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    Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

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    Chapter 13

    Very early the next morning Kakashi along with Hinata and some of the other Jounin & Chunin started to guide all the villagers away, to a place where they would be safe, Naruto then called a special meeting in the dungeons where Akira was.

    Naruto: okay now that the people of Konoha are safe we need to come up with a plan.

    Shikamaru: Hokage Sama since they are not aware that we know that they are here we should act like we don’t suspect anything, but we have to stop them from getting to the ninja they have come for.

    Naruto: I agree with what you say Shikamaru but we will still have to be on our guard, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Neji, Shino & Temari I want you to guard Ibiki & Inoichi and the others.

    Sasuke, Shikamaru, Neji, Shino & Temari: yes Hokage Sama.
    They then all left the dungeons.

    Naruto: Kiba, Yamato, Konohamaru, Hinata, and Kakashi we will keep Akira with us and everyone else then left for the training field. Oh and Konohamaru Bring your team training filed along with you.

    Konohamaru: Yes Hokage Sama I will go get them and meet you there.

    Naruto then stops

    Naruto: everyone there is one more thing I have to take care of go on I will join you soon.

    Kakashi: okay Hokage Sama

    Naruto then went to talk with Sai

    A few mins had passed

    Sai: Hello Hokage Sama It is usual to see you come here

    Naruto: yes Sai I guess it is any way, there is not much time some ninja’s from Akira’s village are here and we are preparing for them so I want you to do a favour for me I need two of your best men, I want them to accompany me.

    Sai: yes Hokage Sama okay

    Sai then calls out

    Sai: RYOTA & RYUU come here

    Ryuu & Ryota: yes Sensei

    Sai I want you two to accompany the Hokage and listen to what he says

    Ryuu & Ryota: understood sensei

    Naruto: I also want your men and the ANBU to scatter themselves around the village to so we can, Make the enemy’s believe that we are unaware of the presence.

    Sai: yes hokage sama

    Naruto then left with the two foundation members and they headed towards the training field.

    A few mins after Naruto had arrived at the training field.

    Naruto: okay, Ryuu & Ryota I want you both to remain hidden but you must keep an eye on Akira he will the first person we tell to get back. Oh and your only to step in when needed to protect my son and his team.

    Ryuu &Ryota: Understood Hokage Sama.

    Naruto then went to meet up with the others.

    Hinata: what did you have to do?

    Naruto: never mind.

    Konohamaru: I bought my team as you requested.

    Naruto: thank you Konohamaru, now Team Konohamaru this will be your first high ranked mission, be on your guard you will be guarding Akira now of course you won’t be alone there are ANBU around and they will jump if needed.

    Itachi, Minato & Akimichi Inori: Yes Hokage Sama

    Naruto: Hinata: can you go get Ino & Shizune Please we may need them.

    Hinata: yes Hokage Sama.

    Meanwhile on the out skirts of the Village the storm ninja unaware that their presence was known where planning their first move.

    Junichi: I think it is time we begin our mission

    Fumiko: I agree me and Takumi will get the ANBU you get Akira you are his Sensei after all, you know him better than we do.

    Junichi: okay we will all meet up after we have completed the mission.
    They then made their way into the village and then they split up.

    Fumiko: okay it seems they still don’t know we have arrived.

    Takumi: true it seem Junichi was right Akira is not as good as him when it come to sensing things yet.

    Fumiko:well they in are for a surprise aren’t they.

    Takumi: yes but let’s just make out we not a threat for now, now where are your father and the others.

    Fumiko: this way just follows me.

    Neji they are coming our way now Shikamaru.

    Shikamaru: okay now be on your guard everyone, me, Neji and Sasuke will keep them busy Temari, Sakura, Tenten and Shino go into the next room and keep watch on the prisoners.

    Tenten: okay Lets go everyone.

    Shikamaru: oh Shino you stand in front of the door for now.

    Shino okay

    Fumiko: in here

    Takumi: it seems they knew we were here after all.

    Fumiko: it appears we have been fooled.

    Shikamaru: this is as far as you will get.

    Fumiko: we will see about that

    Takumi: we can’t let you interfere with our village, I don’t know what Akira has told you but it has nothing to do with you, so hand over the ANBU and Akira and we won’t bother you anymore.

    Fumiko: or we will just have to take them by force.
    They both then started to pre from some hand signs.

    Scene skip

    Meanwhile Junichi was searching for his student as he saw a figure slowly approaching

    Junichi:who are you?

