon an animal of storm (hawk, tiger, lion, snake, monkey,) these animals are not actual animals with flesh and blood although they have a conscious the animals are made up of storm their bodies although a solid look as if on the inside there is a huge storm going on they are made up of lightning, rain, cloud, thunder, all things that involve a storm they can use lightning jutsu up to the B rank although this lightning is actual lightning not the chakra lightning (though it is not nearly as powerful it is still more powerful then average lightning)
    ~once per battle
    ~if the storm animals are cut 3 times they will go poof (xD)
    ~only one storm animal can be summoned
    ~the storm animals all have different sizes
    hawk= same size as sasuke's hawk tiger= gamakichi lion= gamabunta = snake=manda monkey= enma
    ~this is a new contract with storm animals they are not one actual race of animals they are storm animals so no contract is needed with any animals listed above
    ~no lightning jutsu for the rest of the battle
    ~no wind or water jutsu the rest of the battle

    ~ Do you have Storm Element ? Leaving this to Rag ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kyuusho Sukuro-ru Jutsu:Tensai Shippuu)-Secret Scroll Technique: Disastrous Hurricane
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range:Long
    Chakra cost:60
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user Bites their thumb and the blood trickles out. He/She Spreads their blood across the scroll and the user forms a specific hand sign. A Hurricane shoots out of the scroll. the hurricane also has slicing winds capable of impaling the opponent and even the user of the Jutsu. The User can use the sharingan to control the hurricane.

    *Note The user may not use Fuuton for 3 turns
    * Hurricane lasts 3 turns
    * Can only be used once per battle
    * Can only be used by Minato.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by myartisablast View Post

    ( Katon: shinkō hai Doragon ) - Fire release: Rising Ash dragon

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary - Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 ( - 10 to user per turn )
    Damage points: 80 ( - 10 to user + opponent automatically when used for clouds )
    Description: User makes Rat - Sheep - Dragon handseals and spits/breaths out Pitch black ash dragon that's made from compressed with ash and fire. The Fire dragon can be controlled by user causing it to fly sky and explode causing multiple smaller fireballs and ash rain down for two turns ( Clouds can also be used for kirin if user defines so ) or it can be guided at opponent and it will explode after that. The Dragon is so firm that user can fly with it all around the field. The dragon is about Twenty meters long.
    Note:
    - This can be used once per battle
    - It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent when used for clouds due the ash that's raining
    - Dragon lasts three turns as Clouds last two turns
    - No S - Ranked Fire for next two turns
    - Dragon can breath out cloud of smoke that will blind the enemy unless He/She has dojutsu.
    - Dragon can use C - Ranked Fire attacks

    - Costs 10 chakra per turn
    ~Declined~ Make it forbidden and remove the part in blue. Only Thunderclouds work for Kirin
    ( Fuuton: Hashira yari ) - Wind release: Pillar spears
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40 ( - 5 to user when he/she uses the spear as weapon )
    Damage points: 80
    Description: User will send some of his wind chakra into sky and form out clouds. After the user has formed out clouds multiple Spears of wind will rain down at the opponent. Skilled opponent can see through this jutsu with or without any dojutsu. The landed spears will stay sticking out from the ground so they can be picked up and thrown at the opponent.
    Note:
    - Can be used twice per battle
    - Costs 5 chakra if spears are used as weapons
    ~Approved~

    and don't say that you edited it for us, we know you did.

    ( Katon: shinkō hai Doragon ) - Fire release: Rising Ash dragon
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary - Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 to user per turn )
    Damage points: 100 ( - 10 to user + opponent automatically when used for clouds )
    Description: User makes Rat - Sheep - Dragon handseals and spits/breaths out Pitch black ash dragon that's made from compressed with ash and fire. The Fire dragon can be controlled by user causing it to fly sky and explode causing multiple smaller fireballs and ash rain down for two turns or it can be guided at opponent and it will explode after that. The dragon is about Twenty meters long.
    Note:
    - This can be used once per battle
    - It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent when used for clouds due the ash that's raining
    - Dragon lasts three turns as Clouds last two turns
    - No S - Ranked Fire for next two turns
    - Costs 10 chakra per turn


