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    [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    Greetings, -Broly-

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules:
    ~ Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    ~ All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    ~ Custom Jutsu's and Elements are not allowed
    ~ Terrain: Kage Summit (Where Sasuke & Jugo fought A)
    ~ You may use As abilities up to your current rank Basic 5, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu that you know
    ~ We start mid range from each other
    ~ If you have any questions please ask them via vm.


    I will be using a pair of cannon Kage Ranked Uchiha Sasuke With MS and Jugo biographies for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that your testing and I will make the first move


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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    Let's get it started, Ay, The Fourth Raikage

    Ay stands across from the boy who took his brothers life, Sasuke Uchiha, with anger in his heart he prepares to do whatever it takes to kill him but remembers to maintain his eyesight on Sasukes chin and below, knowing full well of the sharingans prowess.

    SASUKE UCHIHA! Tell me what you did with my brother and your death will be painless!
     
         
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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
    Let's get it started, Ay, The Fourth Raikage

    Ay stands across from the boy who took his brothers life, Sasuke Uchiha, with anger in his heart he prepares to do whatever it takes to kill him but remembers to maintain his eyesight on Sasukes chin and below, knowing full well of the sharingans prowess.

    SASUKE UCHIHA! Tell me what you did with my brother and your death will be painless!

    He's talking about that guy from before Sasuke... *Starts holding his head in rage*


    Heh, why would I tell you that, when I plan to destroy the Kage!! Jugo... sit back on this one..
    *Activates Sharingan*


    Argg...HELL NO I WANT TO KILL HIM NOW!!! HAHAHHA



    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.

    Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
    Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
    Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.




    Sasuke passively activates his 3-Tomoe sharingan while keeping a keen eye on your movements, and performs a few quick handseals causing blinding light to come shine from his body blinding you..



    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementaty
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.




    When Sasuke starts performing his handseals, Jugo is entering a blood rage going completely insane and rips off his shirt...once the light blinds you, the jet like appendages give him a powerful jumping boost where he glides in an arc towards you where he keeps his eyes on you and leans in with his upper body and delivers a powerful right hook to your left temple..



    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Jūgo, while in his partial Cursed Seal state, creates many jet-like appendages on his back to create a powerful blast. He then jumps, giving him power to manuever in the air.
    Note: Can only be used by Jugo.




    When Jugo jumps towards you, Sasuke watches you intently with his Sharingan, and starts molding his lightning chakra in his right hand and forms a chidori running towards you with his great speed, and then as he watches your movements ready to use his sharingan to timely deliver a counter stab with accuracy and grace by extending his chidori to hit you in the chest and delivering a powerful explosion at the end..



    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
    Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.


     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    As the light shines Ay shuts his eyes immediately, knowing this technique to be one of his subordinates own and therefore knowing Sasuke is trying to blind him. As Ay is blinded he couldnt help but not be suprised at more Uchiha trickery, of course this boy would rather blind him than fight him man to man and if that weren't enough he brought his lackey along with him. "Cowardice in the worst degree", the Raikage thought. But there was no time to dwell on how much of a coward Sasuke was to be in this fight because he suddenly heard a weird sound (upon looking at the anime the move juugo used makes a sound that sounds a bit like a jet thruster but were ninjas so he has no idea what that is) coming from the direction of the two ninja and the sound seemed to be coming towards him. He opens his eyes, while looks upwards towards the sound, where the flash has dissapated due to Juugo, who is coming down on him, blocking out the light as well as the light not being as strong at that angle since it comes from Sasuke and Ay is looking above him. As Juugo comes down Ay sees a monstorous brown fist starting to swing towards his head.

    Mind your own business kid!

    With chakra charged throughout his body he quickly steps forward, throwing his left shoulder into Juugo, making him miss the right hook if he continues due to Ay's head coming forwards with him which would make Juugos right arm swing behind the Raikages head, missing him by the time Ay connects his shoulder with Juugo. Due to Juugo's upward angle, Ay's shoulder connects with his stomach and stuns him a bit as well as sending him forward towards Sasuke. Sasuke would have rethink his chidori sharp spear attack unless he wanted to kill his friend as well, since Juugo is flying forwards and his body more than covers Ay's chest. As soon as Ay makes contact with his shoulder he utilizes his lightning specialty in order to quickly compress raiton chakra in his right hand and brings it crashing into Juugo's stomach while releasing the lightning, creating a huge explosion that sends Juugo flying like a projectile back at Sasuke, which will hurt him as well as Juugo taking damage from the punch/explosion.

    (Rakanken) - Nirvana Fist
    Rank: C
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:15
    Description: A powerful shoulder smash followed by a strong punch.



    (Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
    Rank: A
    Type: Offence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explotion.


    As the punch connects and sends Juugo flying, Ay continues running towards the two with chakra streamed throughout his body, jumping in an arc while focusing lightning around his right arm to come down on the duo and slam his right fist onto Sasuke's chest just after he gets hit and knocked down by Juugo. After hitting Sasuke with the lightning enhanced punch electricity spreads from his fists and incapacitates the both of you.

    ( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid (Short range for the discharge)
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm and they then jump into the air. The user will then land slamming their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.


    *as he comes down*
    Punk your about to learn the true meaning of fury!
     
