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    [Minato Namikaze Test] Igneel

    Greetings, Igneel.

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules:
    Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    Custom Jutsus and Elements are not allowed.
    Terrain: Forest where A + B fought Minato
    You may use Minato's abilities up to your current rank as well as Basic 5, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu that you know.
    We start mid range from each other.
    If you have any questions please ask them through VM.


    I will be using a pair of Kage ranked Canon 4th Raikage and Killer Bee biographies for this bio test against you. Please give the link to your bio that you're testing for and I will make the first move.

    No one other than myself and the participant may post here. If required, administrators/moderators and official senseis can input their opinion as well.

    May the Gods be on your side, Igneel.
     
         

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    Re: [Minato Namikaze Test] Igneel

    Namikaze Minato

    Minato was on a very imporatant mission when he encountered the two kumogakure Ninjai's.It was an unexpected speed bump,but there was no way he could have gotten out of the situation without engaging them.A fight was inevitable,as such Minato diligently analyzes his surrounding noting each and every aspect of the area to even the smallest detail.Minato quickly realizes that the taller one was the son the current Raikage,but he didn't recognize the shinobi tagging along with Ay.Minato swiftly arches his right hand backwards,taking out one of his special kunai's with the FTG seal on it.He holds the kunai in such a way that,the kunai is pointing to the ground in a rather slanting way.He then quickly shouts out to his comrades,Stay out of this,meet Chouza's team at the rendezvous point.I'll take care of this trouble.After Minato says those words,his comrades moves out of the area.Minato sternly watches the challengers ahead as he begins to speak Unruly Ay I presume,what business do you have here?
     
         
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    Re: [Minato Namikaze Test] Igneel

    Alright let's get this show on the road..
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    The war against Konoha is painful, many losses on the side of the Cloud has left many Mothers crying in the wake of the mist. A small squad lead my the Thirds son is traveling within the forest near Konoha - for what purpose? To gather intel? confront an enemy force? The mission was unknown but many of the Cloud ninja quake at the thought of the yellow flash making his presence on the battlefield. One cloud shinobi looks upon the Thirds son - Ay, thinking to himself that another man comparable to Ay's speed..

    "Keep your eyes forward boys, danger lurks!"

    Ay's words are forceful and authoritative - a man worthy of command. However, another lurks with Ay. His young adoptive brother Bee, the one who wields the power of the 8-tails, also wields the power of horrible rapping..

    Out of nowhere it hits! a few kunai from the top of the trees exploding. The cloud shinobi move in evasion maneuvers avoiding the falling logs and shock damage. They land on the ground, gazing upon the Leaf shinobi in front of them. The Cloud shinobi shiver but so do the Leaf shinobi - for they have heard the stories of the Ay/Bee combination team. Suddenly, the Leaf ninja leave - Ay jerks his head motioning to the Cloud shinobi to ditch while Bee stays..

    "Unruly? I wouldn't say so. I'm a man of order and honor. Unruly is those whom are weak and dishonorable! Ready Bee?"

    "Yo yellow why so mellow?! We be pounding your body till it's like jello! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" ♪ ♪ ♪ ♪

    In a burst of black liquid, Bee releases from his mouth a large wall of Ink in front of him heading towards Minato, this effectively covers the line of sight of Ay and Bee so Minato can't see them. Following the ink wall heading towards Minato, Ay begins to rush behind it to gain ground on Minato without him seeing Ay rush behind it. When Ay begins to rush behind the Ink wall, Ay releases his earth chakra to causes the ground below Minato to shake violently, causing him to fall down and lose his balance. This would happen the second the ink moves towards you - all in short succession.

    Bijutsu: Sumi Souken | Tailed Beast Skill: Ink Creation
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Killer Bee is able to form ink in his mouth. The ink can be used for a variety of things, such as using his ink covered finger as a makeshift pencil or using the ink to blind an opponent. Killer Bee used this technique in greater extent when he was able to cover the whole Water prison with his ink in order to blind Kisame.
    Note: Can only be used by Killer bee in any of his forms.

    Doton: Yochi no Douyou | Earth Release: World Shaking
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

    Also Bee begins to dart to the right side of Minato (Bee's left) this happens in a steep arc - separating the Ay/Bee combination at the edge of short/mid range.

    Just heads up - I agree with Scorps on the whole stating if the kunai you throw is FTG tagged
     
         
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    Re: [Minato Namikaze Test] Igneel

    Nice rap there mate ^^
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    Dishonorable?You misunderstood me,I never questioned your honor.You seemed to be jumping into conclusions rather quickly.A rather unappealing trait for a shinobi of your caliber.

