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    [Rain Test] Frozenstein

    Greetings, Frozenstein

    I shall be proctoring your test using the following rules:

    -Rei's R&R
    -You may only use Water, Wind, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu and Genjutsu,
    -You may use custom jutsu only if they are related to the above forms,
    -Breaking the rules will result in the failure of the test,
    -I will be using all 5 elements and Dodai's KG, Lava, if need be.

    Please do not spam this fight. Only Myself, the participant (Frozenstein), Admins, Mods, and Senseis (upon request) may post here.

    I'll be using my Dodai biography for this test against you which can be found by clicking ~>this link<~

    Location: Barren wasteland with large boulders scattered through the area and no water source anywhere in sight.
    Please post your biography and I will begin with the first move.

    Best of luck to you!
     
         
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    Re: [Rain Test] Frozenstein

    Tashigi. Thanks for conducting the test!
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] Frozenstein

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    Tashigi. Thanks for conducting the test!
    You're welcome.

    Also note that Dodai will have the Lava Sword CJ on his back as stated in the bio, the hilt is over his right shoulder.

    We shall begin at Mid-range.




    *Dodai stands waiting on the battlefield, noting as Tashigi appears ready as she takes a stance, mid-range from himself. Knowing that this is a test of Water and Wind, Dodai thought he should start out with something simple and work his way up from there. He starts by performing the Tiger hand seal, using his chakra to turn the earth in front of himself and out under Tashigi into a flowing torrent of mud that carries her suddenly backwards, throwing her off balance at the sudden shift of the ground. Followed quickly by the Ram → Horse → Dragon hand seals, Dodai uses the mud to create a large dragon head that shoots a highly condensed ball of mud at Tashigi, aiming at her torso as she recovers from the sudden flow of mud throwing her off balance. Another hand seal is suddenly performed by Dodai, one certainly faster than any other he can perform with the other elements, as he then shoots a bullet of flame at the mud ball, combining with it to create a potentially deadly lava combination. The now pseudo-lava ball continues on it's path straight towards Tashigi, now be covered in mud from the flowing mud river*

    (Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After forming the needed hand sealTiger, the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.


    (Doton: Doryudan) - Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, the user will then perform the Ram → Horse → Dragon they can create a dragon-like head to fire concentrated mud at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent.


    ( Katon: Karyūdan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Bullet
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user exhales a flame breath from their mouth after making one handseal. This technique can be used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet to ignite the projectiles fired by the latter technique, making it more devastating.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] Frozenstein

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinta View Post
    You're welcome.

    Also note that Dodai will have the Lava Sword CJ on his back as stated in the bio, the hilt is over his right shoulder.

    We shall begin at Mid-range.




    *Dodai stands waiting on the battlefield, noting as Tashigi appears ready as she takes a stance, mid-range from himself. Knowing that this is a test of Water and Wind, Dodai thought he should start out with something simple and work his way up from there. He starts by performing the Tiger hand seal, using his chakra to turn the earth in front of himself and out under Tashigi into a flowing torrent of mud that carries her suddenly backwards, throwing her off balance at the sudden shift of the ground. Followed quickly by the Ram → Horse → Dragon hand seals, Dodai uses the mud to create a large dragon head that shoots a highly condensed ball of mud at Tashigi, aiming at her torso as she recovers from the sudden flow of mud throwing her off balance. Another hand seal is suddenly performed by Dodai, one certainly faster than any other he can perform with the other elements, as he then shoots a bullet of flame at the mud ball, combining with it to create a potentially deadly lava combination. The now pseudo-lava ball continues on it's path straight towards Tashigi, now be covered in mud from the flowing mud river*

    (Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After forming the needed hand sealTiger, the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.


    (Doton: Doryudan) - Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, the user will then perform the Ram → Horse → Dragon they can create a dragon-like head to fire concentrated mud at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent.


    ( Katon: Karyūdan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Bullet
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user exhales a flame breath from their mouth after making one handseal. This technique can be used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet to ignite the projectiles fired by the latter technique, making it more devastating.
    Then I'll use a regular katana on Tashigi's left waist and an Amegakure umbrella on her back.




