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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mokuton : Ekusupuro-jon Sukuri-n) Wood Release : Explosion Screen
    Rank : A
    Type : Supplementary
    Range : Short / Mid
    Chakra Cost : 30
    Damage Points : N/A
    Description : The user will manipulate trees and break off their pieces (Branches, twigs etc.) and redirect them in the position of the user's liking the user will then make them explode in one of the three ways -
    1. - The wood pieces will explode in regular explosions.
    2. - The wood pieces will explode in a smoke screen
    3. - The Wood pieces will explode in a cloud of knock - out gas
    - Twice Per Battle.


    ~ Are you serious ? How the heck will wood pieces produce smoke and knockout gas ? WTF. Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kaito-sama View Post
    twin rasengan is still a jutsu of the manga and anime plus its a sage mode technique
    lol, it's not a sage mode technique it has been used by young Naruto in one of the movies and Jiraiya
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Taka Teisatsutai) - Hawk Scout Squad

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The Hawk Scout Squad are a small elite squad of small sized hawks that can perform various tasks such as scout for the enemies locations by their accute sight which allows them to see even very small mammals from the air. They can also act as a messanger.
    They have the ability to see the chakra of opponents and fly around at very fast speeds allowing for quick return to their handlers and making them hard targets to hit.
    Note: Must have the hawk summoning contract.

    ~ Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Buki: Subeta Kakazuti ) Weapon: Sword Kakazuti

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user take out the sword and focus chakra into the sword kakazuti and really fast put lightning to it then, the user focus chakra on his feet and with really high speed attack the opponent more then 20 times if he/her wants times.

    NOTE: Obito-Uchiha can only teach this.
    NOTE: It's almost Impossible to block the attack because it's to fast for the opponent.

    Picture:



    ~ Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-11-2010 at 08:09 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Satsubatsu Issun no Hirate) - Wind Release: Palms of the Bloodthirsty One
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Medium
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: A simply jutsu where the user gathers wind chakra on his palms and puts it under pressure. After that he simply releases the wind forward. This will produce strong slicing wings which can cut one person into pieces. Used at medium range it can be avoided normally, but at short range it's virtually impossible to defend against this quick and unpredictable attack. Multiple usages of this jutsu will result on user's self damage, like cuts on his palms due to the strong wind currents.
    *Usable 3 times per battle


    ~ Declined, similar to existing ~


    (Fuuton: Suraisu Kazetouza) - Wind Release: Slicing Wind Currents
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Medium
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will do the needed hand seals and will release wind chakra on the surrounding area. After that he will control the wind currents on that area. He quickly moves his finger and the wind currents proceed to follow the finger's movement, creating wind currents that can easily slice through flesh and bones.
    *Usable twice per battle
    *User can only swing his fingers three times per battle, so, each time he uses this jutsu, only three slicing currents of wind are created.


    ~ This was Declined already, and the restrictions are not enough ~


    (Suiton: Mizusan) - Water Release: Acid Water
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will do a small row of hand seals while expanding his water chakra through the zone. After this, he'll be able to change the proprieties of any water on the surrounding area and will decrease it's pH to almost zero, turning the water the most acid possible, to the point where it can even dissolve and pass through earth techniques up to A-rank. Although is the user who modifies the water, he can be damaged with of it too.
    *Usable three times per battle
    *Lasts 2 turns

    It may seem a ce or something but im just changing the water proprieties, it's as simple as that. I have water element so I should be able to do this.

