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    [Sensei Test] Selendrile

    Greetings, Selendrile

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules and regulation according to Rei.
    All basic elements up to your current rank are to be used.
    You are allowed to use your KG.
    Custom jutsu(s) and custom element(s) are not allowed.
    You do not need to win the fight to pass, but doing so will gain you bonus points.
    Terrain: A grassy, open plain in sunny weather.
    We start mid range from each other.

    I will be using my Galen Hyuuga biography.

    Please respond with a link to the bio you will be using in the test and I will begin.


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    Re: [Sensei Test] Selendrile

    Thanks for conducting. ^^

    I guess I will be using Chaikoka Uchiha.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] Selendrile

    Np. My pleasure!

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    Galen, the dark hyuuga stands in front of his enemy with the same decisive stance he always has when facing an opponent. His tactics are not like the clan where he was born. Routhless, blood thirsty and mad, his fights always end in a blood bath. This is clearly noticed as he stares upon you, not into your eyes, but into your body. His clan's trademark eyes appear demonic and voided of life and emotion as they awaken. You have dark eyes as well but his...his show determination. His show clear desire to win. His eyes call for blood. He keeps his face in the shadow and his head tilted slightly down, looking upon you but not directly into your eyes, as if you're no one that matters, as if you're not there. His outfit is basic. A tight, light body fitting pants, shirt and vest, all packed with minor pockets and hidden items. Light to move in, light to wear but very complex in the organiztion of all it has hidden. Underneath it, Galen has several tattoos. Most for summoning other items, others...as part of more sinister techniques. On his back a pair of normal Ninjato are strapped in a crossed pattern. On top of this all, a large, heavy cloak. The hood of the cloak leaves most of his facial features in shadows but you can still see his cold eyes and his saddistic grin as he speaks


    (Dōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All Seeing White Eye
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Byakugan is the kekkei genkai of the Hyuga clan. Bearers of this Dõjutsu have almost featureless white eyes. When the Byakugan is activated, the user's pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge as the blood flow to their eyes is increased. While having the Byakugan deactivated, Hyuga ninjas have a normal eyesight and no special addition to their vision. While low rank Hyugas will need to perform a sequence of hand seals ( Horse → Tiger with lifting just index fingers → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Snake with the right index finger lifted straight up) to activate their Byakugan, Hyuga masters will be able to do so without the need for any hand seals and even have it active passively for long periods of time. Once activated, the user gains access to all of the abilities the Byakugan bestows upon them. While, like other Dojutsu, its main ability is to see chakra and the chakra flow in sentient beings, the Byakugan adds a complete new detail and dimension to that ability. The user can not only see chakra and the chakra flow, but also the circulatory system and even the 361 tenketsu. Added to this ability, once activated the Byakugan grants the user a near perfect field of vision 360º around himself (up to long-range if he's a master). This field of vision has only one blind spot, slightly above the 3rd thoracic vertebrae and facing backwards but enables the user to actually even see his own chakra circulatory system and chakra flow, which explains why all Hyuugas are so adept and masterfull of precise chakra control. The last ability the Byakugan has is the ability to zoom in and out, focusing on specific things, piercing beyond matter and energy alike, as well as chakra. This specific ability allows the user to see pass most barriers as well as physical matter (like rock walls, ground, etc) but also energy, being able to focus beyond chakra that might be in front of them or other energies. The zooming ability is enhanced as the user becomes more adept at using his eyes and can even reach distances above 20kms away. Some Hyugas have shown a great awareness regarding agressiveness as well as killing intent, detecting such intentions and emotions from others with more ease than most.
    Note: Activation spends a move from the users own move count but once the user reaches Sannin Rank and has gained mastery over Gentle Fist for 1 month, he can activate it passively without spending a move. Because of its low chakra cost to maintain, the user can keep it active throughout the whole fight as long as he has chakra and stamina to do so.
    Note: Genjutsu that requires Eye Contact when used against a Byakugan user requires direct eye contact between enemy pupil and user's pupil
    Note: Must be activated to use Gentle Fist (Jyuken)
    Note: Cannot be blinded by matter, chakra, light or energy
    Note: Its tracking abilities are similar to that of a 3 Tomoe Sharingan

    Eyes that have seen death... Yes, you are an Uchiha. I can recognize that faul chakra anywhere. Such faul existance needs to be cleansed from the world...

    Aroung galen a large vortex of lightning rages, converging upon you in the form of a dragon. Through its path, everything is destroyed. A simple but deadly attack.


    (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

    As quickly as possible, Galen inhales, following the large vortex of lightning with a powerful, yet fast and precise stream of flames. The reasoning is that the knows fairly well the best defense for the lightning vortex is a Wind technique. By using a fire technique afterwards, he reduces the chances of getting hit by a weakened wind technique that you might use to defend.