    ~ What clouds ? ~


    Custom weapon: ( Tai adomin/modere-ta sāberu ) - Anti admin/moderator Saber

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A ( - 15 to user when activated )
    Description: Anti admin saber is legendary sword that's forged by the NB's by elders from fallen meteor into sword that's blade part glows red. The real powers of meteor are still unknown but it can easily slice through normal iron and steel.
    Known abilities:
    • Is able to weaken Narutobase's moderators and admins making them unable to use any dojutsu or Genjutsu attack when activated. ( With the expections of Kai )
    • Can cut through normal Iron and steel.
    • Saying words Anti admin powers activate will weaken admin's and moderator's attacks by - 5.
    • It cannot be or wielded by anyone else expect the owner.
    • The sword's indestructible ( That doesn't mean that It can cut through everything ).

    Note:
    - Causes - 15 damage to user when activated
    - Costs - 10 chakra per every turn to user when activated
    - User can't perform Genjutsu, Ninjutsu or Taijutsu for two turns after using this.
    - Weakens admins and moderators.



    I'm dropping this weapon for teh sword:

    ( Kuchiyose: Kougake no Armstrong ) Summoning technique: Gauntlets of Armstrong
    Type: Summoning / Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A ( + 5 to taijutsu and + 10 to lightning )
    Description: User summons the gauntlets of legendary alchemist Alex Louis Armstrong ( AKA Strong arm alchemist ) of the Armstrong family. The gauntlets have Spikes on place of knuckles and Alchemical notes carved on the top to boost the Lightning attacks. When the gauntlets have activated they boost Taijutsu attacks + 5 and Lightning + 10. * Can be only used twice per battle and they last for five turns. Only myartisablast is able of teaching this summon and teach how to use these gauntlets. *
    Picture:


    ~ Do you have another weapon except for this ? Tell me on a VM And this thing is anyway declined. Still, tell me on a VM~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fusion Swords
    The Fusion Swords is a six-piece sword, having a interlocking mechanism, the 6 swords themselves serves a variety of purposes and comes in different shapes and sizes thus suited best weapon for different combat situations, when fused together the form a broad sword which in status surpass all the other component swords.
    Main Blade;
    Also known as the 1st blade, resembles an exaggerated two-handed sword in its shape and appearance, despite its apparent size and weight. It consists of a long hilt wrapped in a red material, a distinctively large handguard which the other swords are locked into, a wide length of blade, and an equally long but thinner length ending in a point. The main blade is the only sword among the six that is double-sided. The main blade apparently has 2 different forms, One with the blade of the sword appearing to be one solid length of metal except for the transition between the wide and thin halves. In the second, the blade is pulled in two lengthwise; the edges are locked apart and a complex inner portion of the sword is visible.

    Hollow Blade;
    The hollow blade does not have an inner core as the main blade sword. Rather, it is essentially (though not exactly) a thick sheet of metal folded in a V-shape when looked from above, the edge of the sword being the bottom point of the V, with its lower one-third of its length wrapping around a red double-hilt. The hollow blade is locked onto the front edge of the main blade, where it snugly covers that entire edge of the main blade, and its own edge serves as the striking point for the assembled sword.

    Back Blades;
    The back blades are identical long swords, mirror images of each other, with one straight edge and one saw toothed edge, with a long black hilt for each. These two swords are attached to the back of the main blade, on both sides of the main blades back edge, with the saw-tooths pointed forward toward the hollow blade. The addition of these two swords completes the trapezoidal silhouette of the fusion swords.

    Side Blades;
    The side blades are identical, mirror image dagger-like swords, though they are still quite long. They are singled edged, with a gear-like mechanism between the hilt and the blade that allow them to fold up like a switchblade. It is in this folded form that the two sides blades are locked onto the two sides of the assembled sword, with their edges turned forward toward the main blade at the front of the sword. In addition, one of the two blades can be quickly ejected from the assembly if needed. The side blade in unassembled form serves a projectile like purpose, if thrown away the can be controlled by the magnetic core of the 1st blade, to redirect them, though in a rough manner showing that the control over it is really weak and cannot always be count on.