         
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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
    As the light shines Ay shuts his eyes immediately, knowing this technique to be one of his subordinates own and therefore knowing Sasuke is trying to blind him. As Ay is blinded he couldnt help but not be suprised at more Uchiha trickery, of course this boy would rather blind him than fight him man to man and if that weren't enough he brought his lackey along with him. "Cowardice in the worst degree", the Raikage thought. But there was no time to dwell on how much of a coward Sasuke was to be in this fight because he suddenly heard a weird sound (upon looking at the anime the move juugo used makes a sound that sounds a bit like a jet thruster but were ninjas so he has no idea what that is) coming from the direction of the two ninja and the sound seemed to be coming towards him. He opens his eyes, while looks upwards towards the sound, where the flash has dissapated due to Juugo, who is coming down on him, blocking out the light as well as the light not being as strong at that angle since it comes from Sasuke and Ay is looking above him. As Juugo comes down Ay sees a monstorous brown fist starting to swing towards his head.

    Mind your own business kid!

    With chakra charged throughout his body he quickly steps forward, throwing his left shoulder into Juugo, making him miss the right hook if he continues due to Ay's head coming forwards with him which would make Juugos right arm swing behind the Raikages head, missing him by the time Ay connects his shoulder with Juugo. Due to Juugo's upward angle, Ay's shoulder connects with his stomach and stuns him a bit as well as sending him forward towards Sasuke. Sasuke would have rethink his chidori sharp spear attack unless he wanted to kill his friend as well, since Juugo is flying forwards and his body more than covers Ay's chest. As soon as Ay makes contact with his shoulder he utilizes his lightning specialty in order to quickly compress raiton chakra in his right hand and brings it crashing into Juugo's stomach while releasing the lightning, creating a huge explosion that sends Juugo flying like a projectile back at Sasuke, which will hurt him as well as Juugo taking damage from the punch/explosion.

    (Rakanken) - Nirvana Fist
    Rank: C
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:15
    Description: A powerful shoulder smash followed by a strong punch.



    (Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
    Rank: A
    Type: Offence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explotion.


    As the punch connects and sends Juugo flying, Ay continues running towards the two with chakra streamed throughout his body, jumping in an arc while focusing lightning around his right arm to come down on the duo and slam his right fist onto Sasuke's chest just after he gets hit and knocked down by Juugo. After hitting Sasuke with the lightning enhanced punch electricity spreads from his fists and incapacitates the both of you.

    ( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid (Short range for the discharge)
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm and they then jump into the air. The user will then land slamming their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.


    *as he comes down*
    Punk your about to learn the true meaning of fury!
    To the judge..We spoke over this fight, and my intentions was to have Jugo jump in a side arc to the right, but that was a mistake on my part by not wording it like that. Anyways good move on your part Broly.
    _____________________________

    Sasuke: Jugo, you pathetic fool... Hmmp

    Juugo: Dammit Dammit!! *slightly loses consciousness*


    As Jugo comes flying back, Sasuke knows this is about to get serious and activates his Mangekyo Sharingan ready to anticipate the Raikages movements as he has just started running behind Jugo.


    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50 (-25 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Description:
    The Mangekyo Sharingan, literally meaning "Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye", is the highest known form of Sharingan, said to be feared as the strongest form of Sharingan. Awakening MS requires the user to have possession of 3 Tomoe Sharingan and to witness or simply go through some extremely dramatic emotional event. Upon this event, the user awakens MS. The most noticeable MS users gained it by witnessing the death of someone important to them, sometimes by their own hand. Once activated the appearance of the pupil drastically changes, differing from the tomoe seals, and gains a shape unique to each user. When active the user can track speeds even further beyond that of the third stage sharingan. The timing of the users counters, the chaining speed of multiple techniques and the ability to see through the enemy's moves greatly increases. Not only that but the user gains the ability to see through visual illusions A-rank and below. The link to Genjutsu is further increased and, if the user has gained full mastery over Genjutsu, he gains the ability to cast any and every genjutsu without the need for Handseals as long as he has a line of sight to the target. Also, the Mangekyo Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques, unique to each user. Extended use of the Mangekyo Sharingan after some time, deteriorates the user's eyesight to the point of blindness. The chakra cost is so high that it drains the users stamina and chakra at increasingly high speeds. Once the side effects of it's use take place, the user is left blind and unable to activate his sharingan. While keeping it active is already quite hard, the user will drain the time he can keep it active at each MS technique he uses. While some can decrease one turn, others can decrease even more.

    Note: The user needs to have activated his 3T Sharingan beforehand
    Note: Can only be activated twice, requiring a 2 turn coldown to activate again
    Note: Lasts a maximum of 8 turns for the first activation and 4 turns for the second
    Note: After the first activation wears down, his eyes revert to their normal appearance and the user can't activate his sharingan for 1 turn
    Note: The first activation drains the users stamina and leaves him tired, while the second activation leaves the user blinded and almost unable to move if he doesn't deactivate it before the time ends
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.




    Sasuke anticipates the movement of Jugo and sidesteps his incoming body, as he also takes notice of the Raikage channeling lightning chakra into his arm before he goes ariborne. With his Sharingan he can see the reflexes of your muscles and the focus of your eye sight, he knows that you are about to try to come at him with a powerful downward thrust of your arm and this gives him a major advantage. Sasuke channels chakra into his legs while grabbing unto his Katana focusing lightning chakra into it and keeps his eyes fixated on you as youre on your descent using this moment to jump upwards slashing your arm off and sending you upwards into the air, where Sasuke then takes advantage of your numb body and appears above you delivering a finishing blow to you impaling you into the ground..



    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user flows Chidori current through a katana in manner similar to flying swallow technique. The Radiating and chirping blade can easily cut through steel. Furthermore, the body of the person cut by the sword goes numb, taking away their freedom of movement.




    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user takes out their blade and channels chakra into it. They then run towards the opponent, slashing them upwards into the air and then appear above him/her, and deliver a sharp, drilling slash down upon them, impelling them into the ground.