    As Minato stands before the rivaling challengers,he knows very well that its not going to be walk in the park.He stands their clearly with a well thought out plan in his mind.Minato carefully watches the cloud shinobi's,analyzing their body language trying to estimate their strengths based on appearances.As Minato is monitoring their actions,he notices the younger shinobi perform a handseal.This doesn't come as a surprise to Minato as he was expecting the younger one to go first,after all young one are more hot blooded.As he notices the ninja do the handseal,Minato loosens the grip on the FTG kunai on his right hand.He notices the ninja's cheek starting to bulge outwards as if he was ready to spew out something,so he prepares himself.Minato then notices the shinobi starting to spew out thick black fluid straight forward towards him.Minato thinks to himself "Is that ink,doesn't matter I'll go ahead with my plan".As B starts to spew out the thick ink,Minato pushes his right hand forward releasing a burst of wind in the form of a whirlwind heading forward,towards his opponents.As he punches forward,he releases the FTG kunai in his right hand,so that the kunai gets carried by the whirlwind,heading in the direction of the wind completely undetected inside the swirling wind.The hurricane would collide with the ink blast,spreading it to the sides.The wind ripples formed due the propagation of the hurricane fist would also serve as means to push the ink,farther to the sides.Since A will be closely behind the ink wall,he would be left with no time to react to the wind whirlwind.The kunai lodged inside the wind would also prove to be fatal,that is if A gets hit by the wind.The hurricane fist would probably come on towards Ay at chest level due to Ay being a tall figure and all.As Minato releases the whirlwind forward,he feels a slight tremor below(not enough to cause any change in trajectory of the hurricane fist jutsu,not now anyway since the initial burst was released before the tremor happened) and this takes him by surprise.Due to being forward arched(when he released the hurricane),Minato drops forward on to his right knee as he swiftly places his left palm on the ground to stay balanced.He channels his chakra onto his knee,palm and feet to stay on balance.Even though the tremor got him down,Minato doesn't loose focus on whats happening before his eyes.He keeps a keen eye on the shinboi who spewed out the black fluid.As the tremor starts to die down,Minato regains his footing and lift his left palm off the ground.As he does so,the flying thunder god sealing formula is seen,plastered on to the ground(very hard to detect by normal eyes at such long distances).As Minato gets up,a blue orb of pure chakra is seen,spiraling inside the right hand palm of Minato.With unhindered determination,he stands there with the chakra orb,waiting for the perfect opportunity to strike.
    A,B?You name people in kumogakure with just an alphabet?So let me guess there is somebody named C? xD

    (Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
    Rank: B
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.


    ( Fuin Hirashin no Jutsu ) - Seal of The Flying Thunder God technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Minato uses this technique to apply the sealing formula to any desired object through physical contact and allowing him to teleport to that desired location through the Flying thunder God Technique.


    (Rasengan) - Spiral Sphere
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Rasengan was a Ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage. The technique was taught to his sensei Jiraiya, who then passed it on to the young ninja Naruto years later. The technique is unlike many other jutsu in that it does not require any hand seals. It just relied on the ninja's ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand, which can create a destructive impact. Limit: None

     
         
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    Re: [Minato Namikaze Test] Igneel

    With Ay behind the black ink wall and Bee running around in the arc to his left. Bee notices the whirl of wind projecting towards the ink wall - his eyes widen but a slight smirks comes across his face. "Even at point blank, my brothers speed overcomes.." As the ground shakes below Minato, the whirl of wind makes contact with the black ink wall. As the wind starts to burst through it. Ay's face stays emotionless then suddenly..Minato doesn't see Ay. Possibly puzzled by this - but has no time to think because at this time Bee knowing what happened immediately followed up by removing his swords and channeling lightning chakra through them and causing them to spin rapidly towards Minato at great speeds. Four in total.

    "Yo he think he fast, yo he think he cool but my sword be driving towards that foo!"

    At this time, Ay is behind Minato - not close range but edge of short/mid. Bathed in pale blue lightning - which gave his the speed to avoid the wind so quickly. However, Minato can't track the movements with his naked eye. As eye appears behind Minato, Ay quickly releases a spear of lightning from his mouth directed at Minato's back. Bee now runs towards Minato - however not directly behind the lightning blades but more so behind them by some distance.

