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    Fugi Fuma-Character Biograph

    Basic Information

    Name: Fugi Fuma
    Nickname: Fuji
    Gender:Male
    Age:18
    Clan: Fuma

    Looks:Medium brown hair,average height,

    Personality:happy, up for anything, very loyal to his village and teamates

    Village Info.

    Village of Birth: Hidden leaf
    Village of Alliance: N/A

    Rank//Chakra Info.

    Ninja Rank: Genin
    Specialty: Long range combat
    Elements: wind
    Your ninjutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    Background Info.


    History: A proud member of the forgotten Fuma clan, He's lived his whole life in the hidden leaf village. His father died in the war and his mother went blind after a horrific battle with some ninja from the lightning village during the war. Fugi is a very kind person, but loves to get out of the village when ever he gets a chance, so he takes almost any mission given to him, he's been a chuninn for around 4 and a half years now.

    Other:
    Fugi is very good at fighting with weapons such as the Fūma Shuriken, and kunai. he's also good at tracking down enemy's by there chakra and believes that you can tell what type of person you are by your chakra.

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    Theme Song and Background Music:
    battle music-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IEIEVaLiCqQ
    dramatic music-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ABckWKsZhs
    theme song-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5zqv6QXEOwk

    Battles

    Won:0
    Lost:0
     
         
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    Re: Fugi Fuma-Character Biograph

    Not up to standard.
     
         

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    Re: Fugi Fuma-Character Biograph

    Quote Originally Posted by zinescience View Post
    Not up to standard.
    what alls missing besides for songs and photos?
     
         

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    Re: Fugi Fuma-Character Biograph

    Okay first thing first is that you need permission from an Rp mod to have a sensory bio, and from what I see you don't have that so you need to remove sensing from your specialty. Second, your rank should be Genin as your rank in the Rp is based on your post count. Third, you need to pick only one element to start out with for right now since Genin ranks are only allowed one of the basic 5 elements to start off with. Fourth, you need to remove you need to remove that fireball jutsu and shadow clone jutsu from your Ninjutsu list, as you need to have been trained by a Sensei or Senpai to know those. To add on to that, you should have these jutsus listed under your Ninjutsu instead as all first time bios must have these.
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    Once you make these changes and of course add a picture or two your bio should be good to go. Then all you have to do is wait for Caliburn to check it.
     
         

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    Re: Fugi Fuma-Character Biograph

    Quote Originally Posted by Albel Nox View Post
    Okay first thing first is that you need permission from an Rp mod to have a sensory bio, and from what I see you don't have that so you need to remove sensing from your specialty. Second, your rank should be Genin as your rank in the Rp is based on your post count. Third, you need to pick only one element to start out with for right now since Genin ranks are only allowed one of the basic 5 elements to start off with. Fourth, you need to remove you need to remove that fireball jutsu and shadow clone jutsu from your Ninjutsu list, as you need to have been trained by a Sensei or Senpai to know those. To add on to that, you should have these jutsus listed under your Ninjutsu instead as all first time bios must have these.
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    Once you make these changes and of course add a picture or two your bio should be good to go. Then all you have to do is wait for Caliburn to check it.
    Thank yah very much ^.^, I've done all four.
     
         

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    Re: Fugi Fuma-Character Biograph

    Quote Originally Posted by Overload345 View Post
    Thank yah very much ^.^, I've done all four.
    Here is a little tip. When you put jutsus and pictures on your bio you should place them in spoiler tags so it looks a lot cleaner. ^^ Anyways, good luck with the Rp.
     
         

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