    Sasuke: Hmmph...Raikage....what a joke.
     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    Quote Originally Posted by Nagato.. View Post
    To the judge..We spoke over this fight, and my intentions was to have Jugo jump in a side arc to the right, but that was a mistake on my part by not wording it like that. Anyways good move on your part Broly.
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    Sasuke: Jugo, you pathetic fool... Hmmp

    Juugo: Dammit Dammit!! *slightly loses consciousness*


    As Jugo comes flying back, Sasuke knows this is about to get serious and activates his Mangekyo Sharingan ready to anticipate the Raikages movements as he has just started running behind Jugo.


    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50 (-25 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Description:
    The Mangekyo Sharingan, literally meaning "Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye", is the highest known form of Sharingan, said to be feared as the strongest form of Sharingan. Awakening MS requires the user to have possession of 3 Tomoe Sharingan and to witness or simply go through some extremely dramatic emotional event. Upon this event, the user awakens MS. The most noticeable MS users gained it by witnessing the death of someone important to them, sometimes by their own hand. Once activated the appearance of the pupil drastically changes, differing from the tomoe seals, and gains a shape unique to each user. When active the user can track speeds even further beyond that of the third stage sharingan. The timing of the users counters, the chaining speed of multiple techniques and the ability to see through the enemy's moves greatly increases. Not only that but the user gains the ability to see through visual illusions A-rank and below. The link to Genjutsu is further increased and, if the user has gained full mastery over Genjutsu, he gains the ability to cast any and every genjutsu without the need for Handseals as long as he has a line of sight to the target. Also, the Mangekyo Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques, unique to each user. Extended use of the Mangekyo Sharingan after some time, deteriorates the user's eyesight to the point of blindness. The chakra cost is so high that it drains the users stamina and chakra at increasingly high speeds. Once the side effects of it's use take place, the user is left blind and unable to activate his sharingan. While keeping it active is already quite hard, the user will drain the time he can keep it active at each MS technique he uses. While some can decrease one turn, others can decrease even more.

    Note: The user needs to have activated his 3T Sharingan beforehand
    Note: Can only be activated twice, requiring a 2 turn coldown to activate again
    Note: Lasts a maximum of 8 turns for the first activation and 4 turns for the second
    Note: After the first activation wears down, his eyes revert to their normal appearance and the user can't activate his sharingan for 1 turn
    Note: The first activation drains the users stamina and leaves him tired, while the second activation leaves the user blinded and almost unable to move if he doesn't deactivate it before the time ends
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.




    Sasuke anticipates the movement of Jugo and sidesteps his incoming body, as he also takes notice of the Raikage channeling lightning chakra into his arm before he goes ariborne. With his Sharingan he can see the reflexes of your muscles and the focus of your eye sight, he knows that you are about to try to come at him with a powerful downward thrust of your arm and this gives him a major advantage. Sasuke channels chakra into his legs while grabbing unto his Katana focusing lightning chakra into it and keeps his eyes fixated on you as youre on your descent using this moment to jump upwards slashing your arm off and sending you upwards into the air, where Sasuke then takes advantage of your numb body and appears above you delivering a finishing blow to you impaling you into the ground..



    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user flows Chidori current through a katana in manner similar to flying swallow technique. The Radiating and chirping blade can easily cut through steel. Furthermore, the body of the person cut by the sword goes numb, taking away their freedom of movement.




    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user takes out their blade and channels chakra into it. They then run towards the opponent, slashing them upwards into the air and then appear above him/her, and deliver a sharp, drilling slash down upon them, impelling them into the ground.




    Sasuke: Hmmph...Raikage....what a joke.
    Why, thank you.
    ____________________________
    As Ay rises he sees that Juugo has passed Sasuke and realizes that Sasuke has dodged him by some means. He then turns his attention to Sasuke (chin and below) and sees him flow lightning into his legs and bend his knees as if to jump towards him while he falls down. Since he flowed lightning into his sword and jumped up towards him its a pretty good assumption to think that Sasuke will try to attack him with the sword, in defense to this Ay immediately activates his Lightning Armor.

    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography



    When the armor is activated Sasuke is already in the air coming towards Ay and Ay is thrusting his right arm downwards. With this new threat (Sasuke attacking with the sword) Ay decides to switch his tactics up and instead of building chakra for the discharge palm to just turn his right forearm to the left, thrusting his elbow out and hitting Sasuke right in the face. He doesnt break motion in doing this since his arm is already coming forwards and his increased speed and senses allow him to have more then enough time to complete this rather simple maneuver. As for the chidori katana, it simply bounces off Ay's lightning armor and out of Sasukes hand like it did in the anime, giving no damage to the Raikage. Take note that Ay wastes no time in going from activating the armor to thrusting his elbow outwards as well as Sasuke having limited time and space to counter due to him coming towards Ay and the new found speed of the Raikage himself.


    TIME TO LEARN SOME RESPECT PUNK!! ERUBO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio



    As the elbow connects Sasuke is launched like a rocket back into the ground,leaving a crater while Ay lands at his feet. As he lands he picks up Sasuke by his feet and flings him into the wall where Juugo hit. Immediately afterwards he makes the ram handseal and raises his hand to the sky, triggering lightning to come down through the roof and strike Sasuke, carrying tons of earth to rain down on him with it so that first the lightning hits him and then if by some miracle he dodges the lightning he will then have to avoid the earth falling on him.


    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.



    Note: As shown by the anime "Elbow" can be used with only one arm
     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
    Why, thank you.
    ____________________________
    As Ay rises he sees that Juugo has passed Sasuke and realizes that Sasuke has dodged him by some means. He then turns his attention to Sasuke (chin and below) and sees him flow lightning into his legs and bend his knees as if to jump towards him while he falls down. Since he flowed lightning into his sword and jumped up towards him its a pretty good assumption to think that Sasuke will try to attack him with the sword, in defense to this Ay immediately activates his Lightning Armor.