    Raiton no Yori | Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography

    Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou | Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s.

    Raiton: Gian Yari | Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.
     
         

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    Re: [Minato Namikaze Test] Igneel




    While on his knee,Minato eagerly looks ahead to see what was behind the ink wall.While looking ahead,Minato can see B running at a steep arc towards him.As the whirlwind blasts though and Ay activates his armor,the tremor that kept Minato down on his knee subsides.Minato finds nobody behind the ink wall as the wind clears the ink away.Minato decides to go ahead with plan B.Take B out.

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    He lifts his left palm off the ground to reveal the FTG sealing formula,plastered on to the ground.The seal was placed so casually that it wouldn't create any form of suspicion.So both Ay and B has no idea of the seal that has been placed on the ground.As Minato is placing the seal,he notices Ay running through his(Minato's) left side,(I assume it is so since you never specified,but doesn't affect your move in any way) with his peripheral vision.It's almost as if Ay was blazing through the ground and Minato's eyes are moving along with Ay's movements,tracking it(slow-mo).He specifically notices that Ay is clad in an armor of lightning,making him think "So that's how he does it".Minato has been depicted in the manga to be able to track Ay's movements even at maximum speeds.Moreover,the peripheral view is the best view to track fast moving objects.As Ay passes by,Minato knows very well that Ay will be attacking from behind him,Minato also notices B drawing out his swords,cloaking them in lightning.Minato decides that its time to carry out the plan.He was patiently waiting for the perfect time to start his counter attack.Minato hears the crackling sound getting closer and closer,making him think that Ay is coming from behind him.But infact it was the crackling of lightning blast that Ay had released towards Minato.AS Ay releases the blast,Minato is nowhere to be seen.He in fact had teleported himself to the kunai that he had released along with the hurricane fist.You see,Minato was waiting for the kunai to reappear out of the whirlwind,and he teleported to the kunai the instant the whirlwind cleared.Since the whirlwind was a Mid-ranged jutsu,the wind would die as it reaches out of the mentioned range.As Minato reappears at the kunai,holding it in his left hand,he loosely grips the kunai as if he was ready to drop it.Since the kunai would be in the straight line of sight of Ay,it wouldn't be that hard for him to spot him again.But the lightning blades & the lightning spear may mask his vision of Minato.But that is not the case for B(even with his peripheral vision,he won't see Minato),he will be quite puzzled as to what happened.The instant Minato reappears,Minato slams his right palm onto the ground and flicks the kunai in his left hand upwards without much force.As Minato slams his hand,a seal emerges under his hand,covering the ground,warping both himself and B into the stomach of the great mountain toad.Ay wouldn't have any time to warn B(if he see's Minato that is),and as such B would be caught off guard.As both B and Minato gets warped into the toad's stomach,all Ay would see is one of Minato's special kunai's spinning in the air(slow-mo).What just happened would baffle Ay,probably making him doubt whether he has been cast under a genjutsu or not as he won't have a perfectly logical explanation as to what happened to his younger brother.As B is reverse summoned into the toad stomach,the stomach muscles on the sides completely engulfs him,thereby crushing him to death.

    Divide & Conquer.I bid you farewell.

    ( Fuin Hirashin no Jutsu ) - Seal of The Flying Thunder God technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Minato uses this technique to apply the sealing formula to any desired object through physical contact and allowing him to teleport to that desired location through the Flying thunder God Technique.


    (Hiraishin no Jutsu) - Flying Thunder God Technique
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Shor-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80(if used with a kunai slash as the finisher)
    Description:This is a space/time ninjutsu.This jutsu can only work if the user throws a kunai with the special shiki-jutsu(seal jutsu)or has tagged the item or person by touch.The user can instantly teleport to the tags location.
    Notenly Yondaime/Fourth hokage can use this jutsu.And is unavoidable unless with space/time ninjutsu and can only be used 4 times per battle


    (Kuchiyose: Assai Gama Ibukuru) – Summoning: Crushing Toad Stomach
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: This technique bears resemblance to the Summoning: Toad mouth bind technique. However instead of warping the battlefield into the digestive tracks of a giant toad, the user reverse summons themselves and their opponents into the stomach of a giant toad and capture and isolate the target/s inside the stomach, cutting them off from allies and immobilizing their movements while the stomache starts crushing the opponent/s to death.


     
         
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    Re: [Minato Namikaze Test] Igneel

    "Hmph.."