    ~ WTF. Do you even know how pH is changed ? By concentration of H+ ions. So with your water element, you're going to add Hydrogen ions to the water, and fuse it perfectly with the water, and somehow give the Hydrogen Ions positive charges, because they're found only as Neutral Hydrogen in the atmosphere. Declined. No resubmit. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-11-2010 at 08:11 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Kage Heki)-Illusion Technique:False shadows
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    RangeShort
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This genjutsu allows the user to cast images of a Shadow Imitation trail into the targets mind. This causes the target to think that the user is sending their shadow in pursuit of them when in reality no shadow is being cast. This can be useful for a Nara to see what their target will do to avoid their shadow attacks, or to simply distract them while another strategy is being employed. Since there is no actual shadow involved, the shadows in the genjutsu can stretch farther and behave differently than actual shadows, making them more threatening.If the shadow actually comes in contact with the opponent, it will immediately be broken.
    Notenly Konohas Yellow Flash can teach this jutsu.
    Note:can be onced per battle since if used the second time, the target will notice it is a genjutsu.
    Note: while casting the genjutsu, the user cannot use any shadow jutsu.


    ~ Approved ~


    (Kage Gyouko) - Shadow Solidification
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: This technique only works against another nara clan member.If the user is trapped by the enemy with a shadow jutsu, the user will infuse chakra onto the opponents shadow and solidify it, making it impossible for the opponent to control it, the user can then counter the enemy by turning the shadow jutsu against him/her using jutsu of him/herself.
    Note:Can only be taught to Konohas Yellow Flash
    Note:Can only be used if trapped by the enemy with a shadow jutsu.
    Note:If a jutsu is done by the user while the enemy is trapped in its own shadow and that jutsu implies shadow manipulation, these will need half chakra since the shadows have alredy been enlargedand are alredy on the field.


    ~ Listen, if you submit one more Nara jutsu where shadows are solidified or turned into dragons or boxes or user merges with them or other stuff, I'm banning you from this thread for a week ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-11-2010 at 08:14 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    old jutsu

    Raiton: Raikage Yougeki Gusoku (Lightning Style: Thunder Shadow's Assault Armor)
    Rank:S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (+5 every turn active)
    Damage: +30 to taijutsu and +20 to Lightning
    Description: The Raikage can Automatically Release Lightning Chakra from every point of his body, giving him a boost in reflexes, speed, and power comparable to Rock Lee in his 8-Gates Mode.
    (Last 4 Turns)
    (Usable 2 times; 1 turn Recharge)
    (Only Teachable by Kirabi)

    Jutsu Update.

    Raiton: Raikage Raiton no Yoroi (Thunder Shadow's Lightning Release Armor)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50 (+10 every turn active)
    Damage: +60 to taijutsu and +40 to Lightning (-20 to user because of strain)
    Description: By instantly wrapping his body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the Fourth Raikage can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. While using this technique, his reflexes and are comparable to that of Maito Gai in Fourth Gate Mode, making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with him. The armor also increases his defense, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming lightning attacks as even a direct Chidori was barely able to pierce his chest.
    (Usable 1 Times)
    (Last 4 Turns)
    (User Can't Use Wind Techs, Earth techs, or Water Techs that are spit from the mouth)
    (Contact with water will electrocute the User)
    (User becomes much weaker to wind techniques, their damage increasing by one rank)


    ~ Approved, I edited bits. And that is it. No more resubmits of this armour or you get infracted and banned from this thread. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Black Eggs (couldn't find word for egg or eggs)
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage: (15 per turn)
    Description: Black Eggs are hollowed out eggs that have been painted black and filled with finely crushed glass. When used, the ninja crushes the egg in his hands and throws the powder in the opponents face, causing the crushed glass to go in the opponents eyes. This both hurts the opponents eyes tremendously and temporarily blinds them. By adding chakra with the crushed glass the user is able to damage the optic nerves making the opponents dojutsu less effective. However, as the user is putting some of their chakra into the opponent, it also disrupts any genjutsu the opponent might be in.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
    *The damaging and blinding effects of this jutsu last for 2 turns
    *The effect of making dojutsu less effective lasts for 4 turns.

    ~ Declined, No Resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-11-2010 at 08:17 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (hibikibasho)-echolocation
    Type:supplamentary
    Rank:B
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:
    Description: the user sends out chakra in a wave that will bounce off of other bodies of chakra and send back the same signals telling the user were any opponents in the area are
    NOTE:can only be used by Iruka Umino due to his Kekegenkie.
    user must take two turns to recharge.