    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography



    When the armor is activated Sasuke is already in the air coming towards Ay and Ay is thrusting his right arm downwards. With this new threat (Sasuke attacking with the sword) Ay decides to switch his tactics up and instead of building chakra for the discharge palm to just turn his right forearm to the left, thrusting his elbow out and hitting Sasuke right in the face. He doesnt break motion in doing this since his arm is already coming forwards and his increased speed and senses allow him to have more then enough time to complete this rather simple maneuver. As for the chidori katana, it simply bounces off Ay's lightning armor and out of Sasukes hand like it did in the anime, giving no damage to the Raikage. Take note that Ay wastes no time in going from activating the armor to thrusting his elbow outwards as well as Sasuke having limited time and space to counter due to him coming towards Ay and the new found speed of the Raikage himself.


    TIME TO LEARN SOME RESPECT PUNK!! ERUBO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio



    As the elbow connects Sasuke is launched like a rocket back into the ground,leaving a crater while Ay lands at his feet. As he lands he picks up Sasuke by his feet and flings him into the wall where Juugo hit. Immediately afterwards he makes the ram handseal and raises his hand to the sky, triggering lightning to come down through the roof and strike Sasuke, carrying tons of earth to rain down on him with it so that first the lightning hits him and then if by some miracle he dodges the lightning he will then have to avoid the earth falling on him.


    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.



    Note: As shown by the anime "Elbow" can be used with only one arm
    Dante and I agreed that there was timeframe stretching done to get that lightning armor off. Though my main issue was something Scorps brought about one time and thats switching from one technique to another even though its of the same element. Yes, you are a lightning specialist, but that doesnt mean that you can switch from using "Shape Transformation" to perform one technique and then try to pull off another technique because its of the same element. I know youre a lightning specialist, but you have to understand that we are working with a timeframe of literally seconds from you crashing down on me. As he said once.....Were not super speed fighting hedgehogs

    ______________________________________


    Sasuke: I'll most likely never use that again..Pftt.. I hate Naruto so much.. You alright Jugo?

    Jugo:......Im better than ever... Lets kill this bastard!!!

    Sasuke can clearly see the chakra focused in your arm changes and then envelops your body, as well as seeing the lightning imbued in your body radiate, knowing you have done something drastic and different from what you were initially performing, his sword then does nothing to your arm and he knows this isnt good as his body and yours are getting closer and closer. With his Mangekyo sharingan he can still see your muscles of your arm pulling backwards for what seems like an upwards attack towards his face and your eyes filled with strong killing intent. His only option was to try and get closer to you leaning his head out of the way (similar to ike he did in the anime) while performing a technique he remembered seeing Naruto perform on him once as a child and he forms a giant rasengan in the hand that was deflected away with the sword due to the lighting armor and smashes it upwards into the arm thats coming downwards to elbow him. The Rasengan makes contact underneath your bicep and underarm sending you flying upwards and away from Sasuke.



    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: Oodama Rasengan is an advanced Ninjutsu technique that creates a very large Rasengan ball.
    Note:Must already know rasengan.




    All while this is happening Jugo's cursed seal is activating, allowing him to enter his curse seal stage getting him back into focus to fight as he sees the Raikage going flying, he gets up and creates a wind blade to fly across the sky and slice the Raikage in half with his added power..


    Rank :A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A(-5 per turn to target if they us it and target can be self)
    Description:This jutsu creates a seal that gives its target more chakra and more strength.(Curse Mark of Heaven: +10 Nin - +5 Tai. Curse Mark of Earth: +5 Nin - +10 Taijutsu)
    Note:Level 2 is double the gain and the damage to the one with the seal)




    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 (+5)
    Description: A blade of wind that is unblock able due to wind intangibility.




    The rasengan starts forming as Sasuke is coming closer and leaning away from your elbow. Its not that Im trying to hit you before you hit me(of course im not trying to get hit ), but the mere size of the Odama Rasengan fills in the gap of the distance between you and I which is what I wanted to get. Just incase u were wondering. I used +5 for the cursed seal because the Sage transformation technique hasnt been made yet and most of Jugos abilities are taijutsu orientated.
     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    Sorry about that bro, I just figured since neither required handseals and i was a lightning specialist I'd be able to get them off in time.Also using wind? >_> NOT COOL MANNNNN lol
    __________________________________________________ ____________________________

    As the Raikage is blasted upwards by the rasengan it doesn't hurt him much due to his natural toughness and the lightning armor that surrounded him. Though it is now deactivated, Ay keeps his cool as he rises. But while he rises he hears a slicing sound coming towards him (wiki says this is the sound wind blade makes) from his left (where juugo was hit to) which means that the brat with Sasuke must have gotten back up again! It couldn't be Sasuke due to him being directly under Ay. It was high time that Ay ended this kid with Sasuke and the punk Uchiha himself in one blow. He knows he must first move out of the way of the blade coming towards him so not long after the blade starts moving towards him he crosses his fingers and makes a lightning shadow clone directly to the left of him. To avoid confusion this clone will be called Altair.


    (Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
    Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.


    Since Ay had a force that shot him upwards and Altair was simply materialized, Ay would soon rise past Altair. However not long after Altair is created and Ay is going past him he grabs Ay's left ankle and flings him downward, out of the path of the incoming wind blade, with immense strength. Although he doesn't have the lightning armor on Altair still has great strength as shown by him punching Bee quite far away from him with the armor off. Anyway, Ay would now be coming down headfirst towards Sasuke at crazy speeds while Altair disperses in the air, having served his purpose. As Ay gets flung downwards he forms a chidori in his right hand and stretches it down towards Sasuke.

