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    (Naruto and Hinata run to the Ten Tails)
    Obito- I'll crush you both then.
    (The Ten Tails blasts a TBB at Naruto and Hinata)
    Naruto- Same old move!
    Hinata- Naruto-kun, what should we do?
    Naruto- Combine your Byakugan with my Tailed Beast Bomb.
    (Hinata uses an unknown trigram palm strike and hits Naruto's TBB in 360 direction)
    Kakashi- (What are they up to?)
    Kurama- Kakashi, my chakra is in you, so I can communicate with you.
    Kakashi- !
    Kurama- Use the Kamui on all of the TBB and send them into the Ten Tail's body! Use all of the chakra I gave you!
    Kakashi- Alright! (Kamui!!!)
    (All of the TBB going toward the alliance vanish)
    (Ten Tails explodes)
    (Obito and Madara are sent flying away)
    (Hinata uses Taijutsu and knocks Madara away and Naruto Rasengans Obito into Madara)
    Naruto- We did it!
    (Ten Tails appears in a new form like Gedo Mazo, but his tails are spiky and has a giant mouth on its chest)
    Madara- We can't control it now...
    Obito- !
    Ten Tails- So you are the one who will lead me down the right path.
    Naruto- !?
    Kurama- The Ten Tails has conciousness!?
    Ten Tails- Kurama I have conciousness because all of the bijuu sealed into this body trusts in Naruto and the Sage's words.
    Ten Tails- I believe in you too, Naruto.
    Naruto- Whats going on!?
    Ten Tails- My chakra will become yours Naruto. It will be your own, not mine. After I give you all of my powers, I will go to the afterlife and meet the Sage.
    (Naruto returns to his normal form)
    Hinata- What happened Naruto!?
    (Ten Tails explodes)
    Obito- ! (Naruto's chakra is so different now...)
    Naruto- I will fulfill my goal, for Datara also put his faith in me! (Datara is Ten Tails

    Naruto's Will never fails!

    The end
     
         

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    are u drunk?:sy::P
     
         

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    Re: 616

    hahahah nice one...
     
         

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    Re: 616

    Well that happened fast !! I csn see Hinata and Naruto eventually knocking them off the Juubi, but I see it being something like Naruto and Hinata with other K11 vs Obito and then Gai and Lee with others vs Madara.....I don't see the Juubi being out of the way that fast.....but overall it was pretty cool
     
         

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    Re: 616

    Quote Originally Posted by zamki View Post
    are u drunk?:sy::P
    yes
     
         

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    yes
    that explains it
     
         

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    Re: 616

    Quote Originally Posted by zamki View Post
    that explains it
    lets be friends
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by tamikasy View Post
    lets be friends
    how long?
     
         

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    Re: 616

    I'm drunk too
     
         

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    Re: 616

    Nice effort , way to go
     
         

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    Re: 616

    and i got a hangover
     
         

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    Re: 616

    Quote Originally Posted by zamki View Post
    how long?
    forever
     
         

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    Re: 616

    Am I the who couldn't help but to laugh while reading this prediction.:sy:
     
         

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    Re: 616

    If this happens, the manga will totally suck in 2013, and it better end the chapter after, lol
     
         

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    Go home,you're drunk.
     
         

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    Re: 616

    Quote Originally Posted by tamikasy View Post
    Messiah

    (Naruto and Hinata run to the Ten Tails)
    Obito- I'll crush you both then.
    (The Ten Tails blasts a TBB at Naruto and Hinata)
    Naruto- Same old move!
    Hinata- Naruto-kun, what should we do?
    Naruto- Combine your Byakugan with my Tailed Beast Bomb.
    (Hinata uses an unknown trigram palm strike and hits Naruto's TBB in 360 direction)
    Kakashi- (What are they up to?)
    Kurama- Kakashi, my chakra is in you, so I can communicate with you.
    Kakashi- !
    Kurama- Use the Kamui on all of the TBB and send them into the Ten Tail's body! Use all of the chakra I gave you!
    Kakashi- Alright! (Kamui!!!)
    (All of the TBB going toward the alliance vanish)
    (Ten Tails explodes)
    (Obito and Madara are sent flying away)
    (Hinata uses Taijutsu and knocks Madara away and Naruto Rasengans Obito into Madara)
    Naruto- We did it!
    (Ten Tails appears in a new form like Gedo Mazo, but his tails are spiky and has a giant mouth on its chest)
    Madara- We can't control it now...
    Obito- !
    Ten Tails- So you are the one who will lead me down the right path.
    Naruto- !?
    Kurama- The Ten Tails has conciousness!?
    Ten Tails- Kurama I have conciousness because all of the bijuu sealed into this body trusts in Naruto and the Sage's words.
    Ten Tails- I believe in you too, Naruto.
    Naruto- Whats going on!?
    Ten Tails- My chakra will become yours Naruto. It will be your own, not mine. After I give you all of my powers, I will go to the afterlife and meet the Sage.
    (Naruto returns to his normal form)
    Hinata- What happened Naruto!?
    (Ten Tails explodes)
    Obito- ! (Naruto's chakra is so different now...)
    Naruto- I will fulfill my goal, for Datara also put his faith in me! (Datara is Ten Tails

    Naruto's Will never fails!

    The end
    Short but I liked it. Especially the tentails having conscious. He vanished a bit to fast though I think, some parts felt a bit to rushed, which reduced the quality, but I like how all the fistbumps with the other bijou, gave a result, the 10tails putting its power and faith in Naruto.

    And it would allow for this old theory of mine, ''The Juubi is Boss'', to come true .

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=277404
     
         
    Last edited by Meowazziel; 12-29-2012 at 12:38 PM.

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