    ~ WTF. Iruka doesn't have a friggin Kekkei Genkai. Declined. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-11-2010 at 08:18 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Teh-Tobz View Post
    ( Ito kugutsu bunshin ) - Thread Puppet clone
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short ( threads that control clones can go Short - Mid )
    Chakra cost: 25 ( - 5 per clone every turn )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Kakuzu sends out multiple threads out of his body producing mass of threads that take form of the Kakuzu itself with every detail from his body. The mass of threads is a mindless clone that cannot control itself so the Kakuzu has to send very thin, transparent threads that conduct chakra from his fingers into the the mass of threads making him to be able to control this/these clone(s). The clones are controlled like puppets but a regular eye can't see those transparent, thin threads so in order to see them the opponent must have dojutsu.
    Note:
    - Can be used twice ( Takes one use of clone jutsu per usage )
    - Clones can use everything that user is able to do along with sending threads at opponent
    - Threads can be seen only with dojutsu
    - User cannot perform any handseal jutsus while manipulating clones
    - Clones can use handseal jutsus
    - The threads are weak to lightning and wind attacks
    - The user can handle maximum of three clones at the same time
    \

    ~ Declined ~


    Summoning Animal: Blackbirds
    Scroll Owner: Teh-Tobz
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Akuma

    ( Kuchiyose: Akuma ) - Summoning jutsu: Fiend
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 ( - 5 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User will make Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram handseals and/or wipe blood on their tattoo 黒 ( Black ) Summoning Akuma the giant blackbird that has eye patch and red stripe on its back. He also wears Rain headbands like Kakashi's dog summonings. It is able to fly in great heights and its feathers are hard like steel so they can be fired by it like any other projectiles. The bird also is able to use Wind jutsus up to A - Rank.
    Note:
    - Can be summoned twice
    - Costs - 5 chakra per turn
    - The bird is able to talk with user just like most of the summons
    - It can use A - Ranked wind
    - Only Kage ranked ninjas and over can summon the Akuma just by wiping blood on their tattoo
    - No clones can be used while Akuma is in play


    ~ Same abilities as other summons, change it ~
    ( Kuchiyose: Akuma ) - Summoning jutsu: Fiend
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 ( - 5 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User will make Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram handseals and/or wipe blood on their tattoo 黒 ( Black ) Summoning Akuma the giant blackbird that has eye patch and red stripe on his back. The feathers and wings of akuma are hard like steel so it can protect user from incoming attacks ( Up to A - Rank ) once without turning into cloud of smoke. The Akuma also is mostly used for stealth missions so it has the ability to split into eight smaller blackbirds. The Akuma can be used for flying and it has the ability to use Genjutsu and Ninjutsu Up to B - rank.
    Note:
    - Can be summoned only once
    - Can block B - Ranked attack only once
    - It has ability to split into eight smaller blackbirds

    ~Declined~ Remove either the genjutsu or the ninjutsu part.
    ( Ito Bunshin ) - Thread clone
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Kakuzu will let out threads from his body parts that'll form a mass of threads in form of person that solidifies into perfect copy of him that's able of using Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu and thread attacks but is unable to use elemental ninjutsu. When the clone is destroyed it'll revert into threads.

    ~Declined~
    ( Genjutsu: Tenbun no Megami ) - Illusion technique: Gift of the Goddess
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40 ( - 10 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A ( - 10 when technique ends + Damage that's done )
    Description: User cast an illusion around him preventing sense of pain to work and allowing user to keep on fighting no matter what is done to him. When the jutsu is in play the only way to stop the fight is to either incapacite user or damage his brains enough that he can't keep on fighting. This jutsu will grant user the full immunity to pain for one turn and when the jutsu is over the user will suffer - 10 damage + the damage that's done to his body when this jutsu was in play. The user is also paralyzed when the jutsu ends.
    Note:
    - Can be used only once
    - No Genjutsu allowed in whole battle after usage
    - Costs - 10 damage + the damage that's done to him while this jutsu is in play