    CHIDORI!

    Since Sasuke would surely recognize his own technique he would most likely be preparing a defense for JUST the chidori. But what he doesnt know is that as soon as the Raikage gets within short range he will instantly expand the chidori in all directions. The chidori expansion will rip straight through Sasuke and go outwards to Juugo. Since Ay is upside down the chidori will only expand as high as hand is above the ground ( 5-6 meters) but will go to mid range destroying some of the pillars in the room on the way to Juugo and causing large amounts of debris to fall on him as well as making him deal with the lightning which destroys everything it touches. Also there will be lots of earth to fall on Sasuke and Ay as well from destroying the pillars that were around them.

    (Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.


    THUNDERSTORM!!!!

    The Raikage knows that there will be some debris that may fall on him as well so as a precaution he activates a lightning defense that can defend against wide ranged attacks and will destroy any earth that falls on him. As his chidori finishes he lands about a few meters in front of where Sasuke was (as in both sasuke and Juugo are in front of him)


    ( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage points: 40 (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
    Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow however the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
    Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.




    Note: There are many pillars in this room so I'm sure we're in no danger of a cave in just yet, and as shown this room can take a lot of structural damage but theres still probably piles of earth everywhere from this

    Note 2: This is the move I used but remember the bolts went down and were only 5 meters high due to me pointing it downwards from 5m above the ground. 1:01-1:07. Maybe they would plow deep underground yes but that doesn't really matter at this point



    Note 3 : Rash and Powerful indeed
     
         
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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

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    Sorry about that bro, I just figured since neither required handseals and i was a lightning specialist I'd be able to get them off in time.Also using wind? >_> NOT COOL MANNNNN lol
    __________________________________________________ ____________________________

    As the Raikage is blasted upwards by the rasengan it doesn't hurt him much due to his natural toughness and the lightning armor that surrounded him. Though it is now deactivated, Ay keeps his cool as he rises. But while he rises he hears a slicing sound coming towards him (wiki says this is the sound wind blade makes) from his left (where juugo was hit to) which means that the brat with Sasuke must have gotten back up again! It couldn't be Sasuke due to him being directly under Ay. It was high time that Ay ended this kid with Sasuke and the punk Uchiha himself in one blow. He knows he must first move out of the way of the blade coming towards him so not long after the blade starts moving towards him he crosses his fingers and makes a lightning shadow clone directly to the left of him. To avoid confusion this clone will be called Altair.


    (Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
    Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.


    Since Ay had a force that shot him upwards and Altair was simply materialized, Ay would soon rise past Altair. However not long after Altair is created and Ay is going past him he grabs Ay's left ankle and flings him downward, out of the path of the incoming wind blade, with immense strength. Although he doesn't have the lightning armor on Altair still has great strength as shown by him punching Bee quite far away from him with the armor off. Anyway, Ay would now be coming down headfirst towards Sasuke at crazy speeds while Altair disperses in the air, having served his purpose. As Ay gets flung downwards he forms a chidori in his right hand and stretches it down towards Sasuke.

    CHIDORI!

    Since Sasuke would surely recognize his own technique he would most likely be preparing a defense for JUST the chidori. But what he doesnt know is that as soon as the Raikage gets within short range he will instantly expand the chidori in all directions. The chidori expansion will rip straight through Sasuke and go outwards to Juugo. Since Ay is upside down the chidori will only expand as high as hand is above the ground ( 5-6 meters) but will go to mid range destroying some of the pillars in the room on the way to Juugo and causing large amounts of debris to fall on him as well as making him deal with the lightning which destroys everything it touches. Also there will be lots of earth to fall on Sasuke and Ay as well from destroying the pillars that were around them.

    (Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.


    THUNDERSTORM!!!!

    The Raikage knows that there will be some debris that may fall on him as well so as a precaution he activates a lightning defense that can defend against wide ranged attacks and will destroy any earth that falls on him. As his chidori finishes he lands about a few meters in front of where Sasuke was (as in both sasuke and Juugo are in front of him)


    ( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage points: 40 (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
    Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow however the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
    Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.




    Note: There are many pillars in this room so I'm sure we're in no danger of a cave in just yet, and as shown this room can take a lot of structural damage but theres still probably piles of earth everywhere from this

    Note 2: This is the move I used but remember the bolts went down and were only 5 meters high due to me pointing it downwards from 5m above the ground. 1:01-1:07. Maybe they would plow deep underground yes but that doesn't really matter at this point



    Note 3 : Rash and Powerful indeed
    My only problem with your move is your recovery explanation. Yes, the Raikage is tough and all but that doesnt defy the physics of what happens when youre struck with a rasengan. In fact you were hit with an "Odama" rasengan. Your body wouldve been flying uncontrollably upwards into the ceiling. When you made your lightning shadow clone, I doubt your clone wouldve been able to grab you by the foot so easily to throw you.

    ___________________________

    Sasuke Using my own techniques against me...? Heh..pathetic.. Get ready Jugo...


    As Sasuke and Jugo both see you magically regain your balance and create the clone to throw you, Sasuke gets a plan in mind and sees the chakra being focused into your arm and it appears to be a sharp lightning nature technique resembling one of his own, his sharingans ability to allow him to make precise and accurate decisions to counter the technique allows him to then without hesitation, make a single handseal gathering his wind chakra and exhaling a large blast of wind towards you..



    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.