    Buster Sword;
    The fully assembled form of the fusion auxiliary blades, has the looks of a broad sword, The assembled form of the fusion swords is a heavy sword, most suited to crushing, and is not necessarily intended to serve the role of a slicing weapon as a nodachi would be. It is capable of being used for slicing, however being able to cleanly slice through rebar reinforced concrete with it. Although its appearance is as stout and sturdy, In overall when compared to the other swords, the buster is indestructible (literally or virtually), where destroying the other blades may seem easy, buster can completely resist out the pressure with its unique form, it space vacancies through out the fused blade though weakens the its offensive power, absorbs damage in critical situations.




    ~ Weapon Approved ~

    (Ken Sen) Blade Beam
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user focuses his chakra through the 1st blade opening in its core (thus while the sword is open, see picture) and releases it as a destructive beam of white chakra. The point of the beam is shaped into the point of a blade and along the edges of the entire bleam smaller blades appear. These blades are long enough to make deep trenches in the earth along the course of the beam.
    YouTube - [HD] ???
    *Must have Fusion Swords*
    *Can only be used with the 1st Blade*
    *Can only be taught by DS and Caliburn*

    ~ Needs restricting ~

    Omni Slash (Omuni Kiritateru)
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (-15)
    Description: The user releases Ken Ki, focuses a large amount of chakra into the Buster Blade and launches himself towards the opponent with it at an enormous speed. Just before reaching the opponent the user opens the side blades and swings the Buster Blade at the opponent. At this time the sword splits up and 5 swords surround the opponent in a circular formation while still holding the first sword. As a result of all the chakra that was infused in the sword, the swords keep hoovering around the opponent and are surrounded by the users chakra. After the first slash, with excellent timing and immense speed given by Ken Ki, the user attacks the opponent first with the Beam Blade, leaving after images and attacks the opponent once with every other sword, ending with blade beam again slashing him downwards to the ground, resulting in a 7 hit combo.
    He attacks in straight lines: first he slashes with the first blade and appears at the second blade, grabs it and uses the chakra around the swords as a launching platform to shoot himself again towards the opponent, slashes him and grabs the next sword. This happens in total 7 times, however due to Ken Ki it happens all in only a few seconds and it seems the user is actually hoovering through the air without touching the ground.
    Every time the user hits, chakra is released from the blade that explodes on contact
    YouTube - Omni Slash Version 5
    *Must Have Fusion Swords*
    *Can only be used with Buster sword*
    *Must have released Ken Ki*
    *Can only be used twice per battle*
    *The user takes -15 damage*
    *Can only be thaught by Dark Sage and Caliburn*

    ~ Approved, very nice ~

    Omni Slash of the War God (Omuni Kiritateru Henran Tentei)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 60
    Damage points: 120 (-20)
    Description: A stronger version of the Omni Slash. The user releases Ken Ki, focuses an enormous amount of chakra into the Buster Sword and launches himself towards the opponent. He does one strike with the Buster Sword and the sword separates into 6 swords during it, all infused with chakra, that start to hoover around the opponent in a circular formation. The user goes from one sword to another and uses his own chakra, that is spread around the sword, as a launching platform without touching the ground and starts to slash the opponent 6 times.
    However this time He does it again 6 times, using the speed of Ken Ki at its max, that it looks like he attacks 6 times at the same time with all six swords, leaving 6 after images. The user finishes by attacking from above one last time with the Beam Sword.
    Every time the opponent is hit the chakra, that was infused in the sword, explodes on contact. Whatever is left is blasted to the ground with the final attack of the Beam Blade with a Blade Beam-like attack.
    YouTube - Omnislash version.6
    *Must Have Fusion Swords*
    *Can only be used with Buster sword*
    *-20 damage to the user*
    *The user can't use any forbidden-rank jutsu's next two turns*
    *The user can't use any jutsu's with the Fusion Swords next two turns*
    *Can only be used once per battle*
    *Can only be used when released Ken Ki*
    *Can only be thaught by Dark Sage and Caliburn*

    ~ Declined ~

    ~i'd like the person checking these to check the sword related jutsus separately (ken ki is one of cali's modes if there's a problem identifying that), also i don't think there should be a problem with this since there is nothing much in this except the jutsu's(which will be submitted momentarily) and the special design which offers different valid techniques in the means of sword combat~

