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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fluid Fist Style
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage: N/A (+10 to taijutsu and suiton, -20 to katon)
    Description: The user relaxes both their body and mind by circulating suiton chakra throughout their body making their movements extremely fluid. By keeping their body loose and their mind calm they are able to increase their reaction speed against incoming attacks to the level of a 3-tomoe sharingan user. This doesn't mean that the user can predict movements, or see things in slow motion, but once they see what is happening they can react extremely fast. While using this style the user focuses on using the opponent's momentum against them to turn their attacks into their own downfall. It involves mostly counters and throws that keep the opponent off balance and is very effective against aggressive opponents. Due to the added suiton chakra throughout their body they gain a boost in power to their water attacks, but lose a significant portion of the power for their fire attacks. They also become more vulnerable to fire attacks.
    ~User gains +10 damage to taijutsu and water techniques.
    ~User loses -10 damage to fire techniques while the opponent gains a boost of +10.
    ~Lasts for 5 turns once activated.
    ~Must be taught by Bahamut.
    (If you've seen Spike fight in Cowboy Bebop this would be similar to his style. Here:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JdurI3z0J-k)


    Water Style: Leviathan of the Depths
    (Suiton: Leviathan Umi no Fukami)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 60 (-30 if kept for a second turn)
    Damage: 120 (-20 to the user, -20 more if kept a second turn)
    Decription: The user preforms a series of hand signs and then focuses a massive amount of chakra into a large source of water and create a huge sixty foot long serpent of water. The leviathan can be controlled at will by the user and as long as it is in contact with a water source it can be regenerated. This creature can leave the water source but cannot regenerate if it does. The user can use this beast to defend against incoming attacks, devour the opponent, or do both at the same time. While the leviathan is being controlled the user cannot use any other jutsu and it will last a maximum of two turns. Because of the amount of chakra needed the user will lose an extra 30 chakra if the leviathan is kept for an extra turn. The use of such massive amounts of chakra also damages the user.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~No water techniques can be used for the next two turns.
    ~Does -20 damage to the user, -40 if kept out for an extra turn.
    ~Costs an extra 30 chakra to be kept out an extra turn.
    ~Can regenerate if in contact with a large water source.

    ~ Both Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-21-2010 at 11:48 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by HiddenShadowNinja View Post
    (Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: (-30 to user per turn no matter which choice) (See spoilers below for damage effects for each choice)
    Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. The user is able to choose and gain a trait from one of three different snakes.
    First, the user's muscles become able to move with the striking speed of a Death Adder which happens in 1/4 of a second. This allows the user to move with speed equivalent to the 4th gate. However, once the effects of this jutsu wear off, the users speed will decrease for 2 turns by 2 ranks below what they are now (To S-class rank speed for Kage, etc) due to exhaustion.
    Second, the user gains the ability to inject the venom of a Belcher's Sea Snake into their opponent through either their teeth, or their finger nails.(target takes -20 per turn if injected with venom and the venom lasts 5 turns)
    Or third, the user gains the strength of an Anaconda, which can constrict with a total strength of 4000kg.(user gets +40 to taijutsu) Once the effects of this jutsu wear off the users taijutsu be decreased by 20 because of exhaustion for 2 turns.

    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
    *The user can only choose 1 trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
    *After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
    *The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns


    (Okay, I added restrictions for the first and third ones (in the spoilers). The second, I don't think is that OP so I left it as it was. If you think there needs to be any more restrictions just let me know, or you can add them in if you want. And this is mainly to try and combat all those Raikage bios lately. Which the armor gives +60 to taijutsu, +40 to lightning, 4th gate speed, and lasts 4 turns...so if this is declined for being OP...than the armor needs to be seriously resubmitted and less powerful lol .)
    ~Declined~ I see no problem with this, except for the choosing armor abilities. why not instead of having the armor have three different abilities, why don't you create three different armors with the different abilities since that would be more in tune with what we would see in naruto

    Resubmitting using Rag's suggestion of making them 3 sperate jutsu.

    (Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike (Version 1-Venomous)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: (-30 to user per turn)
    Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. Using this jutsu, the user is able to gain a trait from a specific snake. In this version, the user gains the ability to inject the venom of a Belcher's Sea Snake into their opponent through either their teeth, or their finger nails.(target takes -20 per turn if injected with venom and the venom lasts 5 turns)
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
    *The user can only use 1 Snake Strike trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
    *After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
    *The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns


    (Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike (Version 2-Strength)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: (-30 to user per turn)
    Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. Using this jutsu, the user is able to gain a trait from a specific snake. In this version,the user gains the strength of an Anaconda, which can constrict with a total strength of 4000kg.(user gets +40 to taijutsu) Once the effects of this jutsu wear off the users taijutsu be decreased by 20 because of exhaustion for 2 turns.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
    *The user can only use 1 Snake Strike trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
    *After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
    *The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns


    (Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike (Version 3-Speed)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: (-30 to user per turn)
    Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. Using this jutsu, the user is able to gain a trait from a specific snake. In this version,the user's muscles become able to move with the striking speed of a Death Adder which happens in 1/4 of a second. This allows the user to move with speed equivalent to the 4th gate. However, once the effects of this jutsu wear off, the users speed will decrease for 2 turns by 2 ranks below what they are now (To S-class rank speed for Kage, etc) due to exhaustion.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
    *The user can only use 1 Snake Strike trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
    *After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
    *The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns


    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 07-23-2010 at 09:42 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Eddy-kun View Post
    (Hakke Ryu Ha):[Pure Chakra Energy Blast]
    Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage Point:90 (-10 to user)
    Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan ability to emit Chakra beams, and putting to the user understanding in the control and focus of chakra. A powerful and destructive technique, the user will focus an amount of chakra into one of the user palms (or two if the user needs more power). Finally, aimed towards the user target, this chakra will be released right towards them. The Chakra fires out like a powerful energy blast, taking the appearance of a 6 inch wide bright bluish white beam of light, almost laser like. This blast is very powerful, it could blast through solid rock creating a hole 1 foot wide in the blink of an eye. However the rays are visible to everyone. Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt Chakra.
    -Can only be used 1 times per battle.
    -Harms the user solar plexus, thus the additional damage. -10 to user
    -The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.