    ~Declined~ don't resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton:Mizu Sheru)-Water Style: Water Shell
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage Points: 5
    Description: Water that covers and encases the enemy in from head to toe.
    *note- can be only thaught by Kaziname


    ~approved~
    (Suiton: Mizu Kaseki)-Water Style: Water Petrification
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: User molds water chakra in his right hand. After that he performs two one-handed handseals with his left hand to synchronize his water chakra, in right hand, and water that's encasing the opponent. Then user aggressively closes his right hand thus crushing opponent with water.
    *note- can be only thaught by Kaziname

    ~Declined~

    (Suiton: Suikyū Tai )-Water Style: Water Sphere
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A small sphere of dense water that protects the user from attacks.
    *note- can be only thaught by Kaziname
    *note- if user is Tobirama Senju, water presence is not needed

    ~Declined~
    (Suiton: Tsunami)-Water Style: Tidal Wave
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: A huge wave of water that can cover a large area and drown the enemy in water.
    *note- can be only thaught by Kaziname
    *note- needs huge water source

    ~Declined~ poor description
    (Suiton: Mizu Fujō )-Water Style: Water Levitation
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A dense cloud of water that levitates the user to protect them from harm or to give then an air advantage.
    *note- can be only thaught by Kaziname
    *note- if user is Tobirama Senju, water source is not needed

    ~Declined~
    Summoning Animal: Plancton
    Scroll Owner: Kaziname
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Plancton
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    (Kuchiose: Purankuton )- Summoning Jutsu: Plancton
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After user performs needed handseals he summons Plancton. When summoned Plancton is big as a basketball ball. He is solely consisted of chakra so he has no physical abilities whatsoever. Once user signes the contract, black tattoo appears on his left arm. Tattoo is actually a seal that serves as catalizator for merging of user's left arm and Plancton. Once merged user can manipulate water with his left hand up to mid range.
    *note- can be only thaught by Kaziname
    *note- can be only used once in battle

    Over the weekly limit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    first visit ...

    Mokuton : Yorozu Heiki no Sendo ~ Wood Release : Thousand hands of Death
    Rank : A
    Type : Offense
    Range : Long
    Chakra Cost :30
    Damege : 60
    Discription : The user concentrates wood release on the earth by molding chakra and 2 hand seals (Boar and Snake ) which is easy to do in just a second and then 10,000 wood pillars arise and hits opponent with brutal force .
    *Note : Only can be used by Akash 08*


    is that good emp ?!
    ~Declined~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Kazefunka) - Wind Release: Wind Eruption
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will send wind chakra underground and then he will do a hand seal. Right after the hand seal, a great quantity of wind with 5 metres wide will erupt from the ground, cutting and hitting everything up to 20 metres high with slicing winds and rocks that were dragged by the wind. This jutsu has the advantage of tricking the opponent: on the moment before the wind erupt, the earth will obviously start to tremble, making the opponent to think he's being target of a doton jutsu and thus, he'll possibly use a raiton to counter it when in fact is a fuuton, which has elemental advantage over raiton and because of that, it will overpower -almost for sure- the opponent's lightning technique. However, an accurate sensor who can see chakra flowing underground won't be tricked that easily.
    *Usable twice per battle

    ~Declined~ too big an area for a Arank
    (Fuuton: Kaze Kyuushuu) - Wind Release: Wind Suction
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will do a hand seal and create a vacuum behind the opponent. This vacuum amplifies user's wind jutsus, giving them +20 damage points, however, the user will need to spend +5 chakra every turn to maintain the vacuum behind the opponent.
    *Usable twice per battle

    ~Declined~ that much extra damage on an a rank?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Nomi zumatika ) Flea zumatika

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Range: Long
    Description: The user summon Nomi and focus fire chakra on nomi body after the user finish focusing chakra on nomi body nomi is able to throw fire with glue from his mouth but nomi can only do fire from D to C rank. Nomi can do a combo with fire and glue attacking the opponent. Nomi is able to see through anything because nomi eyes have a special abilities to see chakra flow as able to see where the user is.