    ~ Do you have another weapon already ? Tell me on VM ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Magumaton:Makura kazangan)- Pillow lava
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will manipulate a special kind of lava from the ground; the lava is special because it appears to be a really big rock about one meter in diameter it is really soft just like a pillow and can be fired at the opponent once the lava pillow makes contact with anything it will explode causing the lava in side of it to be blow everywhere in short range of it.
    Note: can be used 3 times in battle

    Idea from:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pillow_lava

    ~ Pillow Lava is not soft ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Wyverns: matari (kichiose no jutsu Wyverns: matari)
    RAnk:S
    RAnge:long-short
    TYpe:supplementry
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage:0
    Description: the users summons a big wyvern with a wing spam of 10m and a lenght of 25m. THis wyver is a master of the wind element and can use wind element up to Arank. hE is very fast and can fly 300km/h. Also he is very swift and agile.his skin is made up of hard scales able to deflect most weapon hits. He has a great sense of smell and sound but not a very good eye sight. He is the boss of all wyverns and can use his high pitch sounds like a sonar to locate objects.
    *can only be used by Rain of Hell


    Summoning Wyverns: Kosome (kichiose no jutsu Wyverns: Kosome)
    RAnk:S
    RAnge:long-short
    TYpe:supplementry
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage:0
    Description: the users summons a big wyvern with a wing spam of 7m and a lenght of 17m. THis wyver is a master of the lightning element and can use lightning element up to Srank. hE is very fast and can fly 240km/h. Also he is very swift and agile.his skin is green and he can chage the tone of his skin color to hide himself. He has a great sense of smell and sound and a good eye sight. he can track objects up tp 100m away using his nose and he is very powerfull in combat.
    *can only be used by Rain of Hell


    Summoning Wyverns: Prismatic (kichiose no jutsu Wyverns: Prismatic)
    RAnk:S
    RAnge:long-short
    TYpe:supplementry
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage:0
    Description: the users summons a big wyvern with a wing spam of 8m and a lenght of 21m. THis wyver cant use any elements. hE is very fast and can fly 250km/h. Also he is very swift and agile.his skin is filled with crystals so his skin is hard and can deflect almost any blows also his wings and claws are made of crystals to so he can cut almost anything with his claws and wings. He can shoot the crystals in his body out of his mouth like projectiles. He has a great sense of sound and a good eye sight. He can use use his scales as a mirror to deflect sunlight and lightning jutsu below B rank.
    *can only be used by Rain of Hell


    note: wyverns and dragons are very differant first wyverns are usually skinnyer.
    second dragons have wings and arms but wyvers wings are his arms

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. I do not want any arguments about this either. Come up with some other contract ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Icemyster View Post
    ](Kuchiyose: ga fugenfugo) Moth Of Silence
    Type-Summoning
    Rank-S
    Range-All
    Chakra-40
    Damage-N/A
    Description-
    One on the Moth elders, The moth of silence is about the same size as a pigeon. This Moth has the ability to transfer his chakra to the user, allowing the user to use moth techniques for three extra turns. His wings also have an image of predatorial eyes(as seen in both butterflies and moths in nature) giving him the ability to cast Genjutsu(S rankand below) upon the opponent by spreading his wings.
    *Can only be Used By Icemyster*
    *Cannot use both effects. If chakra is given only C-rank and below genjutsu can be used*
    *Can only be summoned by those with the Mark of the Monarch(moth contract)*

    ~ Needs more restricting ~

    ( Icemyster's giragira) Icemyster's Glare
    Type-Attack
    Rank-S
    Range-Short/Mid
    Chakra-40
    Damage-N/A
    Description-
    The user glares at the opponent, trapping them in this genjutsu(eye contact must be made for one half of a second), once trapped the opponent begins to believe that their hands and feet have been frozen solid, and they are being encased in ice. Due to the genjutsu the opponent cannot make hand seals or run. Also, due to the strain on the user, he cannot perform any genjutsu for three turns.
    *Can only Be used by Icemyster*
    *Can only Be used once per Battle*

