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    Uzumaki Ryuken (update)

    Basic Information
    Name: Uzumaki Ryuken
    Nickname: (Suna Taifū no ryū) Dragon of the Sand Typhoon
    Gender:Male
    Age:14 (during the Second Shinobi War)
    Clan:Uzumaki

    Looks:Now much older, Ryuken is a fair skinned, tall young man with a slim build. He has violet colored eyes, and slightly long jet colored hair. He no longer wears his trademark goggles.

    Personality:Stoic and analytical, Ryuken is a disciplined and highly capable shinobi. Being the son of two powerful shinobi parents, Ryuken is highly driven, and desperate to prove his worth and bring honor to his clan's name.
    Though seen by very few, Ryuken has a deeply philosophical way of seeing the world, understanding the necessity of war but at the same time abhorring the pain and hatred conflict always spawns. He is an honorable person, and capable of great mercy, yet when he is pushed he can become the epitome of a shinobi and is terrible to behold when his quick temper is ignited.
    Since the death of his parents he has become less friendly and obsessed with achieving his mission goals. Despite this change in his usually easy going attitude he has developed into a great leader.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Uzushiogakure
    Village of Alliance:Sunagakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank:Jounin
    Specialty: /
    Elements: Raiton - in training
    Your ninjutsu:Basic E-rank
    My jutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    (Raiton No Jutsu) - Lightning Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Defence/Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.

    (Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

    (Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

    (Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.

    (Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.





    Background Info.
    History:Though only half Uzumaki (his father being a native of Sunagakure) Ryuken exemplifies what it measn to be a member of the Uzumaki clan. He is disciplined, intelligent,has excellent stamina and understanding of nin-jutsu, and is both the top of his class and youngest to advance to journeyman level becoming a chuunin at 7 years old. His mother and father are both shinobi fighting in defense of Sunagakure The world is in a state of unrest and instability after the death of Shodai Hokage, and the five shinobi nations are once again at war.
    At the tender age of 5, Ryuken left the only home he had known, Uzushiogakure, and was taken along with his mother to Sunagakure. His father being a member of the Kazekage's personal guard, Ryuken had the privilege of being taught by two battle hardened shinobi. Because of his father's status Ryuken pushed himself much harder than the other students in his class easily surpassing them.



    Other It is the middle of the Second Shinobi War, and the world is in turmoil. Lines have been drawn in the sand and alliances both made and broken. Konoha and Suna are at war, Iwa wars with Kumo, and Kiri wars with them all.
    After many assassination attempts on the Second Kazekage Ryuken's father and mother along with a regiment of Sunagakure Black Ops, was sent to Konoha in retaliation for the failed assassinations. They were detected as they passed over the gates and a fight brock out. Both of Ryuken's parents were killed by Sandaime Hokage Hiruzen, who had assumed the post of Hokage after Nidaime Tobirama had fallen to the Kinkaku force.
    Because of the botched mission Ryuken's parents were not given high honors at their memorial service, though they had served in countless others faithfully and impeccably.
    This had a rather negative effect on Ryuken who held his parents in high regard and felt they should have been given full honors for sacrificing their lives for the village. He dedicated himself to completing every mission at all cost no matter the price, and sacrificed many in his quest for perfection.
    One instance that sticks out is that in his first mission as captain of a three man cell, Ryuken, realizing that his team had lost heart and were going to abandon the mission killed the main antagonist of the defectors and stated that, "If any one else chooses to save himself instead of giving his ife for his village he will be marked as a missing nin on the spot and killed..."
    This forced the other two to fall in line, and though they fell while attempting to accomplish their mission, Ryuken survived and completed the task without them. Because of this he has been recruited to the Bedrock of Suna's Anbu and now works alone.
    He has earned great renown amongst the other members of Suna's Anbu because he will stop at nothing to accomplish his goals. Yet he is also somewhat of an outcast because of his killing of his former companions and teammates.

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    Theme Song and Background Music:http://youtu.be/9Ux4fW_qgNU (Kendrick Lamar: Hiiii Power)
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    ~Approved~ no idea what Hayaton is, but it's definitely not legit and you didn't completed your raiton training, that's impossible for a jounin =/
     
         
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    Re: Uzumaki Ryuken (update)

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    Good job.
     
         

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    Re: Uzumaki Ryuken (update)

    i really think the eyes should be red and the hair should be dark brown NOT BLACK.
     
         

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    Re: Uzumaki Ryuken (update)

    Quote Originally Posted by Mypower View Post
    i really think the eyes should be red and the hair should be dark brown NOT BLACK.
    The pic I'm using has black hair and violet eyes sooo.....
     
         

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    Re: Uzumaki Ryuken (update)

    if he is an uzumaki then his hair should be red other then that its nice bio
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by noni1997 View Post
    if he is an uzumaki then his hair should be red other then that its nice bio
    Well he is half Uzumaki like Naruto and takes after his father in regards to appearance.
     
         

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    Re: Uzumaki Ryuken (update)

    Quote Originally Posted by X_Deltareon_X View Post
    you have a smiley at the top there might wanna fix that

    kinda feels like you could do better buts its a good attempt well done,
    I have no idea why that smiley is up there, lol! I can do a bit better as far as back stories go, but I was short on time. I'll tweak it a bit more once I get more time.
     
         

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    Re: Uzumaki Ryuken (update)

    Hey Caliburn, Hayaton is Swift Release and it is legit. I have to master wind and lightning before it can be used though and you have to come from Suna.
     
         

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