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      Rikamaru Bio



      Name:Rikamaru
      Surname:Soulkile
      Nickname:Stealth Master
      Age:25
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      Looks:Rikamaru is a tall and noticeably muscular man
      with pale skin, short spiky black hair, brown eyes,
      and small eyebrows.He wears a mask,and owns grey hair.He wears brown ninja outfit and has never been seen with under his mask.


      Personality: He believed that he was already good enough to defeat any opponent and his misplaced self-confidence would eventually earn him many painful experiences once he finally left his village, but those experiences would also be the source of great mental and spiritual growth. Rikimaru had bonds with two other ninja: Shiunsai and Tatsumaru. Both were very important to him, and both were lost. Tatsumaru was Rikimaru's role model and older brother. His connection to Tatsumaru was more than what was allowed in the way of the ninja. And Shiunsai was a father figure to him but Rikimaru showed only his student connection to Shiunsai. Suffering from a memory loss, Tatsumaru kills Shiunsai. Upon the recovery of his memory, he kills himself. This event marked the death of Rikimaru's former personality.

      History:Rikimaru wields the ancient sword Izayoi, which is passed on through the generations from leader to leader. Rikimaru took possession of the sword during the second great ninja war. He defeated Tatsumaru from the villige hidden in the clouds, who had previously wielded Izayoi. Izayoi does have certain magical properties, and is also extremely strong and resilient to injury. The only time it has ever been damaged was during Rikimaru's duel with Dr. Kimaira in Wrath of Heaven, and it was promptly repaired by the clan's blacksmith, Ressai. When Tatsumaru killed Master Shiunsai, Rikimaru let his feelings take over and pursued the murderer, his former companion. A fierce fight between the two took place, but eventually gaining the upper hand, Rikimaru hesitated. Tatsumaru takes that time to cut his right eye, leaving him scarred for life.[2] Tatsumaru used to be Rikimaru's role model, but by now, Rikimaru has surpassed him in his spiritual and physical abilities. The power concealed within the right eye will later be revealed as his dohjutsu, the power that he alone has.

      Villige of birth:Konoha

      Rank//Chakra Info.
      Ninja Rank:Chunin
      Specialty:None
      Elements:Fire(needs training)
      Your ninjutsu:None

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      Battles

      Won:0
      Lost:0
       
           
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      Re: Rikamaru Bio

      Nice
       
           

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      Re: Rikamaru Bio

      Change the yellow text, put E rank ninjutsus and maybe put a theme.Other than that it's a good first bio.
       
           

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      Will it get approved?
       
           

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      Re: Rikamaru Bio

      Quote Originally Posted by HaterFtw View Post
      Will it get approved?
      Just tweak some things and match it to this template.
      http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=1950
       
           

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      Hey the people that approve or diapprove please give me chance to edit.I will do it tomorow because now im on my tablet
       
           

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      it doesn't seem like you used the right template but I might be wrong because it does look a little off, aside from that the yellow text should be removed and perhaps get a Bio Designer to help you out. In my opinion I don't think it will be approved. Also I partially read some of your history and it doesn't seem to be Narutoverse related... in order to get approved it has to be related to the NV
       
           

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      Re: Rikamaru Bio

      Quote Originally Posted by 'Nāpalm View Post
      it doesn't seem like you used the right template but I might be wrong because it does look a little off, aside from that the yellow text should be removed and perhaps get a Bio Designer to help you out. In my opinion I don't think it will be approved. Also I partially read some of your history and it doesn't seem to be Narutoverse related... in order to get approved it has to be related to the NV
      ^^This
       
           

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      Re: Rikamaru Bio

      Quote Originally Posted by HaterFtw View Post
      Hey the people that approve or diapprove please give me chance to edit.I will do it tomorow because now im on my tablet
      Yea they do.
       
           

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      Re: Rikamaru Bio

      Quote Originally Posted by HaterFtw View Post
      Hey the people that approve or diapprove please give me chance to edit.I will do it tomorow because now im on my tablet
      Caliburn wont check in for a couple of days
       
           

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      Re: Rikamaru Bio

      Now is it better? Now will it get approved?
       
           

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      Re: Rikamaru Bio

      Follow the correct template. Also, you're missing E-rank techniques
       
           

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