    "The speed of the attack is tremendous, allowing only Sharingan of 3 tomoes users to see through it." [I took that out making it avoidable to those without Sharingan]

    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40 (+ 5 for each needles)
    Damage Point:80
    Description:A Jyuuken technique requiring relatively strong Chakra Control. The user raises concentrates and created lager needle like Chakra projectiles from any tenketsu in their Body. These Chakra needles are sharp and pierce into flesh and bone. When hitting a target these needled disrupt the targets chakra flow in the area where they hits. These needles are very long and hair thin, but contain enough concentrated chakra to be slightly visible to the normal eye as a thin shining sliver but speed of the attack is tremendous, allowing only Sharingan of 3 tomoes users to see through it. The user has to physically throw the chakra senbon.
    -Only 2 can be made at a time.
    -Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    -Must wait one whole turn before using again.
    -Harms the user thus causing damage -10 to user
    -The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.


    ~ De-power both ~

    Only For Emp To Check ^^ Also add anything you think is needed to make it approve >.> really want these custom ^^
    (Hakke Ryu Ha):[Pure Chakra Energy Blast]
    ]Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage Point:90 (-10 to user)
    Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan ability to emit Chakra beams, and putting to the user understanding in the control and focus of chakra. A powerful and destructive technique, the user will focus an amount of chakra into one of the palms. Finally, aimed towards the user target, this chakra will be released right towards them. The Chakra fires out like a powerful energy blast, taking the appearance of a 6 inch wide bright bluish white beam of light, almost laser like. However the rays are visible to everyone. Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt Chakra should it strike the opponent at a tenketsu.
    -Can only be used 1 times per battle.
    -Harms the user solar plexus, thus the additional damage. -10 to user
    -The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.

    ~ Approved ~

    "The speed of the attack is tremendous, allowing only Sharingan of 3 tomoes users to see through it." [I took that out making it avoidable to those without Sharingan]

    (or two if the user needs more power).I took that out and added the user can only created one now!

    Also on the jutsu below I remove slightly visible making it visible also I remove Sharingan of 3 tomoes users to see through it. And just made it Sharingan users been able to.

    (Taibu Sekishokyuu Streaking Ryu Ha) Chakra Needles|Chakra Senbons
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40 (+ 5 for each needles)
    Damage Point:80
    Description:A Jyuuken technique requiring relatively strong Chakra Control. The user raises concentrates and created lager needle like Chakra projectiles from any tenketsu in their Body. These Chakra needles are sharp and pierce into flesh and bone. When hitting a target these needled disrupt the targets chakra flow in the area where they hits. These needles are very long and hair thin, but contain enough concentrated chakra to be visible to the normal eye as a shining sliver but speed of the attack is tremendous, allowing only Sharingan of 3 tomoes users to see through it. The user has to physically throw the chakra senbon.
    -Only 2 can be made at a time.
    -Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    -Must wait one whole turn before using again.
    -Harms the user thus causing damage -10 to user
    -The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.

    ~ Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 04:00 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Kage Shuuren (Shadow Drills)

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: With the Ram sign held up, the user can extend their shadow outward into multiple linings (five at the max) in which can emerge from the ground and constantly spiraling. Each spiraling shadow can easily penetrate anything or technique of A rank and lower, meanwhile if all shadow drills merge together into one large drill then it can penetrate any defense of S rank. Shadow drills can easily merge or separate at the shadow's will.
    - 3 usage per battle

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    Kigi Kage (Sciophobia)

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Sciophobia means the fear of shadow. The user would extend his shadow outward but unlike other Shadow techniques, this one requires a set of handseals to activate. This shadow is enhanced with chakra (the same in which Genjutsu are activated) that upon looking at the shadow will trigger the opponent to fall into a illusion that may seem too real to not believe. Once in the illusion, the opponent will begin hallucinating of shadow that forms into their worst fear or nightmares. The best way to avoid falling into the illusion is to obviously not look into the user's shadow or if the user's in front view, it's suggested to look slightly upward just above the user's head. Even the slightest glance of the shadow of this technique can trigger the illusion, so it's best to look away from the ground as much as possible.
    - 1 usage per battle

    ~ Approved ~

    Jinteki Kage Mane (Personal Shadow Imitation)

    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Like the Shadow Imitation technique but much more simplier, the user would simply enhance a certain part of their body (feet, hands, etc.) in which all he does then is touch the opponent's shadow with that Shadow chakra enhanced body part.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    Kage Dansu (Shadow Dance)

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Ulitizing the Shadow Sewing Technique with the option to use the Shadow Imitation, the user would immediately send out multiple shadow lining, somwhere between 10-15, which emerges from the ground and attack the opponent in a frenzy manner. These shadows are not control by the user as the user just simply let the shadows out in attempt to distract or if lucky enough actually pierce the opponent. While dealing with multiple shadow linings, the user will sneak a shadow towards the opponent in attempt to trap and get a hold of the opponent to finish him/her off. This one shadow isn't like the other shadows because it cannot emerge from the ground and can only travel along the ground which can be undetected by the opponent. This technique is also very useful to defend against any taijutsu from any angle as Shadow linings emerge from all direction from the user's shadow. Even though the user cannot see behind him, it is pretty much guarantee that the shadow will aid the user from his blind spot as multiple shadows are swinging in a wildly way while the user's main focus is on the one shadow that is used to trap the opponent. Though ultilizing both of the clan's main technique, the user must of course hold up the Rat sign and cannot move.
    - 2 usage per battle
    - Due to a massive strain on the user for using two of the clan's technique at once, the user is restrained from using Shadow technique the next turn

