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    Rivaiasan

    Rivaiasan (complete)
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    Basic Information
    Name: Rivaiasan
    Nickname: Akuma no yōna mizu no renkinjutsu-shi (Alchemist of the Demonic Waters )
    Age:26
    Clan: /
    Looks: His features are virtually unknown to most because they are usually hidden behind an alabaster mask; all that his enemies see are his storm grey colored eyes which posses a mysterious sheen like black smoke within a silver moon. He wears white gloves, black leather soled boots instead of the commonly worn sandals, with all black attire under a flowing black cloak. When he does remove his mask he is shone to be a dark skinned man with angular features.. His hair is a deep black streaked with silver, pulled back in a pony tail that falls past his shoulder blades.

    Personality: He is both reserved and somewhat imposing because the mask he wears tends to give off a foreboding vibe, yet for the most part he is genteel and even charming, having a gift for words, yet he is far from empathetic and finds pleasure in the death of his enemies.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Unknown
    Village of Alliance: - Amegakure no Sato (Literally meaning "Village Hidden by Rain")

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Chuunin
    Specialty: /
    Elements: Wind - needs training
    Your ninjutsu:


    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)




    Background Info.
    History: Rivaiasan's parentage is virtually unknown, even to himself. All that is known is that he was left on the door step of a poor farmer in the village of Amegakure during the height of the Third Great Shinobi War. There was no note and no sight of the parents according to the village elders. For three short years he lived in relative peace until the village was caught up in the wars plaguing the five great shinobi nations and spilling over beyond the borders of the surrounding lands. One day a team of shinobi from Kirigakure no Sato (Literally meaning "Village Hidden by Mist"), infamously known as The Blood Mist Village, entered into his foster parents home in order to hide from a team of Konohagakure shinobi, tend to their wounds, and gather supplies. One of the shinobi, a young gennin, apparently trying to show off for his superiors, killed the farmer and his wife after they tried to refuse him entry, but unbeknownst to them Rivaiasan saw the whole gory business. Being filled with despair and rage he stepped from his hiding place confronting the gennin, killing them.
    The captain of the squad watched this with cold interest and after the deed was done took Rivaiasan in seeing his potential and his natural inclination toward revenge. He was at once recruited to be one of the guards for the Mizukage and became the youngest gennin in the history of the village being but five years of age. At the age of ten he was named a guard of the Mizukage and became a part of the Oinin Butai , or Hunter-Nin Corps. It was he who first detected and in turn thwarted the attempted attack upon the Mizukage by one Mimochi Zabuza, granting him great renown amongst the villagers who began to call him Mizukage no Tate, or the Shield of the Mizukage. Whilst on a secret mission for the Mizukage he abruptly disappeared without a trace. Currently he is considered a missing nin having abandoned his village.

    Other: It is now known that Rivaiasan's disappearance was due to his capture by none other than Orochimaru the traitor from Konohagakure. It was a chance meeting for Orochimaru, who was out seeking for ever more test subjects. Rivaiasan spotted him and remembering his image from the Bingo book, sought to capture the fugitive at any cost. What he hadn't realized was that Orochimaru's subordinate Kabuto was hiding in the shadows. Though Rivaiasan had taken on jonin level shinobi before as a chuunin he had never faced an opponent as intelligent and powerful as Orochimaru. He was whisked away to a facility in one of Orochimaru's secret hideouts.
    When Uchiha Sasuke released Juugo from his cage, Rivaiasan (being in the same facility) waited until the commotion had subsided and getting himself to freedom. He is now in search of his former captor, seeking revenge.

    Picture[s]: http://www.google.com/imgres?q=Rivai...9,r:4,s:0,i:98

    Theme Song and Background Music: /http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=enFRV...92150F97A07216

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    P.S Dropping Rivaiasan (incomplete) and Uzumaki Akira

    ~Approved~ edited stuff, no Oro experimentation and you do not fit the requirements for a Yuki bio. Your Akira bio can't be dropped as it hasn't been a month.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 12-22-2012 at 01:24 PM.

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    Re: Yuki Rivaiasan

    The correct translation to japanese of "Demon of the Blood-Soaked Snow" is Chimamire no Yuki no Oni

    And I think you need a image.

    But anyway, it's a cool bio
     
         

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    Re: Yuki Rivaiasan

    Thanks. I got that translation from Google so smf. And I suck at bringing the images up cause they don't allow HTMLs which sucks.
     
         

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