    Note: Nomi is not able to block Mayfly.
    Note: Only Obito-Uchiha can teach this jutsu.
    Note: Nomi can see chakra flow and where the opponent is even with mist.

    ~Declined~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by sabbyxx View Post
    (hibikibasho)-echolocation
    Type:supplamentary
    Rank:B
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:
    Description: the user sends out chakra in a wave that will bounce off of other bodies of chakra and send back the same signals telling the user were any opponents in the area are
    NOTE:can only be used by Iruka Umino due to his Kekegenkie.
    user must take two turns to recharge.

    ~ WTF. Iruka doesn't have a friggin Kekkei Genkai. Declined. ~
    (hibikibasho)-echolocation
    Type:supplamentary
    Rank:B
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:
    Description: the user sends out chakra in a wave that will bounce off of other bodies of chakra and send back the same signals telling the user were any opponents in the area are
    NOTE:user must take two turns to recharge this jutsu
    only sabbyxx can teach
    im resubmiting but if you dont want me to again thats fine i just took away the iruka's KG thing because that is what you stated the mestake with i was.
    ~Declined~ Don't resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom Weapon: 1,000 Ton Warhammer of Akimichi Pride
    (Shuukan Buki: Senmegaguramu Sensoo-Kanazuchi o Akimichi Jiman)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50 (-10 per turn active)
    Damage: 100 (-10 to user per turn active)
    Description: The user removes a scroll and summons this weapon. This weapon is a gigantic warhammer thats easily as long as three trees stacked on top of each other. As its name suggests its weight is immeasurable. A normal shinobi would have no chance of budging the weapon. The hammer itself is crafted from specially made metal which was imbued with concentrated earth chakra. This gives the weapon improved strength and durability and an elemental advantage over water techniques (able to stop rank A and below techniques by being swung through it). However due to the earth chakra it is weak to strong and damaging lightning techniques. Because of its size and earth chakra when the weapon is slammed against the ground it can cause the earth to shake and crack under its power. This can cause the opponent to be thrown off balance making it difficult to preform complicated hand seals (S-rank and above). Because of its immense size and weight this weapon is only usable by the Akimichi clan after using their Super Body Expansion technique. After the Super Body Expansion technique wears off the weapon will return to the scroll as well. Even with the super body expansion technique the hammer is difficult to wield making the user lose chakra and health each turn because of the strain put on the body.
    ~ Usable only by Akimichi clan members.
    ~ -10 Chakra and Health per turn in use.
    ~ Lasts for the remainder of the super body expansion technique.
    ~ Able to stop rank A and below water jutsu.
    ~ Able to produce tremors in the earth throwing the opponent off balance, making them unable to produce hand seals for Rank S and above techniques. (This is only usable twice while the hammer is out and lasts for two moved. It also cannot be used in back to back turns).
    ~ Must be taught by Hypnotiq.
    ~Declined~ just no
     
         
    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 04-12-2010 at 03:57 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Rank: B-S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short/Medium/Long
    Chakra cost: 20-40 (+10)
    Damage points: 40-80 (+10)
    Description: A stance where two swords are held parallel so that the tips are pointing to the users right or left side, this stance is like a pre-requirement to perform 4 slightly different moves. Each of this moves can be used individually or in combination:
    • Tourou - Climbing a Tower - : The user starts to focus chakra into his legs and uses all his leg muscles to jump into the air. While jumping the user slashes vertically upwards (while holding them parallel). During the jump the user focuses chakra in his swords, which is released upwards as two blade-shaped projectiles. The opponent is not only cut, but also thrown into the air.
    • Ohtourou - Reply Climbing a Tower - : While in the air, the user slashes vertically downwards (while holding them parallel). The gravitational force increases the strength of the attack. During the slash the user focuses chakra in his swords, which is released downwards as two blade-shaped projectiles. The opponent is not only cut, but also blasted into the ground.
    • Hirameki - Flash - : While on the ground or in the air the user swings his swords horizontally (while holding them parallel) from the left or right. During the slash the user focuses chakra in his swords, which is released as two blade-shaped projectiles.
    • Samon - Sand Drawing - : While on the ground or in the air the user slashes diagonally up or down from the left or right (while holding them parallel). During the slash the user focuses chakra in his swords, which is released as two blade-shaped projectiles.