    As Ay lets out his lightning towards Minato, not blocking his view he suddenly see's Minato downrange more grabbing onto the kunai he threw earlier. "So that's how it works.." Bee whom is running towards Minato's last location suddenly stops since he doesn't see Minato anymore but notices Ay looking forward. As Bee begins to turn around Minato slams the ground while Ay sees the seal appear on the ground causing Bee and Minato to be summoned away. (Seal appears on the ground when that technique is done btw. Viewed Manga just for reference) Ay, however doesn't know where they've gone but sees the kunai flying upwards, now knowing the secrets it wield, he throws 1 kunai infused with lightning chakra directly at it, this of course is unknown to Minato since he's in the stomach with Bee. Bee is summoned to a squishy wall that he seems to be trapped in. "Bee!! Bring me out!!" a whisper from within. Bee points his right hand out with the devil horns as the cloak of the tailed beast wrapped around him - increasing his power greatly.

    Hachibi Fukanzen Hengi no Jutsu | Eight Tailed Initial Transformation Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A (+15 to Ink and Lightning ninjutsu, +10 to Taijutsu)
    Description: When the incomplete form is activated, Killer B will Rise his fist in the air making two horns with his fingers and he will then release black chakra which then envelops his body which takes the form of an ox with eight tails and a skeleton of an ox attached to his body. The chakra shroud offers defense against all techiques below B rank. Whilst in this form Killer B gets a power boost to his ink ninjutsu and lightning techniques as well as his taijutsu techniques.
    Note: This Transformation lasts a maximum of 4 turns.

    "WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!"

    This form gives him the strength to burst from the lining of the toads stomach - flying out and to the other side of the toads lining a burst out of the other end with a lighting infused fist. This reversed summoned Bee and Minato back to the battleground. Ay seeing them both appear, Ay takes this chance by appearing above Minato who has reappeared and drops down upon him with his right leg. Minato doesn't realize this until nearly the last second.

    Raijin | Zeus
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack

    Girochin Doroppu | Guillotine Drop
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user jumps into the air and performs a downward kick to their opponent.
    Note: Can only be used or taught by a Raikage bio
     
         
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    Re: [Minato Namikaze Test] Igneel

    ,to the graders:I mentioned slow-mo is my last post to add a dramatic effect.It doesn't mean it actually happens in slow- motion.

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    As Minato and B are inside the huge toad stomach,B to the very left and about the 6m infront of Minato, B gets engulfed by the crushing muscles inside the stomach.Since B turned his head when Minato warped him into the stomach,B would be facing the stomach wall on Minato's right side.(i.e; Minato would be on the right side of B and the toad's stomach lining is in front of him)Else where Ay throws a chakra infused kunai straight towards the FTG kunai completely unknown to Minato.The kunai's would collide and the FTG kunai would drop to the ground,near that area.As B raises his hands making s seal of some sort and bubbles of red chakra start to ooze out of B,Minato does a crossed tiger seal whilst thinking "The info was right,the one who accompanies Ay is his brother.The jinchuuriki of the 8 tails" and simultaneously summons three clones besides him with very minimal smoke,M1(to his left),M3(to his left) & M2(To his right).Please note that,B takes time to completely transform into that state(I watched the anime 8 times lol ).The instant M1 comes into existence,he starts performing a series of handseals,9 to be exact and slams both his palms together as a spirit starts to manifest behind M1.The spirit that M1 summoned is the Reaper of Death,a spirit which is known to seal its victims in its belly.The spirit is completely invisible to everybody else but the caster of the jutsu.As soon as M2 and M3 comes into existence,they fixates their eyes on the transforming B and takes out FTG kunai's of their own and starts to bolt towards B,running parallel to each other.As B completely transforms and tries to free himself from the squishy walls,the squishy walls will obviously try to stick on to him making his escape a bit harder than what he had imagined.But nonetheless,he will easily free himself from the squishy muscles and as leaps to the other side of the huge toad stomach with lightning infused palm(from my left to to right),M3 who is about 2-3m away from B noticing this immediately closes in at blazing speed to connect a somewhat rising knee to the kidney area of slightly air-borne B.Due to massive size of B in this form,it wouldn't push him back much but the momentum Minato gained whilst traversing his way towards B at such high speed is enough to stop B on his tracks.As B didn't have any footing during the collision,I would say Minato can very well pull this off.After M3 connects the kick,he appears behind B in a heartbeat to do a horizontal slash on B's back.The kunai can't pierce the chakra shroud,but Minato continues with the slash,lodging the FTG kunai against the spine of the ox skeleton which is present on the back of B.And as M3 finishes doing this,he disperses.As M3 does this,M2 who was running,stops in his tracks as he appears right before B,about 3m infront of B.Please note that the stomach of the toad is very huge as shown in the manga.It could be as wide as 15m,as it was shown to even digest huge summoning dogs.Whilst all this is happening,the reaper has already stabbed his hand through M1's soul and as it emerges out through the other side i.e; through the gut of M1,the arm of the shinigami rockets towards B at amazing speed,completely unknown to B.The arm moves in such a manner that it doesn't make contact with anything else other than B,grabbing a hold of B whilst in his jinchuuriki mode.As the reaper's hands sink into B's body,M1 mutters the word "SEAL",pulling out Kirabi's soul out of him and pulls it towards his body,sealing it inside him.As the sealing completes,a kanji-seal appears on the belly of M1 and soon he disperses due to the immense pain he experiences.While all this is happening the real Minato is patiently watching everything,keeping tabs on what all is happening around,whilst not letting his guard down.

