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    The new threat appears Chapter two

    Prologue: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=310484
    Chapter 1: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...5#post10079865

    Chapter two The new threat appears

    Kushina arrives at home long before her father does to tell her mother Hinata who is leading her squad.
    Kushina: Hi mom I am home.
    Hinata: So who is your squad leader and how was school. Who are your team mates?
    Kushina: Well my teammates said they where going to that important meeting the Hokage called so I will introduce you. As for squad captain I am totally screwed.
    Hinata: Why?
    Naruto comes home and Kushina points her thumb at her dad.
    Kushina: Thats why
    Hinata: (laugh)
    Naruto: Of all the people who get on squad Hokage choose you. I guess that because he figured that no squad captain would put up with because of how smart your are. It does getting annoying.
    Hinata: (laugh)
    Kushina: Thanks (she says sarcastically).
    Naruto: So are you guys ready to that meeting Hokage wants everyone who can to attend?
    Kushina: Yes (she says it grudgingly)
    Hinata: Yes I wonder what was so massive that he called the meeting after those hidden stone messengers showed up.
    All three leave and head to the meeting. On the way there they run into Kushina's teammates. They are almost at the Hokage mansion.
    Shinamura: Hey Kushina.
    Neji: How are you doing Kushina?
    Kushina: Great. Mom this Neji and Shinamura my two teammates.
    Shinamura: So let me get this straight your dad is our sensei.
    Hinata: So these are your teammates well. Nice to see you Ino, Sai, Sakura, Sasuke.
    Sasuke: Nice to see you Naruto and Hinata
    Sakura: Yes nice to see you guys
    Sai: It been along time
    Ino: Nice to see you guys
    Shinamura: Hey kushina you want to go practice for the test tomorrow with me and Neji.
    Kushina: Sure.
    Hinata: Do not practice to hard you have a test tomorrow
    The three kids depart.
    They arrive at a the training ground where they will have the test. The training grounds is a clearing in middle of a forest with a couple of animals here and there. Since it nightfall there is a nice sunset happening.
    Kushina: Common on guys lets start training and working on our combo's.
    Neji: Sure but do not rush to it because we do not want to get injured.
    Shinamura: Ok lets start.
    Kushina tells the guys that she can use fire style and water style. Shinamura tells her that he can paint like his father and can use mind justus like his mother. Neji tells her that he can heal and can use the Sharrigan that his father helped him fully awaken. Neji tells her that he can use genjustu and wind style and earth style.
    They get to work and make their combo effective to the point where they almost run out of Charka and head home.
    While the kids are doing there own thing the Hokage starts the meeting once everyone comes into the room.
    Hokage: Orchimaru is dead.

    The story continues with chapter three Orochimaru dies to the minions of Five tails.
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...7#post10083407
     
         
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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    Op children lol.

    But better communications than part 1 had
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    They are not overpowered. The strength they have will help them fight the new threat.
     
         
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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    Cool story post me a link for chapter 1
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    Quote Originally Posted by 9 tails uzumaki View Post
    Cool story post me a link for chapter 1
    Thanks
    I just put the link up
     
         
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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    Nice story cant wait to read part 3
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    Part three will begin the conversation about the new enemy. Also its chapter three This is the new enemy arc
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    Pretty good. I'm wondering, how old is Naruto?
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    About 24 I think
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    Quote Originally Posted by sagemode jinchuuriki View Post
    About 24 I think
    Ok, sounds good
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    Great chapter. Can't wait to see their combos.
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

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    Great chapter. Can't wait to see their combos.
    Thanks
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    impressive work. mark a true genious
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    Thank you for your input
     
         

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    Re: The new threat appears Chapter two

    Nice keep up the good work I Like the story so far
     
         

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