    ~ Shouldn't be a jutsu, can be replicated by using two techniques ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 04:01 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton: Chidori Oonami ) – Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Purge
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses on the destructive power of the Chidori in their hand into the form of a static releaser or thruster. It has more specialized power than the normal Chidori and can cause damage to strenghten surfaces such as S rank causing severe damage on the body. With the static element one may produce lightning to propel one from one spot to another allowing the user to move within mid-air. It will appear as the lightning is flickering on and off when the user is actually producing the necessary lightning to stay a float. This jutsu is based on kakashi's ultimate jutsu in Naruto: Ultimate Ninja Storm and Infamous' Cole and his moved called static thrusters. Stating one could be striked with this jutsu.
    Note: As long as you use this jutsu it takes up a jutsu slot
    Note: YouTube - Naruto UNS (PS3) - Kakashi Ultimate Jutsu
    http://ggeek.net/wp-content/uploads/...-thrusters.jpg
    Note: One would still maintain the speed granted by chidori or lightning blade
    Note: One could use one arm but the speed would slow down by half

    ~ Canon jutsus should NOT be submitted here. I know you only just came back, so this one time is excusable, but no techniques based off canon jutsus will be approved, and the next time you will get the same punishment as the others which is an infraction and a ban from this thread for a week ~

    (Katon: Mera-Mera Hiken) Fire Style - Flame-Flame Fire Fist
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user turns his/her fist into flames and gathers energy looking as though he is about to throw a punch, when he/she finishes he/she launches a mighty column of fire shooting out of his/her fist forming a nearly 30 ft wide column and blasts raging at his target. This attack is so incredibly powerful that it is able to plow through several buildings without losing any speed with a single shot.

    ~ Declined ~

    (Suiton: Eki-Eki Arashi Semeku) Water release- Liquid-Liquid Storm Torture
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Suddenly water begins to swirl up from the ground around the opponent, giving them little chance to escape. If trapped inside, they experience dozens upon dozens of needles that shred the skin and puncture the muscles underneath or it can drag the user within the water trapping them and giving them no chance of fresh air. This jutsu takes effect substantially faster when performed on a target standing on a body of any type of water and is consequently much, much harder to avoid. The vortex can be created while on land through the water in the ground/soil/ water possessive like areas. The vortex having only a five-foot circumference.
    Note: use 1 times per battle

    ~ Approved ~

    (Katon: Mera-Mera Hibashira) Fire Style - Flame-Flame Fire Pillar
    Rank: B
    Type: supplementary/defense/Attack
    Range: short (long going upwards)
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user stomps on the ground. All within that stomp they had send and stored fire nature chakra from under him which than shoot straight upward in a column formation not enveloping the user, destroying a target above him and blowing flames around him preventing anyone from touching him momentarily. These flames are increasingly hot as they came from underground thus really becoming lava. The wideness of this jutsu is about short-mid range and can be controlled.

    ~ Declined ~

    (Raiton: Goro-Goro Hekireki Tataku ) – Lightning Release: Rumble-Rumble Thunder Clap
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense/Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: the user heats the air around him(not directly around him but more like in the air of the battlefield) with their lightning nature chakra until it explodes in a thunder clap. This is used to avoid and neutralize non-material attacks and a sudden surpise attack on the opponent. This jutsu isn't visible to the normal eye. Problem is it takes a two jutsus worth of time to perform leaving the user only to use this with a planned strategy and hence only one other jutsu can be used that turn
    ~ Use 2 times per battle, requires at least one turn gap between each use

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 04:05 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton: Shindou Shuuha ) Lightning Release: Electrifying Shock-wave
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user sends out a shock-wave of electricity that can repel enemies and objects. Victims caught in the shock-wave can get paralyzed and have numbness in their bodies.

    footage of what the jutsu would be like(starts around 1:18):
    YouTube - inFAMOUS Game Play in HQ - Shock Grenades and Shockwaves in HD

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    (Raiton: Rikou ) Lightning Release: Discharge
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user channels lightning chakra to his hand, but instead to concentrate, the user released their chakra causing a discharge a large amount of light. With this effect, the victim will be blinded by light at the same time hurting their ears with the huge screech noise generated by the lightning. The user can either use this jutsu to have opportunity to escape or attack.
    Note: Cannot use this jutsu 3 turns after use.

    (Ninpou: Bunshin Gokuin no Jutsu) : Ninja Art: Clone Seal no Jutsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After the user throws a special seal kunai, then he/she can make a clone spawn from seal kunai wherever the location, effective for long range combat. The user can also add an element to their clone(Lightning/Water etc..). Once a seal has been used once, its unusable again.
    Note: Can only make one clone from each seal.
    Note: Rei's rules applies with this jutsu like the normal Kage Bunshin.(usable 3 time per battle)

    ~ All Declined, do not resubmit the first or the last, explain the second clearly ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 07:30 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Nezumi: Rat armor! (Earth)
    Ran: S
    Chakra: 80
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The rat covers itself in earth chakra to create an armor of earth to cover itself for defence.

    *Must have rat contract.
    *Only rats can use.

    ~ Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 07:30 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    ( Taijutsu: Yubi no eiga ) - Hand to hand combat: Finger flick
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Close
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A ( + 20 when hits )
    Description: User puts his/her thumb over his/her middle finger. After that user concentrates mucles and aims for awhile user releases the thumb, releasing middle finger with massive strength, delivering a blow that's enough to make opponent bleed. Even though the bleed isn't anything near fatal the move can be combined with a item of somekind ( Rock or Coin .etc ) to create attack with the item that has incredible speed and is strong enough to make holes to wood and small rocks.
    Note:
    - Can be used four times per battle
    - Can only be used once every two turns.