    ~ Approved ~
    ]](Kuchiyose: ga fugenfugo) Moth Of Silence
    Type-Summoning
    Rank-S
    Range-All
    Chakra-40
    Damage-N/A
    Description-
    One on the Moth elders, The moth of silence is about the same size as a pigeon. This Moth has the ability to transfer his chakra to the user, allowing the user to use moth techniques for three extra turns. His wings also have an image of predatorial eyes(as seen in both butterflies and moths in nature) giving him the ability to cast Genjutsu(S rankand below) upon the opponent by spreading his wings.
    *Can only be Used By Icemyster*
    *Cannot use both effects. If chakra is given only C-rank and below genjutsu can be used*
    *Can only be summoned by those with the Mark of the Monarch(moth contract)*
    *Cannot be re-summoned*
    *Will go away if genjutsu is performed successfully*

    ~ Approved ~

    ( Hyouton: hokkyokukou) Ice Release: aurora borealis
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description-
    The user emits low amounts of raiton while controlling the moisture around him, the light from the raiton is refracted through the water molecules around the user, giving him a greenish glow that remains in the air even after the user has moved. After the user activates this(takes as long as the raikage's assault armor) he gains an extreme control of the ice around him, making him able to turn wind and water into ice by manipulating the molecules. With this effect he can create tendrils of extremely cold water and wind that turn into ice once then come into contact with a solid object. The glow will surround him like him like a biju's chakra does the jinchurikki. This cloak prevents the user from being hurt by wind, water, and ice justu by either turning them into ice or turning ice into water. The user may extend the tendrils(maximum of eight) to his opponent to hit them, and the ground the user walks on turns into ice. Lasts three turns. The user's speed is increased to that of the 5th gate while activated.

    *Once Activated the user can only use ice and water jutsu*
    *Once is over the user cannot move for one turn due to fatigue*
    *Can only be used once per battle*
    *The tendrils move extremely fast(only third tomoe and up can read)*
    *After using the jutsu the user loses the ability to perform ice justu the rest of the battle*
    *Can only be taught by icemyster*
    *Cannot perform any summons after this justu is used*

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fuuton: Haipa-Tsue (Wind Style: Hypercane)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 60 (+50 from added elements)
    Damage: 120 (-60 to user)
    Description: The user preforms a long row of handseals, and fuses Wind, Water, Lightning, and Fire into the sky. By using fire, the user causes the sky to drastically heat up so that it cretes very dark clouds that cover the sky. Next, by manipulating Mass amounts of Wind Chakra, the user causes a giant funnel within the clouds causing them to whip around creating the Hypercane. This Hypercane moves at speed of up to 500mph and destroys anything in its path. Finally by adding both Lightning and Water elements into this jutsu the user creates a massive thunderstorm within the clouds. This Hurricane is so massive it can cover the whole arena, immediately.
    (Usable Once)
    (No Element Beside Earth Over B- rest of battle)

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit in any shape or form. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Bunshinjutsu (Clone Technique)

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Bunshinjutsu are techniques that create a copy of the user. The standard Clone Technique is considered the most basic of basic ninjutsu. Despite this, bunshinjutsu are very versatile and useful.

    ~Very much DECLINED~ You do realize that this is just Kage Bunshin -_-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Musasibou View Post
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50 (10 for a different chakra and 5 chakra to keep it the same type.)
    Damage Points: Must be used in conjunction with Gentle fist style.(Gentle fist taijutsu damage + 5.)
    Description: The user has this with him at all times. This weapon is made of metal and has multiple, hardly visible, holes throughout the club. With griped handles the user can use these Tonfa to defend and attack with ease. These Tonfa allow the user to manipulate chakra easier. Though it is hollow within, the user has no need to worry about the Tonfa being easily broken. The hollow inside and the small holes leading the the surface allow the user to insert and freely use chakra within them. This function can be used to make the Tonfa have fire/wind/lightning/earth/water chakra for 1 turn. The user must focus on 1 type of chakra each turn and in turn it costs energy to keep changing it. The user's chakra have the same weaknesses and strength's as the normal elemental chart. Lightning will shock the opponent (not stun or anything just damage lol), wind with cut, earth will provide more physical blunt damage, fire will burn the opponent, and water will deal water damage and can be used alone for supplementary use. Depending on the chakra type, the user will have different effects. If the fire chakra is within the Tonfa the user will deal 10 more damage with fire jutsu and 5 less damage with water jutsus. This weapon was created by weapon specialists in the Hyuga family trying to enhance their Gentle Fist style through weapons.
    Note: Only members of the Hyuga family can wield this pair of weapons.
    Note: These are indestructible, but it can't destroy anything.
    Note: User must specify in the beginning of their turn what chakra type it is.
    Note: If the user starts with this at the beginning of the fight, then he is deducted 50 chakra + 10 if he chooses a chakra type as well. 10 chakra will also be used to switch form turn to turn. 5 chakra will be used if it is kept the same.
    Note: If this weapon is used, the user can't use a different weapon throughout the battle.
    Note: Only Musasibou can give/make these out.
    Note: Gentle fist Taijutsu gained 5+ damage.