    With the techniques clashing and ultimately neutralizing each other out, Sasuke has taken the opportunity to activate susanoo, manifesting a ribcage and 4 arms from the sides taking form. Due to the clash of techniques at a close range there is dust and rubble in the air, but Sasuke is still able to perceive the chakra from the Raikage, making his both of his right susanoo arms punch the Raikage slamming him into the base of a pillar up ahead. The upper arm is leading the way with a jab, while the lower right arm is coming your way in a hooking manner, just incase you dodge.


    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 120 (-30 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (-20 to user per turn)
    Description:
    Susanoo, also known as the Tempestuous God of Valor, or literally "He with the ability to help by all means", is the third ability granted by the Mangekyō Sharingan to those who awaken the abilities: Tsukuyomi — which symbolises the "darkness of the spiritual world" and Amaterasu — which denotes the "light of the material world". It creates a gigantic, humanoid, ethereal warrior that surrounds the user. Even though it envelopes the user, they can move around within Susanoo freely, use techniques from inside of it, as well as manifest only parts of Susanoo — as the situation calls for it. Despite Susanoo's impressive defensive capabilities, the protection it grants its user is not absolute. The user can be thrown out of the upper half of Susanoo by an enemy manipulating the substance underneath Susanoo (the ground basically). Also, a sufficiently powerful attack will still result in damage, especially during the technique's initial stages. The only known ways to attack the user while Susanoo is active is either to draw the wielder out of the technique and then attack, bind and restrict its movements, or to break the defence with overwhelming force. Susanoo users are also vulnerable to attacks which don't actually deal physical damage to it, such as strong lights and sounds, that can also impair their ability to sustain Susanoo. Normal and Sound-based genjutsu can also bypass Susanoo's impressive defense. Sasuke's Susanoo possesses a sword and a bow that doubles as a weapon and shield. It is able to produce chakra arrows to use with the bow via an orb held by a third hand, which can be fired at such a speed that evading them is nearly impossible. It can also use the arrows as a makeshift melee weapon. Sasuke is able to switch between his Susanoo's various weapons regardless of which stage it is in. In both its incomplete and complete forms, it has a more demonic appearance in contrast to Itachi's, which have a more "normal" human-like appearance, possessing horns and a malevolent grin. In its final form, it also possesses jagged teeth around its hood and magatama earrings. In addition to its secondary right hand, Sasuke's Susanoo has been depicted with a secondary left hand as well, a trait similar to all Susano known so far that have been shown to have 4 arms. After Sasuke gains the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, the second layer of armour changes its appearance. The orb is now made entirely of the flames of Amaterasu and the arrows are passively coated in the black flames. Sasuke can also throw the flames in a tomoe shape, using a wide spread attack from his own palm setting his foes on fire, similar to a Magatama attack but with the characterisitics of Amaterasu.
    Note: Can only be used by Sasuke Uchiha and must have MS/EMS
    Note: While active user can't use Eye Techniques except for Amaterasu and those pertaining to Susanoo.
    Note: Takes 1 full turn to stabilize into the full final form, during which his body bestows only a B-Rank defense.
    Note: The body of Susanoo grants an A-Rank defense against most elemental attacks, specially tangible ones.
    Note: The warrior can shoot up to 2 arrows per turn, counting as a move (regardless of shooting one or 2) and having a strength of an S-Rank long range attack each.
    Note: When the user has gained EMS, the warrior bestows an S-Rank defense when in complete form to most attacks and its arrows carry the characteristics of Amaterasu flames. The wide spread Amaterasu projectile attack used from his palm counts as a move and can only be done twice, being Long-Range and equal to S-Rank.
    Note: With Susano active the user is only able to use two other techniques per turn due to the extreme chakra consumption and can't make clones of any kind.
    Note: User can manifest it partially (an Arm, or a leg, only the ribcage, etc) 4 times per battle, with each partial manifestation lasting only a moment and having an A-Rank defensive/offensive power.
    Note: Can only be used once and last for a maximum of 6 turns after which the user will be left blind in both eyes and extremely exhausted if he hasn't attained EMS. If he has not only can he use Susano twice but he'll feel no ill effect from it while, upon deactivation, he'll only need to wait 2 turns to activate his EMS again and 3 turns to use Susano again.




    Simultaneously to you forming the chidori Jugo starts running towards the both of you, the clash of techniques leaves Jugo temporarily blinded of both of you until Sasukes susanoo illuminates the area and he slows down his run and gets prepared for when the dust settles gathering energy into his appendages ready to fire off a chakra blast at the Raikage when he gets a clear sight of him..


    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: While in his second Cursed Seal state, Jūgo grows more of his jet booster like appendages, extends them, and then uses them to gather chakra and form a huge powerful chakra blast.
    Note: Can only be used twice by Jugo.


     
         
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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    As the Raikage finishes his descent and the lightning spreads he notices Sasuke make a handseal and expell a large blast of wind that equals the size of his own lightning technique. As they cancel out the Raikage lands on his right hand and immediately brings his feet down so that he is now in a crouched position facing Sasuke with his right knee bent towards the ground. At this moment in time Sasuke is activating Susanoo and Ay can hear footsteps behind him amidst the dust as well as that same weird sound (the jet engine sound) that he heard at the beginning of their encounter.

    That kid with Sasuke is beginning to be a real nuisance!

