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    はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Note: Thanks to Nathan for the help with history, and Abel Nox for advice and video help. :scorps:


    Basic Information
    Name:Kotetsu Hagane
    Nickname:Kotetsu
    Gender:Male
    Age:28
    Clan: Hagane

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    Personality:Kotetsu is never seen with out his partner and best friend, Izuma. They both trust each other above anyone else. Kotetsu is the more carefree of the two, and is shown to be somewhat curious, as shown when they both disguised themselves as Chunnins to see what the next group would be like.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth:Konohagakure
    Village of Alliance:Konohagakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank:Chunin
    Specialty: /
    Elements: Fire- needs training
    [B]Your ninjutsu:

    Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)[/SPOILERS]

    Background Info.
    History:
    Chūnin Exam Arc:

    Izumo and Kotetsu first appeared disguised, trying to convince those planning to take part in the Chūnin Exams not to bother. Team 7 recognised that they had cast a genjutsu on the area, prompting them to give up in light of the group's skill. Seemingly somewhat impressed, Kotetsu attempts to attack Sasuke Uchiha with a kick, which Sasuke reciprocates in kind only to be stopped by Rock Lee. As they retreat and undo the transformation he agrees with Izumo that the candidates this year seemed very interesting.
    Later Kotetsu and other chūnin arrive alongside Ibiki as invigilators of the first exam. They they sat on the outside of the examiners watching them for obvious sign of cheating, telling anyone who was caught five times that they had failed the examination. At one period in time during the exam he threw a kunai into the paper of a candidate that had failed, frightening Naruto as it had flew right pass him. He and Izumo were later seen together in the stands watching the preliminary matches. The two discussed Naruto's triumph over Neji and the talent that Shikamaru had shown in his battle, assuming he'd be an overall more suitable candidate than anyone else for promotion to the rank of chūnin


    Search for Tsunade Arc:

    When Tsunade became Hokage, Izumo and Kotetsu started doubling as her assistants and as guards to the front gates of the village. The anime indicates that they are easily ignored or duped by those using the Transformation Technique while on the job.


    Sasuke Retrieval Arc:

    During Tsunade's transition into office he and Izumo Kamizuki became the assistants of Tsunade. They were the ones that found Sakura in the morning after Sasuke left Konohagakure and later informed Tsunade about the incident.


    Kazekage Rescue Arc:

    In the anime Kotetsu is seen with Izumo as Naruto and Jiraiya have returned after two and a half years of training. They are later seen at the village's gate as Teams Guy and Kakashi are returning from saving Gaara from the Akatsuki.

    Hidan and Kakuzu Arc:

    Izumo and Kotetsu were assigned to a Nijū Shōtai team with Asuma Sarutobi and Shikamaru Nara, their mission being to find members of Akatsuki. They successfully managed to do just that. The team tracked an Akatsuki duo to a bounty station, where Izumo and Kotetsu stabbed Hidan during a sneak attack. When Hidan survived, they pulled back and were forced to watch Asuma fall prey to Hidan's jutsu, unable to help him. They instead engaged Hidan's partner, Kakuzu, but were easily captured and subsequently rescued by Raidō Namiashi and Aoba Yamashiro.
    Upon returning to the village and debriefing, they inform Tsunade of Asuma's fate. Kotetsu along with Izumo are later seen attending the funeral, mourning the loss of their captain.


    Invasion of Pain Arc:

    In the anime, Kotetsu is inserted as a member of the Konoha Barrier Team and is seen playing cards with other members when he hears about an intruder breaching the barrier.
    Later, after Pain's invasion, he and Izumo were seen with Genma helping to rebuild the village. Kotetsu said that the Akatsuki had taken away everything that their forefathers had left for them.


    Shinobi World War Arc:

    After the defeat of the Gold and Silver Brothers, Izumo and Kotetsu launch a surprise assault on Kakuzu slashing him with their Kunai Blades and immobilises him by wrapping the chain attached to the blades around him. Kotetsu then says they came to repay him from their last encounter. They then ask Ino, Chōji, and Shikamaru to help them seal him. Shikaku contacts the two and informs them, that he and Izumo, along with Darui would deal with Kakuzu, while Team 10 would fight Asuma. They are then seen chasing Kakuzu across the battlefield. He and Izumo are later seen standing over a defeated Kakuzu who was being restrained under Chōji's colossal fist.


