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    The Final Fight Chapter 5

    Chapter 5 - Gensoku-ji !!

    Sasuke seems to dissapear without a trrace

    Naruto: ( huh..? Where did he-)

    Sasuke appears in front of Naruto with susanoo's rib cage and arm formed . He delivers a heavy blow to Naruto with susanoo's fist

    Naruto: Ugh!!

    Naruto is sent flying into Hashirama's statue causing a cloud of dust to emerge . Naruto slowly rises to his feet coming up from the rubble .

    Naruto: How the hell is he doing that?? He shouldnt be able to move that fast! Is this some type of genjutsu?.

    Kurama: No

    Naruto: !!

    Kurama: had it been a genjutsu i'd be able to break you from it , i'd notice the disturbance in your chakra and break you free. This is no genjutsu.

    Naruto: Then how??

    Kurama: I.....Have no idea

    Naruto: -_- (gee thanks for the help)

    Sasuke: whats wrong Naruto?? What happened to all that bravado ? Have you finally realized that you have no chance in beating me?

    Naruto walks toward sasuke

    Naruto: ....... Just because you have those fancy moves doesn't mean you'll beat me. I have too many people counting on me . I wont lose here

    Sasuke: it seems you dont truly understand the power of the the uchiha. Allow me to demonstrate.
    Gensoku-ji!

    Sasuke dissapears once again

    Naruto: !!

    Kurama : Naruto. Focus see if you can track his chakra.

    Naruto closes his eyes, sensing the chakra around him

    Naruto: ( it's slight but-)

    Sasuke appears behind Naruto grabbing him with susanoo, he draws naruto close

    Sasuke : its over ...Naruto Amatera-

    Naruto's clone that was gathering senjutsu chakra in the valley above had come down smashing sasuke and his susanoo into the water with a heavy punch

    Susanoo had loosened his grip as naruto had been set free during the attack.

    Naruto : you must have sensed what was going on

    Naruto's clone : yea...... Had i been a split second later. We'd be done for.

    Sasuke's susanoo dissapears as he swims towards the surface

    Naruto : when he comes up from the water....we'll get him with these

    Naruto created chakra arms that form rasenshuriken in both his and his clone's hand

    Sasuke quickly pops up from the water is immediately met with two rasenshuriken that are thrown in the shadow shuriken formation one on top of the other

    Naruto: (even if he dodges. There is no way he can escape the blast from two.)

    Sasuke's eyes begin to glow red . As he stares down the rasenshuriken , they both slow to the point where it seems they arent even spinning.

    Naruto: WHAT THE HELL??!

    Sasuke falls back down to the water while still keepin his eye on the rasenshuriken. Once he lands he shifts his eyes to Naruto

    The rasenshuriken speeds back up continuing to fly upward until they explode

    Sasuke : hmph childs play

    Naruto : ( did he just.....control my technique??)

    Kurama : i dont think thats the case

    Naruto: !!!

    Kurama : earlier it would appear that sasuke had acquired some type of super speed. Yet when he wasnt focused on you and instead was focused on dodging your jutsu, it seemed like your jutsu itself was moving in slow motion.

    Naruto : so what are you saying?

    Kurama : basically it seems this new jutsu of his can control the space and time around whatever he focusses on. Those Uchiha... Their eyes grant techniques that can defy reality itself.

    Naruto: !!!... How the hell do we fight against a technique that can slow down time?!

    Kurama : in theory, stay moving at a high speed , in this form we can move at incredible speed. So if we can maintain high speed movement , he wont be able to keep his eye on you. And if he happens to catch us in the technique , moving that fast will atleast keep us from being caught so easily.

    Naruto : ....... Alright. Lets give it a shot.

    Naruto vanishes at high speed

    Sasuke having already had Naruto in his sight had activated his technique so to him it seemed as if naruto was moving at normal speed.. he keeps his eyes on naruto as he runs behind him.

    Naruto senses Sasuke moving behind him at whats seems to him at the same speed that Naruto is moving.

    Naruto : damn it he already got me.. gotta keep moving!!


    SASUKE CAN CONTROL TIME???
    How will the speed of Naruto handle sasuke's new jutsu???

    Next chapter - Timing

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    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=288584
     
         
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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    nice
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

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    nice
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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    Cool :D
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    awesome job :D
    can't wait the next chapter
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    Very very nice!!!!

    Probably could have elaborated more on the Sage mode clone as i found slightly confusing to follow its flow while reading....but overall it still made sense!

    Great work as always
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    Quote Originally Posted by KGB Kakuzu View Post
    Very very nice!!!!

    Probably could have elaborated more on the Sage mode clone as i found slightly confusing to follow its flow while reading....but overall it still made sense!

    Great work as always
    thanks man... a few chapters back.. naruto had a thought about his last clone that was gathering senjutsu in the valley above. his clone with his sensory ability felt that naruto was in danger and came to his rescue pretty much lol
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    well done as usual
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    Quote Originally Posted by MrsJDepp View Post
    well done as usual
    thanks.... btw u might wanna change ur sig... the mods get are crazy over that stuff ... lol
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    I really like this chapter. I like the move you gave Sasuke:D keep doing an awesome job!!!:D
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

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    I really like this chapter. I like the move you gave Sasuke:D keep doing an awesome job!!!:D
    thanks bro.... yea sasuke needed something to negate the speed of Naruto...what better way to negate speed than with timing is what we saw in the gym...lol..boxing helped me create that power...lmao
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

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    Cool :D
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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    awesome
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    Great work as usual bro . Love the idea of Sasuke being able to slow objects down when he uses that technique great idea.
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    Sasuke's ability is cool can control time.
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    Quote Originally Posted by uchihamad View Post
    Sasuke's ability is cool can control time.
    Thanks he has a really cool Use for the power which will be introduced in the next few chapters
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    very nice
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    Sasuke can control time! :D
    + rep for the idea
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

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    Sasuke can control time! :D
    + rep for the idea
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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 5

    Awesome stuff! I've loved reading all 5 chapters.

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