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      Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

      Scene starts with a look at the Sage

      Madara: activate

      the Sages eyes turn to life

      Naruto: the sage of 6 paths

      Kakashi: how.... is this possible?

      Madara: when you achieve the Rinnegan you can summon the Gedo Mazo currently the 10 tails, and upon it laid the Sage's body, he hoped to protect the world even in death by guarding the Mazo all this time... but hes really going to bring the end

      Naruto: ughhh Kurama is your Chakra back yet?

      Kurama: yea

      Naruto flashes into KM

      Obito: the sage... m seems Madara knew just about everything (whats he doing with the Sage)

      Madara: Obito, I would get out of the way if I were you I'm going to combine his attack with the Juubi's making it at full power.

      Obito slides in the ground and pops up where Madara is

      Madara throws a two finger hand sign and the Sage starts to move

      Madara: be prepared for annihilation. Juubi use a Complete Biju Bomb, Sage use almighty push to bring the shinobi army closer and hold them there

      The Juubi starts to form the Bomb and the Sage jumps near the Juubi starts to emanate his chakra

      Rikidou: this... jutsu

      Cut to Madara

      Madara: WHAT!!! (how is he talking)

      Obito: whats wrong Madara

      Cut to Rikidou

      Rikidou: this jutsu

      The Rikidou makes a 2 finger sign

      Rikidou: is nothing

      Cut to Naruto and Bee

      Kurama: Rikidou broke the Edo Tensi control Madara had

      Rikidou: the Juubi is revived, so am I... this means

      The Sage looks around seeing the devastation from the battle

      Rikidou: by the looks of it hes been here for a while

      Cut to Madara and Obito

      Madara: how did he break the control

      Obito: Madara how could you not control the Sage

      Madara: he broke the seal right away... how (shit seeing as he sees the Juubi as a threat, which means were going to be fighting him

      cut to Naruto and Bee

      Kurama: Rikidou over here its me Kurama

      Gyūki: I'm here too

      The Rikidou runs to where the are

      Kurama: uhhh dont you think we should stop the Biju Bomb

      The Rikidou throws his hand towards

      Rikidou: universal control

      The sage threw it way into the atmosphere

      Naruto: wow your on another level than Madara

      Rikidou: how are you two still sealed separate from the Juubi

      Naruto: they got portions of their power from over time

      Rikidou: m this is bad... even without it being full it can still turn full

      Naruto&Bee: WHAT!!!!!!

      Cut to Madara

      Madara: m good thing we still have the Juubi, and hes about to change

      Obito: lets hope you can control this one

      Madara walks over to Obito and places a hand on his solider

      Madara: say another word and I'll kill you, right now your just getting in the way of my world domination

      Obito: world domination.... I thought you wanted the Eye Plan

      Madara: I do... but the thing is humans cant survive without not eating, they will all die including you

      Obito: you lied to get me to exterminate the world...

      Madara: whats it matter you soon will die like the rest of them

      Obito: you know Madara, the Sage is said to take down the Juubi by himself, and your not much of a match on your own... hope you like where your going

      Obito teleports to where Kakashi is

      Kakashi: decide to change your mind

      Obito: all Madara ever said is lies, the plan, being able to be with Rin again... all of it lies

      Kakashi places a hand on Obito's sholder

      Kakashi: welcome back to the light Obito

      Cut to Rikidou and Naruto and Bee

      Rikidou: the only way to take the Juubi out is with a sealing tech.

      Naruto: same with that Madara guy

      Rikidou: we need to seal the monster away inside an alive shinobi

      Naruto: (Kurama what do you think
      Kurama: Naruto noone has held 2 tailed beasts at one time
      Naruto: its hasent been done before, well I'm trying it)

      Naruto: Ill do it grandpa Sage

      Rikidou: first you will need this to be able to hold the beast in,

      The sage walks over to Naruto and he touches Naruto's head

      Rikidou: use this to seal that Juubi inside you, after this I'll be gone forever this time, I leave this world to you

      Naruto's eyes are closed while the sage has his fingers on Narutos head, when the sage moves his hands Naruto opens his eyes and reveals a Rinnegan

      Naruto: yes Rikidou Sannin, I will save us all

      Rikidou: I know you will, this is the end of the dark times the world has seen, you will surpass me and bring about a brighter future... bye

      Naruto: an ill do it without fail

      as Naruto talked the sage vanished returning to the afterlife

      Cut to Kakashi and Obito

      Obito: Looks like the Sage even believes in Naruto, thats gotta say something huh

      Kakashi: we still have to fight the Juubi and Madara, the fight is just starting

      Naruto appears between them

      Naruto shouts: Kakashi, Bee, Guy, Obito were going to end Madara

      Naruto has a determined look on his face

      Naruto: Be-live it!!!

      Next time: The sealing of a life time!!!!
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

      Very nice keep it goin
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

      Ehhh...not liking the Rikkudo Sage and Obito switching just like that...Naruto won't get the Rinnegan in my opinion.

      I don't feel the ASF would casually let Obito switch sides.

      Dialogue isn't bad though!!!!Nicely done there Naruto feels like Naruto
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

      holy :o My jaw went collasped when I was reading >.> nice theory!!! hope that happen.. it pretty epic... if this happen about sage cut out being control.... which mean that one clear statement is that he really powerful.
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

      Really like he theory pleas make the next one
       
           

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      Hashi own Madara soon...
       
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      Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

      Kakashi places a hand on Obito's sholder

      Kakashi: welcome back to the light Obito

      ROFL I gave a 2 just because of this... ahahahahahahahahahaahah
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

      This would not happen at all. But I still like it!
       
           

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