    Tell me if I need to add more restricts or change something. Please and thanks. ^^
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (plus 5 damage with shurikan/kunai)
    Description: The user can make these sparrows for defense or for a projectile attack. Can also add shuriken/kunai for hidden extra damage. The user creates multiple medium sized swallows of condensed water surrounding him or her. Spiraling around him or her the swallows can protect him from fire jutsus in a sphere shape of defense. The user can then use them as a projectile by ordering them to attack the opponent. These swallows are very fast and can pierce through rock and trees.
    Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
    Note: Must specify if extra damage is used, if reaction time is allowed.
    Note: Up to 5 Sparrows can be thrown at the opponent.
    Note: User can't used another water jutsu this turn.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.




    ~ DO not deserve their ranks ~

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gathers chakra to create earth walls after slamming his foot to the ground and directing the chakra to it's desired location. The user can form walls of refined ores and rock from the earth's crust to make a highly dense prison. This can also be used as a shield or a 360 degree cover for the user. This shield/prison withstands up to A rank fire/wind/lightning, S rank Earth and Forbidden rank Water. When the targeted opponent is trapped the user will then clap his hands to crush the opponent.
    Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
    Note: These walls are as tough as iron walls.
    Note: The user can't perform earth jutsu next turn.
    Note: The user can use this ore as earth material.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.




    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will grab two katanas and rush the opponent at high speeds. He will then use his chakra to slash and before it makes contact the sword seems to split into two. Making the opponent very confused and distracted from the real attack which is actually the other sword. The target is then slash horizontally and then stabbed in the chest with the next sword. This is possible with genjutsu making the swordsman be able to trick the opponent at critical times to get the upper hand. The target will become confused and distracted enough to be slashed by the other sword and then with good timing the swordsman can then stab the opponent for the finishing blow. This requires high genjutsu skill and swordsman skill to execute and can be done from left handed or right handed sides.
    Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
    Note: Does not require Infinite One-Sword Style Setup.
    Note: Can't be performed with another Infinite One-Sword Style attack other than the setup.
    Note: Must have 2 swords available.
    Note: User can't use genjutsu next turn.




    ~ Needs to be limited to X number of times per battle ~
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will cast a genjutsu upon the target by touching contact (Hitting, blocking, ect...). Without realizing what is happening to the opponent the victim of this genjutsu will continue his actions, but start to feel sluggish. The opponent will begin to slow down to the point where he thinks he is stopped in place and the user is moving at lightning speed. The user will then have the ability to attack the user. The user can also use this to stop a jutsu from executing correctly or at all.
    Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
    Note: The user can't perform genjutsu the following turn, and cannot perform this for 3 turns.
    Note: This can be used to help stop a jutsu from activation.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: The user can only use 1 other move this turn.



    ~ Approved ~
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will grab two katanas and rush the opponent at high speeds. He will then use his chakra to slash and before it makes contact the sword seems to split into two. Making the opponent very confused and distracted from the real attack which is actually the other sword. The target is then slash horizontally and then stabbed in the chest with the next sword. This is possible with genjutsu making the swordsman be able to trick the opponent at critical times to get the upper hand. The target will become confused and distracted enough to be slashed by the other sword and then with good timing the swordsman can then stab the opponent for the finishing blow. This requires high genjutsu skill and swordsman skill to execute and can be done from left handed or right handed sides.
    Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
    Note: Does not require Infinite One-Sword Style Setup.
    Note: Can't be performed with another Infinite One-Sword Style attack other than the setup.
    Note: Must have 2 swords available.
    Note: can be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: User can't use genjutsu next turn.




