honestly..i think u couldve done better
the color scheme on the render kinda ruins it
and needs more effects on the empty black parts...at leas a small amount
also the blue aura in front of the render is kinda irrelevant to the sig
as for the text...it looks better than the other sig....but could improve
ok..so u need some depth on ur sigs...use some c4d's..
since ur probably gonna be new to c4d's...here's c4d spamming vid.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BOHAw40qhNg
if ur looking for the best critique..maybe u can ask skorm..he's my GFX sensei :y
Pretty much what Carnage said. Just 2 things I want to say:
1. If you change the color scheme from blue or green to some colors of the render and add a bg like Carnage said, that could look really good.
2. I don't like the text. I prefer something more compact... could be only me. But having it closer to the focal (the head) would help. The way it is right now, you create a second focal point (the text) and placing it right at the edge looks a bit worse than it could (by moving it closer to the main focal), since the colors should blend pretty well.