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    Zaku Abumi

    Zaku Abumi




    Nickname: Boomer.
    Gender: Male
    Age: 14
    Clan: None.

    Looks: Zaku had spiky, dark hair and dark eyes. He wore a beige shirt with two black stripes and three prints of the kanji for death (死, shi) down the front. His forehead protector had an attached happuri under the cloth rather than connected to the metal plate, resembling Yamato's. As with his team-mates Dosu and Kin, he wore a snake patterned scarf around his neck.

    Personality: Zaku is overconfident about his powers, especially the ones coming from his arms, as noted by Sasuke Uchiha and the fact he went into elaborate detail about his abilities. As such, he believed no one could beat him, and had a strong desire to win; however, he manages to be unaware of the enemies' plan until it is too late, as seen with his last opponent Shino Aburame. Zaku also has a tendency to say whatever he wants without regarding the consequences, as he calls Chōji Akimichi fat, and then had a difficult time blocking the enraged genin, and then tells Sasuke that he is the one who injured Sakura, leading to the crippling of his arms.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Otogakure
    Village of Alliance: Village Hidden in the Mist

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: S-Ninja
    Specialty: None.
    Elements: Suiton- Needs Training
    Your ninjutsu: Basic E-rank

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy.
    Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object.
    This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.
    This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.
    This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique.
    When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object.
    This can be a block of wood or even another person.
    This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background
    .Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    Background Info.
    History: Zaku and the rest of Team Dosu attacked Sakura during the second phase of the Chūnin Exams in their attempt to kill Sasuke. When Rock Lee arrived to help her, and used Front Lotus on Dosu, Zaku emitted sound air into the ground to soften his landing. Team 10 soon came to help as well, and took control of Kin's body, prompting Zaku to attack her to get her out of the way. Sasuke woke up during the attack, and noticed that someone had harmed Sakura. Zaku took credit for this, prompting Sasuke to dislocate his arm as punishment. Team Dosu promptly fled. n the third stage preliminaries, he was matched against Shino Aburame. Because Zaku's arm was in a sling from his encounter with Sasuke, Shino advised him to forfeit the match. Zaku refused, and instead attacked Shino with his one good arm. In attacking, Shino was given an opportunity to box in Zaku with bugs, forcing Zaku to choose between attacking him or attacking the bugs, leaving the other to attack Zaku from behind. Zaku chose to attack both, and pulled his other arm out of its sling. As Zaku prepared to blast the two opposing forces, his arms detonated, making them unusable and putting him in serious pain (in the manga, his right hand was even blown off of his body. In the anime, his arms were still severely damaged but still attached to his torso). As Zaku writhed, Shino revealed that the tubes in Zaku's arms had been filled with his bugs, causing the pressure of Zaku's attack to go inward when it couldn't escape.

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    Re: Edited Bio... Good enough?

    Cool ^^

    I miss Zaku and Dosu

    But I don't think he's 18
     
         

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    Re: Edited Bio... Good enough?

    Quote Originally Posted by Merita View Post
    Cool ^^

    I miss Zaku and Dosu

    But I don't think he's 18

    God damnit. I have to make it his actual age?

    This shit is finna piss me off.

    I like both of them, wish they progressed.
     
         

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    Re: Edited Bio... Good enough?

    Nice bio bro.
    My sig is funny as mess.What you said.
     
         

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    Re: Edited Bio... Good enough?

    Quote Originally Posted by Chris.. View Post
    Nice bio bro.
    My sig is funny as mess.What you said.
    ahaha that's some funny shit.
     
         

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    Re: Edited Bio... Good enough?

    Nice, bio.
     
         

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    Re: Edited Bio... Good enough?

    Nice bio but maybe a little elaboration on the history could make it a little better.
     
         

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    Re: Edited Bio... Good enough?

    Looks way better I'll vm you something.
     
         

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    Re: Edited Bio... Good enough?

    looks good brah! i miss him. he was a deadly ninja. he had some promise in him.
     
         

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    Re: Edited Bio... Good enough?

    i can tell that You put a lot of effort into making Your bio and i must say it looks Great
     
         

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