    *As Tashigi sees Dodai creating the mud, she notices it won't reach her, so Tashigi makes a single punch toward Dodai and release a giant whirlwind toward him. As the wind gets in contact with the mud and the only just forming mud dragon, it destroys the dragon and shoots all the mud onto Dodai, as well as pushing him backwards and do minor injuries. Due to the mud it will also blind him.*

    (Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
    Rank: B
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.


    *Then without hesitation Tashigi slams her hands on the ground and summons a high amount of water 10 meters above Dodai and make it fall on him. Pushing him onto the ground and broke several bones.*

    (Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
    Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.


    *As the water is made in the air Tashigi follows it up with a single hand seal and makes water rise from the ground, creating a smaller lake for later purposes. It is located a few meters away on her left and in front of her in a diagonal line, so she can keep her eyes on it during the battle.*

    (Suiton: Seibun Hōfutsu) - Water Style: Water Heavens Convergence
    Rank: C
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: After performing the required hand signs Tiger → Dog → Monkey → Snake → Boar → Tiger the user makes water rise from the ground and they can use this water in various ways. They can create a body of water for a water summoning to be encased in and allow them to move around where normally no water exists, or create a body of water to block incoming attacks or surround his target and then drown them.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] Frozenstein

    Quote Originally Posted by Frozenstein View Post
    Then I'll use a regular katana on Tashigi's left waist and an Amegakure umbrella on her back.




    *As Tashigi sees Dodai creating the mud, she notices it won't reach her, so Tashigi makes a single punch toward Dodai and release a giant whirlwind toward him. As the wind gets in contact with the mud and the only just forming mud dragon, it destroys the dragon and shoots all the mud onto Dodai, as well as pushing him backwards and do minor injuries. Due to the mud it will also blind him.*

    (Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
    Rank: B
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.


    *Then without hesitation Tashigi slams her hands on the ground and summons a high amount of water 10 meters above Dodai and make it fall on him. Pushing him onto the ground and broke several bones.*

    (Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
    Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.


    *As the water is made in the air Tashigi follows it up with a single hand seal and makes water rise from the ground, creating a smaller lake for later purposes. It is located a few meters away on her left and in front of her in a diagonal line, so she can keep her eyes on it during the battle.*

    (Suiton: Seibun Hōfutsu) - Water Style: Water Heavens Convergence
    Rank: C
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: After performing the required hand signs Tiger → Dog → Monkey → Snake → Boar → Tiger the user makes water rise from the ground and they can use this water in various ways. They can create a body of water for a water summoning to be encased in and allow them to move around where normally no water exists, or create a body of water to block incoming attacks or surround his target and then drown them.
    Dodai realises the grave error he made in his judgement, the river would only reach short range. Dodai cursed himself in the back of his mind, though he realised that his combo would still work, if he had the time. Seeing Tashigi release a hurricane from her fist, Dodai decided to abandon his original combo as the golden opportunity to attack presented itself. Just as the Hurricane reaches the mud, Dodai releases a powerful stream of fire from his mouth, directing it into the eye of the hurricane where it travels back through until it reaches Tashigi. The fire picked up considerable power, being fuelled by the hurricane, and would be an almost sure fire hit as the hurricane served to focus the flame into one singular point, bursting out to cover Tashigi's arm and the side of her body the arm belongs too.

    ( Katon: Hi no Iki ) - Fire Release: Fire Breath
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user breathes a powerful stream of fire from their mouth at their target.


    The flame approaching Tashigi seemed to interrupt whatever she was attempting to follow through with, Dodai observed. Seeing his opportunity, Dodai drops a flash bomb just behind him, it releases a blinding flash barely a second after the fire hits Tashigi. During this moment of blindnes, Dodai runs to his left in an arc so as to keep mid-range from Tashigi. At the same time Dodai begins his run, he performs the Ram hand seal which he uses to direct his earth chakra to such Tashigi down into the ground towards an epicentre just within short range of her. The power of the earth falling into that point is so great that it leaves little time for Tashigi to react as Dodai uses more earth chakra to create a boar shaped lid of earth, big enough to cover the newly formed antlion pit and Tashigi who is getting pulled under the ground completely.

    (Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.


