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    [Sensei Test] - Zero Kelvin

    Greetings, Zero Kelvin

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:
    • Rei's Rules and Regulations
    • All basic elements up to your current rank are to be used.
    • You are allowed to use your KG.
    • Custom jutsu(s) and Custom element(s) are not allowed
    • You do not need to win the fight to pass but doing so will gain you bonus points.
    • Terrain: Grassy plain field with nothing around.
    • Range: Mid

    I will be using my Sasuke Uchiha biography for this test against you.

    Please respond with a link to the bio you will be using and I will begin.

    No one other than myself and the participant may post here. If required, administrators/moderators and official senseis may input their opinion.

    Have fun and good luck! ^_^
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Zero Kelvin

    I'll be using Senshō, the Third Raikage for this test.
    Let's see if I can't get through this without failing terribly.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    I'll be using Senshō, the Third Raikage for this test.
    Let's see if I can't get through this without failing terribly.
    , just relax and think your moves through, i'm sure you can pass easily.


    As Sasuke watches the Raikage coming to the battlefield, he finds his appearance quite similar to A when he faught him, also wearing somewhat the same clothes, this causes Sasuke's eyes to ignite as he opens his 3 Tomoe Sharingan passively, looking at the raikage with burning rage, remembering what happened to his brother Itachi, and how is he going to make all the kages pay, with no exceptions.

    (Dōjutsu: Sharingan) – Eye Technique: Copy Wheel Eye
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.
    Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
    Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
    Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.

    You look just like he was, no matter who stands in my way i will crush him, for Itachi!!

    Then Sasuke channels his earth chakra into the sky above the Raikage, causing a large amount of sticky chakra-infused mud to descend out of a portal that's made from the thin air, falling onto the Raikage from above, it falls kind of slow due to the sticky properties, but once it reaches the ground it attaches itself to the ground, sticking anything in contact with it.

    (Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

    Meanwhile as the mud descends onto the Raikage, Sasuke weaves a few handseals and slams his hands onto the ground, releasing a large triangular shaped blast of lightning that rages through the ground destroying the surface of the ground as it moves towards the raikage, the tip of the triangle is pointed towards the Raikage, and the base facing Sasuke, the lightning is somewhat hidden within the earth, so what can be seen is the earth being teared apart as the lightning through the ground, after the blast is released, Sasuke starts running towards the Raikage in a side arc, from the Raikage's left side, while summoning a flash bomb attached to a kunai along with 2 explosive tagged kunais from his right summoning seal around his right wrist, then he throws the explosive tagged kunais along with the flash bomb that's attached to a kunai into the air, maintaining a crescent shaped arc in order to descend onto the Raikage from above his location, when near him about 5 meters away, the flash bomb goes off sending a burst of light that fills a portion of the battlefield, while the explosive tagged kunais continue on to the raikage exploding when they are 2 meters away from him, Sasuke keeps his Sharingan focused onto the raikage, making the blinding light released from the flash bomb not affect his vision, but making it a little blurred, however he's the one who triggers the flash bomb by a handseal, it's not triggered by itself.

    (Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

    After throwing the kunais in the air, Sasuke summons multiple windmill shurikens from his summoning seals then throws them towards the Raikage, making them cover quite a wide reach as the shurikens are thrown they get covered with fire setting them a blaze, and move on as blazing projectiles towards the Raikage, adding a burning effect to the shurikens and increasing their power.

    (Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni) – Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Dānte View Post
    , just relax and think your moves through, i'm sure you can pass easily.


    As Sasuke watches the Raikage coming to the battlefield, he finds his appearance quite similar to A when he faught him, also wearing somewhat the same clothes, this causes Sasuke's eyes to ignite as he opens his 3 Tomoe Sharingan passively, looking at the raikage with burning rage, remembering what happened to his brother Itachi, and how is he going to make all the kages pay, with no exceptions.

    (Dōjutsu: Sharingan) – Eye Technique: Copy Wheel Eye
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.
    Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
    Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
    Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.

    You look just like he was, no matter who stands in my way i will crush him, for Itachi!!

    Then Sasuke channels his earth chakra into the sky above the Raikage, causing a large amount of sticky chakra-infused mud to descend out of a portal that's made from the thin air, falling onto the Raikage from above, it falls kind of slow due to the sticky properties, but once it reaches the ground it attaches itself to the ground, sticking anything in contact with it.