    (Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames.



     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] Selendrile

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Np. My pleasure!

    ____

    Galen, the dark hyuuga stands in front of his enemy with the same decisive stance he always has when facing an opponent. His tactics are not like the clan where he was born. Routhless, blood thirsty and mad, his fights always end in a blood bath. This is clearly noticed as he stares upon you, not into your eyes, but into your body. His clan's trademark eyes appear demonic and voided of life and emotion as they awaken. You have dark eyes as well but his...his show determination. His show clear desire to win. His eyes call for blood. He keeps his face in the shadow and his head tilted slightly down, looking upon you but not directly into your eyes, as if you're no one that matters, as if you're not there. His outfit is basic. A tight, light body fitting pants, shirt and vest, all packed with minor pockets and hidden items. Light to move in, light to wear but very complex in the organiztion of all it has hidden. Underneath it, Galen has several tattoos. Most for summoning other items, others...as part of more sinister techniques. On his back a pair of normal Ninjato are strapped in a crossed pattern. On top of this all, a large, heavy cloak. The hood of the cloak leaves most of his facial features in shadows but you can still see his cold eyes and his saddistic grin as he speaks


    (Dōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All Seeing White Eye
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Byakugan is the kekkei genkai of the Hyuga clan. Bearers of this Dõjutsu have almost featureless white eyes. When the Byakugan is activated, the user's pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge as the blood flow to their eyes is increased. While having the Byakugan deactivated, Hyuga ninjas have a normal eyesight and no special addition to their vision. While low rank Hyugas will need to perform a sequence of hand seals ( Horse → Tiger with lifting just index fingers → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Snake with the right index finger lifted straight up) to activate their Byakugan, Hyuga masters will be able to do so without the need for any hand seals and even have it active passively for long periods of time. Once activated, the user gains access to all of the abilities the Byakugan bestows upon them. While, like other Dojutsu, its main ability is to see chakra and the chakra flow in sentient beings, the Byakugan adds a complete new detail and dimension to that ability. The user can not only see chakra and the chakra flow, but also the circulatory system and even the 361 tenketsu. Added to this ability, once activated the Byakugan grants the user a near perfect field of vision 360º around himself (up to long-range if he's a master). This field of vision has only one blind spot, slightly above the 3rd thoracic vertebrae and facing backwards but enables the user to actually even see his own chakra circulatory system and chakra flow, which explains why all Hyuugas are so adept and masterfull of precise chakra control. The last ability the Byakugan has is the ability to zoom in and out, focusing on specific things, piercing beyond matter and energy alike, as well as chakra. This specific ability allows the user to see pass most barriers as well as physical matter (like rock walls, ground, etc) but also energy, being able to focus beyond chakra that might be in front of them or other energies. The zooming ability is enhanced as the user becomes more adept at using his eyes and can even reach distances above 20kms away. Some Hyugas have shown a great awareness regarding agressiveness as well as killing intent, detecting such intentions and emotions from others with more ease than most.
    Note: Activation spends a move from the users own move count but once the user reaches Sannin Rank and has gained mastery over Gentle Fist for 1 month, he can activate it passively without spending a move. Because of its low chakra cost to maintain, the user can keep it active throughout the whole fight as long as he has chakra and stamina to do so.
    Note: Genjutsu that requires Eye Contact when used against a Byakugan user requires direct eye contact between enemy pupil and user's pupil
    Note: Must be activated to use Gentle Fist (Jyuken)
    Note: Cannot be blinded by matter, chakra, light or energy
    Note: Its tracking abilities are similar to that of a 3 Tomoe Sharingan

    Eyes that have seen death... Yes, you are an Uchiha. I can recognize that faul chakra anywhere. Such faul existance needs to be cleansed from the world...

    Aroung galen a large vortex of lightning rages, converging upon you in the form of a dragon. Through its path, everything is destroyed. A simple but deadly attack.


    (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

    As quickly as possible, Galen inhales, following the large vortex of lightning with a powerful, yet fast and precise stream of flames. The reasoning is that the knows fairly well the best defense for the lightning vortex is a Wind technique. By using a fire technique afterwards, he reduces the chances of getting hit by a weakened wind technique that you might use to defend.

    (Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames.
    "How can you hate me when I am part of your heritage, young Hyuga? There has been enough hate in this world without you turning on those who paved the way for you. Maybe in time you'll learn to accept things as they come. We aren't as different as it seems.."

    As Chaikoka witnesses the monstrous dragon flying towards him, he forms a wind infused rasengan in one hand, throwing it forwards. Lightning.. a counter of wind, and then..? He rapidly performs a few hand seals, throwing a tornado of water into the rasengan. This creates a large tornado of spinning wind and water. The attack hits and grinds through the dragon and disperses the technique, losing it's wind attribute. You would continue to release your fire, at the cost of having it already weakened by defending from the remaining water.