    ~ Declined ~

    ( Katon: Guǐhuǒ ) - Fire release: Will o' wisp
    Rank: D - C
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 10 - 15
    Damage points: 20 - 30 ( the longer it's aimed the more chakra it costs and it hits less )
    Description: User concentrates chakra into two of his/her fingers ( Middle and index finger ) for two seconds. Once that's done the user will snap his/her fingers inorder to create small fire that's size of fire from lighter but it burns at 450 degrees. The fire is almost harmless since it's hardly used on anything expect but detonation of bombs and lighting cigaretters when you don't have a lighter.
    Note:
    - Can be used twice per battle
    - Can only be used once per every two turns


    ~ Umm...approved ? ~

    ( Doko no chikaku ni kuchiyose ) - Nowhere near summoning
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User bites own thumb and repeats two first handseals of summoning jutsu while someone else is using summoning jutsu. Once that is done user will distrupt the flow of chakra from the summoner, causing the creature/weapon that opponent's about to summon to be summoned outside of the spot in different place. This jutsu can also be stored into scroll by having kanji written on it and once it's opened the user must stomp on the scroll or tap it with limb. This jutsu is mainly used to distrupt the appearing place of other's summoning(s) and relocate them. The width of the relocating is max 50 meters - 350 meters depending on size of the summoning ( like Gamabunta or Manda ) and user's rank.
    Note:
    - Can only be used twice
    - Works max on one ninja at time
    - Three turns interval between each usage
    - User cannot have summon on field while using this jutsu.


    ~ Declined, nice idea but needs better explanation ~
    ( Doko no chikaku ni kuchiyose ) - Nowhere near summoning
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User bites own thumb and makes Boar, Dog and Bird handseals ( the first three handseals of summoning jutsu ) and releases chakra. Once that is done the user will distrupt flow of chakra sent from other opponent(s) using summoning jutsu(s), allowing the user to change the desired spot where the other(s)'s summoning would appear. The width depends on user's rank and the size of the creature/weapon. Small summons like Weapons, puppets and other summon creatures/weapons are easiest and fastest to distrupt, allowing the user to relocate them in distance of almost 100 meters. Unlike big summons such as Manda and Gamabunta take longer time to relocate but they can be transported further - up to 350 meters distance to orginal place where they were supposed to be summoned. This jutsu can also be used from a scroll that doesn't need blood to work. The scroll has Kanji written on it 輸 ( transport ) along with other marks and lines. The scroll is mainly used by user sending chakra into it and rolling it open ( this saves the user from spending time on handseals ). Other ways to operate it is by tapping open scroll with foot or some other limb.
    Note:
    - Can only be used twice per battle
    - Works on any summon
    - The width of relocating mainly is from 50 to 350 meters.
    - Requires atleast two turns interval before using again
    - User cannot have summons on field when used
    - Requires extremely good chakra control to use. Sannin ranked ninjas need medical ninja training inorder to use this but Kage and up ranked ninjas can use this even without training.


    ~ Declined, OPed ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: Hinote) - Fire Style: Ignite -

    Rank:S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This justu is used to ignite wind techniques. The jutsu heats the wind projectile more than normal fire.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
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    (Fuuton:Kyanonbo-ru) - Wind Style: Cannon Ball -

    Rank:Forbbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user makes several handseals, and gathers a massive amount of chakra, creating a huge ball of wind in a already pre-made tube. Another handseal is made, and the ball is shot out with enourmous force. The power is so great that the tube is crushed after the ball is shot. Also, as the ball is shot, the runs on the tube are activated, adding more chakra to the ball.
    *Note: Can only be used once.*

    ~ Declined ~
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    (Doton:Tsuchi Kuda) - Earth Style: Earth Tube -

    Rank:S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user makes several handseals, and a massive tube of earth appears in front of him. It looks like a gun tube, and it's directed towards the enemy. It's about 50x50 m large. Also, the inside walls of the tube are covered with ash. This is a mineral convertion from earth. Also, the outside of the walls is covered in signs, simbols and ancient runs.
    *Note: Can only be used once, and only lasts for one shot, as so much power is released.*

    ~ Declined, no ash. Ash is NOT a mineral conversion from earth. And no symbols and runes and stuff. ~
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    (Senjutsu:Seishitsu Karyou) - Sage Technique: Natural Chakra Overdose -

    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This is a highly advanced Senjutsu. It requires some time for the user to gather Natural chakra around him. The effect works exactly the opposite of other Senjutsu. Instead of gathering chakra inside, the user concentrates, and gathers natural chakra around him, and then after a series of handseals releases it through the area in high amounts. Everyone within Mid Range will be petrified. The petrification lasts only for one turn though, as the natural chakra they absorbed is not massive enough to turn them into stone statues completely.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle*

    ~ Declined ~
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    (Gendo Gigaisoi Gen'an) - Illusionist Arts: Slow Motion Corruption -

    Rank:A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Once the user has come to short range with the opponent, he makes one handseal, and releases chakra from his mouth, which flows through the nose and ears of the opponent, directly in his brains. Unlike other Illusions, which work with glares, etc, this works with a direct transfer of chakra in the opponents brains.
    This chakra then enters the opponents mind & reflex cells, and corrupts their DNK. The effect of this Illusion Art, is that the opponent brains transfer data to the body slower, or at least this is what the opponent thinks. As every part of the body depends on the brains, this jutsu puts the opponent in slow motion. This way, even when entering the EIG, the opponent can move at maximum speed of an S-Class ninja.
    Although, the chakra transfered is very dense, and leaves the user inable to use any other genjutsu or non-elemental ninjutsu.
    -------------------

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
    (Fuuton:Kyanonbo-ru) - Wind Style: Cannon Ball -

    Rank:Forbbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user makes several handseals, and gathers a massive amount of chakra, creating a huge ball of wind in a already pre-made tube. Another handseal is made, and the ball is shot out with enourmous force. The power is so great that the tube is crushed after the ball is shot.
    *Note: Can only be used once.*
    -------------------

    (Doton:Tsuchi Kuda) - Earth Style: Earth Tube -

    Rank:S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user makes several handseals, and a massive tube of earth appears in front of him. It looks like a gun tube, and it's directed towards the enemy. It's about 50x50 m large.
    *Note: Can only be used once, and only lasts for one shot, as so much power is released.*
    -------------------

    Edited.

