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    COTC Chapter 1 part 17 Semifinals 2/2

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    15 Minutes later

    Mr. Diaz: Ok ladies and gentleman it's time for the final matchup of the night Casey Stanley vs Tiquan Conley!

    The crowd was dead. There were barley any cheers at all.

    Casey Stanley made his may out onto the field first he had some weird Joker like face paint on and he had no shirt on and he wore blue designer swimming trunks that has a Red wolf on the left leg. He also walked out slowly, a tactic used to intimidate a opponent, however Tiquan wasn't even put yet. Fort minors Remember the Name played in the back ground as Casey made his eerie entrance.



    There was a short 2 minute pause after Casey entrance was over, another intimidation tactic. Then suddenly Fireworks went off in the stadium.


    The crowd was in awe and then Three Six Mafia Its a Fight blasted into the stadium.


    Tiquan came out wearing a UCF jersey #1 with the name Conley on the back.

    UCF, University of Central Florida is the local collage football team and the Chunnin exams are being held at their home field.


    Tiquan was head banging and jumping all around, getting crunked up to the song. This entrance was also unprecedented but it was just Tiquan's way. The too eventually meet face to face.

    Mr. Diaz: Are you two ready?

    The two didn't move a muscle they just stood there face to face in an intense stare down. That was all Mr. Diaz need to see.

    Mr. Diaz: Begin!

    The two continued their intense stare down. The crowd was cheering so loud now the Staduim was rocking! Casey and Tiquan felt it and they both cracked a smile. Tiquan said something to Casey and Casey said something back to Tiquan but it was so loud no one can hear what was said. Then it happened the stare down was broken! Casey threw a left hook. Tiquan blocked it with his right arm and threw a left hook of his own Casey blocked with his right arm and threw another left at Tiquan again it intercepted by Tiquan! This went on for about 3 more cycle but Tiquan gained the advantage when he threw a surprising right. Tiquan then started to deliver right hand after right hand after right hand. Casey eventually caught on he then kneed Tiquan in the gut. He then delivered an unsought of rights to Tiquan. Tiquan eventually pushed Casey off of him and quickly made distance between the two. This was no longer a test of skill this was an all out brawl. Casey and Tiquan were both cut open the stared each other down as the blood dripped down.

    Tiquan: Not bad.

    Casey: You aren't so bad yourself.

    Tiquan: I got cut pretty good. I need to end this within 10 or things can get bad.

    Tiquan: Ok Casey no more holding back give me all you got!

    Tiquan then began to run towards Casey.

    Casey: You don't have to tell me twice.

    Casey started to run towards Tiquan.

    The two kids were running toward each other at full speed they met each other at the 50 yard line and delivered punches so devastating it sent both men flying back.
    Casey rebounded and spit a tooth out, it was one of his two front teeth. Tiquan also rebounded and he just Spat out a wad of blood.

    Casey: Ok I'm done playing around.
    Casey reached into his left pocket of his trunks and pulled out a par of brass knuckles and he surrounded it with chakra.

    Casey: This will be your end.

    Casey rushed a Tiquan full speed and punched him in the skull widening Tiquan cut and and knocking Tiquan down.

    The crowd stood up to see if Tiquan would get back up.

    Tiquan: -laughs- Th-tha-that hurt like hell....your good man but not good enough I'll end this here!
    Tiquan stood up very slowly his whole face was red due to the all the blood.
    Tiquan then created a shadow clone put out his left arm and closed his eyes.

    The crowd filled with gasp as they were surprised with the jutsu Tiquan was about to perform.

    Casey was to tired to move he gave Tiquan all he had and Tiquan still got up.

    Tiquan: If this doesn't do it, what will? rasengan!

    Tiquan then rushed at Casey with the ball of Chakra getting slower and slower as he got closer. Tiquan was right in front of Casey looking at him straight in the eyes when the rasengan disintegrated and Tiquan completely fail out.

    No one knew what had happened or what to do. Tiquan was out.

    Mr. Diaz: Casey is your winner.

    Tiquan's mom, Shara rushed the field as soon as the announcement was made, to tend to her son. She was immediately stopped and Tiquan was taken away to the closest medical facility.

    15 hours later.

    Tiquan finally awoke, however he was in a strange place, a place he never seen before.

    Tiquan: What is this place? And why is there water everywhere?
    Tiquan got up and walked around finding noting but water, Tiquan was to busy to see the two menacing red eyes watching him.

    You dare not believe in me boy!?

    Tiquan: Who said that?

    I did.

    Tiquan turned around and saw the eyes, he stumbled back in fear when he first them.

    He who does not believe in me want to know who I am! Ha you humans make me laugh.

    Tiquan: But but I'm Christian I do believe in God.

    I'm not God nor the devil for that matter I'm even worst!

    Tiquan: Wh-What are you?

    At the moment Tiquan asked that question a sudden shockwave blew him back.

    Meanwhile

    ???: ear!!!!!