    (Suiton: Gufuu Suika) - Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:The user will create a ‘Wind Style: Rasengan’ in one hand, and ‘Water Style: Destruction Torrent’ in the other. By combining them, he will create a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. This jutsu can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos
    Note: No water source required.


    Regardless of if you continue with the fire technique, Chaikoka continues his assault with a Snake hand seal. From his left palm help up and to the side, a powerful spear of lightning is released. The speed of it rips through the air, aimed at your person. When the spear is forming in his left hand, he removes several shuriken with his right. The shuriken are held clutched between the fingers, so once the lightning is released, he throws them forwards. He blows fire onto the shuriken after they leave his hands, inflaming them and sending them directly at you.

    (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.


    (Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] Selendrile

    Quote Originally Posted by Selendrile View Post
    "How can you hate me when I am part of your heritage, young Hyuga? There has been enough hate in this world without you turning on those who paved the way for you. Maybe in time you'll learn to accept things as they come. We aren't as different as it seems.."

    As Chaikoka witnesses the monstrous dragon flying towards him, he forms a wind infused rasengan in one hand, throwing it forwards. Lightning.. a counter of wind, and then..? He rapidly performs a few hand seals, throwing a tornado of water into the rasengan. This creates a large tornado of spinning wind and water. The attack hits and grinds through the dragon and disperses the technique, losing it's wind attribute. You would continue to release your fire, at the cost of having it already weakened by defending from the remaining water.

    (Suiton: Gufuu Suika) - Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:The user will create a ‘Wind Style: Rasengan’ in one hand, and ‘Water Style: Destruction Torrent’ in the other. By combining them, he will create a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. This jutsu can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos
    Note: No water source required.


    Regardless of if you continue with the fire technique, Chaikoka continues his assault with a Snake hand seal. From his left palm help up and to the side, a powerful spear of lightning is released. The speed of it rips through the air, aimed at your person. When the spear is forming in his left hand, he removes several shuriken with his right. The shuriken are held clutched between the fingers, so once the lightning is released, he throws them forwards. He blows fire onto the shuriken after they leave his hands, inflaming them and sending them directly at you.

    (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.


    (Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.
    that counter...hum...

    _______

    Noticing the fire stream clashing with a water wall and getting stopped, Galen is quick to react. He slams his palm on the ground, lowering the ground beneath you as you are trying to send the lightning technique. The sudden drop in the ground leaves your techniques aimed completely off as its shot at an angle upwards, missing me completely.

    Such a weak resolve...Uchiha...

    As the earth is lowered and your lightning technique is misfired (i allowed you to use it btw, just made sure your aim doesn't work), Galen does a single handseal, making the inside of the large hole filled with countless, 4 meter long spikes. Sharp and thin, somewhat even brittle, they are fast and incredibly sharp. They intercross and intercept eachother, piercing from the sides inwards and from the ground up.

    Didn't you know what happened in your clan's past? We Hyuugas aren't your descendents... We are your evolution... You represent darkness, we represent light... Where you were nothing but a shadow of The Elder... We are the true inheritors of the Sage. We long ago noticed the Yang manifestation of the Sage...Don't speak as if you know what you barely understand...

    With a simple motion, the hole crumbles inwards as a large antlion pit of moving sands start sucking all its contents below, griding them into a mushy pulp.

    (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.

    (Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

    (Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.

     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] Selendrile

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    that counter...hum...

    _______

    Noticing the fire stream clashing with a water wall and getting stopped, Galen is quick to react. He slams his palm on the ground, lowering the ground beneath you as you are trying to send the lightning technique. The sudden drop in the ground leaves your techniques aimed completely off as its shot at an angle upwards, missing me completely.

    Such a weak resolve...Uchiha...

    As the earth is lowered and your lightning technique is misfired (i allowed you to use it btw, just made sure your aim doesn't work), Galen does a single handseal, making the inside of the large hole filled with countless, 4 meter long spikes. Sharp and thin, somewhat even brittle, they are fast and incredibly sharp. They intercross and intercept eachother, piercing from the sides inwards and from the ground up.

    Didn't you know what happened in your clan's past? We Hyuugas aren't your descendents... We are your evolution... You represent darkness, we represent light... Where you were nothing but a shadow of The Elder... We are the true inheritors of the Sage. We long ago noticed the Yang manifestation of the Sage...Don't speak as if you know what you barely understand...

    With a simple motion, the hole crumbles inwards as a large antlion pit of moving sands start sucking all its contents below, griding them into a mushy pulp.

    (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.

    (Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

    (Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.


    "Ah, yes. To group the entirety because of the actions of a few. I am no more inherently evil than you are. You, who judge and hate me upon our first meeting? It seems like I am not the one with the hate in his heart. The crimes of my clan do not pass onto me.."

