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    couple of new tags!

    here are a couple of tags I made over the last few days, feel free to CnC otherwise enjoy and yes I know text is meh but whatever




     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    Oh My BB They are beautiful Nice-work!
     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    Great work:D.
     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    Wow, they are really nice.
    Thanked, liked and repped.
     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    Good.
     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    I really like the style you used and how the tags turned out. :3
    Though there a few problems here and there.

    For the first, the designing on the right and bottom left of the render is taking to much of my attention than it should, it's making it hard to focus on the render. I can't figure out what the render looks like apart from where it is located. :/ Also work on making the swirlies a bit less squashed. Other than that it looks awesome, really *-*

    I really like the lighting on the second. The only thing bothering me is that there is so much empty space at the top >.< I keep looking at the sky. You should probably crop the canvas from the top a little imo.

    Keep up the good work b
     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    They look great, the first looks better than the second.
     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    Nice I like your style!.
     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    Lemme CnC these >_O

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    Big focal problem, imo. There's hardly any depth so my eye's aren't very happy looking around for a focal all around the place. Fix that, with some Gaussian layers or them tools! The strong cyan colours are awesome, but they are so bright they feel like a focal. So bring them closer to the render. Atleast the one to the right. There's also a bright light at the under left corner, wich also is to bright. So my eyes go berserk :/. Remove that one, it's kinda unnecessary and ruins the overall tag alot.

    I like the overall lightning on the render, however i'd like to see it's lightsource somewhere.. It's a gold light reflection, but the lights around the render are cyan and..white.. There's one part wich is impossible for me to grasp. This one right here:



    I put a circle around a part wich is impossible. Look at the cyan light on his shoulder, it should well..reflect cyan light from his armor, however it's reflecting gold light. It's kinda, wtf . I also highlighted the white light dot that i want you to remove in the corner there.

    Overall colours are great, and i want to say i like the lightning overall but..there are some parts that needs to improve like i said.

    Need better focal job! Maybe a text aswell..



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    Weaker colours, but slightly better focal job. . .

    Good that you put a lightsource above the render, so the reflections have a good reason to be there . Blending is nice, but undynamic. There are some parts that are blended well with C4D and some parts that aren't blended at all.
    I suppose the logo is from google? Anyway, it needs to be placed slightly ontop of the render. It'd provide a feeling of a better blended render where it is necessary and it'd create a better focal overall. Instead of two focals :/.

    Some of the random shapes in the air needs to be more blured. They're to sharp to fit in, i think. Also, it feels like 80% of the tag has a reflection from the lightsource, but the logo doesn't. It is a big part of the tag, so it needs to feel more blended, so make a reflection on it that syncs with the lightsource.



    That is all. Overall, ok but you can do better.
     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    Wow, really great!
     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    Thanks for the comments everyone its appreciated

    Also cheers again skorm for the in depth CnC it is a new style I'm tinkering with, although regardless I should have got the lighting correct as it is a basic maybe on the next one I will. I was also trying to get depth through lighting and shading, hence why there is no blurring if you get it right I think it looks heaps better than using blur. But back to the drawing board lol.
     
         

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    Re: couple of new tags!

    The first one looks nice but a little over-topazed? lol
     
         

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