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


    ( Fuinjutsu: Shiki Fujin ) - Sealing Technique: Dead Demon Consuming Seal
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A ( Death )
    Description: The user, or his clone, makes nine handseals and then claps his hands. This summons the Shinigami, who appears behind the user and wraps its left arm with prayer beads. The soul of the user is visible, bound to the Shinigami. The Shinigami then extends its hand through the user's chest, grasping the opponent if he is within short range, and begins pulling out his soul. Once the Shinigami has grasped the opponent, he is completely immobile, although he can use weapons, summonings already existing, etcetera to try and kill the user before the technique completes. At the user's command, the Shinigami then performs the sealing, locking away the victim and the user's soul to battle for all eternity in the Shinigami's stomach.
    Note: If used by the user himself, causes him to die.
    Note: This technique can be used only a maximum of two times by clones, and once by the user himself.


    (Kiiroi Senko Haya Basuto) - Yellow Flash Speed Burst
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Minato dashes toward his enemy with such high speed that he looks like a blur and hits them as he passes them. Then, he stops behind them and slashes them on the back with a kunai.
    Note: Can only be used by Minato Namikaze








    Watch from 10:36.It shows that the reapers hand can elongate,even upto Long-range.
     
         
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    Re: [Minato Namikaze Test] Igneel

    Alright Iggy here's the deal,

    I'm going to have to close this test and submit it now. In a nutshell, here's is why I'm doing this. After speaking with the mods about your move, we have deduced that it's a complete mess - hopefully the grader will explain further. The main thing that killed it however, was that you used a Fuinjutsu that you have not learned yet and that is a rule break. The Fuinjutsu is not specified for Minato and thus is something that must be taught during Fuinjutsu training.

    In my opinion, you tried to go too big way too fast. I think that last move should have been something to try in your last move rather then in the middle of the battle - if you actually learned that Fuinjutsu however. I know you were trying to showcase Minato above and beyond but you went way over reason.

    ~Closed for Grading~
     
         

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    Re: [Minato Namikaze Test] Igneel

    Test Failed.

    Ok, even if we don't take into consideration the Fuuinjutsu usage (which is something you couldn't use), the truth is that while you tried and tried, you didn't achieve much. Your moves had lots of description but little content.

    I have said this before in other minato tests. While you can think that using enormous descriptions with huge detail can be a showcase of skill, if you don't have the ability to use such a high level of description, you actually end up hurting your overall grade. While minato is a logical and extrmely precise bio test with as much "inteligent moves" as you can compress into it, you don't need to go so deep into the description that you lose the actual move. At points it seems like a way to hide the real simplicity of the move. And a simple move is not always a bad thing.

    Overall, like your tester mentioned, you tried too much yes but the problem was that you didn't achieve much in the end. My suggestion is to don't try that hard. Showcase the bio's abilities but don't lose yourself in it to in the end not do much.

    PS- While it was a deal breaker, I didn't base my judgement solely on the usage of the unlearnt fuuin. The abilities you can use in a fight that you haven't learn are those that make the bio itself. FTG while being a Fuuin in itself is the core ability of the bio, thus why it doesn't need training in it to use. However, death seal is a seal we know to be usable by other ninjas and is part of the package of Fuuin you learn in your fuuin training. If you hadn't, for example, learned Rasengan, you couldn't use it in this fight. Why? while essencial to the bio its not something only it can use.
     
         

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