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    ✵ √alen's ℬook of ℘oetry II ✵

    Poetry is something people take for
    granted. A poet is a writer expressing his
    true feelings about something his passion
    and his devotion. About pain or pleasure it
    does not matter but when a poet sit's and
    writes he is pouring out his heart to the
    world. Poets tell us their story through a
    poem but it is given on a card that gets
    thrown away no one appreciates the poet yet
    he tells us his deepest secrets and his true
    love and we just ignore the poetry. The
    poets words are the song of his heart so
    when you look at poetry see if the song
    sings to your heart before you throw the
    card away. Because the poem you throw away
    may be a poem written about you.


    Her Smile


    Her smile oh so bright,
    Fills the room with brilliant light.
    A smile that brought many delight,
    So strong it could stop a fight.
    A smile that could fly a kite,
    Even in the dark of night.
    Her smile oh so bright,
    Noone could reproduce try all their might.
    A smile that shines so bright,
    It puts a smile on everyone in sight.




    Her Tears

    Her tears fell on me
    Like rain drops fall on the leaves of a tree
    On a january night
    Her strained voice was filled with fright
    She said this breakup is killing me
    Ever since I caught him flirting
    Now i'm really hurting
    I need a friend to be there for me
    Who can feel my pain and confort me
    And I knew I could always lean on you
    She hugged me tight,it just seemed so right
    The moons glare
    Brought out the highlights in her hair
    And her eyes
    Glistened like the stars in the skies
    She had just lost the love of her life
    He walked out on her
    Leaving her sad and blue
    I conforted her, and told her
    I would always be there for her




    Tracing

    You pull me down
    And hold me near
    Your arms around me
    Destroy my fear
    They circle my body
    Your hands tracing my curves
    Your strength sheltering me
    Calming my nerves
    I roll into relaxation
    With you holding me tight
    When your beside me
    I can sleep through the night
    Now is the time
    I feel safe and secure
    Lost in this love
    So deep and pure





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    Re: ✵ √alen's ℬook of ℘oetry II ✵

    ... Well ... I'm part of the Bard's College in Solitude, does that count? :D

    Joking aside, poetry is great. And if those that you posted were yours, good job.
     
         

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    Re: ✵ √alen's ℬook of ℘oetry II ✵

    I feel that the utmost compliment is to have someone to remember the titles of your poems. However, the supreme compliment is to have someone recite your poem.
     
         

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    Re: ✵ √alen's ℬook of ℘oetry II ✵

    a hiku for you


    Valen's words get him friends zoned
    Smile, tears, tracing
    Given to the girl, friend zone


    Smile

    A smile, so simple, so easy to excite
    A young mans mind enough to recite
    His feeling on paper, paper, to be typed
    A dark room will come to light
    Because of his words, feelings ignite.
    Lips so soft, voice so polite
    Mimicking her smile, so tense and upright
    Her curves on her face hit me so soft, pillow fight
    Our smile should join as one so we can finally reunite.
    Still, a better love story than twilight


    Edit: i was gonna do all 3 but im to lazy. :/
     
         
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    Re: ✵ √alen's ℬook of ℘oetry II ✵

    nice man... i like it
     
         

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    Re: ✵ √alen's ℬook of ℘oetry II ✵

    Quote Originally Posted by shanee View Post
    a hiku for you


    Valen's words get him friends zoned
    Smile, tears, tracing
    Given to the girl, friend zone


    Smile

    A smile, so simple, so easy to excite
    A young mans mind enough to recite
    His feeling on paper, paper, to be typed
    A dark room will come to light
    Because of his words, feelings ignite.
    Lips so soft, voice so polite
    Mimicking her smile, so tense and upright
    Her curves on her face hit me so soft, pillow fight
    Our smile should join as one so we can finally reunite.
    Still, a better love story than twilight

    Very well..

    It looks like you understood

    I'm much of a scepticus, that's why I compare ''Relationships'' to ''Tracing''

    Following along, with no real plan of action, just going with the motions

    But I'm amazed you came up with these few lines so quickly, phenomenal..

    It seems my mind is out of ink for now.
     
         
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    Re: ✵ √alen's ℬook of ℘oetry II ✵

    Quote Originally Posted by Valen View Post
    Very well..

    It looks like you understood

    I'm much of a scepticus, that's why I compare ''Relationships'' to ''Tracing''

    Following along, with no real plan of action, just going with the motions

    But I'm amazed you came up with these few lines so quickly, phenomenal..

    It seems my mind is out of ink for now.
    haha i used to write parodies songs so a girl that i liked back in high school (2 years ago) and i ended up giving it to her and it put me in the friendzone. so i have had some practice on this. haha : ) if you re-read my hiku, it probably makes a little more sense this time. : )
     
         

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    Re: ✵ √alen's ℬook of ℘oetry II ✵

    Quote Originally Posted by shanee View Post
    haha i used to write parodies songs so a girl that i liked back in high school (2 years ago) and i ended up giving it to her and it put me in the friendzone. so i have had some practice on this. haha : ) if you re-read my hiku, it probably makes a little more sense this time. : )
    It is time for you to pick up the pen again

    *Warning: It is addicting o_o
     
         

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    Re: ✵ √alen's ℬook of ℘oetry II ✵

    Nice poems
     
         

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