    (Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

    Meanwhile as the mud descends onto the Raikage, Sasuke weaves a few handseals and slams his hands onto the ground, releasing a large triangular shaped blast of lightning that rages through the ground destroying the surface of the ground as it moves towards the raikage, the tip of the triangle is pointed towards the Raikage, and the base facing Sasuke, the lightning is somewhat hidden within the earth, so what can be seen is the earth being teared apart as the lightning through the ground, after the blast is released, Sasuke starts running towards the Raikage in a side arc, from the Raikage's left side, while summoning a flash bomb attached to a kunai along with 2 explosive tagged kunais from his right summoning seal around his right wrist, then he throws the explosive tagged kunais along with the flash bomb that's attached to a kunai into the air, maintaining a crescent shaped arc in order to descend onto the Raikage from above his location, when near him about 5 meters away, the flash bomb goes off sending a burst of light that fills a portion of the battlefield, while the explosive tagged kunais continue on to the raikage exploding when they are 2 meters away from him, Sasuke keeps his Sharingan focused onto the raikage, making the blinding light released from the flash bomb not affect his vision, but making it a little blurred, however he's the one who triggers the flash bomb by a handseal, it's not triggered by itself.

    (Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

    After throwing the kunais in the air, Sasuke summons multiple windmill shurikens from his summoning seals then throws them towards the Raikage, making them cover quite a wide reach as the shurikens are thrown they get covered with fire setting them a blaze, and move on as blazing projectiles towards the Raikage, adding a burning effect to the shurikens and increasing their power.

    (Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni) – Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.
    As the portal appears above him, Senshō immediately responds by channeling lightning chakra into his near vicinity, forming a great, dragon-shaped vortex of electricity and wind. The dragon immediately coils its elemental body and roars upwards, zooming into the falling mud with sparks of electricity sizzling through its body. Taking advantage of Earth's elemental weakness to Lightning, the Thunder Dragon crashes through much of the mud, sending great clumps and chunks of earth raining down the battlefield. Only peeved by the impact, the Dragon rears its head and arcs its body into a steep dive that sends it charging downwards towards the Raikage's positon where another arc leaves it barrelling directly towards Sasuke, jaws wide open and claws raised.

    (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.


    Before the Dragon arcs a second time however...
    Busy with his Dragon, Senshō doesn't notice Sasuke's second attack before it's all but ready. Reacting quickly; the Raikage forms a short string of handseals and spits a tremendous stream of water from his mouth. The water quickly rise into the shape of a humongous hemisphere, it's shape and power only held back by Senshō's sharp concentration. As the Lightning Destruction technique collides with the Wall and threatens to collapse it from below, so does the remains of Senshō's Dragon connect with the other end.
    The remaining pressure and energy in the Dragon tips the scales in the Wall's favor, letting tendrils of electricity whirl through the great body of water even as it collapses forward, now moving for Sasuke's position and covering a large area.

    #note: the explosive kunais and their 'flashy' comrade would meet a sad end at the top of the hemisphere, or at the jaws of the descending dragon depending on their exact position. It's really either or.

    (Suiton: Suijinheki) - Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
    Rank: A
    Type: Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. The user will use the following hand seals to activate the technique Tiger → Snake → Rat → Snake → Tiger. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defence without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.


    As the Wall collapses and Sasuke's third attack, presumably, zooms toward him, Senshō slams his hand together in a handseal and exhales a huge blast of wind towards Sasuke. Using the water as a 'battering ram', the Atsugai clashes with the body of water and 'lifts' it, causing the fire-enhanced Shurikens to meet a wave of electricuted water with a wave of pressure backing it. As he exhales the Blast, the Raikage storms forwards, making a beeline for Sasuke's position while remaining camouflaged behind his techniques.

    (Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.


    My timeframe looks as such;
    You: Mud
    Me: Dragon
    You: Lightning Destruction
    Me: Water Wall
    You: Kunais
    ~The time between the two lightning techniques colliding with the Wall is 'idle time', spent on maintaining the defense. I base this on how high in the sky the 'portal' was placed in the Anime. It's only fair that my Dragon spends more than half a second crossing that distance and going back again.
    -Kunais, LD and Dragon connects with Wall.
    You: Fire
    Me: Wind

    I suck at tests. Beat me with clubs.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    As the portal appears above him, Senshō immediately responds by channeling lightning chakra into his near vicinity, forming a great, dragon-shaped vortex of electricity and wind. The dragon immediately coils its elemental body and roars upwards, zooming into the falling mud with sparks of electricity sizzling through its body. Taking advantage of Earth's elemental weakness to Lightning, the Thunder Dragon crashes through much of the mud, sending great clumps and chunks of earth raining down the battlefield. Only peeved by the impact, the Dragon rears its head and arcs its body into a steep dive that sends it charging downwards towards the Raikage's positon where another arc leaves it barrelling directly towards Sasuke, jaws wide open and claws raised.

