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    The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Chapter 6 Timing

    Naruto : (damn it. With that jutsu he can keep up with me . How do i stop a technique like that?)

    Naruto's Sage mode clone runs up behind sasuke

    Sasuke hears Naruto's clone approaching and quickly turns to direct his jutsu at the clone...

    After slowing down the clone he drives a chidori throught it's chest causing it to dissappear

    Naruto : (THAT'S IT!!!!)

    Naruto creates 3 Kyuubi Mode clones

    Sasuke: Those tricks won't work on me!

    Naruto : ( with these clonse i should be able to cause a diversion. 3 should do the trick)

    Naruto: NOW!!!

    Each of Naruto's clones make 2 chakra arms and quickly direct them under water

    Sasuke : hmph! So that's your big idea....

    The chakra arms emerge from the water aiming to attack sasuke

    Sasuke jumps into the air dodging them all without using his Gensoku-ji

    Naruto: ( why isnt he usiing that jutsu?)

    The clones continue their mid air assaults on sasuke until he falls back on the water

    Sasuke lands firmly.. only to see the chakra arms alll coming towards at the same time.

    Sasuke:!!

    He jumps back causing the chakra arms to miss and cause a giant splash from the water

    Before Sasuke can make another move...a mid sized
    Tailed Beast Bomb comes through the giant splash caused by the the clones' attack

    Sasuke: Shit!........Gensoku-Ji !

    Sasuke shifts to the side causing the blast to fly into the forest nearby , causing a massive explosion


    Sasuke turns back towards Naruto's direction but, Naruto is no where to be seen

    Sasuke: (Damn it! He did that to escape my Jutsu)

    Kurama: That's it Naruto! It's all about timing! Stay out of his sight and when his guard is dropped...WHACK HIS ASS!

    Naruto : I know.

    Sasuke: (Damn it if i keep on slowing down those blasts i'll run out of chakra )

    Sasuke forms susanoo's rib cage

    Naruto quickly appears in a flash and punches through susanoo's ribs causing sasuke to fly into the leg of Madara's statue

    Sasuke: ugh!

    Naruto once again vanishes in order to stay out of sight of sasuke's jutsu

    Sasuke rises from the hole in the statue , in pain ,he cringes and kneels down to one knee coughing up blood.

    Sasuke: "cough" "cough"

    Naruto : ( i dont want to kill sasuke , but.... For the leaf, I will!)

    Naruto appears as he throws another punch at sasuke

    Before Naruto's attack lands, it is met by a dense purple aura that stops Naruto in his tracks.

    Sasuke: i never thought i'd have to use this, against someone like you...

    Naruto dashes far away from sasuke

    Naruto: that's-

    Sasuke's susanoo grows to a height almost comparable to the stone statues. It solidifies...

    Naruto: His susanoo is enormous!!!

    Kurama: You know what we have to do.

    Naruto: Yea.

    Naruto's chakra cloak begins to blaze upward forming kurama's shape.

    Sasuke: !!!!

    Kurama: Naruto, we only have about 10 minutes left , dont hesitate to kill him !

    Naruto :..... r-right

    Sasuke: I see you have more power than i thought. But that wont be enough to stop my perfect susanoo! The ultimate power bestowed upon the uchiha!!!

    Naruto: Sasuke, if this is what it's come to.... I'll use my full power here and now . I wont hold back!

    Sasuke: Come! NARUTO!!!



    Next chapter: Full Power!


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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    somethings not right....
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Wait a minute..

    Edit: It's pretty good
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Quote Originally Posted by Naruto Ninetails View Post
    somethings not right....
    And what might that be??
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Nice!!!!!! I'd say the valley of the end is about to get a radical restructuring!
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Quote Originally Posted by KGB Kakuzu View Post
    Nice!!!!!! I'd say the valley of the end is about to get a radical restructuring!
    You can count on it.. lol
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    wait wait wait you are saying that sasuke does not even have to use susanoo when fighting naruto in kyuubi form at the beginning of the fight?
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Quote Originally Posted by bestevawuz3 View Post
    wait wait wait you are saying that sasuke does not even have to use susanoo when fighting naruto in kyuubi form at the beginning of the fight?
    You would have to read my other chapters
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Fantastic
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Quote Originally Posted by November Nolove View Post
    Fantastic
    Thank you...althought I know this isn't my best chapter. But it is used to set up this giant "boss battle".
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    I liked how Sasuke turns on his complete Susano'o being as big as the statues ^^ I hope to see that in the anime!
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Quote Originally Posted by badoera View Post
    I liked how Sasuke turns on his complete Susano'o being as big as the statues ^^ I hope to see that in the anime!
    I can't wait for that as well.. u should check out the previous chapters and see how I upgraded Sasuke
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Another Fantastic chapter!!! Keep up the good work:D
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Good job. I`d include a comparison of Sasuke to Madara by Kurama, though (like if Sasuke still isn't on Madara`s level or if Sasuke has surpassed Madara). By understanding how powerful Sasuke is, the reader can better visualize the fight.
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Quote Originally Posted by Omnipotent View Post
    Good job. I`d include a comparison of Sasuke to Madara by Kurama, though (like if Sasuke still isn't on Madara`s level or if Sasuke has surpassed Madara). By understanding how powerful Sasuke is, the reader can better visualize the fight.
    Thanks...and what do u mean..madara in general?? Or his similarity with PS??
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    sweet chapter bro :D
    can't wait for the next one :D
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    Epic again nice work
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chapter 6

    My bad if I dont get to reply as quickly as I like i've been busy at school with basketball but i'll try to get on the base more often. But on to the chapter , it was a good idea having sasuke with perfect susanoo cant wait till next chapter too see how naruto counters it. And like the Signature especially with the last chapter :D . Good work bro
     
         

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