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    Inashi Tejiro-Vinn Echizen

    Basic Information
    Name: Inashi Tejiro-Vinn Echizen
    Nickname: Ina-Kun
    Gender: M
    Age:18
    Clan: N/a

    Looks: 5'7", hair as long as sasuke w/a side bang covering my right eye, black hair with red highlights. two claw shape scars on left cheek. left eye color is green, right one is red, Crimson jacket with cut off sleaves like Shikaku, black pants and black shoes, and a tattered/blood-stained Sunagakure Ninja headband

    Personality: Cool headed, Nice, Trust-worthy, Humble, Knuckle-Headed

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Sunagakure
    Village of Alliance: Sunagakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Genin
    Specialty: N/a
    Elements: Wind - needs training
    Your ninjutsu:

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    Background Info.
    History:
    On the night of April 6th a baby boy was born to a family of sand ninja. During this time there was a horrible epidemic that had struck the Sunagakure. Many male ninja was under the control of an unknown force and was instructed to kill all the first born and mother of those children. Narue Echizen was successful and protecting her son, but in return her life was taken by the same man she loved Kotuko Suzumiya. As Narue was dying she gave Inashi he blood-stained headband. To protect the children that survived the KazeKage erased all record of the dreadful night. Inashi became a genin at the age of 7 and failed his first chuunin exams, but on his 16th birthday on the night in which he had 2nd his chuunin exams he was confronted by a man in a hood. This man opened Inashi's eye to the injustice of the Sunagakure, which made him set out to find the truth and this cause him to leave Sunagakure and become a wandering Sand Ninja even though he wears his mothers old tattered/blood-stained headband.

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    Picture[s]: N/a must draw some

    Theme Song and Background Music:

    Sorairo Days


    Battles

    Won:0
    Lost:0

    ~Approved~ removed everything about that clan and that KG, they don't exist, you can't just make stuff up like that.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 02-19-2013 at 03:25 PM.

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    Hiding in the Mist
     

    Re: Inashi Tejiro-Vinn Echizen

    ok only thing i see wrong is your ninja rank, its gennin not chuunin it goes by your post count

    ill read over it properly in the morning its 1am and im going to bed good job
     
         

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    Re: Inashi Tejiro-Vinn Echizen

    so did it got approved??
     
         

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