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      Mandalore Samus






      "In the shattered blade that is the ninja world, the history of a shinobi is but a flash of kunai thrown by your enemy. The life of a single shinboi remain untouched by the laws of space and time. But among the fallen warriors, lye a stray kunai sharper then all others. An edge which isn't dull, a candle whose flame linger forever. This weapon's battles extend beyond it's life, and etches themselves into history forevor as what a true shinobi is..... This is the story of Mandalore Samus... Erin Metroid."




      BASIC INFORMATION





      Name Erin Metroid
      Nickname Mandalore Samus
      Gender Female
      Age 18
      Clan Mandalore
      Group Affiliation Kushagakure | Spam Society



      APPEARANCE



      Erin is a tall young woman with flowing blonde hair and pale blue eyes that shimmer in the night light. Erin has a gorgeous face. Paired with a body that makes the hearts of men stop beating. But looks can be deciving, Erin is from the warrior clan of the Mandalore. Being from the Mandalore clan, Erin wears a durable armor. The armor is green and orange with a red visor. Erin is usually seen inside the armor. But when she is outside the armor, she wears a regular kumogakure kunoichi of a poncho type shirt. WIth a mesh under shirt for battle.





      PERSONALITY



      Erin being the beautiful woman she is often uses her looks to lure men in as a sort of battle strategy. The men never take her as the "warrior" type. But she is all buisness and won't hesitate to kill anyone. But Erin isn't some cold merciless beast. She has many great character traits, such as loyalty, honesty, intelligence, and confidence. But of all her great traits, Erin's best feature appearance wise is her smile. That very smile radiates the area with such ocnfidence and happiness. But it isn't always good. Erin's counter to her "curse" of a smile is before she kills anyone, she smiles. In honor of all the smiles she has lost in her life. (See history for more) Giving her victims a sight they won't regret seeing before the inevitable. Even though Erin is a warrior in body and spirit. Her heart longs for a family again. And when she ains a family, she would do anything to protect them. Even if it meant killing all who intend to harm her family or friends.






      報 VILLAGE INFO



      Village of Birth Konohagakure Village of Alliance
      Konohagakure
      Ninja Rank
      Sannin
      Specialty
      Fire | Lightning | Otter Summonings | Yo-Yo Style


      Mastered Mastered
      湿 A Rank C Rank
      S Rank Mastered
      Progressing C Rank
      C Rank Progressing



      報 BACKGROUND INFO



      A Warrior's Journey


      Erin born on the outskirts of konoha, had a rough childhood. Being from the Mandalore clan in all, Erin has been around blood violence and death all her life. At age 7 Erin had to sit and watch as her brothers faught each other brutally, and eventually killing off each other to prove there dominance and power. Erin hated the grusome battles, but learned alot from watching. From watchin these fights Erin spirt grew keen on fighting and killing and eventually she found herself amongst the blood. Killing all her siblings. Her parents proud and dissapointed in her sent her to live with her grandparents in kumogakure at age 15. Before leaving, Erin stole her father's battle armor and set the house on fire killing her parents out of rage. Her smile hide a sad teenage girl in the shadows. Erin the set out for Kumogakure, Training with a few nomads along the way. A young man by the name McRazor talented in the element of fire helped her master the element. Closer to her destination a man by the name of Howard helped her tame the element of lightning. Upon arrival at her grandparents house. She was treated as if she was born and raised here. For once in her life, Erin felt like she belonged. For many years, she'd train with her cousins and her grandparents in her clan's way of killing and hand to hand combat aswell as elemental training. But Erin has yet to finish her traininig and to this day, she trains hard geting stronger and rep in the village.....








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      Abilities

      Mandalorian Clan Info
      Armor


      Erin's armor consist of an vrtually indestructible full body suit with bulky breast and shoulder plates. The armor itself is orange with hughes of green along the edges. With a red visr to top it off. While in this armor, Erin is mistaken to be a man.
      Jet Pack

      Erin hasn't obtained a jetpack yet, but when she does. There is a spot left open on her back for it.
      Warrior Attributes
      Mandalorian Youngling: This rank is what you get auto after joining the clan,
      Abilities: None With this.. Your Just... In
      Warrior Instinct
      Erin has very keen senses due to tought training with many senseis along her journey. Erin is highly intelligent, and is valued in her village as a true prodigy and strategist. SHe is cunning sly and at time deceptive.




      Otter Summoning

      Erin on her way to Kumogakure, meant a group of very strong shinobi. There strength was based off of there amazing summoning contract. So Erin signed their contract and developed a bond with the summoning animal and the group of shinobi. Over the years, Erin mastered the summoning contract and can now freely summon all otters at her whim.




      Fire
      Erin has mastered fire to its highest capability. Due to her amazing control of chakra and understanding of the nature of fire. Erin can perform all fire jutsu without any handseals.

      Lightning
      Erin like all ninja, trained very hard in her elemntal trainig. And over many years and many senseis mastered the element of lightning. Due to her ability to tame the dangerous element and amazing chakra control, Erin can perform all lightning jutsu with faster handseals then the average ninja.




      Yo-Yo Style
      While in Kumogakure Erin has begun training with a Kunoichi by the name of Levy in the Yo-Yo STyle. Levy has given Erin a pair of indestructible yo-yo's and she now uses them in battle.