    Chaikoka loses his stability as the ground under him suddenly shifts downwards. The spear from his hand completely misses upwards. When the ground finishes traveling down, an unsettling rumbling from below occurs. I have to get out of this pit immediately, otherwise..! He decides that a strong technique that provides an all directional protection would be best. He quickly generates a spherical barrier of lightning around his body as spikes erupt from every surface of the pit. He leaps to his right, hitting a side wall of the pit. The barrier around him shatters and breaks the spikes as he travels. He runs up the face of the wall, clearing it in a matter of moments, using the barrier as a way to power through the spikes. He stays within mid-range.

    (Raiton: Purazuma Bōru) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
    Rank: B
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage points: N/A (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
    Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active.
    Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.


    As Chaikoka nears the top edge, he deactivates the barrier, and manifests water underneath you. The water blows you upwards uncontrollably, as bullets of water rise from the pool to strike through your body. They reform into a dragon above you, smashing you back down into the ground with great force.

    (Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user creates a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air, after firing the enemy into the air, the user shoots numerous water bullets at them from the pool of water and then finishes by forming the water bullets into a water dragon which attacks the target, sending them crashing into the ground.


    While creating the water underneath you, he slings two shuriken high up into the air with his left hand. They would fall in a sharp angle from above onto you, striking into your body when the dragon smashes you back to the ground. However, Chaikoka performs the needed hand seals, so when the shuriken would begin their travel downwards travel, they multiply into one thousand copies. The shuriken rain down in all places short range, so close that each shuriken upon hitting the ground would be connected to one other. He stands a few feet left of the pit.

    "Can you not learn to forget the past and move on with the future..?"

    (Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates a thousand shadow clones from one shuriken after performing Ram → Rat → Bird → Boar → Tiger, striking down the enemy. This is a technique that combines ninja tools with ninjutsu. Compared to normal shadow clones, clones of material objects are said to be on a far higher level. There is no need for preparations beforehand, like stocking up on shuriken, yet since the shadow clones are real and not illusions, all the shadow blades that fly around are equally lethal.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] Selendrile

    Quote Originally Posted by Selendrile View Post
    "Ah, yes. To group the entirety because of the actions of a few. I am no more inherently evil than you are. You, who judge and hate me upon our first meeting? It seems like I am not the one with the hate in his heart. The crimes of my clan do not pass onto me.."

    Chaikoka loses his stability as the ground under him suddenly shifts downwards. The spear from his hand completely misses upwards. When the ground finishes traveling down, an unsettling rumbling from below occurs. I have to get out of this pit immediately, otherwise..! He decides that a strong technique that provides an all directional protection would be best. He quickly generates a spherical barrier of lightning around his body as spikes erupt from every surface of the pit. He leaps to his right, hitting a side wall of the pit. The barrier around him shatters and breaks the spikes as he travels. He runs up the face of the wall, clearing it in a matter of moments, using the barrier as a way to power through the spikes. He stays within mid-range.

    (Raiton: Purazuma Bōru) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
    Rank: B
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage points: N/A (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
    Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active.
    Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.


    As Chaikoka nears the top edge, he deactivates the barrier, and manifests water underneath you. The water blows you upwards uncontrollably, as bullets of water rise from the pool to strike through your body. They reform into a dragon above you, smashing you back down into the ground with great force.

    (Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user creates a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air, after firing the enemy into the air, the user shoots numerous water bullets at them from the pool of water and then finishes by forming the water bullets into a water dragon which attacks the target, sending them crashing into the ground.


    While creating the water underneath you, he slings two shuriken high up into the air with his left hand. They would fall in a sharp angle from above onto you, striking into your body when the dragon smashes you back to the ground. However, Chaikoka performs the needed hand seals, so when the shuriken would begin their travel downwards travel, they multiply into one thousand copies. The shuriken rain down in all places short range, so close that each shuriken upon hitting the ground would be connected to one other. He stands a few feet left of the pit.

    "Can you not learn to forget the past and move on with the future..?"

