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    Vengeance Chapter 6




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    壱 Chapter 1
    弐 Chapter 2
    参 Chapter 3
    四 Chapter 4
    五 Chapter 5


    Writer's Note:

    This fanfic was inspired by reading greek mythology and watching many greek god movies. I.e Thor Hercules Percy Jackson Clash of the Titans. All of those, after watching and finishing the anime series Blue excorcist. The idea of my main character hit me. Add a background and a cool title, and bam Vengeance was born.

    Background Info:

    6 years ago, there was war. Death, false worship, and injustice. In this day there was a constant battle between the Angels and Demons. And in between all of this were humans. Who suffered constantlyl due to this battle of good and evil. It seemed like humans were cursed to sufer eternally to the never ending battle. Until the gods intervened. The good gods came down and edned the war. With there semeelingly limitless life energy reserves.

    After the war there was a time of happiness and peace. The humans and the gods lived together in peace. While the demon lie low in the underworld plotting and scheming. In this time of peace humans thought that they could make peace with the demons as well. So they began to praise and sends prayers. for the demons. But the humans didn't know that through their prayers both gods and demons grew stronger from that. The boss demon known as Hades grew stronger as well as his many demon children. Discouraged by the humans betraying them and sending prayers to the demons. They abandoned the humans and returned to heaven. All the gods left them to fend for themselves. All except for one god who loved the humans too much. So much he actually fell in love with one female in particularly. That god and the female had intercourse and created a son. The boy's name was Izuma. Now since izuma was the offspring of a mortal and a god that made him have all human traits but also the life energy of a god.

    Ashamed by his actions of intercourse with a mortal. That god abandoned the mother with their son and returned to heaven. While on earth the mother raised the child to the best of her abilities. Just as everything seemed like it was perfect. Tragedy struck once again. When Izuma was 10 Hades surfaced once again. In an act of defiling the god's faces he killed, he killed Izuma's mother in front of Izuma's eyes. Mortified by the scene of his mother's death, Izuma swore that he would kill Hades.

    Izuma is now 16 years old and looks just like his father, whom he never met. Izuma lives at a local foster home. With kids just like him, abandoned by their father or mothers were killed. Izuma spends most of his time in his room isolated from others and trying his best to avoid others. In his spare time Izuma trains hard to get strong enough to kill Satan/Hades. To this day Izuma constantly thinks to himself thoughts like "why me" and "where are you"? Both thoughts were directed at the father he never met.

    Setting:
    The House of The Abandoned

    Characters:
    • Izuma-A 16 year old boy, who is the main character. Izuma has hidden powers that come from a mysterious source.
    • Satan-Self explanatory. He killed Izuma's mother.
    • Izuma's Dad-A god who abandoned his son and wife. (More will be revealed later)
    • Izuma's Mother-Not much is known about Izuma's mother. Except that she raised Izuma alone until she was killed.
    • Hideko-A bully around the foster home.
    • Emma-A kind hearted girl who has a secret crush on Izuma
    • Ichiyo-A frail boy the same age as Izuma.
    • Mr Fujima-The school teacher at the foster home. He sort of looks over the children(plays an important role later on)
    • Mystery Man-Nothing vital to his identity has been revealed. All that is known is he knows about Izuma's background and he is connected some how to Mr. Fujima.
    • Juro-A bully who follows Hideko lead
    • Nurse Watson-The nurse for the whole house, more will be identified later. Nurse Watson is a mysterous woman, who takes orders from her surperiors. (Mr. Fujima and the Mystery man)

    New Characters:
    None for this chapter



    回想 Recollection





    Mr. Fujima sits at his desk with a melicous grin on his face as he onders he endless thoughts and plans. No one knows what goes on in that twisted mind of Mr. Fujima. Everyone but himself. He fiddles his fingers along the edges of his desk. The desk's cold dense wood top makes an awkward noise that amuses Mr. Fujima. He then begins to tap his fingers louder on the desk. An sense of eagerness captures the face of Mr. Fujima. He bgeins to sweat from anxiety. His eyyes wander off to his book shelf, where his favorite book petrudes from the shelf like a shard of glass in a pile of bricks. Mr. Fujima stands up hastily and pushes his seat back from the desk. He creeps over to the book shelf with hushed foot steps, before he pounces on the book. Then receding back to his desk. His nerves on a high, Mr. Fujima can no longer hold it. He flips back the first page the expeditously begins to turn to that page. His eyes trained from constantly looking at the page find the most important passage. The passage that has been driving him insane all night. The passage that has taken over his very being. The passage that drives his very existance.... A bead of sweat drips onto the page as he reads to himself with an inquiring mind.... "The skys cried and the ground trembled in fear. What lies dormant is hidden in plain site. All can be seen through gold."