      Weaponry
      Like all ninjas Erin caries various weapons and tools on her. So inside her's ninja pouch she has.

      A pair of indestructible Yo-Yo's (via yo-yo style)
      Kunais
      Shuriken
      Explosive Tags
      Smoke Boms
      Large Shuriken
      Thin Wires







      楽 Theme Song and Pictures






      Battles Won
      Battles Lost
      A few
      A few






      Notes


      For Reference

      Fire Mastered Lightning Mastered
      Water A Rank Earth C Rank
      Wind S Rank Otters Mastered
      Ninjutsu Basics Taijutsu C Ranks
      Genjutsu C Ranks Kenjutsu Basics

      Acceptance into the clan
      Dropping Magi in sig
      My Customs
      My Fanfics
      Chapter 1
      Chapter 2
      Chapter 3
      Chapter 4
      Chapter 5
      Chapter 6



       
           
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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      O_o awesomness
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Ayeeeeeeee Nice bio ! Everybody has nice summoning s and CFS's but me .-.
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Great character for that clan.
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Umm
      take off EVERY KG. you have
      you cant have all that
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Sigh, I thought I'd be more impressed. I'd still say this is the 3rd best mandalorian bio
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
      Sigh, I thought I'd be more impressed. I'd still say this is the 3rd best mandalorian bio
      Wait who has the best then ?
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Pretty cool character Roju approves.
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      olol you can't have sharingan ems and bayou gain...remove all that in your jutsu , other then that well done
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      The bio doesn't actually have those, just using the symbols for genjutsu/taijutsu.

      Though I agree, should probably switch em to avoid confusion.
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
      Sigh, I thought I'd be more impressed. I'd still say this is the 3rd best mandalorian bio
      Am i within the top 3 ?
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      nice bio remove the kg stuff and its all good.
       
           

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      Nice bio
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Quote Originally Posted by Kage Phoenix View Post
      O_o awesomness
      Thanks
      Quote Originally Posted by Ciberr View Post
      Ayeeeeeeee Nice bio ! Everybody has nice summoning s and CFS's but me .-.
      I don't either, I just learned them
      Quote Originally Posted by Typhon View Post
      Great character for that clan.
      I was torn between this and Edward elric
      Quote Originally Posted by Téno View Post
      Umm
      take off EVERY KG. you have
      you cant have all that
      Read the bio bro. There is a note at the bottom of the bio
      Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
      Sigh, I thought I'd be more impressed. I'd still say this is the 3rd best mandalorian bio
      whos is better?

      Quote Originally Posted by Ciberr View Post
      Wait who has the best then ?
      My thoughts exactly
      Quote Originally Posted by Roju View Post
      Pretty cool character Roju approves.
      Thanks
      Quote Originally Posted by X_Deltareon_X View Post
      olol you can't have sharingan ems and bayou gain...remove all that in your jutsu , other then that well done
      See typhons post
      Quote Originally Posted by Typhon View Post
      The bio doesn't actually have those, just using the symbols for genjutsu/taijutsu.

      Though I agree, should probably switch em to avoid confusion.
      They were different but I had to redo the while bio so I copied the tables from my old bio
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      Am i within the top 3 ?
      Maybe
      Quote Originally Posted by blaise12 View Post
      nice bio remove the kg stuff and its all good.
      Go to opb
      Quote Originally Posted by Natsu is legendary View Post
      Nice bio
      Thanks
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Quote Originally Posted by Gèckö View Post
      I was torn between this and Edward elric

      Definitely made the right choice IMO.
       
           

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      I thought so too I'm curious though, broke who had the best character for this clan
       
           
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      me added fanfic links in me bio.... Saw it on TPS older bios
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      why do you have lightning mastered two time in both elements table?

      nice bio though bro
       
           

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      Darth Vader is 1st
      And blue beetle is a very close second
      This is 3rd
      Umm the girl from bleach is last

      This is all I can remember
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
      Darth Vader is 1st
      And blue beetle is a very close second
      This is 3rd
      Umm the girl from bleach is last

      This is all I can remember
      William approves Xd

      Nice bio man
       
           

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      **** broly and his opinion. Tia Harribel is badass

      Williams opinion on top 3 Mandalorian bios;

      1st Is blue beetle hands down.
      second, blue beetle.
      did I mention the blue beetle though??
       
           

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      Gonna have to drop Piccolo, to create my Mandalorian bio
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
      Darth Vader is 1st
      And blue beetle is a very close second
      This is 3rd
      Umm the girl from bleach is last

      This is all I can remember
      Blue beetle was the best one for me

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      William approves Xd

      Nice bio man
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      Quote Originally Posted by -Cerberus- View Post
      Gonna have to drop Piccolo, to create my Mandalorian bio
      Make master chief

      @pgl see my notes for your answer
       
           

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      Re: Mandalore Samus

      Declined. I issued a warning to everyone not too long ago that if they wouldn't stop sacrificing the template just for fancy coding, I would decline it. For some reason people over and over again keep copying this coding, but apparently everyone except for me noticed that right in the middle there is quite an error. On top of that how am I supposed to know what all those kanji mean? For half of them you didn't even used the kanji they use in the manga. That you even posted something like 'for reference', just makes it so that this bio deserves to be declined. Not only doesn't make that 'for reference' much sense either, it shouldn't even be there as what's the point of adding that when you were supposed to say that exact stuff earlier in your bio?
       
           

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