    Each variation can be done individually or in combination with others. One move = B-rank, two moves = A-rank, three moves = S-rank and four moves = S-rank + 10 damage. The longer the combination, the faster the speed is of each individual attack. It counts as one jutsu.

    *Can only be taught by Caliburn*
    *The S-rank can only be used twice per battle and it costs +10 chakra as the speed of each individual move is increased*
    *When using Butai Kyueen, the elemental chakra is also released as two blade-shaped projectiles*




    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 04-12-2010 at 11:01 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Caterpillars
    Scroll Owner: Hypnotiq
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Monarch
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    (Kuchiyose: Monarch) Summoning Jutsu: Monarch
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Monarch is the Caterpillar Boss and is the size of Katsuyu. He resembles the typical Monarch Caterpillar which has alternating black, yellow and white stripes along its body. Due to its size and endless hunger it is able to eat through wood techniques up to rank A. It is also able to shoot silk from its mouth which can be used for both offensive and defensive purposes. The silk is strong against water and lightning techniques but is weak against fire and wind techniques.
    ~ Must have a signed contract with Caterpillars
    ~ Can only be summoned once per battle.
    ~ Lasts for four turns once summoned, or after taking damage from 2 S-ranked attack.
    ~ Picture:


    ~ Approved ~


    (I know caterpillars may be similar to butterflies but I asked Rei about it and she said it would be fine.)
    ~Leaving for Emp~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-13-2010 at 05:48 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Kuchiyose: Salanei ) - Summoning jutsu: Giant-Hell Kitty


    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 ( -3 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User will make Rat → Dog → Bird → Ram → Kitty handseals
    and place their hand on the ground. Afterwards Salanei the giant hell Kitty
    will appear with a loud "mew". This summoning has many effects added to
    Salanei herself. Other summonings and ninja that are battling are put under
    some sense that makes them almost refuse to attack their enemy or the kitty.
    Salanei makes Fire jutsu weaker when it is on the battlfield.
    Note:
    - Can be summoned only once
    ~Declined~ i don't think theres a kitty handseal and no
     
         
    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 04-12-2010 at 04:05 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu:Hana Heisa)-Ilussion Technique:Closing Flower
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user casts an illusion were the opponent appears to be on top of a Sakura flower, the flower then quickly closes with the opponent inside compressing it till the flower explotes leaving the enemy with serious damage and cuts from the sakura petals.
    Note:Can only be used/taughted by Konohas Yellow Flash
    Note:Can only be used once per battle

    (Fuuton: Heigou Shippuu)- Wind Style: Merging Hurricanes
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:60(80 if merged )
    Description:After doing the appropiate hand seals,the user will form two small hurricanes(A-rank) at the same time, these will advance towards the opponent at a very high speed and if they clash with the enemy , it will be blown away with cuts on its body.The user can direct the hurricanes to merge themselvs to form an S-rank hurricane of bigger size, this huricane travels at the same speed as the previous ones but is more destructive.
    Note:Can only be used/taughted by Konohas Yellow Flash.
    Note:No wind jutsus in the next 2 turns.
    Note:Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note:The A-rank hurricanes power is the same as any A-rank jutsu(60 damage),if merged, the power of the hurricane increases and becomes of an S-rank jutsu(80).

    first jutsu in 1:50
    second jutsu in 3:50
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    ~Both Declined~ you do realize that if they actually exist in some way you can't make them as a custom?
     
         
    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 04-12-2010 at 04:07 AM.

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