    (Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] Frozenstein

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    Dodai realises the grave error he made in his judgement, the river would only reach short range. Dodai cursed himself in the back of his mind, though he realised that his combo would still work, if he had the time. Seeing Tashigi release a hurricane from her fist, Dodai decided to abandon his original combo as the golden opportunity to attack presented itself. Just as the Hurricane reaches the mud, Dodai releases a powerful stream of fire from his mouth, directing it into the eye of the hurricane where it travels back through until it reaches Tashigi. The fire picked up considerable power, being fuelled by the hurricane, and would be an almost sure fire hit as the hurricane served to focus the flame into one singular point, bursting out to cover Tashigi's arm and the side of her body the arm belongs too.

    ( Katon: Hi no Iki ) - Fire Release: Fire Breath
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user breathes a powerful stream of fire from their mouth at their target.


    The flame approaching Tashigi seemed to interrupt whatever she was attempting to follow through with, Dodai observed. Seeing his opportunity, Dodai drops a flash bomb just behind him, it releases a blinding flash barely a second after the fire hits Tashigi. During this moment of blindnes, Dodai runs to his left in an arc so as to keep mid-range from Tashigi. At the same time Dodai begins his run, he performs the Ram hand seal which he uses to direct his earth chakra to such Tashigi down into the ground towards an epicentre just within short range of her. The power of the earth falling into that point is so great that it leaves little time for Tashigi to react as Dodai uses more earth chakra to create a boar shaped lid of earth, big enough to cover the newly formed antlion pit and Tashigi who is getting pulled under the ground completely.

    (Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.


    (Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.
    Tashigi: Well... isn't it time to get a bit more serious?

    *As Tashigi sees Dodai releasing his fire breath, she quickly changes her mind and performs the Ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water between them to create massive waves that puts out the fire and continues toward Dodai. As the fire and water collides, the created smoke with the water will block the sight of each other, making the flash bomb useless.*

    (Suiton: Dai Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive,Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: This technique is a stronger version of exploding water colliding wave technique. The user will first perform the ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water that covers an entire area, with massive waves that can crush the opponent. The user then forms the water into a giant orb, instead of releasing like weaker version of the technique.


    *Knowing that Dodai has to stop his moves to block the water, Tashigi quickly performs the Rat → Snake → Horse → Dog hand seals and exhales 3 blades of wind in a "z" pattern toward Dodai. As he is in the center of the tech, the wind blades will be wide enough to reach him even if he runs to the sides. Thanks to the water the wind blades will be hidden 'till the waves are out.*

    (Fūton: Shinkū Renpa) – Wind Release: Serial Waves
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a the required hand seals Rat → Snake → Horse → Dog theuser takes a deep breath and exhales several blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. The power of this technique can be dramatically enhanced when utilised in conjunction with the effects of extreme suction, such as that generated by the Baku, where the augmented attack proved effective enough to even slice through the defences of a complete Susanoo.


    *After these just in case Tashigi takes out 3 shurikens and infuse them with wind chakra. Then she throws them into the air and direct the shurikens to attack from above in an arc.*

    (Fūton: Kaiten Shuriken) - Wind Release: Rotating Shuriken
    Rank: C
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points:30
    Description: This technique will infuse wind-based chakra into bladed weapons. The user can than manipulate the blades in a spinning manner to attack the target.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] Frozenstein

    ✘ Test Passed ✘

    Two notes however, i don't like the last move at all, first the Wind blade is extremely thin like you said, colliding with a large lava ball will cause it to simply cut through it, but not stop it due to it's size, the reason i let this go is because the rank is appropriate, but you should've described it better, you could've said that you cut the ball in half so that each section would pass to your right and left sides, or that you could've said that you made a big enough "hole" in the lava bullet that's enough to make it not affect you, last thing about water whips gaining speed is bs, if anything it should actually lose speed.

    And Shinta, where should i begin? first technique short ranged when you are in mid range, using Moving Earth Core to get you out of the water sphere? it won't get you out, it will raise you along with it, it doesn't change the surface of the ground, also reacting after the wind destroys the golem, the wind sphere is equivalent to the golem, maybe even bigger as it expands the more it travels as seen against Susanoo, saying that you know that the illusionary clone isn't a real clone from having no shadow on the ground? yes it does, even the E-rank clones have shadows on the ground and they are false projections =_=
     
         

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