    (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.


    Before the Dragon arcs a second time however...
    Busy with his Dragon, Senshō doesn't notice Sasuke's second attack before it's all but ready. Reacting quickly; the Raikage forms a short string of handseals and spits a tremendous stream of water from his mouth. The water quickly rise into the shape of a humongous hemisphere, it's shape and power only held back by Senshō's sharp concentration. As the Lightning Destruction technique collides with the Wall and threatens to collapse it from below, so does the remains of Senshō's Dragon connect with the other end.
    The remaining pressure and energy in the Dragon tips the scales in the Wall's favor, letting tendrils of electricity whirl through the great body of water even as it collapses forward, now moving for Sasuke's position and covering a large area.

    #note: the explosive kunais and their 'flashy' comrade would meet a sad end at the top of the hemisphere, or at the jaws of the descending dragon depending on their exact position. It's really either or.

    (Suiton: Suijinheki) - Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
    Rank: A
    Type: Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. The user will use the following hand seals to activate the technique Tiger → Snake → Rat → Snake → Tiger. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defence without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.


    As the Wall collapses and Sasuke's third attack, presumably, zooms toward him, Senshō slams his hand together in a handseal and exhales a huge blast of wind towards Sasuke. Using the water as a 'battering ram', the Atsugai clashes with the body of water and 'lifts' it, causing the fire-enhanced Shurikens to meet a wave of electricuted water with a wave of pressure backing it. As he exhales the Blast, the Raikage storms forwards, making a beeline for Sasuke's position while remaining camouflaged behind his techniques.

    (Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.


    My timeframe looks as such;
    You: Mud
    Me: Dragon
    You: Lightning Destruction
    Me: Water Wall
    You: Kunais
    ~The time between the two lightning techniques colliding with the Wall is 'idle time', spent on maintaining the defense. I base this on how high in the sky the 'portal' was placed in the Anime. It's only fair that my Dragon spends more than half a second crossing that distance and going back again.
    -Kunais, LD and Dragon connects with Wall.
    You: Fire
    Me: Wind

    I suck at tests. Beat me with clubs.
    As what's left of the dragon comes directly towards Sasuke's direction, after releasing the lightning he unsheathes his Chokuto from it's scabbard with his left hand while concentrating wind chakra into the blade and performing a diagonal slash in front of him with his left hand, releasing a large gust of wind that moves onward absorbing the lightning energy and growing weaker of the collision, then continuing as a weak C-rank towards the Raikage's direction, this obviously interrupts his usage of the Fire technique that follows the lightning.

    (Fūton: Shinkūken) – Wind Release: Shock Blade
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user swings their blade and a gust of wind is released in the arc that it was swung in. The technique is strong enough to stop projectiles that are thrown at the user.

    After the wind gust is released Sasuke runs towards the Raikage from his right direction moving at an arc, in a crescent shaped pattern while performing the necessary handseals, suddenly a spinning column of water is created near Sasuke, to his right side as the spinning column of water takes the shape of a large snake with a gaping jaw, twisting itself to approach the Raikage's location from his left side in a crescent shaped arc while Sasuke is running towards the Raikage from his right side.

    (Suiton: Ja No Kuchi) – Water Release: Water Snakes Mouth
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon it then allows the user to generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a snake with a gaping jaw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a river that carries the enemy away.

    Then Sasuke follows up with moving his right arm diagonally in front of him and forming a large spear of lightning, then proceeding to performing a horizontal slash from the left to the right of Sasuke's position, aimed towards the Raikage's right side, all of this happens while Sasuke is running towards the Raikage at a steady pace, watching his movements closely.

    (Raiton: Chidori Eiso) – Lightning Release: Chidori Sharp Spear
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.
     
         
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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Dānte View Post
    As what's left of the dragon comes directly towards Sasuke's direction, after releasing the lightning he unsheathes his Chokuto from it's scabbard with his left hand while concentrating wind chakra into the blade and performing a diagonal slash in front of him with his left hand, releasing a large gust of wind that moves onward absorbing the lightning energy and growing weaker of the collision, then continuing as a weak C-rank towards the Raikage's direction, this obviously interrupts his usage of the Fire technique that follows the lightning.

    (Fūton: Shinkūken) – Wind Release: Shock Blade
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user swings their blade and a gust of wind is released in the arc that it was swung in. The technique is strong enough to stop projectiles that are thrown at the user.