    And I request that the Sage Mode Jutsu, shown in the manga untill now, are created, and added to the jutsu list.
    You don't need to "request", it's already been under construction for a month or so. Furthermore, if you want anything take it up with Kaito and stop posting it oon this thread like some sort of a prophet crying that the world will end
    You don't need to be harsh, just because I tried to remember about those jutsu. I just pointed it out because they were shown quiet some time ago, and because I had a feeling that they would not be included in the list, just like many other jutsu that are still missing. That's why I say that list is very missing.

    This is my resubmission for next week. Please, ignore it until then, I posted it now because I won't have time next week to come online. Thank you.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyouton: Hisobou sukin ) - Ice release: Ice hard skin
    Rank: A
    Type: Defence
    Range: N/a
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will focus the ice chakra throughout there body creating a layer of ice on there skin to protect them. The user can create weapons or sheilds on the arms to help defend, though the armour is weak against fire. If the armour comes into contact with a weaker water jutsu the user can use this armour to freeze the water stopping the jutsu but they must touch the water source to do so.

    Note: must be an ice user
    Note: Only i can teach
    Note: can be used instantly
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    (Hyouton: ketteiteki suto-mu ) - Ice release: Final storm
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defence
    Range: N/a
    Chakra cost: 70
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user concerntates alot of chakra into the surrounding changing the atmostphere to create special storm clouds under there control. The storm clouds will be infused with the users ice chakra, This ability opens up a huge hole in the clouds through which a large amount of snow falls down on to his opponent. As the snow comes into contact with the opponent, ice flowers sprout all over their body, instantly trapping them in a pillar of ice. The ice is unbreakable.

    Note: Can only be tought by me
    Note: No ice for the next 2 turns
    Note: This jutsu is fast

    ~ Both Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Hyouton : Aisu Torune-do | Ice Release : Ice Tornado]
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive/Deffensive
    Range : Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage Points : 80
    The user forms a great tornado of ice that heads forward, freezing everything it touches into large blocks of ice.


    ~ Umm..Declined ? ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Alucard View Post
    (Ninpou: Tara no Purotekutofuu) - Ninja Art: Protecting Seals of Tara
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Medium
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will do the hand seals and from his body, purple glowing seals will start to glow. After that they will expand through the ground and cover a medium range area around the user. These seals can then be manipulated as ropes at distance to either attack the enemy or defend the user.
    *Usable only once per battle and lasts up to four turns
    *User can leave the area with the seals, otherwise the jutsu will deactivate.


    ~ Nice idea, but make it using something else, maybe an element or pure chakra if you want ~
    lol i intended on making it with raw chakra, guess i have a poor description.

    (Ninpou: Tara no Purotekutofuu) - Ninja Art: Protecting Seals of Tara
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Medium
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will do the hand seals and from his body, purple glowing seals will start to glow. After that they will expand through the ground and cover a medium range area around the user. These seals will release chakra, ending by turning in pure raw chakra which can then be manipulated at distance to either attack the enemy or defend the user.
    *Usable only once per battle and lasts up to four turns
    *User can leave the area with the seals, otherwise the jutsu will deactivate.

    Think of those guys that 'control' the snakes playing the flute. This will work almost the same way but without the flute. Or just like you could make ropes float on the air and you could control them, but instead it's not ropes but raw chakra.

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kinjutsu:Ishi Nenshou Kairou)Forbidden Technique:Stone Combustion Chamber
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range:Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra cost:All the chakra you have left
    Damage points: ( Depends on how much chakra you have left)
    Description: The user summons a giant stone Chamber that is shaped like a Giant statue of Susanoo. The statue is summoned with its mouth opened. as soon as the user jumps in the mouth closes. Inside the user channels all of his or her chakra into the statue.The user has to focus for 2 turns to put all of thier hakra into the statue. WHen all the rest of thier chakra is in the staute(which results to the users death), the statue explodes and destroys the surrounding terrain.
    Chakra Cost-Damage ratio:
    10 Chakra- 20 Damage
    20 Chakra- 40 Damage
    30 Chakra- 60 Damage
    40 Chakra- 80 Damage
    50 Chakra- 100 Damage
    Note:This jutsu can only be used once per battle
    Note: If the opponent burns down the corridor with ameterasu, the jutsu is automatically cancelled and all the chakra that the statue took for the user is returned.


    ~ Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Mugen-sama View Post
    excuse me.First I wait 2.5 weeks for the contract to get appoved.Than I waited a month for my summones to get approved.And after all this time you now say I cant.Fine I will change it

    Summoning Animal: Silver Gorillas
    Scroll Owner: I am
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Goro
    (Kuchiyose no jutsu-Goro ) - Summoning jutsu -Goro

    Rank: A
    Type: Summoning
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon one of the silver gorillas taijutsu specialists Goro.Goro has metal armour around his body and non chakra projectailes attack wont affect him.Goro has big,long and strong arms that can break a human in half.Goro cant use ninjutsu but can use strong taijutsu.Goro is 2.2 meters tall

    *can use taijutsu moves up to A-rank
    *Can only be used for 6 turns
    *can be sommuned 2 times per battle
    Note:can only be taught by yashurik11


    (Kuchiyose no jutsu-Gorusu ) - Summoning jutsu -Gorusu

    Rank: S
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Gorusu.Gorusu is King Gorukus younger brother.Gorusu has metal armour around his body and c rank attacks and below wont affect him.Gorusu has big,long and strong arms that can break a humans neck if the enemy takes a direct hit.When gorusu was a child he always tryed to be better than his older brother.Since his chakra affinity is water he can use it up to S-rank.Gorusu is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.5 meters tall.