    (Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates a thousand shadow clones from one shuriken after performing Ram → Rat → Bird → Boar → Tiger, striking down the enemy. This is a technique that combines ninja tools with ninjutsu. Compared to normal shadow clones, clones of material objects are said to be on a far higher level. There is no need for preparations beforehand, like stocking up on shuriken, yet since the shadow clones are real and not illusions, all the shadow blades that fly around are equally lethal.
    Using his Byakugan, Galen is fully aware of your counter as you run up the side of the hole. However, with 2 simple handseals, your progress is all but voided as the wall in which you were running in turns into mud, escaping beneath your feet as it collapses due to the gravity and runs inwards into the hole as a torrent of mud. Off course your lightning technique, still active at this point, would prevent damage but it cannot, due to its nature, stop the technique even with the inherent elemental relations. You'd be unharmed but washed away by the mud into the pit. The mud would, eventually cancel your lightning technique just as you stop in the middle of the hole once again. The technique is done to transform the side wall in which you were climming and the ground of the hole into a swamp. By the end of the move, you're left atop a very very sticky ground, slowly sinking. The swamp is deep enough to prevent the use of earth techniques like Moving earth core or plateau, as it spans 40 meters beneath the ground. Yet it leaves the other walls intact. Galen is not left iddle in the success of his move. The whole swamp mud is gather and quickly rises around you into 2 large jaws that crush against you. The technique, voided of rocks nearby is made from the sticky swamp substance. It will not have the same piercing abilities or the same power but the principle is to make sure you're caught in the mud and not to kill you directly. Engulfed by the large mayhem of mud, you fail to notice Galen slamming his hand on the ground. What he does is fairly simple: he petrifies the whole ground. An unique feat only available to those with high chakra pools, which is luckily the case. The closest border of the swamp is made still short range from me, as the hole i created would be short range from me, so the technique doesn't affect the swamp as a whole. It starts on the margin closest to me and spreads through it completely, yet not immediately.

    Note: I'm working under the assumption that I can channel the chakra into a substance and, being as its an earth substance, petrify it. The petrification would happen as a "wave" not a complete all together petrification. I believe that i only need to affect one part of the swamp to petrify it as a hole and since the closest part is short range, by channelign the chakra and petrifying the ground where i touch and consequently the side of the swamp, I can petrify the whole swamp.

    Ah ah aha ha ah!!!!!

    (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.

    (Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: The user performs the Ram → Horse → Tiger → Rabbit → Snake and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them.

    (Doton: Chō Kajūgan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Super Added Weight Rock Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A more advanced version of the Earth Release: Added Weight Rock Technique, in which the user drastically increases the weight of any object in direct physical contact, but to a much greater extent than that of the original ability. Under certain circumstances, the technique can be used to increase the force behind attacks.
    Note: Note: The Initial effects last for 1 turn before the weight of the mass is returned to normal.

     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Using his Byakugan, Galen is fully aware of your counter as you run up the side of the hole. However, with 2 simple handseals, your progress is all but voided as the wall in which you were running in turns into mud, escaping beneath your feet as it collapses due to the gravity and runs inwards into the hole as a torrent of mud. Off course your lightning technique, still active at this point, would prevent damage but it cannot, due to its nature, stop the technique even with the inherent elemental relations. You'd be unharmed but washed away by the mud into the pit. The mud would, eventually cancel your lightning technique just as you stop in the middle of the hole once again. The technique is done to transform the side wall in which you were climming and the ground of the hole into a swamp. By the end of the move, you're left atop a very very sticky ground, slowly sinking. The swamp is deep enough to prevent the use of earth techniques like Moving earth core or plateau, as it spans 40 meters beneath the ground. Yet it leaves the other walls intact. Galen is not left iddle in the success of his move. The whole swamp mud is gather and quickly rises around you into 2 large jaws that crush against you. The technique, voided of rocks nearby is made from the sticky swamp substance. It will not have the same piercing abilities or the same power but the principle is to make sure you're caught in the mud and not to kill you directly. Engulfed by the large mayhem of mud, you fail to notice Galen slamming his hand on the ground. What he does is fairly simple: he petrifies the whole ground. An unique feat only available to those with high chakra pools, which is luckily the case. The closest border of the swamp is made still short range from me, as the hole i created would be short range from me, so the technique doesn't affect the swamp as a whole. It starts on the margin closest to me and spreads through it completely, yet not immediately.

    Note: I'm working under the assumption that I can channel the chakra into a substance and, being as its an earth substance, petrify it. The petrification would happen as a "wave" not a complete all together petrification. I believe that i only need to affect one part of the swamp to petrify it as a hole and since the closest part is short range, by channelign the chakra and petrifying the ground where i touch and consequently the side of the swamp, I can petrify the whole swamp.

    Ah ah aha ha ah!!!!!

    (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.

    (Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: The user performs the Ram → Horse → Tiger → Rabbit → Snake and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them.

    (Doton: Chō Kajūgan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Super Added Weight Rock Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A more advanced version of the Earth Release: Added Weight Rock Technique, in which the user drastically increases the weight of any object in direct physical contact, but to a much greater extent than that of the original ability. Under certain circumstances, the technique can be used to increase the force behind attacks.
    Note: Note: The Initial effects last for 1 turn before the weight of the mass is returned to normal.

    I just noticed I used an old version of Plasma Ball. >_< Here is the updated version.

    ( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage points: 40 (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
    Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow however the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
    Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.

