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    Remade Bio-Raizo

    Basic Information

    Name: Raizo
    Nickname: /
    Gender: Male
    Age: 15
    Clan: N/A

    Looks: Raizo is a fifteen year old boy. He is tall and lean with sleekly black hair. His eyes are dead set with determination and black as coal. His chiseled chin is an attribute to his seriousness. He is about 5'10 and a shoe size of 10. His eyebrows are thin and sharp, just like the blade he carries. He has a scar across the right side of his eye from his past.

    Personality: Deep thinker, non-lazy, intense stair, willing, determined, understaning, and of course gentle.

    Village Info

    Village Birth: Konoha
    Village Alliance: Konoha

    RANK//CHAKRA INFO
    Ninja rank: Genin
    Specialty: /
    Element: Fire (needs training)
    Your ninjutsu:

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    BACKROUND INFO:
    History: Raizo was born on a cold day of December 12. He was born in konoha. His mother Satyiaki was alone during the birth since his father, Mizutoki was killed by a sound ninja by a explosive tagged kunai. His father died an honorable death, by letting his platoon get back up while he tried to fend off the sound's attack. seven years later his mother decided it was time to give him the family blade. The one his grandfather's grandfather had bestowed on them. Raizo managed to learn how to wield the blade since then. He went on his self-made quest to avenge his father's death. He barely made it alive. He came back with one distinctive battle wound, a slash across his eye. Since then he has been wearing a mask. For three years Raizo has been in desperate search looking for someone to teach him. Knowing that the only mentor would be someone from the academy. Since then he has been always trying to enter the academy.

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    Pictures: (Link) http://tinyurl.com/a388ph4

    Theme song and Background Music: http://tinyurl.com/a96pkhk

    Battles:

    Won: 0
    Lost: 0

    ~Approved~ following the complete template please or next time it will be declined. Have fun RPing.
     
         
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    Re: Remade Bio-Raizo

    You arent allied with Konoha so take that part out. You dont have other: So basically you have no weapons. But apparently my bio is terrible to so I cant talk
     
         

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    Re: Remade Bio-Raizo

    Dude, the part with the sword, it's not like its his weapon it's part of the backstory yah derp
     
         

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    Re: Remade Bio-Raizo

    Looks alright but add needs training after Katon. And the village part is fine if you are applying for Konoha.
     
         

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    Re: Remade Bio-Raizo

    Nice first bio well done
     
         

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