    As if that werent enough suddenly theres a weird blue glow in front of him and he can see two glowing fists beginning to come towards him. DAMN! These kids are annoying. His rage flared as his Lightning Armor activated. With it his hair flipped upwards out of the cornrows it was in into a super saiyan esque looking style (like it did in the anime). This happens as soon as soon as the glowing arm starts to come towards him.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography

    In conjunction with the Armor being activated Ay immediately pivots on his left foot, spinning to the right, and runs (all in one fluid motion) towards Juugo in a wide arc to Juugo's right with the end of the arc being right behind him. The speed of the Lightning armor combined with his super reaction times allows him to move out of the way of your punch, with more than enough speed and leaving only an afterimage in his place. The arc he runs in also allows him to create enough space so that your right hook will miss since he moves in the direction the hit is coming towards,(that is, the hook is coming to him from his left and he runs to his right in an arc) not that the limbs can keep up with his speed anyway. The arc he runs in serves another purpose as well, Ay knows that Juugo is charging an attack due to that noise he is making so this means that with Ay's speed Juugo would have to readjust his thrusters to hit him, something that Juugo cant do anyway since he isnt very equipped to deal with the Raikages speed. In addition due to the smoke thats still in the air Juugo barely has any time to react since you said he'd shoot when he has a clear site, the arc the Raikage runs in is wide but he makes it in a way so that if Juugo does the blast that the blast (which is quite wide) will hit Sasuke as well, giving Sasuke almost full damage since his Susanoo takes 1 turn to fully form and is currently at B rank defense.

    As he gets behind Juugo (on Juugos right side), Ay quickly rotates his body to the right while extending his right arm with his right hand in a "chop" position. As he rotates his hand slams into Juugo's spine, most likely as Juugo is just able to react, when his hand connects it simply slices straight through Juugo since its main ability is slicing and snapping, the rotation is quick and fluid,of course ends with Ay being perfectly squared up with Sasuke. This move is very quick and in a blink of an eye it seems Ay has moved from his last position to slicing through Juugo as he looks towards Sasukes position (chin and below) with blood covered hands and an enraged look in his eye.


    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.


    As soon as he is slices through Juugo, Ay decided to try something risky. He's going to launch that smug bastard Sasuke right out of his little protection, so he makes a single handseal and dashes in a slight arc towards Sasuke. As he dashes Sasuke would probably try to stop him, however a large pillar rises under Sasuke quite quickly, as well as one to the left of him and 2 in front of him, behind Ay. As Sasuke gets launched out of Susanoo, Ay leaps up in the air above Sasuke. By now Sasuke is fully out of Susanoo, as the form hasnt stabilized yet and therefore is not fully formed. The raikage makes sure to time his leap so that he is less than a foot above Sasuke just as he is thrust out of Sasuke and he delivers a crushing blow with his right fist that sends Sasuke hurtling back into the ground through the pillar that had launched him, leaving a crater as Sasuke crashes back into the ground. Of course Sasuke completely destroys the pillar he gets knocked into, meaning that Ay doesnt have to worry about the pillar continuing and hitting him. In addition to this even if Sasuke counters the Raikage he also has to deal with the lightning from the pillars striking him.

    (Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

    UCHIHA! You have been nothing but a nuisance to the ninja world! Not only that but you saw fit to take my brother away from me as well...I'm going to give you whatever you did to bee TENFOLD! GIVE UP NOW!
     
         
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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
    As the Raikage finishes his descent and the lightning spreads he notices Sasuke make a handseal and expell a large blast of wind that equals the size of his own lightning technique. As they cancel out the Raikage lands on his right hand and immediately brings his feet down so that he is now in a crouched position facing Sasuke with his right knee bent towards the ground. At this moment in time Sasuke is activating Susanoo and Ay can hear footsteps behind him amidst the dust as well as that same weird sound (the jet engine sound) that he heard at the beginning of their encounter.

    That kid with Sasuke is beginning to be a real nuisance!

    As if that werent enough suddenly theres a weird blue glow in front of him and he can see two glowing fists beginning to come towards him. DAMN! These kids are annoying. His rage flared as his Lightning Armor activated. With it his hair flipped upwards out of the cornrows it was in into a super saiyan esque looking style (like it did in the anime). This happens as soon as soon as the glowing arm starts to come towards him.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography

    In conjunction with the Armor being activated Ay immediately pivots on his left foot, spinning to the right, and runs (all in one fluid motion) towards Juugo in a wide arc to Juugo's right with the end of the arc being right behind him. The speed of the Lightning armor combined with his super reaction times allows him to move out of the way of your punch, with more than enough speed and leaving only an afterimage in his place. The arc he runs in also allows him to create enough space so that your right hook will miss since he moves in the direction the hit is coming towards,(that is, the hook is coming to him from his left and he runs to his right in an arc) not that the limbs can keep up with his speed anyway. The arc he runs in serves another purpose as well, Ay knows that Juugo is charging an attack due to that noise he is making so this means that with Ay's speed Juugo would have to readjust his thrusters to hit him, something that Juugo cant do anyway since he isnt very equipped to deal with the Raikages speed. In addition due to the smoke thats still in the air Juugo barely has any time to react since you said he'd shoot when he has a clear site, the arc the Raikage runs in is wide but he makes it in a way so that if Juugo does the blast that the blast (which is quite wide) will hit Sasuke as well, giving Sasuke almost full damage since his Susanoo takes 1 turn to fully form and is currently at B rank defense.

    As he gets behind Juugo (on Juugos right side), Ay quickly rotates his body to the right while extending his right arm with his right hand in a "chop" position. As he rotates his hand slams into Juugo's spine, most likely as Juugo is just able to react, when his hand connects it simply slices straight through Juugo since its main ability is slicing and snapping, the rotation is quick and fluid,of course ends with Ay being perfectly squared up with Sasuke. This move is very quick and in a blink of an eye it seems Ay has moved from his last position to slicing through Juugo as he looks towards Sasukes position (chin and below) with blood covered hands and an enraged look in his eye.


    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.