    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 (10 for a different chakra and 5 chakra to keep it the same type.)
    Damage Points: Must be used in conjunction with Gentle fist style.(Gentle fist taijutsu damage + 10.)
    Description: The user has this with him at all times. This weapon is made of metal and has multiple, hardly visible, holes throughout the club. With griped handles the user can use these Tonfa to defend and attack with ease. These Tonfa allow the user to manipulate chakra easier. Though it is hollow within, the user has no need to worry about the Tonfa being easily broken. The hollow inside and the small holes leading the the surface allow the user to insert and freely use chakra within them. This function can be used to make the Tonfa have fire/wind/lightning/earth/water chakra for 1 turn. The user must focus on 1 type of chakra each turn and in turn it costs energy to keep changing it. The user's chakra have the same weaknesses and strength's as the normal elemental chart. Lightning will shock the opponent (not stun or anything just damage lol), wind with cut, earth will provide more physical blunt damage, fire will burn the opponent, and water will deal water damage and can be used alone for supplementary use. Depending on the chakra type, the user will have different effects. If the fire chakra is within the Tonfa the user will deal 10 more damage with fire jutsu and 5 less damage with water jutsus. This weapon was created by weapon specialists in the Hyuga family trying to enhance their Gentle Fist style through weapons.
    Note: Only members of the Hyuga family can wield this pair of weapons.
    Note: These are indestructible, but it can't destroy anything.
    Note: User must specify in the beginning of their turn what chakra type it is.
    Note: If the user starts with this at the beginning of the fight, then he is deducted 40 chakra + 10 if he chooses a chakra type as well. 10 chakra will also be used to switch form turn to turn. 5 chakra will be used if it is kept the same.
    Note: If this weapon is used, the user can't use a different weapon throughout the battle.
    Note: Only Musasibou can give/make these out.
    Note: Gentle fist Taijutsu gained 5+ damage.





    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (plus 5 damage with shurikan/kunai)
    Description: The user can make these sparrows for defense or for a projectile attack. Can also add shuriken/kunai for hidden extra damage. The user creates multiple medium sized swallows of condensed water surrounding him or her. Spiraling around him or her the swallows can protect him from fire jutsus in a sphere shape of defense. The user can then use them as a projectile by ordering them to attack the opponent. These swallows are very fast and can pierce through rock and trees.
    Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
    Note: Must specify if extra damage is used, if reaction time is allowed.
    Note: Up to 5 Sparrows can be thrown at the opponent.
    Note: User can't used another water jutsu this turn.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.




    >.> I didn't know if you wanted me to edit that now so you can check it emperor. ;_; I really thought I put everything I needed to put on my CJs I submitted. Since your notes for my CJs seem kinda like you want me to edit them I did. If not then disregard this and i'll resubmit this next week. Since I got no more spots to resubmit this week.

    Sorry for this post if I misunderstood.

    ~ Yes, resubmit next week ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    嵐遁, Ranton:teikiatsu sumasshu (Storm Release:Cyclone Smash
    Typeffense
    Rank:S
    Range:Long
    Chakra:60
    Damage:90
    Description:The user preforms hand signs then focuses on combining lightning water into both of there hands.The user fuses them together to make a storm style cyclone in the palm of there hand when it is released it grows in size and can devestate a landscape in seconds.

    嵐遁, Ranton: tensai(Storm Release:Tusnami Disaster)
    type: offense
    Rank:S
    Range:long
    Chakra:60
    Damage:80
    Description:The user does handsigns and fires of lightning that flows like water (nature of storm release)that strikes an opponemt then combindes at a point into a tsunami.

    ~ Both Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Chago View Post
    Sword Arts: Exploding Dance (Subeta gigei: kibaku Dansu)
    Rank:A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Discription: The user infuses chakra to his/her sword and then stands with both feet far apart with the sword in both hands then the user does a 12 combo slash at the opponent in high speeds then the user relases the infused chakra of the blade and causes it to explode devastating the opponent.
    (Note: can only be taught by chago.)
    (Note: can only be used 3 times a battle.)
    (Restriction: The user must have a sword in order to do this move.)
    (Restriction: you have to wait at least two turns in order to reuse this jutsu.)