    Note:Can use Water up to S rank
    Note:Can only be summoned 1 time per battle
    Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu-Raikan ) - Summoning jutsu - Raikan

    Rank: A
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Raikan.Raikan has strong arms that can do siriose damage to poeple.But since he was a child he always was better in ninjutsu.That is why he can use lightning up to A-rank in such young years.Raikans chakra affinity is lightning.Raikan is a medium sized gorilla that is 2 meters tall.

    Note: Raikan can use lightning jutsus up to A-rank
    Note: Can only be summuned twice per battle
    Note:Cant be summuned on the next 2 turns
    Note:can only be taught by yashurik11


    (Kuchiyose no jutsu-buke no Shamash ) - Summoning jutsu - Shamash the samurai

    Rank: S
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Shamash.Shamash is a samurai that has special metal armour around his body and non chakra type attacks and all types of projectiles wont affect him.Shamash has big,long and strong arms that he uses to make strong slashes with his big katana sword.When Shamash was a child he always wanted to be a samurai,maybe this is because once when ninjas attacked there holy jungle on top of a mountain,a Gorilla swordsman saved him from a ninja that was aiming to kill him.Since his chakra affinity is earth he can use it up to S-rank.Shamash is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.7 meters tall.
    *Can only be used 1 time per battle.
    *Can use earth up to S-rank
    *Can use sword techniqs
    Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

    ~ SILVER Gorillas are not considered a separate contract. Make them chimpanzees or baboons or rhesus monkeys or sthg ~
    Lmfao, when I saw this I couldn't help but laughing.
    What's the difference between and regular gorrila and a silver gorrila............................ other than the color.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Bahamut View Post
    Fluid Fist Style
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage: N/A (+10 to taijutsu and suiton, -20 to katon)
    Description: The user relaxes both their body and mind by circulating suiton chakra throughout their body making their movements extremely fluid. By keeping their body loose and their mind calm they are able to increase their reaction speed against incoming attacks to the level of a 3-tomoe sharingan user. This doesn't mean that the user can predict movements, or see things in slow motion, but once they see what is happening they can react extremely fast. While using this style the user focuses on using the opponent's momentum against them to turn their attacks into their own downfall. It involves mostly counters and throws that keep the opponent off balance and is very effective against aggressive opponents. Due to the added suiton chakra throughout their body they gain a boost in power to their water attacks, but lose a significant portion of the power for their fire attacks. They also become more vulnerable to fire attacks.
    ~User gains +10 damage to taijutsu and water techniques.
    ~User loses -10 damage to fire techniques while the opponent gains a boost of +10.
    ~Lasts for 5 turns once activated.
    ~Must be taught by Bahamut.
    (If you've seen Spike fight in Cowboy Bebop this would be similar to his style. Here:
    YouTube - Kung Fu Rush)


    Water Style: Leviathan of the Depths
    (Suiton: Leviathan Umi no Fukami)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 60 (-30 if kept for a second turn)
    Damage: 120 (-20 to the user, -20 more if kept a second turn)
    Decription: The user preforms a series of hand signs and then focuses a massive amount of chakra into a large source of water and create a huge sixty foot long serpent of water. The leviathan can be controlled at will by the user and as long as it is in contact with a water source it can be regenerated. This creature can leave the water source but cannot regenerate if it does. The user can use this beast to defend against incoming attacks, devour the opponent, or do both at the same time. While the leviathan is being controlled the user cannot use any other jutsu and it will last a maximum of two turns. Because of the amount of chakra needed the user will lose an extra 30 chakra if the leviathan is kept for an extra turn. The use of such massive amounts of chakra also damages the user.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~No water techniques can be used for the next two turns.
    ~Does -20 damage to the user, -40 if kept out for an extra turn.
    ~Costs an extra 30 chakra to be kept out an extra turn.
    ~Can regenerate if in contact with a large water source.

    ~ Both Declined ~


    Fluid Fist Style
    (Ekitai Kobushi Yooshiki)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 each turn)
    Damage: +15 to Taijutsu
    Description: The user changes to a fighting stance where they relax their body and keep it from tensing up. By doing so they give their body the ability to react faster to the attacks of an opponent to the level of a two tomoe sharingan user. This fighting style works to use the opponent's momentum against them turning their energy into attacks against them. It uses a number of throws and strikes paired with counters to keep the opponent off balance while doing serious damage.
    ~Costs an extra 10 chakra each turn of use.
    ~Must be taught by Bahamut.


    Water Style: Leviathan of the Depths
    (Suiton: Leviathan Umi no Fukami)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 60 (-30 if kept for a second turn)
    Damage: 120 (-20 to the user, -20 more if kept a second turn)
    Decription: The user preforms a series of hand signs and then focuses a massive amount of chakra into a large source of water and create a huge sixty foot long serpent of water. The leviathan can be controlled at will by the user and as long as it is in contact with a water source it can be regenerated. This creature can leave the water source but cannot regenerate if it does. The user can use this beast to defend against incoming attacks, devour the opponent, or do both at the same time. While the leviathan is being controlled the user cannot use any other jutsu and it will last a maximum of two turns. Because of the amount of chakra needed the user will lose an extra 30 chakra if the leviathan is kept for an extra turn. The use of such massive amounts of chakra also damages the user.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~No water techniques can be used for the next three turns.
    ~Does -20 damage to the user, -40 if kept out for an extra turn.
    ~Costs an extra 30 chakra to be kept out an extra turn.
    ~Can regenerate if in contact with a large water source up to two times.
    ~Must be taught by Bahamut.



    Water Style: De-ionization
    (Suiton: De-ionization)
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage: 0 (-10 to user)
    Description: The user channels a large amount of chakra into a water source and manipulates it to remove the ions. Conductivity stems from the existance of these ions in which an electical current will run through. By removing these ions a person can render a water source non-conductive to electricity. This process takes careful and exact chakra control to manipulate the ions which takes a toll on the user. This process happens very quickly, almost instantaneously around the spot of the user, then spreads throughout the source of water. After completion the water source will no longer conduct electricty and will remain like this for three turns.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle.
    ~Can't be used again for five turns.
    ~Does 10 damage to the user due to the high level of chakra control required.
    ~Must be taught by Bahamut.