    As soon as he is slices through Juugo, Ay decided to try something risky. He's going to launch that smug bastard Sasuke right out of his little protection, so he makes a single handseal and dashes in a slight arc towards Sasuke. As he dashes Sasuke would probably try to stop him, however a large pillar rises under Sasuke quite quickly, as well as one to the left of him and 2 in front of him, behind Ay. As Sasuke gets launched out of Susanoo, Ay leaps up in the air above Sasuke. By now Sasuke is fully out of Susanoo, as the form hasnt stabilized yet and therefore is not fully formed. The raikage makes sure to time his leap so that he is less than a foot above Sasuke just as he is thrust out of Sasuke and he delivers a crushing blow with his right fist that sends Sasuke hurtling back into the ground through the pillar that had launched him, leaving a crater as Sasuke crashes back into the ground. Of course Sasuke completely destroys the pillar he gets knocked into, meaning that Ay doesnt have to worry about the pillar continuing and hitting him. In addition to this even if Sasuke counters the Raikage he also has to deal with the lightning from the pillars striking him.

    (Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

    UCHIHA! You have been nothing but a nuisance to the ninja world! Not only that but you saw fit to take my brother away from me as well...I'm going to give you whatever you did to bee TENFOLD! GIVE UP NOW!
    Okay, your entire move is seriously screwed up! I really don't know how to keep this going with all the misunderstandings. Jugo was never behind you, nor is that possible with the current course of actions. In the beginning of the fight you knocked Jugo backwards to his original starting point, while Sasuke ran up on you and hit you backwards in the air with a rasengan. When you came back flying towards Sasuke with your lightning, how could that course of action magically make Jugo behind you, if hes still back at his original starting range from your shoulder thrust. Making your whole reasoning for your pivoting and arcing away from Jugo completely irrelevant, as well as your statement about the chakra blast hitting Sasukes susanno. Jugo would be adjacent to Sasuke, but behind him a good distance charging the bast for a clear sight of you as the dust is settling, but activating your lightning armor is pretty much like a signal flaring off letting him know where you are. If you were to run in either direction, Jugo's line of sight should stay the same, but not only that but you tried to state that you heard footsteps of Jugo coming from behind you. Since Jugo would be a good distance behind Sasuke, Im sure you would not hear those footsteps, and the only thing you would see is the energy blast coming towards you as the dust is settling. So in my opinion, I wouldnt say you would stand there and get hit, but instead you would have activated susanoo, dodged my susanno arms,and then headed behind me (Sasuke) in an arc heading towards Jugo dodging the blast..

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    Sasuke sees you activate the lightning release armor and his efforts at hitting you with Susanoo are futile as the Susanoo begins to manifest into its complete form. He can follow you with his eye sight, seeing that you have your mind set on attacking Jugo as you begin running towards Jugo who was coming up adjacent behind Sasuke (Id say mid range?). In your arcing run, Sasuke keeps his eyes on your body movements with his eyes and uses his ability to ignite unholy flames on you as your movements start decelerating catching fire to your right side of your upper body (arms). Sasuke doesnt really care for Jugos life, as long as he can try to take you out in your most vulnerable state..

    Sasuke: Amaterasu!!


    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 70
    Damage Points: 120 (-30 to the user)
    Descripton:
    One of the basic techniques awoken with MS, Amaterasu is the ability to ignite the undying black flames. The jet-black flames of the Amaterasu, said to be the fires from hell that are as hot as the sun, ignite at the focus of the user's vision. This dispiction is somewhat linked to the fact that, because of the damage produced in ones eyes, as the user closes his eyes and prepares to use Amaterasu, tears of blood flow through his face. The black flames lack momentum and impact (being unable to break through strong solid inert defenses) but have a very high parasitic ability, spreading through anything that comes in contact with them and consuming with enormous ease, any type of fire. Though the flames have been stated to be unavoidable (since they are not a projectile but "happen" on focal point), this has been proven as false. While quite hard to avoid, its been proven that ninjas with enhanced speed and reactions (such as Third and Fourth Raikage in Lightning Armor) when facing the user can move out of the focal point before the flames actually ignite. This is related to the somewhat slow ignition and burn of the flames. While they burn for 7 days, can't be doused and are hard to avoid, they spread and burn through the target slowly. Also, its been noticed that Dojutsu users (3 Tomoe Sharingan, Rinnegan, Byakugan) and skilled chakra sensors can see/feel the overflow and increasing chakra pressure in the eye, right before Amaterasu is used, but that in itself is not enough to dodge or block it, as target would need to move faster than the user can focus his eye on it. Another thing that has been shown capable of blocking Amaterasu are "sentient" automated defenses, like Gaara's sand shield. By coming between the user and his target, a fast enough defense can block the intended focal point (the enemy) and defend him from the black flames, as long as its tangible and completely blocks the users line of sight.
    Note: Requires the user to have his MS active
    Note: Can only be used 4 times and reduces MS duration by 2 turns each use
    Note: Cannot be dodged unless the user has an ability that fits the ones described
    Note: If hit, enemy has 1 turn before losing conscious and eventually being completely consumed, during which he experiences excruciating pain and damage.

     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    Raiden is right in his assessment of the last move and most of his pointers regaridng your moves. I re read it all twice. You failed to assess the correct positions of both you and your enemies and I think you misunderstood some key elements of Raiden's moves.

    Now, either continue from this point onwards or require it to be submitted for grading. Your call -Broly-
     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    yeah go ahead and grade it
     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage Test] -Broly-

    ~Test Failed~

    This test was messed up, most of your moves have faults in them, that Lightning Shadow Clone move, wouldn't get you out of the way in time, the Wind blade is really fast, not to mention you didn't take into account the momentum the Odama Rasengan pushed you back with, not enough Taijutsu nor Lightning Release mastery, you may retake the test in one month.
     
         

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