    ____

    As Chaikoka is nearing the top of the wall, the ground he runs on suddenly begins to change in consistency. Looking down momentarily, he sees the wall begin to lose it's composure and collapse downwards like a wave of mud. "He really doesn't want me out of this pit.." In order to escape, he releases the lightning barrier around him forwards onto the oncoming mud from above. He knows this wont stop it, he just needs an opening. Using the brief moment where he is free from the mud above him, he blows out a powerful gust of wind. The wind is blown in a backwards "C" shape, as Chaikoka makes almost a curling motion to clear the top of the wall and land safely on the ground not affected by the swamp.

    "You just carry too much hate within you to be saved.."


    (Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.


    Once safely on the ground again, Chaikoka performs the required hand seals, and releases a barrage of wind blades. His head is moved in various direction upon release, so the blades hit from the front, directly from both sides, and from directly above. The all directional attack makes the technique even more deadly.

    (Fūton: Shinkū Renpa) – Wind Release: Serial Waves
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a the required hand seals Rat → Snake → Horse → Dog theuser takes a deep breath and exhales several blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. The power of this technique can be dramatically enhanced when utilised in conjunction with the effects of extreme suction, such as that generated by the Baku, where the augmented attack proved effective enough to even slice through the defences of a complete Susanoo.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] Selendrile

    Quote Originally Posted by Selendrile View Post
    I just noticed I used an old version of Plasma Ball. >_< Here is the updated version.

    ( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage points: 40 (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
    Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow however the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
    Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.

    ____

    As Chaikoka is nearing the top of the wall, the ground he runs on suddenly begins to change in consistency. Looking down momentarily, he sees the wall begin to lose it's composure and collapse downwards like a wave of mud. "He really doesn't want me out of this pit.." In order to escape, he releases the lightning barrier around him forwards onto the oncoming mud from above. He knows this wont stop it, he just needs an opening. Using the brief moment where he is free from the mud above him, he blows out a powerful gust of wind. The wind is blown in a backwards "C" shape, as Chaikoka makes almost a curling motion to clear the top of the wall and land safely on the ground not affected by the swamp.

    "You just carry too much hate within you to be saved.."


    (Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.


    Once safely on the ground again, Chaikoka performs the required hand seals, and releases a barrage of wind blades. His head is moved in various direction upon release, so the blades hit from the front, directly from both sides, and from directly above. The all directional attack makes the technique even more deadly.

    (Fūton: Shinkū Renpa) – Wind Release: Serial Waves
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a the required hand seals Rat → Snake → Horse → Dog theuser takes a deep breath and exhales several blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. The power of this technique can be dramatically enhanced when utilised in conjunction with the effects of extreme suction, such as that generated by the Baku, where the augmented attack proved effective enough to even slice through the defences of a complete Susanoo.
    Noticing you mid flight towards the edge of the whole, Galen is a bit annoyed "I hate uchihas...always getting out of stuff in the nik of time..." but doesn't disarm. He quickly adjusts his strategy and doing a blazing set of handseals, the world darkens to you mid flight. Unable to see anything its unlikely you can land safely, disrupting your whole line of action. Off course, galen does the genjutsu in place of this 2nd and 3rd earth techniques from his previous planned move, creating a new line of actions.

    ( Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.

    Galen knows you'll end up releasing from the genjutsu and its likely that it will even be released from the pain of crushing helplessly to the ground in your own blind movement. However, as you'd be released, you'd find yourself surrounded by a thick, dense mist. This mist was created through the moisture in the mud and the humidity in the air thus its manifestation is fairly fast, aided by galen's only breath infused creation.

    (Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
    Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.

    Using your blindness to his advantage, galen produces a thick orb of water around your head, locking it and suffocating you in horror. Blinded, helpless and lost, the suffocation would produce a near panic state, leaving you helpless to take the kunai to the heart that galen just threw.

    (Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Damage Points:20
    Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
    Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.

    Is the Uchiha-bubu gonna cry? Wha wha.... MUAHAHA!

    says galen as his voice echoes through the mist and the gigantic hole nearby in a tone of pleasure and blood thirst.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Noticing you mid flight towards the edge of the whole, Galen is a bit annoyed "I hate uchihas...always getting out of stuff in the nik of time..." but doesn't disarm. He quickly adjusts his strategy and doing a blazing set of handseals, the world darkens to you mid flight. Unable to see anything its unlikely you can land safely, disrupting your whole line of action. Off course, galen does the genjutsu in place of this 2nd and 3rd earth techniques from his previous planned move, creating a new line of actions.

    ( Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.

    Galen knows you'll end up releasing from the genjutsu and its likely that it will even be released from the pain of crushing helplessly to the ground in your own blind movement. However, as you'd be released, you'd find yourself surrounded by a thick, dense mist. This mist was created through the moisture in the mud and the humidity in the air thus its manifestation is fairly fast, aided by galen's only breath infused creation.

