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    The Coming of the Demon 2.0

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    "Who I am is not important, my message is."


    Name: 萃香宝月 Suika Hōzuki
    Nickname: Terror of the Bloody Mist
    Gender: Male
    Age: 35
    Clan: Hōzuki




    Looks:

    Suika was an unprepossessing man, with fair skin, dark brown hair and dark brown eyes, and a very slender build. He had a very pointed chin and a long face with nearly shoulder length hair, which he pulled back behind his head. With a height of around 6 feet tall, Suika wore a set of bronze and red armor, which he wore under and on his set of black, full length, robes complete with a hood that he would usually wear. His set of armor and robes were held together by strips of leather and fastened by metal rings that lined the sides of the front of his armor, and made up his belt.
    Suika had 4 identical, circular tattoos on his face, one on each side of his forehead, inches above his eyes, and one on each of his cheekbones, which were set high into his face.











    Personality:

    Suika is a scarred young man who wants nothing more than to avenge the untimely death of his parents and older sister. When fighting, he is a ruthlessly efficient who takes no pleasure in meaningless slaughter or bloodshed. He is immensely loyal to those he loves, however does not open himself to many people. Having been a child of the regime of the Bloody Mist, Suika is a brutally effective fighter who has been trained to have no remorse in combat, even when facing weaker opponents.
    Suika is a calculating shinobi, who never acts before thinking out a strategy, and when a strategy fails, he already has already thought 5 more steps ahead in order to alter any failed strategy into a working one.



    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Kirigakure
    Village of Alliance: Kirigakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: S-Class Ninja
    Specialty: None
    Elements:
    Water: Needs Training
    Your Ninjutsu:




    E Raink Jutsu:
    Name: (Bunshin no Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank: E
    Type: Supplementary
    chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: A clone made of the user that can move but (cannot use any jutsu) This clone is merely an illusionary Projection.

    Name: (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank: E
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra cost: N/a
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads through the air. This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it. This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    Name: (Nawanuke no Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type: short
    Chakra cost: N/a
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down (only works with non-chakra ropes.)

    Name: (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank: E
    Type: Short
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    Name: (Henge no jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 5
    Damage point: N/a
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponent.

    Name: (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: Kawarimi no jutsu is a basic technique. When in danger the Ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponent's attack.

    Name: (Kakuremino no jutsu) - Magic cloak of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage point: N/a
    Description: The user will put out a cloak that is pre-designed for their use. Then by using Ninjutsu they make the cloth bend into the background. Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank C and above).






    Background Info.

    Suika Hozuki was a child of misfortune. Born and raised in the time of the Bloody Mist trials in Kirigakure, he was brutally trained day after day to be a ruthless killer, which was extremely emotionally taxing. On top of the brutal training, Suika’s parents and older sister were all murdered while Suika was a very young boy.
    Having been the master of Ameyuri Ringo, an aspiring member of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist, and wielder of the twin Kiba blades, Suika’s mother was a powerful Kunoichi. Unfortunately, however her apprentice was her downfall, and in order to solidify her position in the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist, Ameyuri murdered her to claim her Kiba blades as her own and burned down Suika’s family home to be rid of any evidence of her crimes. Suika was only able to escape and survive by taking a secret exit out of his basement, hidden under the mats of the floor.
    Swearing revenge for his families’ death, his vengeance was cut short when Ameyuri died of an unknown disease before Suika was able to graduate from the academy. From that moment on, Suika devoted his life to becoming stronger than we was the previous day so as to never be caught off guard as his family was, however after his families’ untimely death, he has not been able to connect with others very well.
    Shortly after his secret escape, Ameyuri left Kirigakure with her new twin Kiba blades. With Ringo gone, Suika had nothing to fear within the village, and so could finally join the academy. Throughout his days in the academy he made little to no friends at all, as his new aversion to betrayal kept him too guarded to make any true friends.
    Over the years, Suika has honed his skills to the point that those who come across him in battle have given him the moniker of Terror of the Bloody Mist.



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    Battles:

    Won: 0
    Lost: 0


    ~Approved~ have fun RPing
     
         
    Last edited by Necromancer4276; 12-10-2012 at 12:32 AM. Reason: Updating looks.

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    Re: The Coming of the Demon 2.0

    nice bio
     
         

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    Re: The Coming of the Demon 2.0

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    nice bio
    Any advice? It's my second try and i don't really know what else i could do. Thanks too.
     
         

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    Re: The Coming of the Demon 2.0

    In my opinion you should take one of those pictures on top and put with the other picture in other's section but, other than that nice bio bro.
     
         

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    Re: The Coming of the Demon 2.0

    It Is a very Good Bio
     
         

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    Re: The Coming of the Demon 2.0

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    It Is a very Good Bio
    I looked all over, but i couldn't find out how i would know if it's approved... How is that done?
     
         

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    Re: The Coming of the Demon 2.0

    Since you haven't received any training whatsoever you can't have a specialty, you can only put stuff you mastered as a specialty o_o other than that it's not bad I suppose though I suggest you put the E-Rank jutsus in a spoiler, would look somewhat neater.
     
         

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    Re: The Coming of the Demon 2.0

    Quote Originally Posted by Tybone View Post
    Since you haven't received any training whatsoever you can't have a specialty, you can only put stuff you mastered as a specialty o_o other than that it's not bad I suppose though I suggest you put the E-Rank jutsus in a spoiler, would look somewhat neater.
    Done. Thanks for the advice.
     
         

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