    -Declined: There's no such thing as self exploding pure chakra-



    Sword Arts: Flame Dance (Subeta gigei: honoo Dansu)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 60
    Discription: The user infuses fire chakra to his/her blade then he/she will do a stand where both feet are close together and the user is holding his/her blade close to the eye kinda like riku's stands then the user will move in high speeds and do a series of 9 slashes at the opponent.
    (Note: can only be taught by chago.)
    (Note: can only be used 3 times a turn.)
    (Restriction: The user must have a sword.)
    (Restriciton: The user must have to wait 2 turns in order to re-do the jutsu.)


    -Approved-


    Sword Arts: Typhoon hit (subeta gigei: taifuu atari)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user infuses a great amount of wind/water chakra to his/her sword then instantly throws it vertically creating a wheel of wind that devastates the opponent.
    (Note: can only be taught by chago.)
    (Note: can only be used twice in battle.)
    (Restricion: must have a sword.)
    (Restriciton: The user has to wait at least 3 turns to re-use.)


    -Pending: why water? -
    Sword Arts: Exploding Dance (Subeta gigei: kibaku Dansu)
    Rank:A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Discription: The user infuses chakra to his/her sword and then stands with both feet far apart with the sword in both hands then the user does a 12 combo slash at the opponent in high speeds then he/she throws 3 kunais with paper bombs at the opponent.
    (Note: can only be taught by chago.)
    (Note: can only be used 3 times a battle.)
    (Restriction: The user must have a sword in order to do this move.)

    ~ Declined, does not deserve to be a jutsu ~

    Dual Swords: The heavens and the Earth (dyuaru subeta Summin: za kyuuten za Doton)
    Rank: S
    Type: supplementary
    Range: short/long
    chakra cost: 40
    Damage: none
    Description: the user summons out two legendary deflecting/Offensive swords the heavens and the Earth the two swords are also linked to a chain of chakra done by the user and can be thrown at least 12 meters from the user.
    (Dual Sword 1: the heavens) this sword has a dark handle with white stripes around it the handle also as a medal of the sky(heavens) symbol the steel of the sword is also white and the user can infuse chakra to this sword to create a barrier of chakra around the sword that blocks in coming lighting jutsu up to A rank.
    (Dual Sword 2: the Earth) this sword also has a dark handle with white stripes around it the handle also has a medal of the earth symbol the steel of this sword is light blue and the user can infuse chakra to this sword to create a barrier of chakra around the sword that can block earth jutsu up to A rank.
    (Note: can only be used by chago)
    (Note: can only be used 3 times a battle.)
    (Restriction: the user cannot use any jutsu in the same turn they have summon the dual swords.)
    (Restriction: the swords last 4 turns.)
    (Restriction: must wait at least 4 turns to re-do the jutsu.)

    ~ Declined ~

    Sword Arts: Typhoon hit (subeta gigei: taifuu atari)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user infuses a great amount of wind chakra to his/her sword then instantly throws it vertically creating a wheel of wind that devastates the opponent.
    (Note: can only be taught by chago.)
    (Note: can only be used twice in battle.)
    (Restricion: must have a sword.)
    (Restriciton: The user has to wait at least 3 turns to re-use.)

    ~ Wrong Details ~

    woops sorry I meant only wind haha
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 02-27-2010 at 05:55 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Raiton : Guburos No Raikou - Lightning Release : Gloves Of Lightning
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: User Will Concetrate Their Chakra At Their Hands And Raise Them At Air , Then Bolt Of Lightning Will Hit Their Hands And Then Lightning Will Form Shape Of Gloves At Their Hands .

    - Only I Can Use This Jutsu -
    - If Some One Steals These They Will Disappear -
    - Causes 15 + Damage Due The Lightning Bolt -
    - Costs 5 Chakra Per Turn -
    - Lasts 4 Turns -
    - Gloves Boost 5 + Lightning Damage To 3 Lightning Attacks Used After This -

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 03-01-2010 at 05:25 AM.

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