    After the wind gust is released Sasuke runs towards the Raikage from his right direction moving at an arc, in a crescent shaped pattern while performing the necessary handseals, suddenly a spinning column of water is created near Sasuke, to his right side as the spinning column of water takes the shape of a large snake with a gaping jaw, twisting itself to approach the Raikage's location from his left side in a crescent shaped arc while Sasuke is running towards the Raikage from his right side.

    (Suiton: Ja No Kuchi) – Water Release: Water Snakes Mouth
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon it then allows the user to generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a snake with a gaping jaw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a river that carries the enemy away.

    Then Sasuke follows up with moving his right arm diagonally in front of him and forming a large spear of lightning, then proceeding to performing a horizontal slash from the left to the right of Sasuke's position, aimed towards the Raikage's right side, all of this happens while Sasuke is running towards the Raikage at a steady pace, watching his movements closely.

    (Raiton: Chidori Eiso) – Lightning Release: Chidori Sharp Spear
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.
    Timeframe so far;
    You: Earth Drop
    Me: Lightning Dragon
    You: Lightning Destruction
    You: Shock Blade
    (I know it isn't needed, but it's nice to have as a reference for future moves)
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    Senshō coldly observes his plan crumbling around him as the Shock Blade clashes against his weakened Lightning Dragon. Gritting his teeth in frustration, the Giant quickly plots a new course of action and slams his hands together in a handseal. Immediately, five points in a half-circle before him starts to swirl in a flurry of rotating, chakra-infused Wind. Letting the five newborn tornados grow into an almost solid defense, Senshō watches in fascination as both Shock Blade and Lightning Destruction connects with his defense, dicharging their kinetic and thermal energy in a shower of sparks and conflicting currents. As even the eartbound Lightning Destruction gasps and succumbs to the furious, if now weakened, rotation, the five tornados converge upon each other and roars towards their now moving target, covering as much space as possible.

    ( Futon: Tatsumaki Heki ) - Wind Release: Tordado Wall
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user generates a large wall of 5 Tall tornadoes that are sent towards the opponent. A flying summoning can create this technique by simply flapping their wings to generate the wind for the technique.


    Immediately after, even as his opponent's techniques face his own defense, Senshō, confident in his mastery of Wind, does a stomping motion with his left leg, releasing chakra through the ground. A moment later, three pillars of fire erupt through the ground before Sasuke, one directly in fornt of him, one diagonally to his right and one on his direct right, all placed one meter from his person and all hot enough to burn even at that range. The five tornados, now fused into a single storm, crashes into the pillars with much pressure and, through their rotation, absorbs the pillars and turns into a raging firestorm that swallows the area in before of it.

    ( Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.


    (Don't let the 'battle of three techniques' fool you. The S-ranked Wind would crush through the LD with it's elemental advantage and easily dispose of the remains of the Blade)

    Taking the chance, Senshō starts forwards, sprinting towards the site of the fire even as he forms a handseal, causing a huge boar-shaped lid to appear above the fire. Even as the lid drops to contain the fire, the Giant watches for activity, waiting for a sign of life to show and continuing on his path towards the lid, the fire and his enemy in order to verify the kill.

    (Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Zero Kelvin

    Ok, time to grade this sucker. As you know, sensei battle tests are graded by grading each move from E-Rank (lowest score) to S-Rank (highest score). To pass, you need to average A-Rank. Good Luck!

    Move #4
    A-Rank. Nothing much here. Correct, on point. Some offensive value.

    Move #6
    Discrepency in terms of time frame here on both the tester and the testee sides. If dante continues to use Lightning Destruction, that means that in his turn he did 4 moves... Still, I'll grade your usage of techniques. Overall I liked it. And your description is cool. Although you are both overdoing the whole technique clash thing... Techniques wouldn't clash for so long. Yet, the use of the techniques is correct. A-Rank

    Move #8
    I liked that you took advantage of the position of your enemy and his technique but i wished you had taken this chance to get into close range. His use of the golem technique would enable you a more nimble and faster approach. Still, A-Rank.

    Move #10
    I liked the move but hate this expression "Due to his tough body, however, Senshō suffers little to no damage from the attack." Manda's attack is A-Rank, your body can take without damage B-Ranks. Physics still apply and you're sent off. However, in this case, you suffer damage... Perhaps enough as to your next move can't happen as fast as you describe it. Still, the use of the sealing technique is on point and very very good and makes up for the issue of taking the hit. A-Rank

    Move #12
    On point. Correct move. Question would be if you can or can't see the incomplete susanoo before the vulcano rises. But thats minor. Overall, A-Rank move.

    Ok, the final grade of this test is A-Rank. Congratulations you pass! I'll contact Caliburn to give you your orange name and access to the sensei section.
     
         

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