    Water Style: Swelling Oceans
    (Suiton: Fukuramumi)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 0
    Description: The user slams their hands onto a large water source and inserts a large amount of their chakra. This causes the water to become very rough with large swells as high as twenty feet, similar to the effects a storm would have on the open ocean. The opponent can easily stay afloat using chakra on their feet, but the constant rising and falling of the water levels make it very difficult to create complex hand seals for techniques S-rank and higher. The drawback of this technique is that it affects the user as well and also causes the the opponents to lose sight of each other periodically throughout the duration of the technique when swells come between them. The swelling oceans lasts for two turns once used.
    ~Can only be used twice per match.
    ~Lasts two turns once used.
    ~Neither the opponent or the user can create hand seals for techniques S-rank or higher.
    ~Must be taught by Bahamut.

    ~ All Declined, do not resubmit. They are mashes of existing techniques ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Fūton: Iyoku no Fūjin] ♦ Wind Style: Will of Fūjin
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (-10 to user)
    Description: The user takes control of the air around him for a matter of seconds, in which he collides all four winds against eachother, creating a great, and thick tornado that sucks up any type of Lightning and/or Wind technique. It can suck up even Kirin if timed correctly. It does not require hand seals.
    *Can be used only once per battle.
    *Wind techniques may not be used for 1 round.
    *Must be taught by Shigure
    .


    ~ Declined ~

    [Shado-Ha] ♦ Shadow of The Leaf
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user dissapears out of the enemies' visual field, reaching towards his back. Using the sun rays the user distorts his shadows all around the enemy confusing him, as the enemy turns around the user kicks him twice in the chest and turns around, elbowing him in the face.
    *Can be used only during sunlight.
    *Must be taught by Shigure.


    ~ You a Nara ? ~

    I need to be in order to play with the sun and shadows? O-O I was doing that when I was a kid. =[

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Earth Release (Kibaku, clay): mine field of despair.
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: All field
    Chakra: 85
    Damage: depends on the clay form used
    description: the user jabs his fingers into the ground and profusely pours chakra into it. the user conforms the earth in the area into a pliable and soft clay. the clay can then be used for detonations, but only in small locations (approximately 3 meters in radius). the clay is approximately 7 Feet deep. and when explosions are made they start from the bottom. leaving a crater that gradually begins to fill in with slow moving clay. ultimately leaving the under-earth exposed after the vast majority of the clay has been used.

    -Note: user must maintain contact with the ground while transferring chakra to the ground
    -Note: takes 3 turns of preparation
    -Note: can only Be Used Once
    -Note: Usable to all Clay forms
    -Note: no Ninjutsu for the rest of the Battle (chakra depletion)
    -Note: Clay lasts for 4 turns before it dries up and becomes unusable
    -Note: only clay jutsus may be used while the minefield is active.
    -Note: clay areas do not discharge when introduced to S-rank lightning
    -Note: after diffusion the clay becomes sticky and unresponsive.
    -Note: all explosions must be triggered by the user, the mine is not motion sensitive.

    C-1 (Chakra= 15, Damage= 20)
    C-2 (Chakra= 20,Damage= 50)
    C-3 (chakra= 30,Damage= 70)
    C-4 (Chakra= 40,Damage= 90)
    C-0 (Chakra= all, Damage= No One Walks Away!)


    ~ Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kaze Kussetsu Subeta): Wind bending Sword
    Rank: s rank
    Type: supplementary; attack ; defence
    Range: self
    Chakra cost: 3 per turn
    Damage points: No direct damage unless it hits you .
    Description: The sword was made from an unusual stone and small wind currents go up and down its blade because of that it has the sharpness of the wind elements (more sharpened than other swords and can counter A rank lighting jutsus ) . It holds the power to make the user have pin-point accuracy and grants more speed . Also when the user holds this blade , he can use any Fuuton tip jutsu without handseals .
    Note: Can only be made by Uzumaki Chris .
    Note: Must have Wind affinity to use this sword .
    Note: Can counter A rank lighting jutsus just 3 times per battle .

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    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 07:38 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (X- kaunta )-X-Counter
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: As the opponent uses a fire jutsus on the use While the user has his X-Gloves on, he will hold both hands out forming a diamond shape with both his hands, Once the fire makes contact with the gloves the user will absorb the whole fire attack once absorb the next time the user uses a fire attack that fire will have its normal damage plus the damage of the opponent’s attack.
    Note: This can be used once in a battle.
    Note: Only work on S rank fire and down.
    Note: Must have gloves on

    (X- bakufuu )-X-Blast
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage:40
    Description: The user will fire off two blast of fire from each of his hands while the X-Gloves are on.
    Note: Can be used 4 times in battle.
    Note: Must have X-gloves on.

    (X- supea)-X-Spear
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will focus Chakra in to the X-Gloves, then the user will smash both hands together then he will slowly open them while opening his hands there will be a small flame in between his hands as he spread his hands apart the flame will start to get bigger and longer once the flame is be enough it will have the shape of a spear then the user will grab the spear with one hand once done the user will be able to throw the spear once the spear has been thrown it will fly at very high speeds, then once the spear make contact with the target or anything it will cause it to explode causing a blast of 10 yards' radius leaving a small crater
    Note: Can be used once in battle.
    Note: If attack happens in short range the user will be caught in the blast too.
    Note: user cannot perform Fire element next turn