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    Battles

    Won:None
    Lost:
    None


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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Okay this bio needs some work. xD First off, if you are going to use a character from the anime/manga you should go to Narutopedia and get the all the info on that character. That site will most likely have all the info you need to fill out the bio template. Second, I would lose the purple font as it is kind of an eye sore no offense though. Third, more than half of those jutsus you listed can not be used by you yet. You need to be trained by a Sensei or Senpai in order to use them. The only jutsus you should have are those E-ranked ones. The others should be deleted. Forth, your rank should be Genin as the ranks on here go by post count. Fifth, your history should be much longer since he is an actual character in the series, which brings you back to the first thing I've said. Narutopedia will have his history so just copy it from there.

    That should be it.

    Oh wait here are your videos.

     
         
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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Quote Originally Posted by Albel Nox View Post
    Okay this bio needs some work. xD First off, if you are going to use a character from the anime/manga you should go to Narutopedia and get the all the info on that character. That site will most likely have all the info you need to fill out the bio template. Second, I would lose the purple font as it is kind of an eye sore no offense though. Third, more than half of those jutsus you listed can not be used by you yet. You need to be trained by a Sensei or Senpai in order to use them. The only jutsus you should have are those E-ranked ones. The others should be deleted. Forth, your rank should be Genin as the ranks on here go by post count. Fifth, your history should be much longer since he is an actual character in the series, which brings you back to the first thing I've said. Narutopedia will have his history so just copy it from there.

    That should be it.
    Nope, you forgot to say: Oh, and tacos are amazing :l
     
         

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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Quote Originally Posted by ~xtsukune~ View Post
    Nope, you forgot to say: Oh, and tacos are amazing :l
    Oh sorry. >.>

    TACOS ARE AMAZING!!!!!!
     
         

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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Quote Originally Posted by Albel Nox View Post
    Oh sorry. >.>

    TACOS ARE AMAZING!!!!!!
    There you go^^
     
         

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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Quote Originally Posted by Albel Nox View Post
    Okay this bio needs some work. xD First off, if you are going to use a character from the anime/manga you should go to Narutopedia and get the all the info on that character. That site will most likely have all the info you need to fill out the bio template. Second, I would lose the purple font as it is kind of an eye sore no offense though. Third, more than half of those jutsus you listed can not be used by you yet. You need to be trained by a Sensei or Senpai in order to use them. The only jutsus you should have are those E-ranked ones. The others should be deleted. Forth, your rank should be Genin as the ranks on here go by post count. Fifth, your history should be much longer since he is an actual character in the series, which brings you back to the first thing I've said. Narutopedia will have his history so just copy it from there.

    That should be it.

    Oh wait here are your videos.

    Thanks! I did use narutopedia, but they DON'T have his history! it really shocked me!
     
         

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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Ah one of my first bios! Come on you can make it look nice!

    If anything copy the history from my bio. (That I once had.)

    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...Kotetsu+Hagane
     
         

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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Tacos (_( []_[] )_)
     
         

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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Quote Originally Posted by Nathan. View Post
    Ah one of my first bios! Come on you can make it look nice!

    If anything copy the history from my bio. (That I once had.)

    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...Kotetsu+Hagane
    Thanks.
     
         

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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Quote Originally Posted by ~xtsukune~ View Post
    There you go^^
    Ya happy now, Mr.Stalker? >.>

    Quote Originally Posted by kajiko View Post
    Thanks! I did use narutopedia, but they DON'T have his history! it really shocked me!
    Weird...oh well at least Nathan. covered that part for ya. ^^

    Also, your bio looks a lot better now.
     
         

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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Quote Originally Posted by Albel Nox View Post
    Ya happy now, Mr.Stalker? >.>



    Weird...oh well at least Nathan. covered that part for ya. ^^

    Also, your bio looks a lot better now.
    Thanks. It might actually get approved!
     
         

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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Quote Originally Posted by kajiko View Post
    Thanks. It might actually get approved!
    It should since you got everything from Nathan.'s bio. Good luck with your Rp Career here.
     
         

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    Re: はがねコテツ, Hagane Kotetsu

    Quote Originally Posted by Albel Nox View Post
    It should since you got everything from Nathan.'s bio. Good luck with your Rp Career here.
    haha thanks
     
         

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