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Remade Bio-Raizo
Basic Information
Name: Raizo
Nickname: /
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Clan: N/A
Looks: Raizo is a fifteen year old boy. He is tall and lean with sleekly black hair. His eyes are dead set with determination and black as coal. His chiseled chin is an attribute to his seriousness. He is about 5'10 and a shoe size of 10. His eyebrows are thin and sharp, just like the blade he carries. He has a scar across the right side of his eye from his past.
Personality: Deep thinker, non-lazy, intense stair, willing, determined, understaning, and of course gentle.
Village Info
Village Birth: Konoha
Village Alliance: Konoha
RANK//CHAKRA INFO
Ninja rank: Genin
Specialty: /
Element: Fire (needs training)
Your ninjutsu:
BACKROUND INFO:
History: Raizo was born on a cold day of December 12. He was born in konoha. His mother Satyiaki was alone during the birth since his father, Mizutoki was killed by a sound ninja by a explosive tagged kunai. His father died an honorable death, by letting his platoon get back up while he tried to fend off the sound's attack. seven years later his mother decided it was time to give him the family blade. The one his grandfather's grandfather had bestowed on them. Raizo managed to learn how to wield the blade since then. He went on his self-made quest to avenge his father's death. He barely made it alive. He came back with one distinctive battle wound, a slash across his eye. Since then he has been wearing a mask. For three years Raizo has been in desperate search looking for someone to teach him. Knowing that the only mentor would be someone from the academy. Since then he has been always trying to enter the academy.
Other:
Pictures: (Link) http://tinyurl.com/a388ph4
Theme song and Background Music: http://tinyurl.com/a96pkhk
Battles:
Won: 0
Lost: 0
~Approved~ following the complete template please or next time it will be declined. Have fun RPing.
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Last edited by Caliburn; 01-25-2013 at 11:22 AM.
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Re: Remade Bio-Raizo
You arent allied with Konoha so take that part out. You dont have other: So basically you have no weapons. But apparently my bio is terrible to so I cant talk
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Re: Remade Bio-Raizo
Dude, the part with the sword, it's not like its his weapon it's part of the backstory yah derp
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Re: Remade Bio-Raizo
Looks alright but add needs training after Katon. And the village part is fine if you are applying for Konoha.
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