    Custom Weapon: (waga sukai ringu) Mare sky ring
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points: N/A(Doubles gloves power)
    Description: The Mare Sky ring is one of the six strongest rings in the world. After the user has equipped himself with the X-Glovers he can then active the Mare sky ring .When the user infuses the rings with chakra the ring will then fusion with the gloves doubling the gloves power. So now if the user was to do battle with a fire jutsu of the same rank the X-gloves would easily overpower the other jutsus. Water jutsus used against fire jutsus with the ring on will become least effected, meaning that if the user uses a fire jutsu a rank higher than a water jutsu the fire should still beat it but if they are the same rank they will both cancel out.
    notes:
    The rings can only stay fusion with the X-gloves for 3 turns
    Only can be used with X-gloves
    Once the three turns are up the X-gloves will be unable to use any fire jutsu for 1 turns
    Can only be used Once fight
    Only can but used by Mato~kun

    WTH, I told you not to resubmit these ~_~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 07:38 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Kage Aite] ♦ Shadow Partner ♦
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 30 [20, each turn active]
    Damage: N/A [+20, for all the users jutsu]
    Description: Shadow partner is a special move based upon the shadow clone jutsu with allows it greater capability with major differences between the two but the same basic usage. The shadow partner is a being that is formed from the users shadow and stands behind the user at a diagonal angle. This "partner" is a exact copy of the user except they will only be a silhouette, like a shadow. This shadow mimics everything the user does, making doing a single basic jutsu turn into two jutsu, theoretically increasing the damage a user can do in an amount of time. Hitting the shadow partner will result in it fading away, then reforming itself in seconds. For each turn the shadow partner is activated, the user will lose a some amount of chakra.
    ~The Shadow Partner lasts for four turns.
    ~When destroyed, it simply reforms.
    ~It drains users chakra each turn.
    ~Usable only once per battle.
    ~Adds damage to users attacks.
    ~Faust can only teach this.


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    [Rated R~] ♦ Rated R ♦
    Rank: E
    Range: Self, or other
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 5
    Damage: N/A
    Description: An interesting technique, called Rated R. It formulates, a variation of variations, condensing the whole spirit of perverted-ness, into a epic thought of conjunction. When that happens, when the user touches or if someone else touches this person, they will feel their utmost perverted thoughts in every way conceivable.
    ~Usable only once, but lasts for the whole match.
    ~Faust can only teach this.


    ~ LMAO, but still Declined ~

    [Kuuki shissou] ♦ Air dash ♦
    Rank: B
    Range: All
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Air dash is a special move that allows a ninja to jump once, and while they are still going upward, push off of air to jump again in a different direction. It does not allow them to go upward again, only allowing them to dash forward in mid-air, backwards, down, left, or right. How this works is that while a ninja is jumping, they will force chakra out of their feel, forming a purple seal underneath them that look like a circle with 6 points like a star beneath them. From there they will have a split second to dash in any direction with the exception of up. This can be used once per jump from the ground and the dash is as fast as the second gate and can be used to dodge an attack.
    ~Usable only twice.
    ~Faust can only teach this.


    ~ Too much speed. Gates speed is not some random thing to be tossed into every move ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 07:40 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mouko Ryuu:Yoarashi) -Fierce Tiger Style:Night's Storm
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: By using the Sword of Anrui in its whip form the user hits the opponent with a extremely fast barrage of 20 strikes filled with Stunning lightning chakra.If the first strike doesn't land the user will stop striking
    Only Usable twice per battle

    ~ Approved ~

    (Fuuton:KamiKaze)-Wind Style: Divine Wind
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user forms a set of 3 hand signs then clap then a very strong wind bursts out from the user from all directions and destroys all that's in its path.
    Note:Can only use twice per battle

    ~ Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 07:40 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton: Dekoi no Hotaru ) Lightning Release: Firefly Decoy

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user snaps her fingers, releasing a bright lightning flash that stays in mid-air for 1 second, while blinding multiple enemies.
    The damages made to the user's eye last 3, total blindness on the first and partial blindness and blurry vision on the next 2.
    *Can only be used thrice per match. The user suffers from blurry vision after the second and partial blindness after the third time*

    ~ Needs better description ~

    (Katon: Kitsune no Uen ) Fire Release: Devious Fox

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user preforms a row of 5 handseals, and places her hand on the ground. From each finger, an extremely fast string runs along the floor, against the opponent, that then multiplies into a series of wires that engolf the opponent, locking his movements and burning him severely.
    *Can only be used twice per match*
    *No handseal using techniques same turn*

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 07:42 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Hyouton: saishuu aisu itonami (Ice Release: Final Ice Force)
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 80
    Description:
    The user, using ice chakra, converts all of their body into ice. While in this form the user is pure ice, and capable of freezing the air around him. Also, while in this form the user's body is contained in a seal in the center of their head, and if this seal is broken the user cannot revert to his original form, and will melt to death unless kept inside ice. the user can regenerate lost parts of his body in this form. After four turns the user has no choice but to revert. The use can only use ice jutsu while in this form.
    *user's ice jutsu are given a 20+ increase while in this form.
    *can only be used by ice users.
    *can only be used once
    *if seal is broken the user automatically dies in one turn

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 07:42 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Sword technique: great splitting of the flounder - (Kenjutsu: Hirame no gure-to heki)
    Rank: A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 0
    Description: Chojuro will infuse his chakra into his released hiramekarei, and will grab it one hand in each handle. Then, he'll pul his hands away while keeping his grip tight on the handles. The result of this it to split hiramekarei's blunt and sharp side. Ending this up in chojuro having his blunt hiramekarei in on of his hands and his sharp hiramekarei in the other.
    Notes: The splitting may only be done once per battle.
    Notes: This separation will last up to 4 turns.
    Notes: The user may reunite the hiramekareis at any desired time.
    Notes: The released form of hiramekarei may not be used for the next 2 turns.

    ~ Umm...Approved ? ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 07:43 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton:Raikyu Rendan)- Lightning Release:Lightning Ball Barrage
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    RangeShort-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The use will gather in his two hands his lightning release chakra to create two electrical balls of energy in each hand, that either he can run towards the enemy to attack or launch them at the enemy.

    ~ Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-23-2010 at 07:46 AM.

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