    Sai: never mind that, the one you seek is not here so turn back now.

    Junichi: I am here for one thing and that is to not let anyone interfere with our village so return Akira & The others and I will leave.

    Sai: I am afraid I cannot do that, but I will say if you follow this path it will take you where you want to go.

    Junichi: .........

    Sai: I am only doing this because I know you won’t win but since you insist going on just follow this path to training field.

    Junichi then headed towards the training field.

    Hinata then returned with Ino and Shizune.

    Ino: So what is our role?

    Naruto: healing please tend to anyone that gets wounded Kiba protect them when they are healing people.

    Kiba: yes hokage Sama

    Hinata: he is on his way here Hokage Sama

    Naruto: thanks, Akira stay back. Everyone else apart from team Konohamaru, Ino & Shizune follow me.

    Minato: okay team Konohamaru get into Position Arkira follow us

    Itachi who made you boss

    Naruto: don’t worry about that Itachi lets just get into position.

    Itachi: understood Hokage Sama

    They then got into position not long after Junichi entered the training grounds.

    Junichi: I see you where ready for us.

    Naruto: yes thanks to Akira

    Junichi: you are stronger than I thought Akira.

    Akira: I will do anything to help my village

    Junichi: enough talk I will take you back weather you like it or not I am your sensei and I know what is best.

    Akira: don’t take him lightly everyone he is strong.

    Naruto: Okay everyone don’t let your guard down.

    Okay my first chapter Release for 2013 I hope you enjoy it Comments are welcome

    Next Chapter the fight begins
     
         
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    (just saying: all you're links are broken) cool post by the way!
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    Damn I think I should read the other 12 chapters cause I have no idea what's going on lol maybe you could put a quick summary before starting your story
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    Quote Originally Posted by badoera View Post
    (just saying: all you're links are broken) cool post by the way!
    thanks for telling me the links where broken & I am happy you like my post

    Quote Originally Posted by Fitz View Post
    Damn I think I should read the other 12 chapters cause I have no idea what's going on lol maybe you could put a quick summary before starting your story
    not sure if you tried the links but they are fixed now & well lets see its hard to explain but I guess its just my version of what I would of liked to happen after the Current war going on in the manga right now, with my own ideas added.
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    Great chapter Serena keep up the good work
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    Oh ok ill try your links maybe everything will come together for me
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    Quote Originally Posted by Fitz View Post
    Oh ok ill try your links maybe everything will come together for me
    I hope it comes together and I hope you enjoy it

    Quote Originally Posted by Cobra73 View Post
    Great chapter Serena keep up the good work
    Thank you I will try my best to I am glad you liked it
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    Oh man....I've missed so many chapters....I'll have to go balk and read them first
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    good chapter =p keep up the good work
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    nice work
    but this story is kinda going slow >.>
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    Nice work on your past chapters. I have really enjoyed to your work, and look forward to future entries. If you would like and don't already have one, I would like to be your editor (I'm not talking about changing the story, just adjusting the grammar.)
    This post would have been a PM had I been able to send one.
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    Awesome
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    when is the next one?
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    Well, everybody again had some screentime even if for a little bit which I appreciated. Nice setup chapter for the inevitable battle. I'm thinking that these Storm ninja are all extremely powerful as it seems like only this Junichi character will actually take on not only the Hokage but Konohamaru's team and there are even a medic team who can also fight if need be. I am looking forward to see just how strong these ninja can be ^^
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    your story is nice. i ahevn't heard from you in ages. you could also check out my own. i have finsihed the story on the naruto and bleach. it may be a bit long but i would love to hear your comments on how to make it better.
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 13

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    Well, everybody again had some screentime even if for a little bit which I appreciated. Nice setup chapter for the inevitable battle. I'm thinking that these Storm ninja are all extremely powerful as it seems like only this Junichi character will actually take on not only the Hokage but Konohamaru's team and there are even a medic team who can also fight if need be. I am looking forward to see just how strong these ninja can be ^^
    thank you I do try to give some time to every char I can and the battle is gonna be the hardest to do I hope I can do well with it

    Quote Originally Posted by sasukeultimateninja View Post
    your story is nice. i ahevn't heard from you in ages. you could also check out my own. i have finsihed the story on the naruto and bleach. it may be a bit long but i would love to hear your comments on how to make it better.
    thank you I am glad you enjoy it I will check your story as soon as I can
     
         

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