    (Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
    Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.

    Using your blindness to his advantage, galen produces a thick orb of water around your head, locking it and suffocating you in horror. Blinded, helpless and lost, the suffocation would produce a near panic state, leaving you helpless to take the kunai to the heart that galen just threw.

    (Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Damage Points:20
    Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
    Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.

    Is the Uchiha-bubu gonna cry? Wha wha.... MUAHAHA!

    says galen as his voice echoes through the mist and the gigantic hole nearby in a tone of pleasure and blood thirst.
    As Chaikoka completes his escape, his vision suddenly starts to fade and he ends up blind. Thinking to avoid a bad fall, he hits the ground with his arms tucked to his chest, protecting his vital areas. Stones and rocks gouge into his forearms, leaving many cuts. "Tch.. This pain is nothing!" Individually, the cuts are not so severe to release him from the genjutsu, but the sheer number of them produces the necessary pain. His vision returns after hitting the ground, and he rolls and then flips himself upright, with small rivulets of blood running down his arms. He then finds himself being surrounded by an ever-increasing thick mist. In response, he releases a tornado of wind from his mouth, that spins around him like a top, expanding its range as it travels. This would disperse the mist from everywhere. Once the mist clears, the twister stops its circular travel and travels forwards at you.

    "This damn Hyuga really is scared of me looking upon that ugly mug of his.."

    (Fūton: Shippuu Tama) - Wind Release: Twister Shot
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user releases a stream of wind infused chakra from their mouth that takes on the shape of a twister to attack the enemy.


    Due to the time it would take for the tornado to disperse all the wind, its travel toward you would be delayed. Meanwhile, once the wind is released from his mouth, Chaikoka feels a cold presence. Water envelops his head, in an attempt to drown him. "Stay calm now, panicking will only worsen your situation." Thinking to burst the water, he opens his mouth and releases a large amount of earthly material, which forms into a large, thin, rectangular block in the air. The block bursts the water around his head upon release, and is aimed at you, layed flat. It would also deflect the thrown kunai. The wind from before would just be making it's way forward at that moment, so it would travel just behind the earthly material.

    ( Doton: Iwarin Heiban ) - Earth Release: Rock Scale Slab
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their earth chakra into their stomach and then release from their mouth earthly material that then forms into a large slab of rock, that can travel with incredible force. On impact with the ground the slab forces the earth to splinter and jab anyone caught in the vicinity.


    Afterwords, Chaikoka performs a hand seal and releases three speedy bullets of water from his mouth. One is stacked upon the other two, forming a triangle sort of formation. This would be sent towards your current location.

    (Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will do one handseal and will gather water in his mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked. It can also be used in quick succession to shoot up to 3 smaller but faster bullets of water.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] Selendrile

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    As Chaikoka completes his escape, his vision suddenly starts to fade and he ends up blind. Thinking to avoid a bad fall, he hits the ground with his arms tucked to his chest, protecting his vital areas. Stones and rocks gouge into his forearms, leaving many cuts. "Tch.. This pain is nothing!" Individually, the cuts are not so severe to release him from the genjutsu, but the sheer number of them produces the necessary pain. His vision returns after hitting the ground, and he rolls and then flips himself upright, with small rivulets of blood running down his arms. He then finds himself being surrounded by an ever-increasing thick mist. In response, he releases a tornado of wind from his mouth, that spins around him like a top, expanding its range as it travels. This would disperse the mist from everywhere. Once the mist clears, the twister stops its circular travel and travels forwards at you.

    "This damn Hyuga really is scared of me looking upon that ugly mug of his.."

    (Fūton: Shippuu Tama) - Wind Release: Twister Shot
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user releases a stream of wind infused chakra from their mouth that takes on the shape of a twister to attack the enemy.


    Due to the time it would take for the tornado to disperse all the wind, its travel toward you would be delayed. Meanwhile, once the wind is released from his mouth, Chaikoka feels a cold presence. Water envelops his head, in an attempt to drown him. "Stay calm now, panicking will only worsen your situation." Thinking to burst the water, he opens his mouth and releases a large amount of earthly material, which forms into a large, thin, rectangular block in the air. The block bursts the water around his head upon release, and is aimed at you, layed flat. It would also deflect the thrown kunai. The wind from before would just be making it's way forward at that moment, so it would travel just behind the earthly material.

    ( Doton: Iwarin Heiban ) - Earth Release: Rock Scale Slab
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their earth chakra into their stomach and then release from their mouth earthly material that then forms into a large slab of rock, that can travel with incredible force. On impact with the ground the slab forces the earth to splinter and jab anyone caught in the vicinity.