    Mr. Fujima sighs and holds his head high into the air as his mind overflows with thoughts. His hands become a magnet clinging to his hair. He doesn't understand what the passage means! He clears the sweat from his forhead with the sleeve of his jacket, as he slowly begins to calm down. His facial expression tenses up as if he got something. He thinks to himself. What if its missing words.... His mind gets excited. Or a true meaning is hidden.... He quits on these thoughts for the day as he slips the thoughts back into a empty pocket of his brain. He then lifts hs feet up softly and props them up on his desk.


    Scene Switches to Izuma


    Izuma tosses and turns wildly around his bed. Knocking pillows and leaving sheets untucked. Creeeeeek! The bed titls to one side as a leg collapses underneath. Izuma rolls out of bed and he ricochets off the ground. Izuma is still knocked out. His armed proped underneath his stomache and his leg on a croocked angle. Izuma looked like a statue with jagged edges. Then three knocks are hear on Izuma's door... Izuma twitches... three more knocks are heard. Izuma doesn't awaken. The knocking stops. Crack! Ichiyo comes crashing through the door. Izuma jumps to his feet startled, he looks around. After hearing a loud groaning sound, he notices Ichiyo laying on the ground in pain. Izuma flips out.

    Izuma: What the hell! Why did you just break my door? More importantly, how did you break my door?!
    Ichiyo moans some more. Izuma kneels down to his knee and extends his hand.... Ichiy reaches out to grab it. Izuma ignores it and grabs his collar. He then begins to shake him wildly.

    Izuma: Answer me!!
    Izuma says with a crazzed look on his face. Ichiyo opens his mouth and lets out a loud reply of silence. Before spuddering... out a few words.

    Ichiyo: Well..... i have been trying to get in here for a few days now but i couldn't get in here because the door was locked.... I knocked on your dorr everyday for like a week but you wouldn't open up.... SO i tryed to use my muscles but i couldn't so i tryed again But i couldn't.... SO i went back to knocking thinking you would answer... but your didn't SO i knocked again..... But you didn't answer... SO I decided to use a little force..... And as you can see it worked ut quite well..

    Ichiyo stops to take a deep breath as if he were going to continue. Izuma let's go of his shirt and cuts him off. Izuma stands up agrily, before storming out of his door.

    Ichiyo: Hey wait up!
    Ichiyo exlaims as he stammers out of the room following Izuma. Izuma marcches down the steps with intensity. As if he were on a mission to kill. He thinks to himself, it has to be them pulling another joke on me....

    Ichiyo: Hey wait up! I know what your thinking, and it wasn't them. I haven't seen them around the home all week. They've dissapeard!

    Izuma turns around hastily with a puzzled look on his face.

    Izuma: What?! How could they ju......




    終了 Ending Notes



    This chapter ends with Izuma beginning a new sentence just to inform you guys. It has been a while since my last chapter, and I am a bit rusty. I had to reread every chapter 3 times just to get my initial plot back in mind. I changed the format alot to make it more appealing for you guys. And i'd like to know what you think of this chapter post your comments below.
     
         
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    Re: Vengeance Chapter 6

    I will read tommorow, my eyes are dying of tiredness It looks good on the first glance though.
     
         
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    Re: Vengeance Chapter 6

    well okay then
     
         

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    Re: Vengeance Chapter 6

    Sounds familiar to satan666 the manga done by kisi's brother.
     
         

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    Re: Vengeance Chapter 6

    never read it
     
         

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    Re: Vengeance Chapter 6

    Nice Story!
     
         

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    Re: Vengeance Chapter 6

    Thanks did you read all chapters before this one
     
         

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    Re: Vengeance Chapter 6

    It's great man!
     
         

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