    ???: Ok again....lear!!!!!!

    ???: C'mon kid don't die clear!!!!!

    ???: Doctor, we have a feint pulse!

    Doctor: Thank you Nurse keep any eye on that.... Ok this is good......clear!!!!!

    Nurse: It's getting stronger.

    Doctor: Ok one more time. CLEAR!!!!!!!!!!!


    3 days later

    Tiquan was resting in an hospital bed with a whole bunch of iv's and other things attached to them.

    Tiquan slowly opens his eyes.
    Tiquan: Wha-What happened?

    Doctor: Oh awake are we? I'll get your family and friends.

    Tiquan: Wait what? What's going on here?

    Doctor: I'll let your family explain that.

    A minute later Tiquans family and friends all came in the room. They gave him hugs, kisses, and their own respective greetings, after that was all over Tiquan asked what happened the room was quite for 30 seconds.

    Shara: Well during you battle with Casey...

    Tiquan: CASEY! Where is he? Is he ok? Did my rasengan kill him?

    Shara: No it didn't even hit him.....you passed out before you were able to hit him.

    Tiquan: Passed out how? What happend?

    Stanton: Severe blood lost. You....you.....

    Tiquan: I what??

    Lorimar: You were unconscious for several days.

    No one in the room was willing to tell him the truth.

    Tiquan: Oh hey Lorimar. What are you doing here?

    Lorimar: Just wanted to see if you were ok.

    Tiquan: Oh ok thanks. So who won?

    Shara: Your fight or the chunnin exams?

    Tiquan: I obviously lost so who won the whole thing?

    Stanton: I did.

    Tiquan was able to crack a smile.
    Tiquan: Congratulations man. Did they announce who will become chunnin?

    Lorimar: No I made daddy convince the council in waiting for you.

    Tiquan: Thank you.

    A couple of days later Tiquan was released from the hospital, the council was ready to make their announcement. The announcement would be made at town hall.

    Mr. Diaz: I am honored to stand here today and announce to you all the newly crowned chunnin! Everyone who competed did well but only six have gained the right to become Chunnin. Please step up as I call your name audience please save your applause till the end.
    Dominic Catalan is being promoted for showing extreme bravery and a no mercy attitude.
    Larry Bryd is being promoted for showing his more exceptional skills of swordsmanship.
    Casey Stanley is being promoted for showing brute strength and his great control of the water nature,
    Lorimar Diaz is being promoted for showing her excellent control of the lighting element.
    Stanton Colon is being promoted not only because he won but also because he was an excellent way of deceiving his opponents.
    And last but not least Tiquan Conley is being promoted for show casing his fire nature and for his excellent chakra control.
    Everyone please switch your headbands.
    Ladies and gentleman I give you Orlandos 2006 Chunnins!!!!!


    After the ceremony was over the newly crowned chunnin took pictures with their family and friends. The six would also become friends down the road...except Casey and Tiquan, Casey always wanted to top Tiquan he felt like there was a competition for Lorimar though he was dating her.(Casey) Even with the tension nothing happened everything was good, until the last week of school.

    Authors Notes
    Ok first thing I must say is if you stuck with me this long Thank you! Thank you for all of your support your likes/Thanks, your comments and your rep. It means a lot to me really. I know not all of my peeps have been here for the full ride and well I must say I gained and lost some on the way but those who stayed here for the longest I thank you again without you guys I'm nothing. Thank you a million for times and I hope you all enjoyed.
     
         
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    Re: COTC Chapter 1 part 17 Semifinals 2/2

    Tiquan then rushed at Casey with the ball of Chakra getting slower and slower as he got closer. Tiquan was right in front of Casey looking at him straight in the eyes when the rasengan disintegrated and Tiquan completely fail out.
    this part made me LOL:rofl: poor Tiquan
     
         

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    Re: COTC Chapter 1 part 17 Semifinals 2/2

    Quote Originally Posted by Uxellius View Post
    Tiquan then rushed at Casey with the ball of Chakra getting slower and slower as he got closer. Tiquan was right in front of Casey looking at him straight in the eyes when the rasengan disintegrated and Tiquan completely fail out.
    this part made me LOL:rofl: poor Tiquan
    thanks for the feedback and yes poor Tiquan.
     
         

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    Re: COTC Chapter 1 part 17 Semifinals 2/2

    There were still a couple of spots, some sentences should have been combined with others, some commas should have been added, and so on. But still pretty good. I'm no good at edits so I really shouldn't be talking. Nice job.
     
         

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    Re: COTC Chapter 1 part 17 Semifinals 2/2

    Quote Originally Posted by Germanicus View Post
    There were still a couple of spots, some sentences should have been combined with others, some commas should have been added, and so on. But still pretty good. I'm no good at edits so I really shouldn't be talking. Nice job.
    Ok I'm trying to improve
    When you think you got one thing right you miss something or in my case a lot :ghehe: oh well just gotta get better....thanks for the feed back.
     
         

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