    Afterwords, Chaikoka performs a hand seal and releases three speedy bullets of water from his mouth. One is stacked upon the other two, forming a triangle sort of formation. This would be sent towards your current location.

    (Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will do one handseal and will gather water in his mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked. It can also be used in quick succession to shoot up to 3 smaller but faster bullets of water.
    Sorry for the delay.

    ____

    As a twister of wind is formed around you and the mist starts dispersing by its actions, a simple action by galen causes a large sticky mud flow from a portal on the sky to fall on you and your twister. Even if we consider that both techniques are equally ranked, your technique would simply act to disperse the mud all over harmlessly. Over the field, over you, and all around up to probably the limits of mid range, meaning only a bit short of reaching me.

    (Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

    Using all that mud to his advantage, Galen does one simple handseal. Endless, countless spike condense from the mud everywhere and rise. Some, since the mud was on your skin, condenses from you outwards, making you heavy and sluggish while thumbling all around. Others, from the ground and all around transform the area around you into a spiked death trap to the unweary.

    (Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.




     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] Selendrile

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Sorry for the delay.

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    As a twister of wind is formed around you and the mist starts dispersing by its actions, a simple action by galen causes a large sticky mud flow from a portal on the sky to fall on you and your twister. Even if we consider that both techniques are equally ranked, your technique would simply act to disperse the mud all over harmlessly. Over the field, over you, and all around up to probably the limits of mid range, meaning only a bit short of reaching me.

    (Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

    Using all that mud to his advantage, Galen does one simple handseal. Endless, countless spike condense from the mud everywhere and rise. Some, since the mud was on your skin, condenses from you outwards, making you heavy and sluggish while thumbling all around. Others, from the ground and all around transform the area around you into a spiked death trap to the unweary.

    (Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.




    Ditto.
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    The twister of wind dispersing the mist would originate around Chaikoka's position, allowing him to notice the shadow falling over the battlefield around him. The size of the shadow is large, so a powerful technique would indeed be best. In response, he performs a few hand seals while pounding on his stomach. This releases a massive blast of wind upwards, that hits and disperses the mud far away. Daresay, the mud would reach your position due to the wind's push, raining down from above on you your surroundings. This covers you in a layer of mud.

    (Fūton: Renkuudan) - Wind Style: Drilling Wind Bullet
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: Originally Gaara's technique, different characters will need to perform handseals in order to imbue the large amount of chakra needed into thier lungs. The user will then pound thier stomach to increase the pressure as they release a huge spiraling sphere of wind, which is strong enough to do major damage to even a Summoning like Gamabunta.


    Chaikoka continues by placing you within a genjutsu. Knowing the Hyuuga's prowess with detecting genjutsu, he knows it wont affect you for too long. But, he just needed time. He hoped the rapidity of his next attacks would outpace your response. Snakes rise from around you, constricting your body to stop all movement. With the added weight of the mud on yourself, movement is slowed even further. The wind would smash into you at about this time, in an attempt to throw you backwards. The mud acts as a glue after you skid along the ground, stopping any quick movement to get up, not to mention the time needed to recover from being hit and disoriented.

    ( Genjutsu: Oshitsubusu Hebi Kubire ) - Illusion Technique: Crushing Snake Constriction
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the users command, they crush the opponent. In reality, the opponent is immobilized and takes damage due to the stress on his mind.


    Using the mud on the ground covering your body, Chaikoka focuses his chakra and stomps his leg. This raises three pillars of fire around your position: one directly under you, one a meter in front, and the last a meter behind you. The flames act like an oven, cooking the mud into plaster. This seals your limbs together to your body, while gluing you to the ground . The single pillar directly affecting your body would also severely burn your body, the residual heat from the other two adding to it. In unison with his stomp, Chaikoka throws an explosively tagged kunai that will detonate within a foot of your immobilized body, coming down from above.

    (Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] Selendrile

    Ok, this has neough to be graded. Time to do so. Results in 5 minutes. And sorry for the delay.

    Edit: as you know, each move will be grraded from E-Rank to S-Rank, being that you need to average at the end an A-Rank score to pass. As I'm a bit in a hurry today, I won't dwell on details for each move. If you wish them or a more detailed input, pm me and when i get the time i'll come back to you.

    #4: C-Rank. The lightning and the Fire happen in different timings and you can't know that i use or used a fire while dealing with the lightning. A bit of god modding coped with time frame misinterpretation.

    #6: A-Rank. Inteligent and simple.

    #8: S-Rank. I like this one because its something i can imagine a ninja doing in a manga/anime fight. Good.

    #10: A-Rank.

    #12: A-Rank.

    C+A+S+A+A=3+5+6+5+5=24/5=4.8=5=A-Rank

    A bare pass but a pass non the less. Congrats Selendrile-Sensei. May your profile be forever doused in endless training requests!
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-14-2013 at 12:46 PM.

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